There are very few things that can both stop lifegain and take down a trained planeswalker.

You... don't have to stop the lifegain, though??? As long as you're dealing out damage faster than she can repair it, it almost doesn't matter that she can heal herself.

Isn't there a plot about Garrus going insane and hunting other planeswalkers in and around this period? I'm reasonably sure that a skilled planeswalker is another possible alternative to a scary beastie in terms of what could have done this to Alexis.

I think you mean Garruk, but yes, this could hypothetically be him. Though if it was I'd expect more puncture wounds and less broken bones. Last I knew, he favored summoning wolves and cutting people up with a big axe.
 
This is a pretty good story, though there is some annoying parts. Like the very annoying self blaming(really bad in Twisted paths) and all the worrying angst. And the Pirate ark that was really boring to the point where I skimmed it till I reached the point where he went back to Tamriel(skyrim). And the not actively learning every spell he can, cause his enchantments just aren't worth shit byond some cute gimmicks. But besides that the story is fun. Now I just have to wait for the updates like everybody else, and figure out what else to do now that I don't have a long story to occupy my time.
 
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I glanced up from my book when Alexis made a small sound. Sheila raised her head from where she had been resting it across my lap to look as well.

Alexis stirred slightly, her eyes fluttering before opening, "Wh-" she started before she suddenly coughed and I could see her face distort in pain..

"Easy, you're good," I said and reached for a bottle of water, holding it so she could drink.

She relaxed back, "...Atregos."

"It's me," I agreed, "You made it. But something messed you up badly."

"How long?"

"Over a week. Our healing magic has its limits, especially if you want to use that arm again."

Alexis glanced to her right arm. It was completely hidden from view, wrapped in bandages and healing wraps, "How bad?"

"The healers can give you the full list if you want," Sheila said and raised her head fully, "But it looked like something crushed most of your right side. They can heal it, but it will take a while."

Alexis blinked at her, "...Sheila?"

Sheila nodded, "I finally went through the ritual."

Nodding, Alexis felt the injured side of her face before she let her head drop back down, "Ah."

"What happened?" I asked and closed my book.

"Was on Decuva. Been there?"

I shook my head, "Never heard of it."

She nodded, "...Ended up in the middle of a civil war. A peasant revolt against the Emperor. They seemed to be doing pretty well at the time actually. I was just exploring and I didn't get involved… at first."

"At first?" Sheila asked.

Alexis nodded, "I was in a village called… Sumetia. Almost a town really. Firmly on the rebellion's side. I did the usual thing, find an Inn, get some food, and listen to the locals."

I nodded.

"Third day, the Imperial forces rolled over the place. No warning, nothing. Foot soldiers, mages, dragon air support-"

"Dragons?" I asked.

She shook her head, "Two legs, four wings. Looked kinda odd, but I think you'd call them proto-drakes. They had riders."

I nodded, letting her continue.

"Well… anyway," Alexis continued, rubbing her eyes with her free hand, "They forced a surrender in less than an hour. I mean, what were they supposed to do? They barely had any mages and no drago- proto-drakes."

"What did you do?"

Alexis sighed, "Well, my plan was to keep my head down and then leave when I could. I've already gotten involved on one Plane before, I didn't plan on it on another one. That plan didn't work."

"What happened?"

She sighed, "...They gathered everyone outside the city and started mass executions. Everybody in the guard, their families, anyone they suspected of actively supporting the rebellion. Their families too. I couldn't just… stand by and do nothing."

"You fought them?"

"Yes," she agreed and sighed, "With my summons and enchantments, I was driving them back until their commander got involved personally. Remember my squid summon?"

Squid was one word for it. Kraken was more like it.

"Yes?"

"While not as capable on land, it was doing things well. Until he hit it with an unsummon powerful enough to make it pop. Then he pulled out summons of his own," she said and sighed, shaking her head, "A lot of them. Soldiers, mages… demons."

"What else?"

Alexis shook her head, "He kicked my ass."

"What's his name?"

"Tusa Geraka. Ever heard of him?"

I shook my head, "He's a Planeswalker?"

Alexis frowned and then sighed, ":..I don't know," she admitted, "They had primarily Land magic on that Plane, so he could have been local. But he was so good, I don't know. Maybe."

"What happened?"

