Path to Victory – A Severus Snape Story (Worm/HP)

Oh dear. This is going to ruin the Dark Lord's mystique in a lot of ways.

Big Waves everybody. Big Waves.

Agreed!

I'll caution that we won't know much about the political reaction yet, since much of what us readers presume instead originates from fanon. But the speculation likely helps Sir Rabby anyway. :)

I seem to remember something in the author's first post about Snape becoming a God-king of the Universe. Maybe PtV is trying to achieve that?

PtV: "You want to become a better wizard? As in, better than everyone and everything until you stand at the very top of the whole world?"

"Very well, I'll make it so. Anything for you, my host."
 
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I seem to remember something in the author's first post about Snape becoming a God-king of the Universe. Maybe PtV is trying to achieve that?

PtV: "You want to become a better wizard? As in, better than everyone and everything until you stand at the very top of the whole world?"

"Very well, I'll make it so. Anything for you, my host."
Let's not forget the Harem.
Severus x Lily x Bella x Narcissa x Selena x PTV OTH
 
Oh dear. This is going to ruin the Dark Lord's mystique in a lot of ways.

First is the issue of polarization. I'm of the opinion that Dumbledore's actions are polarizing. His politics, like his support for werewolves and giants offend certain political interests(the Blacks for instance). I think his other actions including stance on protecting muggles and muggleborn do so as well. So when there only appears two heavyweights in the room, people gravitate to the one they like less because it really appears trying to be "neutral" just leaves you mistrusted and at the mercy of whichever power wins.
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Then there's the point where he makes the Death Eaters look utterly incompetent. A mere student, no matter his other accomplishments, taking 13 adult wizards down so quickly? On what looks like a lark? Moreover the reason he took them down is emitably reasonable. They were going to trash a town he liked to shop at, so he stopped them.

"So, old boy, why did you invite us to tea?"

"It's time we all decided what we're going to do about all this hubaloo. Ideally, together."

"Indeed."

"On the one hand, we have Albus, who likes mudbloods, voting against our interests, and his own position as Supreme Mugwump."

"I don't much like mudbloods. Or his new tax."

"On the other hand, we have the Dark Lord, who likes sending jumped-up idiots to terrorize places of business, and being called the Dark Lord."

"I don't much like terror."

"And the wild card, young Severus, who apparently likes to shop."

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"I like to shop."

"Indeed."
 
"And the wild card, young Severus, who apparently likes to shop."

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"I like to shop."

"Indeed."

Indeed. Not to mention he was smoozing some House heads earlier something fierce

"A pleasure to meet you, sir." A moment of silence and a mind-voice driven step later, "Lucius seems almost unreasonably proud of you, sir."

Orion Black and Druella Black both laughed politely with Abraxus Malfoy himself leading the pack with his loud guffaws.

"I should hope so! What good is any of this if your son isn't proud of you!"

I think something that isn't mentioned much in the books is how much dynastic affairs blood families are. From the books its clear several are centuries, and they have interwieving marriages and connections.

In scene these groups come off very traditional, but also heavily familial. Issues of inheritance, respect for one's elders, and a strong focus on family patriarchs and scions.

"Or having the public try to come to terms with their appalling behavior towards members of their families is something they are truly looking forward to. How many inheritance disputes will this kick off, Minchum?"

Sirius's relation with his family souring when he flouts their interests, how Regulus was named heir...I get the sense that by appearing to support the traditional relationship Sevvy came off very nicely there.

"Tell me, young man. Are you the Slytherin that's responsible for my youngest improved Potions grades?"

I smiled at the man and simply nodded.

Druella Black spoke up, "Oh, do come off it, Orion. You knew perfectly well how he's been helping young Regulus." She turned to me next and smiled sharply, "What we didn't know was that you seem to have caught the attention of Bellatrix."

Likewise with supporting lesser members. Appearances matter very much for noble households. Severus by assisting the Black family's youngest unprompted did they a good favor, possibly particularly in light of their strained relationship with Sirius(Sort of wondering when exactly they considered Regulus instead of Sirius as an heir)

"What we didn't know was that you seem to have caught the attention of Bellatrix."

