Taylor Hebert & The Celestial Dojo

Deferring rolls to someone who's been briefed is a cool idea. I agree that it will work to create a more unique identity out of the mishmash grab-bag that the celestial power sets create.

I don't have much to add. Cool stuff so far, feels really breakneck paced after coming off of Brocktons Celestial Forge.
 
Love the story so far, and something to keep in mind. While it is good to want to have your mechanism separate from what's already out there, be careful of the focus on that shifting focus away from telling a good story. While the diferring a roll is an interesting concept, I think the main reason it feels wrong was the fact that it was a blind thing, where she lost out, and ended up losing time and further development and experience. Building it in where she'd know the roll choice and then be able to choose would be nice. Still, your story and maybe you have plans in the works that might cover that hole.
 
Can someone roll a d12? Dogbertcaroll was kind enough to roll for constellation (I've been having other writers handle the initial rolls for awhile now) and now I want to defer to a commentor for the correct table.
 
Amusing! I think I may have to watch this story. Been running light on stories to read that are still updating lately. Fortunately, that's because they keep concluding rather then them being abandoned.
 
Meetings & Greetings
* Brian *

Aisha going off and getting herself in trouble. Practically a weekly, sometimes bi-weekly, event.

Aisha ending up in the Docks was just a little out of the usual way.

At least she hadn't been shoplifting. Or running from Empire goons. Or...

Look, he had a very troublesome sister who had a bit of Attention Deficit or something.

The lights turned out to be not cops but PRT, which gave him a fair amount of anxiety going forward. Had Aisha triggered?

(Whoosh!) "Big Bro!" (GLOMP!)

Okay, this was new. And worrisome. Aisha was NOT known for public displays of affection unless she'd done something wrong and gotten caught. Or she wanted something.

"Can you sign me up for ninja lessons?!"

Okay, something she wanted. Things made a bit more sense. "What?!"

"They're training here to unlock some 'chalk raw' thing and it lets 'em do LOTS of things!" said Aisha. "Walk across ice without slippin' and sneak and -"

Brian recognized that Aisha was going into her enthusiastic-but-barely-comprehensible babble and continued to just take in the scene.

"-and they took down Skidmark, that's him in the coccoon of ice!" Aisha had released him now, just so she could bounce up and down on her toes as she pointed at a scene that looked like the aftermath of a particularly bad winter storm.

"Aisha, five of them are sealed up," noted Brian aloud.

"This is SO cool!" said Aisha.

"Yeah, there's a lot of ice," said Brian.

"That chalk raw stuff sounds like mumbo-jumbo but Zorro over there can stick that leaf to his forehead and that old guy over there actually managed to stick to a wall and THAT guy over there is throwing ice and Zenko..."

"Are you sure they're not just parahumans?" asked Brian. "Zenko's a parahuman, and that one guy may just have ice powers."

"Well, since they ain't charging the guys money to teach this stuff," mused Aisha.

"Aisha. You should have led with that." Brian shook his head, now looking for one of those teachers. If he could dump his dear little attention-deficit sister in a class that would work off some of her energy? He doubted they were actually learning some ninja stuff, and it looked like the PRT was monitoring them so it likely wasn't some weird cult, but if it kept her from getting in trouble...

Yeah, that sounded like a plan. As long as it wasn't some scam where advanced lesson plans for a nominal fee weren't the reason for this stuff.

* Orochimaru/victor *
* Sept 18th, 2009 0100 hours *

The Master/Stranger protocols might have given him trouble, if he bothered to play by the rules.

He was Orochimaru. He only followed the rules when it suited him. He'd gotten a bit enlightened from the days of his impetuous past, but there were considerations to be made here.

So the poor sap named Wilson whom he'd drained self-control from was recovering from his lapse of communications security, while the "Johnson" who was unconscious and hidden in a warehouse while a simple Henge/Disguise jutsu gave his current body that appearance? Well, he'd keep. In the meantime he had a much better idea.

To a shinobi of his level, even using the relatively weak body of this "Victor" fellow, the underground passages and security measures here were like stealing files from a kindergarten classroom.

