The Rabbit Sergeant and the Dragon Cult

Chapter 8.3
Jess braced herself against the dormer roof, staring at the sky. Even after climbing up to Oblange's roof, she couldn't see where the base of the red dome met the ground. Her mind raced. She didn't know how he had done this. Technically she didn't know it was Deresfedt who'd done it; it could have been someone else. But if it was him, she did know why - no help would be coming unless Nowroski and Babs figured out some way to break the dome. No jets, no attack helicopters, no resupply for the missiles. Turning slowly, and carefully, she tried to figure out what else was under the dome. Washington Naval Yard, that would be inside.

Would JBAB? What about the Pentagon? Could she break it from the inside? Did she have time to? Was it anchored to something, and could she locate the anchor somehow? Thresholds - it had gone up despite the locational thresholds, but that left time - would sunset or dawn be enough to break it?

She had to assume they wouldn't. Noon was another matter, though. It was a bit of a threshold, between morning and afternoon, but more than that Deresfedt's latest prophecy was centered around noon, which meant either the dome would break at noon when the context of the prophecy changed, or he'd bring it down then to let his 'dread god' out once it was sufficiently godlike. That, happily, made her priority clear - stop Deresfedt. Everything else was secondary.

Out of the corner of her eye, she saw something green in motion. She turned enough to get a good look, and yeah, it was Bicks and his team, jogging up the street. From the left, she saw a black sedan moving at relatively high speed, but through the red reflection on the windshield, she saw Army camo in the driver's seat.

She stepped off the roof, twisting as she did so, and caught the edge of it on her way down. Then she planted a foot on the railing and slid to the porch. Charlie fluttered down after her, and she scooped him into her arms, then walked down to the street while she waited for the others to join her.

Deresfedt must have used his established context to make the dome. Could she take advantage of that? Bind him, track him? But her magic was too different from his. Maybe - but then maybe the difference between Washington and Deresfedt and Ahktot wasn't their spells. She'd seen them all casting and their spells had a simplicity to them that would never work for her or, for that matter, Oblange. It also didn't leave a lot of room for variation, which meant the difference had to be somewhere else, in whatever realm they were pulling dragons from, and that meant -

Well. She'd finally found the answer to blocking Deresfedt's mind control; it wasn't something she could do. That actually made her feel significantly better. No matter what Agent Brooks said, she'd spent too much time working Intel and that meant her role in this had to be support. She didn't think raw symbolism like that would make a difference, it would take - well, it would take intent and belief, and given that she thought the symbolism would help, and she wanted the symbolism to help, maybe that would be enough. She just needed to take some concrete actions to turn it into a spell.

Well. She wasn't going to apologize. She had nothing to apologize for, she'd just done her duty. But either way - she pulled out her cell phone.

No signal.

Right. Shaking her head at herself, she tucked it back away. But it hadn't turned off, which meant Deresfedt hadn't somehow taken out all the electronics. He'd just blocked the local network and cut off the electrical grid, probably physically, using the wall. Her stomach churned at the thought of what would have happened to anyone who happened to be standing in the way of the wall, but then she pushed that thought aside. She just had to focus on what could be done. Radio would work, as long as the radios were all in the dome. Backup generators would be fine, too, depending on how much fuel they had. She could probably - but no, there'd be too many barriers, it would slow things down too much.

And a tracking spell wasn't an option. He'd need to be carrying something she'd already tagged.

She grinned.

A voice cut in past her inner dialogue. It was Bicks. "What in God's name is that?"

Jess glanced up at the red sky, pulling her notebook out as she did so. "A barrier, I think. He's walled us in, and more importantly, walled our reinforcements out." Then she flipped through the book to the communications spell, scanned it, and went to the first blank page.

"I meant on your shoulder."

Jess blinked, looked at Bicks, looked at Charlie, looked at Bicks. "It's a little dragon, Sergeant. His name is Charlie, and the nice man who made him just got murdered."

Charlie chirped sadly.

The black sedan screeched to a halt, parking in the middle of the street, and Brooks jumped out. "Agent Dunbar?"

"Agent Brooks." Jess kept writing.

"I really, really hope you have some idea of what's going on," he said.

