Let's read Worm and its sequel Ward by Wildbow (One chapter/every day)

Wonder Woman+ Zebra+ Siberian tiger+ A Stripper

Ha!


My favorite, alongside Leonardo DeCaptcha. (Sorry, that was mean)

still I pray that Theo will prove to be smarter than him by resisting to his mind games

He has spent a lot of time around his dad...

more powerful than metal summoning

Kaiser is one of The most powerful capes in Brockton. He could turn Armsmaster into a pretzel if he wanted.
 
Kaiser is one of The most powerful capes in Brockton. He could turn Armsmaster into a pretzel if he wanted.
Armsmaster presumably has things prepared to deal with Kaiser. Now, if Kaiser ambushed him, yes, Armsmaster would be a pretzel, but give him time to prepare and he stomps the team that just incapacitated the entire rest of the Wards, Protectorate, and New Wave.
 
Interlude 11c
Hi, villains and villains' nemesis. Welcome to the third Interlude about the third S9 member 11.c | Worm But before I'll start, I have a confession and an analyze to make. First, the confession. I re-read my previous review for the second time (first time I read it to correct my spelling and grammar mistakes -I'm sure that I still have a lot of mistakes I didn't noticed but I can be excused because english is NOT my strong point) and I can tell how AWFUL it was. 90% of my review was about Aster and how freaked out I was because I was expecting Jack to kill her at any given moment. I was like: no, Jack, don't kill the baby; Jack, let the baby alone; Jack, you fucking babies murderer...and the rest of 10% was about how much I'm impressed by Theo. All in all, kind of a shitty review. Sorry, everyone, for having to read that garbage. I think I'll make a pretty good S9 member. I'll be the one with the power to write the shittiest reviews and the other members will kidnap random people, forcing them to read my reviews as part of their torture. Their brains will be turned into mush and I'll become one of the most feared S9 psycho. :p Alright, now that I told you what you already know, its time for....the love child of Johnny Deep and Joxer's short analyze.
Jack Slash- things that I admire and I surprisingly LIKE at him: 1) he's very smart; 2) a strong, fearless and ambitious fighter; 3) he's a FAIR supervillain who RESPECT people's choices, letting them decide what they want to do with their lives. He gives them some choices, but he doesn't force them to accept a certain one. He let them decide which choice fit them the best (he's even willing to listen to them when they make their own choices -as he did with Oni Lee and Theo); 4) he respects strong, intelligent and determined people; 5) he encourages people to embrace their absolute freedom, no matter how destructive and counterproductive this freedom would be; 6) he's an excellent leader since he's able to keep under control a group consisting of terrible psychopathic murderers with different personalities and mental troubles. I can imagine him respecting and even encouraging Siberian's choice to be an animal, giving enough freedom for her fucked up mind. Otherwise, Siberian would have either left the group or murder each one of them. She's the kind of psycho who doesn't seem to like to be controlled by others; 7) he's a very interesting and unpredictable supervillain.
-now things that I absolutely hate at him, making me wish a fate worse than death for him: 1) he's a murderous psycho; 2) he won't hesitate to kill children, even babies; 3) he's cruel, sadistic and doesn't give a shit about human life; 4) he's a manipulative bastard; 5) he wants to destroy the world, without caring that he himself will be affected by the Apocalypse along with others; 6) he lacks conscience, remorse, guilt or shame for his actions; 7) in terms of morality, he's an absolute monster. Someone like Coil, but much more violent and destructive than the snake bastard.
That's all I can think about now. When I'll know him better, maybe I can go deeper into characterization. Anyway, so far he's my favorite S9 member, much more interesting than Siberian, who's very simple in her mindset.
Time to start the new Interlude. A wild guess...Crawler visiting Hookwolf???


Spitfire had often complained that having a power based around creating flame meant you faced two kinds of opponents.
Spitfire?!? Holy shit? She's the next candidate? Unexpected. Wow, look, Faultline, some psychos want to steal one of your teammates, what you're going to do about that? I'm very surprised about S9 attacking Faultline's Crew since all of them are super-nice people, despite being mercs. The only one who have mental troubles is Elle but its clear that they came after Emily and not after Elle, since Emily started this Interlude. Maybe she have (or had) some problems that S9 are aware of, I don't know anything about her except that her real name is Emily, she shares the same room with Elle and she likes to read and listen music. Ok, I guess Burnscar is the next S9 member, because both women have similar powers: one can literally spit fire and the other one have fire based abilities. Right, let's get to know Burnscar and see what kind of psycho she's.

There were the people who burned, who were the majority. Civilians fell into this category. Unless the person with the power was amoral, which Spitfire wasn't, this actually wound up being a detriment, because of the easy possibility of life altering injuries, death and scars. The kind of thing that brought heroes down on the villain's head in full force. The second group was the foes who didn't burn. People in armored suits with enough covering, people with forcefields, people with foreign materials either forming or surrounding their bodies, the list wound up being fairly long.
"Spitfire, run!" Faultline ordered.
Burnscar wore a red dress and had chosen to go barefoot rather than wear shoes. Her dark brown hair was a tangled mess above staring green eyes. Her skin was pale, giving a greater contrast to the red of her clothing and the dark the circles under her eyes. The round scars of what were likely cigarette burns formed individual rows down from the bottom of each eye to her jaw. She strode forward through the flames she'd set on the streets outside Faultline's now-deserted nightclub, Palanquin. Sweeping her arms to either side, she spread the flames along the breadth of the road, drew the heat into her palms, and then hurled it at her opponents.
Burnscar didn't seem to have the same reservations about incinerating more vulnerable enemies that Spitfire did.
Gregor the Snail caught one fireball with a hurled glob of slime, extinguishing it. The other landed in the middle of the group, not striking anyone, but nonetheless driving them apart. Newter was at one side of the resulting blaze in the middle of the street, Faultline and Shamrock at the other, with Gregor and Spitfire at the back, furthest from Burnscar.
Spitfire turned to run, and Burnscar drew together another fireball, lobbing it forward, where it soared high in the air before it began to drop. The fireball collided with Spitfire, smashing the girl to the ground. Flames licked off of her fireproof suit and the pavement around her, and it was long seconds before she was able to start pulling herself to her feet.

So, Spitfire is NOT an amoral person as she avoids burning people who are not fireproof. Good to hear that :). I'm sure that Faultline wouldn't have accepted an amoral killer in her team. On the other side, Burnscar is a strongly amoral person, a psycho who doesn't give a shit about setting people in fire. She and Lung would make a pretty couple, I must add, they're both murderous assholes who just love to play with fire, both literally and figuratively. Looks like Burnscar can release fire from her palms. Gosh, the third Interlude that makes me anxious because I don't want anyone from Faultline's Crew to die, they're ones of my favorite villains. :( Hope they'll defeat Burnscar without anyone losing their life.

Burnscar drew fire up around herself, blinding the others, and in a moment, she was beside Spitfire, clutching the girl's throat with her fingertips, pushing her down against the ground that was still burning with traces of the fireball's heat.
Why couldn't this be one of the areas where the streets were flooded? Why did Palanquin have to be on this hill?
"Get her!" Faultline shouted. Shamrock drew her gun and fired, and Gregor launched a stream of slime toward the spot where Burnscar crouched. The slime put out the flame where it landed, and in the moment the splashing slime and the billowing smoke obscured her, Burnscar disappeared.
Looks like Burnscar can teleport through flames. She's like a combination between Lung and Oni Lee. Fuck this. Her powers (because she have more than one) are SCARY. I think that not even Shamrock have a chance with her. Even if the Luckiest Girl Alive manages to dodge all the flames that Burnscar threw in her direction, the fire psycho can just teleport behind her and kill her. This is a real problem. Labyrinth, where the hell are you? She must be in her room because she's very vulnerable on the battlefield. Can't you summon a huge waterfall and make it fall over Burnscar? That will be a great way to stop the crazy pyromaniac. Right now, I wish more than ever for Labyrinth to go completely insane (even if it pained me to say that) and use her power at its strongest. Otherwise her team is doomed.

"There!"
Burnscar had emerged from a patch of flames fifteen feet from Spitfire, and was striding toward the girl, ensuring Spitfire was in the way of any potential attacks from the rest of Faultline's crew. She seized Spitfire and began dragging her toward an alley, one hand around her throat.
Wherever Burnscar stepped, she left burning footprints, and the flames slowly swelled and spread to join with one another, a trail of fire forming a path behind her.
Newter lunged forward, leaping over the flame that separated him from Gregor and then hopping to the nearest building to grab a bag of trash with his tail. Twisting his entire body, he whipped the bag at Burnscar. It struck her, and she staggered back, losing hold of Spitfire.
Burnscar dropped into the flames that covered the pavement and emerged from the flames just behind the others.
Elle, from the second floor room of Palanquin, banged on the window, trying to alert her comrades.
Like a flamethrower, twin streams of fire shot from Burnscar's hands, striking Shamrock, Faultline and Gregor. Catching sight of the attack at the last second, Gregor did his best to shield Faultline and Shamrock with his bulk. Newter threw more trash and rubble towards Burnscar, and succeeded in interrupting her assault on his teammates.
Wow, wow, wow, this fight keeps me on the edge. This is going to be another shitty review where I'll be like: No, Burnscar, don't kill my favorite mercs; Faultline, stop that damn bitch, have a second trigger and become able to bypass Manton effect and kill Burnscar; Fuck, Elle, get crazy and save your team...Oh, God, Elle is very lucid and she can't do jack shit to protect her teammates, she can only sit in her room and watch the whole scene. Poor girl :( Gregor is such a gentleman, protecting Faultline and Shamrock with his own body. Awww, I ADORE men like him :), knights without a shining armor, but with a wonderful shining heart.

Faultline was on fire, her costume alight. Gregor slimed her to put it out, then wheeled on Burnscar.
The same instant he turned towards her, the flame around her flared up, consuming her.
They turned to look for her, simultaneously trying to back away from the flames that spread with each of Burnscar's attacks, and they missed seeing the crouching form in their midst. Only Elle, from her higher vantage point, was able to see Burnscar.
To say that Faultline and her crew were friends wasn't meaningful enough. Elle saw them as family. And she was helpless to do anything to save them.
Her power was available to her, but the range was too small. She needed time to soak it into an area, and she'd gone for a walk earlier. Two hours since she'd gotten back, and her power was limited to her room, the neighboring rooms, the upstairs hallway and the exterior walls of the building that surrounded these areas. Not enough to reach the street where the fighting was happening. And if she moved beyond the boundaries, she would be losing ground. Any time she moved to a new place, beyond the limits of where her power was taking effect, her area of influence shrunk to a few feet around her, only to start gradually bleeding out once more, faster with each passing minute.
She tried using it anyways. Closing her eyes, she reached for the other worlds.
Pocket worlds, as she interpreted them. Realities that were a blank canvas to be altered according to her thoughts, both conscious and unconscious. They were lucid dreams that were big enough, detailed enough, intricate enough to swallow her up, as they so often did. She could make new ones at a whim, but she found it better to build on what she already had.
There was the high temple. Faultline and the hypnotist they'd hired had talked her through it, building a place that wasn't so influenced by Elle's negative thoughts and ideas. It was a place she associated with personal triumphs, with her inner strengths. At the opposite end of the coin was also the bad place. Of the worlds, it was the biggest by far. Nothing she could use there, she knew. She was intimately familiar with every aspect of it. She had spent a long time there.
:(:( Elle is trying so hard to help her teammates but she's not crazy enough to use her power outside the club. She's looking inside her hammerspace which she interprets as being lucid dreams, trying to take from there objects strong enough to stop the murderous bitch. Maybe if she can find a waterfall or a fountain big enough, I don't care if she'll kill Burnscar by drowning her, she'll actually do something very good and she should not feel sorry for. Killing a criminal and protecting your family is NEVER a bad thing.

Her eyes snapped open as explosion erupted in the street. She saw Faultline, Gregor and Shamrock tumbling through the air.
Elle clutched her arms to her body. The lonely hallways… no. The burning towers. Definitely no.
The barren ruins. She'd almost forgotten. It had been her first attempt at making a world outside of the bad place. It had worked up until the moment negativity and self loathing crept in through the cracks, filling in details where she didn't want them. Ugly details. What had resulted was a beautiful, solemn landscape rigged with traps and pitfalls, as if the landscape itself was eager to hurt or kill anyone who didn't watch their step.
As she focused on that world, a small part of her consciousness flew over the landscapes, an image in a second mind's eye. Fields of tall grass, collapsed walls half covered in moss, the remnants of an old castle, a stone hut with a tree growing out of it. She'd always had a soft spot for things that had once been beautiful but had transformed into a different kind of beauty as they aged. She liked the look of a tree that had grown to splendor and then died, the statue worn by years of hard rain. This was the aesthetic that had shaped the ruins. Until everything turned ugly, unpredictable and dangerous.
Today was a good day. She'd exhausted herself earlier in the week by taking on the Merchants on what she could easily mark as a bad day. It seemed she was veering to the other side of things: she'd eaten, gone for a walk, even ventured to have a conversation with Faultline. She could only do those things because her mind's eye, the gate to those other worlds, was nearly closed right now. The drawback was that this also meant that the use of her power was slow. As though she were looking through a spyglass, trying to find a distant detail, she could only take in one scene at a time.
She found what she wanted. An age-worn statue of a woman in a toga, holding a large urn. Focusing on it, she pushed.
It was agonizing. Not the use of her power – that was easy, unavoidable. Even on a good day like today, her power worked without her asking for it. The floor under her feet was turning into a stone tile, grass and moss growing in the cracks, as if the ruins were leaking into the real world. It was agonizing because the emergence of the statue was slow. Brick folded out of the way as it appeared from within the outside wall of
Palanquin. It slid forth at a glacial pace of a quarter-inch every second, and it wasn't small.
The fire had spread across the street and to the wall of the building opposite Palanquin. Burnscar was using it to travel great distances at a moment's notice, simultaneously spreading the flames further with every attack or spare moment she had. Newter was quick enough to avoid her attacks while hurling objects at her to attempt to distract and batter her, but he couldn't approach to make contact with her and knock her out without her burning him, and his range of movement was quickly narrowing as the fires spread. Not only were new patches of flame created when she attacked, but she frequently paused to will the existing fires to swell and extend further in every direction.
Gregor was hurt, but he was trying to control the spread of the flames, while protecting Faultline and Shamrock. His skin glistened, which made
Elle think he was covering himself in something that would protect him from being burned.
Her power was still so slow. Only half of the statue had emerged. Not enough. She needed the entire thing.

