The Roc’s Nest: A Posthuman Timeline

There is one thing that hasn't really added up so far. Why would the Mazzaroth, a painfully direct, formal, obsessed with military-style unity, and deeply ideological being come out of a duplicitious, casual, borderline-civilian pragmatist like Nailer?
1) Because Nailer's entire personality is built around Nailer's limits, of needing to manipulate others, present a facade that certain others would follow, navigate political landscapes, and so on. Mazzaroth does not have these limitations and acts mostly alone, and so has much less need of manipulation.

2) Because being opened up to perceive all kinds of cosmic and inhuman realities has basically shattered Nailer's mind and she no longer exists except perhaps in a weird cyst trapped within the Mazzaroth's reality. Wide Eyes, who was much more firmly oriented around a singular ideal she held sacred, lost somewhat less of her personality and less of her appearance of being the same person she'd been before apotheosis.

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1) Because Nailer's entire personality is built around Nailer's limits, of needing to manipulate others, present a facade that certain others would follow, navigate political landscapes, and so on. Mazzaroth does not have these limitations and acts mostly alone, and so has much less need of manipulation.

2) Because being opened up to perceive all kinds of cosmic and inhuman realities has basically shattered Nailer's mind and she no longer exists except perhaps in a weird cyst trapped within the Mazzaroth's reality. Wide Eyes, who was much more firmly oriented around a singular ideal she held sacred, lost somewhat less of her personality and less of her appearance of being the same person she'd been before apotheosis.

That's what I've got for now.
True to the nature of all power: it doesn't make you bigger or better; just more of what you already are, with less restrictions.
 
Update 38: Play God
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Update 38: Play God


"This holomover play is so dreadfully cynical," Des said, sitting on her couch with a wing around Ossia Volo. It was a black-box style holomover play, one where the projected "scene" in the air was ensconsed in a black rectangular prism with the top and front panels being open. A book sat on the couch, which Des flipped through, one with the title of Judaic Myths, Mysticisms, and Mysteries. When the evil god had a name in Hebrew, it seemed worth reading.

Ossia brushed a claw lightly over Des' cheek. "My dear, good, sweet bird, you were the one who wanted to watch Mendez: An Authorized and Official Philosophical Musical Event."

The Avian actress playing Emily Mendez said something that Des found insensitive, regarding guillotines.

Des sighed. "What crass taste," she said. Then she watched as "Emily Mendez" was tragically assassinated by a dastardly agent of the USR.

The Avian actress playing Lottie Cross appeared on the beige wood stage. "My word!" she said, speaking in the more formal Avian style as she looked upon the "body".

The actress playing Lottie mourned how foolish she was in song form, dressed in a frankly wine-bottle-like dress that screamed 2330s fashion. "Oh, how I spurned such a font of wisdom only to be bethrothed to a scoundrel and harlot!" she said.

"Is this intended to come off as droll?" Des asked. The dishes in the sink were starting to stack out of the sink. In Desdaemonia's defense, she hadn't been taught how to do those.

"I shan't think so," Ossia said, before standing up. "In the kitchen, you will find a bookmarked CommNet page printed out, which shall teach you how to clean the dishes. They smell."

Des nodded. "...Mon dieu. I miss my servants," she said.

"Oh? 'Tis not much trouble," Ossia said. "Now, why not get to it?" She bobbed her head happily in a sort of bird-equivalent of a smile, though she did have corners where her beak met her face that curled upward as well.

Des steadied herself for the challenge, and Ossia spoke at the projector core attached to the floor. "Please pause this holomover play, and please find the contact information for Mrs. Lottie Cross, I am afraid she ought to know that the Protectorate of Lethe propaganda machine is distorting her image."

The projector core, being an advanced computer by 21st century standards, did just that, and an image of a tall black-haired woman appeared in the middle of the room. It was a clone body, Ossia Volo guessed by its dramatic features. "Mrs. Cross? I quite expected to speak to a publicist or personal assistant, to be truthful."

"...Yeah, well, the publicists and PAs in this perfect fuckin' council republic are all genocidal bigots," Lottie said. "Who's this?" She lifted a nicotine cigarette to her lips. It seemed irresponsible to Ossia, even if Mrs. Cross had multiple bodies.

"My name is Ossia Volo, I am the girlfriend and former handmaid to Grand Duchess Desdaemonia Hezria, and I thought you might be concerned with a libelous depiction of yourself."

Lottie stopped. "Oh, what's up?" she asked, visibly used to it.

"As you are no doubt aware, the Avian Kingdom of Lethe has been turned into a puppet government of the Red Navy state. They have, seemingly, been creating plays filmed as holomovers about their ideological ancestor, one petty and callous megalomaniac named Emily Mendez. In these holomovers, you are depicted as a tragic fool who missed her chance to be with a great genius, and your wife is depicted as a cheating con-artist scoundrel brandishing a knowingly false faith."

"None of that's true. Look, the religion thing is a funny story..." Lottie trailed off.

"...Then you see the issue," Ossia said. "Your image and that of the woman you are wedded to is being tarnished by an oppressive totalitarian military state, one which 'disappears' sophonts at its own sinister discretion."

"Sounds like Emily fucking Mendez," Lottie ground her teeth for a short half-second.

