The Steep Path Ahead [Familiar of Zero AU]

The more I think about it, the more it's clear that Mazarin is engaged in a decades-long political power play to marginalise other power centers and centralize power in his own hands.
And that it's destabilising Tristain.

Look at Count Mott sending parties of guards to kidnap a peasant girl with impunity for bedroom uses, and being able to coerce old man Osmond into a situation where the best he could do was to send the girl into hiding.
The headmaster of the foremost Mage Academy in Tristain, with international students and the connections from training generations of nobility? Could not ignore him.

Contrast with canon, where Mott had to legally buy her contract as a servant.
It's especially telling that the innkeeper reacted as if this was expected behavior from people in Royal livery, which says very bad things about the state of affairs in Tristain.
The kind of state of affairs that made the Reconquista viable in canon.

Or the way one of the royalty's most powerful supporters was neutralized.
Or the fact that the princess has to resort to sneaking out of the castle with no guards, and how subdued she is.
As compared to canon Henrietta who had a bodyguard who would accompany her anywhere, and who was forward enough to have already had a love affair at this time with a foreign royal, while exercising enough initiative and personal loyalty to send a covert ops squad into the Albionese civil war to destroy/retrieve incriminating papers.

Something is rotten in the land of Tristain.
And I'm betting it wears a cardinal's robes.
@shadenight123 has been foreshadowing this since Luise crossed the border, and I only just noticed.

Given that we've had no news of an Albionese civil war, the fighting might well be in Tristain this time.
Which raises interesting questions about where Tabitha is taking our adventurers.
 
Now a strange, if pink haired, girl is being brought to the Valliere Duchess to be presented as her long lost daughter? By the daughter/agent of the insane Gallian king no less.
AU.
Wardes is an assassin for Mazarin instead of working with Reconquista, Cattleya is dead, Karin is in seclusion.
It's best not to make any assumptions about other characters until confirmed.
 
Hmm. Remind me, what happens when a Gandalfr dies in canon? I can't quite recall, but suspect it isn't good...
 
Hmm. Remind me, what happens when a Gandalfr dies in canon? I can't quite recall, but suspect it isn't good...
Saito died in Albion, severing his contract with Louise. The familiar bond did not reestablish itself after he was resurrected by Tiffania. Louise was able to reproduce the familiar summoning ritual later on, calling Saito to her and rebinding him as a familiar. If Saito had not be resuscitated Louise would have presumably summoned someone else and binded them as a new Gandalfr.
 
It would not be particularly difficult.

Louise Francouise Le Blanc de La Valliere is the daughter of two exceptionally powerful mages who produced two other triangle class mage daughters. Depending on how this timeline developed, Cattleya may have developed into a square class mage despite her illness. Surely Louise would be a strong mage in her own right.

Luise is a certified failure as a mage. There are records of her attempting to attend the Tristainian Academy of Magic and failing out within a year. Furthermore her Germanian accept is quite distinctive, and everyone knows that mages there hold significantly less influence. Wealthy commoners are even permitted to buy and marry into the noble class, drastically weakening magic bloodline.

Now a strange, if pink haired, girl is being brought to the Valliere Duchess to be presented as her long lost daughter? By the daughter/agent of the insane Gallian king no less.

If there is even shred of doubt that allows Karin to deflect the pain of having so utterly failed her family, I do not think Louise would survive the introduction.

Thing is hair color seems to run in lines such as Karin and her daughters pink hair, Tristain's royal family's purple hair, Gallia's royal blue hair. The very fact that Loise has naturally pink hair would be suspect in it self as its rare color which means she would have to have such sort of blood connection to Karin who's only other known relative other than her daughters was her sister.

More likely if he was having her killed would be to have a enemy of crown implicated in the death to get Karin to go after them.
 
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It would not be particularly difficult.

Louise Francouise Le Blanc de La Valliere is the daughter of two exceptionally powerful mages who produced two other triangle class mage daughters. Depending on how this timeline developed, Cattleya may be a square class mage despite her illness. Surely Louise would be a strong mage in her own right.

Luise is a certified failure as a mage. There are records of her attempting to attend the Tristainian Academy of Magic and failing out within a year. Furthermore her Germanian accept is quite distinctive, and everyone knows that mages there hold significantly less influence. Wealthy commoners are even permitted to buy and marry into the noble class, drastically weakening magic bloodline.

Now a strange, if pink haired, girl is being brought to the Valliere Duchess to be presented as her long lost daughter? By the daughter/agent of the insane Gallian king no less.