"...I don't know," she admitted and collapsed back against the bed, "I barely got away. His skills seemed to be in his summons and in supporting them, not personal combat. I was able to run for it, but he got me."

"How many walks from here?"

"...Two," she said and sighed, "I did them back to back, I knew I wouldn't make it otherwise."

While her Walks weren't as tough on her as mine were on me and she could do them more often, she couldn't go anywhere near as far and it was almost as tiring for her to do.

"When I ran… last thing I saw before I Walked," Alexis said, quieter this time as she closed her eyes, "I saw the entire town burning. Ten thousand people...."

Fuck.
 
"Yes," she agreed and sighed, "With my summons and enchantments, I was driving them back until their commander got involved personally. Remember my squid summon?"

Squid was one word for it. Kraken was more like it.

"Yes?"

"While not as capable on land, it was doing things well. Until he hit it with an unsummon powerful enough to make it pop. Then he pulled out summons of his own," she said and sighed, shaking her head, "A lot of them. Soldiers, mages… demons."
So wait... That was literally all she had?

For someone personally trained by Ajani that's really pathetic...
 
So wait... That was literally all she had?

For someone personally trained by Ajani that's really pathetic...

I got the impression that Ajani did a lot of training with her regarding personal combat, which may account for the fact that she's lagging a bit in the summoning area. Alternatively, she may have just abbreviated the fight to only talk about what was most important: the fact that he could unsummon her stuff.


The Internet is being unhelpful here. Does anybody recognize this guy, or do we think he's an original creation?
 
I got the impression that Ajani did a lot of training with her regarding personal combat, which may account for the fact that she's lagging a bit in the summoning area. Alternatively, she may have just abbreviated the fight to only talk about what was most important: the fact that he could unsummon her stuff.
Unsummon is literally the most basic of basic and most common of common blue spells.

The Internet is being unhelpful here. Does anybody recognize this guy, or do we think he's an original creation?
Original creation, which makes her loss even more damning.
 
Unsummon is literally the most basic of basic and most common of common blue spells.

...so? It's still a very efficient way to remove/delay a big threat while throwing out your own threats, and that's not a combat style Ajani would have much opportunity to teach Alexis how to counter. EDIT: Plus, being able to say "Hey, this guy is a Blue mage and knows how to unsummon things" is relevant tactical information if they intend to go fight him; it means that they either need to not rely on summons or have enough summons to keep the pressure on him.

Original creation, which makes her loss even more damning.

...seriously? I feel like you're expecting hypercompetence out of Alexis without any compelling reason to expect it from her. Trained by Ajani or not, Alexis is fairly inexperienced as a Planeswalker and can therefore be reasonably expected to lose a duel against any seasoned planeswalker, especially one who's spent several years in combat (and he clearly does have a fair bit of martial experience under his belt, else he wouldn't be a field commander) and who had an army already on site to supplement his summons. I'd understand your contempt if we knew that this guy shouldn't be able to beat her, but we don't know that because, by your own analysis, he's essentially a completely-unknown quantity. Put plainly, based on what we know so far, your complaints seem much less like pointing out legitimate story problems and much more like complaint for its own sake.
 
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The flights seems kinda short sighted ( or they don't fully trust atregos )...why in the world he doesnt use every dragon as summons??!

Think about it, Alex, ysera etc as potential summons could reaaally save his bacon if needed and cover for his lack of spellpower.

I had a pure dragon deck back in the day and it was glorious...azerothian ones tho?...even better.
 
...so? It's still a very efficient way to remove/delay a big threat while throwing out your own threats, and that's not a combat style Ajani would have much opportunity to teach Alexis how to counter. EDIT: Plus, being able to say "Hey, this guy is a Blue mage and knows how to unsummon things" is relevant tactical information if they intend to go fight him; it means that they either need to not rely on summons or have enough summons to keep the pressure on him.

..seriously? I feel like you're expecting hypercompetence out of Alexis without any compelling reason to expect it from her. Trained by Ajani or not, Alexis is fairly inexperienced as a Planeswalker and can therefore be reasonably expected to lose a duel against any seasoned planeswalker, especially one who's spent several years in combat (and he clearly does have a fair bit of martial experience under his belt, else he wouldn't be a field commander) and who had an army already on site to supplement his summons. I'd understand your contempt if we knew that this guy shouldn't be able to beat her, but we don't know that because, by your own analysis, he's essentially a completely-unknown quantity. Put plainly, based on what we know so far, your complaints seem much less like pointing out legitimate story problems and much more like complaint for its own sake.
You're forgetting that Alexis ended up going through a multi year timeslip into the past.

