Hard Enough - Pokemon SI

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I've been sitting here for a while now, thinking about if I should post or not. Because I hate being negative, especially so if I can't offer any constructive criticism, but in the end, I decided that I need to get it off my chest.

First off all, I love the story. The writing is great, most of the characters are amazing, the plot hook (SI as Brock who focuses on being a gym leader) was unique, and there're so many interesting things in the story: Brock and Sabrina, Brock and his siblings, Brock and Flint, Brock and his team (both Pokemon and human), Team Rocket, the new twerps, Jessie James Meowth, the relationship between Misty and Jessie, the politics... I'm pretty sure I could go on if I thought about a bit more.

But, and here comes my problem, instead of focussing on any off that, most of the focus has been on Will. Waiting for Will, dealing with Will's shenanigans, preparing for Will, fighting Will, preparing for Will again, and watching Will fight.

While the pace of the story turned pretty glacial since Will first turned up, the focus on Will could've been alright if he actually was interesting/intriguing. But he's not. What little we do know about him, doesn't make all that much sense. He's a good trainer, but went to Team Rocket to cheat. He wants to be an Elite 4, but fights in a way that guarantees that he will never be accepted. It honestly feels contrived. Brock hates him, so he has to actually be evil. I think I would've preferred it if he hadn't outright cheated or hadn't been aware that Team Rocket was cheating on his behalf. That would've put a more interesting twist on it than just him being evil.

And the worst thing? After everything Will has done, the scouting, the mind games, the attacks against Brock's family, the dirty barely legal tricks, the outright cheating with the help of f-ing Mewtwo, and bringing a completely surprise team? The best he could do was draw against a Brock that couldn't even bring his best after the recent fight with Moltress.

That just killed off any and all tension for the rematch. Baring an amazingly contrived asspull, there's just two possible main outcomes for the fight. Either Will doesn't get Mewtwo's help, in which case a Brock that has trained for weeks/months for the fight, was able to scout every important match, brought a second, even stronger TTar, and (probably) can Mega evolve at least his Steelix utterly stomps him. Or he does get Mewtwo's help, in which case he gets stomped as an afterthought by the Brock/Gym Leaders/Elite 4/Lance team up fight against Mewtwo.

It's just very disappointing to me and aside from a rewrite, which I don't really want since rewrites tend to die a lot, I don't really know what could be done to improve it. I'll keep reading, since the things around Will are still great, but I do hope that the Will arc ends sooner rather than later.
 
I believe that Will was introduced in the way that he was for three reasons, firstly to create some dramatic tension (which has admittedly been a little hit or miss), secondly to give us (and Brock I suppose) a mild antagonist that we can all love to hate and finally a reason for Brock to get his shit together, realize that he has, once more, simply been coasting and start to really prepare for whatever may come. After all he has outsider knowledge that multiple potentially world ending threats are coming down the pipeline and with his little brother at Ash's side they'll need some truly heavy artillery as backup since there's no guarantee that Ash is going to have his Anime plot armor that allowed him to survive all that crap.
 
I believe that Will was introduced in the way that he was for three reasons, firstly to create some dramatic tension (which has admittedly been a little hit or miss), secondly to give us (and Brock I suppose) a mild antagonist that we can all love to hate and finally a reason for Brock to get his shit together, realize that he has, once more, simply been coasting and start to really prepare for whatever may come. After all he has outsider knowledge that multiple potentially world ending threats are coming down the pipeline and with his little brother at Ash's side they'll need some truly heavy artillery as backup since there's no guarantee that Ash is going to have his Anime plot armor that allowed him to survive all that crap.
The problem to me is that there's no real reason for Brock to get his shit together because of Will. If Will had beaten him? Sure, then there would be a reason. But Brock knows that when his team is weakened by a fight with a legendary, it's still good enough to draw again Will when he bends the rules and cheats by getting active help from Mewtwo. With everyone of any importance on the lookout for cheating/Mewtwo there's no chance that Will would even come close to drawing with his current team. Let alone a stronger one that has prepared for weeks.

It's just that there's a lot of time and words spent on someone that doesn't really bring all that much to the table. Will doesn't challenge Brock's perception; Brock things he's evil and it turns out he's a cheat working for Team Rocket. Will also doesn't really challenge him as a trainer, since with everything, including indirect help from a Legendary (Moltress hurting key team members) and direct help from a Legendary, going for him, he could still only fight Brock to a draw while bending the rules to the breaking point.

In the end, you could basically cut Will entirely out of the story and Brock would still get the wake-up call through his fight with Moltress and Agatha's and Koga's fight with Mewtwo.
 
The problem to me is that there's no real reason for Brock to get his shit together because of Will.
There actually is, sorta. You see, by using all of those dirty, only technically legal by the barest possible margin, tricks AND outright cheating Will has managed to rather thoroughly piss off Brock. Now Brock's mindset is that he's very firmly pulling on his Dark Aura with regards to Will and doesn't just want to BEAT Will, no, he wants to absolutely and totally CRUSH Will. He wants this to be such a complete curbstomp that it will go down in the history books.

Brock would still get the wake-up call through his fight with Moltress and Agatha's and Koga's fight with Mewtwo.
Not exactly. While in the games Legendaries were simply a bit more powerful than regular Pokemon and thus could still be easily captured, in this fic Legendaries are called that for a damn good reason. Even a relatively low powered Legendary can very easily rearrange the landscape should it choose to and if it does choose to do so it would take multiple champion tier teams to stop it. Even then that's only for the likes of Moltres, the higher tier Legendaries are simply "run". This is common knowledge in this fic's world and when Brock was fighting Moltres I'm pretty sure he was more trying to delay and redirect it rather than actually be dumb enough to try and fight it head on. Because of this fact him and his team getting their asses kicked by Moltres is something to be expected so why would it kisk him into gear. Trying to take on Mewtwo head on in this fic would be like trying to climb Mount Everest Bare bloody Naked, i.e. you're gonna bloody well die. Again, Brock knows this very well as he grew up in that world so any of Ash and Co's encounters with Legendaries is something Brock will go into knowing that it's more like a puzzle boss from an RPG. You don't fight it head on but instead fix the situation.
 
If you're fighting a Legendary head on, its probably the Legendary testing you for worth more than actual hostilities. Which means not using their immense powers to render the environment deadly hostile or doing everything they can to kill you.
The usual recover explanation for quests is that it's tiring to pull off repeatedly. That and it can provide set up opportunities for your foe, in this case. Much like Protect can't be pulled off multiple times perfectly, it gets weaker. (And in detect's case this chapter. sometimes you can't dodge what you sense coming.) Jolteon is weak in game thanks to most of it's stats being in Speed and specials, but it's speed actually gets put to use in a RL scenario.
Thats not complicated - the learnset is pretty small and half those pokemon aren't actually bulky enough to stall with(see Alakazam, who CAN stall, but only if your opponent just lets you set up all your barrier moves first), if you're trading moves spamming Recover you're not winning, just losing slowly.
 
That just killed off any and all tension for the rematch. Baring an amazingly contrived asspull, there's just two possible main outcomes for the fight. Either Will doesn't get Mewtwo's help, in which case a Brock that has trained for weeks/months for the fight, was able to scout every important match, brought a second, even stronger TTar, and (probably) can Mega evolve at least his Steelix utterly stomps him. Or he does get Mewtwo's help, in which case he gets stomped as an afterthought by the Brock/Gym Leaders/Elite 4/Lance team up fight against Mewtwo.
You're assuming that the rematch is going to be a League-sanctioned Ace Battle with one Pokemon used at a time, with all the same rules and regulations as before.

In my mind, it's more likely that Brock, Agatha, Koga, etc., are going to turn up court-admissible evidence of Will's cheating and his connections to Team Rocket, who are a big deal still after the Burning Mountain move.

In which case events are likely to contrive that Brock ends up being the one to face Will and arrest him, only it isn't a refereed one-on-one battle with an audience but a massive melee where Will has no reason to keep playing nice.

It's doubly dangerous if they're in an inhabited area instead of a controlled battlefield, because that means that Will's tricky strategies and teleportation or psychic effects are very useful while Brock needs to hold back from a full rampage because he might be knocking down houses with an Earthquake and potentially harming civilians who can't flee fast enough.

Would that provide the type of tension that you feel has been killed off?

Because Will isn't about a sports rival who is cheating and needs to be smacked down. It's about a crooked creep in the pocket of organized crime who is trying to claim one of the highest government positions available.
 
You're assuming that the rematch is going to be a League-sanctioned Ace Battle with one Pokemon used at a time, with all the same rules and regulations as before.

In my mind, it's more likely that Brock, Agatha, Koga, etc., are going to turn up court-admissible evidence of Will's cheating and his connections to Team Rocket, who are a big deal still after the Burning Mountain move.

In which case events are likely to contrive that Brock ends up being the one to face Will and arrest him, only it isn't a refereed one-on-one battle with an audience but a massive melee where Will has no reason to keep playing nice.

It's doubly dangerous if they're in an inhabited area instead of a controlled battlefield, because that means that Will's tricky strategies and teleportation or psychic effects are very useful while Brock needs to hold back from a full rampage because he might be knocking down houses with an Earthquake and potentially harming civilians who can't flee fast enough.

Would that provide the type of tension that you feel has been killed off?

Because Will isn't about a sports rival who is cheating and needs to be smacked down. It's about a crooked creep in the pocket of organized crime who is trying to claim one of the highest government positions available.
True, I am assuming a regular match, or a regular match that's interrupted by a League vs Mewtwo fight. However, given that free for alls are something Brock trains for and is explicitly said and shown to be good at, I don't think it puts the end in any more of a doubt. Especially as in this case there's nothing preventing Brock from just cloaking himself in Dark and punching Will out himself.

But even if everything goes into Will's favor, it would be a lot tenser and a lot more suspenseful if Will was actually shown as a danger to Brock. Keep his cheap, if legal, tricks and have him beat Brock's team and immediately he's an actual threat that puts the result of the rematch, may it be a sanctioned battle or a wild fight, into doubt. But now, even with his preparation, his tricks and outright cheating, he's no match for a healthy team. Let alone one that was specifically trained and expanded for the fight.
 