Oh, what now mind-voice?

The next step presented itself as just a simpering smile while Lord Malfoy spoke up amused, "Oh, now you're done for boy. You best run, lad, I know what happens when she gets that look on her face."

The not quite Lady Black arched a single eyebrow, so reminiscent of Narcissa, and asked, "What precisely would that be Abraxus?"

The aged blond Lord retorted, "Perhaps we should ask Cygnus instead? If we want the whole story I mean."

I was missing something here but I wasn't entirely sure I wanted to know.

Hilariously I think Bella's role also counts for a lot here. Noble houses with long term perspectives do cultivate allies and keep track of people of interest.

But a romantic interest is something else entirely. With that come political considerations, and offspring.

For the former Severus is very well suited, already have several accomplishes of note(curing werewolves, and whatever secret service he's doing for the ministry, capturing the death eaters). He's also immensely charming, always somehow knowing just the right thing to say. He's even managed to capture the attention of his whole house and of course...Bella.

For the later he's an extremely potent battle mage given his demonstrated effectiveness against 13 mages, idiots in hoods or not*. He's extremely intelligent and academically inclined and unreasonably charismatic. Any of which would be excellent traits to have in children.

Honestly his status as a Half Blood is...interesting. Normally this would have a lot of doors closed in his face but with the path he's just so damn impressive. On a parallel, Nazi germany which was obsessed with blood purity made exceptions when it was convenient. From Wikipedia so take it with a heap of salt but primary sources are linked there
Another example is Erhard Milch, who was in charge of aircraft procurement for the Luftwaffe and reported directly to Hermann Göring. In 1935, Milch's ethnicity came into question because his father, Anton Milch, was alleged to be a Jew. This prompted an investigation by the Gestapo that Göring suppressed by producing an affidavit signed by Milch's mother stating that Anton was not really the father of Erhard and his six siblings, and naming their true father as Karl Brauer, her deceased uncle. These events and Milch's subsequently being issued, at Göring's urging, a German Blood Certificate by Adolf Hitler, prompted Göring to say famously "Wer Jude ist, bestimme ich" ("I decide who is a Jew.").
Some other mischlinge who received a German Blood Certificate were Bernhard Rogge, Arty Johannes Zukertort, Karl Zukertort, Walter H. Hollaender, Helmut Wilberg, and Paul Ascher. Gotthard Heinrici, who was married to a half-Jewish woman, received one for his family.[3] Also the operetta composer Franz Lehár obtained such a status for his Jewish-descent wife via the intercession of Hermann Göring's brother Albert.[4]

I'll note that Severus himself already talked of a link to a Seer through his father's line. I think it is emminately possible that some popular fiction will be adopted making his blood status less of an issue. Voldemort is proof

Voldemort is himself ironically proof enough that with enough support, blood status doesn't particularly matter.

What I really am interested is if one of the Noble Houses is looking to poach him. Severus would be immensely valuable on the accounts I mentioned above, and should Bella marry him, well wouldn't it be offly convenient to make him a Black. Some of their latest generation*Siriously coughs* has been a bit of a disappointment. Maybe some fresh blood would be attractive?

That and I don't think there was really any idea of arranging a political marriage that Bella wasn't interested in. Should she want pursue someone even halfway acceptable that may be the end of it.

*(I love this perception of Death Eaters)
 
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13 death eaters is quite a blow to their numbers. At there highest point right before voldy died they were still in the low hundreds. This is years earlier and their numbers are defiantly lower. Snape might have taken 10% of their fight force right now(I know voldy alone is probably more powerful than most of that force but he can only be in one place at a time and he needs an army of he expects to hold britian after taking over)
 
Casualties is injuried, unconscious and walking wounded. Fatalities are dead. Zero casualties can be all dead.
I have no idea where you got that. Casualties in a civilian term is someone wounded or killed by an event. In military terms it refers to anyone who is unavailable for duty for several reasons including death and injury, but would not included people who are injured but still capable of fighting. NATO describes casualties as "In relation to personnel, any person who is lost to his organization by reason of having been declared dead, wounded, diseased, detained, captured or missing." Casualties include the dead in them.
 
