Guilt (Worm AU)

starts a super serious thread about a top tier master stranger power that pushes people to commit suicide and go on rampages of destruction, by page two people are cracking jokes and making me lough.....:facepalm:

HOW are you all doing this to me?!


Since it would take a very very very concerted effort for someone to make a story as grim-derpy as canon Worm, anything most people write is gonna be considered 'light' by comparison. Which opens the readers up for humor. Doubly so when the premise is actually pretty damn interesting and lets our minds wander into the various possibilities :)

Besides that, this can never be considered dark because of pure catharsis. Everyone in Worm needs a big bitch-slap to the face in regards to their moral compasses, self justifications and downright moronic/sadistic actions. Seeing the people suffering in this particular way, a way that promotes self evaluation is satisfying.

Who'da thunk it :p
 
I wonder if the PRT will realize that dropping Taylor in the Birdcage is really really good idea. She goes in, redeemed baddies come out, everyone wins! Except those assholes that off themselves...
 
I wonder if the PRT will realize that dropping Taylor in the Birdcage is really really good idea. She goes in, redeemed baddies come out, everyone wins! Except those assholes that off themselves...

Then there's the ones that go the hookwolf route and start to murderhobo their way through the 'cage. Funnily enough I see Marquis being one of the ones who pulls an Assault 180 and joins a hero team after being Taylor-Whammied.
 
Now, the important question, what will the PRT's designation codename be for Taylor?

I'm thinking something from mythology, possibly greek if you want consistency with echidna in canon
 
Woke up to almost 70 alerts this morning, thought Guilt had become an over night sensation turns out grind was carpet liked which is always nice. More importantly early morning inspiration just struck.

Oooooh Cooooooil~ coooome out and plaaaaaay~
 
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Piggot hears the scream and finds out how many people she hurt with her prejudice.
Carol hears the scream and finds out how bad a mother she is.
Amy hears the scream and wonders why people around her are freaking out.
 
I wonder how Coil will react. Will he be all 'gotta make amends' in one timeline, while being his usual bastard in the other, secure in the knowledge that his other timeline is ridding him of the guilt?
 
Hookwolf's response makes me think that not everyone should be wrecked by this. It's very obviously a Master effect and those are known things in Worm. People could deny, ignore or just deal with the emotions and go on a hunt like Hookwolf is doing.

More to the point, I wonder if Taylor will affect herself as well? All the suicides and other damages will be on her head.
 
Hookwolf's response makes me think that not everyone should be wrecked by this. It's very obviously a Master effect and those are known things in Worm. People could deny, ignore or just deal with the emotions and go on a hunt like Hookwolf is doing.

More to the point, I wonder if Taylor will affect herself as well? All the suicides and other damages will be on her head.

your right it is a master effect but for many upper tear master effects knowing that doesn't help at all. Cherish for example, what was it Regent outlined her doing? If memory serves he said she forced parents to kill their children and enjoy doing it then leave them to deal with all the emotional damage it caused.

Hookwolf isn't ignoring the emotions, or working through them. It's just that in his case his response to things he can't deal with emotionally is to lash out, he killed one of his own men something a rationally thinking Hookwolf would not have done without a much better reason than puking in his dog fighting ring. trust me the Hookwolf chapter is set up for later, he will be making a second appearance from another POV which will show he is not doing nearly as well fighting it off as he might think.

As for Taylor, heh, just let me worry about her.
 
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Coil
Guilt: Coil

A click of the mouse brings up the latest reports on Merchant activity along the edge of my territory. My men reported fewer sightings of their dealers over the past three weeks. Perhaps they had given up on Charles Street? Of course they could be preparing for a push, but they hadn't attempted a serious push into my territory since the conflict that netted me Charles Street in the first place.

Sadly I had lost my latest informant in their ranks to a shootout between the Merchants and the Empire. It could take weeks or months to get another informant so deeply ingrained into their organization. I could always simply buy the information off of one of them though that rarely worked, the junkies knew the only ones who would sell to their ilk was their own gang that inspired a certain level of loyalty in their ranks. Between that and fear of police or PRT sting operations the gangs tended to blow off bribes out of self preservation.

A cruel smile worked its way across my lips.