Chapter 148 - Family time
I woke up the next morning to a room that I was only slightly familiar with. The feeling of the body pressing into me was much more familiar, however, and did wonders for keeping me calm.

Until I remembered what we'd done last night when Sabrina had sent Ralts out for an hour or so. I was suddenly much more awake.

"No, I'm sleeping," Sabrina murmured before I got the chance to even reach for her. Ralts murmured something and wormed her way closer into Sabrina's arms.

I chuckled and stood. "I need to go to the bathroom anyway." Sabrina made a gesture towards the hallway. I put on my shirt to cover myself and made my way to the toilet. It was only after flushing and washing my hands that I remembered Sabrina's parents.

Or, more specifically, Sabrina's mother.

She blinked at me, her eyes sliding down my body before glancing back up. "Good morning!" she said, sounding like she was testing the sound of the words.

"Morning," I replied, deciding to just go with the flow.

Sabrina's mother tilted her head. "Did you stay the night?" she asked. I decided to nod. Would it have been better or worse to say I came over just now? After a moment's sluggish thought, I decided it might be worse.

Sabrina's mother nodded. "Oh, that's good... I'll make breakfast!" she said before trotting away.

Before I could stop myself, I spoke up. "Do you want my help?" I said, more due to habit than any actual desire to do so.

"Oh, that might be nice!" she replied, leaving me in a lurch. She flicked her eyes back down. "Maybe put some pants on first?"

"Right," I said, hurrying back to grab my pants, suddenly glad that I at least wore underwear to bed. I stepped in and pulled on my pants. "Sabrina! Your mother was out there!"

Sabrina opened a single eye and peered at me. "Yes? She lives with me?" she said as though it were obvious... which it should have been.

I huffed at her. "We need to get you a room with a private ensuite."

Sabrina's eyes glowed. "Why? I can just teleport into the bathroom when I need it?"

I huffed and tapped her on the nose. "I can't, though, and I don't think I should wander around in the morning like that."

"Hmmm, don't worry, you have very nice legs," Sabrina said, then she sat up and eyed me. And your abs and your chest are very nice."

"That's not what I meant," I said, deciding if I wanted to shield my body from her gaze before shaking the idea away.

"I know," she said simply, her eyes glowing as I pulled on some jeans before opening the door.

A short shriek of fear had me stiffening up before Sandra called out. "Sabrina! If you're going to help out, remember what we talk about! No doing it from your bedroom!"

Sabrina grumbled and rolled over. I chuckled and shot Ralts a look as she copied Sabrina in grumbling and turning to face away from the light. "I'll give you both another half hour?"

The lights I'd turned on to find my clothes flicked off in answer. I turned and walked out with a smile, more than happy to help with breakfast. When Saul wandered in minutes later, he smiled at his wife, frowned, and then grimaced as he realised someone else was with her.

"Brock," he said.

"Saul," I replied.

He worked his jaw back and forth for a moment. "Saw your match the other day." Sandra shot him a reproachful look, but he kept looking at me.

I put down the knife I'd been using to slice bread. Then I nodded slowly. He twitched when he noticed I had something sharp in my hands. "It was a horrible thing what that Will did!" he rushed to say.

I snorted. "Yeah, that's true. Still, a draw isn't the worst result, as people have been telling me." I chewed that over. "I just wish I could force him into a rematch."

Sandra glanced at me. "Why haven't you?"

"Well," I said, turning that thought around in my head for a bit. "Mostly because, outside of his challenges, he is rather elusive. He comes and goes with his ability to Teleport, so chasing him isn't really feasible… Not that I want to do that…"

I sighed and shook my head. "At that point, I think that I'd be giving him more attention than he truly deserves. The media ask when he's going to have a rematch with me enough to make it clear people still want it. So yeah, he kind of has to come back and face me if he really wants to advance, but I'm thinking of forcing the issue by reaching the mid-season Ace tournament."

Saul blinked. "Won't that require a lot of time spent fighting Ace trainers?"

I nodded. "Things are starting to calm down a bit." I shrugged. "Honestly, I was hoping Surge would pull him up short."

Saul nodded. "We thought the same when he challenged Surge. Seems Surge has lost his edge."

I nodded. "He thought so as well, but… well, he knows now what he needs to do to get it back. And I know he's going to come back stronger."

Saul and Sandra grimaced. "Surge? Training again? Oh dear, people will think he's arming up again for war."

I flicked my eyes over both Saul and Sandra. I took special note of their grey hairs. "You both would have been around back then; what did—"

"We don't like talking about it, Brock," Sandra said with a tone that let me know she would not be talking about this, full stop. I blinked in surprise. Usually, Sandra was a quiet and calm woman; I'd never heard her speak up like this.

I nodded, deciding it was perhaps for the best not to ask a pair of psychics what they might have done during a war that they would have been in the midst of. If what Sabrina could do with reading memories was useful for criminals...

I clapped my hands. "Right, well, I have confidence that he's going to be stopped before he can achieve his actual goals," I said, bringing the subject back to what we were talking about.

Saul nodded and mouthed a thank you to me before resting his eyes on Sandra, who had begun wiping down an already clean bench.

"You think Erika will have a chance?" Saul said.

It was my turn to grimace. "I respect Erika; she is an incredible Gym Leader…" I shifted my head back and forth. "But I'm not so confident in her battling skills."

"She will surprise you," said Sabrina as she walked into the room.

Saul blinked. "Ho? Have you foreseen something, Sabrina?"

Sabrina shook her head. "I don't focus solely on what I can foresee; it is no way to live, I have learned." Sabrina smiled at me while she said this, leaning in and kissing me on the cheek. I kissed her back and settled in on the kitchen bench with her family.

Saul nodded. "I'm glad to hear that." He tilted his head. "What gives you such confidence in your friend Erika?"

"It is because she is my friend," Sabrina replied. "She and I have spent a lot of time together. Alakazam and I have been training her on some of her pokemon's psychic moves, but she has in turn been challenging me. Will is going to be in for a surprise when he fights her. She is not some simple flower he can ignore."

"I notice you haven't said she will win," Saul said. Sandra swatted him, and he stiffened. "I mean! Good for you! Backing up your friend like that!"

Sabrina rolled her eyes and accepted a cup of tea from me. "I'm better than I was; I have lots of friends now, mother and father," she said drollly.

"But I think she has a chance of beating him. Surge… He was overconfident in his strength. He tried his known method of blitzing with speed and power, which doesn't work as well against a psychic trainer that knows how to use their pokemon."

Saul nodded at that. "He wouldn't have had a lot of experience against trainers like us, merely the trainers that we work with. There hasn't been a true master... well, since you, Sabrina," Saul said proudly.

Sabrina smiled and inclined her head. "My thanks, but I think I still have a lot to learn." She rubbed a thumb along a scar I had on the back of my arm, and I put my hand over hers.

She didn't really blame herself for not holding back everything Moltres threw at us, did she? I squeezed her hand.

"That's a good attitude to have!" Saul proclaimed.

I chuckled at how he'd missed the subtext but nevertheless supported his daughter. It was a sign that things were better around her. I glanced over to Sandra and found her looking at my arm thoughtfully. Hmmm.

I decided to leave that alone and instead indicated the food Sandra and I had been working on.

A few minutes in, Sandra tilted her head. "Why are you keeping some food aside, Brock?" I glanced down and chuckled.

Sabrina giggled. "He has been trained by Munchlax."

"That's not it!" I said. "I taught him to behave with treats of food from my plate!"

Sabrina lifted her cup of tea. "Whatever you tell yourself. Sometimes training doesn't just impact the recipient." I couldn't refute that, so I grumbled and ate the food I usually left aside for Munchlax.



Sabrina dropped me back home, where I was promptly ambushed by my siblings throwing themselves at me. When I was done with most of them, I nodded to Yolanda.

"You missed training this morning?" she asked.

I shook my head. "I had myself scheduled for a rest day."

"Oh…" she said, tilting her head.

I could see she didn't understand, so I tapped the side of my head. "Sometimes it's best to give the body, mind, and spirit time to not be under stress. This allows for a full recovery and also increases your rate of growth instead of tapering off or plateauing."

"Huh," Yolanda said.

I ruffled her hair. "Go play some games with Terra and the others." I considered that. "Speaking of, later, let's go bowling!"

Sabrina stiffened. "Brock, last time we went bowling in Hoenn…"

I coughed. "Maybe the team will be calmer about it?" Sabrina raised a dubious eyebrow.

Yolanda looked from me to Sabrina. "OH! Tell me! What happened?" She grinned. "Did Brock get upset because you used your psychic abilities?"

"No, I played as the rules state without interference with the ball once it had left my hand."

I snorted at that, and Sabrina narrowed her eyes. "Bertha got us banned for life from the bowling alley."

"Maybe Pewter will have stronger bowling alleys?" I offered.

Sabrina shook her head, and Yolanda vibrated in place. "We so have to do it! I'll call the girls; they can join in; this sounds like it will be hilarious."

I grumbled at that but waved her off. "Sabrina, we best check in with the others," I said, nodding to my room. Sabrina inclined her head, and we locked the door before pulling out the Guardian holopad.

Sabrina paused on the texts that I'd been reading before making the call. "Mega-evolution, and Gigantamax/Dynamax." She scrolled down. "You've been looking into pokemon power-ups? What is Gigantamax?"

I nodded. "I have been looking into the historical texts about Mega-evolutions. Turns out there had been incidents of Mega-evolution during the war, or more specifically several from then Gym Leaders. Did you know that the Cerulean sister's Grandfather once fought off an invasion force with his Gyarados? People witnessed it from afar and noted that a mountain got destroyed, which interestingly enough is where the pokedex entry comes from."

"A mountain?" she said dubiously.

I pinched my fingers together. "Small one, that was more of a cape that was slated to fall into the ocean in a few years from what I read, but it still displayed a lot more power than people thought Gyarados were capable of."

"And they never witnessed Gyarados mega-evolving again?" she asked as she continued to read through the reports that had been compiled about the battle.

