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I'm... impressed I suppose.
- Yeah. I gotta agree with Saito on this. Even the neatest kitchen has some distinct signs of being used to it. Asuna's kitchen looked unused. Neither dirty, nor mildly dirty nor even obsessively cleaned. Usually roof can tell plenty about a Kitchen and its master(s).Triggerhappy said:Will edit and add conclusion tomorrow.
Halkegenia Online – Arrun Parallel Stories – Melancholy Hearts - Part III
- I'm pretty sure Kiriyu is fighting away waves of admirers to keep Saito to enjoy his peace.... He is classified as "Cute", has an important job, is very mature and polite about it too. And he treats his "younger sister" well... I wonder how many of his trainees have an eye on him?
- Yuuki's rather clever and very perspective for her age. And of course there's the shared pain.
- Clever educational plan thus far. Keep the Children busy and teaches them skills they would need in the future.
- I almost cheered when noticed " sharing an improvised bedroom" with my font it looks like " sharingan improvised bedroom"... shame, could have become my favorite typo....
- HOLY MOTHER OF FANSERVICE!!!!!
- Yup that seals the deal. The Classic "Walking in on her in the shower" is just too big a sign to ignore!! God!! She even hit him!! Also since Saito had seen a water-Faery naked while bathing he has to take responsibility... if this gets out (and it will DEFINITELY gets out) Saito can never live it down...
Takai's going to be one mean [<Older Brother]> here...
- And I was thinking "She caused them this embarrassment. And now she's run away " too.... I see a massive prank on Yuuki coming up in the near future.
- And I believe Irene suddenly remembered she is not a reasonable woman of forties/fifties and is in fact a girl of fourteen/fifteen too.
- Ya know... considering this is from Saito's PoV and how Irene is described... is that magic in the air?
- "Eh!!" indeed!! Guess this would lead to a beautiful friendship (*Does the "I got my eyes on you" thing with his hands* be on your best behaviors young man - Takai) and an even more beautiful relationship.
Excellent job!!
Typo and stuff (Thank you Zeful and divad):
Also apparently it is Konno Yuuki, so TH might want to replace all the "Yuki" up there too. Unless of course the characters intentionally broke her name. After all, with one exception, she was referred to as "Yuki" only when characters were talking to her. In this case, clever TH, very clever.
- equipment or simply
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- suddenly here eyes went wide
- sun that was
SonoKonno Yuuki YukiYuuki explained proudly- all stone, and
andglass - A pair of wide glass double doors were opened out onto a
rotwrought iron landing, admitting a pleasant morning breeze. - Footsteps
Foot stepsechoed - a Persian carpet was
laidlayed - she surveyed the
thecluttered - Eyes closed and lost within an inner
- unwelcome to his consciouss mind
- Peeking
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anryangry. - She gestured over to
theher dresser - discover it was
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Nope, it's the third bit. The one that caused confusion was originally a leftover bit of part II.NecroMac said:Isn't it 4th?
Btw, it me or we have an avalanche of side stories? I think there were 14 Side stories since the 1st January... Not that I complain