If there is even shred of doubt that allows Karin to deflect the pain of having so utterly failed her family, I do not think Louise would survive the introduction.

The one advantage she has is that she awakened her Void magic earlier than OTL.
 
The one advantage she has is that she awakened her Void magic earlier than OTL.
Not that Louise knows what she is doing, or has any means of advancing her abilities. Brimir didn't exactly leave void artifacts laying around, and it seems most inherited void mages only have an intuitive grasp of one or two spells. Although if Louise is ever going to discover her true nature, a connection through Tabitha is the way to go.

... unless this is not Tabitha. In canon Tabitha's twin sister was sequestered in a monetary just like Louise was in this story. After Joseph died, Tabi-clone inherited his fragment of the Void. I'm not sure what kind of mage she was, but it would make sense that Josette was also a ice (water-wind) mage since she and Tabitha are identical twin sisters. I'm not sure what kind of butterflies would make this possible, but obviously the Church has been busy organizing international conspiracies and ordering the assassination of young girls, so I guess anything is possible.
 
Yep, a Indentical twin sister at that, in Gallia they apparently have a tendency to have twins in the royal family and a tendency to kill them as well.

Though apparently looking similar seems to run in other families as in canon Louise apparently looked exactly like her sister Cattleya did at her age... though apparently the cardinal stated she looked like a mirror image of her mother at her age... So if we go by that Cattleya also looked like her mother at Louise's age... Talk about some serious generation xeroxing.
 
Yep, a Indentical twin sister at that, in Gallia they apparently have a tendency to have twins in the royal family and a tendency to kill them as well.

Though apparently looking similar seems to run in other families as in canon Louise apparently looked exactly like her sister Cattleya did at her age... though apparently the cardinal stated she looked like a mirror image of her mother at her age... So if we go by that Cattleya also looked like her mother at Louise's age... Talk about some serious generation xeroxing.
Yeah, in RL children generally have major similarities to their parents but have very noticeable differences.
 
You would think that Wardes would be too powerful to be mistaken as a simple bandit. Especially when it was just his lightning clone (ubiquitous del wind?) that was fighting them. Of course Tabitha could just be keeping that information to herself.

Though he seems to be clearly an assassin, he made no demands of them just went directly for the kill.

Bigger question might be if Tabitha finding them was a coincidence or not.
 
... unless this is not Tabitha. In canon Tabitha's twin sister was sequestered in a monetary just like Louise was in this story. After Joseph died, Tabi-clone inherited his fragment of the Void. I'm not sure what kind of mage she was, but it would make sense that Josette was also a ice (water-wind) mage since she and Tabitha are identical twin sisters. I'm not sure what kind of butterflies would make this possible, but obviously the Church has been busy organizing international conspiracies and ordering the assassination of young girls, so I guess anything is possible.
What you say is possible, but I don't think it's likely. Remember that she called her familiar Sylphid? Unless I'm very much mistaken, that's the name of Tabitha's familiar. It's a bit of a push for Tabi-Clone to have not only a Rhyme Dragon, but one named Sylphid and with the same verbal quirk.
 
You would think that Wardes would be too powerful to be mistaken as a simple bandit. Especially when it was just his lightning clone (ubiquitous del wind?) that was fighting them. Of course Tabitha could just be keeping that information to herself.
She is pretty obviously keeping that info to herself.
Bandits do not own gryphons, because they cannot afford to feed them.
Nor do they attack armed travellers with no backup, without even trying to intimidate them into giving up their valuables.

Even Luise will see through that once she's out of shock.
Especially since she has the experience of being accosted by other bandits to compare this to.
As well as his words about doing this for the Crown.

Note that there is the possibility of this being a double-fake, with Tabitha and Wardes working together; that would imply pretty serious leak in the Cardinal's staff, as well as an ability to find two walking people in the middle of nowhere despite never interacting with them.
Given that Wardes did not bother to cover his face, implying that he intended to kill them both, I think it unlikely.

Especially since big familiars like gryphons are distinctive, and can be recognized.
 
Note that there is the possibility of this being a double-fake, with Tabitha and Wardes working together; that would imply pretty serious leak in the Cardinal's staff, as well as an ability to find two walking people in the middle of nowhere despite never interacting with them.
Given that Wardes did not bother to cover his face, implying that he intended to kill them both, I think it unlikely.

