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Well yes, but I was just responding to the validity of question of him being valid for student or staff based on age. It obviously doesn't matter.

The real question should have been why he considered, at all, being enrolled as a student in a all girls school that was the location for a romance/comedy harem plot. Sure, his infiltration skills would level like mad, but it would be predestined to fall through at the worst time.
Ah, but i'm going off of the manga, not the anime. in the anime, it is indeed an all girls school on the Academy Island, in the manga, there's both boys and girls, but with them in separate classes/schools/dorms (hence Kotaru attending the academy/the guys Martial artists clubs fighting Ku Fei, so on so forth.). He also stated getting into the girls class would be the cliche thing to do, he was actually considering going to the boys classes/college classes, and dealing with the main plot arcs in his spare time.
 
Negi Springfield
Lvl: 47
"Son of a Legend"
"Child Teacher"

Negi Springfield is a mage in-training and the homeroom and English teacher of Class 2-A of Mahora Academy Middle School for girls. He is the son of Nagi Springfield, known as the legendary "Thousand Master", and ???
He has been raised by his cousin and the people around his small village because of his father's mysterious disappearance. After numerous demons attacked his village, he was saved by Nagi, who gave Negi his staff and mysteriously left. Negi, determined to find his father, quickly joined a magic academy and graduated at the age of ten. He was sent to Japan to act as a teacher at Mahora Academy as part of his training.
Currently, he is in direct confrontation with one of his students, Evangeline A.K. Mcdowell, a vampire and dark mage bound to Mahou Academy.

Emotions: Tense, Focused, Unsettled, Sad
Well I did apparently remember that it is a girls school correctly. He would have been on an interlay different campus, not in a different class. I'll admit a bit of tunnel-vision on not considering going to the correct gendered school.

Edit: Unless you are saying they have two Class 2-As and specifying the girls class? That seems like it would an administrative nightmare having duplicate Class names in the same school.
Edid2: Girls Class 2-A of Mahora Academy Middle School, would be clearer if that is the case.
 
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Well I did apparently remember that it is a girls school correctly. He would have been on an interlay different campus, not in a different class. I'll admit a bit of tunnel-vision on not considering going to the correct gendered school.
Corret! i just went to double check my research and while Negi does teach at the girls middle school, The Mahora acadamy district has at least a dozen differnt school all in its bounds. So yeah, to attend the girls middle school would be a Faux Pas, I'm using Author fiat to say that That dean K. covers middleschool/highschool, and two other deans cover primary school and college classes. I'm also saying that high schools are generally Co-ed, and colleges as well. however primary through middle is generally separated.

And as for the tunnel Vision, no harm no foul. happens to the best of us. ;)
 
That would actually be sort of neat, in an urban planning way, to have a girls campus and a boys campus that are connected by a single administrative building. It has a pleasing symmetry to it. Though I don't think that is how it was depicted in the manga (sadly). I only have a passing familiarity with it I'll admit.
 
I actually don't think that was ever actually addressed correct, so... AUTHOR FIAT!

Because, you know. I like that symmetry as well.
 

Ive noticed he's skilled in runes. I wonder how hard it would be to craft a homunculus body that he can seal himself into (and out of if need be). This may be a viable method for bypassing the inherent weakness in a Gamer's Body with a locked level. He can create bodies like Iron Man creates new suits.
 
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Nerfed 5
Nerfed 5

I sat up with a low yawn as the early morning light filled the room. I rolled off the bean bag to my feet stretching my back before Gamer's Body kicked in to remove any stiffness. I reached down and inventoried the bean bag and swapped my outfits from the sleepwear to something a bit more… business casual. A dark gray button up shirt, slacks, black doc martins and a checkered blue green tie, and then a few minutes messing with my hair so it was combed out of my eyes and I looked rather professional. I looked in my inventory I was missing something…. Ah, there we go.

I pulled out my horn rimmed glasses and ran a hand down the sides. I focused and a small bone shard came from the tip of my nail, and I used it to inscribe a series of anchoring runes into the frame of the glasses. I slid them on and triggered two glamours, one overlaying the same image of my unmodified dark blue eyes, another a reflective surface in front of me. I spent a moment making sure it synced properly with my eye movement and when blinking, before biting my middle finger and running the blood along the runes. A few seconds later, my glasses shimmered bright green before fading to normal. Testing that, I triggered my eyes of the occult and was happy to note that the change in eye color was unseen. I pulled off my glasses and my eyes flickered green as the illusion dropped before the bright purple and gold glow appeared once more.

Satisfied, I slid my glasses back on and reached into my inventory for a black leather messenger bag.

I looked around the house, it had been two days since the Dean had given me the house, and I spent most of that time fixing the place up. Thankfully it had gotten to the point where it was comfortable if not done. The building now had unpainted drywall up, and the floors were finished and stained a nice reddish brown. The roof sealed with both tar and resin. I had gotten the electrical and water working, but still needed to finish the kitchen and reconnect the gas main.

I stepped into the hall and glanced in an actual mirror I had salvaged earlier, to make sure my glamour was indeed in place, before nodding. I looked sharp enough to pass for someone in his young twenties. I made sure I had Corexia wrapped around my right wrist, and my shield ring on my left hand. Satisfied, stepped out and locked the door before I pulled out a simple digital wristwatch and glanced at the time. I had about 45 minutes to make my way cross campus to the dean's office for my first day as his office bitch administrative assistant. I pulled on the watch and began to jog, before building up to a run. I kept my speed down though, to human averages. A fast human, but human nonetheless. As I ran, I eventually turned into a road and ended up running with a virtual horde of teenagers, though I noticed in this direction that it was mostly girls, most of the boys turning off to head to the East, while the road started turning West.

Soon enough it was mostly just young girls and me running down the street. It took only a minute for the gossip to start. I didn't focus on it but I got the general gist of the topics just from proximity.

Unsurprisingly, I was one of the topics; namely, who was I? A few others were about the light show during the black out, and more were about the vampire attacks from last week. I kept my speed slightly faster than the students around me, barely feeling any stress or exertion from moving at what for me now felt like a brisk walk. I kept a face of simple interest on and as I moved I let my eyes rove. I took in a good dozen of the students, and let myself relax. Meditation kicking in as I changed my body language. Soon I felt relaxed, and my run smoothed out slightly, my motions becoming more fluid. I flashed a grin at the girls, and saw blushes appear on a few who were looking my way, before I finally reach the school grounds. I turned off from the main group and headed around the side of the building. I know from exploring the map of the area a bit that the fastest way to the dean's office is actually the side door, and then following that stairwell up.

I glanced up and looked at the outsides of the school, considering making a more… extravagant entrance… but I'm not feeling it.