Gosh, I think I discovered the secret of Elle's power. She's NOT pulling those objects from a hammerspace, but from other PARALLEL EARTHS. These worlds are described as being very real, not just a stupid hammerspace from where you take random objects and bring them into the real world. Temples and statues are obviously created by humans so my theory is that Elle can open limited wormholes (available only to her), have a "look" inside other Earths and steal objects from there, through the wormhole. I'm imagining what humans living on those Earths are seeing if they're near the places from where Elle steals. I think they see statues randomly disappear or a wormhole opening and temples being absorbed by it. :) If there's no such thing as superpowers in those parallel worlds, people might have the sock of their lives. :D Yes, this my theory about how Elle's power works. If she'll ever try to use her power without limiting herself, she might even bring humans in her world, not just non-biological stuff. She might even be able to use her power in reverse, meaning taking humans from her Earth and sending them to other worlds, in order to protect them from Apocalypse, if Jack will be victorious to bring it. If she'll ever be able to do that (and will SURVIVE until then), she might become the most heroic parahuman in the history of parahumans.

Burnscar had noticed the statue, and paused to pelt it with fireballs. Elle winced as the head broke free, felt a momentary despair as one arm shattered. But the rest was intact. Just two or three minutes.
Gregor caught Burnscar with a stream of slime, and the young woman disappeared in a swirl of fire.
Burnscar had appeared just behind Gregor, Shamrock and Faultline. Before they could notice and react, she drew a ball of flame into a condensed point between her hands and released it in a violent explosion of heated air.
"No!" Elle screamed, banging on the window.
Faultline wasn't moving, and Elle couldn't quite tell through the smoke that covered the street, but she might be burned. Gregor… Gregor wasn't moving either, and he lay in a patch of fire. However fireproof the slime he'd coated himself in might be, he wasn't immune to being roasted.
Shamrock was limping away, limping towards the statue, and Newter was evading a fresh series of attacks from Burnscar. Only Spitfire was largely untouched, helpless to do anything against an opponent that was not only fireproof, but who could walk through fires as easily as anyone else might use a doorway to move from one room to the next.
This wasn't right. Her team, her friends, her family were all moments away from being obliterated.
She had to focus. The statue wasn't enough. She needed a mechanism. The one that was attached to the statue in her mind's eye didn't work.
Something else. She searched. A portcullis with a wheel… no, too rusted, the chain too prone to snapping. Ah, there. A math puzzle, where a ball was set to roll down a series of tubes, with its path being determined by a series of levers, each moving a paddle that would adjust the ball's route.
So frustrating. On her worst days, the days when her view of the other worlds was so expansive that she could barely register the real world, she didn't have to put things together like this. She could shape things as she made them come into the real world, and they emerged as quickly as she wanted them.
Fitting everything into the statue, she had to use some of the math puzzle, the lever, some of the statue's existing mechanism, positioning it all so that they fit together as she pushed it into existence.
A fireball caught Newter in the stomach. He was knocked from where he clung to the wall, falling to the ground. He had to roll out of a patch of ground that was licked by orange flame.
Burnscar turned to Shamrock, who was waiting for the lever to emerge. A fireball was flung at the red-haired woman, who ducked too slowly. The flame clipped her in the shoulder in its route to punch a hole in the wall, directly where the lever was. Pieces of the mechanism tumbled around Shamrock. Gears, levers, paddles and fragments of the switch.
"No!" Elle shouted, "No!'
Her effort had been for nothing. Could she cobble something else together? Would it matter? Their opponent had an idea of what Elle wanted to
do. She wasn't going to offer the opportunity.

The last piece of the math puzzle emerged within the brick walls of Palanquin. Two inches across in diameter, the ball fell along its set route. Rolling down a slight slope, dropping through one spot where the paddle was pointing down, landing on the next slope, rolling in the opposite direction, over two paddles.
Elle grabbed her chair and shattered her window. Gripping the sides of the window, ignoring the glass that bit into her fingers, she screamed,
"Shamrock!"
Both Shamrock and Burnscar looked up at her.

I think that Elle is the next candidate, not Spitfire. Burnscar wants to completely mentally break Elle, by ferociously attacking her only family she knows. I noticed that she doesn't want to kill them, despite being very capable, she only wants to scare Elle enough so she'll suffer a severe breakdown, losing her mental sanity entirely. This is Burnscar's test for Elle, if Burnscar will win, Elle might become her mindless but powerful dummy, if Elle will win, S9 will lose one of the most powerful new members they can get. Depends of how strong Elle's mind can be during these spectacular tense moments. And if she'll find a way to finally put a stop to Burnscar's brutal test.

She slapped the wall with her hand, leaving bloody fingerprints where the glass had cut her, "The ball needs to go right!"
Burnscar launched another fireball at Shamrock, and Shamrock leaped to one side.
"What ball!?"
Elle couldn't tell her, not without letting Burnscar know. She could feel the ball making its way down the last slope, dropping down the far left, to where the mechanism and the lower half of the puzzle had been devastated by Burnscar's fireball. Shamrock would get a glimpse of the ball through the hole in the wall, as it dropped down… now.
Elle felt the almost imperceptible influence of Shamrock's power. The woman was a telekinetic and clairvoyant on the smallest of scales, capable of making small changes and knowing how to use them to make big things happen. The ball moved a few millimeters to the left, hit a splinter of wood and bounced toward the right, spinning. It landed, and the spin of its rotation coupled with the help of an additional nudge carried the ball to the right, and down into the chamber behind the statue.
There was a rumble, and water began pouring from the stump of one arm and the urn the statue held. It poured down around Shamrock, flooding out onto the street to quench the fires on the ground level. Soon it was only the patches of flame on the walls that remained.
Shamrock raised her gun, aiming at Burnscar, and fired. Once, twice. It was hard to tell if the shots hit home, because Burnscar was already wreathing herself in flame, disappearing to appear from the burning wall nearest Spitfire.
Spitfire ran, and Burnscar chased her. Elle could see Shamrock hesitate, then leap through the curtain of water that poured from the urn, giving chase, hoping to help her teammate.
"No!" Elle shouted. But her voice was drowned out by the sound of the water. Soon the pair were gone.
Her phone. She needed to phone them, let them know. Where was it?
In the kitchen. Stupid. She'd been in one of her momentary fugues when they'd been gathering dinner, she had to have left it there. And if she ventured any further than the upstairs hallway, maybe the ledge above the dance floor, she would be losing any ground she'd gained with her power here.
A horn… some kind of noisemaker. A bell? There was a bell in one area of the barren ruins, if she could only find it.
Burnscar dropped from the burning wall opposite Palanquin. Retracing her steps. She looked up at the window that Elle stood behind.
She's not after Spitfire. She's after me, Elle thought, with a moment's despair.

Finally, Elle realized that Burnscar is after her and everything is a test. I like how Elle works with Shamrock. Shamrock uses her bullshit super-LUCK (I prefer to call her power like this :)) to move Elle's ball so the water statue can be activated. They're the strongest Faultline's Crew members and their teamwork is fun to watch in action. But I still think that Elle needs something BIGGER to stop Burnscar, like....try to trap her inside a hollow iceberg? Burnscar might be unable to teleport from there because of so much ice surrounding her- if she have a weakness, then her weakness must be water/ice. Just a stupid suggestion. :p

Burnscar trudged through the expanding pool of water to enter Palanquin's front door. The club was empty, there was no power, no music. Even the employees were attending to their personal lives. It was just Elle and Burnscar.
It was a minute before the door to her bedroom opened.
"There you are," Burnscar said.
Elle looked away.
"Hello, old friend," Burnscar said.
She wasn't good at talking, even on a good day. "Mimi."
"Long time."
...........................................................:o:o:o:o:eyebrow::eyebrow::eyebrow::eyebrow:NOT EVEN IN A MILLION YEARS I EXPECTED FOR ELLE AND MIMI (Burnscar's real name) TO KNOW EACH OTHER AND TO BE FRIENDS ON THE TOP OF EVERYTHING ELSE. So, what is your story behind your friendship with a crazy murderer, Elle? Or maybe they know each other BEFORE Mimi was recruited by S9, my best bet....they're both former patients in the asylum from where Elle was recruited by Faultline. Wow, this is suddenly very interesting....so all Mimi (cute name for such a heartless serial murderer) wanted was to test and recruit her former friend.

Elle nodded.
"I'm… I'm sorry about your friends. I didn't come here planning to do that. It's just… you know."
Elle nodded, trying to keep her outrage off her face.
"I- Fuck. I'm really sorry, you know? I can't help it."
You can. You just don't try hard enough.
But Elle didn't voice her thoughts. She nodded.
"I don't think I did any permanent damage. They're alive."
"Thank you," Elle managed. She couldn't entirely suppress the bitterness in her voice. Burnscar didn't seem to notice.
Wow, wow, it looks like Mimi is not completely heartless and crazy. Despite being a S9 member, she doesn't seem to be a damaged human who loves to live as an animal like Siberian or a total psychopath/sociopath like Jack. She have a lot of mental troubles, but she's aware that she's hurting people, she even STOPPED herself from killing Elle's teammates, she feels sorry for what she did to them but still...she feels like she can't stop doing evil things because...she's crazy. A crazy woman with conscience and remorse. And no, she isn't trying to manipulate Elle, like Jack tried to do with Theo, she seems pretty honest to me (otherwise she'd have continued to torture others under Elle's eyes)

"I- I wanted to talk. Like old times."
Old times. Elle couldn't help it. Her thoughts turned to the bad place, the biggest of her worlds, the world she had spent the most time.
"Back when we were both having our good days? We'd talk, and I really liked those times. I look back on them fondly. One of the few moments I
treasure."
Elle nodded. Behind Burnscar, the door to her room was changing to metal. A tiny window was expanding, bars already closing down like teeth.
The wall around the door was growing tatters of cloth that rippled like they were blowing in the wind.
"Fuck," Burnscar said, "I don't even know where to start. Since I learned you were in this city, and the group wanted to come here, I've been looking forward to this, seeing you again, but now I don't know what to say."
"The weather?" Elle tried, lightly joking. The wrong thing to say.
"I don't want to talk about the weather!" Burnscar snapped the words, in a mixture of desperation and anger. Her eyes flashed orange and flame flared around her hands, then it all faded.
"Sorry."
"I… um. How are you? How have you been, since you escaped?"
"Been… been good. Good people." So hard to articulate my thoughts, even on a good day. "They take care of me. Faultline helped… more than
any doctor I've had."
"The doctors," Burnscar scowled.
"You?"
"I… did you know I escaped at the same time you did?"
Elle shook her head.
"I did. But I had no place to go. I had some bad days. I was lonely, scared. Some guy tried to convince me to be his whore, earn some cash, get fed… I refused, but he kept coming after me."
"Sorry."
"I… I really wanted to be good. I'd told myself I wouldn't use my power. But I had to protect myself, you understand?"
Elle nodded. The cloth around the door had started to settle into a shape. Padded walls, lined with barbed wire and jagged rows of glass. There were stains of shit and blood on some of the cloth, now, growing and swelling. She tried to will it to stop, to focus on her high temple. Her safe place. But looking at Burnscar, that place felt so far away. It was out of her reach.
Burnscar went on, "So I used it to scare him off… but you know how it works. You know what happens with my power."
"I remember."
Compared with Jack and Siberian, Mimi is an ANGEL. But compared with Elle, she's a MONSTER. She gives me the impression of a very damaged human being, who tries hard to live a good and peaceful life but the monster inside her mind always come at surface through her powers, hurting people around her even without her wanting to do it. No, I won't blame her powers for her actions, she's in full control of them, not controlled by them, even if she might believe this. I blame her fucked up mind and....I' think I'm torn between hating her for CHOOSING a group of murderers' company, despite being different from them in terms of morality and feeling sorry for her:(. I think I'll go with both, I hate her but I feel very bad for her. I didn't imagined I was ever going to say this about a S9 member (I also think that I'm going to say the same thing about Bonesaw too; you know, she's a child probably forced somehow to be a criminal. Right in my supreme weakness)

"I… the doctors say that using my power, it adjusts the chemical balances and connections in my brain. Empathy, impulse control, my emotions, they disappear as I use my power, and I can't help using my power if there's fire nearby. It snowballs, because I use my power more when I don't have that self-control, when I don't care about the people I'm near, and when I'm in that headspace I don't want to leave it."
"Yeah." And you retreat into that state to avoid facing the guilt over things you've done. You use it to hide from your own fears. If I blame you for anything, it's for that.
Mimi is an unexpectedly complex super-villain. She likes to use her power, especially when its a fire source nearby. And when she starts using her power, she feels the need to hurt people, because her empathy and emotions disappear, leaving her an empty shell; then her powers 'fill' her emptiness with rage and the uncontrollable wish to use them more and more. She keeps using her powers, she keeps hurting more people, she keeps wanting to create more destruction around her, and so on, like an interminable circle. And all of these because she feels guilty over what she did and she's doing, as Elle noticed, and she refuses to face the guilt, preferring instead to destroy and hurt and kill more, putting more guilt over her shoulders, feeling sorry again, refusing to confront herself, destroying and killing more and so on. She's a coward, Mimi is a big pitiful coward. I should not feel sorry for her because she's a coward who instead of facing her guilt, admitting it and deciding to become a better person, she choose the easiest way for her. But I still feel sorry for her because her mind is broken. You can't expected from such a crazy person to do the normal things that a SANE person would do while in her place. People like Mimi can't function like sane or less crazy people, no matter how much they WANT to change. :(

Burnscar shook her head. "If you hadn't put out most of the fire out there… I dunno what I would have done."
I have a pretty good idea.
"So I burned the pimp to scare him, then I burned him to hurt him, for payback over his hounding me, and then I couldn't really stop myself. I burned him to death. Fuck. That was the start of a bad few weeks."
"Sorry."
"I- before I knew it, the Slaughterhouse Nine had found me. Shatterbird recruited me. And now I'm stuck. I'm trapped. You know there's a kill order out on me? If I try to quit, either the Nine or the cops will off me. So I keep going, I work for them, and it all just gets worse."
"Surrender? Go to the birdcage?"
"They'd find me. You don't even know what these guys are capable of. Our newest member, she replaced Hatchet Face, though he's still around… kind of. She can find people. There's no place secure enough to keep me safe until they took me to the Birdcage. I almost think they'd be able to get me in there, if they wanted to. Siberian? She'd be able to get me. Even in the Birdcage. She always gets her prey."
"Can't keep hurting people, Mimi."
So, S9's new member is a woman with apparently GPS powers, able to find anyone even in Birdcage. Ok, she doesn't seem exceptionally powerful, but she can help the team to find anyone they want. And Siberian can break inside Birdcage, the perfectly indestructible Dragon's super-jail. Wow, Wildbow, tone down a bit Siberian's powers. You're very close to turn her into a second Scion. She was already way too OP, even without knowing that she can BREAK inside Birdcage. I don't have anything against over-powered characters, but I don't like the idea too much when they're murderous beasts :). Well, the only option you can still have, Mimi, is to let them kill you. By dying, you'll be finally free, you'll not have to kill anyone, to be anyone's slave anymore, and a lot of people will probably live. Seriously, if I would have been in her place, I would have let them kill me. But I'm talking here like a sane person with strong morals. Mimi is nothing like this. While she does have morals, they're severely affected by the darkness of her mind.

