The Doormat Villainess - Adrianne (Otome Villainess)

You had the MC explain the flag, we saw the Flag not happen, then we saw how the flag happened in the game, is a bit redundant.

Also is a plothole as the MC is not a former player who played the same game a lot of times. She is formed maid who saw someone else play the game. Was her life so boring he had nothing better to do that watch someone else play the same game so many times as to memorize it?
 
Also is a plothole as the MC is not a former player who played the same game a lot of times. She is formed maid who saw someone else play the game. Was her life so boring he had nothing better to do that watch someone else play the same game so many times as to memorize it?
Have you seen those anime maids? Sometimes you'd wonder if they're being paid to stand and being pretty.

Now joke aside.

Agree that there is probably a limit to the whole ordeal, and the previous chapter actually mentioned how easy it is for humans to forget or misremembering things to the point that Adrianne has to start writing physical notes.

That never happened with most otome reincarnation I read before, such as Reika-sama, observation of villainess, and a few more. Now granted it's still fall short of 40+ big name villainess insert (including Bakarina).

If anyone can enlighten me, please do so.
 
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You had the MC explain the flag, we saw the Flag not happen, then we saw how the flag happened in the game, is a bit redundant.
The redundancy was deliberate to highlight what the original Adrianne actually did, but if it comes of as awkwardly framed, it would be my poor writing at work.
Was her life so boring he had nothing better to do that watch someone else play the same game so many times as to memorize it?


I can assure you no, that's not a plot hole. And Adrianne does not remember all the flags, just some of the more important ones, including parts of Theodore's route in the game.
 
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Also is a plothole as the MC is not a former player who played the same game a lot of times. She is formed maid who saw someone else play the game. Was her life so boring he had nothing better to do that watch someone else play the same game so many times as to memorize it?

Had to watch 64 Zoo Lane and Max and Ruby with two generations of little siblings, I still remember highlights from both. Maybe the maid was a kind, personable person that took an interest in her charge's interests?
 
Had to watch 64 Zoo Lane and Max and Ruby with two generations of little siblings, I still remember highlights from both. Maybe the maid was a kind, personable person that took an interest in her charge's interests?

Is one thing to remember highlights, another to remember things word by word. You need a LOT of time to remember that in a multiple choice game. Granted the first few flags may happen in every route but that still.implies the maid watched the girl play the game like for thirty hours and not in a row but several hours each day.

That never happened with most otome reincarnation I read before,

Actually I read a few were it does happen. Like one is were the big brother of a girl becomes the villaness so he doesn't know the game well, another were someone got sucked into the game the first time she played it so she has no clue of the plot and another were the character ends in a really fluffy game were nothing goes wrong but not only she never played it, she had such a traumatic life before the game that she believes that if she angers anyone she will get killed.

The redundancy was deliberate to highlight what the original Adrianne actually did, but if it comes of as awkwardly framed, it would be my poor writing at work.

Repeating things in a story works for a oral story or if is something that was mentioned long ago, in a written story watching the same thing being said three times in a row definitely comes as a space filler..The first two times is aceptable, the MC remembering the route word by word and explaining it AGAIN looks like you think your readers are morons.

Yes a lot of LN do this but that's because they are paid by word and or have to get out chapters every day.

That's why the things are usually so samey, they copy each other to fill space.
 
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Repeating things in a story works for a oral story or if is something that was mentioned long ago, in a written story watching the same thing being said three times in a row definitely comes as a space filler..The first two times is aceptable, the MC remembering the route word by word and explaining it AGAIN looks like you think your readers are morons.
Well, someone told me I do too much tell and no show so... yeah, that ain't happening again.:(
That's why the things are usually so samey, they copy each other to fill space.
I assure you I copy no one (literally at least) and that's not my intention. In fact I thought it was good enough that I kicked the fight scene to keep the chapter short.
 
Getting here early enough to see the difference, your edits do make a positive impact. I'd say it's worth it.
The last update was posted while I was asleep last night. Then, I had to get up and go to work. It's taken me until now to proofread the latest chapter and send it back to ZeroXSEED. I hope that the changes I have suggested are an improvement.

Zero's raws have some tense consistency troubles but the work remains enjoyable.
Sometimes, I suggest alternate words or phrases when I think something doesn't make sense. For instance, Garnet's "lack of emotional drive". I would normally take that to mean that she is coldly rational and unemotional, but it is clear from a cursory glance at her behaviour and actions that that's not the case. I changed it to "lacking self-control", which I think makes more sense in context.

Also, I have repeatedly changed any mention of one character having "beef" with another: using the word "beef" in this manner is very colloquiol and very American*, so I think it's unlikely that the refined young noblemen and women of this fantasy world would have it as part of their vocabulary.
*That's not to say that there aren't British people who occasionally use it in a similar way, but that's because we've all grown up watching American television.

