SASUKE: The Fanfiction

Out of curiosity, Is it just me or has Sasukes character had a sudden shift in personality with this chapter?

Oddly extroverted is as close as I can think of to describe it.
He is mostly just happy he got his hands on the Uchiha tablet. Also, he was never introverted. MC actually values interacting with others; its harder for secrets to remain hidden when two people interact. He just never had the opportunity to interact on screen without rousing the suspicion of his ANBU shadows.
 
010 - In Pleasant Company
010 - In Pleasant Company
KONOHA​

We arrived in front of the BBQ saloon at exactly four twenty-nine after midday. Temari and Kankuro were already there, waiting. "Hello again, Temari. Kankuro," We greeted before looking around for the redhead. "Gaara couldn't make it?"

"No," Temari said siding up to us as she tucked a strand of her hair behind her ear.

"He was… busy," Kankuro added. The shinobi took our other flank, essentially boxing us in. Noticing this, we partitioned a section of our attention towards monitoring the duo's chakra. Sure, we were in the centre of the village and the likelihood of us being attacked was negligible, it still wasn't zero. Similarly, we paid their assertions to be Genin no mind. There were no absolutes in the world, nor did we imagine ourself invulnerable—not even in the face of the so-called "junior shinobi".

Gaara's absence was an unfortunate turn of events. It would have been nice to have him around. The bloodlust in his scent was a rather curious thing; thick and heavy which chakra in a manner we had never experienced before. How we would have cherished the opportunity to investigate it in a non-combat scenario. Alas, after today, we doubted we would ever get such an opportunity again

Dispelling these thoughts from our mind, we glanced at the girl. From her posture, and the tension between herself and Kankuro, it was apparent that Temari was the only one eager to be there. It was a fortunate thing that human females found our current appearance attractive. We were well aware of the usefulness of having a pretty face and were always on the lookout for new ways to improve our appearance.

"Have you eaten yet?" we asked Temari, ignoring her brother in favour of speaking with her.

"No." Came her reply, curt in a manner that suggested bashfulness. She reminded us of both Ino and Sakura, both of whom tended to behave in a similar manner whenever we went out with them on trips such as this. Strange things females were. Familiar in an unending myriad of ways, yet all so… varied.

"Well then," we said, turning to face the building in front of us, "since we are already here, why not have some barbeque before we leave?"

"I would like that."

"Kankuro?"

"Sure. Whatever."

As agreed, we had a bit of barbeque before leaving to "sightsee". At the end of the day, even with the associated risks of fraternizing with an unfamiliar group of shinobi, as well as the loss in form of Gaara's absence, we deemed the trip a reasonably significant success. After bidding the duo goodbye we made our way back towards our domicile. As predicted, Temari proved herself our most pleasing companion today. There was so much new information we needed to sort and put down in writing.

Oh, how pleasant!

***​

A Week Later.

We arrived at the academy fifteen minutes before four to see our teammates waiting outside for us. "You're late again!" Naruto shouted, jabbing his right index finger in our face. His digits stank of garlic and miso.

"No, I am not," we replied, gently brushing the boy's offensive appendage away. "You are just early. Also, were you eating with your bare hands? They stink."

"...No," Naruto replied, his demeanour so blatantly suspicious it was almost amusing.

"Stop bothering Sasuke, Naruto," Sakura chided. We turned to face her, nodding in lieu of a greeting.

"Good morning, Sasuke," she said. "How was your night?"

"Fine. We're all set, right?" we ask. The duo nodded. "Let go in then."

***​

"Hey!" a voice called behind us. "You're Sasuke, right?"

We paused mid-stride. Turning around, we gave the speaker a once-over. A boy, oddly enough, wearing a light green bodysuit, with orange leg warmers wrapped around his calf stood behind us. His hair was a shiny black bowl-cut, his eye round and crowned with prominent lower eyelashes, and very thick eyebrows giving him a rather… distinct look.

"Yes…" we replied hesitantly, unsure of the reason he sought to speak with us.

"Hi. My name is Rock Lee."

"...Yes?"

"You and me, here and now… Wanna fight?" he said, assuming a stance.

We looked at the Genin, then at the crowd of foreign, unfamiliar shinobi surrounding us, before turning back to face him in askance. "You are asking for a duel? Here?"

"Yes!" Lee replied vigorously. "I have heard much about you from my master! He warned me to be wary of you these coming exams!"

"...And you still wanted to have a duel with me? Here?" we asked, baffled still. Sakura stared at the fellow in confusion. For some reason, Naruto seemed to have taken offence at not being the victim of this unwanted situation. Sadly enough, even that was not unexpected.

"Yes! Your prowess intrigues me! I want to test the effectiveness of my techniques against the infamous…. Uchiha Sasuke. Our battle would be—"

"Oh, shut up!" A brown-haired girl, in a pink sleeveless jacket appeared behind Lee, interrupting him as she dragged him back to the other end of the hallway.

"But! Tenten!"

"Let's go!" she said, cutting him off again. "I am sorry about him," she apologised as she dragged her colleague away by the collar. We watched the bickering duo disappear down the crowded hallway before turning to face the Hyuga boy silently staring at us.

"What?" we asked, and without saying a word, he turned around and left in the direction of his companions.

"Why is everyone acting so weird today?" we mumbled to ourself.