I slipped in through the door, turned and took the stairs two at a time, and in under a minute I was walking towards the dean's office. Coming to a stop, I knock on the door.

"Enter."

I open the door and step inside, grinning lightly. "Morning boss. What do you have for me today?" I catch the look of amusement from the old man, as he realizes how I'm going to be.

"Well, William-san, I have updated rule books for the teachers, and a stack of papers to deliver to the same. I was meaning to deliver these a few days ago, but they both got delayed at the printers. If you would be so kind? Oh, and take one set for yourself if you would." he gestures at a desk to the side of his office, far smaller than his, but perfect for an assistant. I step over and find the stack of over three dozen thin hardbound books with 'School Procedures' printed as the title. Next to them is an equally large stack of paper packets, a sort of inner school newsletter for the teachers. On top of both was a list of teachers and classroom to deliver to.

"Sure." I grabbed the papers and books and slid them into my bag, which had auto-linked to my inventory. I looked at the dean and he grinned. I slid the classroom list into my shirt pocket, though with a touch of Acceleration, I had already read the list.

"Oh, and be sure to introduce yourself to those teachers, it's likely you'll be running into them rather often. And be quick! Class starts soon."

I grinned and waved to the dean.

"Back soon Boss."

And with that, I was off.

I looked at the next class on my list with a mix of curiosity and trepidation. This was it. This was where the butterfly's truly started. Class 2-A, homeroom, and English, lead by Negi Springfield...

I stepped up and politely knocked on the door when I heard a lull in the classroom noise.

"Ah, Come in!" came a rather young voice, masculine yes, but definitely young. Yep this is the class.

Putting on my 'Friendly college student/assistant' expression I slid open the door, with an expression that hinted at nervousness. "Ah, hello. I have a quick delivery for a Negi Springfield?"

"That's me." I met the young man's eyes, and grinned, pulling out a book and packet I swapped to English for a moment, feeling he would appreciate it. "Pleasure to meet you, Mr. Springfield. The Dean asked me to deliver these. I'm William Corvus, the Deans new assistant." I held out a hand and we shook in greeting. He seemed off guard by the English for a second before he brightened considerably.

"Oh, you speak English! Judging by the accent you're... American?" he inquired, taking the book and packet from me.

"Indeed I am, mid-western through and through... and judging by your accent I'm going to say you're Welsh, right?" I said with a grin, trying to ignore the sudden silence coming from what I know is suppose to be one of the loudest classes on campus.

Negi got this massive grin and nodded. "Yep! Grew up in the back hills of Wales, then lived at Oxford while getting my degree."

"Very nice. I grew up in Utah, all mountains or deserts, but snow during the winter. Then I moved here about a week ago for the chance to work for Boss Konoemon. Anyway, I should probably head out. You were my last stop before I head back up to the boss for my next errand. See you around Springfield." I looked up at the class and noticed how they were all now staring at me and Negi. I kicked on Acceleration to get the most out of this moment of observation.

About a half-dozen students are looking at me and Negi blankly, likely having not understood a word of what we said. I recognize at least two of these are Ku Fei, which considering I think she's learning Japanese as well is understandable, and Asuna, who I know has issues with English at this point. I also recognize both twins and Makie are not understanding what we're saying. Though the twins look like they're puzzling it out.

The really interesting are those who were following along with unusual interest. I recognized Kazumi Asakura based on her hair style and camera, eyeing me like a piece of meat. Probably wants to interview me at some point or her newspaper, if I had to guess. I then flicked my eyes over to see Chachamaru, who seemed to be analyzing me with some sort of scanner, if her intense gaze and glowing green eyes were any reference. I flitted through the other intense students. Haruna, who I remember being a gossiper and artist, Setsuna, recognizable due to her hairstyle and sword, who's assessing me as a threat, Mana and Kaede, both assessing me as a likely opponent, though Kaede seems to be frowning slightly and Mana's eyes are narrowed. My eyes, still moving slow to my accelerated perception quickly focus on Evangeline whose sharp eyes seem focused on my head and whose eyes seem to be slowly widening, which, shit, means, she senses something about my magic. That's gonna be a thing for later.

Finally, I focus on the last two that catch my eye, Zazie, the quiet performer, whose eyes are focused directly on me and who I catch a sense of curiosity and danger flashing through my aura, something I've only felt in the presence of the most dangerous enemies.

Finally, I let my gaze rest on who I currently consider the biggest person of interest in the room.

Chao Lingshen.

I see her eyes wide and her mind rapidly focusing and can practically see in her posture and expression her mind running through her knowledge of how the timelines suppose to be. I meet her eyes for a split second longer than any others, before I look away towards Negi again, slowly let acceleration fade back and deactivate, bring my senses and speed back to normal.

I switch back to Japanese. "Ah, apologies Springfield-san, we seem to have confused a few of your students by using English." I chuckled and turned back to the class at large. "As mentioned to Springfield-san, I am Corvus William, Dean Konoe's new personal assistant. A pleasure to meet you all. Now I apologize for being brief, but I really must be heading out."

I glanced back to Negi and nodded with a smile. "See you around Springfield-san."

As I shook his hand one last time and started leaving, I glanced back to Chao Bao, and let the faintest hint of a knowing smirk cross my face, and saw her eyes narrow in focus.

And then I was out the door, and behind me, I heard the room erupt into chatter.

As I walked back towards the dean's office, I focused on what I had decided to do about the canon story-line. I didn't want to just sit by the sidelines and watches, that honestly just wasn't my style. I'm far too chaotic good to simply act like a nobody. I thought about what I could do, and isolated the biggest issues for my time here.

Chao's time travel, and her plan to reveal magic to the world.

Fate's plan to destroy the illusionary people of Mundus Magicus to save the 'real' people.

Find and deal with possessed Nagi.

Oh, and somehow fix the gamer system enough to try and head back to my dimension…
Preferably With an element of time travel so I can find a way to deal with the Sinners.

That last one's the biggest issue personally, but the other three are going to be more important for now.

I had spent some time chatting with Veritas, and he had admitted that he wasn't entirely sure how to achieve a reconnection. Which I guess meant that I had to figure this out on my own then.

Joy.

However the really annoying part was when I tried to look at the readouts and data that Veritas had provided to even fix my Instant Dungeons, as the easiest of my gamer powers to fix, I had nearly blacked out, and then gotten a notification that I needed Lvl 100 in Dimensional Engineering, Magical Theory, and Quantum Theory, before I could make any headway.

Those skills were only at 21, 19, and 16 respectively.

This was gonna take a while. At the very least, I could probably get magical Theory up there based on what the main cast runs across, but the other two were going to be a pain in the ass.