Mind you, there's no real reason why someone from another world wouldn't speak with an American accent and dialect, if they could speak English at all, but people have grown accustomed to the genre convention that the aristocracy of fantasy worlds all speak with cut-glass 'received pronunciation' upper-class British English accents. (But please let me know if you'd prefer for your nobles to speak like American teenagers from now on, ZeroXSEED.)
 
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Garnet's "lack of emotional drive".
I'm pretty sure that refers to how many otome heroine have a very flat emotional state, because getting too passionate or too cold makes them difficult to follow and relate.

The chapter already remarked how in game Garnet didn't get overtly mad about her unofficial mentor being insulted. Story Garnet though, she was absolutely pissed.

Very much like their counterpart in harem LNs. The bitter cold (i.e early Hachiman in Oregairu) or loudly passionate protagonist (i.e Issei in DxD) end up standing out more than the average.
 
I'm pretty sure that refers to how many otome heroine have a very flat emotional state, because getting too passionate or too cold makes them difficult to follow and relate.
Hmm.

Well, that's not how I interpreted it. I'm sure you're correct, but I thought it was strange that ZeroXSEED mentioned Garnet's "lack of emotional drive" immediately after he said how "bold" she was and in the middle of a paragraph explaining why she doesn't really fit into the Kingdom's feudal society. If anything, I'd expect the fact that "Garnet didn't get overly mad about her unofficial mentor being insulted" to help her to fit in: if she's hard to offend, that should keep her from getting in too many arguments or fights with her fellow students, right?

Also, when she appeared in previous chapters, I thought Garnet seemed like quite a passionate individual.

She was much too innocent, bold, and lacking self-control.
So... possibly "lacking self-control" should be changed to "lacking social graces" or "lacking any understanding of proper etiquette". What do you think?
 
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Well, that's not how I interpreted it. I'm sure you're correct, but I thought it was strange that @ZeroXSEED mentioned Garnet's "lack of emotional drive" immediately after he said how "bold" she was and in the middle of a paragraph explaining why she doesn't really fit into the Kingdom's feudal society. If anything, I'd expect the fact that "Garnet didn't get overly mad about her unofficial mentor being insulted" to help her to fit in: if she's hard to offend, that should keep her from getting in too many arguments or fights with her fellow students, right?

Also, when she appeared in previous chapters, I thought Garnet seemed like quite a passionate individual.
Tri is not wrong, but this bears more explanation: in game Garnet is both unusually calm and at the same time bold and indiscriminate when socializing with others, which kind of necessary when you're the one actively pursuing some high class stud as opposed to earning their collective attention passively by being herself (which often happens a LOT in Shoujo harem, or as people commonly call a reverse harem story).

The 'innocent' in her character description also refer to how she always try to look the goodness in people, and yes that includes the absolutely bitch unit that is game Adrianne.

While in-game people only concerned with her breaching social decorum by treating everyone as equal, Adrianne remarked how game Garnet's personality and carefree attitude doesn't really fit real people mold. Game Garnet is very much a likeable but completely flat character, exist to narrate the story and for the players to project themselves into as they explore the surprisingly complicated worldbuilding as well as pursuing four or five handsome guys and romance them.

TLDR: In game Garnet is a saint(ess), basically. And yes, the religious imagery is actually there, which will be expanded later in this story.

Story Garnet is different but Adrianne doesn't know that until this chapter rolls in, that's why she was a bit taken by Garnet insulting people and showing anger outwardly toward nobles who slighted her, while showing great respect for Adrianne. It was a minor idiot ball, but with how paranoid Adrianne can be, it's not entirely unfounded one.

TLDR2
Game Garnet: Approach people indiscriminately, always calm and never too angry, always thinking positively even toward her enemies.
Story Garnet: Know courtesy, very emotional and spirited person, exceedingly positive toward people she loves but also more than capable of hate.

Both Garnets are determined people, and both of them are proud bastards and squire rejects*, but game Garnet is an unbreakable wall while story Garnet is an undying flame.

* For medieval standard, that's basically double fucked. Garnet was lucky that this Medieval fantasy world is gender-egalitarian, at least. So no one shit on her for being a female.
 
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Hmm. Well, obviously, it's your story, so you should feel free to disregard any of my suggestions that don't fit your overarching vision. Still, the "lack of emotional drive" section was the only part I felt really unsure about, which is why I mentioned it in my above post
 
Hmm. Well, obviously, it's your story, so you should feel free to disregard any of my suggestions that don't fit your overarching vision. Still, the "lack of emotional drive" section was the only part I felt really unsure about, which is why I mentioned it in my above post
Yeah, that's just my lackluster vocabulary at work. Not even sure the best term to replace that, other than flat affect (which is a medical condition lol).
 