I shook my head. "Apparently Patrick never left Cerulean City after that, but Cerulean also became an area no one was willing to attack after that day. I'd probably need to talk to someone from that generation to learn more about it."

"Agatha or Oak then," Sabrina said before switching the holopad into call mode. When the call was picked up all of the Guardians were present, along with a bespectacled man.

"Gym Leaders! Battle Pike," he said.

"Everyone, this is Jacque, the local leader of our group in Vermillion, he was part of the observation team during Gym Leader Surge's match with Will," Agatha said.

The man inclined his head. "Wonderful to be working with you all; usually we just supply information and aren't called into meetings like this!"

I frowned. The inclusion of another member, albeit a man who worked in support of the Guardians meant something had to have happened.

"Was anything observed during the match?" I prompted.

Jacques nodded his head. And an image was displayed. "Yesterday at eighteen-fifty-six, towards the end of the match between Surge and Will, a pokemon appeared in the skies above Vermillion. It was high up in the sky and the only reason we have pictures of it is thanks to the team that works in the observatory on route eleven. They have a wide scope telescope that was requisitioned into a lower angle than normal."

I hummed as the image was a much higher quality than I would have expected. "I'm surprised you have such quality photos from a telescope."

"Well… the telescope wasn't always used to pick up images of the night sky. It was a long-range observation site during the war, and this gives it a wide range of capabilities. The League knows of it, but it hasn't ever been decommissioned." Jacques coughed into his fist. "Just in case."

"How does Team Rocket not know about this?" I asked.

"The list of what Kanto, or rather… Indigo, has at its disposal is a tightly guarded state secret. Even inquiring about it at the League draws attention. Slipping some facilities off the books is one thing; knowing what is and isn't still functional is another," Agatha said.

I raised a hand. "Wouldn't Blaine know?"

"Blaine would have some idea, but he is not one to share without gaining something significant in return. He also has certain countermeasures from long-range observation beyond the typical dark emitters. Where he built his battlefield and Gym for example. The caldera and shadow of a volcano are not places that can easily be watched."

I nodded and turned back to the images we now had of Mewtwo. Karen leaned forward and narrowed her eyes. "So that's the pokemon that almost did you and Koga in huh?"

"Silence girl! You reveal how foolish you are with every word! That pokemon is obviously powerful beyond the norm!" Agatha snapped, causing Karen to lean back and raise her hands to defuse the older woman.

Agatha inclined her head toward Jacques. "Thank you for bringing this to our attention. You have assisted us wonderfully." Jacques inclined his head again and disconnected from the call.

Agatha waved her cane at the camera. "The armour is an interesting touch. Perhaps it is a Steel psychic like Metagross?"

I shook my head. "I didn't witness it using any Steel-type moves during its fight against Moltres and a Steel typing would have been a terrible match-up in any event. It was able to fight it for a little while before escaping. Would Giovanni have sent a pokemon with a known type weakness against another?"

Agatha shook her head. "You are correct, Brock. Which makes me wonder about the armour."

"Perhaps it's body armour Giovanni had his pokemon wear? Perhaps it has a number of monitoring systems and communication channels?" I offered up. I suspected it was merely to add an air of mystery around Mewtwo, but i couldn't be sure with Giovanni. There had to be a reason for it beyond that, right?

Koga stroked his chin. "If there are communication channels being used to relay orders… there might be video feeds as well."

Janine straightened. "There might also be a chance to pick up the signal!"

Sabrina nodded. "If we can trace it, we will know where this pokemon is, along with its base of operations."

Agatha inclined her head. "It only appeared when Surge was fighting back towards the end of the match. I imagine that Will thought himself capable enough until Surge had him on the back foot."

I straightened up, knowing this might be the break we needed to lock Will down.

Sadly, Agatha shook her head. "I have gone through the recording of the match with a fine-toothed comb and a number of analysts, and unlike Brock's match there is nothing suspicious."

Karen grunted at that. "Huh, I wouldn't have guessed that you were stronger than Surge."

I snorted. "I think there's a lot of ways Surge could still school me," I said easily, holding in the scowl I wanted to show. Damn, it had seemed like we'd been close!

Koga nodded, and for a moment, his lips twitched upwards. "Good, the enemy of progress is complacency. Know yourself."

Janine nodded along with her father's comments.

I smiled at them both. "Right, so we have a chance of this pokemon appearing whenever Will is on the ropes right?"

I drummed my fingers on the table. "It's damned annoying that he runs off when he does, if we could catch him in the open I could offer him a rematch and force Rocket to act."

Karen made a humming noise. "A better option would be for me to tweak his nose. We're both making a bid for Elite Four after all and we'll have to butt heads eventually."

Agatha leaned back in consideration. "That… is not a terrible idea. Both Brock and Karen have legitimate reasons to offer him a challenge. He can weedle his way out of facing you Brock, having already fought you… but pressure could be applied…"

Agatha nodded. "We will have a whisper and media campaign run to set it up so it is considered reasonable. Karen, I want you to make an appearance at the next match he has in Celadon. We'll offer you up as bait and see if he's willing to bite."

Karen nodded her head.

Agatha rubbed her chin. "Erika… we will see about offering her some more support as she is on the weak side as a Gym Leader."

"I think she'll surprise you," said three voices. Sabrina smiled at me while I flicked my eyes to Janine, who'd also spoken up.

Koga gave Janine a considering look as Sabrina spoke up, "I have been working with Erika to increase her skills."

Janine coughed into her fist sheepishly. "As have I."

Koga nodded. "Good work," he said simply. Janine straightened a pleased smile on her face at the faint praise.

Agatha chuckled before waving a hand. "Very good indeed! I think that will help her a good deal. Perhaps the flower maiden will have some thorns eh?"

Karen huffed and rolled her eyes. "That's all good and well but we need to make sure that this pokemon that is supporting Will doesn't just hide up in the sky again. That will limit us."

"We need to choose the battlefield," Koga said.

"What if we made sure the match was performed in the day? Erika's Gym has an open roof, so people could ride their pokemon. Maybe we have a few of ours up there flying around."

"That… could work, it will force this pokemon into either close quarters in one of the surrounding buildings, or the Gym itself. We will have people roaming about."

"If it is in the Gym or the building, as long as I am close, I might be able to detect it," Sabrina said.

"I will have a number of ghosts filter through the area, in the days before the match. This will allow us more of our channelers and priests throughout Celadon," Agatha said.

I hummed. "We might need to do some training for fighting indoors."

"If we do end up fighting that pokemon, it won't be indoors for long. We will nevertheless fight in pairs. Karen, I would suggest you meet with Brock, Sabrina, and Lucy so you can train on this. Janine, Agatha, or I will schedule a time that one of us can be present for later this week."

"The shortstuff?" Karen said dismissively.

Janine bristled at the insult, but Koga merely put a hand on his daughter's shoulder. "She has been trained," he said simply.

"Well," I said, deciding to defuse the tension. "We'll be in her care." I nodded my head, and Janine perked up once again. It would be interesting to train in this manner. I was used to doubles matches or large throwdowns. Having to work with someone other than Sabrina would be an experience. I might also talk with Surge about setting something up; he was a wellspring of knowledge that I shouldn't ignore.

"Anything else to discuss?" Koga asked the group. Lucy made sure to ask for more training, which was seen as a good thing. I pinged Agatha to let her know this was more specifically about something to do with her. "That young trainer you recommended? A.J.? He's settling in well; he's very rough on the edges, but I can see that he has a lot of potential."

Agatha smiled fondly. "Ah, that little brat used my recommendation? Hah! He would have had to bend his pride for that!"

I tilted my head. "Was he not the person you wanted me to look into for possible aura training?" I asked.

Agatha huffed. "I saw he had the potential, but I never expected him to bend."

I grimaced. "I think the reality of how big the world was forced his hand."

"Hmpf, good. I leave it up to you to decide if you teach him Aura of course," Agatha said dismissively.

"If he wasn't the apprentice you had in mind, who was?" I asked with a frown.

Agatha waved her head. "The man in question has gone wandering into the wilds. I don't expect to see him again. Don't let it bother you." I nodded slowly and decided to drop the topic. After that, we discussed some other pointers before signing off.

I tucked the Holopad away and lay back on the bed. "Hmmm, do you think Erika can beat Will?"

"She has a shot," Sabrina said seriously.

I grunted at that. "What do you want to do now?" I asked. "I have nothing planned this afternoon."

Sabrina cocked an eyebrow at me. "You need to book the bowling alley, and your family wants to spend time with you before that. So—" she patted me on the head and flicked her eyes down, "—down boy."

I chuckled and sat up to give her a kiss, which did nothing to settle me down. She pushed herself off and shook her head at me before opening the door and walking down the hall.

I took a few minutes to calm down, during which I called and booked out the bowling alley before joining her.

"So what are we playing?" I said to the kids.

"Dragonslayer!" shouted the boys.

I chuckled. "I think I can—"

"No!" shouted Suzie, stopping me in my tracks. "You can be the princess! Munchlax is the Dragonslayer!"

I glanced over and found Munchlax wearing a cardboard helmet with horns on the side. He waved a packet of cheese and biscuits at me. I glanced over at Sabrina. "And her?"

"She's the good witch of the…" Suzie glanced at Sabrina, who mouthed something to Suzie. "West!" said Suzie firmly.

I sighed and got into the game. It wasn't the weirdest game we'd ended up playing. When Munchlax saved me, I had to give him a friendly high five as his reward followed by some more cheese for the 'injuries' he sustained during the battle with the mighty Dragon, who had been played by Terra.

After that, I clapped my hands. "Alright! Who wants to go bowling with me and my pokemon team?"

Sabrina raised her hand which prompted most of the girls to join the boys. Flint rubbed his chin. "Well, I might stay here and clean things up, get dinner on an—" Nanny Grav shook her head as she started pushing him towards the door.

I laughed. "We can order out tonight."

Flint eventually accepted this and joined us as we walked to the bowling alley. On the way through the gym, I picked up Greta and A.J., with Crystal joining us on the way there.

