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The Life and Times of Whitley Schnee (A RWBY Adventure AU)

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We've managed to get Adam Taurus to mellow the fuck out (as in not go psychotic obsessed) to the point of breaking away from the White Fang and form a splinter group focused on defending Faunus rather than attacking humans as their main role, so if Blake leaves to attend an Academy she will be a lot less guilt-stricken and afraid than in canon. Heck, she might even choose Sanctum or Haven rather than Beacon in order to stay closer to Adam and his allies rather than trying to keep as much distance as possible from them.

Willow Schnee has managed to overcome the worst of her alcoholism, at least enough to go on a rampage through the White Fang base where her daughter Weiss was being held prisoner. She'll still be battling the bottle for the rest of her life (that's the way alcoholism goes) but this will be a hell of a boost to her confidence, and mean she's much less likely to simply let Jacques run rampant with the SDC, fucking over the chance for real progress on the path to peace between the Faunus and humans.

And Pyrrha managed to reveal Leo Lionheart's treachery, kick his ass and get him arrested by Haven's faculty.

Yep, canon is well and truly fragged.

Magoose said:
The thing about Sanctum is you get tons of social actions, and get more Pyrrha actions…

also possibly get involved in plots of a more… lighter kind.
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Do we get more actions per turn or just more options?
 
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    "Pyrrha, are you really ok?"

    "For the last Oum damned time, YES COLE!" The girl nearly yelled at her odd friend as persisted in his nitpicking of her after Lionhearts betrayal.

    For the past 3 days she had been hounded by rabid reporters, fans, and other maniacs who wanted too meet 'the savior' of Mistral, and the continued perstering had worn down on the red haired girls patience.

    'Cole' winced, causing the Spartan too sigh as she realised she was taking her frustrations out on a concerned friend.

    "I'm sorry Cole" She said, aptly squeezing the stress ball her mother had gotten her too deal with tension her newfound status had given her.

    "Its just so hard being on everyones mind right now, people whispering about you behind your backs, trying too harassment of people asking for interviews or comercials, or just a loony fan breaking down her door too get her autugraph.

    Suffice too say, that last one required the polices aid too deal with.

    "You just don't understand what its like too have people on your back like that." Pyrrha lay down, as Cole himself sighed.

    "As a matter of fact... I do" He said, before something blue appeared in her hand


    "Is that..." The year old gasped as her month long friend solemnly nodded

    "A semblance glyph."

    "But that could only mean... Cole, YOUR A SCHN-MPPPHHH!" Pyrrha's realisation was cut off as Cole quitely covered her mouth

    "Not so loud" He whispered, the Glyph disappearing as he gently removed his hand. "And yes, its exactly what you think it is"

    "But, how would- Actually, it all made sense now.

    Reports had flown around about 'Whitley Schnee' having gone missing, and that the one on the news was a Body double impersonated for the White Fang.

    "Your name isn't really Cole crystal, is it?"

    "No, its Whitley Schnee" He said as he looked conflicted "I figured you may understand the issue of Fame and stresswith how my name still pops up on the news, added with 'Daddy Dearest' planning my life out since I was born... "

    "I.. I won't tell anyone" She promised, Spartans honour.

    "Good, I'm glad I have a friend like you Pyrrha"

    "As do I... Whitley"




    (Yeah... thats their ship name now)

    (I'm not sorry :) )
     
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    "Pyrrha, are you really ok?"

    "For the last Oum damned time, YES COLE!" The girl nearly yelled at her odd friend as persisted in his accusation of her after Lionhearts betrayal.
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    Whitley isn't accusing Pyrrha of anything, the impression I've got is that she's snapping at him because he's asking her so many times. Maybe 'interrogation' instead of 'accusation'? Also, it should be 'as he persisted' rather than 'as persisted'.


    radioxaxa said:
    "Its just so hard being on everyones mind right now, people whispering about you behind their backs, trying too harassment of people asking for interviews or comercials, or just a loony fan breaking down her door too get her autugraph.

    Suffice too say, that last one required the polices aid too deal with.
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    They're whispering about Pyrrha when she's not there to defend herself, so it should be 'behind your back' rather than 'behind their backs'. Also the last line emphasises Pyrrha's nice nature as well as a cause of her frustration - if Pyrrha can kick the ass of an Academy headmaster she's more than capable of throwing an obsessed fan out the front door (even without opening it if she's really angry) but she prefers to let the police do their job.