"I have to. I- I can just use my power. Stay in that headspace where I don't feel bad, where I act the way the Nine expect me to."
The bad place was intruding on the room further. Elle spoke up, "Mimi… Can I touch you? Anchor you? Don't want my power to hurt you."
"So you want to keep me out of your world?" Mimi smiled and shook her head. "No way. Half the reason I came here was because I heard you were making beautiful things these days. I have to see it. The things you can make, now."
Then she turned and looked around. Her face fell as she saw the padded walls, the bed that had become a cot, the shit stains, the blood, the needles in the corner, the broken glass and the razorblades that were embedded in every surface, waiting to catch anyone unsuspecting that put their hand or foot in the wrong place.
"No," Burnscar said.
Elle tensed. "Sorry."
Burnscar's face fell. "This… this isn't beautiful. I remember this."
"Would show you the others… if I could."
Burnscar's voice was choked. "But you can't. Because I remind you of the asylum. I remind you of the bad times, the times you were most miserable."
Elle looked down at her feet, swallowed past the lump in her throat.
"I thought we were friends. We had our moments, didn't we? Only a few times, when we were both allowed out of our cells, when we were
having good days. A few jokes, stories. I mean, I know that some of the time I was coming off a bad spell, so maybe I snapped, or I called you
names, or threatened you…"
Burnscar trailed off. Elle stayed silent.
"It. It wasn't, um." Burnscar stuttered. Her eyes flashed orange. "Did you seeme as a friend? Don't you dare lie to me."
Elle couldn't come up with a reply. They used me as an enticement to get you to cooperate.

"Oh fuck. Fuck me, I'm sorry," Burnscar said. She turned away, fumbled with the metal door. Elle realized it had locked, adjusted things to allow it to open. Burnscar pulled it open, then stopped in the doorway. Her back turned, the girl said, "I'm sorry about your friends. I really hope they're okay."
"I do too."
"I'm glad you're doing well. I hope I didn't fuck everything up."
It took a bit of courage, but Elle hurried to cross the room and wrap her arms around Burnscar, hugging her from behind.
"We had some good times," Elle lied. "Take care."
Burnscar pulled away, and Elle let the girl go. She saw Burnscar find the door to the indoor balcony that overlooked the dance floor, heard her run down the stairs.
Elle sank down against the wall, pushing away the sharp things that would cut her with a use of her power. She put her head in her hands and closed her eyes to the sights around her. She'd wait a few minutes. She'd take a few minutes wait until she could be sure Burnscar was gone, then she would leave to check on the others.
It would be weeks before she had made up for the ground she had just lost, in terms of her mental health, in pushing past the bad memories and the bad place. She reassured herself with the thought that she would get better, in time. She'd gotten there once, she could get there again. If the others were okay.
As for Burnscar? There would be no helping that girl.

My theory about Elle being able to teleport through wormholes objects from other worlds/places is almost confirmed, since she teleported a lot of objects from the hospital inside her room, making both her and Mimi remember of their bad times in the asylum. Elle is pretty "sane", or better said a lot more sane than Mimi, and was used by the doctors to win the trust and friendship of Mimi so they could keep her under their control. It wasn't a real friendship by Elle's side and it looks like Mimi knows this but she CARES enough for Elle to not hurt her for her betrayal. On the other side, Elle feels bad for being used like this, she feels bad for not being able to help Mimi. I feel a lot of pity for both girls, but I think that the only thing that can help Mimi is...her death. I want her to die, but not because she's a monster, but because I want to see her finally freed from all her suffering and helplessness (I also want people to be spared of her madness, of course). I REALLY want her to die and anyone who'll kill her will do something really good for a damaged woman who's beyond any redemption (not because she doesn't want, but because she can't).

Amazingly psychological Interlude (the kind of chapter I FREAKING LOVE to read- fight, psychology, mental illness, humans with a lot of troubles, drama, strong emotions. Everything I love in a chapter :)). So far I like this Interlude the most and my favorite S9 member is Burnscar, followed by Jack. My least favorite is Siberian.

Good night and sleep well, villains and villains' nemesis and don't let Burnscar setting fire to your bedroom.

FUCK, THE NEXT INTERLUDE IS MANNEQUIN'S INTERLUDE, AS SOMEONE TOLD ME. I THINK I NEED TONS OF ICE-CREAM AND FUCKING STEEL NERVES. But I already feel sorry for WHOEVER will be visited by Mannequin, including for Skidmark and Scrub, and this tells a lot, I think .
 
Ha!



My favorite, alongside Leonardo DeCaptcha. (Sorry, that was mean)



He has spent a lot of time around his dad...



Kaiser is one of The most powerful capes in Brockton. He could turn Armsmaster into a pretzel if he wanted.

NEVER underestimate someone who was very close to KILL an Endbringer (the only thing that saved Leviathan was Armsmaster's own arrogance) and who fucked Undersiders big time during the Gallery Prank Fight (against, Armsmaster's own arrogance also saved them, because he underestimated Skitter's intelligence way too much). Armsmaster is the best hero fighter (possible equaled only by Weld), despite not being very heroic himself, he's an excellent, strong and determined fighter and I admire this at him. I can see this man fighting even with his teeth if he doesn't have any weapon available around, this is how I see Colin. Brains+ Brawl= Colin aka Armsmaster. I'm sure that he studied Kaiser's power and fighting skills (as he did with Leviathan) and he was well prepared to take him down if Kaiser wouldn't have died. But Colin have indeed a huge weakness. His own arrogance and belief that he's superior to his foes.
 
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I enjoy reading your reactions as well as thoughts and impressions. I get to vicariously reenjoy the story, and see a different POV reading. Please don't put yourself down for stream of consciousness style and/or content.
 
It's not to offend you but I have a couple of criticisms for you:
1: No, the Armsmaster's arrogance was not a factor, it would be humiliated anyway.
2: Your favoritism, nothing more to say.
3: As you yourself admitted, you go off ranting when you do not like the situation, you are in a written, non-vocal reaction, you have time to think a little in spite of your update time.
4: You judge the characters without knowing them, just because you do not like them (like Burnscar or Jack), it does not mean that they deserve to die, you are not judge and jury, besides that you judge your "favorite characters" very little, even though ... well, you know ... (Jack deserves to die, but I say it because I know him, Burnscar ... it's complicated.)
By the way, some time ago I found someone who wrote something interesting about Taylor's friends, I'll say it directly:
Rachel / Sophia: Both have an animal vision of the world due to their triggering events, both are very violent and use it for their benefit.
Lisa / Emma: Both use the secrets of others to hurt, Emma to Taylor, and Lisa to everyone else.
Alan Barnes / Brian: Both chose their family over their friendships.
Regent / Madison: Both are indifferent, "thugs" that go with the top dog, by that I mean that Regent does not care much as long as he has what he needs, and that the bullying from Madison to Taylor was for the same reasons that the majority of the school did not help her, not to be an objective, basically to be passive, and for her case, to be popular,as Regent wants
I hope I will not offend you with this criticism, but I think it is quite true.
 
It's not to offend you but I have a couple of criticisms for you:
1: No, the Armsmaster's arrogance was not a factor, it would be humiliated anyway.
2: Your favoritism, nothing more to say.
3: As you yourself admitted, you go off ranting when you do not like the situation, you are in a written, non-vocal reaction, you have time to think a little in spite of your update time.
4: You judge the characters without knowing them, just because you do not like them (like Burnscar or Jack), it does not mean that they deserve to die, you are not judge and jury, besides that you judge your "favorite characters" very little, even though ... well, you know ... (Jack deserves to die, but I say it because I know him, Burnscar ... it's complicated.)
By the way, some time ago I found someone who wrote something interesting about Taylor's friends, I'll say it directly:
Rachel / Sophia: Both have an animal vision of the world due to their triggering events, both are very violent and use it for their benefit.
Lisa / Emma: Both use the secrets of others to hurt, Emma to Taylor, and Lisa to everyone else.
Alan Barnes / Brian: Both chose their family over their friendships.
Regent / Madison: Both are indifferent, "thugs" that go with the top dog, by that I mean that Regent does not care much as long as he has what he needs, and that the bullying from Madison to Taylor was for the same reasons that the majority of the school did not help her, not to be an objective, basically to be passive, and for her case, to be popular,as Regent wants
I hope I will not offend you with this criticism, but I think it is quite true.

Well, I respect your opinion (I respect everyone opinions and I'm not feeling offended a bit if they're different from my opinions because every person in this world have their own opinions, who might differ from the other persons' opinions, on the principle that every individual on this planet is unique in his her own way). Yes, I admit, I have characters I love and I favor them over characters I'm indifferent of or I straight up hate. I'm not a judge or a jury but I want some characters to die because they're a menace to my favorite characters/innocent people and I don't like when my favorite characters/innocent people (especially children) are dying because of some really fucked up characters (even in real life, I want some dictators/serial killers/rapists, etc, to die and I'm a huge supporter to death penalty, especially reserved to people responsible of war crimes, people who rape or kill children) Fuck, I'm jewish myself and I'm against Israel/Palestine war and I'd wish for the leaders of both sides involved in this interminable war to be punished accordingly.
I noticed how bad Jack is and I want him to die too, of course, but he's a very interesting villain and I kind of want him to live a little longer, only to see with what twisted plans he'll come further. Burnscar deserves to die because she's beyond remedy, she can't never get her freedom and she can't never stop killing. Maybe only if she's put in an asylum again, but since S9 will find her there too, there's no hope left for her, except death.
I personally compared Rachel with Sophia too (and with Siberian in extension) but Rachel is a much BETTER person than the other two. She's capable of loyalty, unlike Sophia, she at least have feelings for her animals, unlike Sophia, and she can evolve into a much better person that she's already now (unlike Sophia or Siberian). She also feels guilty over some of her actions.
I compared Lisa with Emma too, but Lisa is a much better person than Emma. Emma is not a super-villain that needs to use bullying in order to protect herself or her team. She's a stupid spoiled teenager. While Lisa NEEDS to use bullying in order to protect herself and her team, exactly how Taylor is using her swarm and Brian is using his darkness. This is her only power, she must use it somehow, she doesn't have any other choice. She also have a heart of gold compared with Emma and I'm sure that if there was any other way to resolve the conflicts and survive, Lisa would have used it. She's not the person who hurts people for shit and giggles, she's the person who hurts people ONLY if she deems is necessary for her plans to work properly (and most of her plans are not exactly evil:)).
I really appreciate Alan for being a good father for Emma, even if he spoiled her way too much, turning her into a bitch. But he's a good father, I never criticized him because of this. I criticized him because he's a freaking dick. Unlike Brian, who tries to be an ok person with everyone.

So, I'm not offended, I appreciate your opinions, I don't want to ever try to change them and I'm just saying that I have different opinions, different ways to see how the things are going, different angles and perspectives to see the characters and I can't change my opinions only because each people have their own different opinion. They either can't change their opinions only because I have a different opinion.

PS: If you love Endbringers, Cauldron's experiments and Coil (even if I myself hate them so much), I don't have anything against, you're free to like whoever you want. You're free to have your own favorites, just like I'm free to have my own favorites. I LOVE Lisa, Taylor, Weld, Missy, Sundancer and many others (even if other people might hate them) and I'm free to like whoever I want :). The world is such a beautiful free place "hugs"
 
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Also, I'm Spanish and it's my first time in sufficient velocity, so I'm sorry for the mistakes.
 