Setting aside my plans for fixing my powers, I refocused on the other three projects. I planned to let Chao continue mostly as she is, but the fact that she seemed to be unaware of my existence prior to this means that my theory of her time travel making dimensional parallels was probably correct. If I slowly convinced her of that, then it's entirely possible I could convince her to stay around post festival to help me out. She could join me for a while and help me fix my powers, and I could see about fixing her 'Magia Erebea' issues. If I could do that, I would be much happier about my impact on the world.

As for Fate… I sort of want to leave him to Negi, though I plan to back him up and hopefully provide a few hints to get things on the rails to a better world a tad faster than canon. After all, how difficult is it to swap gears from 'Kill off a ton of sentient creatures to save the rest' to 'hey why not try and fix the world beneath the illusion'. I swear goddamn magic users and their flare for the dramatic. So many problems in the story could be solved with far easier methods.

And as for Nagi… that's gonna be a thing, with the whole Mage of the Beginning chaos.

I finally reached the dean's office, and knocked on the door, before stepping in. Back to work.

I stretched as I walked off campus at the end of the day, flipping through my copy of the rule book. All in all, it was pretty standard stuff, though I did notice it was a bit looser when it came to dress code then what I expected. Honestly not very much that caught my eye. The packet was also pretty standard. Though it did mention the Kyoto trip was next week, which means that today…

That's why I saw Negi heading to the office when I left! He just got his quest to the other magic association!

I slid my hands into my pockets as I turned back onto the street heading towards my place. I knew there was a hardware store down this way somewhere, I saw it on my way to the school this morning. I had put in the drywall and stained the floor yesterday. But now I needed paint and some rollers. I was thinking blue and green accent walls for various rooms. Yeah, that sounds right.

I bought the supplies I wanted, thanking the fact that Veritas could convert my internal currency to the yen I needed. Stepping out with the supplies, I took a few seconds on my way home to step in an alley and inventory it, before heading down the street.

Soon enough, I reached the house and let myself in, tapping a mana infused finger on the trigger rune near the door, to activate the lights I had put in. Across the ceiling, a half dozen small circles of runes I had written in sharpie light up with a warm golden glow, before the illusion of them being recessed lights also kicked in.

And then I felt my instincts scream and I dove forwards, dodging the large red spike that would have speared through my chest. I immediately performed a second jump, dodging the second spike that embedded in the floor where I had landed. I let my second landing turn into a roll, and mentally swapped my outfit to my combat attire, my clothes shifting in a burst of green sparks.

And then I felt it, the oh so familiar feeling of an illusion barrier forming around my house. As I pushed myself to my feet, I drew my handgun in one hand and my larger blade in the other, reflexively hitting observe on the misshapen mass of red and black that had been pressed around the top of the door frame.

Revenant Vice
Hunters of Chaos
LVL:61


Like many creatures borne of the Dimensional Void, a Revenant Vice hunts to fulfill its eternal hunger for energy. Its body is a mass of fluid liquid, controlled by instinct. This Vice, in particular, has been drawn by an abundance of dimensional energy to this plane of existence.
Emotions: Hungry.

The shape seemed to drip and ooze into a sort of misshapen many-legged wolf as it fell from the ceiling and landed, the spears of red retracting back into its mass.

"Well. Shit."

And then It lunged at me jaws wide.
 
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Don't forget to bottle it up after! It can probably be studied for a few points in dimensional engineering and perhaps be used as a rare potion ingredient as well.
 
Hang on. If it is hungry and it is after you. Then isn't the only thing different about you, at the moment, the void contamination?

Meaning it is after the void energy, no?
Any way to capture it and use it to help draw out the void energy?? Just an idea. Can't wait for more. And WHY cliffhanger why??
 
Great chapter, though it seems Mr. Corvus is making at least one major error;

I planned to let Chao continue mostly as she is

Let? Let? Did he hit his head on something when he fell into this reality?

He has no allies. He has minimal resources (his inventory, his house and his salary). His skillset is compromised and incomplete, and his ability to improve it has been weakened. He has limited knowledge of the world in general and the local situation in particular (the manga and anime would only tell him so much, plus he doesn't even know if this is the canon 'verse).

Most of all, he has no concrete notion of how he stacks up tactically against the local players; except, of course, for the fact that all of them (even Negi) are higher level than he is. And he seriously thinks he can consider Chao an afterthought? Chao, the super-intelligent time-travelling scientist/mage? Chao, the immensely rich teenager with her own organisation and an army of magitech robots and bound demons? Chao, who has spent two years on a plan to overturn the Masquerade, causing untold chaos on Earth, for a chance at a better future for a version of her world that she has no place in?

Chao, who is mostly likely having a not-so-minor panic attack at the realisation that she has just met someone who should not be here, who knows something about her and appears to have acquired a position of minor (but very real) authority. Someone who is a threat.

It's not entirely unexpected for him to think this way; after all, she might have basically been the Season One Boss, but she wasn't evil and could be reasoned with. Not to mention the fact that he's just gotten here, is still trying to find his feet and has many other things to be worrying about. That doesn't mean he can afford to ignore someone who can afford to bury his overconfident ass in robot mooks, with or without time-displacement weaponry (said weapons probably won't be viable until the Festival).

Of course, he could cut the threat she represents off at the knees by explaining exactly how she can save (this version of) her world, though it might be best if he did some reading on the local magical systems first so he can put figures behind that (Enlist Negi! Let his cheerful nerdishness be of benefit to us here!).

Y'know, after he's dealt with the gribbly thing trying to eat his face.
 
FTFY
Unsurprisingly, I was one of the topics; namely, who was I? A few

I keep a face of simple interest on and as I move I let my eyes rove. I take in a good dozen of the students, and let myself relax. Meditation kicking in as i change my body language. Soon I feel relaxed, and my run smooths out slightly, my motions becoming more fluid. I flash a grin at the girls, and see blushes appear on a few who were looking my way, before I finally reach the school grounds. I turn off from the main group and head around the side of the building. I know from exploring the map of the area a bit that the fastest way to the dean's office is actually the side door, and then following that stairwell up.

Slipping in through the door, I turn and take the stairs two at a time, and in under a minute i'm walking towards the dean's office. Coming to a stop, i knock on the door.

"Enter."

I open the door, and step inside, grinning lightly. "Morning boss. What do you have for me today?" I catch the look of amusement from the old man, as he realizes how i'm going to be.
Look, mack, either stick with past tense or present tense. Don't flip back and forth between them.
Pleasure to meet you, Mr._Springfield. The
FTFY
 
Don't forget to bottle it up after! It can probably be studied for a few points in dimensional engineering and perhaps be used as a rare potion ingredient as well.
....This is like asking someone to take a vial of Blacklght with them. in one universe 'YAY!' in the other 467,658, "OH MY GOD, IT ATE MY LEGS!"
Hang on. If it is hungry and it is after you. Then isn't the only thing different about you, at the moment, the void contamination?