The snake motif that Coil used? The underground base? The feeble attempts at security? Consider him slightly flattered.

By the time this Coil fellow had gotten to his little command center and hideaway, he was momentarily distracted by a noise as he opened the door. When he closed it there was less than a second of realization that there was now someone IN his little hidey-hole.

After that startled millisecond, of course, he was wrapped in a genjutsu.

Pleased at how familiar some of this was, and at the resources available to him now, Orochimaru smiled as he prepared to strip-mine the man's mind. After all, if Mister Calvert/Coil used crude methods to the same results - it was only fair for such to be turned on him - wasn't it?

Positively karmic, one might say.

* Later, Elsewhere *

"Begin dictation.

"September 18th, 2009. It is currently 1:15am. Initial findings and report of incident 09-17-2009-20741A-Zenko-4.

"On arriving at the Docks, twelve non-parahuman members of the minor criminal group known as the Archer Street Merchants were found subdued. Five of these had injuries consistent with others subdued by Zenko, minor bruises and concussions being the primary signs of physical violence. Five additional were encased in ice to varying degrees and will require minor treatment for hypothermia. Two additional were simply subdued by superior physical strength and ziptied.

"Accompanying this group were two parahumans associated with the group, Skidmark and Mush. Mush's injuries appear to have been from attempting to use his power on a large ice sculpture of a bear, which came apart and coated him with that ice. He is currently in a cell being treated for hypothermia. Skidmark also shows significant exposure and was encased in ice from just below his nose to the soles of his feet.

"This is the initial encounter with a previously unknown parahuman who introduced himself as a student of Zenko's 'ninja training' experiment, given the tentative cape name of Sub-Zero. Sub-Zero's powerset is ice generation and being able to drain heat energy from areas through that ice. Ice produced by Sub-Zero shows anomalous reinforcement, seeming to have a hardness and rigidity that is higher than one would expect. It also appears to be a hard counter to Skidmark's kinetic manipulation power.

"Sub-Zero is further detailed in report 09-17-2009-511A-Sub-Zero, which I have just finished and sent off to appease the gods of bureaucracy.

"Strike comment regarding gods of bureaucracy, I will have to get some sleep in the very near future.

"Possible familial relationship between Sub-Zero and Zenko noted. Sub-Zero was informed of need to acquire a mask or other form of concealing his identity as apparently he was unaware of Unwritten Rules and need for secret identities. He was provided a copy of the basic packet for new capes.

"Trooper Menendez provided a gift box. I was unaware that we even HAD gift boxes for new capes. Why didn't WE get a gift box? Miss Militia also expressed surprise at the existence of little gift boxes for new parahumans, some of the contents having a PRT logo - including Armsmaster logo ziptie dispensers. Make a note for followup as to when I actually signed off on that product.

"Miss Militia brand 'Armed & Ready For The Morning' coffee was also something she had not heard of. Note that for followup as well. Miss Militia was somewhat vexed by not having had a chance to sample the product.

"Non-parahuman captures will be sent to the police at approximately 0900 hours today. Skidmark and Mush are already in containment cells as they are treated for injuries.

"According to current files, the only remaining parahumans under the Archer Bridge Merchants is their Tinker - Squealer.

"Addendum: Archer Bridge Merchants is believed now currently in the single cape grouping, along with: the Usual Suspects, Yonkers Lane Thugs, Captain's Hill Jokers, and the Brockton Bedeviltry.

"Addendum Two: Make sure that the current list of Armsmaster brand products do not include anything particularly inappropriate. We do not need another fiasco like the panties."

* Saturday, September 20 2009 *

The receptionist blinked and looked over the group. "Zenko and?"

"Sub-Zero," said the older guy in a dark blue flight suit and mask.

"Erwin Leibowitz, just an old fisherman learning a few tricks," said the old man.

"Armsmaster will be with you shortly, if you'll take seats over there," said the receptionist.

The wait was, mercifully, brief. Possibly because Zenko walked up a wall and from there to the ceiling, then just sat down as if there was an invisible chair there while she read a magazine that wasn't there.