Well, I respect your opinion (I respect everyone opinions and I'm not feeling offended a bit if they're different from my opinions because every person in this world have their own opinions, who might differ from the other persons' opinions, on the principle that every individual on this planet is unique in his her own way). Yes, I admit, I have characters I love and I favor them over characters I'm indifferent of or I straight up hate. I'm not a judge or a jury but I want some characters to die because they're a menace to my favorite characters/innocent people and I don't like when my favorite characters/innocent people (especially children) are dying because of some really fucked up characters (even in real life, I want some dictators/serial killers/rapists, etc, to die and I'm a huge supporter to death penalty, especially reserved to people responsible of war crimes, people who rape or kill children) Fuck, I'm jewish myself and I'm against Israel/Palestine war and I'd wish for the leaders of both sides involved in this interminable war to be punished accordingly.
I noticed how bad Jack is and I want him to die too, of course, but he's a very interesting villain and I kind of want him to live a little longer, only to see with what twisted plans he'll come further. Burnscar deserves to die because she's beyond remedy, she can't never get her freedom and she can't never stop killing. Maybe only if she's put in an asylum again, but since S9 will find her there too, there's no hope left for her, except death.
I personally compared Rachel with Sophia too (and with Siberian in extension) but Rachel is a much BETTER person than the other two. She's capable of loyalty, unlike Sophia, she at least have feelings for her animals, unlike Sophia, and she can evolve into a much better person that she's already now (unlike Sophia or Siberian). She also feels guilty over some of her actions.
I compared Lisa with Emma too, but Lisa is a much better person than Emma. Emma is not a super-villain that needs to use bullying in order to protect herself or her team. She's a stupid spoiled teenager. While Lisa NEEDS to use bullying in order to protect herself and her team, exactly how Taylor is using her swarm and Brian is using his darkness. This is her only power, she must use it somehow, she doesn't have any other choice. She also have a heart of gold compared with Emma and I'm sure that if there was any other way to resolve the conflicts and survive, Lisa would have used it. She's not the person who hurts people for shit and giggles, she's the person who hurts people ONLY if she deems is necessary for her plans to work properly (and most of her plans are not exactly evil:)).
I really appreciate Alan for being a good father for Emma, even if he spoiled her way too much, turning her into a bitch. But he's a good father, I never criticized him because of this. I criticized him because he's a freaking dick. Unlike Brian, who tries to be an ok person with everyone.

So, I'm not offended, I appreciate your opinions, I don't want to ever try to change them and I'm just saying that I have different opinions, different ways to see how the things are going, different angles and perspectives to see the characters and I can't change my opinions only because each people have their own different opinion. They either can't change their opinions only because I have a different opinion.

PS: If you love Endbringers, Cauldron's experiments and Coil (even if I myself hate them so much), I don't have anything against, you're free to like whoever you want. You're free to have your own favorites, just like I'm free to have my own favorites. I LOVE Lisa, Taylor, Weld, Missy, Sundancer and many others (even if other people might hate them) and I'm free to like whoever I want :). The world is such a beautiful free place "hugs"
First, I'm sorry to bother. Second, I do not hate any of the characters, I am simply impartial to everyone, and I have a dislike for the potential wasted. Third, your opinion of madison and regent? Fourth, keep up the good work and thank you, again for your response. and fifth, I wish you the best of luck with mannequin.
 
Interlude 11d
Hello, pyromaniacs and firefighters, and welcome to this Interlude 11.d | Worm. Its all about dolls and kids playing with them, nothing else. Isn't scary at all, its actually fun. Its an innocent, sweet Interlude where we'll see happy children and their cute little dolls. So, nothing to worry about. Last Interlude was about the Lost Princess of Maze being visited by her asylum friend, The Phoenix with Broken Wings, my new favorite S9 member and the only one I feel pity for. Elle is not a candidate, fortunately, so far the only candidate being Rachel. So, let me first take my TONS of icecream and my plushies then we'll start this child play :D fuck this.....mommmyyyyyyyyyyyyy....

There was a faint tapping sound. A clink of something hard on metal or glass.
.............................holy shit........holy shit..............holy shit...........holy shit.....
He's coming, he's coming after you, whoever you're, you poor, UNLUCKY, cursed future candidate (or future nemesis, or simple former friend of his), he's coming to get you, then he's coming to get us all (I'll seriously pity even Hookwolf if he's involved in this shit. Not even a murderous nazi deserves this fate, meaning to have the Mannequin- of all people- coming to get him)

It came again, a second later.
Colin looked up from his computer.
COLIN? COLIN IS THE CANDIDATE OR WHATEVER MANNEQUIN WANTS FROM HIM? Oh, God. Well, Colin, I don't like you too much as a human being and a hero, especially a hero, even if I freaking LOVE your shining intelligence and brilliant bravery and steel determination and adamantium balls, but I'm sure as hell that you don't deserve this shit, nope, nope, nope, nope. Why they want to recruit Colin? I mean he's arrogant, pretty violent and very awkward in social relationships and he caused the death of some people because he wanted to show the world that he's the biggest hero who ever walked on the earth, but that's it. These are the only things I have to reproach him. He's not a psycho, neither a mass murderer, he didn't created weapons of mass destruction and used them to start a war, he's not someone who can be considered as S9 material. Why Mannequin decided to terrorize him instead of going after someone more close to S9 ideology (Kill people and if they're still not dead, kill them again)...someone like Hookwolf, for example?

Ears peeled, he turned his head to the left and waited. Clink. He turned his head the other way, in the hopes of pinpointing the source.
He heard a scraping noise, then the sound once more. He couldn't say where it came from.
He opened an instant message window on his computer and sent a message:
PHQ.Armsmaster: You have a sec?
Guild.Dragon: Reading the most monotonous data on seismic activity and Behemoth's possible movements. Ugly code. Distract me, I beg you.
PHQ.Armsmaster: Hearing something. Can you listen in?
A few seconds passed, then it came again.
Guild.Dragon: I hear it. Wait. Changing the settings on your microphones so I can triangulate the source.
As casually as he was able, he glanced towards the window. Tinted glass, bulletproof, and reinforced with a low degree forcefield. It would be easier for someone else to go through the wall than the window, but he couldn't see through walls. Nothing outdoors. Just an overcast sky hiding the majority of the moon, and a faint drizzle of rain. No person or animal, nothing else.
Clink.
Guild.Dragon: Vent, behind and above you.
A thing is CERTAIN....I'm going to have a very bad sleep tonight. He's coming through vents to get you, Colin. he's coming through FUCKING VENTS! Ok, prepare yourself for the worst review you probably ever read in your entire life; this review is going to be so bad that I'll have to use this symbol for BIOLOGICAL HAZARD
STOP READING IT, ITS HARMFUL FOR YOUR HEALTH!!!

He whirled around, grabbing the model of his nanobranch disintegration weapon from the stand on his desk. It was miniaturized, a mere pocket knife that Piggot could use for demonstration. Still, it would serve better than any chair or tool he might pick up.
He briefly debated going for the helmet with the link back to his old suit's combat analyzer. But it wasn't set up, it would cost him precious seconds – twenty or thirty – before he connected to the main server. Until that happened, the helmet would only render him blind. A blank display.
Something moved in the gloom behind the vent. There was a flash of something white or light gray, and the vent rattled, a puff of dust flowing down where the screws held it in place. Again, there was the sound. Clink.
The vent exploded from the wall with enough force to fly across the room and embed in the opposite wall. It was hard to make out in the cloud of plaster dust, but Colin saw a hand, all white, each joint segmented, fingers splayed, palm facing the room.
The hand tipped forward, and then dropped to the floor alongside the attached forearm, a length of chain stretching from the vent to the 'elbow'.
Other body parts followed, each separated from the rest, encased in a white shell. An upper arm, two halves of a torso, then a head. The rest of the body followed, flowing to the ground like a liquid to pool there. The right arm and the left leg were separate, detached, with only ball joints at the end.
Colin noted that the flat expanse that would join the left side of the chest to the right had a clear pane to it. Organs were inside, cut cleanly down the middle, and they pulsed with activity, throbbing wet against the glass or glass substitute. There was technology in there too. Regulators and filtration systems, and other gear that was designed to fit into the gaps between the most vital systems. Weapons, tools.

"she turned on all the lights in her house, including at bathroom, and wrapped herself in a blanket, despite being pretty hot here" Ok, alright....Mannequin is officially the CRAZIEST TINKER IN THE ENTIRE WORM. I'm sure that I'm not going to meet in the future another Tinker as crazy as Mannequin, he's the quintessence of MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD SCIENTIST. Well, maybe there are the Tinkers who created Endbringers, if Endbrinders will be confirmed to not be aliens, but biological experiments. But not even the respective Tinkers would be as lunatic as Mannequin. I mean, this guy apparently destroyed his entire body, replacing each part of it with shells, plastic, metal, probably steel and glass. He kept only his essential organs, he transformed his whole body into a mass of living doll parts and robotic stuff. He mutilated himself so he'd look entirely like a huge mechanized doll. If this is not MADNESS in its purest form, then what else is?

He knew this one from the briefings. Mannequin.
The realization of what he was up against spurred him to action, pushed him beyond that momentary paralysis that came with the grim sight of the internal organs. While Mannequin was incapacitated, he charged, clicking a switch on the handle of his knife to activate the disintegration effect.
A static grey cloud formed around the knife.
Colin was two paces away when a telescoping blade speared out from Mannequin's hand, straight at him. It was luck as much as reflexes that let him stop his run, his feet sliding on the smooth ground, before he ran into the weapon. He dropped onto his back, instinctively rolling with the fall to reduce the impact.
The blade snapped back into Mannequin's hand with enough force that the hand and forearm it was attached to recoiled from the impact. It flipped into the air, and the blade snapped out again to impale the top of the door frame.
The chain retracted with a faint whirr, and the forearm snapped into place on the upper arm, which soon connected to the shoulder of the torso.
The chain joining the two halves of the torso together reeled in and locked into place by way of some unseen mechanism, the seam between them almost invisible. Colin felt a faint tug from his weapon as some electromagnetics kicked into effect. The unattached arm and leg flew to the shoulder and pelvis and snapped into place.
The head was the last thing to join the tall, thin body. The chain slowly reeled it in, dragging the head along the floor, lifting it off the ground. It swung, bouncing off one leg, the stomach, then the shoulder before it finally connected to the neck, the very top of the head scraping the ceiling.
There were no eyeholes, no earholes, nor any vents for air intake. There was only a head as white and smooth as an eggshell, with shallow indents where the eyes and mouth should be and a small bump for the nose.
Mannequin raised one hand and placed it on the top of his head. With a sharp twist, he snapped it into place with an audible click. He tested the range of motion, tilting it forward, backward, to either side, then spinning it around three-hundred-and-sixty degrees.
"sticks a spoon full with icecream in mouth" I'm going to have a very sore throat tomorrow but it's worth it :D This SUPER-MAAAAAAAAAAAAD scientist doesn't even have a normal head inside that shell head. He replaced everything with his shell "costume", I'm sure his senses (sight, hearing, taste, smell) are supported by the electronic devices filling the insides of the shell head. I wonder why he hated so much his real human body to...distance so much of any idea of humanity and become what he's now? Maybe he suffered from a severely inferiority complex? Or he had an accident? He was sick? You know what....I fucking don't care about the backstory of this.... thing. All I care is for Colin to kick his shell ass with his nano- knife. Mannequin is LUCKY that Colin doesn't have his nano- Halberd, the one that the hero used to kick Leviathan's ass, otherwise he would have been so boned. Alright, Doll Tinker vs Cyborg Tinker ROUND 1- FIGHT.

"Dragon," Colin whispered, "Are you getting this?"
"Help is on the way, Colin." The whole room was outfitted with speakers, microphones and microcameras. Her voice came from the speaker directly behind him, so quiet that he would have thought he imagined it, if he didn't know her.
Mannequin tested the rest of his body, while Colin slowly climbed to his feet. Every joint was too flexible, and was capable of moving in every angle. For a moment, Mannequin's fingers were like worms, each knuckle bending in impossible directions.
Was the killer hoping to intimidate him? Nobody would test these mechanics in front of an enemy, so this was most likely a demonstration.
Four blades sprang from Mannequin's left forearm. The limb began to rotate, slowly at first, then faster, until the four blades were whirling like a helicopter propellor. Colin tensed, preparing to jump the moment the limb shot towards him. He'd never wanted his suit so badly.
The propeller-like whirl of the blades gave the arm some buoyancy, and it shifted enough to come into contact with Mannequin's leg. All at once, it ricocheted, shearing through the computer, bouncing violently off of Mannequin's head, then his leg again, the desk, then his arm.
Colin watched every movement of the bouncing blades, waiting for the moment it would fly free, or the second Mannequin charged. There would be no dodging that unscathed.
But Mannequin didn't move. The spinning slowed, and the whirling blades settled into a rhythmic bounce against Mannequin's leg, until it had stopped entirely, the arm swinging gently. The blades retracted.
Mannequin didn't speak, he made no sound.
Long moments passed.
"Talk to me, Dragon," he murmured. His voice shook just a touch. Any second now, Mannequin would cut to the chase and attack, and he could die at this monster's hands.
Her voice was quiet behind him. As much as anything, it helped keep him calm. "Mannequin. Original name Alan Gramme. Tinker, originally went by the name Sphere. Specialty is in biomes, terraforming and ecosystems… or it was."

Dragon, quickly, send some of your fancy suits to help your loverboy. Be a good AI, be a helpful AI, show this human how much you cyber-love him by actually HELPING him, instead of talking to him (I'm sure she's trying her best, btw, but I have to TRY to joke from time to time, otherwise I'll lose my fucking minds here and then I'll start to turn my body into an ecosystem :). Then, no more further reviews cause I'll be too busy killing random people with my new body). So, this THING was called Alan (IMPORTANT WORM RULE: all jerks should be called Alan: Alan Barnes, Alan Gramme. I won't forget this rule, Wildbow, have faith). His former codename was Sphere and he was good with ecosystems. So, what's up, buddy? You got trapped in one of your bodily ecosystem and went batshit crazy?