I have no idea where you got that. Casualties in a civilian term is someone wounded or killed by an event. In military terms it refers to anyone who is unavailable for duty for several reasons including death and injury, but would not included people who are injured but still capable of fighting. NATO describes casualties as "In relation to personnel, any person who is lost to his organization by reason of having been declared dead, wounded, diseased, detained, captured or missing." Casualties include the dead in them.

I think the results of the fight would indicate that what he wanted is no fatalities. So either the author used the wrong word or the PTV went by what he ment rather than what he said.
 
Chapter 1.17
Chapter 1.17

I was once again reminded that little Selena Wentforth was a marvelous find. The midget managed to fight off three third years, even after I've taught them better spells, by sheer athletic ability. She bobbed, weaved and jumped around every assault on her and had enough stamina to keep it up.

Perhaps I should be instituting some physical training? I queried the path but the answer came back I should give it out as 'homework' for the summer. The clever ones would see the use immediately while being thoroughly trashed by a first year was enough to drive the point home for the holdouts.

In their own way the third years were impressive for their ability to work together. When I set them up to go against two fourth years who joined up, Bartemius Crouch and Regulus Black, by themselves their higher skill and proficiency took the day. Stefan Nott especially showed some remarkable aptitude when he managed to trash the two older students by himself.

Regulus was still pouting.

"Alright, break!"

I gave the entire group a few minutes to recover from their brawls and path directed me to sit with the fourth years time. Selena was holding court with the third years who had by now, seemingly, accepted her casual dominance over them.

A simple question was apparently called for, "Crouch and Black. What do you think?"

Regulus immediately took the lead, "You're raising little monsters! And why didn't you include me before today? Really, Severus, I thought we were friends."

Yup, still pouting. I just smiled at him and afterward looked over at Crouch.

The lad had a curious glint in eyes when he stared me down, "I didn't think you could have taught them all so much in but three lessons."

I was instructed to only raise a singular eyebrow. The boy continued frowning, "My father had me tutored since my second year and Nott knows more spells than I do."

The boy in question seemed to pick up his name being mentioned and simply grinned cockily. I moved into their line of sight and said, "Everyone's been working exceptionally hard here. I expect you to conform to that, Crouch."

He looked vaguely hesitant so I hammered through, "Your father, and Regulus', have been helping me and might even continue doing so in the future. Absolutely none of that will keep you in my classes if I don't see you sweat."

Regulus gave a little snort which prompted me to say, "Stefan, you and Regulus are up next."

I ignored the young Black's blathering and focused on Crouch, "Nobody here will be coasting on their parents names do you understand?"

Crouch kept up his curious gaze, as if he was searching for an answer to question only he knew in my expression, before finally nodding firmly, "I do. You won't be disappointed, Snape."

I smiled widely at the lad and simply said, "Good. Now get up. It's time for a little battle Transfiguration."

This was unfortunately one of the parts that Selena couldn't participate in. As a first year, no matter how skilled she is, she lacks the precision and 'muscle memory' to use Transfiguration in a timely manner. In a real fight she wouldn't get fifteen seconds to slowly picture the changes she wanted to make but I couldn't do much about it. She'd get it with age and practice.

The others however had no such excuse. While Regulus was getting the ego slapped out of him by Stefan I had the others try to rapidly Transfigure rocks I set in front of them into arrow heads. Selena was under orders to banish the rocks one by one to work on her fine control. The winner would be whoever ended the round with a bigger collection. Rocks or arrows.

Frankly, I was betting on Selena.

Eventually I called an end to the days session. While the third years, as usual, walked Selena back to her dorms the others decided to walk with me.

"Can I ask you something, Snape?"

The young Crouch heir had such a earnest expression on his face I had to clamp down on the urge to smile. This wasn't a time to bruise their fragile little ego's. Not outside of combat at least.

"Of course, but feel free to call me Severus."

