Quick update on what's going on.
Still waiting on the beta, but he has assured me that Ch. 3 is coming along nicely. As for the revisions to Ch. 1 and Ch. 2, I'll do them after I get Ch. 4 up since I'll have ample material and feedback at that point I can start making story wide changes.
As for why I haven't been replying to this thread, it is because so much of the plot has been discussed over in the index thread even before I wrote the initial draft of the first chapter. The only way I can keep any suspense for those in the know in it is to stay quiet on matters so they don't know which ideas I am actually implementing.
I will discuss them later once I've revealed them, but not before, and not even over the PM (except for my beta of course). Apologies to those who wish me to join in on the speculation of these matters to confirm/deny the various theories, but the author is going to stay silent for now.
In the meantime, have a little something. Not sure if it should be used for this fic, but I thought it was interesting enough that you all might enjoy it all the same.
-=-
Calm.
Darkness.
Peace.
Those were the things that she knew.
Those where the things that she was.
Adrift, formless, in an ocean of nothingness, there was no sense of time, direction or place.
She was satisfied with that.
She had fought well.
She had served well.
She had died well.
The time for conflict and hardship was over.
Peace was her reward.
So she allowed herself to drift and allowed herself to sleep, as all did after a lifetime of battle.
Peace.
So she allowed herself her eternal rest, and would have kept that way had a sound, a steady rhythmic beating of drums, not reached her. Though she had no ears, she could hear it all the same… a beat seemed to shake the foundations of her very being.
At first she was confused.
She was at peace. She had done her duty, earned her rest, and had passed on knowing worthy successors had taken up her task. Tranquillity was her reward. This was where she was meant to be, for there was no more need for her… or so she thought.
The rhythm continued, calling out to her, imploring her to answer.
With each beat, she slowly regained herself, shaking off the stupor she had been in as her consciousness regained clarity. As she did, she realized what those drums had meant.
Beat to quarters.
It was a call to arms that she never forgot.
The people she had sworn an oath of eternal loyalty to were calling her back to the world of the living to do battle once more.
For what reason they had chosen her, she did not know.
Against what enemy, she could not even guess.
However, the drums continued to beat, its supernatural rhythm calling out to the core of her soul, reminding her of who she was and everything she stood for.
Duty.
Honor.
Courage.
Beat to quarters.
She was faced with a choice.
She had done her time, spent her entire life in their service. She was under no obligation to go back and respond to the call of the drums. In this realm of calm, peace and darkness was her due for a life well lived. Going back, crossing the boundary of life and death, would be above and beyond anything that was expected of her.
In this land of darkness and peace, no one else could blame her, could judge her, if she didn't respond.
However, that did not matter.
Duty.
Honor.
Courage.
Those were the values that made the core of her being.
Others may have chosen to turn down this call, but not her. The core values that made her would not be denied. The slightest chance that she would make a difference was one that she would never turn down.
Her nation called, and she answered.
Beat to quarters.
Prepare for battle.
Rising from the darkness back towards the light above, she felt a change overcome her being.
She had been formless, but as she rose felt her body gain form. Arms, legs, clothes, hair, rigging… no longer was she a mass of steel, but a young human girl wearing her weapons as her 'rigging' on her back. Though it was drastically different from her previous form, somehow she knew it would serve her purposes in the world above.
She had been senseless, but soon gained senses. Sight, sound, touch… she perceived the world differently in her new form. Her senses were muted, and she realized she was underwater… rising from the ocean depths back towards the world above while carried by the unseen force. The surface of the sea beckoned, the light of the sun just beyond the ocean waves.
However even while underwater, she could hear the drums, guiding her to where she needed to go.
The last change though, was one of her mind.
She could feel the memories of her existence from before were stripped from her mind. Those in the world of the living could never possess such knowledge of what lay beyond, and so the world stripped her of it as she rose to the surface.
However, the world was not cruel. It would not take from her without giving something in exchange.
She felt knowledge flood into her mind. The knowledge of how to use her new form, including the familiarity of human things like language, culture and emotions, were instilled into her. With this knowledge she was now well prepared for the world above, and for the battles to come.
Although she would not know what had been taken from her, had those memories remained she would agree it was been a worthwhile trade. She was ready.
Beat to quarters.
There was a battle to be fought.
She broke the surface of the ocean, finding herself in an unfamiliar world.
She was in a harbor of some sort, but not one she could recognize. Giant buildings that seemed to reach into the sky were everywhere, and ships in shapes, garish colors and designs she had never seen before were all over the damn place.
But it was the flags of her home nation, whether it was hung from the many flag poles, draped from the side of buildings or trailing behind that stupidly fast aeroplane that was flying in circles in the air, which alerted her where she was.
"Well, I'm near home… I think."
She could still hear the drums, drawing her towards them. With no better ideas, she decided to sail towards them… passing this enormous white structure that resembled sea shells as she did so. I
"Whoa, a'int this thing a beaut?" She marveled, "Which wanker built this thing?"
The call was coming from a pier right next to that building, where an entire military band continued to beat out the familiar tune.
Sailing towards it, she saw the band wasn't alone. Hundreds, if not thousands, of people where there with the band. They were waiting on stands, across the pier, even on nearby docked boats, all waving little flags about as they listened to the drums beat out the tune.
Some sort of audience perhaps?
Then one of them saw her.
"THERE SHE IS!" Came the exuberant cry, as she was singled out.
Suddenly the crowd was roaring with approval and excitement, jubilantly exulting in her arrival. People were hugging each other, tears in their eyes as emotions ran high.
At the front, sitting on chairs facing the bay, were old, old men in pristine uniforms. While those younger than them cheered and celebrated, these men watched her with quiet dignity and respect. As one, they rose from their seats and saluted her.
Thank you for coming.
For some reason, she couldn't help but shed a tear as they did so.
And through all this, the band continued to play, unperturbed by the noise that threatened to blot them out. It didn't for she could still hear the call.
So she did.
She neared the pier, eventually getting close enough she could disembark onto one of the side pontoon… helped up onto the platform by a well-built man in his forties in full dress uniform.
Although she never met him before, she instinctively knew who he was.
"G'day to you, Admiral," She said with a smile. "Crikey, quite the ripper party you set up for me, eh?"
"Quite. Thank you for coming."
He returned the smile.
"Welcome home… Sydney."
And the drums continued to beat, even as the celebrations began.
-=-
This one if for all you Australians out there. I hope did this tribute to the HMAS
Sydney justice.
Happy ANZAC day everyone.