Taylor Hebert & The Celestial Dojo

I can't tell whether Orochimaru taking over Victor and Coil is a good thing for the Bay. On the one hand, he doesn't promote the same kind of chaos and incompetence; on the other, his experiments can get brutal, and he's much harder to remove from the picture.

But I loved Beardmaster's bureaucracy comments. That he recognizes the signs of running on far too little sleep is probably good in the long run, right?
 
Orochimaru took over one base, but did he get Coil's Dis-loyal minions? Lisa is awaiting orders...
 
I really like how you're handling rolls and whatnot in this story. It gives all the abilities plenty of time to shine, and expands it to a supporting cast of characters without just importing companions. I like it! The writing is good, characterization decent, and generally entertaining.
 
Deals and Ninja
* Between the Pure World & Impure World *
* Flashback: Before Taylor/Zenko returns to the testing facility *

"It was a prank! A prank!"

"We're kitsune, it's practically a requirement!"

Taylor held her fingers in the seal that Hashirama Senju had taught her, not releasing the technique at all.

"You can't deny it's been handy! Your world does that whole secret identity thing after all!"

There was no mercy in her gaze as the wood creaked menacingly.

"You're definitely getting the hang of Mokuton," noted Jiraiya as he observed Taylor using an original technique. At least he thought it was original. It didn't look like something Hashirama would normally do.

"Forgive us!" cried out several kitsune as the clamps tightened just a bit more.

"Why should I forgive you?" asked Taylor. "I leaned into the image because it was useful but until recently that was how I permanently looked."

"A summoning contract?" offered one of the kitsune, who then looked relieved when there was a bit of slack in the pressure.

"What good is a summoning contract with kitsune?" asked Jiraiya. "Are you experts at anything she can use?"

"We're good at infiltration!" said one kitsune.

"We're good at seduction!" said another kitsune. "OWWW! Why is it tighter?!"

"We're good at a number of tasks and human skills, actually," said the third, sounding quite worried.

"I don't know," said Jiraiya. "The crows were interested. So were the monkeys and the spiders."

Hashirama stepped out of a tree. "Ah, you caught them."

"They're offering her a kitsune summoning contract as recompense," stated Jiraiya, managing to put a fair amount of scorn into that.

"I'm actually a bit impressed that they were able to do so without several experienced ninja noticing," said Hiruzen Sarutobi as he appeared.

"So they've got a good handle on stealth techniques then, helped by a lack of malice to be detected," postulated Jiraiya.

"Yes! Yes! We're very useful," stated one of the kitsune.

"The bears and the sparrows were quite intrigued," noted Hiruzen Sarutobi, the Third Hokage looking over the three kitsune currently in tight wooden bonds. "Apparently it's been ages since they've had a contractor."

Jiraiya shrugged. "Well, one of them was good enough she escaped and you've got a copy captured so at least think about signing them. If you hadn't noticed, Taylor, you've started to fade out and return to your world."

* PRT ENE Conference Room 407 "Chincoteague" *
* The Present *

Her showing up had been a bit of a surprise to everyone.

Director Piggot was unhappy about it, but she'd followed all the rules and regulations about reporting everything so the Director of the ENE Branch of the Parahuman Response Team had suspected some kind of response. Just not this particular one.

Her Thinker ability allowed her to read everyone in the room fairly well with two exceptions.

Armsmaster was wearing his power armor which cut down on a lot of the little tells that would normally take place.

Sub-Zero on the other hand was simply that good at cutting down or outright falsifying many of those automatic responses and shifts so that he was even better at that sort of thing than anyone other than a professional agent with years of training and experience. No, he was acting like he WAS a professional in that field just one whose focus was on something else and the control training was a sideline.

Director Piggot kept glaring at the screen like it had offended her, glancing at her and was trying to work out why such a high-level response when most of her communiques and requests were ignored, and glancing at another screen where Renick had met with the three subjects and negotiated a deal.