Colin nodded slowly. He knew this, but it was reassuring to get a recap.
"He became newsworthy when he took on a project to build self sustaining biospheres on the moon. He had ideas on solving world hunger, and building aquatic cities near cities plagued by overcrowding. And he was putting it all into effect. Until-"
"The Simurgh," Colin finished.
"His wife and children were killed in the attack, years of work ruined. Everything fell apart. He went mad. He cut himself off from the rest of the world. Literally sealed himself away."
Colin looked at the cases that surrounded each individual body part. Each body part a self-contained system. Everything nonessential stripped away and replaced.
Her voice was even quieter than before as she said, "He has a body count, Colin. You know…"
Alright, now I'm not scared anymore, neither eager to joke around. At least on the moment. I'm just...sad :( Sad because such a wonderful heroic Tinker (he reminds me of Andrew, Dragon's creator, who suffered the same fate, being killed by Leviathan the Sea Male-Cunt) like Alan lost his brilliant minds completely, turning into the actual monster, because he couldn't bear the pain of knowing that his family was killed by Simurgh the Flying Bitch. He surely loved his wife and kids a lot (fuck you, Endbringers, for purposely killing/destroying the best minds of the world, because you don't want the world to be saved. I hate you all, murderous apocalyptic beasts. Hope someone to find a way to finally put an end to your terror). Okay, I feel BAD for Alan, but I don't feel bad at all for Mannequin. Because Mannequin is a completely different person from Alan. He divorced entirely of humanity and turned against it, wanting only to destroy it. Alan tried to save the humanity, Mannequin wants to doom it. Alan DIED, along with his family and his work. From his ashes, Mannequin appeared in all its plastic and metal insane splendor. But they're not the same persons. At least, not from Mannequin's point of view. So, I'm going to respect Mannequin's mindset and I'll consider them as two persons. RIP Alan, you were a great man and an equally great hero. Hope you'll be happy with your family where you're now.

She trailed off, unwilling to finish.
"I know," he finished for her. Like other serial killers, Mannequin favored certain types of people as victims. His prey of choice included rogues, those individuals seeking to make a profit from their abilities, especially those looking to better the world… and tinkers.
Mannequin swayed slightly on the spot. Like a doll with a broken neck joint, his head flopped onto one side, until it was perpendicular to the floor. There was a click as he slowly righted it.
"What do you want, monster?" Colin growled, "Little point in coming after me. I don't have much of a life to look forward to. I've already lost everything!"
Mannequin didn't move.
"You'd be doing me a fucking favor!" Colin shouted, "Come on! Come get me, you freak!"
There wasn't a movement or sound from the killer.
There was a sound from Dragon. In a tone that was afflicted with agonizing disappointment, like a mother who had just found out her son had been arrested for a felony, she said, "Oh, Colin."
Colin didn't speak. He waited for elaboration.
"The PRT got a tip from one of the villain teams. The Slaughterhouse Nine is in town."
"So I gathered."
"They ran it by some of the experts. Colin, the consensus they came to was that Slaughterhouse Nine are in Brockton Bay to replace their ninth member."
He stared at Mannequin, and the realization made his blood run cold.
"Me!?" he shouted.
The faceless man cocked his head to one side.
Colin roared, "I'm a fucking soldier! I made a call that could have saved millions of lives! Billions! You're ten times as fucked up as I thought you were if you think I belong in your group!"

"BANGS HER HEAD AGAINST THE DESK, PRETTY HARD, UNFORTUNATELY" Ouch. Exactly what I expected that Colin will do. He's going to lecture Mannequin with a fucking stupid monologue, dripping nothing but arrogance. Ladies and gentlemen....classical Colin. This man can't really help himself. He used the same monologue while fighting Leviathan and was boned when he was so sure that he'll win. If Mannequin will fuck you up, Colin, is only your damn fault, you know, for repeating the same past mistakes. "sighs" Even Dragon agrees with me. An AI agrees that your arrogance is exactly the negative trait that will get you killed one day. Of course, if you'll survive now.

Uncaring or oblivious to the outburst, Mannequin turned and examined the ruined computer. He picked up a key that had been thrown off the ruined keyboard and turned it over in his fingers.
"Listen to me, you psychopath!"
"Colin!" Dragon's voice hissed from the speaker, not as quiet as it had been. "Don't provoke him! Help is nearly there!"
Colin had to stop to control his breathing, and he bit his tongue to keep from saying anything further. His enemy had to have heard her, but didn't seem to care.
Mannequin fished through the broken keys from the keyboard, found another, and folded one finger back to pin it against the back of his hand.
He ejected a blade from his wrist and used it to scrape the letters that were still intact off the board. They clattered to the desktop, and a few fell
to the floor.
The featureless white head swiveled one way, then the other.
After a long moment, one arm dropped to the floor, the chain going slack. The hand crawled over to pick up another key, then the arm reeled in.
Colin tensed as Mannequin approached, backing up as far as he was able The window was just behind him now, and he could almost imagine the crackling of the rainwater vaporizing against the forcefield.
The villain turned and placed the keys down on the edge of Colin's desk. The first key was the letter U.
Six inches away, Mannequin put down an M, sideways. He corrected it so it was upright. Directly beside it, the villain put down an E.
He stepped away from the desk and faced Colin once more.
"You… me?" Colin asked.
Mannequin cocked his head.
"Is this a riddle?"
Mannequin swiveled his upper body to face the other direction and reached for the shattered monitor. He picked out a piece of glass and a piece of glossy black plastic. Pressing them together, he raised it to the right side of his face, looking down at Colin. Slowly, Mannequin changed the angle of the shard of glass with the black backing.
It took two long seconds before the villain's intent became clear. Colin tensed, and Mannequin froze, fixing the angle of the shard.
With the black backing, the glass reflected an image. With the angle Mannequin had carefully found, the image reflected was half of Colin's own face, overlapping with Mannequin's head.
"No," Colin muttered.
"Quiet!" Dragon's voice whispered from the nearby speaker, "They're in the building, they'll be there to help you in two minutes, maybe less! I can see them on the security cameras!"

COLIN, SHUT THE FUCK UP! You're challenging someone very unstable and dangerous. I mean, if you had your armor and weapons, then I'd have agreed with challenging Mannequin to a beautiful battle, but you have nothing, except for a knife. You don't even have Jack's power to manipulate the cutting edge of that knife, turning Mannequin in an interesting jigsaw. All you have is a crazy bravado and a painfully stupid mouth. Mannequin wants to turn Colin into someone like him by stripping him of humanity, destroying his human body and replacing it with...an entirely robotic one? Nope, Colin is not like you, Mannequin, despite his arrogance and everything, he still have his morals, as twisted as they're. I TRUST Colin to fight until the very end, even if he might lost his life in the process. He's not a future S9 member, he's a damaged but determined hero. :)

"I'm nothing like you!" Colin screamed at the villain.
Mannequin stared at him with the shallow, empty eye sockets.
"I didn't date, I didn't have kids, because I wanted to be out there, helping! I knew that any attachments could be used against me, so I went without! I was fucking smart enough to do that!"
"Colin!" Dragon pleaded. Her voice was louder.
The villain didn't move.
"Fucking answer me! Spell the fucking words with keys if you have to!" He roared the words at the mad tinker.
Mannequin swayed slightly, then righted himself with a sudden, jerky motion, as if he'd collapse into a heap if he wasn't careful. He used his hand to shift his back into place with an audible click.
Colin went on, "I was out there every day, helping. I took steps to fight evil and take down criminals every day, small steps, baby steps."
"Colin, stop, please!"
Dragon's words didn't matter. He was going to die anyways. He'd known the moment he recognized Mannequin. He'd go down fighting, hurt this motherfucker the only ways he could.
"You want to compare us, freak? Maybe we both had bad days. Days where nothing went right, days where we were too slow, too stupid, too weak, unprepared or tired. Days we'll look back on for the rest of our fucking miserable lives, wondering what we would have done different, what we could have done better, how things could have played out. The difference between us is that I actually did something with my life, and I'm still trying to do more while I serve my sentence!" He stopped and took a breath. "You started your big projects, got every fucking person in the world to get their hopes up, and then you failed to finish anything because you couldn't hack it when your fucking family got killed! You insult their fucking memories every motherfucking second you exist like this!"
Poor Dragon, poor Dragon, I feel so bad for her now. Seeing the human male she loves challenging to a desperate fight an absolute monster, despite not being sure anymore that he can win. I feel more sorry for her than for Colin himself, seriously. She sounds like a real woman in love, helpless to do anything to protect her man. This scene with her begging Colin to stop is romantic and tragic at the same time. Colin, Colin, listen your woman and stop trying to talk with a dead person while you're facing Mannequin. Doesn't make any sense, seriously. You're not a medium, for God sake. You're just a desperate and suicidal hero. But better to die than becoming a murderer, I can agree with you here.

Mannequin slammed him into the wall with more strength than he might have expected the artificial body to have. The blade came next, springing from Mannequin's hand to pierce the shoulder that led to Colin's stump of an arm and stick through the wall behind him.
The villain withdrew the hand, then punched the blade into Colin's stomach. Once, twice, three times.
Dragon's scream came from every speaker in the room.
A slash of the blade caught Colin across the face, blinding him in one eye and tearing through the bridge of his nose.
None of it hurt as much as it felt like it should have. More serious wounds didn't tend to, odd as it was.
Colin tried to laugh, and found he couldn't. He could feel blood flowing into his mouth and throat through the gaping wound in his face. He let his head hang forward, so the blood could mostly flow out of his mouth.
He tried to move forward, lunge with his knife, but he couldn't pull his shoulder from the wall, even though the blade was no longer pinning him there. Was it a lack of physical strength, or something mechanical, flesh and bone shoved into the hole in the wall?
Couldn't lapse into that kind of thinking.
Still had the knife. One hole in the self-contained systems that were one of Mannequin's vital body parts would cause a leak of fluids, an introduction of pathogens that Mannequin surely wouldn't be able to fight off.
He tried to speak, but there was too much blood in his mouth, and he only managed to start coughing violently, spraying blood on the white of
Mannequin's chest. His vision was getting hazy.
He wouldn't be able to distract the lunatic with words while he acted. He could only pray.
Don't do it for me, God. I probably don't deserve the chance. Do it for every soul this motherfucker would kill from here on out if I fail.
He thrust out the knife, swept it towards his opponent's chest cavity. His hand stopped.
With his vision in his good eye failing him, it took him a second to see why. Mannequin's hand gripped his wrist.
He pushed, as if he could beat this monster in strength. By some miracle, his hand moved a fraction closer to his enemy's chest. He redoubled his efforts, and it moved still closer.
A blade stuck out of Mannequin's upper arm, near the elbow joint. The upper arm fired like a small rocket to stick in the wall, and for a second, there was slack in the chain. Colin thrust the knife forward, came within inches of making contact with Mannequin's chest before the chain reeled in and the metal links went rigid.
Then, as if to taunt Colin, Mannequin dropped to a crouch, moved his face less than an inch from the blur that marked the edge of the blade's effect.
No!
He couldn't say where, but he found some reserve of strength. The knife inched closer. Hairs away. He could see the material of the casing smoke just beneath Mannequin's 'eye', a dark patch revealing itself beneath.
Mannequin's head fell, tipping over backwards to strike the ground, dangling from the chain, out of reach of the blade. Still holding Colin's wrist, the headless villain stood straight.
He was toying with me.
Mannequin wrenched his hand back, as if to make it clear that he had let him get that close, that Colin had never really stood a chance. Colin was pulled to one side, and he didn't have the strength in his midsection to keep from falling over. His knife clattered from his grip as he fell to the floor.
The villain picked up the knife, examined it, then pressed the button to test it. The last thing Colin saw before darkness consumed his vision was the bastard using the weapon on the wall beside the window, dust billowing where it made contact.
In the last seconds of consciousness, he heard Dragon's voice, as if from a far away place. "No! No, no no! Colin! Stay awake! I need you!"

Colin, you're the MOST BADASS HERO SUPER-GENIUS in the history of Worm's heroes. You fought like a pro with Mannequin, having only a knife. My admiration for you increased spectacularly thanks to this fight and your ambition to never turn into a monster. So, Mannequin WANTED to kill Colin, after he refused to join S9. He probably thinks now that he killed him. But I'm sure that Dragon will find a way to save him, even if she'll have to turn him into a freaking cyborg. Colin have to survive in order to hunt down this THING and stop him from existing.