"...I don't know," Sakura replied, still staring at the departing shinobi.

***​

"...Next is Gaara of the Sand. Desert country. Six C-rank missions and two Bs. Wow! Very few rookie shinobi ever get a single B-rank assignment before graduating, much less two. Since he's from the desert, I have less on him… But you want to know what's interesting? He comes back from every mission… Unscathed! Without a scratch!"

We stared at the stack of cards in Kabuto's hand, and for the first time in our life, we experienced a certain stirring in our guts. Greed, we realised.

"Ah!" Kiba smirked folding his arms. "Do Sasuke next!" he demanded.

Our gaze whipped around to face the mutt. "Please don't," we replied. Unlike most of the fools gathered here today, we would rather not have any data regarding us, no matter how irrelevant, up for public perusal.

But of course, we were completely ignored, Naruto and Kiba goading Kabuto on. "Uchiha Sasuke," the older shinobi began, "the Evil Flame. Konoha. Twenty-five D-rank missions. Specialisations… Unknown. At age six… he was reported to have singlehandedly murdered a certain Fuu Yamanaka, an ANBU-nin from Konohagakure…"

A weighty pause followed.

"At age six… he was rumoured to have attained mastery of a high-level fire-style Jutsu with which he razed a fifth of the Uchiha district… At age six… he was rumoured to have activated the Uchiha clan's unique Kekkei Genkai… The Sharingan."

The hall had fallen silent, with every pair of eyes in the room turned to face us. Shit.
 
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Well if he win then he will be chunin with no C rang missions... That's failure on the teacher's side imho.
 
INTERLUDE (1)
INTERLUDE
KONOHA​

Six Years Ago.

"...Patriarch?" Inoichi mumbled in wonder as the Uchiha boy exited the room. Frowning, he glanced at the Hokage; the older shinobi's gaze remained fixed on the door that had just shut behind the boy. Hiruzen's shoulders sagged. At that moment, he looked to have aged ten years.

A knock came from beyond the door. The flimsy wooded barrier, absolutely littered with kanji and Fūinjutsu seals, opened as Kotetsu, one of his subordinates from the Intelligence Division, entered.

"Yes?" Inochi asked the Tokubetsu-jōnin.

"The analysis team have compiled their report, Leader-san."

The Yamanaka patriarch received the scroll containing the report, skimming through it as the Tokubetsu-jōnin departed the council. "Any progress with Fuu?" Hiruzen asked. Inoichi shook his head.

"They arrived at the same conclusion I did, Hokage-sama. Whatever technique the boy used was insidious beyond belief. It targets the soul, corroding it, near-absolutely; easily S-rank… Even in this gathering, few would survive being subjected to it."

The room fell silent.

"...I would evaluate the boy an A-rank threat. Deadly, yes, but a glass cannon nonetheless. Given the state he was in when the ANBU arrived, he would be hard-pressed to use the technique more than once in quick succession. Even then, it would be unlikely he survives such a strain on his chakra network."

"That's unlikely to remain true for the foreseeable future," Shimura grounded out, his gravelly voice filling the silence that followed Inoichi's announcement. "The boy has shown potential unsurpassed by any before him. Not even Itachi showed this much promise. His mastery of the fire-style jutsu he used against Fuu would easily rival that of most Jōnin… Hiruzen… The boy must not be allowed to live."

Surprise coloured Inoichi's expression for a split second before it was immediately suppressed. The killing intent with which Danzo spoke those words raised the hackles at the back of the Yamanaka's patriarch's neck.

"Danzo…" the Hokage rumbled, his countenance turning grave. "You speak of the hatred he carries with such trepidation, yet all you've done since is fan the flames. Did you truly believe Konohagakure would have gone unscathed if you succeeded in murdering the boy? ... You subvert my authority time and time again. It seems I have been too lax with you You will resign from your post as councilman today. Sasuke is to remain untouched; all information on this matter is now classified up to S-rank."

Inoichi could no longer suppress his surprise. Neither could any of his fellow council members. 'It seems there's more to this matter than meets the eye,' the Yamanaka patriarch realised, his expression turning grave.

***​
A Week Ago.

Sarutobi inhaled deeply, the smoke from his pipe filling his lungs. "Now then," he said, putting the pipe aside, "I'd like to hear first from those who have overseen the training of our newest junior ninja. Masters Kakashi, Kurenai and Asuma, tell me, do any of you have, among your charges, any genin you would recommend for this year's Chūnin exams?"

Sarutobi took another lungful of tobacco before continuing. "Remember, before I consider them, they must have completed a minimum of eight missions. Beyond that, I would urge you to employ your own judgement as to whether or not they are fit to attempt the exams. To be truly competitive, candidates should have completed at least double the recommended number of missions, and have shown maturity and competence befitting of a shinobi of their status … Kurenai, you may begin."

"Yes, Hokage-sama," the red-eyed woman replied. "I recommend my charge, cell number eight consisting of Hyuga Hinata, Izunuka Kiba and Aburame Shino. I believe these three are ready to attempt this year's Journeymen Exams."

Sarutobi nodded, his gaze panning towards Asuma. "Asuma?"

"Yes, Hokage-sama. I recommend my charge, cell number ten consisting of Yamanaka Ino, Akimichi Choji and Nara Shikamaru. I believe these three are also ready to attempt this year's Journeymen Exams."

"Kakashi?"

