Halkegenia Online Thread 7: "Arrun Noir"

Hmm I saw a few potential mistakes in the latest piece;

As is our tradition, the race will carry on for three three nights. --- two threes


collected tips will be awarded the right to where my family's treasured heirloom for one night only." --- where=wear


If this was to be there prize for victory --- there=their?


Scarron was already getting read while Jessica had was inching towards a mop hung against the wall. --- read=ready had was=was


she simply stocked forward --- is stocked, stalked?


"I'm afraid I can't stay long." Agnes said quickly. "I merely here to check up on Louise, and to assure father that she is being treated fairly." --- Third 'I' should be 'I'm'


Though, think about it, that wasn't really saying much. --- think=thinking?


"I receive a report back from them today." Agnes answered --- receive=received


They appear to branch off for some distance and their may be multiple entrances and exits out of sight of the main house." --- their=there?


But nothing could Louise from thinking about what they had been told. --- could=could keep?


She let out a soft sigh of relieve as she began to wriggle her toes. --- relieve=relief


KoKo only seemed mild better as she flopped down --- mild=mildly


In his company, to men stood side by side, tall, lean --- to=two?


Go and fetch as a table and some of your Manager's best, --- as=us
 
LGear said:
If you think Pina as a feathered dragon is an idol, wait till she gains her humanoid form. Silica will need to transform from handler to manager just to handle the fans :)
I can easily imagine this. It's quite fitting actually. She'll probably end up as a Puca mascot.

Also, nice new avatar. ;)
 
Meanwhile wondering what Louise has trouble envisioning from the other world. Maybe buildings a kilometer tall? Urban center stretching as far as the eye can see? Tunnels bored straight through mountain ranges, just so you can pass very fast and long ground transports through them? Or maybe just all the electric devices in general, and especially things like computers, screens and internet?
 
heiwa said:
>Snip much useful information
I figured I would have to alter the personal setup, I just did the assignments off the top of my head due to it being late. Thanks for the rundown though.
 
Remember that while Kirito and Asuna have investigated a murder - they did so by investigating what computer exploit was used to kill someone and tracking that. Even the solution to the real murder was found by tracing the effect of the "marriage" status.
 
After spending an entire day doing nothing but grinding the Battle of Lumbridge and recoloring Kofu's hair, I have finally managed to achieve, GOLD. Well, to be exact, three different types of gold hair, bronze gold, brilliant gold, and soft gold hair. Seriously, I doubt I even spent this much time to do Morgiana's hair (I spent 4 days coloring Morgiana, of which, only 2 mornings were spent on her hair.). Then again, this is me pushing the bar to the limit as a personal test to see how far can I stick it.

On an off-note, gold hair isn't as gold as they make it out to be, rather it's more like brown but it'll have that sheen to it that makes it seem like gold. So subjective the color of gold is. But at least with this I am done with Kofu's hair and can fix up on other enterprises.

To trim or not to trim, Kofu's clothes, hmm... Also to point out, TH's statement is that Kofu has no scars, so the most I can do is emphasize her lean.
 
Archons said:
The thing about Louise is that she is not as small as she is made out to be in the anime. I believe the light novels make her relatively petite, but not unusually so. Just a little below average height.
Indeed
Volume 1 -Chapter 1 -Via Baka-Tsuki said:
"Who are you?" asked the girl intently. She was examining Saito's face. The sky was a clear blue behind her.

She seemed to be close to Saito's age. Underneath a black cloak, she wore a white blouse and a gray pleated skirt. She knelt down and looked, shocked, at his face.

Her face is... cute. Reddish-brown eyes danced upon the stage of her flawless, white skin and strawberry blonde hair. She looks kind of like a foreigner. In fact, the girl must have been a foreigner. A cute, doll-like foreigner. Maybe she's half-Japanese?
A petite foreigner but one Saito says looks HIS age. As in not a Loli. Hell in fact she doesn't have pink hair :p unless they mean a LOT of strawberry.

I wonder what would be the lowest age for players of the MMO? *wondering about an alt timeline with a specific 7 year old playing*
 
iamnuff said:
huh?

wasn't it refrencing this?


or was there another, similar joke?
The scene with skinner has almost the exact same dialog. Coat/asking for a determined girl/etc.