"We're cut off," she said absently. "I assume the barrier goes to the ground, but someone should check the subway tunnels. Colonel Nowroski is still outside, so he may be able to come up with a way to break it. So's B- Barbara Thompson, she's one of the people I've been working on my own magic with."

"Can't you do something?"

She raised her eyes from the book and shrugged the shoulder that didn't have a dragon on it. "Probably, but there's no time. Deresfedt summons his god tomorrow at noon and we need to be ready." She looked down and started writing again. Four hasty stanzas later - though she'd have to recheck the tenses on the second one - she looked up at Brooks.

He hadn't moved. He and Bicks were both staring at her, matching expressions of dread on their faces.

She frowned at them. Even if she didn't technically know Brooks' rank, she knew he'd been to the Academy, which made him an officer, and he did know she was a sergeant. He was supposed to be the one making decisions, which she'd be following through on.

So much for that, but she supposed that under the circumstances she had to do more than just provide expert testimony. She flipped her notebook closed and gave both men a flat look, then glanced at Brooks' car. "There's no way we can fit everyone in that, is there?"

Brooks blinked, startled out of a near-fugue, then turned to look at his sedan. They'd be lucky to fit five people and their gear, and they had seven to move.

Bicks blinked. "Oh. Right. Right! We already called for backup, so a squad is on their way with transpo. They should be here in five."

Jess nodded. "Alright. Can you sit tight until they get here if Agent Brooks and I head out?"

Bicks looked up and down the street. "Twenty minutes ago I'd have said we'd be good, but I'm feeling a little exposed out here."

Jess closed her eyes for a moment. There was a place they could take cover, and she'd helped make it secure against everything except the one person it had needed to stop. Her gut tightened, but what was done was done. She opened her eyes and nodded to the house. "Head inside and close the door," she said. "I helped set up the wards on the house. As long as the deadbolt is turned, that place is a fortress. Even with it open, the walls are pretty magic resistance, but the door won't be, so try not to count on that. Agent Brooks, I believe we need to talk to whoever is in charge on the ground right now. Shall we?"
 
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"Probably, but there's no time. Deresfedt summons his god tomorrow at noon and we need to be ready." She looked down and started writing again. Four hasty stanzas later - though she'd have to recheck the tenses on the second one - she looked up at Brooks.

He hadn't moved. He and Bicks were both staring at her, matching expressions of dread on their faces.

She frowned at them. Even if she didn't technically know Brooks' rank, she knew he'd been to the Academy, which made him an officer, and he did know she was a sergeant. He was supposed to be the one making decisions, which she'd be following through on.


Well you know what they say:

Maxim 2: A Sergeant in motion outranks a Lieutenant who doesn't know what's going on.
Maxim 3: An ordnance technician at a dead run outranks everybody.

Right now they're wondering why she isn't running.
 
Well you know what they say:

Maxim 2: A Sergeant in motion outranks a Lieutenant who doesn't know what's going on.
Maxim 3: An ordnance technician at a dead run outranks everybody.

Right now they're wondering why she isn't running.
Yeah, it's only just now trickling into her head that she's basically the only person who knows how to defuse explosives. Metaphorically.
 
She frowned at them. Even if she didn't technically know Brooks' rank, she knew he'd been to the Academy, which made him an officer, and he did know she was a sergeant. He was supposed to be the one making decisions, which she'd be following through on.
But any good officer who's outgrown the butter bar phase will know not to joggle the elbow of a Subject Matter Expert, and will listen to an NCO that knows more than they do. And everyone has acknowledged Jess is the Magic SME right here.
 
Chapter 8.4
Jess looked down at the map table. A part of her wanted to marvel at the fact that she was a part of a briefing - no, not a briefing, a strategy session in the White House. She wasn't there to give information, she was there to present advice and options.

The rest of her - other than her other self, who was more concerned about all the big scary predators in a small dark room - told that part to shut up. She wasn't there because of who she was, she was there because the situation really was that bad. This was a strategy session at the White House, but the map was a paper map under a glass sheet, lit by an emergency light dangling from the ceiling, marked with grease pens. The highest ranking person in the room was a Lieutenant Colonel, and no higher command could be contacted, no outside support could come.

