Dragons in LotR are essentially engineered bioweapons, designed from the ground up to be evil corruptive living flying artillery. A dragon that was never corrupted to evil is suspected to be an eagle in much the same way Orcs are corrupted Elves and Trolls are corrupted Ents; a dragon seeking redemption is unheard of (and would quite possibly RETURN to being an eagle, Tolkein never really settled the "corrupted creatures redeemable or no and if so how" question, which is why he never published through Silmarilion in his lifetime).

This is like 40k orks turning out to be calm, intellectual gentleman for them.
 
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Three days here and so far this world seemed nice enough, if boring. We had spent three days here now, walking around the city, looking at wares and listening to the locals.

"Well?" Ren as she sipped her wine. "I think we've seen the most we can see here by now."

I couldn't help but nod in agreement, "Seems so. Nothing much to see here it appears."

While there were rumours of magic and fantastic creatures and darkness beyond the mountains, there was little concrete information.

These people clearly didn't have anything new for us to learn. Their architectural abilities were clearly impressive, but in all honesty, nothing special.

It may be somewhere to expand to at a later date just for gold and resources, but right now it wasn't worth the effort.

"Still a couple of days until we could Walk," Ren said and leaned against the marble overlooking the city. We were on the fifth level of the city, close to the top.

"A little longer still if I don't want to tire myself out, "I agreed, "say three more days."

Ren turned around and leaned back against the stone as she eyed me with a smile, "I can think of a few things we can do to pass the time?"

"Oh really?" I asked with a grin. "And what may that be?"

"We could return to the mountains, spend a couple of days flying and hunting," She suggested and put the glass down beside her.

"Now that does sound rather great," I admitted and brushed her hair out of her face. "Give this place one more day and then we leave?"

She nodded, "Very well."

"But not in that direction," I said and nodded towards the mountains at the horizon. What looked like a volcano eruption was lighting up the dark clouds there.

Ren nodded with a frown, "Is it me or has that gotten worse since we arrived?"

"I think so. That would be trouble when it comes to the harvests later, that much ash will cause havoc."

A man in white on a white horse, a… dwarf or maybe a child sitting behind him, galloping through the streets, people scattering before them.

"That's inconsiderate," I said and then shrugged. "Must have been important."

Ren made a small sound of agreement and then looked back towards the fires in the distant sky.

"Wonder what the next world will bring us?" she wondered. "Maybe we should have stayed and gone to study the cities of the Draenei instead."

"…Maybe," I admitted and leaned against the stone, "But if it's the Naaru that built them, who knows if it's even possible to replicate them?"

That drew a smile from her, "An enchantment you can't figure out?"

"No such thing," I growled and put my arms around her waist, pulling her closer. "But it may take a while… so long I might as well recreate it on my own instead."

Ren nodded and nuzzled. "True. But you will get it in time."

"You bet I will," I answered and nuzzled back. "But I can still do that later. As we said, they aren't going anywhere. Going exploring is always a gamble… perhaps we will find nothing more exciting than this world. Perhaps we will find a world with magics and artefacts that we couldn't even dream of."

She pulled back and looked up at me. "That's a bit optimistic, isn't it?"

"…A bit, yeah. But maybe we will at least find someplace with magic that doesn't try to kill us on sight. Somewhere we can establish trade. Somewhere… not here."

Nodding, Ren picked up her glass again and sipped it. "At least they have good wine."

"Well, that's always something I suppose," I said with a grin and sighed, looking out towards the fire in the distance. "Come on, let's get some sleep, tomorrow we'll do one last pass of the city to see if we missed something. Even a lead on some magic somewhere would make this Plane worth exploring."

Finishing her wine, Ren put her glass down and turned to head inside and I moved to follow her, rolling my shoulders.

It had been a long couple of days, walking around the city. A couple of long disappointing days with little to show for it.

Nothing but rumour, not even a single little magical trinket. Not even the simplest little thing like an always-dry cloak.

Even places with little magic had those.

Why these people didn't, didn't make much sense to me. There was magic here, I could feel it! Even Earth had magic, if hidden, so why didn't this place?

Sighing I sank down on the bed. At least we had been able to get a better place once we traded for some coin. Didn't even take that much, just a couple of necklaces and rings and none of it enchanted.

Not a massive amount of coin, but enough for a nicer room for a couple of days.

"Who knows, maybe we're lucky," Ren said with a grin and slipped her illusion ring off her finger as she scooted onto the bed in turn. "Maybe this place is full of wizards and magic and maybe we just managed to miss it somehow?"

"I think I know a wizard when I see him."





AN// Many thanks to Obliviated fan for betaing this section.
 
...gotta wonder what Gandalf's summoning cost would be.