Her voice was the first thing he heard when he woke. "Welcome back."
"I survived," his voice rasped. He'd had a tracheotomy. The only explanation for his throat being this sore would be having a tube rammed down
it. Looking around, he saw a laptop propped up beside him, and a get well card from Miss Militia. She must have put the laptop there when she left the card.
"Your heart stopped nine times on the operating table," Dragon said, "A lesser man wouldn't have made it."
"How?"
"Artificial parts. I supplied your headquarters with a 3D scanner of my design weeks ago. I had them make the parts I specified. The on-site doctors kept you alive long enough for the scanner to make the necessary components, and they followed my instructions in installing them."
"Good girl," he told her, with genuine affection.
"I'm sorry about your face."
He tried to raise his hand, but found it attached to IVs. He had to maneuver it carefully as he lifted it to his face, so as not to tangle the wires.
Almost seamlessly, his flesh transitioned into a smooth plastic and back to flesh again.
"It's alright," he said.
"Your new eye doesn't work. I think I know what's wrong with it, and I can get you something that will work, I just need time."
"You have better things to be doing." He coughed and regretted it as pain ripped through his throat with the movement of the muscles. His stomach felt strange. He started to speak, cleared his throat, then said, "I think I could pull off an eye patch."
"The parts won't last. All of this is prototype stuff. Some of it I revised and invented while you were in surgery. They're temporary, but I can make better. I'm afraid you're going to need to go under the knife a few times. More than a few."
"That's fine. Thank you for all this."
There was a pause.
"You're a fucking idiot, Colin. That was the stupidest fucking thing I've ever seen."
He laughed. His breath caught with the pain each laugh produced, but he couldn't help it.
"Yeah, I hope that hurt."
"Wanted to provoke him. See if I couldn't find an opening."
"I repeat: Stupidest fucking thing I've ever seen."
"Was going to kill me anyways."
"Was he? He could have killed you there. He didn't."
"He tried."
"No, Colin. Look."
The laptop screen on the table beside him lit up, and a browser page opened. An image loaded.
A photo. Mannequin had left a message. 3 keys, again, on the edge of the desk. BR8.
The eight, Colin supposed, was meant to stand in for a second B. 'BRB', an acronym used by countless denizens of the internet and innumerable
cell phone texters. Be Right Back.
"Could be meant for you guys."
"Or it could be for you."
"He left me for dead. He couldn't really expect I'd survive."
Dragon didn't reply. He thought of Mannequin. Despite the silence, despite the uncanny behavior and the dramatic self mutilation, Mannequin was abrilliant man. A man who could have looked at the resources that were available in the building, who could have figured out Colin was in touch with Dragon, done just enough damage to push him to the brink of death.
"Shit. He probably could," Colin conceded.
He stared at the photo for several long seconds, then turned away.
Hoping to inject some levity into the grim conversation, he smiled and asked her, "What was this I heard when I was passing out? 'I need you'?"
The silence stretched on for so long that he knew he'd made some faux pas. He just wasn't sure what. Stupid. This was the kind of thing that had
cost him his position, started the dominoes falling in such a way that they'd led him to being prisoner in that room, led to him being an easy target
for Mannequin, to him being here, in this bed. Never knowing what to say, or how to say it, or who to say it to.
He was about to apologize when Dragon said, "Those prosthetics I gave you? They were part of a bigger project. Something I'd intended to use for myself."
She was a cripple? He'd known she had survived Leviathan's attack on Newfoundland, was it such a surprise that she'd gotten hurt then? It would explain her aversion to showing her face. One of the things she'd given him was a facial prosthetic.
"I'm sorry," he said, "I didn't know."
"No, it's not that," she paused. "There's something you need to know about me."
On short: Colin is now Worm-verse Vriska confirmed.
Colin is the most badass hero of the story.
Colin is the most idiotic brilliant Tinker Protectorate ever seen.
Mannequin is the SCUM OF THE EARTH who deserves the WORST KIND OF PUNISHMENT.
Mannequin didn't actually wanted to kill or recruit Colin, but to turn him into his NEMESIS, as Jack did with Theo.
I still feel bad for poor Alan and his fucked up life and death.
I'm still scared shirtless of Mannequin.
I think Dragon is very cute as an AI in love.
I'm starting to ship the Cyborg Hero and the AI who loves him (I still have to seriously think at a name of this ship and how in the hell they're going to have a child of their own:)).
This Interlude was surprisingly romantic.
FUCK ENDBRINGERS.
FUCK MANNEQUIN.
FUCK MY RUINED NIGHT AND DREAMS.

Thank you for reading my shit, hope your health wasn't affected beyond remedy. God night, friends, and sleep well.
 
Sad because such a wonderful heroic Tinker like Alan lost his brilliant minds completely, turning into the actual monster, because he couldn't bear the pain of knowing that his family was killed by Simurgh

Sphere would have been cool as a hero, shame he had to go. He's far beyond redemption now, but how tragic his story was makes me want to try. There's a reason why I consider him to be one of my 'favorite' S9 members, because of what potential he once had.
 
My favorite S9 member finally showed up on that Let's Read :D
Be prepared because you haven't seen the last of Mannequin.
 
If nothing else, we must admire that mannequin, and by extension, the rest of the slaughterhouse nine, are very good at what they do. What really bothers me, is the fact that alan could have taken humanity to the stars, but nooooooo, the ziz had to say "hahaha, this space is mine, as a reward, I have for you a round of wasted years. ..and a dead family "
 
Sphere would have been cool as a hero, shame he had to go. He's far beyond redemption now, but how tragic his story was makes me want to try. There's a reason why I consider him to be one of my 'favorite' S9 members, because of what potential he once had.

Yes, I definitely agree with you. Alan was a HERO who could have saved the whole humanity from all menaces :(. He was the OPPOSITE of Jack. But I prefer now to consider Alan being dead and "living" with his family, wherever the souls are going. I'm sure that Mannequin prefers the same thing.
 
My favorite S9 member finally showed up on that Let's Read :D
Be prepared because you haven't seen the last of Mannequin.

You know what? I'm CONVINCED that is not the last apparition of Mannequin. Especially since Colin is official his nemesis and will never forgive him. Mannequin underestimated Colin (in the same manner Colin underestimates his foes), making a huge mistake to let him live. Or maybe he wanted to test him to see how much determination he have to stand against all odds. But if there are parahumans who'll ever defeat Mannequin, I think there are four: -Colin, with his special ultra-sophisticated weapons (I'm sure that- after this near death experience- he'll be released from home detention anytime soon and will start in no time to build awesome weapons and armors :p) -Sundancer (she can literally melt Mannequin with a powerful enough sun; of course if she'll be convinced that there's no way to let this killer live anymore), -Faultline (if she'll touch Mannequin, she'll destroy his shell entirely and everything inside, except organs. Because she can affect non-biological materials), and Taylor (she can fill Mannequin's insides with hundreds of bugs and command them to attack his organs. Or, if the organs are protected enough, she still can fuck with his joints, disassembling him; she have a LOT of imagination when it comes to fuck up foes) :) Well, maybe there are others too, but so far I only see these four parahumans able to stand against Mannequin and defeat him.
 
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If nothing else, we must admire that mannequin, and by extension, the rest of the slaughterhouse nine, are very good at what they do. What really bothers me, is the fact that alan could have taken humanity to the stars, but nooooooo, the ziz had to say "hahaha, this space is mine, as a reward, I have for you a round of wasted years. ..and a dead family "

Yes, they're excellent at manipulating, torturing, killing people. They put all other supervillain teams in a corner of shame. :) As for Endbringers, I'm more and more convinced that they're either Scion's "family" or they're created by some truly mental Tinkers who want to see the world burn. I will not exclude Cauldron from this clusterfuck.
 
You don't even have Jack's power to manipulate the cutting edge of that knife, turning Mannequin in an interesting jigsaw.
Jack's power would completely ignore the nanothorns if he used it on that knife. Which is good, seeing as how it's currently in Mannequin's possession.

Wildbow agrees with you in thinking of Mannequin as different from Sphere. Hell, Alan changed so much that his power changed (from being focused on megaprojects to being focused on personal equipment).

Remember back when Taylor said that the problem with fighting the Simurgh was the aftermath? Sphere's fate was a major example of this.
 
Interlude 11e
Hello, people who love to play with dolls and "people" who are the dolls themselves. Today is the day when another innocent Interlude will be exposed to my horrifying review. Poor Interlude, so innocent and to be destroyed so soon :( 11.e | Worm Last time, we discovered one of the most hidden Colin alias Armsmaster's secrets: he loves to play with dolls. Sock of the socks, twist of the twists, instead of playing with toy cars and guns like almost any boy, he plays with Ken, pretending that Ken became a psycho because he lost his Barbie. Colin, stop, you're not a child anymore, you're working for Protectorate, you're a big hero, you stole the artificial heart of an artificial intelligence, it's really shameful to...do such thing. On the other side, we got to know the sad backstory of one S9 member, Mimi alias Burnscar, and the even sadder backstory of a random Tinker with such a generous and kind heart (who have NOTHING to do with S9), Alan alias Sphere, but who tragically died, unfortunately. Before I'll get to know who is the next recruit/nemesis (so far the only candidate is Rachel; Colin and Theo are nemesis to their respective visitors and Elle is just a former friend that Mimi wanted to see), I want to discuss a bit about the love story between Colin and Dragon. I'm going to call this WEIRD ASS ship Flesh and Wires and the only way I can imagine them being together if is Dragon will finish her robot/prosthetic so she can look remotely human. Then, if they want to have children, they can create an artificial uterus where they can grow their own baby. Nothing is impossible for the best artificial Tinker in the world and one of the best human Tinkers. :) I'm starting to warm up to this couple. :D Any romance is a good romance.

The high-pitched song of steel rang through the air as sword parried sword, struck shield and fell to the ground. Somewhat less sweet were the guttural grunts and muffled slaps of flesh being battered and struck. A boot in the stomach, an elbow or fist striking a face.
Hookwolf walked between the groups of his sparring recruits.
Oh, fuck, its Hookwolf and his army of Merry Nazis. Ok, I think this will be the first Interlude where I'm NOT going to care for anyone, candidate/future nemesis or S9 member. But maybe I'll care for the S9 member if he/she is like Burnscar- a psycho with morals and regrets, but who can't control themselves. But no way I'm going to care for Hookwolf, I hate him as a person (he's not only a violent nazi but he also uses poor dogs to fight to death), I hate his group, I hate their ideology, I won't give a flying fuck if they'll probably die. Well, I hate Merchants more but Fenrir's Chosen are not far away from those druggies rapists. So, Hookwolf is the next recruit. I was right about, out of everyone so far he IS Slaughterhouse 9 material. He have everything they can expect from him. He'd make a good recruit.

They were tired, pushing themselves through their exhaustion. All wanted to be here. The training was too punishing for anyone who didn't. With small exceptions for eating and sleeping, their days were filled with exercise, hand to hand sparring, gun training, and practice with melee weapons.
The main adversaries of the Chosen were mercenary soldiers, police and trained heroes. Why should the standards of his Chosen be any lower than theirs? No, if his group was to represent the true Aryan warrior, they had to have higher standards. They had to be the best.
It was that knowledge, that commitment that drove his trainees to give their all. Too many saw the Aryans as hatemongers, failed to see the greater picture, the hope for raising humanity to a higher level. He stopped at one end of the room to watch their progress, watch for the ones who had the killer instinct he needed. Stormtiger and Menja were at the other end of the room, looking for the same. Stormtiger had cast off his mask, and wore only face paint. He still walked a little stiffly from the gunshot wounds that he'd taken to his legs. Othala had attended to them over the past few weeks, would give him a half-hour to an hour of regenerating ability each night until he was better, but knees were slow to heal. Menja wore her armor, her expression stern as she watched the form and habits of the combatants. Cricket sat in one corner of the room, typing on a laptop without looking at the screen, taking notes on the trainees.
Hookwolf looked at Menja, and she raised one hand, two fingers extended. Signalling, she pointed to two of his thirty-four recruits. A bald man in peak physical condition and a twenty something girl with the ends of her hair in thin bleached blond braids. A little too much like cornrows for his liking. Maybe it was supposed to be ironic.
He liked her first pick, though. He'd noticed the bald man. He'd committed their names to memory on first meeting them, but he'd forgotten some. He knew the man was Bradley, the girl was Leah or Laura or something like that. His own pick was a lean scrapper in his early thirties, Ralph.
"Stop!" he ordered.

He's training HARD his Aryan parahuman and non-powered people in order to be strong enough to take over the world by eliminating all the blacks, latinos, arabs, jews, asians, meaning more than half of the world's population, and to create a global Lebensraum. Pretty high standards for you, guys, but I have to disappoint you. You'll never realize your crazy dreams. Never ever. First, because they're impossible, second because Jack is going to fuck the world FASTER than you. And he's going to fuck whites too along with everyone else. The resulted world will not be called Lebensraum but Wasteland. Fucking losers. Othala is confirmed to give people a certain power, she's giving Stormtiger regenerative power and she gave to that woman who fought Leviathan super-strength. I wonder if there are limits of how many powers she can give to people in the same time and if she can give powers to more persons simultaneous than just one.

As one, his recruits pulled away from their fights and sheathed their blunted swords. Not all of them were able to stand straight. More than a few had bloody noses or black eyes.
"You're three days into our week of training. If you're still here, you're doing us proud."
He could see a few of them stand a little taller at that. Hookwolf had been a fighter before he'd been a fighter with powers. He had spent a great deal of time around athletes, knew all too well that just a little recognition and a little motivation could make a world of difference.
"Some of you have earned special attention. You've fought harder, meaner orbetter than the others. Bradley, come here."
The bald man approached.
"Menja."
Menja stepped through the gathered recruits to stand beside Bradley.
"You two are going to fight. No weapons, no armor. Menja? You can use your powers, just a little."
Menja smiled, then she grew a foot and a half. Bradley stood at a height of just over six feet, but she still loomed head and shoulders above him. She unstrapped her armor and threw it aside.
Bradley looked at Hookwolf, a flicker of concern crossing his features.
"Part of the reason for this is that I want to see how you do against someone bigger than you," Hookwolf said.
"You're tired. You've been training and sparring all day, Menja hasn't. Tough. If you're going to represent the Chosen as one of our elite, you're going to be expected to go up against capes. Things will be just as one-sided or worse."

I have to admit -despite hating him- Hoolkwolf is a very good fighter, he's surprisingly smart and he's a pretty ok trainer. He RESPECTS his people, no matter if they have powers or not. Alright, he have his own good points, as few as they're. So, who's going to be the next S9 member? Crawler seems to be the most fitting to this situation. A monster looking psycho parahuman trying to recruit an extremist parahuman who can turn into a metal monster of hooks and blades. Seeing how Hookwolf respects his people and is such a proud guy in general, he's going to challenge Crawler (or any other S9 member who might appear) to a one against one fight, his people having to sit there and watch. I can see that. I just can see that happening.

