Kamen Rider Worlds

[Pathetic King]

[X]Say nothing
[X] Use your newly-discovered super speed to run elsewhere before undoing your transformation.
-[X] An abandoned alley​

 

[Tam Lin]

Is anyone actually still interested in this?

I'm feeling a bit discouraged by the lack of votes.

 

[The Zog]

Is anyone actually still interested in this?

I'm feeling a bit discouraged by the lack of votes.

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I know how you feel. Few people care about my Kamen rider fanfic, Kamen Rider Chaser Saga: Blood Hunt on SB, fewer here, and all but one on Fanfiction. Net because it's not a cheap power fantasy. So anyone who wants to check out a crossover that actually has a canon rider as the protagonist check out Blood Hunt on my sig and maybe leave a review on Fanfiction. Net.

But enough shameless advertising. As a fellow writer I'm going to have to say that I find the quest rather...vapid. A bare minimum is used to show anything, no character is allowed to marinate and set themselves in and establish themselves, the birs motifs are just weird with no thematic resonance to be enticing, the fight scenes are too short to create tension, and the main character has no sensible motive or characterization to be invested in his success.