Meaning it is after the void energy, no?
Any way to capture it and use it to help draw out the void energy?? Just an idea. Can't wait for more. And WHY cliffhanger why??
Yes. but the issue is, that the Gamer RUNS ON VOID ENERGY! granted it uses a refined form, more like gas then the oil that is the void, but he still runs off it. The reason the Vice is in his house? he's been sleeping there. in the last too days, the entire hosue, particualrly all the wood he's used his powers on, has picked up his... Scent, if you will. The only reason he didn;t get Nommed on in the dimensional void is the fact his energy signature was muted by the massive amounts of void energy around him.
Great chapter, though it seems Mr. Corvus is making at least one major error;
...
Let? Let? Did he hit his head on something when he fell into this reality?
I love this feedback because in a very large part its true. William is having a hard time readjusting to the status quo. he's not at 100%, and he's definitely not ready for a full on brawl. that is why my little blacklight+hookwolf Love child is he to say hi. to assist William in... reevaluating things.

See, thats lead to how he vies things right now. Currently he considers his main options to be 'let canon happen?' or 'butterfly everything?' Chao's plans are something he can really easily cause to go off course. a lot of what she has going on is rather independant of things until the festival, but he can cause chaos for her leading up to that with no problem.

On top of that, there is a sort of mental twist of being the gamer that's clouding his perception of the acadamy festival event. Numbers don't really scare Will anymore. Not until you start getting into overwhelming 1 vs 10,000 numbers. he routinely has had to deal with hordes of opponents at or just below his level, all of his ID's, an incident with a voodoo necromancer biker gang, both coming to mind. his real scary opponents are all people who far outclass him, and who are Specialists. someone like Takahata is scary to him because he doesn't have a hard counter besides maybe his sympathy, and in a straight up close quarters match, he loses. in a horde that's normally not an issue, in a horde of enemies his level, he's generally a cut above the rest both skill and strength wise, he can use deception and misdirection to say alive. in 1v1 he has to deal with things far differently.

As you'll see next chapter.

@NorthSouthGorem
Thanks for the help! and yeah, my tenses this chapter kept veering off course, i wrote different parts on different days and my mindset affected my word choice a bit much. tried to go through and fix it up, but its still feels... clunky. Sorry.
 
I get the feeling Evangeline will be the first of her class to visit/talk to in a privet setting.

Chao will observe William first before she tries talking with him in a public setting.
 
However the really annoying part was when I tried to look at the readouts and data that Veritas had provided to even fix my Instant Dungeons, as the easiest of my gamer powers to fix, I had nearly blacked out, and then gotten a notification that I needed Lvl 100 in Dimensional Engineering, Magical Theory, and Quantum Theory, before I could make any headway.
That sounds like enough to create Instant Dungeons from scratch, if 100 is the top of the scale. A bit much to perform maintenance/reboot a skill with a known framework.

I concur with @Andrew5073 and would like to add that you seem to be veering a little bit towards Mary Sue territory here. Supreme confidence, effortlessly sizing up all the main characters and plotting out "fixed" future plot points are generally warning signs in a crossover. You nerfed the Gamer, so let that come through some more, and try to avoid defaulting to a hypercompetent sort of character. If he's nerfed, but can still solve all of his problems with the skills that remain, then there wasn't any point to the nerf. Leave some room for character growth, and not just in his stat numbers.

It's encouraging that you're planning to give the protag a little shaking up, but do remember the power of first impressions on us readers.
 
Nerfed 6 [Showdown]
*Best announcer voice*
"Here it is, the show down! In one corner, at just under six feet of dimensional augmented human is WILLIAM CORVUS!

And his opponent, the Dimensional monster itself, clawing its way here from the void, at just under four feet at the shoulder, and over 500 lbs of augmented mass, is the REVENANT VICE!

Contestants ready?

START!"

Nerfed 6

I lunged to the side, bringing up my handgun and unloading several shots into its flank as it flew past where I was. I Accelerated to see how the bullets affected the Vice, and grew both worried and annoyed when the bullets caused the side of the beast to explode outward from impact before simply snapping back and meshing back together, leaving it practically unharmed. I targeted its limbs and tried again, with slightly better results. As several smaller bits of it flew off, they seemed to wilt and solidify before landing behind the beast. The Vice itself simply regenerated the damage and turned. I fired the last of my clip into its front legs before it could try another lunge and tossed the gun into my inventory. It didn't do enough damage to justify the loss of a hand.

With that, I dropped Acceleration, and with a flick of my wrist I held Violent Malfeasance in my hand once more. A sharp snap of my wrist and the blade flicked out, barely under a foot long and glowing a soft blue was a thin double edged glass blade, covered in intricate runes done in black.

In the back of my head I could suddenly feel it, the itch that the blade came with, the knowledge it gave me and how to properly use it. It was a dark thing, this blade, but it was also my most dangerous weapon. I slid my foot backwards, and waited for the beast to come to me.

As my foot slid across the wood, I let Mana flow from me, the power soaking into the wood as I cast a Transmutation, the words silenced behind the muffling of my scarf. At the same time, I also let the Barons Jacket turn me to a half skeleton once more, if only to keep the spikes from skewering me through the fleshy bits of my arms.

The Vice ran at me, slower this time, a bit more cautious, a bit more methodical. I had to sway back once, and then step to the side as it lashed out with two more red spikes. As the second one passed, I stabbed into it with Violent Malfeasance with a quick jerk. In the back of my mind, I heard a dark laugh of joy, i knew that if I took the time to look, the knife would have a small fragment of the monster embedded inside the glass.

As I managed to pull the knife out however, the spike twisted, no longer solid, but fluid, it snapped around, wrapping around my boney right arm from wrist to the elbow and holding me in place. With a sharp yank I screamed in pain, feeling the bones in my arm splinter and crush in its grip at the elbow. With a thought I activated my shield ring and let the sudden half dome of green light form around the arm, almost cutting the end of the spike off from the vice. I tried to reflexively cast my most used spell.

'Infinite Mana Arr-' I almost completed the thought before my mind caught back up and I bit my tongue in a mix of anger and surprise.

I didn't have that spell anymore.

I didn't have Infinite Mana Arrow, or Shockwave, or Conflagration. I didn't have Repulse, Shred Blast, Pierce or Sever anymore, my go to's. My mana attacks. Those were all lost to me. I frantically searched for a spell on my short list, but the Vice was already moving to capitalize on my moment of weakness.