That left one rather expedient and enjoyable alternative; after all it had been a few weeks since I last indulged in a bout of stress release.

I split the timeline.

In this timeline I continue to leaf through reports


Timeline B


"Williams," I said into my intercom. "please join me in my office, I have an assignment for you and your squad."

I click open my desk and check to make sure my tools are still where I left them and in good condition. Not a full minute later a knock sounds from the door.

"Enter."

"You wanted to see me sir?"

"Indeed I want you to go and acquire one of the merchants mid level member for me to have a discussion with. Here is a list of acceptable targets along with what information we have on them." I said handing him a folder.


Both timelines


A scream echoed hauntingly through the base. From the sound it was a young girl. But that made no sense. There is no young woman on the base so how-

The office faded out of existence.

It was night, screams howls hoots and screeches fill the air in a mad symphony of rage and pain. I'm clinging onto of a ladder hanging from a chopper.

Elisburg, this is Elisburg. The old panic grips me as fresh as if it was the first time. Then something happens something that hadn't happened the first time. A shot rings out, so close that the noise of what must be a small pistol is deafening. Pain blossoms through my chest. My grip slackens on the ladder and I fall backwards.

As I fall out of the corner of my eye I see another man, I see… myself, scrambling up the ladder.

I hit the ground and am immediately set upon by a hoard of abominations, claws teeth and even a pair of tentacles rip into my body.

I scream.

More scenes start to play out. My mercenary's shooting into me in various ware houses while I shoot back with crap pistols or at best a shotgun.

Hundreds of scenes of lives slipping down the drain as they shoot up the product my men sell to them.

Recruiting Tattletale at gun point.

Blackmailing or bribing dozens of public officials.

Being tortured or killed by myself in what I remembered as timelines I had later discarded and a few I had not.

Suddenly I came back to myself in my base, as I did guilt, enough to flatten mountains, settled across my shoulders. It was impossible to think like this!


Timeline B


Williams, his face stony pulled out his side arm. "Sir," he said in a steady voice, "I quit." He placed the gun to his temple and pulled the trigger blowing his brains across my office wall in an eruption of red gore.

Yes. Perhaps that is the way to go about this, anything to escape this sensation. Pulling out my own pistol I place the barrel under my jaw and pull the trigger.


Timeline A


For a moment as my alternate timeline kills itself the Guilt is alleviated, I can breathe and think again. Then the sensation returns stronger than before, trying to escape this guilt by offing myself in an alternate timeline will not save me, it is a delaying tactic at best, but for now it will have to do I need more time to find out what is going on and how to counteract it, I have survived so much I can't let myself die now!

I split the timeline


Timeline C


Taking a knife from my tools I make a long vertical slash down both wrists and start to bleed out, like last time the guilt seems to diminish, with each drop of blood I can think that much easier.


Timeline A


I pick up my phone and call Tattletale. Drumming my fingers in impatience, time is of the essence here I need to know what is happening.

"Boss." Tattletale's voice filters over the phone clearly distressed but not breaking down, good. "It's a master, probably a new one, crazy strong, and if you're calling from where I think you are then their range is unbelievable. Best bet is this is them lashing out as a result of their trigger event, no way of knowing how long the effect will last, it might be permanent for all I know. Grue and I are both working through it so far, but I wouldn't bet on either of us being able to pull a job anytime soon, maybe ever. Bitch has gotten real quite since it hit, I think this gave her some insight into why people or at least the ones who don't abuse dogs shouldn't be used as chew toys. Regent, Regent is fine. Best guess this is too similar to his Dads ability for it to really have any impact on him."

I chewed on that information for a moment. A master this powerful could allow me to run the bay if they could be controlled, but I doubted I could last more than a few hours under this effect. That wasn't enough time to get them under my thumb, it might not even be enough to find the new master!

"Tattletale, I need a location, I need it NOW."

The line went quite, before cackling started to filter over the phone. "You're joking right?! You want me to feed you the location of a master who forces people to feel guilt so you can have her killed! Hah! Even if I could point you in the right direction, which I can't with so little information by the way, I wouldn't! Their power might slam me with enough guilt to make me take a walk off of a high rise if I did that!"