Two thirds of the people in the room were Army, and the other third were Secret Service. The latter had ceded control of the situation - and offered this command post - to the Army on the grounds that their protection targets had all been evacuated during the initial lockdown. It was the Army that had the manning to hold the White House and the Capitol building, so it would be the Army that was in charge, but the Secret Service knew the area better than basically anyone. They had a healthy presence in the room, half of them watching the Army commander, and the other half watching Jess for some reason.

Lieutenant Colonel James Schlutz was the deputy commander of the infantry brigade that had been deployed to secure the capital during the lockdown. His commander was a colonel, and his commander was a general, but they had both been in the JOC when the barrier went up. The JOC was in Fort Lesley J. McNair, which was in DC, but on the very southern tip and therefore on the wrong side of an impenetrable communications barrier denoted by a thin red line around the city. He looked like he was coping well with the unexpected responsibility. He looked calm, collected, and in control, and his voice didn't wobble. If it weren't for her nose, Jess would never have known better.

"We sent two platoons into the tunnels, sir," said a captain, one of the scout company commanders. "They ran into something, we're not really sure what. We pulled back and formed up to defend the tunnel entrance. They took casualties. I'd say push through in a subway car, but with the power cut off..."

One of the Secret Service men spoke up. "Line power should be coming through on the third rail from the other side of the tunnel. If the cars that are still on this side aren't responding to it, then it has to have been cut." He turned to another agent. "Do you know if they have a diesel locomotive in the yards?"

Schlutz grunted. "If they do, we'll look into it. Until then, maintain the perimeter. How far did they get before they were attacked?"

The captain grimaced. "Not far from the station, from what Lieutenant MacDougal said."

The colonel traced the red line marked around the map, then tapped it. "Can anyone tell me why it's straight from here to here?"

Jess leaned over. "That's the DC boundary, Colonel. Either the spell couldn't push out of the District, or it couldn't push into Maryland, and I have no clue which. He went to a lot of effort to make them cover as much as they did, but it looks like there were still boundaries he couldn't cover. That's probably why it hit the bridges, too - the river forms a natural boundary. I know he had a workshop over the Anacostia, and that's cut off as much as everything else."

"So he still has limits, then." Schlutz nodded firmly, then looked up at Jess. "Why monsters in the tunnels?"

Jess hesitated. "Best case, the ground is another barrier and his spell doesn't reach down that far. We know it goes to the riverbed, but we don't know if it keeps going after that. He may have deployed forces in the tunnel so we couldn't get out, and if that's the case, then we can punch through."

"Worst case?"

She sighed. "Worst case, he's using tunnels into the underworld to bring monsters through."

Schlutz froze, along with half the room.

Jess frowned thoughtfully. "It makes some sense symbolically, tunnels and darkness have always been associated with monsters. And dragons have been associated with caves. But not so much with lesser monsters. They're usually jealous and territorial. I can't rule out him having a monster army pouring out when he makes his move, but it's not likely."

The colonel nodded. "Then we have to plan for the possibility. We need guards on all the subway stations under the dome, but ensure they are ready to fall back on prepared positions, and station a Stryker troop...here, ready to respond to the first breach. And make sure they have routes to fall back to the perimeter." He tapped the black line.

One of the captains swallowed, then looked at the colonel. "Respectfully, sir, there'll be a lot of people outside that perimeter."

Schlutz shook his head roughly. "There's no help for that. We can't possibly make any arrangement for refugees in the time we have. Our best bet is to present a target they can't ignore and end the situation as fast as we can." He paused and surveyed the room for a moment. "Dismissed. Agent Dunbar, a moment?"

She stepped a little closer as the Army officers started filing out. "Colonel?"

"This 'Dersfet' guy. How much do you know about his capabilities?"

She grimaced. "Not nearly as much as I'd like. I've only seen him work one spell, and that was very...perfunctory." For a moment again, she was there, standing on the 11th Street Bridge, locked in place and watching Deresfedt pull his knife through Nathan Washington's throat. She shook her head rapidly to try and clear the memory away. "Beyond that, I really don't know what he's capable of. From what I've seen, he does magic in a very different way from what I do, and he's crazy, which makes him even harder to predict."