Season 8, Episode 5. Bart after Dark
 
DB_Explorer said:
Indeed



A petite foreigner but one Saito says looks HIS age. As in not a Loli. Hell in fact she doesn't have pink hair :p unless they mean a LOT of strawberry.

I wonder what would be the lowest age for players of the MMO? *wondering about an alt timeline with a specific 7 year old playing*
Well there was the 9 year old player we saw earlier in chapter 6 so I guess 7 isn't out of the question be very unlikely

Also yeah Louises anime character design is what happens when you try to copy Shana's simply because it is popular. Doesn't help that Louise and Saito are also voiced by the same actors as Shana and Yuji from Shakugan No Shana as well.
 
Tython82 said:
Well there was the 9 year old player we saw earlier in chapter 6 so I guess 7 isn't out of the question be very unlikely

Also yeah Louises anime character design is what happens when you try to copy Shana's simply because it is popular. Doesn't help that Louise and Saito are also voiced by the same actors as Shana and Yuji from Shakugan No Shana as well.
*watches the gates to the plot bunnies drop*

Yeah still Louise is a Petite, she's gets words like lithe, slender a delicate ascribed to her... well maybe not the last one after puberty finishes and we have Karin 2.0. (now with 100% more void)
 
DB_Explorer said:
I wonder what would be the lowest age for players of the MMO? *wondering about an alt timeline with a specific 7 year old playing*
Well there was one 9 year old girl (Rika) that ended up in an adult body because she was using her sister's account.
Word of Cardinal on the subject: Don't use your cat's name as your login password if you want to keep your little sister out your games.

For the 'main' characters (ones that get more then one scene) Silica looks 12 but is actually 14 due to her using her old SAO data.
 
Zaiaku said:
That's right, she's a nine to ten year old in a late teenager's body. That time must be even more scary and awkward.
This sounds like a job for Yui!

Thus Rika becomes the cute bruiser girl in Yui's Har - I mean group of close knit friends. 0_0
 
Oh, and I've decided on the next scene. Probably going to try and crank it out tomorrow. There were several contenders, but I settled on Sakuya and Alicia watching the debates between Regin and Rio, followed by a peak at what Asuna and Yui have been up to. (Yui no doubt has been spoiled rotten by Emily and Henrietta.)
 
Triggerhappy said:
Thus Rika becomes the cute bruiser girl in Yui's Har - I mean group of close knit friends. 0_0
Yui grows up to become the female version of Kirito, saving innocent maidens (and not-so-maidens) while breaking their hearts in their wake?
 
LGear said:
Yui grows up to become the female version of Kirito, saving innocent maidens (and not-so-maidens) while breaking their hearts in their wake?
It's not her fault that she inherritted her father's single target sexuality.
 
Triggerhappy said:
Oh, and I've decided on the next scene. Probably going to try and crank it out tomorrow. There were several contenders, but I settled on Sakuya and Alicia watching the debates between Regin and Rio, followed by a peak at what Asuna and Yui have been up to. (Yui no doubt has been spoiled rotten by Emily and Henrietta.)
I see much debate in this thread, to be caused by those debates.:D
 
Triggerhappy said:
It's not her fault that she inherritted her father's single target sexuality.
"Papa taught me to treat females carefully, like they're special."

"No wonder Yui-chan is more popular with girls than boys-"

"Yui-sama!!!!!!"

"-Especially among pixies."

It's quite easy to imagine Yui becoming tall, dark and bishoujo considering her features...
 
VoidCoreProject said:
In potentially amusing news, the FF.net nuts are now reacting to the epilogue zinger, albeit slowly. Reactions range from "Wut" to "Holey Effin' Shite, Man".
Yeah, I've been through those reviews and a grand total of one of them was anything other than appreciative and respectful. If we could stop the FF bashing anytime soon, I'm sure we'd all appreciate it.
 
Mega1987 said:
Why My mind is producing this image when you said Yui will become Tall, dark and Bishoujo?

must be reading too much FSN fanfic, hoping for Rider to get her happy ending with Sakura....
If you're going for Type-moon, why not Akiha?


Her hairstyle even resembles Yui in some places, like around the eyes.

Alright, in my headcanon adult Yui no looks like Akiha. Period.
 
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