"Besides," she purred, "their power is forcing you to own up to everything you've ever done wrong, how long can you go without caving under that kind of pressure, and eating a bullet. You'll get what you deserve and I'll finally be free of you, you manipulative bastard." My blood boiled plans to murder her slowly blossomed up from the depths of my mind only to be shut down by a fresh wave of oppressive guilt.

I would have to wait out the storm as long as I could and just hope I could outlast the new Master.

With that thought I felt my other Timeline collapse as I finished bleeding out across my office.

Before I could even split the timeline again my office door opened. Standing in the doorway was one of my men carrying an automatic rifle.

"If I kill you… stop you from doing all the terrible things you do… maybe the pain will go away." He stuttered out a self depreciating smile on his lips.

He opened fire.

The bullets ripped through my chest knocking me onto the floor were my blood pooled around me. From the speaker of the phone came the sound of half crazed cackling.
 
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Guilt: Coil

A click of the mouse brings up the latest reports on Merchant activity along the edge of my territory. My men reported fewer sightings of their dealers over the past three weeks. Perhaps they had given up on Charles Street? Of course they could be preparing for a push, but they hadn't attempted a serious push into my territory since the conflict that netted me Charles Street in the first place.

Sadly I had lost my latest informant in their ranks to a shootout between the Merchants and the Empire. It could take weeks or months to get another informant so deeply ingrained into their organization. I could always simply buy the information off of one of them though that rarely worked, the junkies knew the only ones who would sell to their ilk was their own gang that inspired a certain level of loyalty in their ranks. Between that and fear of police or PRT sting operations the gangs tended to blow off bribes out of self preservation.

A cruel smile worked its way across my lips.

That left one rather expedient and enjoyable alternative; after all it had been a few weeks since I last indulged in a bout of stress release.

I split the timeline.

In this timeline I continue to leaf through reports


Timeline B


"Williams," I said into my intercom. "please join me in my office, I have an assignment for you and your squad."

I click open my desk and check to make sure my tools are still where I left them and in good condition. Not a full minute later a knock sounds from the door.

"Enter."

"You wanted to see me sir?"

"Indeed I want you to go and acquire one of the merchants mid level member for me to have a discussion with. Here is a list of acceptable targets along with what information we have on them." I said handing him a folder.


Both timelines


A scream echoed hauntingly through the base. From the sound it was a young girl. But that made no sense. There is no young woman on the base so how-

The office faded out of existence.

It was night, screams howls hoots and screeches fill the air in a mad symphony of rage and pain. I'm clinging onto of a ladder hanging from a chopper.

Elisburg, this is Elisburg. The old panic grips me as fresh as if it was the first time. Then something happens something that hadn't happened the first time. A shot rings out, so close that the noise of what must be a small pistol is deafening. Pain blossoms through my chest. My grip slackens on the ladder and I fall backwards.

As I fall out of the corner of my eye I see another man, I see… myself, scrambling up the ladder.

I hit the ground and am immediately set upon by a hoard of abominations, claws teeth and even a pair of tentacles rip into my body.

I scream.

More scenes start to play out. My mercenary's shooting into me in various ware houses while I shoot back with crap pistols or at best a shotgun.

Hundreds of scenes of lives slipping down the drain as they shoot up the product my men sell to them.

Recruiting Tattletale at gun point.

Blackmailing or bribing dozens of public officials.

Being tortured or killed by myself in what I remembered as timelines I had later discarded and a few I had not.

Suddenly I came back to myself in my base, as I did guilt, enough to flatten mountains, settled across my shoulders. It was impossible to think like this!


Timeline B


Williams, his face stony pulled out his side arm. "Sir," he said in a steady voice, "I quit." He placed the gun to his temple and pulled the trigger blowing his brains across my office wall in an eruption of red gore.

Yes. Perhaps that is the way to go about this, anything to escape this sensation. Pulling out my own pistol I place the barrel under my jaw and pull the trigger.


Timeline A


For a moment as my alternate timeline kills itself the Guilt is alleviated, I can breathe and think again. Then the sensation returns stronger than before, trying to escape this guilt by offing myself in an alternate timeline will not save me, it is a delaying tactic at best, but for now it will have to do I need more time to find out what is going on and how to counteract it, I have survived so much I can't let myself die now!