Schlutz nodded slowly. "If I were him, I'd hit us now, while we're off-balance. Are you sure he'll wait?"

"I am. It's not enough for him to knock us out, because he's not trying to beat us, he's trying to make a statement, and fulfill a prophecy. He needs to be here tomorrow, at noon, and that means he won't attack us now out of the fear we'll be able to push him off later. He'll come tomorrow morning."

He nodded again, faster this time. "Sound reasoning. Alright, what do you need from me?"

She blinked. "I'm sorry, sir. What?"

He flashed her a thin smile. "Right now you are my only hard counter to Deresfedt. If there were anyone else - and from what I've heard that's not a given - they're on the wrong side of his wall. That means stopping him - dropping the dome - ending this crisis - is basically all up to you, and as I see it that means my job is to make sure you can. What support do you need?"

She stared at him, open-mouthed. After a moment, her brain unlocked and she closed her eyes. "I need some people," she said. "They should be in the dome, but they're outside the perimeter right now."

"Then I'm giving you a squad as an escort. Did they issue you a radio?"

"No, sir."

"We'll fix that. Do what you need to."

Jess braced to attention, then turned to leave. She made it three steps towards the door.

"Agent Dunbar?" It was one of the Secret Service agents. She recognized him as one who'd been staring at her through the briefing.

She raised her eyebrows. "Agent?"

He handed her a business card. "Special Agent in Charge Mason Rowley. When this is over, can you talk to us about magical defense? It's pretty obvious that we have a huge gap in coverage and we need to fill it."

She took the business card, blinking. "Yeah, that'd be good. I've had some ideas."

"Let's talk on your way?"
 
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I can't rule out him having a monster army pouring out when he makes his move, but it's not impossible."
I can figure out what this sentence is intended to mean, but only through looking at all the words around it. As is, it doesn't make much sense.

Also, the ground as a barrier is an interesting thought. It makes me wonder if there's another barrier between the Sky and the Heavens Above, which weren't always considered to be the same thing. This story probably isn't going to explore ground to space, or the reverse, magic though.
 
I can figure out what this sentence is intended to mean, but only through looking at all the words around it. As is, it doesn't make much sense.
Bleh. You're right, that sentence is totally backwards. I changed "impossible" to "likely."

As for space - one of the scenes that has been in my head that isn't going in the fic is a conversation between her and a rocket scientist, with her pointing out that one of the things that magic doesn't like is the concept of redundancy. (As in, rocket scientists tend to be engineers, and engineers build up backups to their backups and then throw another backup, and then stop but only because of the tyranny of the rocket equation, and if you make your spell assuming the spell will fail then the spell will not work.)

(Which is really not as unsolvable of a problem as I thought when I started writing the fic, but I'm gonna have to live with that.)
 
(Which is really not as unsolvable of a problem as I thought when I started writing the fic, but I'm gonna have to live with that.)
It also doesn't keep them from combining magic with mechanical backups. They could just keep using their current rockets and just add some sort of 'make my rocket go up' magic circle around the launch pad, which would let them save noticeable costs in all likelyhood. Or if you enchant the rocket to be lighter before using it, that should be easily detectable on the 'did it work or not' area long before it actually takes off.

On another note, on the subject of 'you have to believe in the magic for it to work', I want to point out you've got a good chance of re-creating the 'this is totally ancient chinese magic lore' stereotype. It doesn't actually matter if the herbs are the lowest costing whatever from the local greens section (IE, basil or whatever) and the 'ancient chinaman/woman' is actually born and raised in Brooklyn or San Fransisco or whatever so long as they can put up a convincing act and convince the customer that the seven secret herbs used as directed will totally solve whatever medical problem they have. Or make their house smell bad to ants, depending. After all, the customer is casting the spell, not the '100% authentic asian lore' salesman.

Other stereotypes are also probably abusable, though the 'ancient chinese whatever' stereotype is the most popular in that category I'm aware of without research.
 
Not something I was really thinking about for the Wiccan lady, but a hundred percent valid for her store, too.
 
