I'm going to have to ask you to elaborate a bit more on the sheet, it's a bit vague.
Same as above. I'm only very basically familiar with MtG, I don't know what half of this refers to.
You can join whatever faction you like. The consequences of doing so vary, but the option is there.
Player Username: Forgotton Future
Character Name: Duna
Age: 19
Gender: Female
Avatar (if applicable):
Appearance:
Roughly five feet or so tall.Species: Dinaurian
She's roughly 10 feet tall in this form.
Universe of Origin (of the powerset and body): Fossil Fighters
Powers and Abilities:Gear:Form Change: At will she can switch between her normal form or her battle form. In her normal form she's twice as tough, fast, and strong as the average human. In her battle form she's strong enough to jump twenty feet and to kick holes in steel. Her battle form's claws and fangs are sharp enough to cut through steel like it's meat, and her scales are twice as tough as a bulletproof vest.
Hydrokinesis: In both forms, though this is easier in her battle form, she is capable of psychically controlling water in the air around her and liquid water she can see. She can control up to 10 gallons of water in her normal form, and 20 in her battle form. Using hydrokinesis tires her out over time, and over use can make her faint.
Confusion: In both forms she is capable of psychically inducing confusion in her foes. If she overpower's the target's will, they are put into a state of confusion where they may act erratically, or just do nothing depending on the target.----Ray Gun: A black space gun that shoots bolts of electricity. It has two settings, one of which is basically a taser in terms of charge, while the other can kill via electrocution and burns.
Pocket Space: A pocket space which she can store anything she owns and is touching in. When she transforms into her battle form, anything she is holding and wearing is teleported into her pocketspace for retrieval when she turns back. She can summon anything in it to her hands/to right in front of her.
Disguise Device: A small little metal circle with two buttons, one red, one blue. When the red button is pressed, it uses holograms to transform her into a human version of her normal form with blond hair, pale skin, and a white dress. When the blue button is pressed it de-transforms her. Her pocket space is mostly for ease of transformation and carrying stuff, so it will only hold one of any kind of weapon at a time.
Did this in PMs with @EXiCUR
Not ya sister but I'll take the welcome. Sooo thoughts? Just asking for people's thoughts in general on my sheet.
Pretty cool, Water bender Dinosaur lady is rad.
Only one's a alien and the other's a magic I have no idea.
*Psychic Alien* Wander Bender Dinosaur Lady. and thanks
ok so basically Lucas can lift the average car, can run at 224.3 mph. and Apophenia is being a Super Detective for example Lucas can tell if a tomato is poised by its weight .
We went over most of the issues I have with this, and I see it's been edited accordingly.
I'm gonna limit the amount of storage this has, and I'd like you to quantify what you have in it because as it is it's just a bag of kitchen sinks.
...right.
yeah this
Already ok'd.
As noted, already ok'd.
It looks fine, but I'd like a bit more detail if possible. Sort of sparse, at the moment.
Seems to work, we discussed some of the things already as well.
ok I put him at 30 mph and is as smart as Tattletale is that a good nerf.We went over most of the issues I have with this, and I see it's been edited accordingly.
I'm gonna limit the amount of storage this has, and I'd like you to quantify what you have in it because as it is it's just a bag of kitchen sinks.
...right.
yeah this
this is gonna need to be nerfed heavily, that's a bit much
Aside from that, the rest of it seems ok.
Already ok'd.
As noted, already ok'd.
It looks fine, but I'd like a bit more detail if possible. Sort of sparse, at the moment.
That speed is definitely going to need to go down - two hundred is nearing the lift-off speed for cars, that's way too high. The strength is fine, but...yeah, that's going beyond Worm-Tattletale super-deduction and into just nonsense. I get what you're going for there, but that is just way too unreasonable - judging from your example, not all tomatoes even have the same weight, it is effectively impossible to tell (also some poisons would need a tiny amount that is negligible in terms of weight anyways so yeah)
We went over most of the issues I have with this, and I see it's been edited accordingly.
I'm gonna limit the amount of storage this has, and I'd like you to quantify what you have in it because as it is it's just a bag of kitchen sinks.
...right.
yeah this
this is gonna need to be nerfed heavily, that's a bit much
Aside from that, the rest of it seems ok.
Already ok'd.
As noted, already ok'd.
It looks fine, but I'd like a bit more detail if possible. Sort of sparse, at the moment.
That speed is definitely going to need to go down - two hundred is nearing the lift-off speed for cars, that's way too high. The strength is fine, but...yeah, that's going beyond Worm-Tattletale super-deduction and into just nonsense. I get what you're going for there, but that is just way too unreasonable - judging from your example, not all tomatoes even have the same weight, it is effectively impossible to tell (also some poisons would need a tiny amount that is negligible in terms of weight anyways so yeah)
The idea is that he follows a 'lifebar' of sorts and since he is wrestler archetype he's got to sell moves. Everyone in the characters can whup his ass, this is based off Captain America's shield.
Our first baseline, hurrah. Normally I don't allow absolutes but we've discussed it, so it's fine here.
Speed is fine, I'm assuming you mean Tattletale-level deduction, which is still pretty high, but I'm going to need confirmation what you mean by that - TT's power in canon is very useful but also gives her raging migraines as a nerf, so having the same level of capability while also being a supersoldier with no drawbacks is...well, you're going to have to sell me on it.
Hm. I'm generally not a huge fan of something very game mechanic-y, why not just give him enhanced durability in general? Captain America's shield is also basically indestructible, which is giving me some level of doubt.
Lucas is a scatter brain that to take all his power to focus and the raging migraine thing is what happens a lot even when he's not using Apophenia.