Given that strength augmentations reach far enough for a human to dust a door unassisted, the stick may as well be a small object piercing people at high speed. Messy.
The good news is, everyone's wearing armor of the same general type that in the Early Modern era got bulked up to the point where it could stop bullets... subject only to the limits of what a person could move in.

Then this setting invented some kind of clockpunk power-armor arrangement to thicken the armor further from there. So the protection may well be good enough that Garnet's whumping-stick isn't quite as car-accident deadly as it might otherwise be. Still not something to cross lightly, though.

(This chapter mentioned Sakura trees and school beginning in Spring)
A bit of an old comment, but... to be fair, we can justify the school thing, anachronistic or not.

Consider. Guns have been invented and presumably artillery exists. Nobles live in manors, not castles, because no one's kidding themselves that a castle will protect them from the royal army and importantly the royal artillery train. Academies and universities are starting to proliferate- and this is a royal military academy, obviously.

Classism is very much in play, so there's a tacit assumption that no one at the school needs to work for a living. If they did, then the school terms would probably be timed around the rhythms of the nation's agricultural life.

Instead, it's timed around ease of travel. Snow on the roads makes it damned inconvenient to travel, and it's entirely possible that all this clockpunk power armor has performance issues in the cold. Neither a good season to train, nor a good season for the kids to be traveling to and from school. So you start school after the spring thaw, and get them home from the boarding school before snow sets in too heavily in the autumn.
 
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so in chapter three, it says that prince theodore is being set up to inherit a dukedom from adrianne's *younger* brother? unless im missing something i feel like this is a typo. also adrianne reads as a boy's name to me (adrian) but that's inline with this world being made up by japanese people. also it's arms, not coat of arms, coat of arms is what laypeople who arent heraldry nerds call it, but technically speaking, a coat of arms is the full heraldic achievement (shield with motto, helm, tassles n stuff) whereas arms are the pattern on the shield. coat of arms used to be a surcoat with the arms displayed on it, but semantic shift went brrr.
 
so in chapter three, it says that prince theodore is being set up to inherit a dukedom from adrianne's *younger* brother? unless im missing something i feel like this is a typo. also adrianne reads as a boy's name to me (adrian) but that's inline with this world being made up by japanese people. also it's arms, not coat of arms, coat of arms is what laypeople who arent heraldry nerds call it, but technically speaking, a coat of arms is the full heraldic achievement (shield with motto, helm, tassles n stuff) whereas arms are the pattern on the shield. coat of arms used to be a surcoat with the arms displayed on it, but semantic shift went brrr.
Younger brother of their mentor
Their mentor Sir Aggravain was a former duke
The current duke is Lord Gareth, his little brother
Zero probably should check again though because his wordings can be weird to native speakers

Anyway Adrianne is a very much a girls name though I wonder if the tomboyish image is deliberate.
www.behindthename.com

Meaning, origin and history of the name Adrianne

The meaning, origin and history of the given name Adrianne
 
and it's entirely possible that all this clockpunk power armor has performance issues in the cold.
It does, because it's partly electric (basically) with all the shenanigans. Yes they also perform worse in the hottest summer. They're also not NBC proof but can't ask too much out of vaguely 16th century civilization.
also it's arms, not coat of arms, coat of arms is what laypeople who arent heraldry nerds call it, but technically speaking, a coat of arms is the full heraldic achievement (shield with motto, helm, tassles n stuff) whereas arms are the pattern on the shield. coat of arms used to be a surcoat with the arms displayed on it, but semantic shift went brrr.
Sorry bruh, I'm just following Puttock (1985) and Friar (1987) on the definition. Coat of Arms is Coat of Arms, not necessarily the full regalia.

With that said I'm working hard to balance full frontal nerdity and with understanding that many casual readers might just lost it, that's why I use ahistorical term like war banner as opposed to "medieval standard". I think I should also add some explanation on heraldry, come to think of it...

so in chapter three, it says that prince theodore is being set up to inherit a dukedom from adrianne's *younger* brother? unless im missing something i feel like this is a typo.
Zero probably should check again though because his wordings can be weird to native speakers
Hmm?
the current reigning Duke of Caliburn was the younger brother of Adrianne and Second Prince's old mentor, Lord Gareth.
Yeah, it's a bit wordy and hard to read even if it's technically correct. Sorry about it. But I have no clue how to fix that.
 
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"Speaking of which, the current reigning Duke of Caliburn was the younger brother of Adrianne and Second Prince's old mentor, Lord Gareth. Lord Gareth was very fond of Second Prince, especially after losing his wife and children to a freak disaster."

ok, i understand what happened here now, i read "younger brother of adrianne" and "second prince's old mentor" as seperate points, as if there was a comma between them. that's totally on me and my poor reading comprehension :D.
i think maybe there should be a "the" before second prince? so "adrianne and the second prince's old mentor".
also, it'd be even clearer with a slash instead of an "and" so "adrianne/ the second prince's" but the "the" would be enough.
 