It also doesn't keep them from combining magic with mechanical backups. They could just keep using their current rockets and just add some sort of 'make my rocket go up' magic circle around the launch pad, which would let them save noticeable costs in all likelyhood. Or if you enchant the rocket to be lighter before using it, that should be easily detectable on the 'did it work or not' area long before it actually takes off.
If you can include magic parts from different mages, you could have the mage who needs to believe in the primary and the mage who needs to provide the backup be different people.
 
If you can include magic parts from different mages, you could have the mage who needs to believe in the primary and the mage who needs to provide the backup be different people.
Yeah, and you can also do simple and robust testing of some of the spells you're using. Which means infinite fuel, which means I run afoul of Burnside's Advice ("Friends don't let friends use reactionless drives in their universes.") Too many easy planet-crackers.

Which to be fair has always been a problem with this magic system...
 
Yeah, and you can also do simple and robust testing of some of the spells you're using. Which means infinite fuel, which means I run afoul of Burnside's Advice ("Friends don't let friends use reactionless drives in their universes.") Too many easy planet-crackers.

Which to be fair has always been a problem with this magic system...
Reactionless drives for planet-cracking seems like a problem that more magic could be used to solve. Your rules of magic don't seem to require that a magical defense to be at all concerned by the ludicrous energy and momentum of a high relativistic projectile. And it might even counter the high-relativistic projectile detection problem if magic can achieve either foresight or FTL detection.
 
I want to post another scene tonight, but inspiration struck. If I can get this scene down before it gets too late, I'll post tonight; otherwise, tomorrow.
 
Chapter 8.5
Jess sat in the passenger side of Brooks's car, a paperclip dangling from a string hanging in front of her face. Ahead of the car, a humvee cruised down the street. Another was trailing behind them. Both humvees carried soldiers from Bicks' platoon, though not him or his squad. Gee was still in the hospital, and the rest of them were working on the perimeter around the mall, but his lieutenant had sent another squad.

Agent Daniels, one of the Secret Service agents who'd volunteered to come with them, leaned forward from his seat behind Brooks. A big man with a soft Georgia accent, he was wearing Army camo, though his service tag said "US SECRET SERVICE" and he grimaced as his M4 dug into his chest as its strap tangled. He nodded to the dangling paperclip. "Any chance you could use that to find this evil wizard?"

She shook her head. "Technically I can't even use it to find Detective Conlon," she said. "But since I did use this and another paperclip to make a communications spell, I can use it to find the other paperclip. And last time I saw his, he was tucking it into his badge holder."

"So if he's thrown it away, we're SOL?" That was Agent Nash, the other Secret Service agent, sitting directly behind Jess. Not much taller than Jess, she had short, frizzy blonde hair and she carried her armor with less experience but her scoped M4 with more.

"Yup. But I'm pretty sure he forgot it existed. My phone was fixed before we needed to contact each other." The paperclip seemed to be pulling more to the right. Jess keyed her radio. "He's more to the right, but we're getting close."

That was a relief, given that there was still plenty of distance from them to the outside of the wall.

The speaker squawked with Sergeant Velinsky's voice. "Roger. There's an intersection up ahead, we'll make the turn."

"What if he did throw it away?" Nash asked.

Jess shrugged. "Then we find an abandoned paperclip, and we head to the nearest precinct to see if they can reach him through whatever network they've managed to establish."

"Does he not have a radio?"

Daniels shook his head. "MPD network is a mess. Too much is set up with their headquarters, and when power went down, so did their system."

Incredulously, Nash demanded, "They didn't have generators?"

"They did, up until someone summoned a dragon and broke out of holding."

The radio cut them off. "Making the turn," said Velinsky, and the humvee ahead slowed. Then it started rounding into the curve. "Holy shit! Going hot!"

At the edge of her hearing, Jess could hear the bark of rifle fire - mostly assault rifles, but a heavier gun, too - and then she was slammed into her seat as Brooks punched it after the humvee. Then he tapped the brakes and skidded into the cross-street, and she was looking straight down at the firefight.

