On the importance of Trigger Discipline
The almost worryingly pale young woman seems to almost dance along the edge of the street, her vermilion eyes sweeping back and forth across the shattered concrete she steps across, a look of deep concentration on her face, even as her shimmering white hair wafts out backwards behind her, carried upon the winds and looking for all the world like it was moving underwater. She moves forward carefully, one foot in front of the other as she makes sure to avoid stepping on even the smallest of cracks, which is no mean feat this far out to the northern side of Brockton Bay.

Taylor glares down at the shattered concrete beneath her feet with a level of disdainful wonder. She can't help but be baffled by the fact that the people who live in these blocks allow the footpaths to reach such an abhorrent state. This is a danger to them and their children, right? Were it not destruction of public property, the girl would allow herself to call upon a hair more of her full self and grind the stones to dust under her heel, both to make it safer for the people, but also to make her own travels easier.

Only the sidewalks are city property, so that's out. Instead, she continues to careful work her way across the cracked and shattered concrete, doing her best to ignore the part of her that wants to forgo the footpath entirely, instead raising a little more of herself and taking to the blackened asphalt of the land canals, where she could move so much easier and faster.

Because while Brockton Bay is her home, there are a great many parts of the city that are still enemy territory, and it feels just wrong for her to be in the middle of enemy territory without a destroyer screen or a carrier to give her air suppo-

Rader Contact! Bogey incoming at 10:15! Moving through the air fast, and with clear purpose.

Already the girl is moving before she even has time to parse the words given to her by the unnerving creatures that serve as her crew. The concrete beneath her feet turns to little more than dust as the full strength of the USS New Hampshire kicks off, away from the dilapidated building she had been walking next to, and landing with a thunderous crack of shattering asphalt in the middle of the road. The Calculations dance across the girl's mind - Direction, distance, height, speed, wind, all categorized and calculated. The air next to the girl begins to glow a light blue, ripples and bubbles of color appearing as a single gun placement extends out into the world, quickly shifting and orientating,

There is a deafening, thunderous boom that rips through the street, echoed by terrified screaming from the various people going about the block. Twin tracers, separated by less than a half of a second, slice through the skies, cresting the top of the building and Taylor has but the barest of moments to catch sight of the bogey - a bodysuit in white, adorned with trim of gold, and the visage of a pouting blonde girl, then the pair of bullets strike fast, and strike two.

Thoom! Thoom! The figure is obscured by smoke, and there is a last scream as the girl dips, falling from the sky. The smoke covered figure hits the street hard with a meaty thwack, then bounces once, twice. Hitting the ground a third time, the figure skids across the street. Only now, when it was already too late does the girl realize just who she had fired at, just what she had done.

"Oh no."
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If there is anything wrong with the Morse code or anything, I would greatly appreciate being told, as I am still very much learning this stuff as I go.
 
The code was fine, but I have a small problem with her firing like that, her crew at the very least should have been telling her not to fire until IFF reported back, or they had eyes on identification. That kind of snapshot firing is not, I say again, not authorized in any branch of service I know of, and those times it does happen, there are consequences.
 
The code was fine, but I have a small problem with her firing like that, her crew at the very least should have been telling her not to fire until IFF reported back, or they had eyes on identification. That kind of snapshot firing is not, I say again, not authorized in any branch of service I know of, and those times it does happen, there are consequences.
It will be explained before too long in story, but it has to do with the nature of her Fairies. With the exception of two of them, her fairies are... wrong... They look like creepy little manikins, they don't really talk, and instead of walking, and they either slide about on the ground or appear like weeping angels.
 
It will be explained before too long in story, but it has to do with the nature of her Fairies. With the exception of two of them, her fairies are... wrong... They look like creepy little manikins, they don't really talk, and instead of walking, and they either slide about on the ground or appear like weeping angels.

Did Myddrin screw up with the summoning that's why her fairies are lil eldritch abominations and not fairy faires?🤢 🤮
 
Wait, wait... Are her fairies "wrong" because the production of the USS New Hampshire BB-70 was cancelled before the keel was laid?
 
Despite the name, IFF can only positively identify friendly targets, not hostile ones.[1][2][3][4] If an IFF interrogation receives no reply or an invalid reply, the object cannot be identified as friendly, but is not positively identified as foe (it may, for instance, be a friendly aircraft with an inoperative or malfunctioning transponder). There are in addition many reasons that friendly aircraft may not properly reply to IFF.

-Wikipedia

What the heck, man? US Navy Rules of Engagement are that you must always be sure of your target before engaging. Even a totally green crew would know that. I'd like to know what your reasoning behind this is.
 
Cant applaud the results, but that was some IMPRESSIVE accuracy. Hitting a flying target is hard enough for experienced crews with world war era directors, let alone a set of utter newbies hitting with both shells fired.