Bradley looked to his left, sizing up Menja.
"Think you can fight her without embarrassing us? If you think you can do it, you might just have a place as one of our lieutenants or as a leader of one of our warbands."
"I'm no coward," Bradley replied. He turned to Menja and adopted a practiced fighting stance.
Hookwolf watched with approval as the two squared off. It was clear from the start that Bradley was thrown off guard by how strong Menja was, and doubly apparent that he wasn't used to fighting someone with better reach or more power behind their hits. But he was trained, and he was familiar in how to use his body, and he adapted quickly.
Bradley shifted to the defensive, and Menja struck with sharp kicks to his side and lunging steps forward to jab at his face. He timed a grab and quickly shifted to an arm lock, forcing Menja to bend over. For just a moment, it seemed like he had control of the situation, but Menja snapped back to her normal size, slipping her arm free, then struck at him, simultaneously growing. He was shoved to the ground.
"Enough," Hookwolf said.
It wouldn't do to let the man defeat Menja, and it was looking increasingly possible that he might. It would hurt her pride and weaken the position of his powered lieutenants in comparison to the unpowered ones.
"Good man," he said from behind his mask. He offered the man a hand, and Bradley took it. "Well done.
Welcome to the Chosen's elite."
Bradley nodded and stood at attention.
Hookwolf turned to the blond girl. "Leah, was it?"
She looked surprised to be picked, but she nodded.
"Menja likes you. I don't. You get one chance to prove me wrong. Menja? Who would you set her against?"
There weren't many options. Stormtiger couldn't walk, Menja wouldn't nominate herself, and it wouldn't just be a hassle to go get Rune, Othala or Victor, but each of the three were either too powerful in a brawl or effectively powerless. That left Hookwolf himself and-
"Cricket," Menja said. "Same reasoning. Leah's quick, Cricket's quicker."

He also keeps his promises made to his people, he's a fair man. He's also good with organizing his people and he doesn't want to hurt their pride, as it might happened to Menja, if the non-powered man would have managed to beat her up. "sighs" Hookwolf, if you wouldn't have been a goddamn horrible nazi, I might have liked you for your qualities, but you're something I personally hate, someone who would hate me for my ethno-religion, someone who kill innocent people only because their skin is not white enough or they have different religion or it happens to love persons of their own gender. You're a man with a lot of potential, but unfortunately a wasted potential. I'm kind of sorry for you because you choose the wrong way in your life :(. Funny how I want to like this character but I can't even accept him and his fucked up mentality to start with.

Cricket stood from her seat in the corner and limped forward. She'd refused the same help that Othala had granted Stormtiger, both for the injury to her leg and the damage she'd taken to her vocal chords when she'd had her throat slashed, in a time before he'd met her. It would have taken a few days at most to restore her to peak condition, but she valued her battle scars too highly.
"Up for this, Leah?" Hookwolf smiled. Cricket's injury to her leg slowed her down some, but the young woman was anything but a pushover.
Cricket reached to her side and picked up a small silver tube. She pressed it to the base of her throat, and her voice came out sounding distorted and digital, "Something's wrong."
Cricket prefers to sacrifice her voice instead of accepting Othala's healing granting power, only because she's too proud of her battle wounds...Wow, talking about fanatical people. :whistle: They seem to have troubles. What? Crawler is crawling on their battlefield? Time to see this bastard's powers in action?

"With the fight?" Hookwolf asked, raising one eyebrow.
Cricket opened her mouth and pressed the tube to her throat to reply, but didn't get a chance. The windows shattered with an explosive force, knocking the majority of the people in the room to the ground.
Oh...oh, its not Crawler, but the flying bitch who can shatter glass. Shatterbird. I was wrong for the 18959743 times about the new S9 member. My bad. At least I was pretty right about Hookwolf being another recruit :). Alright, its going to be a fight between Hookwolf and Shatterbird, right? Because no way Hookwolf is going to let his already injured and tired people to fight in his place. If there's something that he's really good at, is to fight even with his most powerful foes by himself. Time to see this bitch's powers in action.

Hookwolf was one of the few to remain standing, though he bent over as shards of glass tore through the layer of skin that covered his metal body.
He took a moment to compose himself in the wake of the blast. His ears rang, and he bled from a dozen cuts, but he was more or less fine. His people were not. They groaned and screamed in pain, accompanied by the sound of car alarms going off outside.
Two trainees and one of his graduated Chosen were dead. They'd been wearing glasses, and the glass had penetrated their eyes to tear into their brains. The others were all wounded to some degree or another. Some had been hit by the glass that flew from glasses others were wearing, others from the windows, and one or two others had patches of blood rapidly expanding around pockets where cell phones had been stowed.
Why couldn't they have put the cell phones away before they started sparring?
Leah lay dying, and Stormtiger had one hand pressed to his throat, blood billowing from a cut that may or may not have nicked an artery.
Hookwolf tapped into his core, the 'heart' from which his metal sprouted inside his body. He could feel it start to churn with activity, and the metal he already had encasing each of his muscles began to stir. Soon it was lancing in and out of his pores, criss-crossing, some blades or needlepoints sliding against others with the sounds of whetted knives. In a few seconds, he had covered his body, to protect himself from further attacks.
"Shatterbird!" he roared, once he knew he was secure. There was no reply. Of course. She was attacking from a safe position.
An attack from her meant an attack from the rest of the Slaughterhouse Nine. Daunting, but not impossible. He was virtually invincible in this form. That left few that could actively hurt him. Burnscar. The Siberian. Crawler.
There was Hatchet Face, the bogeyman of capes. With the exception of Hatchet Face, the group wouldn't be able to do much harm to him unless he was forced to stay still.
More troubling were the Nine he couldn't put down. The Siberian was untouchable, an immovable object, invincible in a way that even Alexandria wasn't. Even if he were capable of hurting Crawler, he wouldn't want to. Mannequin, he wasn't sure about. He knew the crazed tinker had encased himself in a nearly indestructible shell. As strong as Hookwolf was, he faced that distant possibility that any of these people could pin him down or set him up to be taken out by others.
Who else? He wracked his brain. Jack Slash was the brains and leader of the operation. Not a threat unto himself. Shatterbird couldn't harm him, he was almost certain.

Bonesaw. She was the wild card, the most unpredictable element in terms of what she could bring to the table. So often the case with tinkers.

Impressive. Hookwolf KNOWS A LOT about S9. So, Siberian, Burnscar, Crawler, Hatched Face (who's still around, even if he died, at least this is what Burnscar said; maybe Bonesaw revived him, turning him into one of her experiments) are the only ones who can defeat Hookwolf. Burnscar can burn him, which is logical, fire>metal, Siberian can fuck up everyone, even the Triumvirate, because she's the female human Scion of this story (with the exception that she can't fly but who knows what Wildbow might have in mind for her in order to make her even more ridiculous powered than she's already), Crawler possible can transfer his wounds to everyone who're trying to hurt him which will be completely fucked up and Hatched Face, I have no idea what he might do, all I know that he's strong enough to hurt Hookwolf. On the other side, Hookwolf can hurt Jack and Shatterbird, these two being the most vulnerable S9 members. And maybe even Bonesaw but she's a Tinker and Tinkers are unpredictable as hell (this is one of many reasons why they're my favorite classification :)). Ok then, Hookwolf, kick Shatterbird's ass. Btw, I really don't care about any of the dead people. A good murderous nazi is a dead nazi.

He strode across the room to the windows and gazed out at the city block surrounding the home base of the Chosen. Glass was still raining down from the sky, glimmering in the orange-purple light of the setting sun. Every window in view was broken, empty of glass. Car windshields, streetlights and signs had all been affected, and the surrounding surfaces of wood, metal and fiberglass all bore the scuffs and gouges of the fragile shrapnel.
Every piece of glass in the room suddenly stood on end, points facing upward. He gave it a moment of his attention, then turned to the world beyond the window, hoping for some glimpse of his adversaries, a clue about where they were.
"Cricket," he called out. "You alive?"
He heard a sound, movement, and turned. She was gingerly searching through the carpet of weaponized glass shards for her artificial larynx. She found it and pressed the cylinder to her throat. "Alive."
"You said something was wrong. What did you notice?"
"Sound. The glass was singing. Still is." She pointed at one wall. Hookwolf followed the line to a building across the street and a little ways to one side.
His ears were ringing, but he doubted that was it. It would be something subsonic that Cricket noticed with her power, then.
"You come with me, then. Menja, Stormtiger, I leave it to you to see to my Chosen. See if Othala is able to help."
"On it," Menja said. Thin trails of blood ran down from the points where glass splinters had pierced her skin, but the damage hadn't gone any further. She stooped down and picked up Stormtiger in her arms.
Orders given, Hookwolf drew the majority of his flesh into a condensed point in his 'core', felt himself come alive as more metal spilled forth. Only his eyes remained where they were, set in recessed sockets, behind a screen of shifting blades. He was half-blind until the movement of the blades hit a rhythm, moving fast enough that they zipped over the surface of his eye at speeds faster than an eyeblink.
He let himself fall from the third floor window and hit the ground in a state that was more liquid than solid. Blades, spears, hooks and other twisted metal shapes all pooled on the pavement, absorbing the impact.
He pulled himself together, in his favored quadruped form. Looking up to the window, he created a tall spear from between his 'shoulders'. Cricket leaped out and caught the pole, slid down until she could hop off and land beside him, skidding on the glass covered surface. She looked annoyed as she looked down at her shoes, raising one foot off the ground to investigate the underside. Glass had embedded in the soles.
He would have told her to ignore it, but he couldn't speak. For that matter, neither could she.
Cricket pointed, and he led the way with her following directly behind him. As he walked, he wasn't moving his limbs quite so much as it might appear at first glance. Instead, he extended one growth of metal as he retracted another, only generating the illusion. A hundred new parts growing each second to suggest shifting musculature, a cohesive form, when he was anything but. Only the core skeleton, the shafts of metal that formed the limbs from the shoulders or hips to his knees, actually moved without retracting or extending.
Glass rose from the ground to fit together into a window that floated in the air and he smashed through it with one of his forelimbs. Another barrier appeared, thicker, and he smashed that as well. The glass began to form into dozens, even hundreds of barriers. He quickly found one strike wasn't enough to clear the way.

Shatterbird is not only capable of shattering glass, but she can also bend it at her will. She's pretty powerful but I can't see her having a chance against Hookwolf, who's now changed in a hybrid of a human-wolf covered with every metal weapons someone can think of. Shatterbird GlassBender vs Aryan Hookwolf -Round One- FIGHT (the only fight where I don't care who'll win and who'll lose. For me, both combatants are the same evil, only in various flavors).

Through the mess of dozens of dirty and wet panes of glass, he saw her. Shatterbird. A sand nigger, going by memory and the color of her exposed skin. The upper half of her head was covered in a helmet of colored glass, and her body was covered with a flowing garment made of tiny glass shards, like scales.
He rose onto two feet, standing straight, and reconfigured his arms. With spears as big around as telephone poles, he punched through thirty or forty panes of glass all at once, then did the same with his opposite hand. It was slow progress, as the glass constantly reformed and pieced itself back together a few feet ahead of him, but he was closing in.
She abruptly dropped the barriers and changed tactics. The majority of the glass in the area formed into one shape, a cone of solid glass, pointing towards the center of the purple-red sky, two and a half stories tall.
Raising one hand, she shot it straight up into the sky above, until it was just a speck.
Hookwolf lunged for her, only to find that the residual glass that remained on the ground was denying him traction. His metal claws failed to find grip, failed to crack the glass, even with the heavy impacts and his impressive weight. Closing the distance proved slower than he'd hoped.
The massive spike of glass plummeted from the sky. He knew it was coming, had kept an eye out for it, and timed a leap to coincide with its descent.
No use. It veered unerringly for him, speared into him with enough force that it nearly sheared him in half. Cricket uttered a strangled scream as she got hit by the fallout of glass shards and scraps of metal.
"Stand," Shatterbird said. Her voice held traces of a British accent, and her body language and the crisp enunciation made her sound imperious, upper class. "I know you survived."
Hookwolf struggled to pull himself together. He used hooks to pull the metal back towards his core, where it could be reabsorbed, recycled. It didn't take much of his reserve of internal energy to create and move the metal, but it took some, and he'd rather not run out.
It was a risk, he knew, but he needed a few moments to pull himself together and rebuild his body. He let his head and upper chest emerge from the core, taking form in the hollow metal 'head' of his canid form.
"What do you people want?" he asked.
"Person. Singular. I am the only member of my group here," Shatterbird informed him.
"Arrogant."
"You can be arrogant when you're strong enough. You should know, Hookwolf."
"You here to make trouble?"
She shook her head, her helmet sparkling in the light cast by the setting sun. "I'm the Nine's primary recruiter. I have an eye for people who can thrive among us, and I have brought more than five individuals on board. I thought long and hard before settling on you. I am not about to let you turn me down."

Well, Shatterbird, you stupid arrogant pompous bitch, you'll not have any CHANCE with Hookwolf because of some really obvious reason, but you're too idiot to see them. First, you're a person of middle eastern descent (sand nigger is a slang for arabs) , and he's a white supremacist. He'll never accept to work with someone he HATES. Second reason, he's VERY LOYAL to his people and his ideology (as fucked up as it is) and he'll never betray them/his principles for a bunch of murderers without principles or any ideology. Because "Let's destroy the world" is clearly NOT an ideology. Seriously, I don't see Hookwolf EVER becoming a S9 member until they're so interested in him that they'll find a way to control him. But they don't have a Master, as far as I know, so...there's no chance for them to control him. :)

So that was why she hadn't hit the entire city with the blast, shattering the glass and maiming or killing hundreds. She hadn't wanted to kill any prospective members, wanted to reserve her power for when it would be most dramatic.
"I'm fine where I am."
"This isn't a request."
"Is that so? You going to make me?" He was nearly restored. He could fight now if he needed to.
"Yes. I know who you are, Hookwolf. I spent some time researching your history."
"Not that interesting."
"I beg to differ. You ally with the Aryan groups. Run one, but your motivations seem to be different. I have guesses as to why, but I'd rather you tell me."
"Tell you? Why should I? I think we're done here."
Shatterbird raised one hand, then frowned, her lips pursing together. "Hm."
Cricket climbed to her feet. She was bleeding badly where she had exposed skin, and chunks of glass were partially buried in her arms and legs. There was the quiet rasp of her laughter.
"Pride goeth before the fall," Hookwolf said, striding towards his enemy. "Seems as though Cricket can use her
subsonics to cancel you out."
"Seems so," Shatterbird answered, rapidly backing up to maintain some distance from Hookwolf.
"And here I was thinking you'd won the lottery with powers. Incredible range, fine control, devastating force, versatility… and all it takes is the right noise and it all falls apart?"

"Guess the men who bought my power should ask for a refund."