Her eyes swept past the back of Alpha Team's humvee and across the street ahead, her brain trying to slot things into their proper places. There was an SUV, black, familiar-looking but badly damaged. Someone had t-boned it, someone in a junker, an old sedan with rusting sides and worn paint. Neither had windows, and someone was in the driver's seat of the junker, slumped over the wheel. Its passenger side door was open, and a humanoid figure was on the ground next to it, not moving.

A police car had been driven right up to the building next to the SUV. One of its lights was still flashing, but its windows were gone and its side was riddled with bullet holes. A man in black fatigues was crouched by its rear wheel, an AK in his hands. He looked Hispanic, his head shaved - but he moved with an alien stillness that pegged him as one of Deresfedt's altered followers.

Past the SUV, Jess could see another sedan, its own windows gone, and another bald warrior crouched behind it with a rifle. He was firing towards the entrance of the building - was that a church? It had a facing stone blocks, anyway. The warrior had just fired a burst, his rifle biting chips out of the stone, and was going back down, but then he looked right at Jess and turned his rifle towards her.

It was the last mistake he ever made.

Alpha team's gunner opened up with the M2, its deep thud cutting through everything else. Three more bullet holes punched into the side of the car, and then the man went down, his rifle tumbling away. Then Brooks jerked the wheel to the left, and Bravo's humvee passed it on the right, its own gunner already in the turret. The soldiers spilled out of the sides of the humvees, spreading out to cover the area, shouting, and then it was all over.

Brooks pulled in behind the second humvee, and Jess was out the door, her pistol in her hand, but no one was moving. She could count six dead from where she was standing, one of them in a MPD patrol uniform.

After a moment, two men stepped out of the front door of the church, their own rifles slung. The one on the left looked at Jess and snorted, a grimace on his face.

"Of course," Conlon said.

Jess felt a twinge of guilt as Conlon glared at her, but she shoved that aside. She had nothing to feel guilty about. Other than Oblange, the two practitioners dead in their store, the cultist she'd personally shot, the - that was getting her nowhere. Nothing regarding Conlon, anyway. She had her orders. And if he was pissed about martial law - well, that wasn't in her power, anyway.

"What are you doing here." His question came out flat, level - not as if it wasn't a question, not as if he didn't care about the answer, but as if he was worried that if he raised his voice at all, he'd be shouting.

"Looking for you," she said, as evenly as she could.
 
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Alpha team's gunner opened up with the M2, its deep thud cutting through everything else. Three more bullet holes punched into the side of the car, and then the man went down, his rifle tumbling away.
Some pretty impressive hardening Derf-boy is putting on his goons. Getting stiched up with a M2 should have splashed him, with a hole you could pass a football through without touching the sides.
Jess felt a twinge of guilt as Conlon glared at her, but she shoved that aside. She had nothing to feel guilty about. Other than Oblange, the two practitioners dead in their store, the cultist she'd personally shot, the - that was getting her nowhere.
Considering what they were trying to do, no guilt at all. Maybe 'I should have gotten to them sooner', but 100% not guilt for shooting dragon cultists.
 
Some pretty impressive hardening Derf-boy is putting on his goons. Getting stiched up with a M2 should have splashed him, with a hole you could pass a football through without touching the sides.
Considering what they were trying to do, no guilt at all. Maybe 'I should have gotten to them sooner', but 100% not guilt for shooting dragon cultists.
She definitely knows, intellectually, that if she hadn't shot the guy he'd have ripped her head off. Emotionally is another matter. But don't worry! Now that things are a cage match with open warfare, things can only get better from here!
 
Honestly, thinking about the rise of Deresfedt's army, even before the dragon uprising with all this thamato-neurosurgery and dragon-culting moving from out the university to the university weedman to low-level dealers to infecting the entire structure of the gangs and cartels and shit has to have the old men at the top frantically panicking and trying to pull the plug on everything right?

Like the Los Zetas started out as like the evil A-Team as a paramilitary police gang going rogue when the Mexican government told them to stop with all the war crimes, these are some twisted bastards here, but like most organized crime syndicates the Cartels like to put on a face and play at legitimate authority either through like allegiance to ultraconservative Catholicism, or like the Los Zetas thing of being a quasi-military outfit, etc.., etc.., and in like terms of day-to-day actions are absolutely so much more investing in performative chest-beating and crafting their reputations for terror then in actually enacting hits and murdering people- most especially people that can fight back. Ain't nobody in the actual hierarchy that wants to go fight the American government and try to conquer DC for pointless dragon-brain reasons.