It lunged, a jaw opening wide across not just its head, but halfway across its torso as it attempted to bit down on me. I Accelerated, and in a fit of desperation changed my earlier plan. I stomped my foot, watching as my body seemed to take forever to respond to my commands. I watched the teeth close in as my foot made contact and watched with dread. I had dumped over 1,000 Mana into a single spell, and cast Osteokinesis. It was almost fast enough, a single twisting pillar covered in curving spikes shooting from the ground where I had changed the wood to bone. It stopped the beast, pushing it back, but not soon enough.

It raked its long red teeth down and across my face, savaging my left eye and scraping down against my already exposed jaw bone. As I tumbled back, the vices tendrils clung to my shield, until with a slash from my larger blade I snapped the tendril at where it connected to the surface of the shield with my larger dagger.

I felt pain, and then Gamers Mind kicked in and numbed it. I staggered back, and focused on the beast, its maw wrapped around the pillar. I watched as the pillar of bone snapped and twisted under the force that was brought to bear before shattering, letting the deformed beast back down before it began to reform once more, and I felt Gamers Body finally kicking in, the damaged areas gaining a deep green glow and what looked like blocks of pixels filling in missing pieces, the bones in my arm tried to snapping back to normal, but the now solidifying tentacle was still in the way. I let my eye heal, though I had to blink away the blood still left.

A glance at my health showed that encounter had already stripped me of nearly a fourth of my health, almost 7,000 points out of the 31,775 I normally rested at, with two attacks.

This fight… is going very bad.

The beast began to circle around the remains of the pillar, and I circled the other way around it , keeping the pillar between us. The tendril around my arm cracked and shattered as I slammed the finger guard my larger dagger against it, letting my bones finally realign themselves. As the beast fully regained its form, it let loose a deep gurgling snarl.

I held up my arms to let me guard, and focused on the movements of the Vice. I sneaked a glance at the blade of Violent Malfeasance and saw that it had begun glowing green now, and cursed. It was going to take too long for the effect to kick in. Casting another wave of Transmutations and Osteokinesis on the floor, I saw the Vice twitch, before jumping at me again. Ready for it this time, I pivoted to the side and brought one booted foot up and slammed it down and across the back of the beast as it neared me. As it turn to me and charged again, uncaring of the deformed mass along its side, I spun against it, sliding the long sharp edge of my dagger along its other flank, leaving a gash that stretched a third of the way through the beast and along its side from shoulder to hip..

Unfortunately, the gash simply sealed back up seconds later. Cursing fucking nonphysical enemies, I tossed the knife, now bent and dulled, to the side. With a stomped my foot on one on the many transmuted boards around the room, I drew and compressed the bone up by my left side into a long and heavy quarterstaff with series of protruding cross guards around its end. grabbing it with both hands, Violent Malfeasance held against its length, and readied myself as the Vice charged again.

I spun to the side, smashing the beast back and away with the staff to keep myself at a distance and avoiding the spikes it kept sending towards me. I kept it at a distance, and slowly my Mana infused the floor just behind me and to the right, while the blade held against my bone stave was now changing colors to yellow. Once more, I let the Vice attack, but this time my trap was ready.

I swung the stave up and to the side, before releasing it, throwing both the stave and the Vice crashing to the ground into a pit of transmuted bone/wood planks. A flicker of Osteokinesis through the board I had turned to bone under my foot that lead to the others, and a dozen compressed and very sharp bone blades and hooks snapped up like a bear trap, slamming serrated and barbed edges into the monster and squeezing. I stepped back and glanced down to see the yellow slowly turning orange in my blade. A sharp sound reminiscent of a whip crack and a flicker of something in the back of my head that yelled danger, made me reflexively dive into a roll backwards.

Which is good, because the trapped Vice was now lashing out with dozens of those sharp red spikes, beginning to snap my bone trap apart, and several spikes passed right through where I had been standing. Cursing I considered my options and decided to play an ace. A moment later, I pulled my hand out of my inventory holding a M67 Frag Grenade, and yanking the pin with the hilt of Violent Malfeasance, which was now turning an angry red color, tossed it at the beast.

As the grenade made contact with the Vice, a red spike wrapped around it and instantly drew it into the side of the beast. I meanwhile rolled back, and slammed my hands into the ground, with a wave of Transfusion and Osteokinesis through the floor, fueled by over 20,000 Mana, almost half my total and almost all of what I still had. The spell grabbed all the bone not currently acting as blades and anchors that it could, and formed a circular half dome right next to the Vice on of my the side of the bones trap, trying to direct all the force of the explosion I could into the fucker. I also, and held up my right hand, forming another Shield from my ring with the last dredges of mana in my system. this one slightly curved, but as tall and as wide as possible.

Then the grenade went off, and I got knocked off my feet by the shock wave before the wave of shrapnel bone slammed into my shield, The translucent green barrier lasted only a second before it shattered from my impact with the wall, but the bone shards were reflected and now were only falling slightly to the ground, instead of lacerating me. My hearing was going crazy, and I took a moment to breath, feeling Gamers Body kick in and fix my ears and the cracked teeth that I had forgotten to unclench and looked up.

Where the Vice had stood was now a small crater with a pool of red sitting in it. Around it was the remains of the bone trap and the dome, half shattered by the explosion and what looks like sticky red blood solidifying in what's left. I thought, for a moment, I had won.

But then I heard that gurgling growl, and my stomach dropped.

"Oh come the fuck on."

Out from behind the twisted and blown apart mass of bone and solidifying monster remains, a thin, almost skeletal looking claw reached up from the puddle of red and grabbed a hand hold, and the rest of it followed. The beast was barely a third its previous mass, but now it looked even more dangerous, long blade like limbs and sharp teeth covering all of the remains, only four limbs, but each longer and with more joints.

It dragged itself to its feet, such as they were, and I did the same.

In my still clenched hand, I saw the glass blade, watched as it changed from deep bloody red, to black, the runes now etched in white. And I felt the connection it had forged complete in my mind.

And I couldn't help it. I smiled.

I could feel it, such a wicked half mad smile, all bone and teeth without my lips. I knew what it would have normally looked like, I had seen the last person to wear this smile. I had killed them, after all.

In the back of my head, I heard the last raving laughter of a deranged madman, a laugh I had ended. I brought the knife up and swept it in the direction of the Vice, a shadow flickering across my view as a black ghostly dagger appeared between us and then disappear into the beast.

I felt the hilt of Violent Malfeasance begin to cool, and I snapped the fingers of my left hand, still wrapped in my Ignition glove, engulfing the bony shape in flames. Holding the switchblade in it, I mutter the correct phrase for the next step.