Edit: Haha, mental image I had to share - Atreus and Ren leave Minas Tirith against the protests of the inhabitants, run smack into Sauron's army over the horizon from Minas Tirith, and eat/raze the army; Minas Tirith is stuck waiting for a siege that never happens. Confusion all around!
 
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You think they will see Gandalf later on and recognize him, and then Atreus will realize that he literally walked past him without noticing?
 
New thread.


Yesssssssssssss My precious.
So shall they show Smaug the power of a true dragon.
 
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Just binged this story out over two days. Excellent as always, Hiver! It was really great to see a MTG 'walker SI that isn't garbage powerwank, and that follows how Neowalkers actually function. Really like that you've not made your SI be more of an artificer than a battlemage, something very unique among 'walker fics. Really gets my muse churning to see a so often poorly executed idea done well.

Although, I do have to admit I'm still waiting for a 'walk to lead them to Equestria (Either regular or Blank Page's).

You know it's coming.

Don't fight it.
 
Oliphants... To an Azerothian dragon, let alone a Planeswalker, they're basically self-delivering combo platters, complete with little screaming garnishes.
 
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"Well then," Ren said as we left the store, "we did appear to miss something."

I shook my head. "We didn't miss a wizard, he just arrived."

What were the bloody odds?

At least the locals called him a Wizard. It was just rumours so far, but who knew? Maybe having magic was just really, really rare here? Like on Earth I suppose.

Earth did have some really interesting spells, too bad they didn't seem to work anywhere else. Not like going back there for a couple of years would be a good idea anyway, we didn't exactly leave on the best of terms.

"So, what do we do? Try to find this 'Gandalf' or continue on?" Ren asked and looked thoughtful. "Maybe he would know something worthwhile."

"Worth a try," I said with a shrug and shouldered my satchel. "He should be found somewhere up by the castle, according to the merchant."

Rengosa nodded and then frowned and glanced up towards the clouds. "Storm coming?"

I glanced up at the clouds covering the sun and then frowned. "I don't know. Doesn't feel like a storm. Odd."

Ren frowned and then blinked and glanced around before pulling me into a valley, where she cast a magesight spell, a purple glyph forming on her forehead before she looked up. "Atregos… it's full of mana. Those clouds aren't natural."

"What?"

Casting the spell on my own, I looked up. The clouds glowed with a faint shine of magic. Those were not natural indeed.

But why in the world would somebody magic up a bunch of clouds? They weren't even doing anything, not a storm or anything.

A storm or rain or something I could see why somebody would want to cast, but just clouds?

Strange.

Cancelling my spell, I blinked at her. "…Odd."

"Very," she agreed. "Maybe this Gandalf knows what's going on… if he's not the one doing it."


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"Halt! State your business!" the guard demanded as we got close to the gates of the castle grounds at the top of the city.

"Hello," I told him with a smile. "We're looking for Gandalf. Is he here?"

Sometimes it's just best to keep it simple.

He shook his head. "He's not here. There's an inn one level down, they are staying there."

"They?"

"The wizard and his companion, the hobbit."

I blinked at him before I nodded. "I see, we'll look for him there then. Thank you."

The fuck was a hobbit? Sounded like something you would eat.

…Now I'm wondering what a hobbit would taste like and not sure that's a good thing as it's likely some kind of person.

"Inn it is," Ren said with a nod. "Thank you."

We headed back the way we came in search of the inn and she glanced at me. "…Wonder what a hobbit is."

"No clue, never heard of it," I answered with a shrug. "We'll see, I guess."

It didn't take long to find the inn in question. It was actually not that far from the one we were staying in, funnily enough, a level up and a couple of hundred meters away.

"…Should we move here?" I asked as we walked inside. "This one is nicer."

"We're heading out anyway, remember," Ren reminded me. "Unless this is a massive discovery, we're flying out tomorrow."

"Eh, true enough," I said and walked over to the bar. "Barkeep. We're looking for a man named 'Gandalf'."

"The wizard?" he asked and then motioned towards the stairs. "First room on the right."

"Thank you."

Flipping him a coin, I headed for the stairs, Ren following along. The door was a thick oaken door and I reached to knock at it.

There were some sounds of movement on the other side before it pulled open to reveal an old man with a long white beard, wearing a long white robe. "Yes, yes. What can I…"

He paused and stared at us, his eyes widening.

I smiled at him. "Hello, do you have a moment to hear of our lady and savior Alexstrasza?"

I just couldn't resist.

He just kind of blinked at me in surprise. Ren glared at me and elbowed my side before she sighed, "Ignore him, he think he is being funny. I'm Ren, this is Atregos. Do you have a moment to talk?"

"…I suppose I do."




AN// Many thanks to Pietersielie for betaing this section.
 