Considering the state of most criminal syndicates and how as institutions most of the "manfully taking a charge and refusing to be a rat" shit is more pushed onto the lieutenants by the bosses than behavior that the bosses themselves actually regularly hold onto, there's probably a whole bunch of shit gathering dust in half a dozen alphabet agencies on how shit is getting crazy that with hindsight should have absolutely sounded the alarm a lot sooner than dragons appearing around DC airspace, 9/11 or Pearl Harbor style.
 
Honestly, thinking about the rise of Deresfedt's army, even before the dragon uprising with all this thamato-neurosurgery and dragon-culting moving from out the university to the university weedman to low-level dealers to infecting the entire structure of the gangs and cartels and shit has to have the old men at the top frantically panicking and trying to pull the plug on everything right?

Like the Los Zetas started out as like the evil A-Team as a paramilitary police gang going rogue when the Mexican government told them to stop with all the war crimes, these are some twisted bastards here, but like most organized crime syndicates the Cartels like to put on a face and play at legitimate authority either through like allegiance to ultraconservative Catholicism, or like the Los Zetas thing of being a quasi-military outfit, etc.., etc.., and in like terms of day-to-day actions are absolutely so much more investing in performative chest-beating and crafting their reputations for terror then in actually enacting hits and murdering people- most especially people that can fight back. Ain't nobody in the actual hierarchy that wants to go fight the American government and try to conquer DC for pointless dragon-brain reasons.

Considering the state of most criminal syndicates and how as institutions most of the "manfully taking a charge and refusing to be a rat" shit is more pushed onto the lieutenants by the bosses than behavior that the bosses themselves actually regularly hold onto, there's probably a whole bunch of shit gathering dust in half a dozen alphabet agencies on how shit is getting crazy that with hindsight should have absolutely sounded the alarm a lot sooner than dragons appearing around DC airspace, 9/11 or Pearl Harbor style.

Some of this is this was a very rapid change. It's not exclusive to Deresfedt's cult. That said, yeah, the feds are definitely going to look at what happened here and figure out how to spot the signs elsewhere. Whether that happens in time to stop anyone else from cutting their own kingdoms out of America is another matter. (It's probably too late for what's happening in the DRC or Colombia, though.)
 
Chapter 8.6
Jess stood squarely, watching Conlon glare at her. She'd hoped he wouldn't be so...adversarial, but she had to live with the situation. So she waited for his response.

Conlon seemed to be in no hurry to make it. He stood there, glaring, as if waiting for her to crack.

Brooks looked from Jess to Conlon and back. "Maybe we could get out of the line of fire?"

Conlon grunted, but stepped back and out of the doorway. "We've got wounded in here," he said.

"On it," Nash said, trotting past Jess and into the building.

Jess followed her, moving out of the doorway and looking around. The place smelled of incense, pungent oils, and lots of people. It was eerily quiet, seemingly swallowing the ragged breathing of the uniformed officer sitting up against the inner wall. A man in a black shirt and pants was kneeling next to him, holding a red-soaked cloth against the patrolman's shoulder. They stood next to an ornate wooden double-door that opened onto a relatively cavernous space, a white-draped altar at the far end.

"I'm on the door," Daniels said, turning to watch the street.

Conlon looked at him and frowned. He looked at Nash and his frown deepened. Then he looked at Brooks. "I remember you," he said. "Took me a bit, with the helmet. But you're the captain's friend, a Federal agent of some kind."

Brooks nodded. "Special Agent Michael Brooks, Office of Special Investigations, United States Air Force. I've worked with your captain on a few cases in the DC area."

"And I've seen those two before, too. Secret Service. Sergeant Dunbar, what have you gotten into?"

Jess jerked a thumb towards the door. "Detective Conlon, I don't know if you noticed, but there's a giant red wall of force separating DC from the rest of the country, and people with claws and sharp teeth are running around attacking the police and the military."