Both of the girls huddled up to Yolanda to chat while A.J. awkwardly made conversation with Salvadore. When we arrived the woman behind the counter called a group of assistants to fit out my family.

She then turned back to me. "Will any pokemon be joining you today?" she asked.

Before I got the chance to respond, a few of my team popped out of their pokeballs. I'd asked the pokemon in the reserve, and four had indicated they wanted to play. These being Bertha, Titan, Sanchez, and Izumi. Bertha pointed at herself and nodded excitedly.

"Alakazam!" shouted Sabrina's starter, indicating himself, Hypno, Ralts, and Mr Mime. Hypno narrowed its eyes at Bertha and warbled something that had Bertha grinning.

I coughed to hide a laugh. Oh dear, this might end up just like Hoenn.

"We'll separate the pokemon from the kids, right?" Flint said worriedly.

The woman chuckled. "Alright, but in our experience, kids tend to do more damage." She offered up some elastic socks with smooth bottoms for the pokemon.

My pokemon lined up against Sabrina's and they eyed each other. Then Bertha turned to her 'team' and started speaking. "Rhy! Rhy-pherior! Rhy! Or!" she said, nodding her head.

This caused her team to bark their own names.

From Sabrina's side of things, Hypno spoke up.

I tapped Sabrina on her shoulder. "Are they giving pep talks?"

Sabrina nodded. "They really enjoyed Hoenn and have wanted to do this for a while." Sabrina eyed the alley. "It seems more sturdy, so I think we might not get banned this time. That, or hopefully, they'll let us pay them off."

I huffed and decided to ignore the pokemon palming their way through the bowling balls to get one that would fit their digits or could be held easily enough in their grip. I noticed that Bertha just grabbed the heaviest while Titan toyed with the patterns.

Terra waddled over and sat herself down to watch the game. I turned back to my own family and set up the scorecards on two different alleyways. Then I glanced over to Yolanda's group. "You got yours set up?" I asked.

The girls gave me a thumbs-up while Salvadore and A.J. looked worried.

"Spike? That's not my name!" A.J. said as Crystal bequeathed everyone nicknames. "And why are you Lord Megadoom!?"

"Because the computer won't let me put in anything bigger!" Crystal replied.

I decided to ignore that as well and merely focus on helping line up the rolling ramp for Tilly and Billy. When it was my turn to bowl, I hurled my ball down and was pleased at the release. It looked good with how it was running straight… only to turn at the last second.

I turned and shot Sabrina a fixedly unimpressed look.

She gave me an innocent look. "Everything's fair in love and war."

Flint raised a finger. "Uhm… actually there are..."

Sabrina turned her gaze upon him as she raised a clenched fist. "I'm going to beat you all at this game."

Suzie hopped up and put her fists on her hips. "Oh no, you're not!" she pointed firmly, copying the pose Bertha had used earlier to point imperiously down at the pins that would dare defy her. "Brock, set up my bowling ramp!" she commanded.

I rolled my eyes. "No! I still have another turn!" I said firmly.

I shot Sabrina a less-than-amused look and selected another pokeball coloured bowling ball. I then pulled up dark energy and infused it into my bowling ball before throwing it down the lane.

This time I got a perfect strike. I pumped my fist and pointed at Sabrina. She clapped lightly and I settled next to her. "You're lucky you're beautiful and I know you're joking," I said, kissing her on the cheek.

When it was her turn, I channeled some rock energy and stomped my foot, causing Sabrina to slip. She shot me a furious look, but it didn't stop her from getting a strike. When I next went up, I infused dark energy into all the bowling balls to stop her cheating.

From there, things were a little more even.

I ended up flubbing a few throws as I overthought my technique, and Sabrina wasn't able to glide her balls in perfectly. Not that she didn't at least get a spare every time. I suspected she was nudging the pins with her mind now.

"Hypno!" yelled Hypno, causing me to look away from helping Billy roll his ball down the lane to look up and find Bertha pretending to whistle innocently while Hypno pointed at some broken pins at the end of the lane. Huh, I thought to myself, wondering if she'd lobbed the bowling ball rather than rolled it.

A horrible thumping noise in the ball return soon revealed itself to be a tightly curled Izumi. She unclenched herself and gave Bertha a thumbs up. Hypno rounded on Alakazam, who appeared to have a rulebook out. Alakazam scratched the back of his head and eventually shrugged, causing Hypno to fall to his knees in despair.

Apparently, there wasn't a rule that you couldn't be the ball and the competitor as well?

I watched Bertha continue to roll Izumi down the lane for the rest of that particular match to get a perfect three hundred. I rather enjoyed watching Bertha pirouette up to the line like a delicate ballerina before throwing Izumi in an underhand lob at the pins.

Izumi herself scored three hundred by rolling herself down the lane.

Titan and Sanchez both refused to use Izumi as their bowling ball and instead opted for a more traditional toss.

When I looked up at the staff, they were merely watching, not at all bothered by the wrecked pins. Huh, good to know they were a relaxed crew. The pokemon finished their own game much faster than we did, and soon were crowding around the various groups, giving their support. Bertha approached me with a huge grin and a scorecard, which she proudly brandished.

"Good to see our pokemon will be able to come back again," I said to Sabrina. I gave Bertha a pointed look. "Unlike last time!" Bertha stuck her tongue out at me for that and I chuckled.

Sabrina nodded. "It helps that Bertha learned the rules before coming."

Bertha adopted a wounded expression and put her massive hand on her chest.

I waggled my hand back and forth. "Nah, I think accuracy was the main issue last time."

Yolanda blinked before tilting her head. "Did she do much damage?"

I nodded. "Yeah, she almost brained the manager of the bowling alley with a bad toss."

Bertha rubbed the back of her head as Titan and Alakazam laughed at the reminder.

"Twice," Sabrina supplied stoically. "She almost brained him twice." Bertha sheepishly shrugged her shoulders before trying to 'coach' my younger siblings on how to toss the ball down the lane.

When everything was done, Cindy was declared the best of the kids with a score of one hundred and thirty.

Flint somehow was outscored by Munchlax much to the children's amusement, as Munchlax didn't really understand what was going on but he liked throwing the ball and knocking pins over. I think Sabrina might have rewarded his enthusiasm with a few random strikes, not that she gave anything away.

Crystal topped her group with the highest score, but I think that had more to do with her catcalling and sledging them than actual skill at bowling on her part. Bertha highly approved of this and clapped the smaller girl on the shoulder.

A.J. looked furious, while Salvadore was blushing terribly.

I tapped Sabrina on the side. "Should I be worried about that?" I said, indicating the girls smiling and the boys looking like they'd been ambushed.

"No more than usual," Sabrina said without missing a beat.

I turned my head away. Alright, I wasn't going to pry, they could sort it out themselves. It'd be educational… for most of them. But mostly the boys.

When we made our way back to the Gym I clapped Yolanda and A.J. on the shoulder. "Training tomorrow morning?" I reminded.

They nodded seriously, and I winked. Tomorrow might see things return to the grind. But the grind was starting to pay dividends. It was slow and methodical, but it was guaranteed.

The trick was keeping an eye out for any opportunities.

Still, that didn't mean I didn't send Lance a message with images of Mewtwo hovering above Surge's gym. I also made it very clear that if he needed me for any rocket base raids, all he had to do was ask.

Until I got a chance to take a proper swing at them, I was going to focus on getting stronger.



A.N. Thanks go to my patreons for their support, and to Obiwankentucky for betaing this chapter
 
Still, that didn't mean I didn't send Lance a message with images of Mewtwo hovering above Surge's gym.
Yeeeaaah... Regardless of how Will's Elite Run goes, there's no way in Distortion that Lance would even consider him for an E4 position. Will can huff and puff as much as he wants, no one will be appointed to the E4 without approval from the Champion. Plus, with Lance getting a better hold on himself, there's more than an even chance that Lorelei might stick around. Or someone else could be appointed... though I'm not sure who.

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And now that I've had time for this to percolate... What was Mewtwo doing there, Giovanni explicitly said that "Agent M" wouldn't be helping Will anymore. So, did Gio's momma pull a sneaky, is Gio setting Will up intentionally, or is Mewtwo watching on his own initiative?
 
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Still, that didn't mean I didn't send Lance a message with images of Mewtwo hovering above Surge's gym. I also made it very clear that if he needed me for any rocket base raids, all he had to do was ask.
So glad to see this step get taken, it's a reminder that they primarily want to get to Rocket and will is small fry in comparison.
 
So, did Gio's momma pull a sneaky, is Gio setting Will up intentionally, or is Mewtwo watching on his own initiative?
I'd put this down under his own initiative, since he may have also been peeking in on Brock after the fight. The gym leaders live and fight magnitudes differently then the scientists and Rockets do, so it makes perfect sense for him to be abit curious.

Obviously this will end in Mewtwo taking Will's balls and having a battle with Sabrina instead of dealing. That way he can show the chump a proper fight.
 
Artwork - Brock and family with Sabrina, and Surge
Art work from Ryot_ryot! For those curious this was when Brock built the new Pewter Gym.

He had the people that helped him out pose for a picture with his family.

It has been mentioned in story for those interested in what it looked like!
 
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Chapter 149 - Flannery's fiery fight!
I scratched my head as most of my Elite team made their way through the warm-up run. Yolanda noticed my worried expression and paused next to me, jogging on the spot.

"What's up Brock?"

"Empress and Teddiursa haven't come up for training," I said, scratching at my head. "They might not have known to wake up with the sonata, however, so I better go check up on them."

"Want me to come with?" Yolanda asked.

I waved her off and made my way down into the tunnels. Teddiursa had a little cubbyhole near the entrance… but that was empty. I frowned, feeling a moment of worry, only to pause and consider who I was looking for.

Teddiursa... and Empress.

I decided to hold off on any worries until I checked with Empress' cavern first. I'd had to have my pokemon dig out a new cavern that we'd then shored up. Empress' choices mirrored a lot of what Titan liked to have in his cave. Like shelves dug into the walls so any interesting rocks, pictures, or small knick-knacks could be put on display.

I made sure to scuff and make a lot of noise on the way down to Empress' cavern.