The deal was most likely they could get two people into the "ninja program" as "an evaluation" and monitoring the process. The initial demand was for four and doing it here in the building for proper oversight/testing. So far Zenko had been friendly and accomodating towards the PRT and Piggot wasn't satisfied with that but taking the "wait until she steps out of line and THEN go hardcore" approach.

"There," said Alexandria, pointing at the short clip where Zenko had abruptly changed position. "That's why I'm here."

Armsmaster looked up from his tablet. "You've noticed something?"

"I notice many things. Her hair is longer by one-fourth of an inch, stance is different, and where the clothing isn't covering her - it's faint but she's put on a slight increase in muscle mass." Alexandria nodded. "That's where the discrepency between her active time as a cape and practice with her skill set comes from. It seems she's creating a time-pocket and using it to train."

"Not quite a reverse of a Grey Boy bubble," summed up Armsmaster, nodding after a moment.

"Sub-Zero is obviously her father, so she's a Second-Gen," noted Alexandria aloud. "Explains part of her 'grab-bag' set of powers as well. I have to wonder if her mother was parahuman and what power she might have had."

"Of more concern is the student, non-parahuman but he was able to stick to a wall and has physical abilities not normally noted in someone of his age," said Armsmaster, bringing up files on a third screen. "Ernest Sandoval Leibowitz. Worked for a fishpacking plant in Boston as a licensed fisherman and captain of the fishing vessel Lady Penitent."

"This is intriguing, but that both Sub-Zero and Zenko have abilities which increase over time is more along the lines of why I was sent," stated Alexandria. "There are very few who can actively increase powers like Dauntless. Gain skill or expertise with them, certainly. Much less gain new powers as they go."

This was not the whole truth, but then again - nobody really expected that of anyone in politics and the Triumvirate was no exception.

"Look, Mister Leibowitz rested enough to recover and now he's crawling up the wall despite the lack of handholds," pointed out Director Piggot with a nod towards a monitor.

"Just think what the troops in Ellisburg could have done with such abilities," said Alexandria in a low enough voice to indicate she was speaking mainly to herself but just loud enough that Piggot would notice. From the startled look to the glare and then to a more thoughtful expression indicated that idea had just taken root.

There had been several capes who could affect normal people to give them abilities. Othala being a local example. Train them in abilities that they could make their own and were permanent? Entirely different and her actual reason for visiting.

"I'd suggest two for now," said Alexandria.

"We have three," said Armsmaster, handing her three folders.

"Cythia Anderson, Trooper for four years, one disciplinary action from 2007 - unnecessary force against an Empire-aligned civilian?"

"She passed the remedial course on necessary force after that," stated Armsmaster.

"Cleared by medical after getting roughed up by the ABB in 2008," noted Alexandria.

"Shrapnel from one of Oni Lee's grenades," exposited Armsmaster.

"I can see where having some extra mobility in such situations would be useful," agreed Alexandria, putting down that folder and opening the next. "Motor pool?"

* Zenko *

Everyone was doing something else, so she had a few moments to herself.

Zenko observed the chakra-enhanced ice sculpture that Sub-Zero had created for the researchers, though it was a bit crude and her father admitted he was working on the aesthetics there. Still, it was obviously a bear despite the rough shape.

Erwin had crawled up the wall and came back down and was resting again. It would probably require some pretty strong tranquilizers to wipe that smug look off his face. Why he wanted something called a "web shooter" was not something Zenko was familiar with or particularly concerned about.

Her eyes flicked up to one of the ceiling cameras. She was 99% certain that everything going on here would be analyzed to the last micron. So she was certainly sandbagging and not mentioning a whole lot of stuff because ninja. So was her father. Because ninja. Also experience with government agencies.

"Zenko? You carry around those little throwing knives. Is there a reason for that?"

Zenko stirred herself to address Doctor Richards. "Yes, they can be used for a number of things."

"Well, they're not exactly legal to use for a number of reasons. If we set up a target, can you show us? Perhaps something a little more legal-safe and PR-friendly can be used to substitute?"

Making a face, Zenko got up from where she'd been sitting. She knew that heroes and villains all took image and branding very seriously. She was not looking forward to seeing what they were going to suggest instead of sharp or pointy objects.

