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The world froze, a simple screen floating in front of the newborn child. The baby, eyes unfocused, never noticed it. He wailed and wailed, confused and cold, seemingly abandoned in this strange frozen world.

Time passed, and yet it never seemed to change. Akira grew tired of screening, his fresh throat soar and swollen. The baby quieted, though only because it was tired. He slept.

The baby, still surrounded by the still images of his parents, though he could not yet see, wailed again. His stubby arms flailed, tiny legs kicked. His right hand passed through the screen, selecting the N option.

Time resumed.

Akira... didn't.
 
The world froze, a simple screen floating in front of the newborn child. The baby, eyes unfocused, never noticed it. He wailed and wailed, confused and cold, seemingly abandoned in this strange frozen world.

Time passed, and yet it never seemed to change. Akira grew tired of screening, his fresh throat soar and swollen. The baby quieted, though only because it was tired. He slept.

The baby, still surrounded by the still images of his parents, though he could not yet see, wailed again. His stubby arms flailed, tiny legs kicked. His right hand passed through the screen, selecting the N option.

Time resumed.

Akira... didn't.
By Ample Accelerate
For making an omake and creeping me out.
Here's your choice of reward.
[] Mystery Box
[] Something else?
-[] Write-in (nothing op)
 
Deathvon said:
Gamer's Body: [Maxed] Grants a body that allows for the user to live the real world like a game. (He receives no physical damage from attacks only pain for a few seconds). After sleep in a bed he restores HP, MP and all status effects.
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You know, I've always hated this ability. Most of it can be passed off as a bloodline. But no actual physical damage? I just flat out hate it. Breaks some immersion for when you definitely should have a stab wound or broken bones. And nosells most poisons.
 
That's the entire point, honestly. Game characters are meant to break immersion. It's a point of 'wtf' for people in the story, and can act as a plot point for the mc to try to be human despite this.
 
Deathvon said:
Alright we have a tie between beginning of third's reign and early next vote decides.
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Beginning, early, I myself when I made the option was pretty much the same thing, just worded differently. So if you want, you can count my vote as the other, considering I thought it to be the same thing.
 
DarkKing98 said:
You know, I've always hated this ability. Most of it can be passed off as a bloodline. But no actual physical damage? I just flat out hate it. Breaks some immersion for when you definitely should have a stab wound or broken bones. And nosells most poisons.
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Something to recall, are debuffs. If something happens to us that would explicitly break our legs, we might get the status effect "Broken Legs". Poison almost definitely causes status effects.

Gamers Body is honestly a bit of mixed blessing. It has its upsides (odds are not everything cause status effects) and its downsides (we could die from someone stepping on our toe hard enough).
 
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    • You see a wall of rock and stone with two people's faces on them. "Akira I see you found the Hokage Rock, it's the one of Koonoha's most famous landmark. It's also honors all present and past Hokages." said Dad. "Now let's get in the waiting room while the doctors fix up momma." said Dad as he holding you went to the waiting room. After a little while a nurse came to dad with a paper on a clipboard.
    "Please sign here Mr." said the nurse.

    (Fill out your and daddy's data.)
    Akira-
    Family Name:
    [] Write-In
    Apperance(this will come in affect later in the story)
    [] Write-In
    ..........................
    (Daddy's) Name:
    [] Write-In
    Apperance
    [] Write-In
    Rank:
    [] Chunin (Pro: More time with Cons: Terrrible training(besides basics) and Less connections)
    [] Special Jonin (Neutral Option)
    [] Jonin (Pros: Better Training and More connections Con: Less time with)
     
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    • [X] Senju
    [X] Fat and round like a Akimichi
    [X] Tobi Senju
    [X] Looks like Obito
    [X] Jonin (Pros: Better Training and More connections Con: Less time with)
     
    [X] Araki
    [] Appearance (No opinion at this time).

    [] Father's Name (No opinion at this time).
    [] Father's Appearance (No opinion at this time).
    [X] Special Jonin

    I'd prefer to not be of a cannon clan, that seems a bit to easy in my opinion and a surname being an anagram of our character name sounds pretty good to me.

    Father as a Special Jonin because they are rather interesting, being great specialists without having to be good at everything like a classic Jonin. Also if our father and our mother are proper Jonin we can't really surpass them, at Special Jonin we can pass them without having to become a kage.
     
    [X] Uzumaki
    [X] Spikey pure white hair, tipped in crimson. You have unmistakeable purple eyes, and an eye-catching red dot above each eyebrow. Your skin is just a shade darker than pale, and you have a streamlined body built for combat.

    [X] Kaguya Kirito
    [X] Long, bone-white hair to his mid-back. One Teal eye, the other lost in action and covered in a white eyepatch crafted with his own bone and decorated with seals. Like his son, he too has red markings above his eyebrows.
    [X] Special Jonin


    Meh. There's my attempt. We could be an Uzumaki-Kaguya hybrid. ALL the yang chakra, accelerated healing and strong bodies for us. Also the idea of covering our skeleton in seals and blablabla.

    I also wouldn't be opposed to switching the Uzumaki with Senju.
     