"Empress! You awake in there? You missed the morning wake-up call?" A soft rumble made me pause before I continued forward. That had been a rumble of agreement instead of a threat growl.

I stepped into her cave. "Oh good, you're in there. I'm also looking for…" I trailed off as I noticed that Teddiursa was curled up with Empress, still fast asleep.

I hummed in consideration as Empress watched me. I raised up my transceiver and snapped a picture before nodding at her. "Alright, I'll let you be. If he's still tired, it's best to let him rest; he's a growing boy after all."

Empress huffed and lay back down. I decided to leave her be and instead made my way back out to my team to train with them. When I caught up to Yolanda on her jog, she shot me a look, and I raised up the picture of Empress and Teddiursa cuddled up with each other.

"Eeeee!" Yolanda squealed in delight. Terra leapt up and pulled my hand so she could see. I started to hiss in a breath of concern. Was she about to get angry?

Instead, she giggled and clapped her hands, letting go. "She doesn't mind that Empress is showing affection to another pokemon?" I asked with surprise.

Yolanda shook her head and poked Terra on the nose. "Nope! She's not one to get jealous, she's rather cheerful all the time. I think she's glad her mother is helping out Teddy!" she said grinning at me.

"Hmmmm, alright, and still no, we're not calling him that."

Yolanda pouted. "You could! Look at him! He's the perfect little teddy bear! He loves to cuddle!"

"He's a rough, tough guy that has a soft side. So what? That doesn't mean he just needs to be called Teddy! He could be a Yogi, a Smokey, or maybe a…." I waved my hand, trying to think of another name while putting on a fake macho persona.

"Teddy," said Yolanda with a resolute nod.

"Ty!" Terra agreed. I huffed at them and waved them off to complete their training.

I returned my focus to find A.J. running after Rocko, of all people. It was an amazing display of contrasts. A.J. ran with short, speedy steps, his face locked in a rictus of rage.

Rocko loped along, his much longer legs carrying him further with each step. He looked like he was considering what he'd be buying from the shops later for dinner, rather than training.

His longer limbs allowed him a degree of ease that made it look like he was merely extending his legs rather than running. He waved and angled his run towards me.

"Brock! Hey man! How you going, man?!" he said, as his and A.J.'s pokemon rounded the plateau. He glanced back and whistled once. Rocko's pokemon broke into a sprint, and suddenly there was a clear gap between his pokemon and A.J.'s.

A.J. could only gape in shock at the sudden burst of speed that the more experienced pokemon displayed. The only pokemon of his that could keep up was his Beedrill, but that didn't surprise me too much; they were known speedsters.

Rocko approached and offered me his fist. "Good to see you, man. It feels like two weeks went by pretty quickly."

"I'll say," I said, looking him over. "You enjoy your break?"

Rocko bobbed his head up and down. "Oh yeah, my little bro and sis are a riot. They're so…"

Rocko rubbed his chin and then he shot A.J. an amused look. "Precocious. They felt like they needed to do everything right away. They were like puppy Growlithe off a leash for the first time. Raring to go everywhere with no idea which way they really wanted or needed to go."

"Yeah? What did you do?" I said, flicking a hand to Don to bank left away from Hypnotoad's attack.

"Took them to the bicycle road outside Celadon, rented a bike, and let them challenge Sophia, then rushed them further down to Fuchsia,where they got to fight Janine. They won and were thinking of continuing on."

He chuckled "Only to realise they would have to backtrack for Erika, where the surge was starting to build up, or they'd need some cash for a trip to Cinnabar."

Rocko bobbed his head. "I sat them down and told them a few options before asking them for other things they could be doing, and they told me they were thinking of catching and training some Goldeen to get them trained up to swim them across to Cinnabar."

I snorted at that. In the games, it wasn't all that far or all that hard to reach.

In reality, it was far, far different.

It wasn't a matter of just hitching up a pokemon and swimming out there in a few minutes. The trip could take days, and recognising this, the League had long since realised that they needed to set up piers rising out of the water for pokemon trainers to rest at during the trip.

Rangers in the southern seas ran a constant life-saving patrol route with either water or flying type pokemon and were known as the busiest of any ranger branch.

They also had the highest burnout rate, as Rangers invariably got sick of dealing with people who were determined to hurt themselves or drown.

Rocko chuckled. "Had to sit on them a while and remind them to check the city out. They'd forgotten about the safari zone."

"Ho?" I said, intrigued with this early inclusion. "Did you help them find something in there?" I asked.

The Safari Zone was also a much bigger area than in the games, with multiple climates built into various zones while also having preservation aspects to it that allowed unrestricted pokemon capture in certain areas. The Safari zone typically made bank, with trainers underestimating how difficult it would be to move through multiple zones without the aid of pokemon and serious preparation.

Rocko smirked. "I let them struggle for a bit, then I helped them out. Got them something real nice."

I chuckled. "Real nice, hmmm?" I flicked my eyes towards Rocko's Kangaskhan, Mr Bighead. Rocko noticed and winked at me.

"Alright, I'll play your game. If it's as good as Bighead that leaves…." I waved my hand about, "Something crazy like a Chansey, Dragonair, Tauros, Scyther, or a Pinsir… and that was if you didn't get them a pass into the international section of the Safari zone."

Yolanda and A.J. both gaped. I almost laughed when A.J. drew out a notepad and wrote down what I'd just said. Yolanda pointed at me. "That's where Kangaskhan can be found?!" she almost shrieked.

I blinked at her languidly. "Yeah? Did I not tell you that?" I said, scratching my chin in thought.

"No! And Chansey?! Chansey can be found in the Safari zone!?"

I nodded. "Oh yeah, they're extremely hard to catch, but they do exist in there," I said nodding sagely. Then I shot Rocko a wink. He chuckled, but A.J. groaned.

"Was that an eye-roll, an eye spasm, or a wink? I can never tell with you people."

"You people?" Yolanda said, rounding on him. "You! Just! Oooooooh! When Terra is big I'm going to have her sit on you!" she growled, pointing at him.

Yolanda stormed off, and A.J. watched her go. When he didn't move to follow after her I coughed pointedly and nodded towards her.

"Hmmm?" he said tilting his head.

I pinched the bridge of my nose. "That means go after her and apologise. Just because you can't tell when I wink or roll my eyes doesn't mean you should call it out and not expect it to upset people like my sister."

"Urgh!" he said, slouching as he turned and stalked off to apologise.

Rocko watched him go. "He seems fun."

He glanced over at my team and did a double take when he noticed Empress, who'd joined us while Teddiursa was now sparring with Clefairy. "So, new additions all around," he said, eying Empress.

"Yeah, like you said, a lot happened in two weeks."

"I'll say," Rocko murmured. "What's the kid's story? He found me in the Gym and tried to threaten me with security. When I laughed and waved my security badge, he got funny with how he tried to frisk me. He's an uptight little kid."

I barked a laugh at that, and had Rocko follow me through my Elite team's training while I explained everything that had been going on.

Rocko whistled and shook his head. "Damn! Sounds like I missed a lot of excitement." He mimed wiping his forehead. "Phew!" he said jokingly.

Then he turned so that he was facing me directly. He reached out and put a hand on my shoulder. "Hey." He smiled softly at me. "How are you doing man?"

I sighed and let some of the fatigue show. "Yeah, not great. Super annoyed that Will slipped through my fingers."

"Like you told me, man, you weren't at your best, and it's not like anyone could predict that you'd end up having to fight a Legendary pokemon!" Rocko shook his head. "Man, Team Rocket are scarier than I ever thought they were."

"We're trying to deal with that," I said.

Rocko nodded. "Yeah, I have no doubt you are." He flicked his eyes over Empress. "Damn bro, people are going to go nuts when they find out you have two Tyranitars on your Elite team!" he said waving his hands about excitedly.

I chuckled and waved for him to follow me to help feed my elite before dragging him to breakfast with my family. On the way I collected A.J.

"You eaten?" I asked.

The growl of his stomach was answer enough, and I waved for him to follow along.

"Hey family!" Rocko shouted when he entered the house.

"Rocko!" cheered my family when they noticed him.

The boys leapt off the chairs and surged at him to tackle him, causing him to tumble to the ground with a laugh. The girls charged in afterwards and flopped onto him to hug him with Yolanda pausing as she noticed the other addition I'd brought to today's breakfast.

"A.J.," she said tightly.

"What?! I said I was sorry?!" he said in the clueless fashion only young boys can.

Flint noticed how Yolanda was glaring at A.J., and just chuckled, earning himself Yolanda's ire before she shot me an unimpressed look. I just smiled and claimed my mug of tea from Munchlax.

The boys and girls quickly set about grilling Rocko for where he'd been. Salvadore informed him, again, of all the developments that had occurred with the Gym, and how I'd gained some pokemon.

"And Brock is building a volcano!" chimed Cindy, cutting off Salvadore's spiel, much to his annoyance.

"Cindy!" whined Salvadore.

Rocko sent me a look. "Huh, cool, you told Prof Oak yet?" he said.

I blinked and picked up my transceiver to do just that. I had been expecting Stephen to do that, but he might have let it slip his mind. I finished my breakfast and then moved on to link up with Alexa.

"Morning! What's up for today?" I asked.

Alexa smiled at me and handed me the schedule. It looked pretty normal until I got the match around lunch.

"Flannery from Lavaridge town, eh?" I said with a grin.

"About time those Hoenn kids came around," I said, feeling my interest spike. It was a fourth-tier badge match as well. I shut my schedule with a snap.

"Alright let's get it done," I said marching out to start the day's challenges.



The gym ran so much more smoothly with the return of my true second-in-command. I found myself with a lot more time as small jobs that I had needed to pick up were suddenly freed up.

I found Rocko talking with all of the trainers I'd taken on to handle the surge of trainers every time I came off the field. He led discussions and prodded the younger trainers into thinking of each fight as a learning opportunity. Where I'd needed to do it in the breaks, I suddenly had Rocko back and doing it once more.

While Rocko was doing this, Dennis would appear with the next round's pokemon I'd preselected for me, so I didn't need to walk off and could instead weigh in on the discussion.

