Keffier (Ontological Mystery/Action Adventure)

[Sablonus]

Godfucking--Leave your post for a day or so and suddenly it vanishes. Christ.. Post probably won't be up until tomorrow.

How many paragraphs should an opening post be? The original was mostly just Duine self reflecting with some interspersed Buidsear back and forth mental dialogue for comedic effect, before busting free from the cell and high tailing it away.

It's been two weeks since the IC, one since my last post--A double, still? Woops ;-;

 

[TurtleDucks]

I feel ya man, it sucks getting a draft munched.

This might not help terribly as advice, but I don't think you need to agonize over how long you should make your first post. Just write what comes naturally to you until you think your character is in a satisfying spot.