"I recommend cell number seven consisting of Uzumaki Naruto, Haruno Sakura and Uchiha Sasuke. As with my colleagues, I also believe these three are ready to attempt this year's Chūnin Exams, Hokage-sama."

Sarutobi paused, shooting a glance at the silver-haired shinobi. "...How unusual of you three to have unhesitantly assented. Especially you Kakashi. I have my doubts as to whether Team Seven, in its entirety, is truly capable of undergoing this hurdle… Are you certain your response did not stem from bias in light of a certain Genin's… outstanding brilliance? Certainly, they are all bright and have shown both commitment and talent… But isn't it too soon for Naruto and Sakura to take these exams?"

"...I understand your hesitation, Hokage-sama," Kakashi began, "and in a way, I share them as well. But still, I believe this is the right choice. For their sakes… and Sasuke's too."

"It's a harsh and unforgiving test, Kakashi. You might be rushing them into it. Only with time will they have the experience and maturity required for this."

"I understand, Hokage-sama, but I remain adamant... I believe in them; what my kids lack in experience they more than make up for in surprise."

"...Have it your way, then. But remember, I would be holding you accountable for whatever comes of this."

"I understand, Hokage-sama."

***​
Orochimaru knelt by one of the corpses by his feet. He liked this one; its face was soft and feminine with just the right amount of edge to give off a predatory vibe. Its body was tall and lean, packed with dense musculature that hinted towards the masculine nature of its identity. It was perfect.

With his vanity sated, the sanin called upon his chakra. His hands formed the Snake seal; then Dog and Monkey, both distilling copying and transformation natures respectively into the technique. Dragon followed after, to facilitate the merging of identities, with Rat ending the technique.

"Shōshagan no Jutsu," he mumbled. Vanishing facial copy jutsu. Orochimaru felt his chakra drain into the palm of his right hand as the technique took hold. With a smile he reached out for the corpse's face, caressing it as his chakra mythically peeled it away, leaving behind a featureless head. He placed the skin mask on his face, inhaling as it bound to his skin.

His hand came away, falling to his side. He smiled, then frowned, testing the disguise before directing his attention towards his figure. His chakra churned again, his body morphing to mimic the form of the corpse by his feet as he executed Henge no Jutsu. The two techniques worked together in tandem, perfecting themselves until his transformation became flawless.

Orochimaru glanced at the men who stood by his side. Being reasonably competent, his two subordinates had also performed the technique flawlessly. It was a small testament to their skill as shinobi as the Jutsu was one that required a level of chakra control most Shinobi would be hard-pressed to possess.

Glancing back at the corpse of the Kusa-nin by his feet, the snake-sanin reached into its garments. His search was quickly rewarded as his hands came away, holding a bundle of papers. Travel documents and a recommendation granting permission to partake in this year's Chūnin exams. With a smile, Orochimaru tucked the papers away in the folds of his clothing before forming a one-handed seal and flickering away from the scene, his accomplices in tow.

***​
Orochimaru arrived, undetected, at the academy minutes later. There he waited under the shade of a tree.

His patience was rewarded a few minutes later as a figure flickered into view.

"...Sasuke. Uchiha," the snake-sanin exhaled, unable to contain himself. The boy was everything he expected and more. A simple, dark-blue kimono hung from his shoulders, concealing the silk mesh, forearm guards and other shinobi accessories he wore underneath. The garment was embroidered with the image of an uchiwa on the back and high-collared in the manner the Uchiha were so fond of. His long, silken mane hung loosely from his head, dancing hypnotically every once in a while in the afternoon breeze. On his feet were a pair of Getas, the sagely, wooden footwear raising his height by an extra inch.

His face and his body were very beautiful and set into hard lines that belied a maturity far beyond that of his peers.

"...Yes," Orochimaru breathed again. "He would make the perfect vessel to succeed me…"
 
For those wondering what Sasuke looks like. I based him on this image:


Yes, yes. I know it's Madara. That was intentional on my part. You'll see why so enough.


Geta (Jiraiya's footwear):

Geta
 
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Have you guys seen Shoganai? It's a Naruto fanfic I just finished binging. Loved it! Do check it out, I am sure you won't be disappointed.
 
For some reason I suspect that Orochimaru would find no more luck with Sasuke then with Itachi.
 
011 - The Exams {PT. I}
011 - The Exams {PT. I}
KONOHA​

Present Day.

"Sorry to have kept you waiting!" boomed the voice of one of the newcomers. We turned around to the sight of a group of shinobis gathered behind us, the tell-tale signs of swirling chakra manifesting as a cloud of white smoke around them.

"My name is Morino Ibiki," the leader of the group continued. We glanced at his scarred face, and for a brief moment caught his gaze fixed upon of form. Hmm? "I am the chief examiner and proctor for the first part of this exam. Before we start I would like to lay a few ground rules. From this point onward, there would be no fighting without the express permission of an examining officer. Even if that permission is granted, anything that endangers another applicant's life unnecessarily is strictly forbidden. Any of you little piglets who break these rules would be immediately disqualified. No second chances. Got that?"

The hall remained silent, but we could feel the atmosphere in the room take on a disdainful flavour. Sneers formed on the faces of many of the shinobi gathered upon hearing this. "...So this is a test for little girly men?" whispered one particularly gutsy Otogakure fellow. Ibiki's gaze flickered towards him but the older shinobi remained silent.

