I Am Not A Child's Plaything (MGLN SI)

[Zweibach]

With all these different pronunciations I can't help but think "Reykjavik Heart, onegai!"

 

[Kiyo]

With all these different pronunciations I can't help but think "Reykjavik Heart, onegai!"

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*blinks*

I've heard that before...

*Googles*

Ah, Reykjavík, Iceland's capital.

 

[Mizu]

Who's "we"? Is this a quest? (I've done the same thing, tbh)

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I have the habit of referring to myself like I'm the MC, hence the we. It also works for forum stories, as us audience are following along with the MC as they explore/have adventures.

 

[Czlyydwr Llrngwl]

Without trying to spoil the details, are you planning to have a lot of story before meeting Yuuno and Nanoha? It might actually be interesting to do the Young Indiana Jones thing for a while with a Scrya archeological team before jumping into the canon events.

 

[jamerz07]

Can't wait to see the next chapter

 

[Jensaarai]

hey, hope springs eternal

side-note; don't even remember what this story was, so might be time for a re-read

 

[Czlyydwr Llrngwl]

Can't wait to see the next chapter

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I wouldn't mind seeing more for sure, but check the previous post date again -- you're a decade off, my man. Necroposting isn't against the rules here on SV, but it's still something to be aware of.

As for the name of Nanoha's ID, I've always preferred Razing Heart, as in the hottest part of a fire. "I can be shot! Full power, absolute destruction!"