"Chakra enhanced throw," said Zenko. She wasn't lightning-chakra natured but giving a kunai a slight charge to make it better at penetration was simple enough. She silently thanked Shisui for his pointers.

It naturally went through the target and into the wall behind that with a satisfying 'thunk' noise.

"Kunai shadow clone!" tried Zenko as she again threw a single kunai, rewarded by dozens of kunai suddenly appearing and raining down upon the target when she'd only thrown a single one. The now-shredded target was momentarily obscured until all by the puff of smoke as the fake kunai vanished.

"Projection ability similar to your 'fox swarm'?" asked Richards. "Interesting. Can you do that with confoam grenades?"

Zenko was startled for a moment, not having expected that question, then thought about it. "No, I don't think so. I can't spam explosive tags or barrier tags even if they're on a kunai that I shadow clone."

"Different expressions of power? Can you demonstrate? I'll put up a fresh target," said Richards, sounding intrigued.

Zenko visibly considered that before deciding against it. "No, I'm still learning fuuinjutsu - the system that uses that sort of thing. Maybe when I've got it all down better."

"Interesting, so this 'fuuinjutsu' is one of these teachable powersets?" asked Richards. "What else can it potentially do?"

Zenko was silent for a moment before deciding storage seals were common enough and handy, so that was a good choice. Besides, she could potentially sell some if she could figure out how to allow for a release by someone without chakra.

* PRT ENE Conference Room 407 "Chincoteague" *

Armsmaster stared as he considered exactly what THAT could do for his equipment.

Director Piggot was a bit more vocal. "This 'fuu-whatever' allows her to store equipment in a slip of paper?"

Alexandria nodded, thinking that was DAMN handy considering how few cape costumes came with pockets. "In this case a post-it note containing a quarterstaff, a pack of Armsmaster-brand zip-ties, and what appears to be a ham sandwich."

Director Piggot considered that for a moment before asking. "Why a ham sandwich?"

"Long patrols and she burns a lot of energy, I suspect," answered Armsmaster.

"Sub-Zero just pulled out his own and produced a half-dozen of those little throwing knives," pointed out Director Piggot. "That indicates the ability can either be learned or is part of the family cluster of abilities."

They watched as the old man in the room was handed one of the post-it notes, coached through channeling his chakra into it, and producing a water bottle from it in a puff of that odd smoke that frequently accompanied Zenko's abilities.

"Director Piggot," said Alexandria after observing that. "I would strongly recommend that we get some students into these ninja classes, vet any students currently attending, and that you send weekly updates to the Chief Director's office. This may very well turn out to be something useful."

"Just if we could have troopers with extra ammunition stored away in their pockets? Yes, that thought DID occur to me," grumped Director Piggot. Just having a pack of confoam grenades was sufficiently bulky to make carrying them around problematic in long operations. Being able to pull out a case of ammunition or grenades when you ran out? That had her attention.

"If we can, without alienating them, we should try to get Sub-Zero into the Protectorate," added Alexandria. "The details I'll leave to you."

* Contessa *

The Path had changed. Again.

Path to Victory was adaptive, it had to be. However it did not automatically update, she had to run the particular Path and then check the number of Steps in that Path. There were many she checked daily.

Path to the survival of the human race had begun shrinking and it hadn't done so in single digit terms. No, chunks of Steps were departing. Sometimes a few Steps would be added, but those were the rarer events.

The Parahuman Feudalism experiment however? That had just crashed. Coil was no longer in the running at all.

Worse, when she tried to run a Path to check into Coil's absence from this particular chessboard? She was getting garbage answers. Step Forty-Two remained "pet any cute foxes that approach" for whatever odd reason and whatever THAT was about.

Okay, there were WORSE Paths she'd run. The "Path to Getting Some Down Time and Stress Relief" had been very very concerning, because it frankly read like a particularly lurid romance novel.

Especially Step 9, which had caused her to turn red enough that Doctor Mother had looked across the table at her and inquire as to her health.