At this point she's been walking nearly as long as Chandra.
 
You're forgetting that Alexis ended up going through a multi year timeslip into the past.

At this point she's been walking nearly as long as Chandra.

That's not really saying much, though? Chandra's not very good at anything that doesn't involve burning things to the ground; I could just as easily see her losing in this same situation.
 
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"So what's the plan?" Wrathion asked, crossing his arms as he leaned back against my workbench across the room from me.

"Don't know," I said absentmindedly as I kept going through the enchantments laid into his helmet, "Depends on Alexis I suppose. If she wants to go back and rip the guy a new arsehole, I'm inclined to assist her."

Wrathion slowly nodded, "Let me know if you want some more help with that."

I glanced over at him and he shrugged,

"She helped us when we needed it."

I picked the helmet up and peered at it in the light, "And she has a nice arse."

I glanced over at Wrathion, finding him glowering at me,

"That is not why I wish to help her."

Heh.

I shook my head and channeled mana into the helmet, quicksmithing it into a collapsed ball as if I was balling it up like a piece of paper, "This is junk, I had been hoping to transfer the enchantments while simply replacing the metal, but that won't work. Turn back and strip the rest, I'll have to make you an entire new set if we want to get rid of this dwemer crap."

Wrathion snored but nodded, moving into the center of my workshop so he would have room to return to his real form, "I see. How long would that take?"

"Longer than her recovery in any case," I said as the room filled with spellsmoke from his transformation, the air moving enchantments quickly neutralizing it as I continued, "And I advise you to not try to pursue her. That won't end well for you."

"Is that so?" he asked and started to unclasp and wiggle out of his full set of dragon armour.

"Yeah, she's hung up on the entire monogamy thing humans do," I said and shrugged, "We have decent chemistry, something could have happened there I think, but as it is, it wouldn't work. Best to just stay friends."

"Just because she isn't into you..." Wrathion said with a snort, dropping the last of his armour onto the floor with a small crash of several hundred kilos of heavy metal hitting enchanted stonework.

I grinned at him, "Just don't come complaining to me when she slashes your wings. Besides, you are thinking of this all wrong."

He tilted his head in question, "In what way?"

"She wouldn't be your consort. You'd be hers."

Wrathion growled at me before stalking out of my workshop, "How soon will it be ready?"

"Month or so," I said with a grin, "I think you'll like the result anyway, the new version has some nice features."

As he left, I shook my head in amusement. Well, all luck to him but I suspected things wouldn't end too well if he tried.

Turning back to my workbench, I flicked my hand and brought up my notes with Library just in time to hear a voice behind me,

"Hey."

I glanced back and then frowned, "What in the blind eternities are you doing out of bed, woman!?"

Alexis looked like hell still, even after days of healing and being stuffed to the gills with healing potions and spells. The side of her face was bruised and her right arm was bundled up in enough bandages and wraps that it looked twice its normal size. She had managed to get some clothes somewhere, but was mostly wrapped up in her blanket.

"Had to... do something..." she admitted and took a step only to stumble, catching herself with her good hand against the wall.

I moved to help her but the look she shot me stopped me short. Instead she sighed and shakily sat down with her back against the wall next to the door.

I shook my head and sighed, "Want some water?"

"Got anything stronger?"

"Not much of a drinker," I said, "Besides, I'm not giving you anything without knowing how it would fuck with the gazillion potions in your system."

"...Fair enough..." she sighed and let her head drop back against the wall.

She stayed like that for a long moment and I got her a bottle of water anyway. Enchanted to be self filling. Very practical.

"You lost my sword," I told her as I put the bottle down next to her.

That got a small smile from her, "Your sword, huh?"

"I made it, that makes it mine no matter who carries it around. I suppose you'd like a new one now?"

"If you wouldn't mind?" she admitted and opened her eyes before picking up the bottle and taking a swallow.

I nodded and moved to sit next to her, my back against the wall, "Still going for a rapier style or would you like something else, maybe something a bit more weeabo?"

Alexis had a remarkably good glower, "I prefer a straight and narrow blade."

I smirked, "I'll see what I can do. Any special effect features you'd prefer?"

