I think the living gundam jinxed it when she said no one resorted to firing yet. She's just asking for someone to say something to set Mariposa off. IIRC, there were some in tsab who were always very jumpy when it came to those types of things, though I could be entirely wrong.
 
I think the living gundam jinxed it when she said no one resorted to firing yet. She's just asking for someone to say something to set Mariposa off. IIRC, there were some in tsab who were always very jumpy when it came to those types of things, though I could be entirely wrong.
They have good reason to be... but fortunately they called in Hayate and Nanoha, who are probably the best possible people to de-escalate this situation. That they're also some of the best to keep around if that fails, just clinches the deal.

Well, except that Mariposa has a long history with one of Hayate's former selves. That was unexpected, but we've already seen it won't matter.
 
Well, except that Mariposa has a long history with one of Hayate's former selves.

Even as a largely out-of-control planetkilling superweapon, the various previous hosts to the Book of Darkness still had enough wherewithal to be like "this thing will surely kill me, but I will carry out the service in the name of the Sankt Kaiser until that happens" - nobody even bothered to try and fix it instead of just pointing it at the enemy and having it go until it ran out of gas and disappeared to resurface somewhere else in a few years. The Wolkenritter almost certainly personally murdered a whole lot of Mariposa's comrades and they probably don't even remember them as significant people.

Needless to say, there's an entire ranch worth of Beef there regardless of what Mari's personal history with that thing turns out to be.
 
The Book Of Darkness is a boogieman, a horror story, something you just don't want to happen to you. It's power might be overestimated, but it's still a planet killer. Anyone subsuming it's power is not to be underestimated. Same with the Cradle, and same with pretty every one Lost Logia. Mariposa included.
 
The Book Of Darkness is a boogieman, a horror story, something you just don't want to happen to you. It's power might be overestimated, but it's still a planet killer. Anyone subsuming it's power is not to be underestimated. Same with the Cradle, and same with pretty every one Lost Logia. Mariposa included.
I'm pretty sure Mariposa doesn't belong on that list. Isn't she "just" a workaholic Unison Device? She's nowhere near as dangerous as the planet killing Book of Darkness or the even more planet killing Cradle.

I mean yeah, don't underestimate a Unison Device in the first place much less one with Mariposa's illustrious decades of service and legendary skill, but planet killer she ain't.
 
I mean yeah, don't underestimate a Unison Device in the first place much less one with Mariposa's illustrious decades of service and legendary skill, but planet killer she ain't.
Given this:
The Siege-type Unison Device designated Mariposa had not been made for subtlety, after all.
And the scope of the war in question? I'm going to assume "Siege" is Planetary at the low end and "Dimension" (which I'm going to consider to be "Star System") at the high end. Planet killing? Totally an option. Maybe not planet-busting, but rendering a planet uninhabitable sounds like it might be in the cards.
 
Consider also her assessment of Earth Bet: She's seen worlds with radioactive deserts and drowned cities before, and knows they're the signs of a siege that's passed the turning point when the defenders could win. There's little doubt in my mind that she has a planet count too, even if she's not in the same league for megatons-per-millisecond as Corrupted Reinforce. Not out of bloodthirst, but out of duty and the calm choice to do unto others who were trying to do unto her and her people until they stopped.
 
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Given this:

And the scope of the war in question? I'm going to assume "Siege" is Planetary at the low end and "Dimension" (which I'm going to consider to be "Star System") at the high end. Planet killing? Totally an option. Maybe not planet-busting, but rendering a planet uninhabitable sounds like it might be in the cards.
I dont think "planetary" is at all at the low end. Fortresses are a thing, after all.
 
Isn't the whole point of writing Fanfiction is to create what if scenarios?
No.
Continuation fics.
Gap filler fics.
Alternative perspective fics.

Some of the most popular fic types.
I dont think "planetary" is at all at the low end. Fortresses are a thing, after all.

And they don't require specialised siege engines to deal with.

In modern parlance you are claiming flak jackets as protection requiring artillery to deal with.
 
I'm pretty sure Mariposa doesn't belong on that list. Isn't she "just" a workaholic Unison Device? She's nowhere near as dangerous as the planet killing Book of Darkness or the even more planet killing Cradle.

I mean yeah, don't underestimate a Unison Device in the first place much less one with Mariposa's illustrious decades of service and legendary skill, but planet killer she ain't.