"...If I may ask, when did you know you needed to leave her embrace?" Ossia asked.

Lottie held her temples. "...Kinda personal, but OK. We were in a socialized housing bloc and she was just super fucking high. She wasn't a goddamn...I dunno, commie-fascist, or whatever she was by the end. She was just an obnoxious leftcom. She broke up with me because we both flunked out of rehab. I guess she was going through something? She had this mom, a cop, who was...I think the mom choked her at one point, like she was just this really aggressive person who demanded obedience, and it fucked up her psyche. Bad parents do damage. She was a mess, I was a mess, she broke up with me, and I found Kendra."

Ossie gave a bit of a sympathetic low cluck. "Ah. Do you...Do you think it could have gone differently?"

Lottie spoke. "Are you asking if I made her into the crazy fuck she was by the time the People's Militia sniped her brains out? You know, I thought she would have just died in old age as a shitty writer, but the Worldwide Republic then, well, people were rising up, becoming shooters, terrorists. She was an influence. Her beliefs were hurting people, and I guess something had to be done after the Revolt of the Deads.

"Personally, I supported it, but Kendra said it was a dangerous step. She thought you can't make too many of those and expect to keep the dream going. So, to get back to your question, yeah. She didn't have to do it, but she did, and people died for it."

"I'm so sorry," Ossia said, Des in the other room with the door open. "I'm deeply sorry."

"So, what's this holomover play called?" Lottie asked.



Someone remembered her childhood from the outside, in the big dream that was superreality. It took on a different form, now, in the imaginary world interlaced with the real one.

She had been reborn in superreality with an injection.

A text adventure for Emily Mendez, the person that inspired the Mazzaroth.


A young woman sits inside her childhood bedroom today. It just so happens that today, the 1st of May, 2033, is this young woman's birthday. Though it was thirteen years ago she was given life, it is only today she will be given a name.

What will the name of this young woman be?

> The Mazzaroth

Try again, smartass.

> Emily Isabella Mendez

Your name is EMILY. As was previously mentioned, it is your BIRTHDAY. A number of ANIME FIGURINES are scattered about your room, mostly on the floor. You have many interests. You greatly enjoy BUILDING WARHAMMER MODELS, which are located on your shelves where your anime figurines should be. You have a passion for VIDEO GAMES, and in particular a fondness for your HAXBOX 720. You are an ASPIRING NOVELIST, and you write DERIVATIVE FANTASY FANFICTION. Your first novel does not exist yet, but that is okay since you are aspiring and also thirteen.

> Find drugs

You don't have any drugs. You are thirteen.

> WHERE IS MOM?

Your MOTHER is OUT AT WORK, though she will be back soon.

> Leave apartment

You cannot leave the apartment. One might say that you are stuck at home. Perhaps even "homestuck". There is a war going on between the enemy, the REDS, and your faction, the DEADS under PRESIDENT CALLIOPE ANDERSON. You suspect that if she were here she would be amused by your predicament.

> Arm up

You need to look for weapons.

> Look for weapons

There are no weapons in the bedroom.

> Leave bedroom

You leave the bedroom to find the LIVING ROOM.

> Go to living room

You go downstairs to see your mother in her uniform, covered in blood.

EMILY: Mom?

OFFICER MENDEZ: Calm down, kid, just terrorist blood.

You FLIP YOUR LID. (+2 to Aggression, -4 to Common Sense)

CLASH!

You lunge for her, but your Aggression is not high enough to offset your Common Sense penalty. She pushes your head away, forcefully.

OFFICER MENDEZ: What the hell are you doing?

EMILY: Is that blood?

OFFICER MENDEZ: No shit, kid, the rioters are everywhere.

Your mother looks at you like you're not supposed to exist. You are terrified, but you notice your mother tense her fist, and so you return to your bedroom. You pull the covers over your head and you dream.

> Save and quit

Her name was Emily Mendez, and she was alive. She wasn't quite sure about the year, but it was definitely a few centuries out. She floated as she often did in her black expanse, the three-walled model of her childhood apartment in the void of the Mazzaroth's superreal mind. She looked at the little, pixellated Emily. She then looked at herself, and she had so many arms.

She saw the little sprite of her mother, who in a moment turned into Nailer. She was a convert, as the Mazzaroth had said. Indeed, Nailer was converted to a corpse. As soon as the Mazzaroth was born, what else could Nailer be but a glorified organ donor? She was pallid and pixellated, as dead as the NYPD.

Emily, the real Emily, floated down into the sprite version of the messy apartment. She looked at Nailer. She looked at herself. She had far too many arms.

> Resume adventure

Your name is still EMILY. You have discovered that you have been granted an UNNATURAL NEW LIFE by the god of a nation that follows your principles suddenly coming into being. You lived on through MILITARIZED IDEALISM. You did not kill NAILER, but she was not the architect. You were the SEED of Nailer's ideas. You created the ideals she followed. There became a god of that thing communism keeps turning into: Militarized Idealism, the Red Faith, the cult of personality, red fascism, the dictatorship of the proletariat in the most insultingly literal sense, whatever one wanted to call it.

Nailer died with the INJECTION. You came along. You wrote the words that became her society, so you became the basis of the monster. The only thing that came from her was much of the body-meat. The Mazzaroth grew out of your mind, the mind that justified Nailer's rule in the first place.