Back to this problem, which was why she was standing on the roof of an office building near Coil's secret base wondering what the heck was going on with her Paths and why Brockton Bay was the location for this strangeness.
 
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Shadow kunai no jutsu!" tried Zenko as she again threw a single kunai, rewarded by dozens of kunai suddenly appearing and raining down upon the target when she'd only thrown a single one.
Sorry, but incorrect.
What is shown is Kunai Shadow Clone.
Shadow Kunai is throwing multiple Kunai while having some hide in the 'shadow' of others.

Very common mistake, but one of my Naruto pet peeves.
 
Sorry, but incorrect.
What is shown is Kunai Shadow Clone.
Shadow Kunai is throwing multiple Kunai while having some hide in the 'shadow' of others.

Very common mistake, but one of my Naruto pet peeves.
thanks, fixed that.

While writing chapter 11, came up with a situation where a roll came up. (Right after Shadow Stalker spotted someone suspicious and attacked Contessa.) Ed, if you're reading this - can you please roll a d12?
 
Am I the only one that feels like a chapter is missing that explains what in the world was going on with those Kitsune? I didn't miss that in the last chapter somehow did I?
 
Personally, I'd think the most efficient "Path to Getting Some Down Time and Stress Relief" would begin with shooting Doctor Mother and potentially other Cauldron members.

Depends on if her Paths take her personal interests or other paths into account.
 
So, Taylor is able to get a contract for Summon Kitsunes, after a bit of negotiation and intimidation from the Ninjas, as well as noticing that the PRT analyzes and observes everything they do, she, her father and Erdwin in that demonstration, deciding to save some things, because ninja

Obviously the PRT find interesting things, but not rushing or pressuring since Zenko and his associates have not been confrontational and cannot force them to cooperate (much to Piggot's annoyance).

In the end, well if Contessa ignores and tries to investigate Coil's base, would she end up as cannon fodder or a new suit for Orochi? (who we have already seen in the Naruto canon, have no problem using the bodies of men or women), it is better for her to follow the step that recommends relaxing and petting any little fox she sees; or the other path that leads her to a novel romance (with Sub-Zero?)

The thing about Sophia trying to attack Contessa, mwahahaha, that's not going to end well, for the Bully, maybe showing Fortuna to have her own creative side in how she gets rid of, punishes SS

Good luck and keep it up
 
current list. Ed just rolled a 7 in case anyone is interested, so if someone has a suggestion for additions to the appropriate table now is a good time.

Constellations Unlocked
01 Weapons Styles
02 Ki-based Martial Arts
03 Secret Agent Man
04 Fantasy Special Manuevers
05 Fighting Games
06 Ninja Academy
07 Appearance/Social Combat
08 Summons
09 Companions, Allies, Minions, or Pets
10 Support Skills to Pay the Bills
11 Blessings
12 Altered Ancestry

Weapons Styles:
01 Gimmick Archery (300)
02 Working on the Chain, Gang (200)
03 Staff, Stick, and Club (200)
04 I know Gun Fu (350) (Matrix)
05 Specialization in Improvisation (100)
06 Hidden Weapons Style (Hammerspace Weapons Pocket Technique) (300)
07 Way of the Sword (Usagi Yojimbo)(400)
08 Sword & Board (Arthurian)(400)
09 Game of Throwns (450)
10 Polearm Presence (300)
11 Hiten-Mitsurugi-ryu (Ruroni Kenshin)
12 Breathing (Kimetsu No Yaiba)
13 Sun Wukong Staff Techniques (Monkey King)
14 Special Weapon Development and Use (SHIELD)
15 Shinmeiryu Sword Style (Love Hina/Negima)
16 Jack-of-All or Master-of-One (Fate/Stay)
17 Needlework (Drug & Poison Delivery Systems)
18 Sneak & Shoot (Sniper)
19 Xuanhuan Weapon Techniques (Wuxia)
20 Rip and Tear