Someone can correct me if I am wrong, but as far as I know the Magical Girl Nanoha Canon, there is only two known surviving Unison devices. One is Rein/Hayate, the other is Agito. The knowledge of how to make them was lost, and as such the TSAB can't make new ones, although they are extremely interested in making new ones giving how much of a boost the existing Unison devices give to their partners.

Mariposa as another surviving Unison device would be of interest in researching how they were made in the first place, and thus would fit on that list for that alone right now. Even if she only lets them do some medical scans that they do to anyone else, it likely that her construction would give more hints to how a unison device was made in the first place, and help them in recreating them.

She might not have the raw power of Rein/Hayate, but that is a good thing when your trying to recreate something. Weaker devices are more likely designed to be used by larger number of people and thus more flexible and would give better hints to how they were made in the first place, rather some highly specialized device that was fine tuned for one person to get maximum power out of them alone.
 
Or Mari might have worked in a squadron.
When it comes to unison devices they were made to make mages into ultimate weapon but due to numerous problems with how practical they were to use they were largely left on the sidelines in favor of other methods so there aren't that many of them.

Consider also her assessment of Earth Bet: She's seen worlds with radioactive deserts and drowned cities before, and knows they're the signs of a siege that's passed the turning point when the defenders could win. There's little doubt in my mind that she has a planet count too, even if she's not in the same league for megatons-per-millisecond as Corrupted Reinforce. Not out of bloodthirst, but out of duty and the calm choice to do unto others who were trying to do unto her and her people until they stopped.
Reinforce Einz can't really be compared to a normal unison device since she was a part of the BoD which made her a lot more powerful than a normal one who's power would depend more on the mage using it. And since a unison device features heavily in the story i will post the translated magic dictionary entries for @Stardust Falcon
Unison Knights [what we know as Unison Devices]:
A Technology that is solely Belkan in origin. This technology was created from one of the very active research efforts that was focused upon making individual human beings into ultimate weapons, which was done along side the creation of large-scale weapons such as flying battleships and land-ships. Initially, they were created to be the same size as humans, but these required many minute adjustments to fit the user, caused much physical damage while in use, and caused no end of problems and accidents while in Unison. These issues lead them to be left in the sidelines as weapons in Magical Warfare. The Administrative Unison Knight of the "Tome of the Night Sky" has been identified as a model created during the early-to-middle period of Unison Knight Development History, and indeed as her name designates, she holds administrative control over the immense number of magics held within the Tome of the Night Sky. Thus, once the rightful owner of the Tome can achieve proper Unison, they are capable of using all the magics held within the Tome of the Night Sky.
Unity-type Device
Also commonly known as a Unison Device. A device form developed only by Belka, it is a type of device that has taken the design idealogy of the Midchildan Intelligent Device to extremes. Devices possessing their own wills, and given complete human form and sentience, these devices can "unite" with users to provide Mana control and assistance according to circumstances. These devices exceeds other forms greatly in response speed and in the volume of Mana handled; however users suitable for Unison are rare, and much work is required to fine-tune and ensure compatibility towards the disposition of each specific user. Furthermore, since by nature these devices can cause loss of conciousness and other effects during Unison, these devices have emergency countermeasures set that are independant of the host's awareness, allowing even solitary users to employ these devices on themselves, enhancing Mana usage. However, at times these devices may "take over" the user and operate autonomously, causing a "Unison accident", so these devices were nearly never manufactured practically. During a successful Unison, striking hair or pupil color changes become apparent. However, whether the appearance after Unison is more similar to the user or the device depends on whether the user can manage the device. In the event that a user cannot handle the device, the user will lose all control, and will completely take on the appearance of the device.
Dialogue within Internal Space
(A's DVD5) One of the abilities of a Unison Device. During regular use, in order to ensure that both the user and the device maintain consciousness, the host can initiate, and be answered via, telepathic communications to the device. But in the case where one party has lost consciousness, or is in a state where, for example, they are unable to act, Internal Space can act as a temporary site for protection and healing, or even directing or discussing plans. The host's multitasking skills for battle or maneuvere can continue, simultaneously with any defensive measures in place.
Reinforce II:
Reinforce II was created to succeed the First Reinforce. Technology wise, she was created as a late-model Unison Device, of which there are comparatively more resources to work with. In the small frame of about 30 centimeters, she hold high mana, strong functionality, and Life, making her a high end model. The chief Engineer is Mariel. As she is still young, she has only started gaining experience and practice, but Hayate and the Wolkenritter look after her as she grows up. As she is a different person from the First, she has different character and capabilities, so Hayate and the Knights do not compare her with the First, but she herself regards the existence of the "Wind of Blessing, Reinforce" and how she died with a sense of honor, and feels great pride in how she inherited the name. The Wind of Blessing works hard everyday to live up to the name she had inherited.
Unison Device/Knight (1): The Wisdom of Ancient Belka crystalized, a Humanoid-Type Device created to give support to [Belkan] Knights. By entering "Unison" with their "Lord" who is their user, they use their immense reaction speed* to act as Magical Fire Control, and gives deep support to their Lord. In Unison, there are several parameters, which are "Aptitude" and "Compatibility", and Unison Compatibility between a Unison Device and their Lord stands upon a delicate balance. While early Unison Device models like the First Reinforce (a.k.a. The Will of The Book of Darkness) were created at human size, later models such as Agito were created at a much more compact size; Reinforce Zwei's size is made to reflect this historical trend.

