Heimurn Chronicles (No, SV, you're a young valkyrie in the middle of a bizarre and dangerous journey)

Who is the bae? (Yes, we know that it's Lucy, but still - who's your favorite character)


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The dungeon crawl's choices & outcome analysis
So, I've promised you to make a lil' analysis of the dungeon crawl, and am I here to deliver. But before you go back to the general forum index, don't fret: it won't be as big as chapters analysis. So, *sips some fresh tea* 'ere we go.

Apricote bloom procession

The very beginning. It surprised me how you decided to leave Ren behind. Like, I understand that you might've wanted for Lucy to finally step out from his caring and protective shadow, but still, leaving the most experienced party member to laze around? Wow. Guess you weren't all that intimidated by the potential risks.

Intro to black archeology

You've made a pretty good first investigation decision. Pretty rational allocation of talents and hence members divisioning. Shame that RNGods decided to screw over the other party. At least Lucy and the girls got some extra loot and hints. Having Lucy's luck trigger wasn't something special, but ho boy I didn't Imagine it triggering three times in a single raid. She's pretty much our darling of fortune, eh?

The silver lining

Again, pretty reasonable talents and party members allocation. Amalia nearly got hurt, if not for Seph, and you've effectively blocked one of the four entrances to the dungeon under the collapsed floor. It was arguably the best entry point that offered the best distance/passability/security balance. Lia got you a very powerful tool tho, to which I'll return later.

Connecting dots and evaluating risks

You've nearly uncovered one of the principles by which some items react to voidling shells. Speaking of, the "base chassis" of the demon's shell was the sacrificed youngest daughter of the original family. She was killed by that very knife before her memory traces got corrupted and then inhabited by a feral imp. By inhabiting her favorite doll as a conduit, it also inherited her bane - the ceremonial knife with which she was killed. But you decided not to focus on the fetish following the principle "better safe than sorry". But even then, the sacrificial dagger was a lesser missed opportunity compared to...

Dark corners of the earth

compared to not investigating the shoreline and discovering the grotto entrance. it was the second-best entry point that would've allowed to let Inga join you too. It was the closest entrance to the target, but you would've found yourself entangled into the fight with a whole bunch of lurks nearly immediately. It would've been an endurance fight where you would've had to focus not as much on killing hostiles faster than they kill you but on securing the party. Honestly, the well was just the "last resort" entrance, and thank god(s) you decided to take Amalia with you; without her, you would not even get the chain to descend down it.

Flashpoint
The surge
Blood, dirt, and curses
Bellicosity, depths, and viscera

And there comes the fight-y part. You've lucked out a great deal in the first three engagements and made some rational if risky decisions. A balance of risks and rewards one would say. Although, should Seph fail with that lockpick, I'm not sure everyone would've come out of it - most likely not Elgar. The alternative plan might've worked too - you've got the miniboss pretty low on it's shell's integrity. Should've you broken it, the demonic chunk of meat would've cracked in two autonomous parts, less dangerous and more fragile, but hindering the party facing the rising tide of lurks with debuffs. Another alternative was to camp in the collapsed corridor - a viable if slow opportunity, but here you decided to take extra risks, and it paid off. The three successful onslaught phases resulted in the initiative takeover via exploitation of momentum, pressing lurks into the full defense. And there, you well-timely decided to nab and gtfo. Also, I must admit that you handled the weapons/resources distribution pretty well, and made good use of the advantages offered. Nifty management thinking. Overall, you handled the raid pretty well, albeit not without missing some of the opportunities and complicating things with your own decisions at some points. Overall, I'd rate the dungeon crawl as B or even B+.

The ascent

And here comes the part when you, by leaving Ren at home and surviving the raid with pretty good results, made Lucy prove herself in her own eyes. This is why there was a choice for one of four pretty powerful perks, which reflected your handling of the raid. Here are the bonuses of the perks that you did not choose:
- Acknowledgment of resourcefulness and Ren's pride for you: +1 to charisma, +3 to willpower, 10% chance to double the skill yields from targeted training or in-field practice, +1 to all attribute and skill rolls while Ulren is in the party and with affinity level over 70.
- Introduction to leadership: +1 to charisma, +1 to intelligence, unlocking of the new influencing actions such as rallying and usage of authority, the opening of the possibility to issue recommendations/commands for other party members in fighting or other intense situations (aka limited tactical control), and the prospect to discover the hidden strengths of other characters. This talent, just like the one you picked, is scalable and could've been upgraded.
- Luck. Plain and simple: +3 to Luck range while +1 to Misfortune range, bringing Lucy's fortune ranges to 34-40 for luck and 1-3 for misfortune. She might've become an absurdly fortunate person this way.