"You've all been given a tag," the scarred proctor continued. "Each tag is numbered and corresponds to your respective seats in this hall. I need not tell you what needs to be done. You have five minutes."

We glared one last time at Kabuto and Kiba before reaching into our obi for our tag. The next moment our gaze panned across the room in search of seat ninety-seven. There! on the fifth row, seventeenth column.

"Uhm…" Naruto began. We glanced at the boy, before shaking our head in mimicry of the human expression most appropriate for this situation. Exasperation. We weren't even surprised. In a way, one could say we expected this.

"He means the number on your tag corresponds to the number on your seat in the hall," we tell the blonde, predicting his question. We glanced at his tag before immediately looking towards the rows of seats in the hall. "There," we said, "Seat number fifty-seven."

"I knew that!" Naruto lied before immediately scampering off towards his seat. "Good luck, Sakura!" he shouted as he left. The girl ignored him as she turned to regard us.

"Good luck," she mumbled, fidgeting.

"You too, Sakura," we replied as we made our way towards our seat.

We sat down, eyes flickering towards each proctor in our field of vision. The examiners were scattered about the room. In our perception, we could sense a few more in hiding. All were Jōnin. Even for us, cheating during this exam could very well be impossible.

We glanced at the two flanking us. To our left was a girl with red hair and glasses. The headband on her forehead bore the jagged engraving signature to Shinobi from Kusagakure. Her gaze kept flickering towards us, a faint blush staining her face. We ignored her, our attention flickering towards the Hyuga girl on our right. We knew her. It was hard not to given we were classmates for six years. As usual, her gaze was fixated on the orange-clad figure seated ahead of us. We never really understood her fixation with Naruto. It was strange. It confused us. We disliked being confused.

A Tokubetsu jōnin flickered by and three sheets of paper floated down unto the table in front of us.

"Keep your papers down until I signal the start of the exam," Ibiki instructed from the front of the hall. "Now listen up," he continued, "there are a few big rules that pertain to this first test. I will write them on the blackboard and explain them all. I will not be taking any questions, and I will only be saying this once, so pay attention!

"Rule number one! Each of you starts out with thirty points. The test has thirty questions, each worth one point. For each question you get wrong, we subtract one point. Rule number two! This written test is still a team event. Passing or failing will be determined by the sum of the points held by all three members of each cell. The object for each cell is to have as few deductions as possible from its joint ninety-point total.

"Rule number three, if, during the course of the exam, a candidate does anything out of the ordinary, in other words, anything that leads the proctors to determine that he or she has cheated, we'll subtract two points from each member of the cheater's cell. Rule number four, if any individual loses more than half of their total points, that person's entire cell, regardless of how well the others do… would be disqualified.

"And finally, rule number five. Only the top twenty-five of the teams gathered today would pass. Regardless of how well the other teams perform, they would all be disqualified. You have an hour to complete the test. You may begin."
 
012 - The Exams {PT. II}
012 - The Exams {PT. II}
KONOHA​

"...Question number fifteen. A shinobi, elevated on the bough of a tree, throws a steel kunai weighing 67.1 grams at an enemy 113 meters away on ground level. It is known that the velocity of the kunai at the point of launch is 89.408m/s, the air resistance acting on the kunai is 14.7N, and the elevation to the target is 8.37 meters. If the force of gravity on a body of mass 1gm in a similar state equals 1.4N, calculate; the force of gravity acting on the kunai, the acceleration vector of the kunai in motion, and the final velocity upon impact."

We looked up at the chief examiner, Ibiki, who stood stoically at the front of the hall before glancing back at the questions on the table in front of us. There was no way Naruto could solve any of these questions. We glanced at the boy. Sure enough, he stared at his script with the paleness of a man on death row.

Shaken, horrified, the demon container curled into himself, clutching his bright orange hair, his face bearing an expression of utter despair. We shook our head internally. We could not allow his inaptitude to constitute a barrier to our progress. We could not fail this exam.

With about one-eight of the stealthiness and fluidity we were capable of, our hands flashed, forming a modified Ox, then Dragon, seal. As we executed the technique, a subtle but concentrated burst of chakra shot out of our glabella towards Naruto. Of course, as predicted, the boy's potent chakra naturally resisted the invasion of our essence. But with a deftness that spoke of experience and months of diligent practice, we bypassed the resistance, slithering up his chakra network into his brain to stimulate his hypothalamus. The next moment, our teammate yawned, muttering some words lightly under his breath before immediately falling asleep.

A few examiners and examinees glanced at the boy snoring loudly as he lay sprawled over his table, their expressions turning strange at the sight. Experiencing a bout of genuine exasperation, we guided our chakra towards his respiratory system to ease his nasal canal. He relax and only then did the snoring stop.

Satisfied and assured that our scores wouldn't be compromised should Naruto attempt to cheat, or worse, be intentionally implicated by another team, we turned our attention towards Sakura. Of course, we expected the girl to have little problems with the exam itself. Despite her tendency to play the role of a love-stricken ditz, she could be quite reliable if given enough motivation.