It is not your birthday. Nobody celebrates your birthday anymore. Your Warhammer models are waste, now. Your anime figurines your Mom sold because of that POST-REVOLUTION LAWSUIT. It is 2535, and you still have not written your first novel.

> Be in reality

Your name is the MAZZAROTH. The Emily acorn has grown into a soaring oak.

> Play God
 
This is some very good work! I like the increasingly disjointed nature of the narrative, particularly the dreamlike qualities that come up whenever the eldritch stuff comes into play. I tried experimenting with it in my novel but i think you're succeeding where I didn't so much.
 
Ahh, a very interesting explanation for the Mazzaroth's behavior, and sort of the opposite of what I seem to recall predicting.

Apparently, on the 'superreal' level where these entities exist, the idea very much takes over the original person. Though the reason Wide Eyes is more recognizable as she begins to become Mother Anarchy than Nailer was after becoming the Mazzaroth remains similar. Because Wide Eyes was, by personality, a lot closer to being "the superpowered personification of an idea" than Nailer was. Wide Eyes had personality elements that would not need or 'need' to be burned out of the final product, such as a totally inextinguishable optimism and belief that her preferred system could work if only she "got it right."
 
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This is some very good work! I like the increasingly disjointed nature of the narrative, particularly the dreamlike qualities that come up whenever the eldritch stuff comes into play. I tried experimenting with it in my novel but i think you're succeeding where I didn't so much.
Thank you! I'm glad it's all coming together well, and that's definitely intentional. I'm kind of curious what you feel like makes the use of it here work, and I'm certain that you'll get a handle on it. You might also be treating your writing with more harshness than needed, which is common for authors.

Ahh, a very interesting explanation for the Mazzaroth's behavior, and sort of the opposite of what I seem to recall predicting.

Apparently, on the 'superreal' level where these entities exist, the idea very much takes over the original person. Though the reason Wide Eyes is more recognizable as she begins to become Mother Anarchy than Nailer was after becoming the Mazzaroth remains similar. Because Wide Eyes was, by personality, a lot closer to being "the superpowered personification of an idea" than Nailer was. Wide Eyes had personality elements that would not need or 'need' to be burned out of the final product, such as a totally inextinguishable optimism and belief that her preferred system could work if only she "got it right."
Ah, yeah, glad it makes sense! I spent a lot of time trying to make the twist feel earned. Lots of agonizing over it.

And yeah, absolutely. The idea is *central* to these "gods", which is one of the things that make them kind of inhuman in the first place. They aren't nuanced beings, and, well, Wide Eyes was already getting closer and closer to being a "god" like the Mazzaroth, so Mother Anarchy is inhuman but much more Wide Eyes than with Nailer.

One of the inspirations of the way the "gods" work, especially the Mazzaroth, was the following quote attributed to Josef Stalin:

Vasily Stalin (Josef Stalin's son): But I am a Stalin too.
Josef Stalin: No you're not. You're not Stalin and I'm not Stalin. (Motions towards a picture of himself) That is Stalin. Stalin is Soviet power. Stalin is what he is in the newspapers and portraits, not you, no, not even me.

So, in a way, Mother Anarchy is Wide Eyes' "portrait", for example.

It's the godlike image created out of a charismatic leader, rather than the leader as a human being.
 
Also, i feel like out of all the things in her spiel about suffering, the one that should earn the Mazzaroth the kick in the crotch the most is perpetuating the myth of the tortured artist. The idea that suffering is vital for expression is harmful and stupid. The fact that people only remember the miserable artists says more about people gravitate to suffering and how capitalist society in itself makes a show out of misery than anything about how it affects the work. Vincent van Gogh didn't paint good pictures because he was rejected by the woman he loved or because he cut off his ear. His depression didn't necessarily mean he had a more powerful appreciation for beauty than those around him. What he had was a unique perspective. You don't need to be tortured to have that. It's like when Agent smith starts mumbling about humans being viruses when the truth is that all life, infolife included, could be characterized as simply organized viral activity It's reductive and in a sense, masochistic.

I'm kind of curious what you feel like makes the use of it here work, and I'm certain that you'll get a handle on it. You might also be treating your writing with more harshness than needed, which is common for authors.

What i liked in particular was the element of portraying it as a text adventure. It made me think of some of my favorite parts of the game CONTROL, where a character starts experiencing hyperdimensional reality and breaks not just the 4th wall, but arguably several other metafictional boundaries by imagining their life as a game, then as a story, then life as the player, then being aware of being watched. It gets wacky and i loved it.

As for my work…i'm grappling with some motivational issues right now. So that might be part of it…
 
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I'm kind of curious what you feel like makes the use of it here work, and I'm certain that you'll get a handle on it. You might also be treating your writing with more harshness than needed, which is common for authors.

What i liked in particular was the element of portraying it as a text adventure. It made me think of some of my favorite parts of the game CONTROL, where a character starts experiencing hyperdimensional reality and breaks not just the 4th wall, but arguably several other metafictional boundaries by imagining their life as a game, then as a story, then life as the player, then being aware of being watched. It gets wacky and i loved it.
 