Dennis himself got tapped by Rocko at one point, and I found them talking quietly off to the side.

I could only smile as a heart-to-heart occurred over what I suspected was Dennis' referee calls with Will. Dennis seemed to walk a bit taller after the talk, and I almost felt envious that Rocko had been the one to help out, before Rocko approached with his usual casual manner.

"Can you believe he thought I was going to chew him out over that match?"

I snorted. "I think I could, actually, with how he is."

Rocko smiled. "We're a pair, ain't we? Your two senior trainers?"

I laughed and clapped him on the shoulder. "You keep that up, and I'll give you another pay raise!" I said, teasing him. He mock-shuddered and raised his hands before glancing at the field.

"This the Hoenn girl?" he said, nodding as Rachel introduced Flannery who stalked out with the tunnel flashing red behind her.

"Oh yeah, that's her," I said.

Dennis and Rocko shared a look, and Dennis marched to the top of the stairs, indicating he'd go first to meet Flannery as the first gauntlet trainer. I wandered up to the front of the trainer's observation deck.

Around me, the other trainers who were off duty or lingering from earlier gauntlet runs stood around. Yolanda waved from her seat next to Crystal and Greta.

I focused on the coming match. I had high expectations of Flannery, and I hoped she lived up to them.

A quick glance around revealed Roxanne and Brawly in the crowd cheering for Flannery.

Flannery reached her podium and grinned as Dennis locked eyes with her.

"Ready for the heat, old man!"

"Ready for the crash, kid?" Dennis replied, causing Flannery's grin to merely widen. I chuckled. She would be someone who would react better to banter.

A.J. raised the flags as today's referee. "Ready?" he shouted.

Both trainers selected their trainers and released them.

"Go Magcargo!" Flannery shouted, her grin flashing as the crowd hissed in surprise at the fire-rock type being called up first.

"Go Rhydon!" shouted Dennis. The Rhydon landed with a heavy impact and locked eyes with the fiery snail across from it.

A.J. dropped his flags. "Begin!" he shouted, tapping for the barriers to rise up.

I tapped Rocko on the shoulder. "During the break, can you remind A.J. to not wait until the pokemon are on the field to raise the barriers for the crowd?"

Rocko nodded quickly as Flannery ordered her first move. "Smog!" she shouted, causing a purple haze to blow from Magcargo's maw.

Dennis replied by having Rhydon charge in with Bulldoze. Magcargo hadn't been able to move very much, and so the attack saw it hurled back. Despite this, I noticed that Flannery wasn't frowning. Instead, she was grinning like she'd just won a prize.

"Inferno!" she shouted causing me to grin as I realised her plan.

The smog she'd left around Rhydon earlier ignited and then exploded outwards, leaving Rhydon staggering and stunned. I nodded my head. "That's a one-two combination I'd like us to adopt with our Slugma."

Rocko nodded. "I'll pull the video for her fight; we'll get a lot from watching how she uses its typings."

With Rhydon disoriented and burned, Flannery had time to unleash a Sunny Day that saw her pokemon perking up.

I rubbed my chin. Did Magcargo have a special ability like Chlorophyll? I was quite certain that specific ability was only found with grass type pokemon, so perhaps it just liked the empowerment of the Sunny Day coming into effect.

Rhydon shook its head only to grimace in pain.

Dennis punched forward. "Earthquake!"

"Endure!" barked Flannery, causing her pokemon to curl in on itself as it braced against the super-effective move.

She then whipped out her finger. "Solar Beam!" she ordered, causing her pokemon to erupt with grass-type energy that saw Rhydon blasted out of the field.

It slammed into the wall, and Dennis returned it with a nod. He considered Flannery for a second before pulling out a second pokemon, which only made her narrow her eyes.

"Go Golem!" he said, throwing out one of the Golem that the Gym had.

This was a traditional, rock-ground type variant rather than the alolan version. "Dig!" he said, as his first move.

"Lava Plume!" Flannery ordered straight away, causing her pokmon's slug-like body to widen and flare up. Cracks of magma spread out from its position and caused Golem to surge out of the ground with a cry of pain. The magma obviously stopping Golem's tunneling.

I rubbed my chin in thought. Would that have occurred earlier if Sunny Day wasn't in effect? Would the Golem have been able to power through the lava plume? I'd have to test that later with some sparring between my Slugma and another equal-levelled pokemon. Although there was a chance that Flannery possessed pokemon that were well above the fourth-tier badge level.

It would make sense with her being the future Gym Leader of Lavaridge, for her to have stronger pokemon.

Golem fired off a barrage of Stone Edge to knock out the barely hanging in there Magcargo.

I hummed in thought; With the Endure set up from earlier and the block… hmmm, "Flannery overplayed her hand; she should have withdrawn her Magcargo during the match and used the time between trainer fights to give it a potion."

Rocko bobbed his head up and down. "Is she used to gauntlet rules? If she isn't, it might be something she didn't account for. It might not have occurred to her."

I shrugged. "She's not taking a longer look at her matches. It's an obvious enough solution in situations like this. It's always better to have more pokemon in hand." I checked her record. "She should be used to this with this being one of the last badges she needs."

"Might just be confident in her other pokemon," Rocko said easily as Flannery hurled out a Rapidash.

I inspected the horse and found it to be an impressive specimen. "That's a big horse," I said watching the fires roar to life as the Sunny Day empowered it further.

"Solar Beam!" said Flannery with a grin.

"Dig!" barked Dennis.

The beam of green energy swept over the hole that golem burrowed into, only for Flannery to sweep her hand to the side. "Agility! Make it work for it! Zig zag pattern evasion!" she ordered.

Rapidash responded by accelerating into a sprint that saw it blur around the field as its speed increased. It hopped and skipped a few times and outright changed directions, and Dennis watched all of this with a scowl.

"Now!" he ordered to his Golem.

"Leap into the sun!" Flannery responded, causing her Rapidash to soar right up into the dying embers of the Sunny Day. The fire type flashed with greater light as it did so.

"Woah!" cried out the crowd. Startled by how it looked like Rapidash had just absorbed the hovering orb of fire.

Rapidash landed, and despite the Sunny Day being snuffed out from being plunged through, Rapidash looked more powerful now than it did moments before.

"Ah, clever," I said as I realised she'd once again set herself up for this.

"What's clever?" asked Missy. Her eyes locked onto the battlefield. I held up a hand as I knew the fight was about to be decided.

"Flare Blitz!" Flannery yelled, clenching her fist and punching it forward.

"Earthquake!" responded Dennis causing the battlefield to shake as golem stomped its feet.

Rapishash came on despite this, with the fires blazing around it as it tore its way forward. It leapt when the shaking reached a peak and locked its legs in close before lowering its head.

"It's not going to make—" Missy started to say, only for Flannery to scream "Now!"

Rapidash kicked its legs for one final push that carried it over the gap to slam into Golem and knock it back.

Golem stumbled and cried out as a fire lashed it. It had been burned from that exchange.

Rapidash on the other hand was standing within striking range and shaking slightly. It obviously hadn't escaped the Earthquake move unscathed like Flannery might have hoped.

A pattern was starting to form with how Flannery fought, which felt right. "She relies on a lot of the inherent power that her pokemon have to carry her. She sets them up but she's overly reliant on it…" I twirled a finger around. "Use Protect and Detect a bit in your match if you can."

"I'm thinking of tripping her up with some water moves, actually," said Rocko, playing with a pair of pokeball with a sticker on them. I chuckled before nodding, knowing that both pokemon he'd selected would certainly do that.

I flicked my eyes over the field, which was a bit torn and smokey with patches of condensed magma.

"Might be a good idea," I said as Rapidash strode in and spun about to use Smart Strike to mule kick golem with a steel-type move as Dennis slammed another Stone Edge home into Rapidash's flank.

Both pokemon went down and I shook my head even as Flannery was called the victor.

"Flashy, but she's not controlling herself." I rubbed my chin and wondered how I could make her realise this during our match. Protect or a move like it that would allow me to negate her big one two combination moves would help, but I'd need to drive it home.

With her being a Hoenn fire-type specialist I suspected she'd have a certain fire-type starter pokemon in her team. And if I recalled correctly, she was known to have a fondness for Torkoal.

I'd need to watch out for any other pokemon that would know Solar Beam. They'd be wonderful counters to most of the pokemon that would provide type weakness against her with a water-rock combination.

Dennis waved to the crowd as he marched back up drawing a smattering of applause. Rocko stood and stretched as Rachel tumbled out energetically with a microphone in hand.

"That was a fiery showing, wasn't it folks? Will things continue to heat up, or will our next Gym trainer rain on this girl's passion? Ladies and Gentlemen! Fresh from his two-week vacation! Give it up for Rocko!"

Rocko sauntered forward and grinned as he got a round of applause and some cheers. As a well-known face in the gym, the regular spectators knew he was a dependable trainer.

He wandered to the podium and tapped a few buttons before discreetly keying in the private channel to the referee.

I saw A.J. stiffen up and a moment later the barriers shimmered up, earning a nod from me and Rocko. Rocko then keyed the line back to the open channel.

"You ready for an avalanche, chika?" he said teasingly.

Flannery flicked her hair. "I'm ready for you!"

"Go Torkoal!" Flannery said, sending out what I had to think of as one of her signature pokemon.

"I might not be the boss, but show me some love, Helix!" shouted Rocko as he released my Omantye onto the field. The small pokemon wiggled its tentacles shyly while eying its opponent.

Flannery groaned; she obviously knew what was coming her way next.

She clicked her tongue, bit her finger, and growled as she raised her pokeball. "Return Torkoal!" she ordered, causing a susurrus of surprise to sweep the crowd. I too, had to blink. She didn't like that matchup?

"Go Houndour!" she shouted as Rocko had Helix spin about, causing a Sandstorm to whirl up.

"Roar Houndour!" Flannery screamed over the howling winds.

The small dark-fire dog pokemon leaned into itself and then snapped its fangs forward, causing a thunderous roar to echo around the stadium. Helix shivered and to my surprise flinched before triggering his recall to his pokeball.

Rocko swore and struggled to get another pokemon out only for a different pokemon to answer the challenge.