"Thermal Transference."

And suddenly the fire was pulled from my hand was being funneled into the black knife. For a moment the Vice didn't notice anything different. Then it began to twitch and flinch away, giving that gurgling growl, though this one seemed confused.

Before it could make another move I snapped my hand, held the blade in the restarted flames, and muttered it again.

"Thermal Transference."

The Vice stumbled back, limbs trying to clutch at itself, ripping into itself to try and find what was hurting it.

I snapped my fingers.

Held the blade in the flames.

"Thermal Transference."

Watched the flames be consumed by the blade.

Then it began to do what I can only call screaming.

Snap.

"Thermal Transference."

Pained screaming and deranged laughter ringing in my ears. I couldn't tell if it was my laughter or not. I didn't really care.

Snap.

"Thermal Fucking Transference."

Louder screaming, this time accompanied by the sound of what passes for the beasts psuedo-skin popping open in boils, the liquid of its form simmering. The monster thrashed, half formed spikes lashing erratically into the ground around it.

A snap.

"Thermal Transference!"

I watched, as the bond between the Vice and my blade transferred energy from me to it in a vicious cycle. It started small, just warming it up, but with the sudden flames from my gloves repeatedly adding its own energy, the Vice heated up in turn. Eyes of the Occult flickered on to let me understand what was happening. The Vice was simply stone and water possessed by the strange magic of the void. But the magic, in the form of heat flowing through it, was causing a violent reaction. The closest equivalent i could think of was what happened when you add water to hot oil.

In moments, it was writhing on the ground in pain, and began steaming, desperately shedding mass to get rid of the heat

Snap

"Thermal Transference."

The boiling began to stop, replaced with a wet sounding crackle of the Vice drying out, then once the boiling finally stopped. I wasn't taking chances.

Snap

"Thermal Transference."

The body began to blacken and char, still giving death throes, though it finally stopped screaming. The body, outer limbs and protrusions half stone now, shimmering with heat, my magic having forced the void energy to dissipate.

Snap

"Thermal Transference."

I watched with a level of exhaustion as the body finally seemed to catch fire, before pulling the blade and flames from my hand, the last of the heat going through the now ice cold blade as it entered the corpse of the Vice.

With the beast finally, assuredly dead, I slumped down and breathed heavily as I lay against the wall, grin fading away. With a sharp motion, I brought the knife down hard onto the floor and shattered the glass blade, dispelling the link. A moment later the glass reassembled into a new blade and the Violent Malfeasance flicked close. In the back of my mind I heard the laughter fade away.

"Shit, If it wasn't for the damned knife…. Fuck me." I sighed,and pushed myself to my feet, and walked over the now slowly burning body, my flesh returning as I let the jackets effects fade. Focusing, I snapped my fingers to flame up again, and split my mind in three with Alar, glad to finally be able to focus multiple ways without the risk knife using one. I made a quick and intentionally sloppy link between my fire, and the fire on the corpse. Clapping my hands, I dispersed the heat, and the flames on both my hand and that of the corpse flickered and died. I hissed in pain, as my hands suddenly felt raw, and the temperature in the air around me rose several degrees. I blinked and watched the first degree burns that had covered my hands get quickly repaired, and focused back on the corpse.

With a solid kick, it vaporized, turning to so much brimstone and ash, and leaving behind the gifts The Gamer is so kind to offer. The first, was a stack of cash about 400$ US, or so. Thankfully it was auto converted in my inventory to about 46000 Yen, so that was easy to deal with. There next to it, was a small tightly bound scroll of parchment, a tap gave me a name of hat it taught. "Hemo-Nucleation". Under both of those, was a bright red claw, half a foot long and barely curved. More a knife blade then anything else. I opened my inventory and slid all of my loot into it, and the looked up, as a familiar shattering sound starting up.

Around me, the illusion barrier, a natural one apparently, cracked and shattered. Behind it was the world around me once more. The sounds of the forest behind the house returning.

Huh, that must have been what tipped me off.

Looking down I saw that the first two attacks, the original ones that made me dodge, had still left their mark on the real world. A simple cycle of wood to bone to wood, fixed it. Though I would have to reseal those spots. Fucker.

I looked around the the room and slowly stumbled over the the mirror.

I looked like shit. My entire face was covered in blood, long thick streams that caked my left eye and along my jaw. The blood had also splashed down my shoulder to my jacket, coloring the shoulder and upper arm a dirty red instead of normal black and off white.

I sighed and quickly sent my outfit to the inventory and back, smiling as I suddenly felt far cleaner thanks to the mechanics of an outfit change.

I looked into the mirror and dropped all the mind modifiers I could, I dropped my passive meditation. Pushed away the comforting distance granted by Gamers Mind. I let myself feel fear. I let myself consider just how vulnerable I really was.

And I found myself wanting.

I was in a new world, and clearly I was no longer on the upper tiers of the goddamn food chain.

I was weaker than in had been in over two months. I wasn't the same guy who it took four of the Seven Sinners two hours to subdue.

Hell, I could barely hold my own against the Vice just now. The most useful powers I had were Osteokinesis, and that primarily because i was using it so often recently. Without my more offensive arsenal, i had to be better. My gun, while useful against humanoids like zombies and wild animals, was useless. I need to fix that. I also need to get better at sympathy, if i can get it leveled until I don't need the knife, that would make it so much better. Then i need to figure out the local magic.

I held up a hand and focused, my Mana rising to the surface in a dark shimmering green glow, that quickly turned erratic. I know how to manipulate mana, but all my previous skill with it has vanished, consumed by the void. With time I should be able to use it in combat, but I doubt it will ever be as fluid and effortless without the skills.

I needed to get better. I've been… Nerfed, and that shit can't stand anymore. You know what? Fuck Chao, fuck planning for canon, fuck everything that isn't important; no ancient vampires or super young teachers, no robots or time travel, or silver haired assholes. I have just under a week until the Field Trip.

I need to hit the books, get some training in, and figure out how to use my newly limited powers. Wait... Hit the books…. That's it!

I need to head to Library Island in the near future. I know for a fact that there is a level of magic there, if the dragon and the waterproof shelves from the manga are any hint. But…. not yet. I have to cement my position first, build some trust. Gather the right tools, make the right friends, answer the right questions and keep the right secrets. I can spare my free time practicing my new skills and getting use to calling on them in a pinch, get quicker, more precise. Once I have that down, then start incorporating magic from this dimension, if i can. I also need to use runes more. I can carve them in my bones with ease now, but it takes time to do it right. I need to diversify my abilities. i relied way too much on only two spells and my knife in that fight. I also need to get use to acceleration so I can actually use it in close combat. As it is now, It feels... off. my body moving too slow.