He smiled a little brittle grin but said, "Why did you fight the Death Eaters?"

Oh, we were going through this again. I would have thought that last nights performance had gotten the message out but clearly there was still doubters. When I woke up this morning I cringed about my rather impulsive decision but I couldn't find any reasons to walk it back. I didn't want to bow before some Dark Lord. I didn't want to bow to Dumbledore or the Ministry either. That meant I had to throw myself up as a fourth faction. A credible attempt at, not exactly neutral, but quite loudly uninterested in the wider conflict.

I sighed and replied softly, "I like the way the way the world is, now. I like being able to do what I want, where I want, when I want. I'm not going to be dissuaded just because there's a Dark Lord out there."

Black asked me, "Yesterday you said you were just ardently supporting your independence."

Was he making a point?

"Indeed."

Crouch picked it up, "Can you? Against everyone I mean?"

Curious. They were clearly driving for something. What was it though?

I smiled widely and projected an air of utmost confidence, "Yes. While I doubt Dumbledore wouldn't accept a loudly proclaimed 'No' I have no issue enforcing the issue with him and others."

The Crouch heir looked a touch nervous when he responded, "They'll test you. I mean-."

Regulus was rapidly becoming pale, "Barty! Don't, you know what my cousin-."

Crouch bitterly interrupted the interruption, "I don't care. He's the only one teaching us to defend ourselves isn't he?" He turned to me and whispered furiously, "When we come back to the common room they will test you. I don't know how many of them or who exactly but Bellatrix Black is leading the charge."

I was surprised. Not because Bella seemed to need a little convincing, that part was to be expected, but because they'd do it this year. I thought it would have taken them all summer to muster up the courage to assault my new position in Slytherin.

The path however didn't change so I assumed it was aware of the brewing situation. Just to be safe I added a clause, 'No permanently hurting students. Ever.'

I smiled a broad and winning smile at the two boys and said, "That's alright." I fell silent for a beat before continuing, "Here's hoping it's all of them."

Their eyes bugged out widely and I took advantage of their confusion to tie them up.

"Plausible deniability, boys. I'll send someone for you once I'm done with them."

I walked the last few corridors to the Slytherin dungeon's adding a specific path for the encounter. I included all manner of clauses on top of the earlier one I added. I touched up it up with a 'no traps, no getting hit on my part, make it memorable' .

I didn't really feel like doing this again before the next school year. Not with only three more schooldays to go. I briefly considered waiting for my gaggle of third years to arrive but quickly discarded the notion. I needed to do this alone.

I whispered the password, 'Perveniens excelsum'

As I confidently strode into the common Slytherin halls with a winning smile I noticed that a lot of students were floating nearby. There was a nervous energy in the air that even a first year could have read but I played dumb. I knew this was the first indication to the cleverer Slytherins something was up. I noted three sixth years, Narcissa among them, retreating all the way back.

I kept walking towards the heart of the commons, which the gathered students seemed to not mind, and assumed that had I gone anywhere else they would have pounced already. If I however was going to make it 'easy' on them by allowing myself to be surrounded...well, why stop me? This got another two or three students, fifth years, worried enough to retreat. Not very far, granted, but still a respectable distance.

I couldn't find a single Seventh year in the assembled lot but with the confirmation that Bella was somewhat involved in this I doubted they would strike first. No, it's far easier to let the rest distract me and only afterward throw their most skilled fighters at me. I was almost unreasonably excited about this. I remembered the heady feeling of fighting Bellatrix and looked forward to crossing wands with her.

Just before I reached my seat I loudly said, "I have spells to create and potions to invent. If you lot could hurry this along?"

And all hell broke loose.
 
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I ignored the young Black's blathering and focused on Crouch, "Nobody here will be coasting on their parents names do you understand?"