Shatterbird is arrogant as hell (I really, really dislike arrogant people, ok?), she's prideful and she blindly believes that she can successfully recruit Hookwolf, despite all odds. Her personality+ the way she's talking is pretty boring "yawns". Her powers are very cool to watch, but she's...."yawn". She's not half as interesting and unpredictable as Jack, she's not a tragic person like Burnscar, she's not an ridiculous OP animal as Siberian is and she can't make me hate/fear her as much as I hate/fear Mannequin (actually, to be honest till the end, nobody makes me hate/fear them as much as Mannequin is doing without even saying a single word :lol). Shatterbird is just....plain in every way, this is the right word. So, some men "bought" her powers, supposedly from Cauldron. Or rather...they stole the vials. Because I highly doubt that someone would waste so much money to buy power to make another person powerful and not make themselves powerful. If you have money, you're going to make yourself powerful not another person. There'd be no point. But even if they stole the powers, why they used them on Shatterbird and not on themselves? UNLESS....unless they already have powers. I think Jack and another man stole the vials and gave Shatterbird her power, recruiting her in their S9. Shatterbird must be one of the first members, since she said that she personally recruited other 5 members. I think Jack and Mannequin are the ones who founded S9. Then they recruited Shatterbird and the other members came right after.
Back at school, one of my nicknames was Miss Holmes (for real) because I always liked mysteries, puzzles, books with Sherlock Holmes and procedural forensics TV series. ;)

"No. Not interested in being conned into a game of twenty questions to figure out what you're talking about. Not giving you a chance to figure a way out." He punched one of his massive spears at her, and she threw herself to the ground, rolling beneath the impaling weapon. As she stood, she drew a gun from the folds of her glittering dress. She fired between Hookwolf's legs at Cricket, the noise of the shots ringing through the air.
Hookwolf didn't even need to look. He laughed, "No. Afraid my lieutenant is a little too fast for you."
"Look out," Cricket's said from behind him, the artificial sound of her voice detracting from the inflection and urgency.
A tide of glass slammed into him. Standing on only two limbs, his balance suffered, and he wasn't able to keep from being pushed onto his side.
"Wasn't aiming at her," Shatterbird said. She fired several more shots, simultaneously releasing a shard of glass from her free hand. Hookwolf turned, saw Cricket clutching her throat. She'd dodged the bullets, but Shatterbird had controlled the flight of the glass shard she shot at Cricket much in the same way she'd controlled the descent of the massive spike of glass. It had struck its target. "Just needed to break her concentration."
Cricket collapsed, large quantities of blood spilling through her fingers and around her hands, where they clutched her throat.
"Now it's just you and me," Shatterbird said. She dusted herself off, not giving any concern to the sharp edges of the glass shards that made up her garment. "We talk."
"I think I'll kill you instead," Hookwolf growled.
"What's the rush? In fact, any moment we delay, you have a chance of reinforcements arriving. Your Stormtiger, your Othala, your Menja, they could all do a little something to assist you. It's in your advantage for us to delay the fight."
"Except I'm more than capable of putting you down myself."
"Perhaps."
He adjusted his form, dropping to four legs once more. The aesthetic suffered, but he created two needle-tipped limbs at his shoulders, poised like scorpion's tails.
"Ah, that's much better," she said, "But you're still too attached to conventional forms. Why have legs at all?"
"They're enough." He pounced. She leaped to one side, and almost glided to a position across the street. She was using the glass of her costume to levitate herself.
From her new vantage point she told him, "I did say I had my suspicions about your motivations. I think I've come to understand you. Jack encourages this, you know. Understanding our targets, be they recruits or victims. You learn a lot being with him. I believe you, Hookwolf, are a born warrior."
He pounced once more, driving both foreclaws at her and following up with two quick jabs with his needle-tipped limbs. She dodged all three hits, then swept a carpet of glass beneath him as he pounced quickly after her. He landed and skidded on the surface like one might with a carpet of marbles, falling onto one side, and she threw a tidal wave of glass shards at him, driving him across the street to distance him once more.

He stopped to draw his head and upper body back into the core. The wave of glass had come too close to penetrating the head of his form and cutting his flesh. It was dangerously vulnerable.
A warrior at heart, she'd said. He'd thought, sometimes, that he was born at the wrong time. Had he been born in Rome's heyday, the Crusades or any of the great wars, in eras where martial pride and strength were valued, he thought he might have been a great person, a soldier feared on the battlefield. He would have relished that life. Here, now? Even with powers, he wasn't so notable. People with a tendency for violence and a thirst for blood just didn't thrive.

Give this flying annoyingly bitch no chance to talk, Hookwolf, cause I feel like I'm going to fall asleep everytime when she opens her mouth to say something. I prefer to see her fighting- she's a good fighter with her powers+ she have a gun and she's skilled with it, than to hear her talking. Seriously, Shatterbird bores me half to death, her backstory might be interesting (to see if Jack/Mannequin or someone else gave her powers) but the way she's talking makes me feel tired like I was carrying bags full with stones with my back all day long. Hookwolf, you're an excellent warrior, even if you're also a piece a shit, so please, make this bitch shallow metal until she'll be unable to make a sound.

"What I can't figure out-" she paused to throw herself up to the top of a four-story building, then raised her voice to be heard on the ground, "Is what you're doing with these 'Chosen' of yours."
He couldn't speak to answer her, and only climbed the building's face. He was three-quarters of the way up when she leaped down, soaring toward the sidewalk on the opposite side of the street. Always keeping her distance.
A gale caught her, and her lateral movement stopped. As wind twisted around her, she was driven down into the street, hard.
Hookwolf would have laughed if he could. He looked at his headquarters and saw Stormtiger crouching by the front door, clutching a blood-soaked rag to his throat. Stormtiger wouldn't interfere where it counted, but he would give Hookwolf the opportunity to confront his opponent. He adjusted his position and fell to the street next to Shatterbird. She held one leg while laying on her back. She'd fallen badly.
Stalking towards her, he heard she was still talking, "You call them Fenrir's Chosen. I'm a scholar, believe it or not. I know Fenrir was one of the beasts that brings about Ragnarök, the death of the gods. Fenrir was the beast who slew Odin, Allfather, king of the gods. Fenrir was a wolf. Too coincidental for that to be an accident on your part."
He stirred the blades that made up his form, pushing himself to be bigger, more dangerous as he closed the distance.
"A sword age, an axe age. A wind age, a wolf age. A world where none have mercy. I can believe this is your goal, your ultimate objective. Do you crave to reduce this city to darkness, blood and ash, so that only the strong will survive? Do you tell your followers that it is only the pure will rise to the top in the new world order?"
He set one clawed foot down on her. He could feel some blades on the underside of his foot bite into her flesh.
She didn't fight him or resist.
"Join us," she said, her voice strained.
He formed a head and mouth. His voice echoed from within his metal skull, "You describe me as a warrior, why would I join petty killers?"
She shifted her position, huffing out sentences between gasps of pain. "Only a matter of scale. Need more like you in our number. Frontline combatants. Capable of carving murder through the ranks of the innocent.
Through our enemies. We could be great warriors."
"Not interested."
"We could create your Ragnarök more than any number of Chosen."
"They are my people. I won't turn my back on them."

Stormtiger, you're a BEAST, despite being injured, you used your wind powers to make this bitch fall at Hookwolf's feet. Just like that. So, she's very vulnerable at powerful wind and subsonics meaning that her defenses are not the greatest ones in her team. That's good to know. Shatterbird, stop talking, you'll never convince Hookwolf to accept your recruiting offer. You FAILED this time. He doesn't want to destroy the world, he only wants to make it a paradise for strong white people. If the world will be destroyed then how the strong white people will rule it? Sorry, but you have completely different objectives. His only answer to your request will be always NEIN :).

"Then kill me." A thin smile crossed her face, though her expression was drawn with pain. When she spoke, it was in more short sentences. "But know that your dream is over. Unless you come with us. Once nominated you'll be tested. By others, whether willing or not. I have left notes. Urging them to kill your soldiers. To raze any place you might call home. To bestow fates worse than death."
He raised his claw from her. She was bleeding from wounds in her stomach and pelvis.
He'd had a hard enough time killing this one. If the other seven arrived? No, he wouldn't be able to stop them alone, and his lieutenants were not strong enough to hold them off.
"And you won't rescind these orders and requests?"
"I will. If you join. You give me your word, I leave. You will be tested. Your people left alone. When the test is done you're… either dead or one of us."
"What is it you want?"
"Make history. Names in books. Taught to schoolchildren for years. Centuries. Our goals…" she winced, pressed one hand to her stomach, "Coincide."
He pondered for a few moments. Could they escape? No, you didn't escape the Nine. He'd already considered fighting, but that option was out.
There was a possibility he could lay a trap for them. Or buy time for his people to escape.
"Fine."
Another thin smile crossed her face. She used her power to raise herself to a standing position, her toes only barely touching the ground. "So loyal."
"But I won't forget what you've already done. If you survive, I will wait for the right time and place, and I will kill you. One day."
"Already thinking like… one of us. Rest assured. I will survive."
Glass drifted towards her to fill the injuries, cracking in the right spots so each fragment fit the wounds perfectly. The smallest particles of glass, a fine cloud of dust, flowed forth to fill the gaps.
Then she rose into the sky. Hookwolf signaled for Stormtiger to hold his fire.
He wasn't going to accept this. They'd insulted him, hurt his people. They wanted to subvert his mission and
twist it to their own ends? No.
His face twisted into a scowl as he looked over the glass-strewn street, and at Cricket's prone form. He'd told
Shatterbird he'd kill her sometime in the future, had hopefully led her to expect something further down the line.
No, he would go through the motions of their 'test', even join them for the short-term. But he'd kill them sooner
than later. Before they left the city.
He looked at his people, saw Othala hurrying over to Cricket's side to grant the young woman regenerating abilities. Rune was hurt, the right side of her face torn up, healed only enough to close the cuts and stop the worst of the bleeding. Probably Othala. Everyone else was injured to some degree, many gravely.
He'd need help from elsewhere.

Ok, on short:
-Shatterbird is the most BORING S9 member+ she's pretty naive if she'll ever believe Hookwolf's promise (she seems polite enough and THINKS that she's smart but she's not :D)
-Hookwolf is a smart motherfucker, thinking at going undercover in S9 (and I'm pretty sure he'll be successful in finding their weaknesses and killing at least two. Unless they have a Master capable to read minds and control them. I'm thinking at Hacket Face. If Hatchet Face is a mind controlling Master, Hookwolf's undercover will fail, and he might be even forced to kill all his people- as punishment, the only family he have and cares for. I'm kind of afraid if this scenario will happen, not because I give a flying fuck about Hookwolf or his nazi buddies, but because S9 will get a super-strong member).
-Hookwolf will do anything to protect his "family", even going undercover inside a group of people he despises.
-I admire Hookwolf's plan and his fiercely loyalty, but I DESPISE him and his damned ideology.
-This one was my least favorite Interlude (basically the most boring S9 member and NOT A SINGLE CHARACTER to even remotely care for)

PS: I know that some people might find Shatterbird the most interesting S9 member, might like her or might feel pity for her (probably because of her sad backstory, whatever it is) but please, respect my opinion, don't start saying: wow, this girl is stupid, she doesn't understand Shatterbird or NO, Shatterbird have a really sad past and you should feel sorry for. I'm going to tell you about her past....blah, blah...spoiler...spoiler....blah; Please, let me have my own opinion about this character -with time I might change my opinions once I'll get to know her better; or maybe not. Thank you, you're the best, love you :) "hugs" Btw, all S9 members so far, starting with my favorite one and ending with my least favorite: Burnscar, Jack, Siberian, Shatterbird, Mannequin.

Good night and sleep well, people who like to play with dolls and "people" who are the dolls themselves. Don't let Shatterbird giving you monologues that will make you want to kill yourselves out of boredom.
 
Jack's power would completely ignore the nanothorns if he used it on that knife. Which is good, seeing as how it's currently in Mannequin's possession.

Wildbow agrees with you in thinking of Mannequin as different from Sphere. Hell, Alan changed so much that his power changed (from being focused on megaprojects to being focused on personal equipment).

Remember back when Taylor said that the problem with fighting the Simurgh was the aftermath? Sphere's fate was a major example of this.

Simurgh is a destructive monster who uses Butterfly Effect methods. Jack is a destructive "human" who uses Butterfly Effect methods.....I GET IT!!! Jack is Simurgh's bastard son :lol:lol

Wildbow agrees with me....what? How do you know? Does Wildbow reads my stupid reviews or he said what I said during one of his WoG comments? :D
 
This particular interlude was also not a favorite of mine, for the same/similar reasons. I really didn't like any of the characaters, or have a ton of interest in them. They are very well written, but just didn't hook me (pun!). That said, in my opinion It's perfectly okay to have a part that isn't as loved to compare back on, and this back story was needed, so all good!
 
so far the only candidate is Rachel; Colin and Theo are nemesis to their respective visitors and Elle is just a former friend that Mimi wanted to see
Colin was legitimately nominated. Jack nominated Oni Lee, but he failed the pre-test.

Because I highly doubt that someone would waste so much money to buy power to make another person powerful and not make themselves powerful. If you have money, you're going to make yourself powerful not another person. There'd be no point.
Gallant's family bought a vial for their son, and the guy who bought the five vials the Merchants stole planned to give them all to his kids and their friends without taking one himself.

But even if they stole the powers, why they used them on Shatterbird and not on themselves?
Wildbow released an interlude later in Worm that provided some information about Shatterbird's backstory. The interlude was taken down due to the present-day sections not making sense, but the Shatterbird backstory is still canon. You want to hear it now or wait until we reach the point where the interlude was released?

Wildbow agrees with me....what? How do you know? Does Wildbow reads my stupid reviews or he said what I said during one of his WoG comments?
Like the time you thought Sophia's trigger was from rape, someone else had the same thought as you and asked Wildbow about it.
 
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