Although, currently, she was rather preoccupied with glaring at Naruto. Distracted. Not contributing positively to our collective scoreboard. We suppress the urge of our human ego to get annoyed. Instead, we executed the hand seals for Honshitsu Kisei no Jutsu again. Essence Parasitism Technique. Another pulse of concentrated Chakra shot out of our glabella towards Sakura. Unlike Naruto, the girl's resistance to the technique was seemingly nonexistent. Our Chakra effortlessly slithered up her Chakra network, dispersing itself with her. Our essence sublimed away, hardening her against most Genjutsu techniques after placing her under a Genjutsu of our own that compelled her to subconsciously ignore our blonde teammate and protect her answers from espionage.

Seeing the pink-haired girl hunch closer over her work in a childish bid to hide it from view we sighed before turning our attention back towards the proctors. Four points. We had already lost four points. Sakura and Naruto possibly lost two each for being our "accomplices". Naturally, our Jōnin supervisors would have noticed our chakra expenditure. We considered Sakura for a moment before shaking our heading internally. It wasn't worth it to lose another two points just to ingrain in her subconscious the necessary skills to protect herself from copycats. Instead, we turned our attention towards the rest of the examinees.

In a span of three breaths, we had sorted out all our potential targets. All Genin from Konohagakure were excluded. Same as all non-native genin we had had friendly relations with. This decision was not born of us developing a sentimental attitude towards these individuals. Rather, we did this solely to present the guise of being sentimental whilst under the scrutiny of so many of Konoha's elite shinobi. Ignoring the low-hanging fruits that were the inexperienced Konoha Genins was in our opinion a very, very minuscule price to pay in light of our more… long-term ambitions.

Despite this decision, we still had a very large pool of targets to deal with. They were organised into their respective cells; the more competent members of each team we sieved out. All that was left were the weak links. These were all we needed. After all, Ibiki did clarify that the exam was a team effort. Should a single member be disqualified for, say cheating, the entire team would be disqualified.

Our chakra churned. One proctor's head swivelled to regard us. Six points. The loss was negligible in light of what we aimed to achieve. Our hands flickered, nine hand signs forming in quick succession. Reverse Rat suppressed our chakra signature at the cost of efficiency. Modified Tiger-Ox amplify it at the cost of even more efficiency. Dog, Snake and Monkey followed in quick succession, the first two facilitating chakra transformation with the third copying the targets' chakra signature. Dragon merged attributes into a facsimile of the original. Modified Ox and Hare to suppress evil intent, and finally Ram, to execute.

"Multi-essence Parasitism Technique!"

A cord of chakra slowly slithered out of our glabella, gliding like an ethereal serpent towards our first target, a boy from Otogakure seated directly in front of us. After extending about a meter out of our head the cord stopped then began writhing and splitting at the tip like some tortured creature. Then, suddenly, it branched out, shooting menacingly towards our over four dozen targets. The branches latched onto the unfortunate Genin, breaking off from the original as they melted away into their bodies.

Eight points.

Our attention returned to our sleeping teammate. Now came the riskiest part of our plan. Ibiki's attention swivelled to fully focus on us as our hands formed the Jutsu-specific hand sign for performing the Yamanaka clan's hidden technique. The same technique that a certain Fuu Yamanaka attempted to assassinate us with.

Shintenshin no Jutsu.

The Mind-Body Switch Technique.

The feeling of a portion of our soul being disembodied as it left our physical vessel in the form of spiritual energy was a strange one. The Hidden Jutsu had a different effect on us compared to other users. Given the nature of our soul, it was theoretically impossible for the technique to contain the amount of Chakra needed to move it in its entirety. It wasn't even fully manifested in reality, our fleshy shell wholly incapable of housing it.

Ten points.

Unlike with the speed with which our deceased assailant executed the Jutsu, our chakra moved sluggishly, straining under the weight of its burden. We stared ahead, not sparing the scarred Jōnin a glance as the technique acquired its target. With a heady rush, we felt our ego invade Naruto's mindscape, our eyes panning around to take in the familiar scenery. A filthy sewer, representing the continual corruption of the boy's Chakra pool by the demon he played host to, laid beneath our feet. At the other end from us was a great ornate gate. A glided cage one might say, with inlays of gold and black jade. Inside, hiding in the shadows of the farthest corner, sat a great orange fox restrained by golden chains. It glared at us with eyes alight with hate, malice…

And fear.

To imagine we once let ourself be frightened by such a pitiful creature… how undignified.

We ignored the fox, letting our chakra permeate the boy's own. Naruto's eyes opened and we stared at the outside world through them. On the table in front of us, his exam papers were covered in drool. We ignored the other Genin in the hall, some of whom suddenly, inexplicably, lost control of their chakra as they attempted to cheat through the exam. They were disqualified of course, and very quickly the hall grew bereft of competitors. On the other hand, we seemed to be doing alright. We cancelled the Hidden Jutsu, our mind snapping back in place as we returned to our body.

Twelve points.

Naruto awoke moments later. He looked around in confusion before looking down at his now-completed exam papers. The boy stared at it befuddled for a few moments before shrugging seemingly in acceptance and moving on. With a sigh, we looked down at our exam sheet. Empty without a single character written on it. We glanced at the wall clock hung behind Ibiki at the front of the class. Just fifteen minutes had passed since the start of the exam.

Well, at least, we still had time.
 