I'm assuming this was a bofors quad mount? Though I suppose one of the twin 5 inchers would make more sense.
 
Wait, wait... Are her fairies "wrong" because the production of the USS New Hampshire BB-70 was cancelled before the keel was laid?
Essentially, other than her Head Engineer and the [ERROR] Fairy, all of her fairies look like this, but with yaknow, the proper outfits.


as will be examined further over the next two-three chapters, they are clearly... incomplete would be the best word to explain it.

Which means that while they do have the mechanical capability to do their jobs, there is a lot missing that will have to grow in along with Taylor.
 
While the fact that her fairies are still "incomplete" is worrisome i am more interested in knowing if anyone did received that morse code and if they will respond .
 
Can I get a translation on that morse please?
 
Can I get a translation on that morse please?
OPERATIONAL IMMEDIATE. TO OPNAV. FROM USS NEW HAMPSHIRE ACTUAL. AUTHENTICATION CA76L. DETECTED BOGEY AND ENGAGED. BLUE ON BLUE. REPEAT. BITTERSWEET.OPFOR CASUALTY ESTIMATES UNKNOWN. POTENTIAL KIA, WIA ONE. CONDITION UNKNOWN. HAVE MADE PORT, BROCKTON BAY HARBOT. REQUEST ASSIST SOONEST. MESSAGE REPEATS.
 
Essentially, other than her Head Engineer and the [ERROR] Fairy, all of her fairies look like this, but with yaknow, the proper outfits.


as will be examined further over the next two-three chapters, they are clearly... incomplete would be the best word to explain it.

Which means that while they do have the mechanical capability to do their jobs, there is a lot missing that will have to grow in along with Taylor.
I assume this has something to do with why you went with colorado for Taylor's appearance, instead of the likes of Pennsylvania. Who looks a lot more like Taylor as described in canon.

Cant post an image, so here's a link.

azurlane.koumakan.jp

Pennsylvania/Gallery

 
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you should of had HARBOUR you used a T instead of an R and were missing the U
As an American ship and/or girl there's a number of words that she'd leave the U out of. Blame mid-1800s newspaper editors, but it's the customary usage and at least at lower grade levels may actually be called out as a spelling mistake if included, depending on the teacher.

(I actually do include them most of the time, but that's because my spellcheck got set to British English somehow and the little wavy red lines are irrationally bothersome.)
 
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That I have to blame the online translator I used. I tried to do it by hand, but kept losing my place in the translation...

I assume this has something to do with why you went with colorado for Taylor's appearance, instead of the likes of Pennsylvania. Who looks a lot more like Taylor as described in canon.

Cant post an image, so here's a link.

azurlane.koumakan.jp

Pennsylvania/Gallery

Yes, there are a couple of reasons for it, and her appearance does tie into that whole thing

Though, if I were to have done that, I probably would have gone with Arizona instead of Pennsylvania.
 
That I have to blame the online translator I used. I tried to do it by hand, but kept losing my place in the translation...


Yes, there are a couple of reasons for it, and her appearance does tie into that whole thing

Though, if I were to have done that, I probably would have gone with Arizona instead of Pennsylvania.
Can I ask why pick Arizona over Pensy? They both match the long dark hair and green eyes, but I cant see Taylor making a face like Arizona. Pennsylvania's glare seems more fitting for our favorite escalator.
 
As an American ship and/or girl there's a number of words that she'd leave the U out of. Blame mid-1800s newspaper editors, but it's the customary usage and at least at lower grade levels may actually be called out as a spelling mistake if included, depending on the teacher.
Ah... Not American so this is like the Colour, Color difference then, and yes Color is highlighted as an error for me so I am not sure if it is correct spelling even now.
 
Ah... Not American so this is like the Colour, Color difference then, and yes Color is highlighted as an error for me so I am not sure if it is correct spelling even now.
Color is correct, and imagine being and American and spotting an extra U in a bunch of words that end in -or out of nowhere. It's not easy on either side of the Atlantic because of stubborn professors trying their damnedest to differentiate the two styles. (Elevator vs Lift, enough said.)
 
What the heck, man? US Navy Rules of Engagement are that you must always be sure of your target before engaging. Even a totally green crew would know that. I'd like to know what your reasoning behind this is.
Lol
Blue on blue has been a thing since guns have been a thing. Air defences have been notorious for a it flies it dies attitude. From any military.
 
Lol
Blue on blue has been a thing since guns have been a thing. Air defences have been notorious for a it flies it dies attitude. From any military.

Um, I would imagine that the first blue on blue projectile was a rock, when some caveman threw it at a walking meal they were hunting and missed, only to hit another Hunter.

I know that back in the days of slingers in armies, there were blue on blue incidents.

So don't blame the guns, mmkay?:D
 
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