"Agent," Brooks said mildly. "Agent Dunbar, as of this morning."

Conlon sagged against the wall. He covered his face with his hands, and Jess was struck by how tired he looked. "So now she is a Federal agent, then. But sure, Dunbar - mutant armies, monsters, magic - we're under martial law because of the case. Why look for me? It seems to me that nobody thinks of this as a murder investigation anymore."

Jess squared off and looked right at his face. "I do."

He stared at her.

She shrugged. "I don't know how much it matters. I don't know how important the symbolism is. I don't know how much power there is in a symbol versus how much power we give them. But I was told by the man in charge of the defense of Washington DC that my job is to stop Deresfedt. That means pitting spell against spell, and his spell is entrenched and backed with blood and death. I need every symbol I can get to oppose him. The detective assigned to investigate the murder that he started this with - that's a powerful symbol. You are a powerful symbol. If you were face to face with him, would you be able to arrest him? Do you have the evidence to?"

Conlon was staring at her, his mouth opened. As she reached the end, it clamped closed and turned into a scowl. "Dunbar. He murdered someone in front of us. And then ordered a dragon to kill us."

She blinked. "Oh. Right."

"For that matter, I had enough to pull him in once he started talking about his god in front of us, back at that barber shop. The only reason I didn't cuff him then was because that was when Washington broke out." He grimaced. "And the mind control. Speaking of which-"

Brooks cut him off. "Wait, wait. Mind control?"

"It's something Deresfedt can do," Jess said. "I never saw Washington do it, or Akhtot, either. Basically, he tells you what to do and you do it. Did he use it on us at the barber shop?"

Conlon shrugged, angrily. "He told me that I'd want to take care of what I'd hear about on the phone. Granted, even without that, it was Washington murdering his way out of jail so he could kill some more, but."

"So it was subtle that time," Jess said. She looked at Brooks. "It was subtle when we were on the bridge, too, until it wasn't."

Conlon snorted. "'Stand still while I kill you' is about as noticeable as it gets. So, Dunbar, can you block him? Stop him from doing that?"

"Yes," she lied.

His eyes narrowed. Then they flickered from Brooks to Nash, both of whom had lost the tension they'd been building as she and Conlon spoke. "We'll have to talk about that."

"As soon as we can, but not right now," she said honestly. "I will need your help. Are you in?"
 
She shrugged. "I don't know how much it matters. I don't know how important the symbolism is. I don't know how much power there is in a symbol versus how much power we give them. But I was told by the man in charge of the defense of Washington DC that my job is to stop Deresfedt. That means pitting spell against spell, and his spell is entrenched and backed with blood and death. I need every symbol I can get to oppose him. The detective assigned to investigate the murder that he started this with - that's a powerful symbol. You are a powerful symbol. If you were face to face with him, would you be able to arrest him? Do you have the evidence to?"

Conlon was staring at her, his mouth opened. As she reached the end, it clamped closed and turned into a scowl. "Dunbar. He murdered someone in front of us. And then ordered a dragon to kill us."

She blinked. "Oh. Right."

"For that matter, I had enough to pull him in once he started talking about his god in front of us, back at that barber shop. The only reason I didn't cuff him then was because that was when Washington broke out." He grimaced. "And the mind control. Speaking of which-"

I wonder how much legal authority would have held up if the cuffs had gotten on? I mean... thematically cuffs are kind of important - that's the moment the arrest is real.

I do worry that the big dome cutting things off probably weakens this sort of symbol, let alone the new name and the whole cult self modification.
 
I wonder how much legal authority would have held up if the cuffs had gotten on? I mean... thematically cuffs are kind of important - that's the moment the arrest is real.

I do worry that the big dome cutting things off probably weakens this sort of symbol, let alone the new name and the whole cult self modification.
So one of the things that I've kinda decided about how 'strong' or 'weak' a symbol is - aside from whether it plays into a caster's belief - comes into when spells are opposed. A spell with stronger symbols will break a spell with weaker symbols. That's one of the things that I figure might weaken some of the more OP magic uses later in the setting, because it means that when you need to plan for your spell to survive running into other spells, you need more symbols than just a string of words.
 
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