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Yay! The Alliance interlude we've been craving! Thank you for sharing the update with us, and enjoy the break/hiatus while you're workin' on the arc!
Also, should 'Heros' be 'Heroes?' since they're most likely not talking about sandwiches?
Inigo Montoya (not given in this chapter). You killed the vibes. Prepare to die.
Jugemu continues to be a delightful character, and I love his everything the more we learn about him! Does he also have attacks he calls out?
cult leader motivational speaker? Some bosses are just more equal than others. Additionally, they ought to update her operating system to 'of' instead of 'os.'
But seriously, it's good worldbuilding, and I hope that Inagawa (the fella that got his face burned off) gets a mercy visit from Rescue or Cure or one of them. Maybe not Frankenstein, since everyone's been ragging on them.
Alright, we're getting a look at the movement that's come out of Lustrum's lack of Birdcaging! I'm excited to see how she's using
What a joker, this guy. Not high? Can't possibly be a Merchant, he doesn't seem too recalcitrant.
...a Skidmark? Adam, is that you?
Oh migosh, it is! And should the 'accent' be 'accented,' instead?
Should there be a comma in between groaning, and buddy, friend? Also, a surly, 'trying to be, and actually doing better' Skidmark is great.
Also, should 'Heros' be 'Heroes?' since they're most likely not talking about sandwiches?
Oughta be capitalized, because it's both a brand, and the name of the mascot. And I love Jugemu's whole vibe.
Should be an 'i,' right? Why? Because an affirmation Adam should have is 'I deserve to be happy.' Because my goodness, he's awful hard on himself.
Hello, my cape name is
Jugemu continues to be a delightful character, and I love his everything the more we learn about him! Does he also have attacks he calls out?
Who is she my
If anything bad happens to this man, we riot.
Wait... we can't humanize the faceless, nameless people harmed by Taylor's panicked, careless actions. She's the protagonist... and we... can't... feel... she's in the wrong... this isn't a guilt-free power fantasy if you flesh out your characters. This isn't what alt-power fics are supposed to be about. /s
But seriously, it's good worldbuilding, and I hope that Inagawa (the fella that got his face burned off) gets a mercy visit from Rescue or Cure or one of them. Maybe not Frankenstein, since everyone's been ragging on them.
And then the (Hook)wolves came.
Polyphemus feels seen.
Should be an apostrophe here, because it's the face belonging to his uncle. His uncle's face. The face specifically on his uncle. Kuzco's poison.
And he'll take them higher? Even without slinging drugs, Adam still delivers a change in consciousness... now that's customer service!
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