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    Plan Senju
    [] Senju
    []
    [] Tobi Senju
    [] Looks like Madara except with Hashirama's smile (you know what I mean, that part of Hashirama's face that constantly somehow remains happy and hopeful even when he shouldnt be)
    [] Special Jonin

    Funeral Pyre said:
    Meh. There's my attempt. We could be an Uzumaki-Kaguya hybrid. ALL the yang chakra, accelerated healing and strong bodies for us. Also the idea of covering our skeleton in seals and blablabla.
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    I like my plan...but yours just tugs at my love for OP-ness

    .... Decisions, decisions....

    [X] Uzumaki
    [X]
    Except with purple eyes. Your skin is just a shade darker than pale, and you have a streamlined body built for combat.

    [X] Kaguya Kirito
    [X] Long, bone-white hair to his mid-back. One Teal eye, the other lost in action and covered in a white eyepatch crafted with his own bone and decorated with seals.
    [X] Special Jonin
     
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    [X] Uzumaki
    [X] Spikey pure white hair, tipped in crimson. You have unmistakeable purple eyes, and an eye-catching red dot above each eyebrow. Your skin is just a shade darker than pale, and you have a streamlined body built for combat.

    [X] Kaguya Kirito
    [X] Long, bone-white hair to his mid-back. One Teal eye, the other lost in action and covered in a white eyepatch crafted with his own bone and decorated with seals. Like his son, he too has red markings above his eyebrows.
    [X] Special Jonin
     
    [X] Uzumaki
    [X] Spikey pure white hair, tipped in crimson. You have unmistakeable purple eyes, and an eye-catching red dot above each eyebrow. Your skin is just a shade darker than pale, and you have a streamlined body built for combat.

    [X] Kaguya Kirito
    [X] Long, bone-white hair to his mid-back. One Teal eye, the other lost in action and covered in a white eyepatch crafted with his own bone and decorated with seals. Like his son, he too has red markings above his eyebrows.
    [X] Special Jonin
     
    Personally, I feel the obligation to be somewhat original here. And try to convince people to not go for seals. Fun as the idea may be, it's horribly overdone and not at all interesting.
     
    [X] Uzumaki
    [X]
    Except with purple eyes. Your skin is just a shade darker than pale, and you have a streamlined body built for combat.

    [X] Kaguya Kirito
    [X] Long, bone-white hair to his mid-back. One Teal eye, the other lost in action and covered in a white eyepatch crafted with his own bone and decorated with seals.
    [X] Special Jonin

    Is the best so far
     
    [X] Hyūga
    [X] Neck length brown hair and Hyüga signature pale white eyes. White skin and a lithe, lean body for a newborn.

    [X] Hayato Hyūga
    [X] Brown hair down to the middle of his back, put in a pony tail. Leaf headband over his caged bird seal. Lithe, strong body. Frown marks around his lips and a perpetual stern looking face.
    [X] Special Jounin
     
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    Ample Accelerate said:
    Why do you want such edgy looking hair? It's literally have to be dyed if it's colored at the top.
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    DarkKing98 said:
    Personally, I feel the obligation to be somewhat original here. And try to convince people to not go for seals. Fun as the idea may be, it's horribly overdone and not at all interesting.
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    Personally, I went for the red/white hair to further denote that the MC is part Kaguya, and part Uzumaki. If you don't feel like going for seals I wouldn't be adverse to switching my vote to be Senju/Kaguya, and just go straight white hair but red markings both like Kimimaro and Tobirama.

    Edit: I've also always had an idea for a Senju/Kaguya that had a mutated bloodline with the Dead Bone Pulse and Mokuton, where the wood created from Mokuton looks more like Birch bark, and is more dense/strong and prone to sharpened points.
     
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    [X] Hyūga
    [X] Neck length brown hair and Hyüga signature pale white eyes. White skin and a lithe, lean body for a newborn.

    [X] Hayato Hyūga
    [X] Brown hair down to the middle of his back, put in a pony tail. Leaf headband over his caged bird seal. Lithe, strong body. Frown marks around his lips and a perpetual stern looking face.
    [X] Special Jounin

    It's Hyūga, not Hyüga.
     
    NúmenoreanNazgûl said:
    [X] Hyūga
    [X] Neck length brown hair and Hyüga signature pale white eyes. White skin and a lithe, lean body for a newborn.

    [X] Hayato Hyūga
    [X] Brown hair down to the middle of his back, put in a pony tail. Leaf headband over his caged bird seal. Lithe, strong body. Frown marks around his lips and a perpetual stern looking face.
    [X] Special Jounin

    It's Hyūga, not Hyüga.
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    Thank you for the correction.

    Funeral Pyre said:
    Personally, I went for the red/white hair to further denote that the MC is part Kaguya, and part Uzumaki. If you don't feel like going for seals I wouldn't be adverse to switching my vote to be Senju/Kaguya, and just go straight white hair but red markings both like Kimimaro and Tobirama
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    Kaguya/Senju would be an interesting combo, but at the same time, I'm curious on how we can handle the whole 'being part of the Hyūga branch family' thing. The idea has never been shown to me before so I'm, unfortunately, invested in that.
    Adhoc vote count started by DarkKing98 on Jan 7, 2018 at 7:30 PM, finished with 50 posts and 9 votes.
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    Adhoc vote count started by DarkKing98 on Jan 7, 2018 at 7:31 PM, finished with 50 posts and 9 votes.
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