Especially since big familiars like gryphons are distinctive, and can be recognized.
Agreed. The only possible explanation for them working together is that, for some reason, the deaths of Louise and Saito were not the objective after all. In that unlikely occurrence, I have no idea what they would ultimately want. If they wanted Louise to feel betrayed by the Crown (via Wardes' comment), Tabitha wouldn't have tried to pass Wardes off as a bandit.

But that's probably not the case, it's far more likely that what happened is relatively what we see on the tin; Wardes tried to kill them under orders of someone (probably though not necessarily the Cardinal), and Tabitha saved them.
 
Called it.
Fucking Mazarin. Fucking Wardes and his fucking Gryphons.
I'm betting that the horse(and their gear) had a tracking spell which allowed the initial gryphons to find them, and the only reason it took Wardes this long to find them was that the horse ran away. Dude fucked up, though; that Lightning Clone spell is very distinctive.
And bandits don't ride gryphons. I'm betting Tabitha knows what's up here.
Well, like I pointed out way back when he first revealed her parentage to Louise-- Every single reason he had for not letting her return home originally was still true. Karin would still want war with Germania, for example.

The only thing that has changed since Louise was a little girl is that she is going around adventuring with distinctive pink hair, that means someone might recognize her as Karin's child if he doesn't do something now. Which means he can no longer afford to let her live.
 
Well, like I pointed out way back when he first revealed her parentage to Louise-- Every single reason he had for not letting her return home originally was still true. Karin would still want war with Germania, for example.
Would she? She didn't go to war when her eldest was assassinated.
And it's not like there's any actionable evidence of who took Luise; it's entirely plausible that a third party grabbed her and dropped her off in Germania in the hope of setting off conflict.
And frankly, if the Germanians who have been raiding across the border got their hands on one of her daughters, they wouldn't have let her live.
 
Not if they knew it could be pointed at them, from what I can gather the germanians are understandably terrified of the heavy wind. Its one thing for someone to kill a daughter of the heavy wind and nobody knows who, or to kidnap one and the girl disappear but to kill one... Think of how much issue the cardinal apparently had when just when Germania kidnapped her daughter holding her back, if they had killed her daughter I don't think anything would have stopped her.

Besides remember Kirche's family had a known historical tendency to kidnap members of the Vallarie family and intended marriage partners... Sort of have to wonder if that history backfired on them in this story.
 
Im curious. Can water mages determine someones relation?
 
And it's not like there's any actionable evidence of who took Luise; it's entirely plausible that a third party grabbed her and dropped her off in Germania in the hope of setting off conflict.
And frankly, if the Germanians who have been raiding across the border got their hands on one of her daughters, they wouldn't have let her live.
She would if she would have before, there wasn't any actionable evidence when the Cardinal found out where Louise was originally. And he has no real new evidence about whether or not she would.

Whether or not she really would isn't that relevant to my point, only that all the Cardinal's arguments remain as true as they were originally. The assassination isn't counter-evidence because the dead daughter wasn't found in Germania.
 
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Chapter Thirty-Six
Chapter Thirty-Six

When Saito opened his eyes, he was within clean bed sheets. The sun's rays came in from the nearby windows, and the room was a white candor that made his eyes kind-of bleed. He winced from the refraction of the light, and narrowed his eyes looking sideways, where a half-asleep Louise was holding her arms crossed beneath her chin, her sleeping face all scrunched up in worry.

She twitched her nose and then made a cute little sneeze before waking up suddenly, rubbing her eyes still blurry from sleep. "You woke up," Louise said with a sigh of relief. She was without her mask, and her strawberry blond hair shone with a hundred different colors, each prettier than the last one. The mask was on the bed sheets in front of her, held with one of her hands.

"Yeah," Saito nodded. "Are we at an inn?" Saito asked, although with the fact there were at least a dozen beds around the large room, it felt more like a school infirmary than an actual inn room.

"No," Louise said, shaking her head. "We're at the Tristain Magical Academy," Louise added. "Lady Charlotte saved us while returning from her shopping trip in Tristain." She squirmed slightly. "She had to use pretty costly reagents to save your life, so-we are indebted to her."

Saito furrowed his brows. "I...see?"

"Also," Louise added, swallowing noisily. "You-You know the guy that attacked us? He-well, he didn't make much sense if he wasn't an assassin out for my life," she looked downcast. "So I opened Cardinal Mazarin's letter, I know I shouldn't have, but-but you know, I just wanted to know if the man had something to do with him or not-"

She pulled the letter out and bit back a choking sob. "The letter says I'm an impostor and that he simply left it up to the Duchess to deal with me," she clutched the already crumpled note in her hands. "Apparently Father Christoff tried to advance his position in the church by claiming I was someone I wasn't, and the Cardinal checked-and...and he found proof I wasn't who I claimed I was, and so he simply sent me to the Duchess so that I could get killed or something. He didn't sign the letter, but it's not like anyone else could have written this but his Eminence, right?"