"...I just want a sword, it doesn't need to turn into a fighter jet or include a lifejacket, Atregos."

I snorted in amusement, "What's the fun in that?"

She shook her head and then touched her cheek, "...I might need something more protective too."

"That I can do. Not a full set of armour?"

"Not my style," she said before she grinned, "But something that could protect my nice ass would be good."

"Oh bollocks, you heard that."

That set her laughing before she stopped with a groan, feeling her side, "Oh relax," she said at my worried look, "I'm fine."

"Are you fine?"

She paused at that and her mood seemed to visibly drop and she sighed, "I don't know. If I had stayed out of it..."

"Hundreds would have died."

"Instead of the ten thousand when I got involved!?" she exclaimed and the bottle she had held crashed into the wall across the room, shattering into a million little shards, "Yes! Good job Alexis!"

"And the tens of thousands I killed," I told her quietly, "That was fighting on our side. Dragons, humans, elves, dwarves, gnomes, orcs, tauren, pandaren."

She fell silent at that for a second, "That's different. You did it to save Azeroth, they would have died anyway if you had failed."

"Maybe. Maybe not and when I did it, I wasn't sure it wouldn't pop the Plane like a soapbubble. Maybe that wasn't the best way to win, maybe it was the only way?" I said and shrugged, "Only the Bronzes know and they aren't telling. You tried to save those people, you did your best. Sometimes that's all we can do. Sometimes we... just fail."

"...Or make things worse," she said softly and rubbed her eyes with her undamaged hand, "Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. FUCK!"

I was quiet for a long moment, letting her collect herself again before I spoke up again, "What are your plans?"

"You're wondering if I'm going to go back there," she asked and then shook her head, "I... I don't know," she admitted.

"You already have taken responsibilities on one Plane," I reminded her, "You don't need to go looking for more. It wasn't your fault."

"I know, I know," she sighed before looking to me, "But I don't know if I can let it continue like that, let him get away with it."

I nodded, "You realize what'll happen if you go, right? I'd have to come with you. I'm not letting you go up against him alone again. And if we do, we need to be ready."

"You don't need to do that."

I smirked at her, "Oh, and pass up the opportunity to save a damsel in distress again? I wouldn't dream of it."

"It doesn't count if you go into distress with me, lizard! Besides, the knight is meant to save the damsel from the dragon, not the reverse!" she answered, forcing a small smile as she shook her head, "Fuck... I don't know," she then said with a frown, "Maybe it would just make things escalate again. I have to think."

I nodded, "That you can do in your bed," I said and got up, starting to assist her onto her feet as well, "Before Zrazta or one of the healers discovers you missing and decides to come hunt you down. By the time you are healed up, I'll have some equipment ready for you, no matter what you decide."

"...Thank you."

She didn't need to say what for.









AN// And that's it for the moment. We'll continue with Atregos later, but on Wednesday it will instead be Hell to Pay. The continuation of Hell is other angels Hope you enjoyed and take care. :)
 
Chandra is highly skilled in the use of spells, enchantments, item creation, and summoning.

:Citation Needed: Based on her cards, pretty much the only thing she does that isn't directly burning stuff to the ground is creating fire elementals (which is basically just burning stuff to the ground with extra steps), summoning gremlins (for... some reason), however the hell we're supposed to interpret impulsive draw/discard then draw effects in-setting, or just straight-up creating red mana so that other people can cast something else. Meanwhile, Jace has been around about as long (aka has about as many cards) and can draw cards/stimulate intellect, enhance his summons, mill people/mess with their minds, weaken enemy summons, cast other people's spells, create illusions, gain control of creatures, boost stamina (or whatever it is he does when he untaps creatures), unsummon creatures, and counter spells. So clearly they have the capacity to show a planeswalker being creative with their powers and having more than one skillset, so if Chandra's cards lack that shown creativity, there's only one conclusion to draw, and that's that Chandra is a one-trick pony who struggles when fire is not the answer to a particular problem. Beyond that, it's what, throw gremlins at them? Unless she's fighting someone who relies a lot on artifacts, that won't do much good.

Besides, Chandra's lack of versatility has been a plot point before, when the Gatewatch tried to fight Nicol Bolas and got beaten to a pulp.

But it wasn't working. Yes, he was a dragon, and she knew that, but she thought there was a decent chance she could still hurt him. It wasn't like he was literally made of fire. She needed to try harder.