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What i liked in particular was the element of portraying it as a text adventure. It made me think of some of my favorite parts of the game CONTROL, where a character starts experiencing hyperdimensional reality and breaks not just the 4th wall, but arguably several other metafictional boundaries by imagining their life as a game, then as a story, then life as the player, then being aware of being watched. It gets wacky and i loved it.

As for my work…i'm grappling with some motivational issues right now. So that might be part of it…
Thanks, it was definitely a creative risk, so I'm glad it paid off! Superreality is a weird thing.

Oh, and that's understandable. Many writers deal with that, so you're in good company.
 
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Getting close to the end of the novel/timeline. Wondering if people feel like it works better as "a" possible future for GDO, or as the canonical future for that novel/timeline, since I'm currently thinking about it and would appreciate a second opinion or two.
 
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I'd say 'a,' simply because it's so full of massive upheavals and introduces a lot of controversial characters in the sense of "readerbase may not know how to feel about them."
 
Update 39: Copper Haloes [Final]
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Update 39: Copper Haloes
Final Chapter


For Second Corporal Drexal, socialism was utopia. He stood on the deck of the NPS No Masters, its clean blue interiors welcoming. He looked down at the woman in the gunnery chair, Chief Gunnery Technician Havill. "It's a beautiful sun out there, isn't it?" he asked, pointing at a white dwarf through a massive oval-shaped window in the ship.

"Yeah, and these seats are really soft," Havill said, a projector node attached to the floor by her feet. "So, what's in that system?" she asked.

"Lesser Captain Regulus says that there's twenty space stations there, two orbiting city-ships, and one megastation," he responded.

"Damn. Who owns it?" she asked. Borders were a thing of the past with warp drive, but that just meant national claims weren't typically contiguous.

"Just some FinCiv techno-barbarians. The Meat Tree's there too, it's that big thing over there."

"Wonder what the fuck it is," Havill said. "Why doesn't it orbit anything or move?"

"...I dunno. The Mazzaroth's armored flunky did a press tour. She said that the Meat Tree is fuckin' Wide Eyes. Maybe the stick up her ass keeps her there."

"Fuckin'? As in, is Wide Eyes, or having sex with Wide Eyes?" Havill asked with a laugh.

"Gross. Hope it's the second one. So, uh...Anyway, let's send a sun expander in there and torch the system," Drexal said, putting an arm lazily on the back of Havill's chair.

"Can do," she said, looking down at the projector node. "Computer, throw a sun expander into it."

"Will do, ma'am," the computer said, and a dot that looked like a missile shot out in full view. It disappeared when it got far from the ship, then a second after the NPS ship warped away, the missile blinked into the nearest sun. A few seconds later, the white dwarf became a red giant, enveloping something like twenty million sophonts in a gaseous inferno.



THE HEADLINES:


"MEAT TREE" ENVELOPED IN RED SUN

MAZZAROTH CLAIMS MEAT TREE IS WIDE EYES

THE GOLEM OF PRAGUE: A FOLK TALE

OLIVIA RODRIGO STILL CRANKING OUT THE HITS, NOW JUMP-KRAZZ

IS GIULIA MARI A MASON?

FOUR HUNDRED YEARS OF WOMEN IN THE FREEMASONS

MASONRY AND THE PURIFICATION STATE

THE PURE: A KILLUMINATI?

GIULIA MARI ADMITS TO BEING A MASON

ALIEN GAZOR-RODHA MESSAGE

ALIEN GAZOR-RODHA MESSAGE DEBUNKED

PROPAGANDA DUE?

WHAT IS PROPAGANDA DUE?

DARK SECRETS OF THE MARI BLOODLINE

MARI: "YOU PREDS HAVE TOO MUCH TIME ON YOUR HANDS"

HOW SECRET SOCIETIES SERVED THE PEOPLE DURING THE STAR FLAG YEARS

ILLUMINATI VS. MASONS IN STAR FLAG?

DISCONTENT IN THE SECOND NATIONALIST UNION

TRANSITION TO FULL COMMUNISM IN USR CONTINUES

LABOR STRIKES IN 2NU: "USR OVER THE SPACERS"

LEADERLESS REVOLUTION?

CRACKDOWNS IN 2NU NATIONS

OCTOBER 1ST COMMITTEE TAKES CONTROL OF 2NU

USR FUNDING TERRORISTS IN 2NU?

MODERN COUNTERINSURGENCY POLICY FINALIZED

"WHY ARE WE LIVING LIKE THIS?" - 2NU DISSIDENTS

"RED REBELLION" SHUT DOWN, RINGLEADERS PROSECUTED

USR CONDEMNS UNDEMOCRATIC ACTIONS OF 2NU STATES

2NU CENTRALIZING AS USR DECENTRALIZES

"OUR GOD-GIVEN RIGHT TO FREEDOM WILL NOT BE INFRINGED": NEWFOUNDLAND PRIME MINISTER

"TERROR KINGS": NEW BIOPIC IN DEVELOPMENT ABOUT THE RED REBELLION OF 2535

USR DECLARES WAR ON PURIFICATION STATE AND MAZZAROTH'S "RED MARCHES"

MAZZAROTH: "LET THE HERETICS COME"

WHAT ABOUT LEFT UNITY?