Unison Device/Knight (2): The merits of being of Life-Size is that they can enter either unarmed or armed combat on their own, and when major injury and loss of consciousness happens to the Lord during Unison, they can protect [the Lord] in a inner compartment and have the Unison Device act on their own, thus "Switching", but the required Unison Compatibility tends to be severe. While the Smaller Models are not suited for Combat nor can they switch, the required Unison Compatibility is less strict, and they can Unison with any number of Users who are compatible enough with them, and thus have a wider range for action. For Unison Devices, their "Lord" is an special figure, and most find their purpose of existence in living, and fighting along side, with their Lord and their allies. This applies to both Agito and Reinforce Zwei as well.
Unique to the Ancient Belkan Styles, an augmentation done through the Unison between a Knight and a Unison Device. Usually, the Knight becomes the Base Form when a Unison Device undergoes a Unison (the reverse happens, but very rarely). Under Unison, a Knight can use an Unison Device's, and an Unison Device can use a Knight's Mana freely, along with Knight and Unison Device using different Magics at the same time. On the other hand, when the two of them work together in deploying a Magic or otherwise manipulating Mana, it is possible to multiply the effects and precision of each action. To note, the color change that occurs to the hair and eyes are an unique change that happens when under Unison.
There is also a untranslated one that from i what i can gather with gtranslate talks about how much of a boost a unison device gives based on compatibility. If you have good compatibility you can double or even quadruple the power but if you have low compatibilty you might only get 1,5 times or 1,2 times the boost.
 
And they don't require specialised siege engines to deal with.

In modern parlance you are claiming flak jackets as protection requiring artillery to deal with.
That is not at all accurate to what I was saying. My point is that her being a siege weapon does not automatically mean she was intended to face down entire planets ans that there are targets of a much smaller scale that would require a "siege weapon" to deal with. Such as fortresses and other hardened facilities.
 

Knights and Unison Devices:
There is such a thing as an "affinity" [or compatibility - AT] between Knights and their Unison Devices, and with a Knight and an Unison Device with great affinity, the 1+1 of their unison could result with a 3 or 4 in terms of results. However, in the case where such an affinity does not exist, the 1+1 could possibly not even result in a 2, with the final result being a 1.5 or even a 1.2. For a Unison Device, that they cannot "elevate the Knight's abilities they are unisoned with" is a sad fact to face.
 
Ok, I like the chapter, but it makes me worried that the story will end soon. Because really, what more is there that can exist in this beyond some slice of life with nanoha characters now that you have eliminated all direct sources of conflict?

I think the issue Im having is that it feels like Im getting served a cake, but all Im getting is frosting. Its nice and sweet, but its nowhere near as satisfying as actual cake. I think part of what is hurting the story is that everything has been too easy for the pair, with the only actual challenge being the fight with the lizards, and even that was only challenging because mariposa was sandbagging to hell and back.
I mean, if mariposa was damaged in the escape from Bet and actually had to train taylor up so they could servive long enough to reach civilization, it could have been better, but as it is it just feels a bit unfullfilling.
Sigh...
You're one of those people that just doesn't "get" slice of life stories aren't you?