But in any case, that's all regarding Lucy's very first (mostly) independent adventure as a de-facto group leader. As for other news, I'm preparing a little, hopefully sweet surprise for you. That's all I'll disclose for now.

Currently, I'm drafting the next update. Slice of life - likes aren't that easy to write, but I hope to deploy the new one this weekend. And so, while you wait, I have another thing for you: the next PoV side story vote! Given the narrative situation and the latest rolls, here's what I offer:

Next side story:
[] Moby-Dick: rip and tear edition (Ulren)
[] Down with homesickness (Rosaline)
[] I don't feel so well (Karl)
[] Another character (Offer in whose shoes you'd like to walk for a bit. Can be vetoed)
-[] Specify which one (required)
--[] Specify the situation in the recent story (optional. Anything after the arrival to Tevon-Talab)

This side story will be written AFTER the next update, mind you, so you have plenty of time to make your pick.
With this, I think I'm out of news and announcements for now, so have some media chunk.

 
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A mini spinoff story!
What the threademark says: the second story in this very same universe and at approximately the same point in time.
The purpose of it is for me to recall how to write smaller (under 4k words, at least) updates, to familiarize people with the worldbuilding from a new angle, and to experiment with the whole "chronicling" mechanic.

And don't worry: it is a side project to which I'll be returning when the main story (this thread) is in its voting phases or I'm otherwise unable to drop an update just yet. Also, it would most likely be completed before Lucicfina's journey reaches the fifth chapter. In fact, while the voting goes there, I'm drafting the next update here already.

Here's the link:

forums.sufficientvelocity.com

The dive through ashes and shadows (Fantasy black archeologist's miniquest) Original - Mature - Fantasy

By fate or choice, you are now in the vast plains, also known as Blugd-Tur. Vicious, verdant, and mysterious, these lands are famous for their dangerous fauna, half as dangerous flora, rustic traditions of the hardy locals, and a whole plethora of unexplainable phenomena. And if that wasn't...
 
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Attribute rolls ovehaul, next in the pipleine, and some trivia
With all the stuff that's going on in the world, when this story would come to an end I'll be writing an epilogue with the "behind the scenes" section, the latter would likely be the size of a huge update. Seriously: this quest is becoming somewhat autobiographic.

As the title says, I'm changing the rules for attribute checks in order to decrease the influence of the random element. In order to do so, the dice bonus for attributes will use the value 5 as the "equator", meaning Strength at the value of 14 would provide 9 dice bonus while Charisma at 4 would be -1.
In order to balance things out, the difficulties checks table for attributes was altered as well, and now looks like this:

Nonsense
5​
Elementary
7​
Trivial
9​
Very easy
11​
Easy
13​
Normal
16​
Hard
20​
Very hard
24​
Epic
28​
Legendary
32​
Godly
36​

After playtesting, I can confirm that the average performance of the characters against the non-extremum difficulty tiers remained the same while the number of situations where trained characters flop at simple tasks decreased drastically. The change of rules does not affect the contribution of attributes to natural skills bonuses.

These changes would be the default rules to the spinoff story which I launched a month ago, too.

Now, what's next in the pipeline? I'll try to drop a lore chunk post sometime this weekend and write an update to the spinoff before the end of the ongoing voting period in this thread. The current state of the IRL circumstances would hopefully allow me to pull it off (unless something akin to a supervolcano eruption or alien invasion happens. It's 2020s, after all...)

Regarding art posts: the plans have changed a little, so the next art piece would not be a character art but something related to the worldbuilding and something I probably should've commissioned first. Before it's posted, I'll leave it to your imagination.

@SnowSpartan @Bladesguy You might want to throw your votes for Lucy's armor since there's a hefty chance her art update would include it :D

That's all for now. I hope you'd enjoy the latest update and stay safe wherever you are.