    @Magoose Where is Pyrrha living at the moment - at Sanctum or at her parents' house? Because if an obsessed fan broke into her folks' place it's even more reason for her to be stressing out.

    radioxaxa said:
    "You just don't understand what its like too have people on your back like that." Pyrrha lay down, as Cole ALSO sighed

    "As a matter of fact... I do" He said, before something blue appeared in her hand
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    If the glyph is appearing in Whitley's hand rather than Pyrrha's, it should be 'his hand' rather than 'her hand'.


    radioxaxa said:
    "Is that..." The year old gasped as her month long friend solemnly nodded

    "A semblance glyph."
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    It should say 'the fifteen year old' to specify her age - 'year old' implies she's only one year old, which is one hell of a prodigy ;)


    radioxaxa said:
    (I'm not sorry :) )
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    Don't be sorry in the least :) It was a sweet omake, hit me right in the friendship feels.


    Also, I don't want to come across as a nit-picker or a writing snob but a lot of the omakes have basic spelling mistakes, punctuation mistakes (missing apostrophes etc), missing words - really basic writing mistakes. I'd really suggest people give their writing a look over before they submit it. Heck, I'll volunteer to beta-read any omake anyone wants to submit - just let me know and I'll double-check or supply feedback for anyone's writing.
     
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    @Magoose Where is Pyrrha living at the moment - at Sanctum or at her parents' house? Because if an obsessed fan broke into her folks' place it's even more reason for her to be stressing out.
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    Pyrrha lives more at the Sanctum Dorms now, instead of her parents, because her parents haven't installed more security in their house so she can feel safe.

    They are working on that.
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    You think that your luck is turning through fortunes beyond you. That goes without saying, but you are very much due for something good to happen to you after your disastrous… well at least in your eyes, adventure to rescue your sister.

    Mother was in the news again, but she was… well not making a fool of herself. She was sober, or at least less drunk than she usually was, and was standing tall, confident, and wishing merely for forgiveness for her actions on Menagerie, but she did not think she was out of line for mounting her own rescue of her daughter from terrorists that were known to kill members of the SDC.

    The public ate that up, but you had heard it all before. It was like with Grandfather when she was by his side. She was strong, stoic, and confident. And then she went home and drowned herself in the bottle, in her own shame and guilt.

    Father was nowhere to be found, and you smiled at that news. He deserved to suffer for his actions and to lose money and prestige for ruining the reputation of the Schnee name.

    You had heard whispers that Winter was promoted and she was in Argus, perhaps you can investigate those rumors…

    So much to do.

    So little time.

    (You have 6 Actions)

    []The Winter Storm: Winter is now commanding the Argus Garrison… You might as well give her a visit.

    []The Burden: Pyrrha has been rather distant like she is under pressure and stress. You know the feeling all too well. You can help her… or at least be someone who can help her.

    []Sounds of Sloths: You heard Grandfathers call out in the outskirts of town… who the hell would make such a sound?

    []The New Fangs: You looked at Adam with a smirk on your face. "Pardon the confusion, but I remember you got me noodles?"

    []Shopping Spree: You have money... Now is the perfect time to spend it. (Starts a Shopping Turn)

    []Hire Some Help: You need to get some employees, people who can help you with your ambitions. There are bound to be some people here that are willing to work on the ground floor of something amazing! (Start a Hiring Turn)

    []Making Things Square: You are going to found your own business, and you were going to make cash in a way that will help people. (Start Building a business Turn)

    []The Sanctum Route: You want to… be a huntsman. And maybe you can convince the headmaster in charge of Sanctum to let you in.

    []A Blade and a Wielder: You want to be able to at least use the Blade… So it's time to start Training.

    []Wander: You are going to wander around the city… maybe you'll find something interesting.

    []A Prince in the Making: You are rather unfinished in social education. You need to refresh yourself. Make yourself seem less awkward.

    []The Businessman's Guide for Dummies: You are a skilled businessman and diplomat… but you are not your father. Not Yet.


    []The Spartan's Regime: Pyrrha offered to train you in combat. It is going to be a good idea, having such a skilled Tutor training you.

    []Underground: You need to practice the other… unsavory skills that are needed to survive this world. Time to be good.