Maybe just sit back and enjoy a heartwarming story of alien apocalypse machines coming of age and realizing that you can never truely go back home and expect things to always be the same? :V
 
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Unison Device technology
As previously mentioned, Unison Devices are fully autonomous, independent, and truly alive beings. They're the logical conclusion of advancing both the power and sophistication of AI-driven Devices to the point that they themselves become sophont lifeforms. This, of course, means that the creation of a Unison Device is entire orders of magnitude more complex than assembly of other Device types.

Unison Devices aren't 'made' - they're grown and raised. Espiria's claim to fame amongst the Free States was successfully reverse engineering the method by which Belkans originally created the Unity Knights and proceeding to leverage basically the entirety of their military structure on the idea that they were able (and willing - some people tend to get uppity about the idea of giving a superweapon a soul) to mass-produce Unison Devices at scale. If you're familiar at all with 'Dragonriders of Pern,' the eponymous dragon riders are an apt analogy - except for the fact that instead of engineering dragons to deal with an ongoing natural disaster and then immediately discarding the technology to keep with the pastoral values of Pern's nascent society, Espiria was a technologically advanced civilization at war with no particular desire to pretend at being anything else. As such, they both continued to engineer more and better dragons Unison Devices as well as devote a lot of time towards mitigating their inherent drawbacks until the point that Espiria's military had something on the order of 40% Unison Device adoption. This went a long way towards papering over the fact that they lacked the raw numbers of some of their allies or their enemy and also allowed them to quickly recoup losses - Espirian Unison Devices, especially the later generations, traded a higher potential ceiling for both a broader base of potential partners and the capacity to jump partners as necessary - including if the Mage wished to retire after a tour of service but the Device didn't.

(This is one of the reasons why Mariposa came fully loaded with all the training tools that Taylor could ever want. While Taylor's specific situation is very atypical and likely would've produced a few raised eyebrows if Mariposa still had a command chain to report back to, pairing a fresh-faced Espirian recruit with a Unison Device and letting them start emotionally bonding to each other through the process of basic training was a common thing.)

Entering Unison has an exponential effect on the combined partnership's total power based on the aptitude for Unison and the compatibility between partners - both an emotional/mental compatibility as well as their physical synchronization rate which is in turn a function of the Device's makeup and the Mage's developed magical capacities. Earlier generations of Unison Device required a lot of manual intervention on both sides of the equation to get the synchronization rate to adequate levels; later generations gradually became able to perform those interventions automatically by leveraging resonance theory, which essentially proved that prolonged positive contact between Mages caused them to gradually attune to each other, but there's still a barrier to entry for being able to synchronize at all - e.g. some people are just fundamentally incompatible and therefore the process can't ever begin. Further, if the starting synchronization rate is low, the amount of time needed for it to naturally come up to an acceptable level was generally prohibitive compared to the amount of time needed to find better candidates for partnership.

Successful Unisons always produce 'physical bleedthrough,' a blending of the features of Mage and Device. Lower levels of compatibility produce slight changes, higher ones more striking - this is of course why Unison Taylor has blue hair and gold eyes instead of her normal black hair / brown eyes. In such situations where the Device has to act autonomously because the Mage is incapacitated, physical bleedthrough will go farther representing the Device's increasing levels of control, up to the point of assuming the appearance of the Device totally as the Mage's body is shifted into a safe internal space for rest and recovery surrounded by a Jacket-like protective layering composed of the Device's appearance. Ancient Belka called this a 'Unison Accident,' but it's really a feature - the Device taking over for you if you're out cold is vastly preferable to the alternative of a forced disengagement or simply being left unconscious at the mercies of whatever did you in, after all.

Between the emergency repairs needed to deal with The Locker's effects as well as the fact that Taylor's magic was a blank slate, she started off with an extremely high physical synchronization rate regardless of what it 'might've been' or 'should've been' in another world or timeline. It's not a great metaphor, but you could consider it a kind of situation where rather than creating a key to fit a certain lock, the lock was remodeled to fit a certain key; the result is the same (a matching pair) but was arrived at from the opposite direction. Since this kind of thing relies on picking up someone from a null magic world with both the necessary power and aptitude for Unison, it's not something that comes up often. (Note that this is a purely physical occurrence; it does not mean and shouldn't be interpreted as some kind of 'Taylor was Mastered at the start of the story' suggestion - because she wasn't.)
 
except for the fact that instead of engineering dragons to deal with an ongoing natural disaster and then immediately discarding the technology to keep with the pastoral values of Pern's nascent society,
To be fair to the Pernese, the geneticist who re-engineered the fire-lizards into dragons died before the first dragon hatched, and the only other one on the planet wasn't quite up to the task.
 