I should wait until after the Kyoto trip first, give me more time to see magic of this dimension in action.

I looked at the mirror and noted the exhaustion coloring my features.

But first… maybe a shower and some sleep.

Oh, and I probably should work to set up some sort of runic barrier and some traps to keep the creepy crawl plague wolves from getting in here. That was a bad enough surprise once.

Outside of the Blackbriar house.

Several figures watched with interest as the young man cleaned himself up, having been unable to see the fight itself due to the strange variation of an illusion barrier that surrounded the home but moments ago.

One by one, they all left, each aware of the others but unwilling to break the tentative truce established by observing the new oddity in Mahora Academy.

One thing was certain though.

William Corvus would bear watching.
 
Nice to see him recognising the realities of his depowered-ness and taking steps to address it.

Presumably he knows enough about studying and training by now that it's mostly a matter of working out the details. With regards to friends. it'll be interesting how he goes about this; some of the teachers? Negi, or some of his class? Not Eva; aside from him not possessing Negi's cuteness and connection via his father, she's more likely to view him as a specimen to study or a toy to play with at this point.

Library Island: he should be up-front with the Dean about this if he wants to go there. Having a few idiot school-kids and their child teacher 'sneak' in is one thing (I'll bet money they were under observation the entire time), having the mysterious dimension-travelling mage do the same is a very different matter.

I should wait until after the Kyoto trip first, give me more time to see magic of this dimension in action.

Is this him commenting on time-scales, or does he anticipate actually going on the trip? That's valuable training time he's missing out on, so unless he's planning on befriending someone in the group (and on taking the time and effort to talk the Dean into sending him along), I'll assume he's just deciding how long to wait before hitting the Library.
 
Nice to see him recognising the realities of his depowered-ness and taking steps to address it.

Presumably he knows enough about studying and training by now that it's mostly a matter of working out the details. With regards to friends. it'll be interesting how he goes about this; some of the teachers? Negi, or some of his class? Not Eva; aside from him not possessing Negi's cuteness and connection via his father, she's more likely to view him as a specimen to study or a toy to play with at this point.
Yep, hes likely to avoid the vampire for now. though next chapters an interlude, and i'll start to single out characters who are taking a greater interest in the new TA.

Library Island: he should be up-front with the Dean about this if he wants to go there. Having a few idiot school-kids and their child teacher 'sneak' in is one thing (I'll bet money they were under observation the entire time), having the mysterious dimension-travelling mage do the same is a very different matter.
Very true. he is likely to ask for permission, but the library island is... a thing. its one of the places where if you end up there, you might end up spending days, if nor longer trying to find your way out. taking a week off during the first few days of his new job is... unappealing.


Is this him commenting on time-scales, or does he anticipate actually going on the trip? That's valuable training time he's missing out on, so unless he's planning on befriending someone in the group (and on taking the time and effort to talk the Dean into sending him along), I'll assume he's just deciding how long to wait before hitting the Library.
he doesn't know yet, hence the vague statement. maybe he gets left behind to help with the dean, maybe he gets sent to nhelp the teahers? he doesn't know yet. the deans in charge of that.

He would, actually, like to go, if only to try and copy both the pactio seal and some of the shikigami tools that show up. he also needs information on the students. if he starts to pick up equipment that 'blends in' then he can start hiding some of his more powerful abilities for later. he's seriously considering laying the role of illusionist and rogue among mages.

their are, after all, so few rogues among the Negima cast. its all spell-blades and mages, with a few warrior classes mixed in.

Theres also the giant demon summoning event coming up in Kyoto... he does want that sweet sweet raid boss loot.
 
This chapter could use a quick once-over to fix some capitalization and grammatical stuff, but other than that I quite enjoyed it! Looking forward to more. :D
 
Well hell if his Gamer loot system still works and drops new spells that seems fairly significant.
 
Interlude: First Impressions
Alright its time to close off the first chapter! but first....
Well hell if his Gamer loot system still works and drops new spells that seems fairly significant.
I cant explain this yet. suffice to say... there are things going on that our ever so reliable Player Character/Narrator is not yet aware of...



Shizuka didn't know what to make of Corvus-san. When she first saw him standing near the Dean's office, he seemed… odd. A young man, definitely american, with dark hair and pale skin. His outfit, blues and greens on black and grey, a leather jacket with white stripes and squares dotted across its surface. She could tell by his stance, that he was relaxed, and yet the moment she came into sight, he opened his eyes and looked at her. His eyes, a deep piercing dark blue took a second to rove over her, before he nodded, his face still in that relaxed somewhat uninterested expression, before nodding politely. She gave a polite smile in return.

As he looked back down and closed his eyes, she swore she sensed something, he seemed to be consistently releasing something that felt like magic and then pulling it back into him, a steady constant but weak cloud of energy around him. It was only her experience treating mages and her high sensitivity to magic from years of being around mages that let her sense it. As she knocked on the door, she felt the aura begin to recede.

When she alter walked him through the academy, he was interested, asking polite questions and keeping a level of calm small talk as the duo made their way through the academy. she found herself giving dozens of small hints and tricks, all because he asked a few questions at the right times. soon however, they left the Middle school area.

Later, after showing him to the old Blackbriar place, she wondered.

Exactly who was William Corvus?



Kaede watched the Deans new assistant through shrouded eyes. He was american, if she was right, and the conversation between him and Negi-sensei had been too quick for her to catch all of it, From what she did catch it was mostly lots of small talk and commenting on accents. That didn't really interest her. What did interest her was how the KI that she constantly had surrounding her reacted to his presence.

As he stood there, she felt it flow towards him, through him, and back once, before stilling. As she examined her Ki, she felt a trace of a strange echo in the returning stream, something… chaotic, yet tightly wound and controlled. Beyond that was the fact that she could sense, even if only faintly, The aura of tamped down aggression that hung around him. It was quiet, but she recognized the feel of a fighter, more then that, he was an experienced fighter.

His appearance, however, was all deception. A smile that seemed true, but fluid stances that always gave an escape. Joking tone, but sharp eyes.
When he turned and looked across the room with a soft smile his eyes darted from person to person. He took in each face in turn, looking through the entire class so rapidly you could blink and miss it. He took in her and Mana, Eva, and for less than a split second (but far longer than anyone else), he focused on Chao Lingshen. And she saw Chao tense in response.

How curious.