Adding a slash there would not be consistent with standard English grammar. The sentence in question is grammatical as written, though I would recommend

Speaking of which, the current reigning Duke of Caliburn was the younger brother of Lord Gareth, Adrianne and the Second Prince's old mentor."

Moving "Adrienne... mentor" to the end of the sentence as a subordinate clause, instead of inserting it in the middle of the sentence, makes the relationship between the Duke and Lord Gareth clearer, without losing clarity in the effort to communicate Lord Gareth's relationship to Adrienne and the prince.

...

Adding a "the" to "Second Prince" would be correct under standard English grammar, because "Second Prince" is a title, not a name. Strictly speaking, all instances of "Second Prince" used as if it was the boy's name should be preceded by a 'the.'

Examples:

"The Masked Discombobulator had not yet filed the paperwork to have his last name legally changed to 'Discombombulator,' so there was still a 'the' before 'Masked.' "
(this is admittedly recursive)

"The Vice President cast a tie-breaking vote in the Senate."
("Vice President" is not the woman's name, but rather a description of her status, even if it's a very specific one that identifies her very clearly)[/I]
 
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I confess it was actually Grammarly forcing me to, originally the wording was
the current reigning Duke of Caliburn was the younger brother of their old mentor, Lord Gareth.
Grammarly for some reason absolutely despise the word "Their" and always marking these with correction mark which bothers me a lot, so I always try to expand it which end up with unnatural wordy mess.

That happens when you rely on machine fixer.

Actually nevermind. I got a better formatting planned.
Speaking of which, the current reigning Duke of Caliburn, Lord Gareth, was the younger brother of Adrianne and the Second Prince's old mentor, Sir Agravain. Lord Gareth was very fond of the Second Prince, especially after losing his wife and children to a freak disaster.
 
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Chapter 06 - The misunderstood Villainess
Proofread by @Chandagnac

"Sticks?"

"Maces. They're maces."

"No, they're sticks. I mean, they are walking sticks!"

"They have heads: therefore, they are maces."

This hilarious and pedantic conversation took place among the audience, most of which had trained in the art of fighting since their early teens or were at least familiar with most common weapons.

Just like everything else in their possession, someone's weapon tells a lot of things about them. Garnet's unique set of weapons looked really eccentric.

"Practically speaking, they're maces, but – whether it was requested by Garnet or not – the smith went out of their way to make them look like walking sticks," said Reinhard, analyzing them carefully.

"Oh? Do tell." Theodore listened eagerly to what he had to say.

"Garnet's sticks are about seventy-six centimeters long. If we use generic infantry maces as a reference, that means a three centimeter shaft with a two-point-five centimeter hollow core."

"What is this 'centimeter' you speak of?" asked Theodore.

Reinhard realised too late: Ah crap, they don't use Metrics, do they? Ignoring Theodore's bafflement, he continued his explanation. "The knob is of unknown density and weight and roughly one-tenth of the weapon in length. If we assume it's made of iron or steel, the weight of the shaft alone should be just over two and a half pounds."

"That's a surprising amount of heft for something look so thin," Theodore mumbled. "It really is designed for an armor suit, huh?"

To take advantage of the increased size and strength of armor suits, weapons designed for them tended to be slightly longer and heavier than the equivalent weapons of the previous era: the era in which horses and plate armor had reigned supreme. For example, a generic one-handed mace of two and a half pounds would be scaled up to somewhere between three to four pounds. Scaling up by a factor of two, as in doubling the weight, would usually be considered excessive.

"The knob should either be hollow or made of a lighter alloy. If it was made of solid iron or steel, it would be hard for Miss Pucheria to make quick and rapid strikes like that," someone commented from the side. "Still, the knob has a tapered rim, which would concentrate a lot of energy on impact regardless of low mass. I reckon the whole stick would be around three pounds."

Reinhard snorted. "Having the weight of a mace while giving it the reach, speed, and appearance of a walking stick. The smith who forged it was either a gentle person of refined taste or a devious mad bastard."

Everyone came to a conclusion: "So, it's a stick."

Meanwhile, in the arena, Garnet adopted a defensive stance as she faced two opponents. Both were skilled and more than willing to gang up on her.

"Why so quiet, Addie?" Theodore asked the quiet young woman who was sitting beside him all along.

"I'm shocked no one seems to want to talk about the actual fighting," Adrianne scoffed, "but it's not as if I don't get it."

"Oh? Share it."

"There are three schools of thought running now: the first group thinks Lady Denver and Lady Darlington are delivering righteous punishment on Miss Pucheria for her impudence. The second group considers them shameful for ganging on a peasant girl. And the third group either have no opinion or are conflicted."