To be fair to the Pernese, the geneticist who re-engineered the fire-lizards into dragons died before the first dragon hatched, and the only other one on the planet wasn't quite up to the task.
And also there was the whole bit where they lost almost all of their post-industrial infrastructure (which wasn't substantial to begin with) by the time they resettled in the north.
 
Sigh...
You're one of hose people that just doesn't "get" slice of life stories aren't you?

Maybe just sit back and enjoy a heartwarming story of alien apocalypse machines coming of age and realizing that you can never truely go back home and expect things to always be the same? :V
I do get them and I can enjoy them. Flying Witch is one of my favorite anime for godsake. Its just that slice of life wasnt what this story was presented as in the early chapters or the op comments, so slice of life wasnt what I expected, or at least not this early. Its not like taylor varga where it was explicitly stated that there wouldnt be any serious conflict present for the protagonist in an action sense. Mook horror, yes. Just not anything truely challenging physically.

That wasnt what I was led to believe would happen here.

What the op said was
Summary: On the worst day of her life, Taylor Hebert's desperate pleas result not in a Trigger Event but in an involuntary rescue. Rather than wake up in the hospital, Taylor wakes up somewhere far away in dimensional space - at the start of her journey of growth, self-discovery, and perhaps finding a way home.
Which sounded like taylor wasnt going to be anywhere near tsab for the first arc, or if she did, it wouldnt be anywhere near earth for a while, as getting to earth (which was likely near earth bet, if locked out by entities) would be the end goal. Maybe somewhat like dragonball but with dbz's tone, or HxH.
I understand that I made assumptions and was found to be wrong, but can you blame me for making those assumptions? It took me until this chapter to realize that this even was a SoL.
 
I do get them and I can enjoy them. Flying Witch is one of my favorite anime for godsake. Its just that slice of life wasnt what this story was presented as in the early chapters or the op comments, so slice of life wasnt what I expected, or at least not this early. Its not like taylor varga where it was explicitly stated that there wouldnt be any serious conflict present for the protagonist in an action sense. Mook horror, yes. Just not anything truely challenging physically.

That wasnt what I was led to believe would happen here.

What the op said was

Which sounded like taylor wasnt going to be anywhere near tsab for the first arc, or if she did, it wouldnt be anywhere near earth for a while, as getting to earth (which was likely near earth bet, if locked out by entities) would be the end goal. Maybe somewhat like dragonball but with dbz's tone, or HxH.
I understand that I made assumptions and was found to be wrong, but can you blame me for making those assumptions? It took me until this chapter to realize that this even was a SoL.
UA-97 is the kind of TSAB posting that feels like a vacation for 11 months out of a year... until a capital-I Incident begins and suddenly everything's on fire and you can't find your hat.

I expect this story to turn out the same way.
 
Waiting for Taylor to see Nanoha in her Barrier Jacket and go "IT'S A GUNDAM!!!"
 
"What if the story continued?"
"What if this happened in the gap?"
"What if we were looking at the story from this perspective?"

Those all sound like what if scenarios to me...
Oh yeah, the greatest "what if" -- What if everything stays exactly the same as Canon but there are more stories.
That is not at all accurate to what I was saying. My point is that her being a siege weapon does not automatically mean she was intended to face down entire planets ans that there are targets of a much smaller scale that would require a "siege weapon" to deal with. Such as fortresses and other hardened facilities.
Smaller installations do NOT require sieges or siege equipment. Bunker budgets are already within the scope of normal combat armament.
 
Smaller installations do NOT require sieges or siege equipment. Bunker budgets are already within the scope of normal combat armament.
I'm not talking about modern day bunkers. I'm talking about stuff like the Garden of Time, TSAB HQ, or the Saint's Cradle. Stuff where your regular average trooper doesn't have the firepower to do anything against.
 
Shame Taylor did not get Divider 996 as well, you know.
That could have given a nice bit of chaos, what with the double unison option.
Would really have worked well with her planet hopping.
And it could have set her up for getting that fake Divider Warship and that partially completed fake Divider 996 as well.

Ad in the device Master & Slave option when having more then one device and...
 
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