2NU: "VEHEMENT NEUTRALITY"

MAZZAROTH: "HERESY DARKER THAN HEATHENRY, A DISTORTION OF TRUTH"

SURVIVING HZMAK: "IT'S A COLD, COLD GALAXY"

BOMB BLOWS UP BRITISH PARLIAMENT

INSTABILITY IN 2NU STATES

SECOND BRITISH EMPIRE OVERTHROWN IN SPONSORED COUP

BLOOD IN BRITAIN

JUSTICE IS DONE, FROM THE PURIFICATION STATE

MARI: "THEY'RE ALL LIKE THAT, THE LORDS AND LADIES JUST ADMITTED TO IT."

MAZZAROTH CULTS IN USR UNDER EXTREME SOCIAL SCRUTINY

GRAND DUCHESS DESDAEMONIA AND GF RECOMMEND BOOK OF JEWISH MYTH

MAZZAROTH CULTS GAINING ADHERENTS IN WAKE OF USR STATES' DRAFTS

DEFEATISTS: A NEW MUSICAL ABOUT THE MAZZAROTH CULTS

GRAND DUCHESS DESDAEMONIA HEZRIA ABDICATES: "I WANT TO SPEND TIME WITH MY GF"

MAZZAROTH APPOINTED PEOPLE'S LEGATE OF LETHE BY MAZZAROTH

MAZZAROTH: "PERFECT COMMUNISM AND THE HERETICS STILL CRAVE WAR. HOW FITTING."





Steph lay awake in bed, thinking of a sister that never was. She dreamed of Liv, gangly and smart. She saw a raven-haired high priestess. She thought of black and gold, of honeycomb and horror. She dreamed of her twisting many-armed goddess and her briefly-divine sister. Steph was tall and built like an oak tree, her bubblegum-dyed hair having been turned to a sober auburn months ago.

The bed was firm and dug into her back, making it half-numb. It felt like sleeping on a park bench made so the cold wind could pass through. Such was the need for constant endurance in the Mazzaroth's ritual guard. She tried to remember the mother and the utopian.

A single word stuck in her mind, explaining everything: faith.

Faith was hard, she thought, turning it around in her mind. It was hard to understand the point of it. She tried to get back to sleep. Maybe she'd see Liv again.

Maybe she'd see Mom. It was hard to miss someone like that, but she did.




"Abdication?" the Mazzaroth said, wings of meat bending and flapping behind her like the angel she was. She stood before those two Avians. "So much mercy, and yet you ask and you ask and you ask," she said, Ossia in silk pajamas and Des in a Captain Northwest: Iron Thorax T-shirt. "Your reign was the simplest solution to prevent the momentary hassle of putting down a revolt." The tetragrammaton in gold burned on her neck.

Ossia, her blue feathers well-maintained, used her willpower to push through the haze of subjugation that the air had turned into. She looked to Des. She lay on the couch, barely awake, a throw blanket over her disturbed by Ossia leaving the soft cover.

"Well, you ought to stand down!" Des said, forcing herself to her feet.

The Mazzaroth tsked. "Oh? And why is that?"

"There is only one thing you missed!" Des said, trying her hardest.

One of the Mazzaroth's back-arms pushed from the side of her wing, picked Des up and began to choke her.

"Ossia...The Golem in myth!" Des croaked out. "Died when...Name of God removed..."

Ossia ducked under the arms, then slashed through the tetragrammaton on the Mazzaroth's neck. The singular claw cut through the Hebrew lettering. There were four letters, in a script that was not her own:

Yodh.

He.

Waw.

He.


The source of her life marred as the Golem of Prague's was, the Mazzaroth sharply let Des go. Rapidly, she retreated into herself, her arms and meat wings folding and shifting.

A mass of goop and flesh, the compulsion to obey vanished in a moment, and emerging from the compressing genetic horror out of burps and squelches was a spectacled, bloody, pus-covered woman.

There were so many tumorous limbs on the floor, and they were melting.

Ossia Volo made a fist and decked Emily Mendez in the forehead, knocking her down.

Emily began to crawl on her back away from Ossia. The Avians kept kicking her.

"Where is the Mazzaroth?" Ossia yelled.

Emily spoke, her anachronistic skinny jeans looking uncomfortably soaked through. "She was Version Infinity of the human race, you rolled her back to me!"

Ossia charged. "You subjugated my homeland, you threatened Des and I's life, you killed stars-knows how many people, you suppressed any chance of worker autonomy or human liberty within socialism for what? Your ego? I knew it from the start," she said.

Emily's face drained of color as she tried to crawl back towards the door of the apartment. "There needs to be a Mazzaroth!" she said, her voice squeaky.

Ossia Volo sprinted, then kicked her in the crotch as hard as the bird could. Emily screamed, and Ossia put a foot on Emily's chest. The two birds kicked her on the floor a few times, Des mostly in the shins and Ossia on the arm.

"Please, don't hurt me, I'm just trying to fix everything! You saw it, right? It works! All you need to do is get the fluid and—"

Des kept kicking her in the shins again in a rolling flurry, and Ossia bent down and took a claw to hold Emily by the neck. She steadied herself. It was important to be in control of one's emotions. "You are a deeply pathetic, spoiled little girl, and you are lucky that I am no murderess."

Des blushed deeply at the sight. Her pride in her partner was written on her face. She kicked Emily in the shins some more, as long as it took to hold her until the authorities could come.