"But no one here expected her to win, did they? That's why no one is talking about the actual fight," Reinhard guessed. "That's what is bothering you, Milady?"

"You think she could win?" Theo blinked.

Adrianne smirked quietly and another student approached her: a young woman with back-length hazel hair tied near the end. Theo and Reinhard noticed a few streaks and stains on her hands and skin.

Oil. That's machine oil, Reinhard realized.

"It's been prepared, Milady."

"Thank you for the help, Luna." Adrianne stood up. "Would you like to watch from here?"

"I wouldn't dare."

"Suit yourself." Adrianne turned and left in haste.

"You're Luna Linker, right? From engineering class. Your family served the Lysters for generations." Theo laughed. "I don't know where Addie is going, but her seat is free now."

"I'm a bit dirty at the moment, your Highness." Luna bowed apologetically. "Sitting here wouldn't be appropriate."

Reinhard offered her a handkerchief with a friendly smile. Luna blushed hard and her heart almost stopped. Then she remembered this seemingly harmless low noble managed to score with her elder sister...

Dodge!

"Thank you, but I should take my leave," she said quickly.

"Wait, Luna." Theo stopped her for a moment. "I know I shouldn't be prying too hard, but at least give me a clue as to what Adrianne is up to."

"His Highness might not be aware, but Lady Adrianne is a genius engineer." Luna grinned wickedly, almost salivating even.

Before the two young men could inquire any further, the audience stopped murmuring and the entire arena resounded with gasps and cheers. Theodore and Reinhard looked back to the field. They saw Garnet's Starfall practically dancing around the flurry of strikes from Lina and Serena.

Wielding two sticks with no handguard put Garnet at a disadvantage when it came to defense, the same as with anyone wielding a pair of maces, hammers, or axes. In battle, those weapons were usually paired with a shield for a good reason.

That was among the reason why everyone in the audience, including some instructors, were pessimistic about Garnet's odds of winning. Her weapons were flashy but ultimately disadvantaged.

But after Garnet went on the offensive, all bets were off.

Garnet braced her arms to her cuirass to cushion the blow from Lina's halberd strike and then pushed it outward to destabilize Lina's footing.

That was quite a risky move. However, anyone who ever fought polearms with a shorter weapon would understand that if she wanted to win she had to close the distance.

If nothing else, it was a clear display of Garnet's boldness and fighting resolve. She was more than willing to bet everything on a single risky move.

By the time the audience focused, Garnet was already inside Lina's vulnerable zone and smacking her right on the helm with her elbow.

As if that wasn't enough, Garnet also tackled Lina's legs. The combined weight of an armor suit and its wearer could easily reach four hundred and fifty pounds: it fell with a loud thud.

Lina Denver was eliminated from battle!

Garnet twisted her body and then leaped in the direction of Serena, who was frozen in shock. Serena was supposed to cover Lina's weak areas because she was armed with a hammer and a shield. But she hadn't expected Garnet to defeat her partner so quickly.

Garnet's two sticks impacted on the shield with enough energy to shatter a thick wooden door. But it held well thanks to being reinforced by Serena's inner force.

"[You impudent woman]!" Serena roared and swung her hammer toward her, but Garnet dodged with such precision that it was breathtaking to see. Serena's hammer barely glanced on Garnet's chest piece, scratching the paint and nothing more.

...

"She can switch from such a reckless charge to elegant footwork in a second." Reinhard clicked his tongue. "What monster of a mare are we seeing here?"

"Scary," Theodore said it out loud. "This is why you should never overlook a scholarship student. Lady Denver might never recover from this humiliation."

Scholarship students were accepted to set an example for other, more fortunate students, demonstrating that their wealth would mean nothing if they didn't train and study seriously. Knights weren't born instantaneously into existence: they were created through the arduous, fourteen-years-long tutelage of their mentors. Garnet might not have been acknowledged by her master. But she had gone through same experience as other knights, and she took those harsh but rewarding lessons seriously.

This one-sided beatdown didn't mean she excelled beyond all of her classmates, merely that Lina Denver was a poor example of an aspiring knight.

Serena knew what not to learn from her fallen partner, so she paid more attention to her guard.

"[Behourd isn't a life and death battle. If you fall, you lose]." Garnet twirled her sticks and put them back in the belt behind her armor suit.

"What's she's doing?"

Serena didn't waste any time and attacked Garnet while putting her shield at a correct angle to avoid a possible hidden countermove. What she didn't expect was for Garnet to keep dodging until she couldn't and get hammered on the chest and thrown backward.

"[Serves you right]!"

"No, wait." Theodore's eyes widened.

Garnet used the energy from the hammer to travel backward to where Lina's armor suit was and pick up her halberd.