"Oooooh," I hissed in surprise as Bighead, Rocko's Kangaskhan, took to the field with a snarl.

"What? No that's not who… damn it!" Rocko said, cursing to himself.

Flannery opened her mouth to say something snarky, only to pause as she inspected the pokemon across from her. "That's… a strong-looking Kangashkan you have."

Rocko smirked. "Yup, she has trouble holding back as well."

Both pokemon shifted uneasily as they eyed each other. I could tell the Sandstorm Rocko had gotten off earlier was also causing them some discomfort. Despite this, Flannery clicked her teeth again.

"Damn it, I brought this on myself! Houndour return!" she said for the second time this match.

The crowd stirred restlessly at this, but Rocko shrugged. "Rain Dance, Bighead," said Rocko casually, causing the Sandstorm to die off as water fell, drenching the field.

Flannery grimaced as the steaming field sizzled and cooled off as she pulled out another pokeball. "Need your fire, Combusken!" she said, releasing her third pokemon of this match and the fifth so far of the gauntlet.

I tilted my head. "Huh, that's interesting."

"What's that?" asked Missy.

"I was expecting she'd have a Blaziken with her having grown up in a fire-type gym and being my age," I replied.

Missy slumped. "Don't say things like that. I feel bad when I compare myself to you."

I coughed. "Sorry! You're right, I shouldn't compare situations like that, and neither should you."

"Thunder!" barked Rocko on the field, causing Missy and I to pay attention as Bighead lit up with electrical energy and unleashed it.

"Dig! No!" screamed Flannery as the lightning descended onto her pokemon. Combusken leaned forward to start burrowing, only to be tagged.

It cried out in pain but pushed through and burrowed down to avoid the last part of the powerful lightning move.

"That had to take the wind out of her sails a bit," said Missy.

I nodded. She'd gambled for a better matchup, but now she had to face a much stronger pokemon. Bighead grumbled and eyed the field, shifting so that it was in a steadier position, ready to react in any direction.

"Rise up!" ordered Flannery, causing her pokemon to shoot out of the ground before it could attempt a close encounter with Bighead. Bighead snapped around to focus on the Combusken.

"Giga Impact!" barked Rocko, causing Flannery's eyes to bulge.

"Shit! Detect!" she shouted.

Combusken responded instantly, glowing before it kicked the ground twice. The clever use of Double Kick resulted in it practically throwing itself parallel to the ground as it evaded the charging Kangaskhan.

When it missed, Flannery released a huge sigh of relief. "Focus Blast!" she ordered, causing her pokemon to whirl about on the heaving Bighead.

Bighead absorbed the hit and stumbled, only to turn with a snarl on its lips. Flannery gritted her teeth. "Close in!"

"Outrage!" said Rocko sternly. His pokemon erupted with draconic might, blowing Combusken backwards.

It wavered for a moment before shaking itself and standing upright with a challenging cry.

"Rocko's really pushing her," Missy said quietly.

"Yeah, but that is also more her own bad luck. She went for Roar, and it's biting her in the backside. Usually, when Rocko uses one of his own pokemon he only uses one of them. With him declaring two earlier and having Helix out on the field, she's in trouble."

"Oh! I forgot about Helix!" Missy said.

I nodded. "Yeah, and I think so will Flannery. She's not taking the longer view after all."

"Close in again!" Flannery said with a focused expression.

"Outrage again!" barked Rocko.

"Aerial Ace to evade and close!" said Flannery, revealing she still had the option to close as her Combusken vanished in a blur of speed to appear at Bighead's side.

Bighead whirled about, only for Combusken to grab it and spin it into a throw. "Reversal!" yelled Flannery with a whoop as Bighead was slammed into the ground hard.

I whistled. That had been a strong move. I flicked a glance at Rocko and saw him smiling. He raised Bighead's pokeball and returned it before whispering something into it.

A.J. twitched, causing Missy to frown. "What did he say?"

I chuckled. "Bighead knows Endure. If Rocko had wanted to, I think he could have dragged the match on more, but he doesn't want to be too rough with Flannery. If this wasn't a gym match, I think Flannery would be walking away with from this fight at least one more pokemon down."

"Ohhhhh," Missy said thoughtfully.

Crystal, who'd been hovering nearby, chimed in. "Even though Endure would leave Bighead with barely any strength?"

"Combusken's pretty much on its last legs as well, though. Another move would make a world of difference," Missy replied for me.

Crystal nodded thoughtfully while Greta wrote something down in a diary she had on hand. Yolanda merely nodded as though she already understood the importance of fighting for the small victories to earn the big win. I suspected she knew it intellectually, but whether she had ingrained it would be another matter.

Flannery groaned when Rocko returned Helix to the field while her Combusken drew in heavy breaths. Helix waved his tentacles once again in a shy hello.

Flannery returned her pokemon and released another. "Let's go Camerupt!" she shouted.

Her last pokemon emerged with a snort and a shake of its head. It eyed its opponent and huffed, only to bray when Rocko punched forward. "Surf!"

"Camerupt! Eruption to counter it! Full power!" Flannery roared, causing Camerupt to kneel down and tremble as the volcano upon its back ignited and unleashed plumes of lava that shot out.

Fire and water clashed, and a huge gout of steam exploded outward, causing vision to become extremely difficult. Despite this, I knew Helix's Surf had won through as Camerupt abruptly wailed in pain.

"She won't be able to use Eruption again like that," said Greta with a firm nod. Yolanda and Crystal glanced at her.

I flicked my eyes over and noticed that she had her pokedex out, recording the match and also reviewing the moves that were being used. When prompted, she explained the known mechanics of Eruption to the girls as we waited for the field to clear up or another move to—

"Hydro Pump at its last location!" Rocko ordered.

"Hop to the side and Fissure!" roared Flannery.

"Protect!" Rocko shouted to Helix, only for a heavy stomp to ring out.

It was then followed by a sharp splitting noise, heralding a one-hit K.O. move being used. Rocko cursed as he tried to peer through the fog. "Helix! If you're still in the match, use Surf again!"

When no wave rose up, Rocko raised Helix's pokeball, pressing the return feature, resulting in a red beam shooting out.

He took a moment to inspect the pokeball, pressing a small switch on the side that displayed a small bar of lights that indicated the health of the pokemon within. When only a few red lights were shown, Rocko nodded and raised his hand to indicate he was done.

Flannery exhaled hugely.

Missy considered the match. "Flannery got lucky at the end there, didn't she?"

I nodded. "Yes, she did." I watched her hurriedly grab out a potion and begin applying it to her extremely tired-looking Combusken. "So she's got a Combusken, Houndour, Camerupt, and a Torkoal."

"She's fuc—" Crystal started to say only to cut off with a yelp, when her mother, Georgina, appeared and grabbed her by the ear.

"No swearing, young lady! I've talked to you about this at home!" said Georgina, dragging her daughter out.

"What! No! Girls! Back me up, I was going to say something else!"

Greta adopted an innocent pose. "She's a terrible influence on us Ms. Glass."

Yolanda giggled as Crystal shot Greta a betrayed expression. Her mother dragged her off at that, and I shook my head, turning to the coming match. I toyed with the pokemon I had before settling down, sure of my selection.

It was going to be rough for her, but Flannery was a big girl; she could deal with the ditch she'd put herself in with her earlier choices.

"— give it up! For Brock!" shouted Rachel as she finished her introduction.

The lunchtime crowd dutifully performed the stomp-stomp clap entrance as rock music played out over the speakers. I felt my ears twitch as Yolanda called out after me. "Yeah Brock you!" she shouted teasingly.

I grinned as I advanced down to Flannery. When I got close, I leapt over the divider to land on the podium making it rumble with my landing. As I rose I saw the barriers shimmer into place. I flicked A.J. a nod before directing a stern gaze upon Flannery.

"I've been waiting for this match," I said evenly. "Think you're up for it still?" I said, crossing my arms.

"I know it!" Flannery said, raising up a pokeball.

I merely nodded before tossing out my first pokemon. "Go Onix!" I said, deciding on a classic to start things off.

"Let's go Camerupt!" Flannery replied, sending out her previous pokemon.

A.J. raised his flags and dropped them.

"Camerupt Earthquake!"

"Sand Tomb!" I responded. Onix swept his tail and caused a burst of sand to snake around her Camerupt and latch onto its legs.

Both pokemon groaned at the attack, only for Onix to be hammered much worse off. Bighead had probably caused Flannery's expectations for some of the pokemon to be much higher.

"Onix mourn," I said, giving out a code I had prepared for this onix specifically. It glanced at me before nodding its head and wailing. Sickly purple energy swept through it before shooting out to impact Camerupt who shook its head.

"Camerupt Earth—" Falnnery started to say, only for Onix to suddenly faint.

Flannery blinked. "Huh? Oh… guess I hit it harder than I thought?" she said aloud.

I smiled, knowing that wasn't the case as Camerupt shook its head and bellowed. I eyed its legs that were still surrounded in sand and tossed an idea around. "Onix good work!" I said, recalling it before tossing out another pokemon. "Go Lileep!"

My small rock-grass type appeared with a wave of its fronds before locking onto Camerupt. The much larger pokemon snorted heavily. Flannery gained a huge grin.

"A rock-grass type? I'm gonna have to punish you on that Brock!" she said happily. "Lava Plume!"

"Earth Power to knock yourself up into the sky!" I ordered causing Lileep to knock itself up into the sky. Flannery gaped as the Lava Plume missed and Lileep rose into the air. A move that one wouldn't expect from the typically land-locked pokemon.

"Lileep! Brine straight shot!" I ordered to my pokemon who fired off a burst of water while in the air.

"Hop to the side!" Flannery barked, expecting her pokemon to repeat its earlier dodge, only for it to shift and fall on its side. The Sand Tomb I'd used on it with Onix earlier in the match was still encasing its legs.

With the earlier Lava Plume, Flannery had glassed her own pokemon unknowingly.

Brine slammed home causing the super-effective move to rock Camerupt hard.

"Again!" I barked as Lileep landed. Lileep fired off another Brine and Flannery wasn't able to get her pokemon out of danger.