Ki, Chi, or Qi: (Basic 250, Advanced 500, Late series 1000)
01 Kame Style (DB)
02 Anything Goes Martial Arts (R 1/2)
03 Chinese Medicine (various)
04 Shadow Arts (Ninja Gaiden)
05 Jedi Arts (SW)
06 K'un L'un (Iron Fist)
07 Cosmo no Sainto (Saint Seiya)
08 Hokuto Shin Ken (Hokuto No Ken)
09 Nanto Sei Ken (Hokuto No Ken)
10 Esper Arts (various)
11 Masters (Keiichi Strongest Disciple)
12 The Training (One Punch)
13 Rokushiki (One Piece)
14 Sinanju (the Destroyer)
15 Sendo/Hamon (Jojo)
16 Element Bending (Last Airbender)
17 Magical Physical Enhancement/Kankaho (Negima!)
18 Geki Jyuken (Geki Rangers/Power Rangers)
19 Making Your Stand (JoJo's Bizarre Adventure)
20 Spiritual Arts (Yu Yu Hakusho)

Secret Agent Man:
01 Spy Tech (250)
02 Stealth (100)
03 Disguise (200)
04 Assassin's Creed (250)
05 Investigation (100)
06 Insight (100)
07 Electronics/Computers (200)
08 Demolitions & Disarming (200)
09 MacGyver/Improvised Devices
10 Sleight Of Hand
11 Deception & Misdirection
12 Better Living Through Chemistry

Fantasy Special Manuevers: (100 pts)
01 Cure Wounds
02 Elemental Affinity
03 Limit Break
04 Weapon Based
05 With a Single Spell
06 Gatling Punch
07 Steal
08 Shell I
09 Slapstick Button
10 Ascending Dragon Strike
11 Stunning Strike
12 SMITE!

Fighting Games: (roll for specific character) 100 basic, 250 advanced, 500 full
01 Dark Stalkers
02 Mortal Kombat
03 Street Fighter
04 Dead or Alive
05 Tekken
06 Soul Caliber
07 Guilty Gear
08 Super Smash Brothers

Ninja Academy (Intermediate) (basics already purchased)
01 Sharingan (basic) (250)
02 Puppet Techniques (350)
03 Dust Release (500)
04 Shunshin upgraded to Teleport Tags (100)
05 Wood Release (basic) (500)
06 Danger Sense upgraded (100)
07 Fuuinjutsu (Intermediate) (250)
08 1d6 random jutsu scrolls (300)
09 Barrier Jutsu (Basic) (100)
10 Advanced Medical Jutsu (250)
11 Senjutsu (250)
12 Kekkei Genkai (random) (500)

Appearance/Social:
01 Extreme Grace/Acrobatics (100)
02 Fashion Sense (100)
03 Costume Upgrade (100)
04 Projection: Aura of Menace (150)
05 Projection: Aura of Tranquility (150)
06 Looking Fabulous (200)
07 And suddenly: Batman
08 Calling Cards

Summons
01 Signature Weapon (100)
02 Signature Vehicle/Mount (250)
03 Bag of Holding (200)
04 Insta-change costume (50)
05 Barrier Gadget (200)
06 Inventory system (100 for 4 slots, 250 for 10 slots, 500 for 24 slots)
07 Nasuverse Summons (500)
08 One of the unlocked teachers.
09 Unseen Servant (100)
10 Summoning Contract
11 Minion Manifestation
12 Summon Ally

Companions, Allies, Pets:
01 Unusually Intelligent Dinosaur
02 Alaspin Mini-drag
03 Pixie
04 Norman or Alfred or another assistant/butler/maid
05 J.A.R.V.I.S. or Friday.
06 Hatchling dragon
07 Owl, Cat, or Toad
08 Robot Assistant
09 An Unusual Dog
10 Magic Carpet
11 Kitsune Companion
12 Palico (Monster Hunter)
13 Senseless Death Rebirth. (various, suggestions from comments)
14 Mimir (Planescape)
15 The Supplier/Contact (Spy x Family, various)
16 Magical Girl Companion Animal
17 Star Wars Droid
18 Tinker (1-2), Thinker (3-4), Stranger (5-6), Brute (7-8), Shaker (9-10)
19 Artificer (1-2), Barbarian (3-4), Rogue (5-6), Wizard (7-8), Cleric (9-10)
20 Guardian Spirit