Her? Trolling the Parahuman Response Team? Why, thought never crossed her mind.

She definitely wasn't showing off for the kids that were coming out of the gift shop.

"Ah, Miss Zenko. How's it going?"

"Oh, you're that..." Zenko let go of the ceiling and gracefully flipped to land on her feet.

"Detective Fish," supplied the old PRT man. "Good to see you're still going."

"What can I say?" said Zenko with a grin. "I like staying out of trouble."

"Oh, don't we all wish we could hear that more around here," said Detective Fish. "Changed costumes? Looks nice."

"Yes, well, had a bit of an accident with the old one," said Zenko.

"Well, if you will all follow me, the people in charge wanted to get testing done so they have the real data about this stuff before they discuss the implications and such," said Fish, indicating the elevators.

* Conference Room 'Beta' *

"So these abilities can be taught," observed Director Piggot.

"Initial data suggests that to be so, though to a lesser extent than the two primaries demonstrate," agreed Armsmaster as he looked over the in-progress data the testers were providing.

"There's a family resemblance, though the older doesn't have fox ears or a tail," noted Researcher Atkinson, bringing up a facial analysis on one of the screens. "Probably father and daughter, which makes Zenko a Second Generation Parahuman."

"The animal bits are probably part of the suspected Changer ability," offered Armsmaster.

"Stick to the subject of today's testing - which is the teaching of abilities to non-parahumans," said Director Piggot. "That's our area of concern after all."

"We have three volunteers who have passed the background checks for joining this class," said Atkinson. "Trooper Cynthia Anderson. Ted Carroll over in the motor pool. Oh, and Jerry Pidec in Research."

"Why someone in the motor pool?" asked Director Piggot.

"Apparently the strength and healing would be useful considering some of the parts needed to maintain the transports," answered Atkinson.

"Very well," said Director Piggot. "That older man. Something odd about him."

Deputy Director Renick consulted his tablet. "Erwin Leibowitz. Retired in Brockton Bay since the early 90s. Not able to get much on his background - apparently he was a commercial fisherman working for the Four Leaf fishpacking plant in Boston which has since gone bankrupt and folded. It's known that he spends most of his time fishing in his own boat, and that he's prone to telling tall tales over at a dockside bar."

"Strength and endurance and running ratings are what you might expect from someone in their 20s and some training on Mister Leibowitz. Not enough for a Brute or Mover rating, but still a lot higher than you would expect from someone his age. That lasted for three minutes thirty-seven seconds at which point his bio-energy enhancement reserves were depleted," said Armsmaster as he looked over several graphs. "If this training performs like similar non-parahuman training, the time enhanced might increase steadily with practice."

Director Piggot hmphed. "We'll see. What about the two parahumans?"

"Sub-Zero has some hydrokinesis coupled with an energy-absorbing ability," said Armsmaster. "Shaker 4 due to limited range and the apparent need for atmospheric water to draw upon. Same bio-energy manipulation as with Zenko."

"Zenko cannot do these tricks with ice?" asked Director Piggot.

"She denied it when questioned, and has not demonstrated such abilities," Armsmaster noted while bringing up the appropriate section of the report. "They're testing speed on the treadmills now while Leibowitz recovers."

Director Piggot watched for a few seconds as one of the screens was displaying live data. "I thought Zenko was only able to run at 25mph."

"Clearly she has either improved or she holds back in traversing the city," observed Armsmaster. "Sub-Zero is clearly slower at a top speed of 64mph. Zenko is much better at acceleration as well."

"Hmph. When they're done, let me know. I've got to send preliminary findings up the chain," said Director Piggot. "Renick, I'll leave you in charge of this. If they can teach even bursts of that enhancement ability, it could be invaluable for strike teams."

"Wait. Something just happened," said Armsmaster, as he leaned over one display and then began typing again. A scene from the testing room replayed.

"She changed position but we knew she was fast," commented Renick.

"Sensors also picked up several anomalous readings, trying to find a match," noted Armsmaster. "At the exact moment she moved."

"Something new?" asked Director Piggot, having stopped walking towards the door.