I split the timeline


Timeline C


Taking a knife from my tools I make a long vertical slash down both wrists and start to bleed out, like last time the guilt seems to diminish, with each drop of blood I can think that much easier.


Timeline A


I pick up my phone and call Tattletale. Drumming my fingers in impatience, time is of the essence here I need to know what is happening.

"Boss." Tattletale's voice filters over the phone clearly distressed but not breaking down, good. "It's a master, probably a new one, crazy strong, and if you're calling from where I think you are then their range is unbelievable. Best bet is this is them lashing out as a result of their trigger event, no way of knowing how long the effect will last, it might be permanent for all I know. Grue and I are both working through it so far, but I wouldn't bet on either of us being able to pull a job anytime soon, maybe ever. Bitch has gotten real quite since it hit, I think this gave her some insight into why people or at least the ones who don't abuse dogs shouldn't be used as chew toys. Regent, Regent is fine. Best guess this is too similar to his Dads ability for it to really have any impact on him."

I chewed on that information for a moment. A master this powerful could allow me to run the bay if they could be controlled, but I doubted I could last more than a few hours under this effect. That wasn't enough time to get them under my thumb, it might not even be enough to find the new master!

"Tattletale, I need a location, I need it NOW."

The line went quite, before cackling started to filter over the phone. "You're joking right?! You want me to feed you the location of a master who forces people to feel guilt so you can have her killed! Hah! Even if I could point you in the right direction, which I can't with so little information by the way, I wouldn't! Their power might slam me with enough guilt to make me take a walk off of a high rise if I did that!"

"Besides," she purred, "their power is forcing you to own up to everything you've ever done wrong, how long can you go without caving under that kind of pressure, and eating a bullet. You'll get what you deserve and I'll finally be free of you, you manipulative bastard." My blood boiled plans to murder her slowly blossomed up from the depths of my mind only to be shut down by a fresh wave of oppressive guilt.

I would have to wait out the storm as long as I could and just hope I could outlast the new Master.

With that thought I felt my other Timeline collapse as I finished bleeding out across my office.

Before I could even split the timeline again my office door opened. Standing in the doorway was one of my men carrying an automatic rifle.

"If I kill you… stop you from doing all the terrible things you do… maybe the pain will go away." He stuttered out a self depreciating smile on his lips he opened fire.

The bullets ripped through my chest knocking me onto the floor were my blood pooled around me. From the speaker of the phone came the sound of half crazed cackling.
Wow,
Coil's dead and we'v only gone like 1 day.
 
Wow,
Coil's dead and we'v only gone like 1 day.
try... hmm wow, ten minutes, tops!

edit: I literally started cackling once the fact I had killed Coil off within ten minutes of Taylor's trigger sank in.

Edit: also Lung! I completely forgot about killing off Lung! That's two of four gang leaders SO FAR! XD I love this fic!!!

Edit #3: 10 hours later still cackling every time I think about coil getting offed ten minutes into the timeline of this fic
 
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Roads? Where we're going, we don't *need* roads! (or rails or stations of canon...) Bourbon would be nice though...
 
Omake: Piggot
--- Piggot ---

Piggot - *Takes a swig of alcohol*
Armsmaster - *Weeping* Director... it's some kind of widespread master effect... *Injects himself with a special drug cocktail and his weeping stops* We cant pinpoint the source of the effect and... are you drinking?
Piggot - Yup. *Another shot*
Armsmaster - Isn't that something that can kill you with your kidneys?
Piggot - Yup. *Another shot*
Armsmaster - Director you cant do this! It's not worth loosing your life over!
Piggot - Way I figure it, I might as well get so smashed that Panacea will be too guilt ridden to refuse my request to heal me, plus I need the buzz to get over my hangup about capes . *Another Shot* Want one?
Armsmaster - Fuck it. *Takes a shot*
Piggot - Good man. *Drinks the rest of the bottle in one go, then passes out*
 
I'm really enjoying this story, the power fits into Worm brilliantly.

In many other worlds the power to make people feel guilt wouldn't be that strong, most people wouldn't have done things to feel that guilty about.
But in Wormverse, there's probably like one or two people in whole Brockton Bay who feel only kinda bad about something they've done, and everyone else is completely broken up about all the horrible things they've caused.
 
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