"Flamethrower! Blow that attack out of the air!" Flannery said, causing her pokemon to unleash a powerful gout of flame that saw the rather weak water attack break apart.

Lileep landed and waved its fronds about as Camerupt snorted. It was breathing heavily, but Flannery looked like she was thinking about how to get out of danger.

"Stealth Rock!" I ordered quickly, causing Flannery to twitch in surprise.

"Eh?" she said, only to gasp as Camerupt cried out as a purple glow reappeared. "Huh Camerupt! What the heck is wrong?"

Instead of answering, Camerupt fainted, leaving Flannery stunned. "Huh?" she looked at me stunned.

I raised my earlier pokeball, more than happy to explain. "I sacrificed Onix earlier to use a ghost move earlier. Ever heard of Curse?"

"Onix can learn Curse?!" Flannery said.

I nodded. "Yup! And thanks to that, your strongest pokemon is out while my Lileep is still in play," I said teasingly. Lileep preened at this and waved at me. Then it went a step further, curling in on itself and starting to glow. The glow engulfed its entire body, and before everyone's eyes, Lileep evolved.

"Cradilly!" cried out my newly evolved pokemon.

"Hah! Nice one Cradilly!" I said as punched the air. Cradilly waved its fronds around as the crowd cheered in support. Despite this, I could still hear Brawly and Roxanne shouting their own support for Flannery.

Flannery straightened. "Alright! Your plant powered up! I'm not backing down though! Combusken! I need you once again!" she shouted releasing her pokemon.

Combusken returned, still looking a bit roughed up but otherwise in good health. It kicked out twice and eyed Cradilly only for the earlier Stealth Rock to slam into it, causing Flannery to growl.

"Damn it!" she cursed.

"Cradilly! Brine while it's staggered! I said.

"Double Kick to get out of danger!" Flannery shouted. Her pokemon kicked both legs and hurled itself to the side. "Good! Now use Aerial Ace to close!"

"Hold for it!" I said carefully as Combusken sprinted in. Cradilly waited as ordered, and just as Combusken vanished into a blur I ordered my next move. "Astonish!"

"Combus!" cried out Combusken as it appeared behind Cradilly, only for my pokemon to bend like a vine and its eyes to glow causing Combusken to flinch.

"Brine while we're in close!"

"Dodge it with Detect!" ordered Flannery.

Her pokemon shook itself and lunged in close, before twisting as Cradilly arced its head around like a hose, spraying water everywhere, only for not a single drop to land on Combusken.

"Good! Now use Double Kick!" Flannery barked.

Cradilly was sent flying as it was slammed first in one direction before the other leg snapped up and saw it rocking back in the other direction. Despite this, it held on and glowered.

"Astonish again into Wrap!" Cradilily once again startled Combusken and caused it to flinch backwards only for Cradilly to wrap itself around Combusken's body and restrict it. I opened my mouth to give another order to use Brine but Flannery beat me to the punch.

"Tch! Blaze Kick! Use that flexibility we've practised for to knock its head off!" snarled Flannery as her pokemon's left leg ignited and rocketed up to slam into Cradilly's head, knocking it off and out of the fight as it went tumbling.

I huffed before chuckling to myself. She'd surprised me with that. "You worked flexibility with your Combusken?" I asked as I withdrew my pokemon.

"Yup!" she said proudly as she kicked her leg up and winked at me. "That and some martial arts. It has taken years, but it's going to pay off!" she said only for her smile to morph into a giant grin as her Combusken started to glow.

"Hell yeah!" she shouted as her pokemon evolved.

"Blaziken!" announced the now fully evolved Hoenn starter.

The crowd rose and cheered causing me to chuckle.

"You've certainly given them a show!" I said before tossing out my third choice. "Let's keep it going Sudowoodo!" My fake tree pokemon appeared and flexed at the fire-fighting type causing the large chicken to narrow its eyes.

Flannery still had a huge grin on her face, however. "Ha! Today's already been a huge win for me with Blaziken but I'm going for the W! Blaziken feeling up for it?" I paused, noticing the odd inflection on the last word. Blaziken nodded its head, making me wonder what else she had planned.

"Do your master proud!" shouted Flannery. Blaziken cupped its hands together behind itself and then shot them forward.

"Dig!" I barked, my instinct warning me about what was coming.

Sudowoodo didn't question me and dove into the ground, which was what saved him from taking an Aura Sphere to the face. I could only stare at the flattened earth in surprise.

Flannery stomped her foot while Blakizen huffed in annoyance.

"You had your Blaziken train with a Lucario?" I said in astonishment.

Flannery blinked. "I… yeah." She tilted her head. "How'd you know that?! Lucario are super rare!"

I chuckled. "They're also very… noticeable in how they perform Aura Sphere. Although that reminded me more of one of their signature moves, Vacuum Wave. I've read enough history to respect what you were trying to do."

Flannery stomped her foot. "Urgh! That was supposed to be a super cool reveal!"

I snorted, feeling a moment of deja vu. Hadn't Sabrina done the same to me? "I'm under no obligation to let you show off on me." I then pointed at the ground. "Hammer Arm by the way," I said as Sudowoodo shot out of the ground with a rising fist.

Blaziken leaned back, bending over, before plating its feet into a bridging position that allowed it to dig its hands into the ground and whip its legs up. In one quick counter, it evaded the strike from Sudowoodo and unleashed two deadly strikes from its powerful legs.

Sudowoodo went flying, and Flannery grinned at me. "I hadn't forgotten about our match Brock! Try again Blaziken!"

Blaziken adopted the pose and unleashed its Aura Sphere causing Sudowoodo to be hurled out of the field. I returned him when he staggered and fell flat on his face. I chuckled as the crowd roared their approval at the skill Blazkien had displayed.

I raised my final pokeball. "I almost feel like a heel sending this guy out." Then I shrugged and sent out my Solrock. "Go Quirina!"

Flannery growled at my last pokemon. "Quick close—"

"Psychic," I said, not willing to play around any more. Quirina engulfed Blaziken in psychic energy and then shot it back before Blaziken could escape the move.

Blaziken slammed into the wall, only to land on its feet and bounce back in, kicking and punching, ready to keep fighting. "Detect! Use it to get close!" ordered Flannery.

"Calm Mind," I said casually as Blaziken charged in.

"Aerial Ace!" Flannery barked.

"Hypnosis," I responded as soon as her pokemon vanished and appeared in close range. Blaziken once more staggered as another attack came into play, only this time it was taken out of the fight.

I was about to order another psychic when a red beam impacted Blaziken, returning it to its pokeball. Flannery raised a hand. "Sorry! I withdraw him! I'm not going to let my pokemon get beaten up like that so soon into evolving. He powered through some strong pokemon so I know he'll be happy, but I'm not risking him any more."

A.J. raised a flag as some people from the crowd applauded the move.

I nodded, satisfied at Flannery's foresight. "Good to see you're looking further than just this match," I said pointedly. Flannery rubbed the back of her head sheepishly.

She selected another pokeball though. "Let's go Houndour! This is your fight!" she said.

Quirina shifted in agitation as the small dark-fire type grinned.

I could only sigh. While Quirina was a perfect answer against Blaziken, he wasn't such a good counter for a Houndour, especially due to not being able to learn Miracle Eye. Oh well, I'd have to rely on rock type moves.

"Stone Edge!" I said trying to capitialise on the Stealth Rock that slammed into Houndour.

"Jump to the left!" barked Flannery allowing her pokemon to evade the strike. "Sunny Day!" she said.

In another situation, I'd have used a flamethrower to punish her, instead I pointed straight ahead. "Solar Beam!"

"Shit! Solar Beam in reply!" Flannery hurriedly said.

Both attacks slammed into each other, and the small hound stepped forward doggedly as Quirina held its position.

Houndour continued to stalk forward, its whole body straining at the effort while my pokemon held its ground. Both attacks eventually petered out with Quirina glowering at the suddenly much closer Houndour. Flannery grinned at me and I chuckled as I realised what she had been building towards.

"Dark Pulse!"

"Protect!" I said in reply, causing a barrier to rise up and defend against the move that would have been super effective.

"Close in with Crunch!" shouted Flannery, undaunted by the move.

Houndour leapt and just as my Protect started to drop away, Houndour caught him and dragged him to the ground. I smiled and returned him, not willing to let him go through being savaged.

I raised my hand, signalling my withdrawal and A.J. raised the flags. "Brock's pokemon is unable to battle! Flannery is the victor!"

Flannery punched the air. "Yes! Way to go Houndour!"

Houndour raised its head and howled in victory. I smiled at the scene. I started to lower the podiums, only to be taken by surprise when Houndour started to glow.

When the glow died down, a Houndoom stood wagging its tail. It turned and leapt into Flannery's waiting embrace.

I rubbed my chin. "Hot damn, three evolutions in one match? That's got to be a record," I said.

Regardless of the outcome, today was a very good day for both of us.



A.N. Thanks go to my patreons for their continued support.

Thanks also go to Obiwankentucky for betaing this chapter
 
Three evolutions, damn
So brock now has a strong grass rock type with a coverage water move
and flanery's team got a noticable boost with 2 of hers evolving, the rest of her circuit probably worth keeping a eye on.
 
Flannery must have been on the cusp of the cusp with her pokemon today.

. . .I wonder why they don't allow for Evolutions IN match in the games.
Simplicity. They calculate XP after the pokemon faints, then check for evolution at the end of the battle. This simplifies things because XP depends on the pokemon that faints (X pokemon at Y level gives Z xp), but they don't have to change the lineup of either team when they cross the threshold.
 
. . .I wonder why they don't allow for Evolutions IN match in the games.

Probaly coding limitations in the early days, and a mix of tradition/simplicity in more recent years and how a mon evolving with the whole animation, new moves etc could break the flow of a match. but they definetly could do it if they wanted.
Hell adding it to some NPC trainers if they KO one of yours would be really cool tho harder to impliment
 
This is the first Cradilly evolution right? And Blaziken and Houndoom are final evolutions as well, so the spectators were having the best bang for their buck for this match.
 
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