POISON [NARUTO SI]

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Just a warning: you keep writing 'toke' instead of 'took'; I think I corrected the same error a few chapters ago? Being honest, you've been getting better with the grammatic errors but this is one you keep making, it's the only one that really bothers me in comparison to the others.

Anyways, the chapter was great and I really like how you are showing the consequences of Megumi just uppending the Old World Order.
 
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