"[Oh no]!"

Garnet charged again, halberd in hand. With her newfound range advantage, she kept striking and smashing at Serena without mercy.

She kept attacking until the reinforced wooden shield broke apart from the accumulated blunt force. Garnet lunged toward Serena and threw her to the ground with a straight thrust.

Avan, still in his Starfall Crusader, stepped forward and announced, "[The winner of this duel of honor is Miss Garnet Pucheria]!"

"[God bless me with this victory]!" Garnet raised the halberd in her hand high and then threw it to the ground, point first. The halberd got stuck in, its head buried. "[If you two have anything to say, it better be an apology to Dame Alcott]."

Lina and Serena both stood up and supported each other, clearly at a loss for words. Garnet had trashed them so hard that they had no face to show anymore. But they were still too prideful to apologize for their behavior and words.

So they decided to leave in a hurry.

"[Interesting show of chivalry, Garnet]." a familiar voice rang from the dark entrance to the arena. "[I see you put that old machine to good use. However, I would like to put my Regal Wasp to the test, I sincerely hope you didn't mind helping]."

A knight armor suit walked in with quiet steps, belying its weight. The relatively minor whine of its movements signified that its joints had been adjusted to perfect precision and fit. Some people recognized the frame as having been based on the famous Royal Blade of the Marchioness of Lustre. However, it lacked the mirror polish and gilding the original had. It was painted dark yellow, for the most part, but with black stripes around it. Its chest bore the heraldry of the Lyster family: the picture of a queen bee with red, blue, green, and white flowers around it.

"[Of course, Lady Adrianne]," Garnet replied. "[But I don't want to overstep my bounds, so you should ask the referee about it]."

Avan, of course, knew that it was his little sister the moment it stepped out. Still, he was a little taken aback by Adrianne's surprising politeness. She had changed over the last three years, and he was happy about it.

"[I'll ask the teachers shortly]."

Avan approached the Headmaster, who had been watching from the side closely with his old Chevalier. They didn't exchange many words and the Headmaster simply replied with a nod. So, Avan went back and announced, "[This will be a friendly demonstration battle, but we're using the same rules as before]."

Theodore just laughed. Even though she seemed to have calmed down to the point of melancholy, good old Adrianne couldn't miss a competition when she saw one. She probably went ahead and prepared her machine with Luna's help to challenge Garnet right away.

"Figures she will be itching to fight." Theodore shook his head. "Never change, Adrianne."

"Today is such a feast for sore eyes!" Reinhard commented. "The two most outstanding female students among the freshmen fight right on the first day of orientation. What a legend!"

CHAPTER 06 - THE MISUNDERSTOOD VILLAINESS

Indeed, inside her armor suit, Adrianne was breathing hard and drooling. This was well outside the game scenario, but Adrianne had given it deep thought long before the entrance ceremony began.

This was her contingency plan if the second event flag still happened even though the first one got altered. In the second event flag and the subsequent battle afterward, it was impossible for players to win the fighting minigame and come out unscathed. It was only possible for Garnet to win that duel without cost if the player was cheating or it was a new game plus. New game plus meant that the player had finished the game at least once and was replaying it with some additional perks at the start.

But real life wasn't a game. If it really was a new game plus, then Garnet could be an actual reincarnation that had gone back in time, rather than someone from a different world. If that was indeed the case, Garnet would be far, far more skilled.

Adrianne was so paranoid that she had accounted for this very scenario, based on Kuro's shallow recollection of the game and her own honed knowledge of this world. Nothing was impossible. After all, Reinhard was also a reincarnation of someone from Modern Earth.

No one truly understood heaven's way. Adrianne could only make educated guesses about what was going to happen.

No, it totally wasn't because Adrianne wanted to personally fight Garnet to satisfy her lust for battle!

Okay, maybe just a little...

Adrianne's purpose here was to gauge just how powerful Garnet was at the moment. If Garnet turned out to be strong enough to beat Adrianne, it would be a real surprise. And everything Adrianne planned would be for nothing, though she probably would be less worried overall.

So Adrianne pulled a pair of cleavers from the back of her armor suit. Their dark gray finish showed little reflection on their square blades.

...

"Falchion?"

"No, those are meat cleavers." Reinhard twitched a bit. "From the market, wrought iron, five pence apiece."

"Meat... cleavers? You mean, those things butchers use?" Theodore couldn't say anything worthwhile either. Garnet wasn't a slouch in the art of blade fighting. But her current weapon of choice was far too questionable!

They weren't the only ones dumbfounded.

"Lend me your strength, Kuro." Adrianne thought. She hadn't realized it until their memories merged perfectly, but Kuro was not just some maid from Modern Earth. And in the three months since her mother's illness and recovery, Adrianne had been trying to find a way to utilize what Kuro gave her through her inherited memories.