She bit back another sob. "He-He could have just told me I wasn't the Duchess' daughter! He didn't have to send an assassin after me!"

"That-That doesn't make any sense," Saito said. "If that was the case-why not just wait until we reached the Duchess?"

"Maybe...Maybe he just thought we'd open the letter midway and forge another?" Louise hazarded. "I-I don't know how the man thinks, but I know I was simply holding on to a make-belief family that never existed in the first place!" as she wailed that out through a hiss, she clutched the sheets of the bed.

"You can't know that. Maybe he's lying in the letter just like he lied to us while we stayed at the palace-" Saito pointed out. "We could at least go and meet the Duchess. She won't kill us for that, will she?"

"Sure, why not," Louise said with a dry chuckle. "As if she'd meet two random adventurers while she's busy along the border. We'd have to catch up to her, and then near her and say 'look, my hair color's the right one, but I've got no other proof that I'm your daughter so tell me if I'm right or wrong'."

"Would you rather not ask?" Saito asked warily. "Come on-there's no harm in trying, is there?"

"Claiming to be someone's daughter from a noble family and then not being one carries the death sentence," Louise said in a whisper. "The Cardinal went as far as to hire an assassin to stop me from reaching the Duchess, and-and what if he was simply protecting the Duchess from another heartbreak? I mean," Louise sadly shook her head. "Me being the daughter of a noble? It was too good to be true."

Saito shook his head firmly. "No, too many things don't make sense, Louise-"

"Luise," Louise said. "Just-call me Luise and let's forget about this. We can continue looking for a way to bring you back home and-"

"Louise," Saito snapped at her firmly, sitting himself up and grabbing a hand of the girl, his eyes staring at hers with a firm gaze. "You have to at least try. If she sees you and doesn't think that you're her daughter, then you don't need to tell her anything. You can't be accused of faking being her daughter if you don't tell her anything, right? You could be walking down the street when she sees you, and that would be all-unless she nears you, but then it would be her starting this, wouldn't it?"

Louise bit her lips in thought. "Right-but...but what if she doesn't see me at all? You know how nobles are-"

"With the hair you have? She'd have to be blind or wearing a blindfold," Saito said. "Let's continue heading for the border, and see if we can find where she is. We will just claim we're adventurers and leave everything about the Cardinal behind us. I'm sure a mother would recognize her daughter if she saw her."

Louise took a small breath. "I-If that's true...it still doesn't change the fact we owe Lady Charlotte our lives and have to at least pay her back."

"How are our finances?" Saito asked with a wince, already dreading the price they'd have to pay.

Louise shook her head. "It's not a matter of money. Lady Charlotte actually needs a couple of adventurers to gather some things for her. Her familiar's too big and bulky to pick flowers and stuff like that. I still think it's too little to pay her back, but-" she clenched her fists, "I'm glad she seems like a nice person. She could have asked for anything, really."

Saito took a deep breath, and then winced as he pushed his body to the side of the bed. "Seems like I slept enough then," he said. "The sooner-the sooner we get started, the sooner we can go."

"Ah! No, you've got to rest," Louise said firmly, grabbing hold of Saito's arm and pulling him back on the bed. "You can't exert yourself yet! You stopped breathing, Saito! That's-that's all kinds of bad!"

Louise's fingers trembled as she held on to Saito's arm. "Just-just stay put, and I'll get to it. You did enough protecting me, and the reagents are just in the woods nearby-it won't take me long to get them, and-"

"Louise, the assassin is still at large," Saito said. "There's no way I'm letting you go alone!"

"But-" Louise looked away. "You'll just get hurt again!" she snapped at him. "And you might die, and this time there might not be anyone nearby that can help! And I don't want that, Saito! I don't want you to die protecting me! How am I ever going to bring you back home if you die here!?"

Saito looked sadly at Louise, and then shook his head. "We are partners, right? So we do the job fifty-fifty. I protect you, and you make things explode. It's normal for me to get hurt, I'm the meat shield-it doesn't mean you're not doing your side of the job! Like how you made those armored men sleep, or blew up that golem the first time around-I couldn't have done that, but I could keep you safe until you did it."