Support Skills To Pay The Bills: (100 pts, all skills start at basic and improve with use) 01 EMT Training
02 Driver (Car)
03 Cooking
04 Tailor/Sewing/Costumer
05 Computer Programmer
06 Driver (Truck)
07 Mechanic (Automotive)
08 Accountant
09 Midwife
10 Private Investigator
11 Pilot (small aircraft)
12 Sailor
13 Blacksmith/Metalwork
14 Mechanical Engineer
15 Plumbing/HVAC systems
16 Woodworking/Carpentry
17 Maid
18 Construction Equipment Operator
19 Teacher
20 Musician

Blessings:

01 Hades
02 Athena
03 Thor
04 Ilmater
05 Zeus
06 Hera
07 Aphrodite
08 Ares
09 Odin
10 Shiva
11 Bes
12 Neper
13 Marduk
14 Anhur
15 Aegir
16 Loki
17 Dianmu
18 Sun Wukong
19 Mystra
20 Nuada

Altered Ancestry:
01 Demigod
02 Elf
03 Kitsune
04 Kryptonian
05 Saiyan
06 Titan
07 Asgardian
08 Viltrumite
09 Gem (Steven Universe)
10 Dragon
 
Well, I have to ask if Nen is related to Spiritual Arts since the mangaka of Yu Yu Hakusho also did/does HunterxHunter. And if so, does the benefit of Nen carry over?
 
Heh! For appearance/social "Your clothes are armor" How you dress has many protective aspects. When people remember your clothes, they often forget your appearance(MiB) 85% of success is in a good suit, the other 15% is up to you(The Tuxedo) How you dress affects how people treat you. A (wo)man in the right clothes can get into many places that the wrong clothes would exclude them from. A (wo)man that looks dangerous is safer from the common thug. You know how to style your outfits to achieve a number of effects that allow you to blend into any crowd. What's more, each item that you wear improves your defenses against the common threats in your area, including such beings as the Queen Bee and the Karen.
 
Benefit of nen? What specifically? Nen has tons of benefits and I would assume most of them would carry over.
Well I am thinking the 'defensive' aspect in a sense. Such as being able to better detect people, resistance to some powers if they interact with aura, and being able to use Nen to increase her healing if she is capable of it.

There is also, due to it being a out of context thing, possibly interfere with shards since the idea of the soul is a complete violation of what they know at all of the world.
 
As for the types of energy, well that's already covered, well Chakra, which is what the Naruto Ninjas use

-Secret Agent Man
The Assassin's Creed style could work well, encompassing a lot of the Ninja stuff

- Fantasy Special Manuevers
For this one, maybe Cure Wounds or Slapstick Boton

- Fighting Games
Here either DoA (for the Ninjas) or Super Smash Bros (the fun and chaos - suddenly Danny's people, the dock workers added an Italian plumber to their ranks)

- Ninja Academy
From this, given everything Taylor has been learning, maybe add Senjutsu?

- Appearance/Social
Here she already recently got an upgrade, in Costume Upgrade, imagine Danny or Erwin, getting "And suddenly: Batman"

- For Summon, Taylor was already on the verge of getting a contract with the Kitsunes, or as well
07 Nasuverse Summons (500)
09 Unseen Servant (100)
12 Summon Ally

- Companions, Allies, Pets
Since you also mention Jarvis or Friday, maybe Cortana too?

- Support Skills To Pay The Bills
maybe one of these:
05 Computer Programmer
13 Blacksmith/Metalwork
14 Mechanical Engineer

- Blessings:
Which ones could be useful to Taylor?
02 Athena
16 Loki
18 Sun Wukong

- Altered Ancestry:
As for this one, hmmm, maybe one of these
04 Kryptonian
05 Saiyan
07 Asgardian
10 Dragon
 
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