Mana looked on curiously at the Blackbriar house. It was clearly being rebuilt, if the unpainted and unstained wood, combined with the new looking roof and door meant anything. She watched with interest through the scope of her sniper rifle as the new assistant to the Dean walked down the drive towards the house. He was humming slightly, and she settled deeper into her perch under a bush at the back of the yard, just inside the property line.
She was, by far, the closest to the house in the area. She had sensed Chachamaru set up deeper in the forest to the north, while to the south, both Kaede and Chao were set up, both separate, but well beyond the property line. Kaede simply watching while Chao seemed immersed in some sort of handheld scanner as she kept looking at the house in contemplation.

So imagine her surprise when upon Corvus-san entering the house, he was drawn into combat with something she hadn't even sensed, some sort of black and red monster that had hidden above the door, just out of line of sight of anyone looking in the building.

Her surprise turned to something akin to annoyance or nervousness as she felt some sort of barrier surround the house.

And she was included.

She glanced through the scope and quickly checked where everyone else was suppose to be, only to find no trace of them, instead, at just beyond the property line, less than a dozen feet behind her, the air seemed to become some sort of crystal galss, the area beyond reflecting back in.

She focused back on the fight between the two when she heard a strange hissing and splashing sound. She blinked when through her scope and the open window shutter, she saw the fight, or part of it anyway, they kept drifting to the edges of her view and then back, circling in the middle of the empty first floor.

Apparently, in the several seconds since she looked away, Corvus-san had changed outfits. Now he wore a fitted black and white jacket, cargo pants, high laced boots, and a blue and purple checkered scarf. He also had a large trench knife of some sort and a handgun (she recognised it as a Taurus), and was fighting with what looked like a six legged wolf with red spikes growing from it. Strangely, the gun was silent, the only noise of its firing the impact of its bullets and the sound of those bullets moving through the air.

Frankly, it seemed like the wolf-slime-creature-thing was unimpressed.

The real questions started when after emptying the clip of the gun, Corvus-san tossed it aside, the gun vanishing as a second knife fell from his sleeve.
The fight became close quarters for a moment, and when they separated, Mana's eyes widened slightly at the sight of Corvus-san. At some point, he had began changing, his flesh fading away to reveal bone, etched and outlined with bright green energy. His left arm was crushed, but as she watched, he smashed the offending mass off it and regenerated as he shifted to dodge another attack, she also saw the blood and gore that surrounded his, surprisingly intact, left eye.

She watched with interest, cataloging what skills he seemed to have as she watched the fight.

Some form of bone control, an extraordinarily high level of flexibility and reflex, almost as good as Kaede, if not a bit faster. His knife play was not terrible, but could clearly be increased. The staff of bone he formed later was almost as intriguing, as was the way he used bones to make a trap. Also of interest was the random weapon and equipment shifts she saw, the gun vanishing, the grenade appearing, and the outfit change.

Finally, was the explosion that blew out the window she was watching through, and which seemed to incapacitate both fighters.

She was in fact surprised that they both got up from that, though not without consequence, she could see the blood leading from the ears of Corvus-san.
However, the final few moments of the fight, where Corvus-san seemed to lose his mind, were the most terrifying.

That black dagger, and Corvus-san Laughing while his eyes gave a dead stare at the beast and it boiled and burned was…. Unnerving to say the least.

In the end, as the barrier surrounding them fell, she carefully disengaged, and reassessed the skill of the new staff member.

He wasn't too powerful, but if anything, that made him more dangerous.

He seemed driven and haunted, and that combination scared her somewhat.



Chao stood in her room, looking through a small black notebook, and taking down notes on what her scans had been picking up.

Where did this man, this assistant to the Dean come from. She had read all the records, and from what she knew, he shouldn't exist! In fact, even looking through the records of this time, on every database she could gets her digital hands on, he didn't exist.

Not to mention his energy signature, his entire body was slightly warping some sort of dimensional barrier, and it kept THROWING OFF HER SENSORS!

She took a deep breath, trying to calm down.

She could deal with this, after all, it was just one guy. He likely didn't even know anything, despite his glance at her in class yesterday. She had taken to keeping track of him regardless, using a small camera drone to follow him from afar. If he did anything to throw off her plans, she would adapt. She always did.

She glanced at the feed, showing Corvus-san walking through the late evening in the market district. He had a large shopping bag at his side, and judging from what her drone had recorded, it was painting supplies, namely ink and brushes, though there was a lot of ink. As well as a set of refillable paint markers.

Nothing dangerous, or even interesting.

She sighed, and leaned back.

She would keep an eye on this… anomaly, until it proved harmless or a threat. In the meantime, she had to keep the other plans going. It was only a few months until the festival, after all. And she still had to set up both the tournament, and finalize production for her… army.

She chuckled at that. She, Chao Lingshen, time-traveler, had a robot army almost finished!

It was GREAT!

She paused, and decided that she should tone down the evil genius act just a bit. That was so stereotypical it hurt.



Among a shifting mass of color, that stretched beyond the senses could reach, stood a figure, the shape of a man. He was simple, a shifting mass of color bound within the confines of a slim well worn suit. The cords around him seemed etched in the purest black and the brightest white. Before it, he looked down and held up a hand, a window appearing to be composed of shattered glass forming to allow him to watch his newest pastime. Through it, he saw the world as though through the eyes of one of his pets.

After all, he had to check in on his charge, no?

He smiled at the thought, the young man, his destiny now forever intertwined with the strange cycle of dimensions that passed around him. It had been so easy, to send him somewhere both familiar and interesting. It will be so entertaining to see how this plays out.

He watched with interest, and had to hold back what may have been a laugh at the look of fear that crossed the young man's face as he was struck by sharpened edges.

He watched until the end of the fight, and was proud of his little test subject, both of them, really...

He glanced down at his hand ,and materialized a small black box of energy, that quickly shaped into a stack of money, a long red claw reminiscent of his pet, and a black and red scroll.

Fitting rewards, for now.

After all, Gaia had her turn with this young man, and was oh so very boring.

Now it's the Void's turn, to watch the young raven.
 
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Here's the thing.

That interlude you typed up?

It was miles more interesting and cool than any other part you've typed so much, owing to it not being tediously overladen with the protagonist explaining to us how he used each and every skill and weapon and whatnot the way he did. More "how does this guy's presence affect other characters," plz.

...Yeah.
 
Here's the thing.

That interlude you typed up?

It was miles more interesting and cool than any other part you've typed so much, owing to it not being tediously overladen with the protagonist explaining to us how he used each and every skill and weapon and whatnot the way he did. More "how does this guy's presence affect other characters," plz.

...Yeah.
While I definitely agree on the Interlude being very interesting, especially the last part, I disagree on your assessment of the rest of the chapters.
As someone who loves reading The Gamer stories and Gaming stories in general, I consider that kind of exposition very interesting and engaging. Perhaps it's not interesting for readers which are more interested in literary prose and less in the theme, but then why read a Gamer story?
 
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