"Do we have to keep her?" Des asked.

"...Yes, Des," Ossia said.

Des locked the door while Ossia held her down.




2536

The Black Rider approached Millicent in their shared mindscape. It was, today, a beach near a 2010s-era Hollywood mansion, the Black Rider's choice. Millicent sat on the beach in long-sleeved clothes, finding herself uncomfortably hot.

"I went and disabled the weapons on the Object of Consequence orbital body," the Black Rider said. "Ain't like you should've been given them."

The sun was high.

Millicent sighed. "Now what?" she asked. "What about...What about making sure that Oregon-Nephi functioned the right way?"

"Well, now the USR'll get on that," the Black Rider said.

"What about the Second Nationalist Union?" Millicent asked, cursing her own modesty in this imaginary space. Then, she remembered it was a simulation, and willed it to be cooler for her.

"They declared neutrality in the Purification State-USR war, and Oregon-Nephi's being intervened in that."

"And you're letting the commies walk right over us?" Millicent asked, dumbfounded.

"Yeah, I told them they should take your brain out of this thing and give you a long term in house arrest. Also therapy. I said you ain't a threat without your satellite."

Millicent sighed. "...So it's over?" she asked.

"It's been so long since the Christian Republic fell," the Black Rider said with a shrug. "Why not move on and make it up to everyone?"

Millicent let out an impotent scream.



THE HEADLINES:
2536-2541

PURIFICATION STATE OFFENSIVE TOWARDS EARTH

DEATH PSI-WAVE OF MAZZAROTH ELECTRIFIES GALAXY, FIGURATIVELY

DEATH PSI-WAVE BREAKS IRN

EMILY MENDEZ ALIVE AGAIN

EMILY MENDEZ TAKEN TO USR

INTERSTELLAR RED NAVY COLLAPSES INTO INFIGHTING

PURIFICATION STATE RUNS RAMPANT ACROSS FORMER FINCIV AND IRN

ASCENDENCY CRUSHED BY PURE

SECOND NATIONALIST UNION FOUND TRADING ARMS TO PURIFICATION STATE

EMILY MENDEZ DECLARED "SUPERREAL UNKNOWN", "KILL CALLIOPE" PRECEDENT INVOKED

USR STATES CONGREGATE LEGAL RULINGS FOR MENDEZ

EMILY MENDEZ TO BE EXECUTED UNDER "KILL CALLIOPE" PRECEDENT

PURIFICATION CULTS RISE UP IN USR, 2NU

ASCENDENCY RUMP STATE FOUND AIDING USR IN CRASH SUPERREAL PROGRAM

PURIFICATION SYMPATHIZERS TAKE OVER MAJOR 2NU STATES: CHINA, NIGERIA, SOUTH AFRICA, NEWFOUNDLAND

USR DEVELOPS SUPERREAL CAPABILITIES

SECOND NATIONALIST UNION THREATENS TO USE RELATIVISTIC KILL VEHICLES, USR INVASION

USR DESTROYS RKVs WITH SUPERREAL WEAPONS

USR: "COME TO THE FREE WORLD"

BILLION SOPHONTS LEAVE 2NU

PURIFICATION STATE SHIPS APPROACH EARTH

PURIFICATION STATE: "PUKE OFFENSIVE"

BIOLOGICAL AND CHEMICAL WEAPONS DEPLOYED IN RECORD NUMBERS

PURIFICATION STATE: "WE BELIEVE WE CAN MAKE A PUPPET GOD"

A GOD CONTROLLED BY A SUPERIOR NATION?

2NU SUPPORT OF PURIFICATION STATE INCREASINGLY UNPOPULAR

PREDS BEWARE: "YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH TROUBLE YOU'RE IN"

USR UNLEASHES THOUSANDS OF GUIDED RKVs ON PURE WORLDS

PURE FLEET STRANDED IN SOL SYSTEM

CHINA SPLITS FROM 2NU

KENDRA OSWALD EVACUATES PURIFICATION STATE WITH WIFE, HIDES IN USR, OFFICIALLY DEFECTS

KENDRA EAGERLY PROVIDES INFORMATION ON PURIFICATION STATE

KENDRA AND WIFE: "WE HATE THOSE PEOPLE"

CHINA JOINS USR AS PROVISIONAL MEMBER

USR SENDS SUPERREAL-TRANSPORTED SUN EXPANDERS TO PURIFICATION STATE

MORE MEMBERS LEAVE 2SU

USR COUNTER-OFFENSIVE AGAINST PURE FLEET

"LEAVE NO SURVIVORS" - USR

2NU DISBANDS UNDER PURE AND USR PRESSURE

IRN REUNIFIED BY ADMIRAL HANSON

A SECOND RED REBELLION?