These iron cleavers weren't just Adrianne playing around. And as she pushed the loop circuitry to more than half power, the armor suit began to emit buzzing noises.

"With due respect, are you two seriously that ignorant?" someone annoyedly commented. "Think about what she's doing at the moment and think harder why she would choose them."

"You are?"

"My name is Lewis Carter," the bespectacled man said curtly, "your Highness."

"Ah, you're the son of General Carter." Theodore nodded. "It's an honor to finally meet you."

Lewis wasn't really the type to attend high-class parties. Although General Carter was famous, Theodore hadn't met Lewis before.

"The honor is mine, your Highness."

Reinhard couldn't help but notice the underlying sarcasm in his words. Did this man hate nobles or something? It wasn't that surprising, though: he was one of the burghers, the wealthy commoners with the strongest political influence. General Carter only owed his loyalty to His Majesty, King Eugene II.

"So, what's your opinion, Lewis?" Theodore asked curiously with a smile.

"Lady Lyster picked these knives because iron cleavers wouldn't do as much chipping damage as steel falchions, even if they massed the same." Lewis rubbed his chin. "The handling might be a bit weird, but if Lady Lyster is as good as people say she is... it wouldn't hold her back."

"She is that good." Theodore nodded, remembering the strange conversation the two young women had had. Could it be that those two had a relationship? "Adrianne is holding back because she doesn't want to damage the Starfall too much."

However, it would not stop Adrianne from fighting roughly. Theodore knew her temperament too well. A good spar was a good spar.

"I understand that you're close to her from before, but for me, Lady Lyster isn't giving a good vibe at all," Lewis said. "No offense."

Theodore smiled. "She isn't as selfish as you thought she was."

...

Adrianne wasn't being courteous and launched herself toward Garnet aggressively, to which Garnet replied in kind as the red-painted knight swung her signature stick diagonally.

What was unexpected was that Adrianne managed to dodge the attack by ducking slightly to the right. However, Garnet predicted it, pulled the other stick and jabbed the slim end toward Adrianne.

Garnet gripped it just above the knob, almost the opposite to before.

Gripping above the head was a technique used to change the center of balance in a fighting stick. By sacrificing impact strength, the user gained more control over it. And the weapon would behave like a sword instead of a mace.

Adrianne somehow managed to spin out of the way to dodge again. And smacked Garnet in the back with her cleaver with enough force to budge the Starfall.

Garnet clenched her teeth from the impact and desperately twisted to swing her left-hand stick at Adrianne, but she jumped back without hesitation.

A backwards jump for any aspiring knight was not an easy feat. This was because most knight armor suits were back heavy, thanks to the loop circuitry installed. The issue wasn't terribly problematic, but in a battle between knights, a single blink could decide victory and defeat.

Yet Adrianne didn't seem bothered as she landed gracefully, without opening herself up to counterattack. It couldn't possibly be only the issue of machine difference.

...Or was it?

Sudden buzzing interrupted Garnet's train of thought.

Regal Wasp dashed again in her direction with a strange movement as if sliding on the ground. Garnet's eyes widened as she immediately tried to block and deflect but barely succeeded.

This speed is plain abnormal!

There was absolutely no doubt that Regal Wasp was a powerful machine, but was the difference really that big?! A high-performance suit required a skilled and powerful knight to operate, too.

This was the difference in raw strength and skill between her and Adrianne!

"Miss Pucheria got cornered! As expected, Lady Adrianne is on a whole different level!"

"Still, that she could last this long... Miss Pucheria really isn't one to take lightly."

Their weapons clashed several times, with booming impact and screeching every time they met. Both the sticks and the cleavers showed visible damage, though nothing major. The brutality of the match was such that some of the teachers began to sweat profusely.

CLANG!

One of Garnet's sticks was thrown away when she lost her grip. Garnet did not panic and instead used the remaining stick with both hands and whacked Adrianne with it.

One of Adrianne's cleavers also flew. However, Adrianne couldn't do the same as Garnet did with her other weapon. Due to the short grip of the cleaver, a two-handed grip was impossible.

Instead, she put a palm on the back of the cleaver to push it. Garnet's iron stick buckled slightly, and this allowed Adrianne to smash it away in a flash.

As the strange buzzing sound returned, Garnet finally realized what had happened. Garnet's world turned upside down, quite literally, as Adrianne kicked her left leg.

The red Starfall dropped on its back.

"[The winner of this fight is Lady Adrianne Valiant Lyster]!" Avan announced. His voice was neutral but without hesitation. No one would doubt the result if they were actually paying attention to the fight at all.

"Find a person named Luna Linker in the engineering class," Adrianne opened her helmet visor and told Garnet aloud. "Get that Starfall checked, especially the left knee joints."