There were some sounds of movement on the other side before it pulled open to reveal an old man with a long white beard, wearing a long white robe. "Yes, yes. What can I…"

He paused and stared at us, his eyes widening.

I smiled at him. "Hello, do you have a moment to hear of our lady and savior Alexstrasza?"

I just couldn't resist.

This is even funnier when you consider a) what Gandalf is, b) what Gandalf almost certainly sees.

Either way, I cracked the hell up even before I got to thinking about it.

Good thing my asthma inhaler's almost half full.
 
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He led the way into the room. It was larger than ours and made from white stone. This must be an even more upper-class kind of inn than the one we picked.

There was another person in there, a little man with bare and hairy feet.

These were the ones we saw riding through the streets yesterday!

The little man, barely more than chest high tall, jumped off the chair he was sitting on, "Gandalf, who's this?"

The wizard nodded and walked over to look us over, "This is Atregos and Ren. If I'm not mistaken, they are travelers… from quite far."

I looked over at him, "You know who we are?"

He smiled a bit, "Not completely. You are more than what you appear, but what exactly you are, I could not say."

I nodded, "We are not what we appear, but we mean no harm," I said.

"I'm Peregin Took," he said in turn with a slightly guarded look before glancing over to Gandalf, "What do you mean, not what they appear?"

"I'm not too certain."

Oh, for crying out loud. Just stop beating about the bush.

I sighed, "I'm a Planeswalker. Ren is traveling with me as I move between worlds."

Gandalf hmmed, "That I know. But that's not what you are… but it matters less than why you are here?"

Nodding, I sat down by the table, "True enough. We have no hostile intentions, we seek knowledge. Magic, mechanical, metallurgical. Anything anyone would be willing to trade for."

He nodded and pulled out a pipe starting to stuff it with something, "I see. I'm afraid you picked a bad time to visit. Darkness is rising to the east, the forces of Mordor are on the march. They are coming, the clouds cover their approach."

"War?"

"War," he sighed, "Minas Tirith is the last bastion of man."

Ren looked at me, "So that's why the clouds glow with magic. They use them to shield them from the sun?"

Gandalf nodded in agreement.

"How long?" Ren asked with a frown.

"Difficult to say. Days at most."

Getting up I walked out on the balcony, looking into the distance. Nothing so far. Casting a quick scrying spell, I sent the viewpoint higher and increased the magnification.

There. An army of beings marching towards the city, tens of thousands of them. Beings clad in dark armour.

What are those?

Never seen anything like those.

I zoomed in further but there is only so much you could see through the shimmer of atmosphere and I couldn't reach that far with a scrying spell, not without an anchor.

"What are those?" I asked and dropped the scrying spell to look to the side where Gandalf had walked up next to me, puffing his pipe.

"Orcs."

"Those are no orcs. Not any sort I ever seen."

He grunted slightly, "I see."

Crossing my arms, I looked out into the distance, "Last bastion of man?"

"The elves are leaving these shores. The dwarfs are defending their keeps so far but is likely to fall in time."

"As a rule, we don't get involved in the wars of mortals," I told him, "We represent an organization, the Azure Consortium. As I said before, we trade for knowledge, but we also trade knowledge… including artefacts."

Gandalf shook his head, "I'm not sure learning new things would help in this case, even if it is something I enjoy."

"Oh, I don't know about that," Ren said with a smile from the city, "We also trade artefacts."

I nodded, "Expensive of course, would need to be custom work. But I could make something that would protect the city. Well, from siege damage at least, the so-called Orcs would be more difficult."

The little man rushed up next to me, "You could save the city!?"

"No," I said and shook my head, "You could save the city. Assuming you have something to pay for it?"

He stared at me in horror, "You would let the city be destroyed when you could save it!?"

"As I said, we don't get involved in the wars of mortals," I told him, "What you do, is all up to you. Or should we police every world in existence? Rule all?"

Of course, that was just as excuse. The real one was that I didn't want to get involved in every bullshit war that existed. There wasn't enough time in the world even if I didn't age. Of course, I also wasn't as much of an arsehole as the super friends of Ravnica…

"May I see your pin?" I then asked the little man and pointed at the one on his cloak, "It's interesting."

He scowled at me but pulled it from his cloak and handed it over. I turned it over in my hands. It wasn't silver, some kind of other metal. Felt strong, highly magically conductive. Fine craftswork too, at least for somebody that don't mold the metal directly.

I slowly nodded and put it in my satchel, "Payment received in full. I'm going to need your weight in silver to work with and five gems, as large as you can get them. Clear ones if possible."

Took looked at me in surprise and I winked at him,

"Never said I we didn't give discounts depending on the situation. Don't spread it around."

Ren just sighed with a small smile, shaking her head.





AN// Many thanks to Itsune for betaing this part. Posted early due to early morning tomorrow.
 
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