PURIFICATION STATE REMNANTS SURRENDER

TREATY OF 2541 SIGNED

STELLAR COUNCIL REPUBLIC FOUNDED

EARTH GOES RED

INDIA SECEDES FROM ASCENDENCY, DEFENDED BY USR

IRN WEAK, REJOINS USR

"EVERYONE KILLING EACH OTHER KIND OF WORKED OUT FOR US" - USR

NEAR-ENTIRE POPULATION OF REMAINING PURE FOUND GUILTY OF ENABLING WAR CRIMES

ASCENDENCY: A FRAGILE STATE

"WE WANT THOSE WHO WISH TO BE REDEEMED TO BE ABLE TO" - USR

DE-PURIFICATION PROGRAMS FOUNDED IN USR

2NU ORGANIZATION DISBANDS DUE TO OUTSIDE PRESSURE

MILITARY COUP IN ASCENDENCY

LETHE JOINS THE USR, TOO WEAK AFTER MAZZAROTH INVASION NOT TO

KAZ HARRINGTON: THE WILHELM II OF THE MODERN AGE

ASCENDENT SOCIALIST REPUBLIC NOW USR NATION

WAS KAZ HARRINGTON ASSASSINATED?

POWER RIGBY, AKA "HIGHER POWER", RENOUNCES GODHOOD TO LIVE AS ANDROID

WHERE IS KAZ HARRINGTON?

KAZ HARRINGTON LIVES!

REMEMBERING KAZ HARRINGTON: EAT MANURE, IDIOT



2542

Holding Cell 6B was a cold, white place. Elvis Kvasti, aka Gemini Two, looked at the two in their shitty metal chairs in front of him. He adjusted his glasses and ran a hand through prematurely greying hair. Then, he sat down in his own metal chair. "Fantastic," he said, his provided lime green clothes feeling too loose.

"Oh, don't be such a whiner, Elv," Katey said. "We're alive, aren't we?" She wore a cocky smile.

He saw right through it. "Yeah, we are. Wish everyone was. How many tens of millions of people got killed for your stupid fantasy?"

Katey's smile broke. "...I got carried away." She struggled against her ankle bonds and solid metal wrist cuffs. She couldn't break out, they were two inches thick and closed tight. Elvis didn't seem to mind his bonds, and Steph was merely human with a minimum of enhancements, so she was free. "Lots of people did. By the time I stared into that thing's eyes, it was too late. Besides, it isn't like you two were blame-free with your evil space god."

"Hey," Steph interjected, in a prisoner jumpsuit like the rest of them. "You didn't get it! The Mazzaroth knew what she was doing."

"Yeah, and she knew she was creating a tyranny," Katey said.

"Better a tyranny than murderous anarchy! She was better than us! She was going to give us stability, socialism, a brighter future!" Steph said.

"Steph's right!" Elv said.

A trooper carrying a rail rifle entered the holding cell. "Hey, the three of you." He tilted his head at the yelling. "Steph, you were found to be a supporter of the Mazzaroth and guilty of treason, which comes with a five-year house arrest and rehabilitation period. Elvis, you were found guilty of treason and sentenced to rehabilitation during house arrest for five years as well, and Katey here has been found guilty of treason and cosmic-scale mass murder and as such has been sentenced to the firing squad. Elvis and Steph, you are free to go. There's a snack bar on the way out, it has a frozen yogurt machine. Katey, come with me."

Katey tried to break out, to punch his head into a concave surface, but her struggles were impotent. Elvis spoke. "I'm sorry it had to end this way," he said, in a tone of voice that Katey thought meant that he blamed her for the mistake of trying to do the right thing. Still, he sounded sad.

She shuffled off as she followed the guard down the baby-blue hallways of the detention facility, until they made it to an exterior portion.

Then, she walked out of the indoors and stood on Earthling grass, taking deep breaths as she approached a pristine brick wall. There was a woman there, wearing glasses. Her hair was ink, and she wore a frown. "You know, the funny thing is that they're killing both of us," Emily Mendez said.

The sun was high and true.

"Go fuck yourself," Katey said.

"Against the wall!" the firing squad yelled.

"Doesn't bother me." She and Katey pressed up against the wall. "I've shown them all the path. Now, they just need to follow."

For a second, Emily sounded like Wide Eyes.

Katey closed her eyes. Goodbye, she thought.

The firing line set itself up, and it did not care about Katey's good intentions or Emily's grandiose ambitions when it splattered them both against the brick.



"Gemini One?" Weiss asked, lifting a cigar in his personal space yacht. It looked like a Vegas casino from the glittering days when that meant something besides a museum. He looked at the military woman in front of her, who gazed at the mess of candy wrappers and protein shake cups on the table. Weiss twisted a poker chip in his fingers. "It's great to see you. Always nice to deal with remnants of the IRN. What brings you here?" He gave a little chuckle.

Ndidi Ekwueme leveled the gun at his head. "Where are your scum-sucking murderer kids?" she asked.

Claudius gave a friendly chuckle and took a drag. "You'll never know," he said.

Ndidi punched him across the face.

"I'd never sell out my boys," Claudius Weiss said, rubbing his feathered cheek. "Shoot me if you want." He reached into his desk drawer, eyes on a little pistol. He reached for it slowly, as if not to be noticed.

"Fair enough," Ndidi said, blowing his head open with her own coil pistol. It covered her in brains and blood. She felt proud wearing the viscera.

She spoke into her comms implant. "This is Gemini One of USR Zodiac Platoon. Claudius Weiss is KIA. Search the ship, we need leads to track down his war criminal kids for trial."