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What is to stop someone from just not answering any questions whatsoever,you start with 30 and marks get subtracted for questions you get wrong,not attempting the questions is not mentioned whatsoever
 
What is to stop someone from just not answering any questions whatsoever,you start with 30 and marks get subtracted for questions you get wrong,not attempting the questions is not mentioned whatsoever
...I didn't mention it, I guess, but not answering a question equates to an automatic deduction. It's a bit convoluted, yes, but that was how it was done in canon. I kinda want to keep little tidbits like that to keep this Fanfic as true to the original as possible.
 
013 - The Exams {PT. III}
013 - The Exams {PT. III}
KONOHA​

"...Uchiha Sasuke." Ibiki stared at the black-haired boy, his gaze squinted in an expression of solemn contemplation. When he made the decision to conduct the exam in the manner in which he did, the scarred proctor had considered the possibility of certain over-specialised Genins abusing the loopholes that were intentionally introduced into the examining structure. That was to be expected of course. Life wasn't in any way fair; the next generation of elite shinobi shouldn't be coddled into believing it was.

However, what Ibiki had failed to consider was the apparent ease with which some might exploit this very system. In hindsight, it was not so hard to believe that on his lonesome, using two possibly original techniques unknown to the shinobi world prior, the infamous Genin would plot the elimination of fourteen opposing cells. And counting.

Once was happenstance; twice, coincidence, probably; three times, definitely enemy action. After the eighth cell fell to his scheme, the majority of the rest of the examinees had already caught on to the Evil Flame's insidious plot. Although the majority still failed to ascertain the true origins of the assault, a pattern had already been established. The targets were visible for all to see. A few lucky ones, upon discovering the target painted on their backs, managed to dispel the hex before it implicated them. The rest could only sit in trepidation of being the next to fall victim.

Attempts were made to complete the exams honestly but with little success. Being able to answer the questions without cheating would defeat the aim of the test after all. They were meant to cheat their way out of the test. Yet, with one move, the Uchiha boy stole their only option away from them, effectively stranding them between Yomi and the First Asura.

To cheat, or not to cheat? This was the question of the day.

Defanged, frustrated and left without options a few Genin reacted rather… explosively, choosing to resort to senseless violence in the face of despair. They demanded the culprit behind their hopeless straits face them. Fight them. The fools. Insults were hurled and masculinities were challenged to no avail. Sasuke stared at the rabid characters impassively. Their words seemingly had no effect on him.

A few Jōnin rose to settle the crowd. The examinees' reactions were understandable of course, but not one that would be tolerated.

The first scapegoats served as a warning to the rest who would think of doing the same. Another team was disqualified as one of its members had predictably been caught trying to defy the odds. A heroic effort, true, but a foolish one nonetheless. The gloom in the air deepened. An aura of despair and misery loomed over the forms of dozens of examinees like an excluded ghost. Haunting.

Ibiki glanced at the cause of all this anguish. The Uchiha boy sat silently in his seat appearing to be the textbook definition of innocence. The chief examiner's gaze narrowed as the Uchiha's onyx eyes flickered to meet his. One of the boy's sculpted brows rose in a questioning manner., as if to say…

…What?

Ibiki sighed to himself as he broke eye contact. "Inoichi would be so pissed to hear that that fool allowed a six-year-old to copy a Hidden Jutsu during what was supposed to be a simple assassination mission. Evil Flame or not, that was still a very disgraceful showing, Fuu Yamanaka."

"Time's up!" Ibiki growled, eager to end the farce that this exam had become. A few voices arose in complaint but they were quickly ignored. The papers were collected and the scores were soon collated. With a sigh and begrudging glare shot towards the Uchiha, the scarred proctor announced the results.

***​

Predictably, we easily managed to keep our team's scores within the top twenty per cent despite suffering a twelve-point penalty ourself. Though our methods of accomplishing this came with some downsides.

For one, we had inadvertently confirmed possessing the Yamanaka clan's hidden Jutsu. This little tidbit of information might very well transform the entire dynamics of the relationship that existed between us and the village's upper echelon. The true extent of this change remains to be seen though. Either way, good or bad, we weren't really concerned. There were only so many ways the village could escalate without violating the unspoken truce that has existed between us since that last incident involving Fuu. They were at the moment, toothless.

Harmless.

Unsurprisingly, it was Naruto who proved to be the true nuisance. The blonde was elated to find out we scored the lowest in the team. He adamantly refused to let us hear the end of it, reiterating, time and time again how we were dragging the entire team down and how much better a shinobi he was. We quickly tuned him out, our attention focusing on the proctor that had replaced Ibiki in front of the hall.

"My name is—" *cough* "Hayate Gekko," said the Tokubetsu Jōnin, his words interspersed by dry, heaving coughs. "I—" *cough* "am the chief—" *cough* "examination officer for—" *cough**cough* "your second exam. Please—" *cough* "Follow me."

***​

The sign in front of our next exam venue read "Training Ground Zero-Nine". We arrived at the outskirt of a fenced forest about fifteen minutes after we departed from the academy. The wire fence that surrounded the forest towered exactly fifteen meters above us, its surface dotted intermittently with Fūinjutsu tags, that at a glance, were meant to keep whatever was inside sealed rather than prevent entry. A few plastic signs were hung on the gate to the forest. "No Trespassing!" one read. "DANGER!" read another. Multiple padlocks and loops of metal chains held the gates shut with even more Fūinjutsu tags stuck on to ensure the barrier was impervious to attacks of a more mystical nature.