Oh! And happy easter for those of you who celebrates it!
 
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A word from the prodigal QM (yes, I'm alive!)
Hello folks

I know it's been a while since the last time I posted anything: IRL pressed me pretty damn hard. Basically, I moved countries, became a de-facto (but not in a paycheck) head data analyst of a company with three territorial branches, got buried under various work-related projects (four of which are still pending), burnt out, underwent months-long bureaucratic masochism tango with institutions of two countries, mentored a junior, and am about to move again; this time across the ocean and probably for good. But hey - I had to see Ireland, Denmark, and a bit of the UK...

That being said, I haven't forgotten either about you or the stories; working mostly with the notes, back-end & media stuff of the setting wherein I've got time to do so. Speaking of, here's a bribe bonus for your patience!



Yes - weebs got to our dear Lucy, and she's been Final Fantasy'd. At least, she looks happy :3 The side story's protag illustration is also in the making (albeit a very slow one).

Anyway, I'm sitting at 9k words of the next update, and can't wait to finish the bloody thing asap to get back to you all, hopefully, this weekend. Really - I miss ya all, folks. Here's hoping the new pastures would allow me to return to this setting with more available time AND way higher budget for better and more frequent media content and whatnot.

So, for now, take care, stay safe, and I'll see you soon.
 
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The (ir)regular digest.
Two weeks (one, if lore drop is to be considered) instead of half a year gap since the previous update. YAY! IMMA ACCELERATING! :D:cry:

Ok, the sheets are updated. You are free to vote for where do you think the trail of the murderer can be picked up. I'll call the votes on Friday тшпре, and until then, I will draft the update for the side story.

If all goes well, there's gonna be a new illustration sometime this summer. Can't wait for it :3

So, for now, have fun and enjoy the latest update~
 
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It's that time of the year.
You thought I forgot? Hah!

Merry Christmas to those of you who celebrate! Don't forget to give your close ones (even if they may be felines) a good squeeze. As a preset, here's something mildly embarrassing weebinized Ulren doing just that.

Now, you stay safe out there, and I'll go back to polishing the next mainline update that gonna be posted in a day or two. Yep, it's a big one again :cry:
 
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Still alive and on the other shore of the Atlantic. PS: it's crazy in here all the same.
Yeah, the move was rough-ish. Worse than it should've been by all intents and purposes, but still better than it might've turned out. At least I've got time to pick out the long-dragging projects that have been stinging me in the fannies for months, finally normalized sleep schedule, and involuntarily dropped some long-lasting time-wasters. So yeah, I'm back, and as of now, I'm writing the last scene of the update that's been stuck in the work since I was back in Europe. Sorry for making you wait (again), guys.

Scheduled vote count started by Teloch on Jan 1, 2024 at 3:30 PM, finished with 26 posts and 7 votes.

  • [X] With Inga, Ulren, and...
    -[X] Karl.
    [X] Lucy's reply to Seph's fitness patronage offer:
    -[X] Yes
    -[X] The kheree outpost mentioned in the Eljidey-Naran lead (continue investigating Eljidey's suspicion of Bodie's murder by trying to question the last kheree hunter he spoke with)
    -[X] Yes
    -[X] The kheree outpost mentioned in the Eljidey-Naran lead (continue investigating Eljidey's suspicion of Bodie's murder by trying to question the last kheree hunter he spoke with)
    [X] Isaac
    [X] Amalia
    [X] Lucy's reply to Seph's fitness patronage offer:
    -[X] Yes
    [X] Next point in Kherees murders investigation:
    -[X] Ayla's & Tymor's hideout (switch to investigating the reasons why two promising hunters left the ranks during the moment of in-group conflict)
 
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2020s gon give it to ya, boi /s
At least the string of fat projects is outta my bum now, and the political madness gonna start simmering down from the continent's media somewhat.

Looking back at how this story started, I can't shake the feeling it's not as much of a "dark fantasy" when compared to the reality we're living in since 2019, and I'm not sure I really want to grim-dark-ify it at this point to have that edge. But I digress.

If any of you use Discord, ya can find me here and poke for lore drops or boop for update statuses, or just chatter and whatnot.
 
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