Researcher Atkinson hmphed as he looked over the screens. "She was in a conversation with Doctor Sterling. Let me pull it up to see if there's a clue."

Armsmaster straightened. "I have a match. Not exactly, but readings are similar to those of a Grey Boy bubble at the point of reset."

* Taylor *

"Interesting," said Doctor Sterling. "This bio-energy seems not only useful but multi-purpose, but normal instrumentation doesn't seem to indicate any such field. If it's not a problem, I would dearly like to be able to examine projections of this energy."

[Cruxpoint!]
[Further cooperation with the PRT, with the possibility of suspicions of you holding back, OR]
[Stonewall them, with the guarantee of you keeping secrets and further suspicions.]

[Do you wish to postpone the roll at this point?]


"No..." said Zenko, thinking this was a really bad time for the Dojo to send something her way but answering the Doctor.

"Excellent," said Doctor Sterling.

[Roll:6 Ninja Academy]

Zenko got a little excited and tried not to show it. There was the pause, waiting for her to defer, then it continued on with the sound of a roulette wheel being spun again. This though she wanted, as she very much wanted more training in what was basically her brand at this point.

"Something wrong?" asked Doctor Sterling.

"No, not at all." Taylor listened to the clicking noise slow and gradually come to a stop.

There was a brief flicker and Taylor moved a bit. Taylor smiled. "Nothing wrong at all."
 
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Orochimaru's very name will bring terror to the ABB, especially the Japanese members...they may not know Orochimaru, but they know of the 8 headed serpent he's named after...
 
Good chapter and while seeing Taylor getting more ninja training is good, the real highlight I feel is Orochimaru getting Coil.

Because let's face it, Orochimaru would have been a better villain then Coil. He at least has the ability to back up his ego unlike Mr. Save Scumming through a math using alien bio-computer.

Although I will admit that she is going to need something to help deal with a Endbringer because unless she gets Bijuu level assistance, she is going to be stuck in a bad situation. Especially if it becomes known that she can teach such abilities.

So here's hoping Saint Seiya, Gekijyuken, or something similar gets rolled sooner rather then later.
 
Taylor is under no obligation to tell them everything. Power testing and explaining anything is an act of good will. If they complain it tells her about the organization.

Happy to see this continue. Taylor is sassy.
 
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We should be worried about the snake being out and about but really, 1) Whatever is running the DOJO is probably watching him and 2) He has a wealth of acceptable targets.
 
every time I see a update for this story I think of that ninja turtle song go ninja go ninja go. Thanks for the chapter.
 
If Orocimaru didn't imply that his time was limited, I'd be more concerned, as is, I wonder if he'll have a neat package to deliver to Taylor instead...
 
Oh Brian, you're going to be banging your head against a wall later for not paying attention, especially after being punked by the skills your little sister would develop by training as a Shinobi, and it would be very ironic if Aisha had great aptitude and talent for that (better than having been triggered by a very close encounter with E88)

As for OrochiVictor, with his abilities (even in Victor's body), getting rid of Coil was a piece of cake, very easy, and I suppose E88 would follow the same fate, being curious what more will emerge from this subplot

In addition to the report to the PRT, either by Piggot or Armsmaster, mmm, definitely Piggot, noting mentions of Sub-Zero (Danny, I like the idea of the name, especially since, like Taylor, he is not showing all of his abilities , which is a good thing, since they are Ninjas after all and it's not a bad thing that they keep some secrets), in addition to laughing at the PRT Gift Box for new Parahumans and its contents (I could have almost sworn that it was the work of a certain Chaos Kitty )

That and apparently the PRT can detect the moments when Taylor receives "notifications" from the Celestial Dojo? This time she is receiving another ninja technique, which makes her very happy, since it is in keeping with her brand, in addition to being curious about what she would receive this time. (a contract to be able to summon the Bijuus? or some other summon?, just imagine Zenko being able to sic Bahamuth to Zis, Shiva vs Leviathan, or Burning Godzilla vs Behemoth - and the backslash that Eidolon may or may not receive because of removing an Endbringer)

Good luck and keep it up
 
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