*cough*

Our attention flickered back towards the chief examiner. "This is the ninth Battle Training Zone," the man began as he coughed into his curled fist, " also known—" *cough* "as Asura's Garden. It is Konohagakure's—" *cough* "sixth largest and most dangerous training ground." *cough* "Your objective for this—" *cough* "exam is a simple—" *cough* "King of the Hill. Each team—" *cough* "will be given a scroll containing—" *cough* "the details of the assignment. But—" *cough* "but before that. You will have to—" *cough* "sign these."

The Jōnin waved a stack of papers at us. Written boldly on the front of one of said papers were the words "CONSENT FORM" in large blocky fonts.

*cough*

"You all will need to sign before you can go in—" *cough* "And yes, it is important. Konoha should not—" *cough* "be held responsible for any of—" *cough* "your unfortunate—" *cough* "deaths after all."

The papers were distributed. Our eyes skimmed over the words on the page in our hands, before we pulled our Fūinjutsu ink brush from the folds of our kimono. Placing the bristled tip in our mouth, we sucked on it, coating it in chakra-infused saliva before using the now non-inert brush to sign our name at the back of the form. Shooting a glance at our teammates still engrossed in reading their forms, we submitted ours and awaited further instructions. Five minutes later the rest of the examinees submitted their forms and Gekko returned to address us.

"I will be giving—" *cough* "an overview—" *cough* "of your next assignment so pay close attention. There are twenty-five teams who will—" *cough* "be competing in this "King of the Hill" assignment. There are eight locations representing the target "castles"—" *cough* "scattered throughout the forest. Your mission is simple." *cough*. "Using the information in your scrolls, locate and secure the "castles" for the duration of the exam. Each team possessing control of a castle at the end of the exam"—" *cough* "would be deemed a "king" and would qualify to move on to participate in the exam preliminaries." *cough* *cough*

"This exam will hold for a duration of one hundred and sixty-eight hours. A week." *cough* "As for the rules of this exam; rule number one—" *cough* "Any team not in possession of a castle at the end of the exam is disqualified." *cough* "Rule number two, Any team that loses a member, either to severe injury or death, is disqualified." *cough* "Rule number three, losing possession of your mission scroll results in an automatic disqualification should you fail to retrieve it before the end of the exam. And finally—" *cough* "Rule number four, under no circumstances can you leave the forest before the exam concludes. Doing so would result in an immediate disqualification"

The Jōnin's sleepy gaze panned around as if for the first time he acknowledged the presence of the participants present. He coughed another one of those dry heaving coughs of his before exhaling, an aura of conclusion settling on his shoulders.

"When you've received the scroll containing your mission details, choose the gate you wish to begin from. You have fifteen minutes till the start of the exams."

*cough*

"Good luck."
 
Sasuke human everywhere where it matters to be shinobi, so there is not even the reason to check, if there even exist method to do so.
Oh, it's rather easy to find out he is not human. Any technique(Like the Yamanaka's mind-transfer Jutsu) that would interact with the soul will immediately out him. At least Kurama already knows. I don't imagine that fox being terrified of a mere human. Wary, yes, but not terrified.
 
014 - Phase Two {PT. I}
014 - Phase Two {PT. I}
KONOHA​

The massive trunks and boughs of the trees that made up the forest blurred past as we navigated our way north. On our heels were Naruto and Sakura, the two lagging behind despite our already significantly reduced speed. At such a sedated pace we might not get to our destination before sunset. The mere thought was irritating.

"Oi!" the blonde shouted from behind us, utterly obliterating our efforts to remain stealthy. "Sasuke! Slow down!"

We did, but not without turning around to shoot the boy a stern glare. "Be quiet would you," we told him. "You are making a racket."

"I AM NOT!"

"Yes, you are, Naruto. And if you don't stop you will alert everyone within a mile of here to our presence."

"I AM NOT! AND YOU NEED TO SLOW—" We flickered behind him, placing our open palm on his back. Chakra surged out from our guts, invading his meridian system with practised ease. The demon fox within him instinctively tried to push back against our intrusion, but as usual, smothering it with the mere weight of our attention was all it took to make it behave. Naruto's eyelids grew heavy before suddenly shutting close as he fell asleep. His body however continued to fly towards a tree in front, carried forth by his forward momentum. But before he could collide with the obstacle we pulled on the scruff of his jumpsuit, dragging him aside before tossing his limp body over our left shoulder.

We shot a glance at Sakura. The girl blinked suddenly realising we were no longer in front of her. She stopped, her head whipping about, seemingly in search of us. "N-naruto, Sasuke's gone—" We stared at her panting form, one brow raised inquisitively. She stared back slack-jawed.

"You both need to work on your stamina," we told her before leaping forward again. It took another second for her brain to catch up, but when it did, like the good pet she was maturing to be, she quickly made to follow after us.

"Sasuke," she panted. "Naruto had a point. Please. S-slow down…"

We sighed, stalling for a moment to allow her to catch up. When she did, we dialled our pace back a bit more to something she should be more comfortable with before continuing forth.

"...Uhm, S-sasuke," she called, "what happened to Naruto?"

"Nothing," we replied. "I just put him to sleep."

"Oh. Oh…"

We glanced at her before turning back towards the forest ahead. Her face was flushed for some reason. "Sakura."

"...Yes?" came a whispered reply.