Crouch kept up his curious gaze, as if he was searching for an answer to question only he knew in my expression, before finally nodding firmly, "I do. You won't be disappointed, Snape."
JACKPOT. I see what you're doing there, little PtV.
Crouch picked it up, "Can you? Against everyone I mean?"
Crouch bitterly interrupted the interruption, "I don't care. He's the only one teaching us to defend ourselves isn't he?" He turned to me and whispered furiously, "When we come back to the common room they will test you. I don't know how many of them or who exactly but Bellatrix Black is leading the charge."
Yup, Crouch converted quite quickly after that.
I knew this was the first indication to the cleverer Slytherins something was up. I noted thee sixth years, Narcissa among them, retreating all the way back.
Clever girl. (*three sixth years)
they would have pounded already
*pounced
Just before I reached my seat I loudly said, "I have spells to create and potions to invent. If you lot could hurry this along?"

And all hell broke loose.
*wide grin*
 
Shouldn't Severus be awarded some type of title or something with the discovery of the lycanthrophy cure? Seems like that's what the Queen does sometime for people who make a substantial contribution to the realm. Not that I legitimately know as I'm a Yank.
 
Shouldn't Severus be awarded some type of title or something with the discovery of the lycanthrophy cure? Seems like that's what the Queen does sometime for people who make a substantial contribution to the realm. Not that I legitimately know as I'm a Yank.
I'm British and I'm pretty sure that she would do it just so that people who were ignoring the fact that a British student designed a cure for something their top potion masters couldn't and he did it in what was likely under 4 years
 
Shouldn't Severus be awarded some type of title or something with the discovery of the lycanthrophy cure? Seems like that's what the Queen does sometime for people who make a substantial contribution to the realm. Not that I legitimately know as I'm a Yank.

I'm British and I'm pretty sure that she would do it just so that people who were ignoring the fact that a British student designed a cure for something their top potion masters couldn't and he did it in what was likely under 4 years

I think it is mentioned in this chapter that Snape would have been awarded Order of Merlin. But hey, politics.
 
This next chapter should be rather memorable. From how it was worded when he entered the room, I initially thought he did something from outside the room that glued everyone in the common room to the ceiling.
 
This next chapter should be rather memorable. From how it was worded when he entered the room, I initially thought he did something from outside the room that glued everyone in the common room to the ceiling.
We could be shown the entire process, or perhaps just the result, with everyone against him lying on the floor, groaning in pain or outright unconscious, while Snape brushes a speck of dust on his sleeve as he quips another badass one-liner.

"That's it? How pitiful, you didn't even make me sweat."

or

"Do try better next time."
 
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I'm guessing that Bella is a bit plagued with contradictory feelings. Her drop of "Sevvy" last update is a sign of that. So...she wants to challenge Severus to make him prove he is as capable as he says he is. After all if he can handle 13 adult wizards, ones she probably believes are potent, surely he can handle a few dozen novices...

Just gonna say if he does manage it, Oh boy. If Severus was a rising star before, he'll be a blazing sun to her then.
 
I like reading a story about the implications of the PtV, but I feel like there have been a number opportunities where Snape could have been given exactly what he asked for, but not what he wanted. But these opportunities generally turned out well for Snape because he preemptively added clauses to the Path to account for those potential problems. As an example, the following line:
The path however didn't change so I assumed it was aware of the brewing situation. Just to be safe I added a clause, 'No permanently hurting students. Ever.'
I feel like this line would have worked better if it had come after the conflict (i.e. after one of the students was seriously injured because the Path that Snape was following didn't have this caveat).

I also feel like there should be more situations where the Path shows something to require an unfeasibly large number steps so that we get a feel for the difficulty of what Snape is attempting. Perhaps this could be done by showing how the number of steps increases every time that Snape adds a caveat so that we see how his different goals conflict with one another and force him to choose between them.

Snape has nigh infinite power (which means that external conflict is essentially nil, barring unforeseen situations that can block the PtV), but that still leaves the door open for plenty of internal conflict.
 
Ahaha, wow. Barty is Team Severus. The same Barty who, without the training providing by someone using PtV managed to beat Moody and impersonate him well enough that Dumbledore didn't realize something was up. Brought home 12 OWLs, Barty. He's basically the evil Hermione, and now he's on Snape's side.

Awesome.
 
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