    []A True Student: Grandfather was always learning, always studying… always trying to be better. You will continue that tradition.

    []Call Family: They deserve to know you are alive. Or at very least in mother and father's case, deserve to know the Scorn you feel for them. (Line tail who you wish to call)

    []Investigate your Apartment: maybe your mysterious previous person who lived here left something you could use… or something.

    AN: enjoy.

    Plan format please.
     
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    • [X] Plan: The Fresh Prince of Argus
    -[x]The Burden: Pyrrha has been rather distant like she is under pressure and stress. You know the feeling all too well. You can help her… or at least be someone who can help her.
    -[x]Sounds of Sloths: You heard Grandfathers call out in the outskirts of town… who the hell would make such a sound?
    -[x]The New Fangs: You looked at Adam with a smirk on your face. "Pardon the confusion, but I remember you got me noodles?"
    -[x]Making Things Square: You are going to found your own business, and you were going to make cash in a way that will help people. (Start Building a business Turn)
    -[x]The Sanctum Route: You want to… be a huntsman. And maybe you can convince the headmaster in charge of Sanctum to let you in.
    -[x]The Businessman's Guide for Dummies: You are a skilled businessman and diplomat… but you are not your father. Not Yet.
     
    MAGOOSEEEE!

    How could you do this to us!? Why do you have to give us so many good choices when we were waiting try and correct our weaknesses? Curse your greatness!
     
    [] Plan Ice
    -[]The Spartan's Regime: Pyrrha offered to train you in combat. It is going to be a good idea, having such a skilled Tutor training you.
    -[]The Burden: Pyrrha has been rather distant like she is under pressure and stress. You know the feeling all too well. You can help her… or at least be someone who can help her.
    -[]A Prince in the Making: You are rather unfinished in social education. You need to refresh yourself. Make yourself seem less awkward.
    -[]Underground: You need to practice the other… unsavory skills that are needed to survive this world. Time to be good.
    -[]The Sanctum Route: You want to… be a huntsman. And maybe you can convince the headmaster in charge of Sanctum to let you in.
    -[]The New Fangs: You looked at Adam with a smirk on your face. "Pardon the confusion, but I remember you got me noodles?"
     
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    [X] Plan: The Fresh Prince of Argus

    Well, this has most of what I wanted to do, so...
     
    Ok, lets take advantage of our crazy bonuses to the maximun extent...
    [X] Plan: Using The Omake Madness
    -[X]The Winter Storm: Winter is now commanding the Argus Garrison… You might as well give her a visit.
    -[X]The Burden: Pyrrha has been rather distant like she is under pressure and stress. You know the feeling all too well. You can help her… or at least be someone who can help her.
    -[X]Sounds of Sloths: You heard Grandfathers call out in the outskirts of town… who the hell would make such a sound?
    -[X]Investigate your Apartment: maybe your mysterious previous person who lived here left something you could use… or something.
    -[X]Wander: You are going to wander around the city… maybe you'll find something interesting.
    -[X]The Sanctum Route: You want to… be a huntsman. And maybe you can convince the headmaster in charge of Sanctum to let you in.
     
    Magoose said:
    ... Good things...
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    Well, now I want to take both actions.

    [X] Plan Frost
    -[X]The Spartan's Regime: Pyrrha offered to train you in combat. It is going to be a good idea, having such a skilled Tutor training you.
    -[X]The Burden: Pyrrha has been rather distant like she is under pressure and stress. You know the feeling all too well. You can help her… or at least be someone who can help her.
    -[X]A Prince in the Making: You are rather unfinished in social education. You need to refresh yourself. Make yourself seem less awkward.
    -[X]Sounds of Sloths: You heard Grandfathers call out in the outskirts of town… who the hell would make such a sound?
    -[X]The Sanctum Route: You want to… be a huntsman. And maybe you can convince the headmaster in charge of Sanctum to let you in.
    -[X]The New Fangs: You looked at Adam with a smirk on your face. "Pardon the confusion, but I remember you got me noodles?"
     
    [X] Plan Frost

    While I wanted to make improvements to skills initially, if we are going to go to sanctum we might as well just wait till the next turn and do a training montage with the sanctum bonus. We got a lot of good options this time, and I'd like to capitolize on the guaranteed success to get some tangible rewards in allies and completinf the more vague options to good effect.
     
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