Now in a chrome-and-glass android body, Power walked the streets of Salt Lake City in a flowing dress that glittered like starlight. It wore a feminine form, feeling the mood, and it danced across the pavement. It had been salvaged, recovered, brought to safety, and it had requested to be a sophont rather than an brain in complete isolation.

The buildings were high and lined with creeping, edible vines. The solar panels were built into the roads, the streets were little forests and the city was walkable and with a state-of-the-art tram system. What was the point of being a god, it thought, when being mortal was so much warmer?



2543

Kendra, Lottie, Ossia, and Des stood on a rooftop in Malibu, by the solar panels and the public pool. Kendra and Lottie wore cloned bodies, inhumanly perfect versions of their former selves. Kendra also wore a micro-kini that Des and Ossia both nonverbally agreed was scandalously tiny, along with sparkly flip-flops.

Meanwhile, Lottie wore a one-piece swimsuit. The sun shone high, true and fair. The summer was bright, and Kendra thought to herself that this area having been so long ago just nearby an atomic blast felt impossible. Des and Ossia held hands, and Lottie swam laps while Kendra suntanned.

Des found herself captivated by the sides, underside, and top of Kendra's perfectly over-enhanced bust.

"Come now, Des, it's rude to stare," Ossia chided, and Desdaemonia looked away shamefully. The two birds disappeared into the pool bathrooms, so that Ossia could redirect Des' interest.

Lottie pulled herself out of the pool, dripping wet, her body fit and her muscles defined. She brushed her blonde hair behind her ears. Then, she sat down on the side of Kendra's pool chair. "Thank God it's over, right?" she asked.

Kendra reached for a paper book to read. "What's over?"

"The stuff with Star Flag, the superreality stuff, the Mazzaroth, the trials, the war..." Lottie mumbled. "God, I'm just so tired."

"I think you're tired from all that swimming," Kendra said, flipping through the pages of her book to find where she was. "Oh, and this purple lipstick looks cute, right?" she asked. "Anyway, excited for my new holomover?"

"It's pretty 'you', yeah, and the holomover actually sounded pretty clever, to use a morning coffee as a metaphor for ambition," Lottie said. "Here's to the shining socialist future, right?"

Kendra laughed like a cup of hot cocoa. "Yeah," she said. "So, Desdaemonia and Ossia?"

"Yeah?" Lottie asked. "I still can't believe they saved themselves until marriage," she said. "Good friends, though."

"Yeah, they're kinda prudes, right?" Kendra joked, squeezing her wife's hand. It felt nice to be an idealized version of who she was so long ago, yet modern and her-as-she-was-now just the same.

"Prudes," Lottie said. It had been around five hundred years. People swam and played and had fun with each other. People made popsicles simply for the joy of having something to give out by the pool. How the proletariat faded away, leaving only hundreds of billions of beautiful individual sophonts. "You know, centuries ago, things could have gone completely differently. Maybe there's a universe out there with no superreality, no space travel."

"Well, that isn't our universe," Kendra said, hand in hand. "We're here in this one."

Their gods were themselves and each other.
 
Ending was a bit abrupt, but otherwise very good. But then that's for the best I suppose; no point in wallowing in the more miserable details.
 
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Ending was a bit abrupt, but otherwise very good. But then that's for the best I suppose; no point in wallowing in the more miserable details.
I could see that, but I am still proud of it, and I'm glad you found it very good! I think it was either an ending with two montages or an entire second half of the story that would just be brutal war, and I felt as though dragging out the IRN-USR and Pure-USR wars like that would just become a long arc that wasn't worth making people slog through it.

So you work with where the story goes, and I'm glad it worked out!

Thank you!
 
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Oh, thank you! What do you mean by the concept of novelty, and it being done right?
The concept of novelty is, well, the idea; the presentation or the nature of a thing being known as somehow new, sometimes through a different perspective, or usually just by being unexperienced by the reciever, no matter how old The Thing itself may be.

This story succeeds so well in achieving the ideal presentation-narrative-dissonance that it makes every element 'novel' to the reader, just as a composer may redesign a symphonic chord progression into a series of equivalently arranged tritones.

The proof that that you succeeded is in how you successfully avoided the tropes of xeno-fiction while also using all the elements of xenofiction. Everything is still perfectly and miserably and fascinatingly human.

AKA

"The concept of novelty" is the sharp dividing peak that separates the Apathetic Valley of contemptible familiarity in fiction form from the Uncanny Valley of homework in fiction form.
 
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The concept of novelty is, well, the idea; the presentation or the nature of a thing being known as somehow new, sometimes through a different perspective, or usually just by being unexperienced by the reciever, no matter how old The Thing itself may be.

This story succeeds so well in achieving the ideal presentation-narrative-dissonance that it makes every element 'novel' to the reader, just as a composer may redesign a symphonic chord progression into a series of equivalently arranged tritones.

The proof that that you succeeded is in how you successfully avoided the tropes of xeno-fiction while also using all the elements of xenofiction. Everything is still perfectly and miserably and fascinatingly human.

AKA

"The concept of novelty" is the sharp dividing peak that separates the Apathetic Valley of contemptible familiarity in fiction form from the Uncanny Valley of homework in fiction form.
Thank you very much, that's incredibly kind of you to say, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it! I'm also glad you found it novel, and I think your analysis is very generous and well-reasoned. It's very appreciated.
 
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