Garnet opened her visor and responded, "I understand, and thank you, Lady Adrianne!"

Garnet felt slightly embarrassed that Adrianne managed to find that the left leg joints of her Starfall were slightly worn out. The difference was marginal enough that most people would not notice.

But that was where Adrianne attacked in their last exchange, a leg sweep that had brought Garnet down because she couldn't muster a firm enough footing. If the Starfall had been in optimal condition, that tackle wouldn't have literally flipped her over like that.

Since this is behourd, falling down is falling down, which means defeat. But the position of a fall mattered a lot on the actual battlefield. The faster you got up, the less likely you were to get killed.

Theodore finally understood as he left the seat: the reason why Adrianne would challenge Garnet like that...

So he left his seat with a smile.

"Are you staying, Reinhard?"

"Eh? Me?" Reinhard pointed at himself. "Well, not exactly, your Highness."

He didn't know what else to do except to follow Theodore on his way out, it seemed like a good idea at the time.

...

In the preparation area, Theodore found Avan and Adrianne, who were talking happily. Their respective armor suits were behind them.

"It really is based on mother's Royal Blade, huh?" Avan affectionately rubbed his sister's head. "Your display of skill was magnificent."

"Yes, I could only use eight-tenth of its power, though." Adrianne blushed slightly. "You probably could use it better."

"High-speed fighting isn't really my forte, sadly. It would be wasted on me."

Avan's Starfall Crusader might appear ordinary from the outside. But it had heavily reinforced armor and joints, which made it slower, possibly comparable to Garnet's older Starfall, but more durable than the standard model.

In online multiplayer game terms, Avan was the usual tank archetype: not exceptionally fast, but a determined and strong protector. Not that Kuro was particularly familiar with the details of such roles: she didn't really have much time or willingness to play online games by herself.

Most of these game terms and elements were things she had learned from her young mistress, who was quite sickly and spent most of the time at home.

Adrianne was glad that her paranoia had turned out to be unfounded: Garnet was indeed more skilled than the average trainee, but still beneath her at present. In any case, the reason why Garnet had managed to win her first match was that she had her own machine. She'd had three months to get accustomed to it, so it made sense that she'd outperformed her game self.

In the game itself, she'd had to choose between borrowed armor suits or fighting in plate armor. Garnet was short for a woman, which put her at a disadvantage in plate armor fighting. And using a borrowed suit would mean she was fighting in a machine she was barely familiar with.

"Addie!" Theodore called her. "Sorry, did we intrude on your reunion, Avan?"

"Haha, no, your Highness. Feel free to take her with you," Avan laughed. While he was being polite, there was an air of familiarity in his voice.

For little Theodore, Avan was like his own big brother. They drifted apart more or less the same time Theodore and Adrianne had separated.

"I see." Theodore looked at the somewhat confused and embarrassed Adrianne. "I don't know you can be so nice."

"Uhh, pardon?" Adrianne gagged. She wondered if Theodore had misunderstood something...

"You defeated Miss Pucheria for two reasons, right? The first was that you want to protect her from unnecessary attention because if she appeared too strong, the other students would be cautious and jealous of her."

Uhuh, not at all.

"Secondly, you're trying to save the collective face of your fellow nobles. While no one would doubt that Garnet Pucheria was strong, they can accept someone like you as better than her."

No. Theodore had completely misunderstood her.

"It wasn't like that at all." Adrianne awkwardly denied. "I was just trying out my new suit against a suitable opponent, and Garnet Pucheria was a very convenient target."

"Well, I know you were probably fidgeting at the thought of fighting a strong opponent... but was that it?" Theodore raised his eyebrows.

"Well, that part is true, but it's not as if I especially pay attention to her!" Adrianne told him desperately.

Well, that was a bald-faced lie. But Adrianne was too embarrassed to say that she challenged Garnet to test whether her paranoia was actually feverish imagination.

"She's actually better than I expected, though," Adrianne said truthfully.

"So you DO pay attention to her," Reinhard snorted.

"What are you insinuating, Reinhard?" Adrianne's face darkened. He'd better not leak the secret, or else...

"Tsk, what a Tsundere," Reinhard jibed. "Your Highness should be careful, or else Miss Garnet will steal her from you."

Avan just wordlessly laughed while Theodore tilted his head in confusion. Meanwhile, Adrianne turned so red that she looked like a burning tea kettle.

"What is a Tsundere?" Theodore asked.
 
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This is a big hamefura moment and I'm not entirely sure if Reinhard is even wrong.

Adrianne's paranoia is hilarious. Seriously who the fuck would think that Garnet might be a new game plus heroine? I certainly did not.
 
Hey, I'm not well: I had a seizure and was taken to hospital yesterday. I'm home now, but it may take me some time to offer my usual proofreading/editing services. I hope that's all right.
 
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