-from Hour of Devastation

Surely, someone who is highly skilled in all the things you listed would have something to try once she knew fire wasn't working aside from "burn the dragon harder".
 
Based on her cards, pretty much the only thing she does that isn't directly burning stuff to the ground is creating fire elementals (which is basically just burning stuff to the ground with extra steps), summoning gremlins (for... some reason), however the hell we're supposed to interpret impulsive draw/discard then draw effects in-setting, or just straight-up creating red mana so that other people can cast something else. Meanwhile, Jace has been around about as long (aka has about as many cards) and can draw cards/stimulate intellect, enhance his summons, mill people/mess with their minds, weaken enemy summons, cast other people's spells, create illusions, gain control of creatures, boost stamina (or whatever it is he does when he untaps creatures), unsummon creatures, and counter spells. So clearly they have the capacity to show a planeswalker being creative with their powers and having more than one skillset, so if Chandra's cards lack that shown creativity, there's only one conclusion to draw, and that's that Chandra is a one-trick pony who struggles when fire is not the answer to a particular problem. Beyond that, it's what, throw gremlins at them? Unless she's fighting someone who relies a lot on artifacts, that won't do much good.

Besides, Chandra's lack of versatility has been a plot point before, when the Gatewatch tried to fight Nicol Bolas and got beaten to a pulp.

-from Hour of Devastation

Surely, someone who is highly skilled in all the things you listed would have something to try once she knew fire wasn't working aside from "burn the dragon harder".
You might want to check up on her Ravnica stuff instead of relying on out of date things.

Chandra Nalaar

Chandra Nalaar is a human planeswalker from Avishkar. She is a member of the Gatewatch. Chandra has bright auburn hair and amber eyes.[2] She stands at 5'6" tall and weighs 130 lbs.[1][3] A highly gifted pyromancer, she is not one for subtlety or grace. Chandra is particularly good with fire —...
 
You might want to check up on her Ravnica stuff instead of relying on out of date things.

Chandra Nalaar

Chandra Nalaar is a human planeswalker from Avishkar. She is a member of the Gatewatch. Chandra has bright auburn hair and amber eyes.[2] She stands at 5'6" tall and weighs 130 lbs.[1][3] A highly gifted pyromancer, she is not one for subtlety or grace. Chandra is particularly good with fire —...

...I control-f'd for Ravnica and literally nothing there indicates that Chandra uses stuff other than fire. Either quote something more specific to prove your point or stop talking out of your ass.

(Besides, given the sheer unmitigated stupidity of the War of the Spark novels, I don't even count those as canon. If WotC can't even bother to make sure their novels get released in the correct order, they can't expect me to take any of the stupidity inside those novels seriously!)
 
...I control-f'd for Ravnica and literally nothing there indicates that Chandra uses stuff other than fire. Either quote something more specific to prove your point or stop talking out of your ass.

(Besides, given the sheer unmitigated stupidity of the War of the Spark novels, I don't even count those as canon. If WotC can't even bother to make sure their novels get released in the correct order, they can't expect me to take any of the stupidity inside those novels seriously!)
The associated cards from the Ravnica block...

They include creatures, enchantments, spells, and the pyromancers gauntlet she created.
 
The associated cards from the Ravnica block...

They include creatures, enchantments, spells, and the pyromancers gauntlet she created.

*exasperated sigh* Okay, first off, there is no list of associated cards from the Ravnica block on the linked page you brought up. I trust you see the issue with using such a list as evidence for your position. Second off, if I am to assume you mean just the general Associated Cards list on that page, then that's basically fire, fire, more fire, hotter fire, fire elementals, and artifacts used to create or control fire. And a bunch of cards that are obviously not Chandra casting them, such as Captured by the Consulate or Chandra's Defeat. Hell, I even went into the Depicted On list to be safe, and out of those where Chandra is clearly casting the spell, I found only destruction of artifacts as something that might not have been fire. And even then there's also nothing to indicate that she doesn't destroy artifacts by lighting them on fire. Needless to say, this does not prove your point in the slightest. At most, the cards where she can cast instants or sorceries from the graveyard indicate some ability to, say, recast a Lightning Bolt or a Lava Coil, but is she ever shown on a card doing so? No. Your argument thus far has no goddamn substance.
 
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