Louise took a small breath, and nodded once. "If-if that's what you want then...then I should tell you that you are no longer my familiar-the runes...they disappeared while you slept. I think it's because you stopped breathing, but...but you're free now, Saito. If-if you don't want them-"

Saito's eyes went down to the back of his hand were, indeed, no runes were to be seen anywhere on the skin. "Ah-Oh," he blinked. "Then...I guess we need to get those back. I mean, not being able to fight makes me kind of a weak partner to have."

"Are you sure?" Louise asked once more. "I mean, really sure? We can just...I don't know, take things slower-"

"Louise," Saito said flatly. "We are not running away from the confrontation with your maybe-mother."

Louise nodded, and pulled out her wand. "Well then-by the power of the pentagon of the five elements..."

When the words were said and the wand touched Saito's chest, Louise swallowed noisily and used both hands to grab Saito's cheeks. "This-well, you know it definitely means absolutely nothing."

Her lips locked with his for just a brief instant, and then she pulled away, taking a few deep breaths. "Here, it should be done-" and indeed, on the skin the runes appeared once more.

There was a knock by the window, rather than by the door, and as Saito frowned and moved his head to look, Louise quickly put her mask back on, clutching on to it as if it were a lifeline.

"You are in a relationship?" a third voice asked, as she stepped inside from the window, it was the blue-haired girl that had saved them, and who was apparently raising an eyebrow in surprise.

"It's-it's not what you think, lady Charlotte-" 'Louis' said, sheepishly looking away.

"It is fine," Charlotte said with a nod. "Love is beautiful no matter those involved," she added before looking towards Saito. "You can walk?"

"Oh, yes," Saito nodded, getting out of the bed and stretching. "As long as I get my stuff back, I'm ready to go!"

"Saito!" Louise hissed, "Show some respect to the noble lady that saved your life!"

Saito sheepishly scratched the back of his head and then bowed deeply. "I'm sorry! And-and thank you for saving my life, Lady Charlotte!"

The girl simply shook her head with a small smile on her lips. "That is fine. This...this is the list of ingredients I need," Charlotte said, pulling out a thick looking parchment from her robes. "The majority of those...are around the woods. This-" she pulled out a thick looking book, "Has pictures of what you are looking for," she added. "Please take care of bringing back exactly what is shown on the picture. Many plants are...poisonous, a few are...venomous, and some of the animals can be dangerous."

"I'm sure it won't be a problem, Lady Charlotte," Louise said with an eager nod as she opened the parchment, and then blanched at the first item in the list -the very long list. "There's a wyvern in the woods?"

"And a basilisk," Lady Charlotte added softly. "And an Hydra, and two large worgs, a specter-a couple of young dragons-"

Louise took a deep breath, and then nodded. "We will return with the ingredients asked, or die trying."

"Please don't," Charlotte said with a worried look. "That is merely the complete list of what I need. Start with what you feel you can acquire and then move up until you have them all. Bring back what you managed to find by the end of the day-many might spoil otherwise. Don't overexert yourself too much...it's not good for your health."

The duo of adventurers simply nodded, and bowed once more before leaving.

Charlotte watched the two go and stifled back a light giggle.

She really should tell about two male adventurers being together to her friend Kirche, but if she did that, the girl would try to 'fix' the two by using herself. It was better not to.

And it was a refreshing change of pace to have people near her who didn't know she was the heir to the throne of Gallia after her cousin's...untimely...

No.

Charlotte shook her head. It was better not to remember.

"Kyuuh?" Sylphid asked from the window.

"I'm coming, Sylphid," Charlotte said softly. "I know we have lessons starting soon."

She walked out through the window soon after, and as Sylphid brought her back down to the level where her classroom was, she stepped in through the window again.

"Lady D'Orleans-" the teacher sighed. "Please...doors are there for a reason."

She knew that as well.

It was also why she refused to swing one open.
 
Oh, there's an interesting butterfly. Tabitha isn't "Tabitha".

There's a good chance she's not as skilled at combat as canon, then, though she's clearly still dangerous.
 
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Oh, there's an interesting butterfly. Tabitha isn't "Tabitha".
There's a good chance she's not as skilled at combat as canon, then, though she's clearly still dangerous.
Dude, that's Tabitha.
Charlotte is her real name; Tabitha is the nom de guerre she took in canon after her mother went nuts.
The fact that she's princess here suggests that her father is still alive, unlike canon.

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I get it now. Never mind.

And it means that there isn't a Void mage king in Gallia.
Which begs the question: Where is he?
 
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