"I will need you to work with me," we tell her. "Is that ok?"

"Yes!"

"Good," we tell her as we pulled out the mission scroll from the pouch by our thigh. "According to this," we continued, tossing the scroll at the girl. She fumbled to catch it, only succeeding at the last moment before it escaped her grasp. "The location of one of the castles is just fifty-two miles due north. At the pace at which we are going, we can only get there in about two and a half hours; and given the time now is six twenty-three it should be nightfall by the time we arrive. Since it doesn't seem possible for us to go any faster, I would like us to maintain our current pace. That said, I would also like that we do not give away our position unnecessarily like this fool here just did. Can you help with this, Sakura?"

"Ai!" The girl replied, falling silent for a few moments as she skimmed through the mission scroll before making a small noise, seemingly confused. "But there is nothing here about the location of any of the castles," she said, "only details regarding the first clue to find them. I thought this was supposed to be some sort of treasure-hunt-esque assignment where we find clue after clue till we discover the location of the castles."

"Oh, it is," we tell her. "I am sure that if we vigorously investigate the lead mentioned in the scroll we would eventually find one of the castles. But why do that when we've already been given the answer to the problem?"

"You mean—"

"Yes. The instruction for finding the first clue is a steganographic message embedded in the third, sixth and seventh paragraphs. The first line written in the scroll is the key to deciphering it. It's a rather easy cypher; you only have to look to find it."

Our conversation lulled into a relaxing silence for about a minute as Sakura slowly dug out the hidden message in the script. "...These are coordinates," she breathed in amazed realisation, quickly pulling out a map from her pouch to confirm what we already knew.

Her gaze whipped over to regard us, full of worship and wonder. "How did you know?" she asked.

"Shinobi read the hidden meanings within the hidden meanings. Always," we reply vaguely.

"That's Kakashi-sensei's line… You found it so easily. You are amazing, Sasuke."

We smiled at her as was appropriate for the situation before returning our gaze forward. Human emotions still sometimes did get tiring to keep up with. Thankfully, the rest of the trip continued in blissful silence. By the time we arrived at our destination, the moon had already begun its ascent into the night sky. Naruto remained unconscious as we laid him down in his sleeping bag.

Our camp was a rather simple one. Rather than set up tents that would be hard to conceal, we simply found a patch of flat earth underneath a fallen log that was just large enough to house all three of us and occupied it. A light application of mud wall jutsu was used to seal one end, while head hunter jutsu was used to create a booby-trapped escape tunnel to a concealed exit point about a hundred meters away. Camouflage netting was used to break up the camp's silhouette, further concealing it in the forest foliage.

Satisfied, we shot a glance at Sakura who knelt on her sleeping bag as she stared intently at us. The girl sat stock still, appearing expectant. Seemingly awaiting instructions perhaps? At least we thought so until we heard the dull thumping of her erratic heartbeat. The girl's face flushed red and she immediately looked away when we made eye contact.

Hormones, we realised with some sympathy. Even we found our body's propensity to begin spontaneously making decisions of its own annoying. The girl's inhibitions and almost nonexistent grasp on her emotions must have faded away with the lack of restrictions our current scenario spawned. The feeling ought to be maddening. The poor thing.

"...Uhm—"

"Secure the perimeter," we said, interrupting her. "I will go have a look around to make sure we weren't tracked before surveying the "castle"." Hearing this, her shoulders slumped in disappointment. We ruffled her pink hair in passing as we exited the shelter.

"I am leaving Naruto in your care because I trust you, Sakura," we lied, noticing as she immediately perked up at that. "Please take care of him. And yourself too. I will be back soon."

Without waiting for a reply we flickered away, travelling up into the forest canopy as we made our way towards the castle. Upon arrival, we looked around taking in the sight. Our target hung from a massive tree bough in front of us. A small treehouse hidden amongst the leaves. Our castle. But, at the moment it was not our objective. We turned around to directly face our tail.

"Come out," we said. "I know you are there … You are Shiore, right? I am curious as to why you and your buddies chose my team out of everyone to tail. You've been on our tracks for nearly three hours now. Does my team truly look so weak and defenceless as to be worth the investment?

The bark on one of the trees shimmered as a young woman phased out of it. Two other Kusagakure shinobi appeared out of the foliage behind her. "Sasuke..." she purred, calling out our name with a dramatic, hissing lilt. "It's so nice to finally get to meet you. You probably cannot understand how happy I am to see you. I am a big fan of yours, you see."

"What do you want?" we drawled, entirely uninterested in engaging in senseless banter with another weird human. We've had our fill for the day it seems.

The kunoichi smiled, her tongue lopping out to lick the bottom half of her face. Her gaze turned predatory, glinting with a fierce light. "I want you…

"Sasuke-kun."
 
So, anything that directly interacts with the soul will reveal "Sasuke" for the inhuman THING they really are, hmm? Too bad for a certain snake that their precious "gift" for Sasuke just so happens to contain a fragment of their soul...
 
Looks like Sasuke met Orochimaru. From what I remember the way the snake Sannin uses to take over bodies is the cursed mark that interact with the soul.
Well, He is in for a huge surprise lmao.
 
I'm curious if his soul can evolve his Rinnegan and chakra beyond the sage and kaguyas clan eyes. And does he have Indra soul and chakra or did he just absorb it?
 
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