She looked there and saw Lucilia, her face as red as her usual coat, who had been walking down the stairs next to a shorter, freckled girl who was currently wearing Lucilia's hat, who was now rushing down to lirra while trying to close the last few buttons of her shirt.
'Lirra' isn't capitalised.
Also, a lot of 'who's going back and forth between two people... which is technically correct but reads weird.
Man, being a Changeling is hard. :D

[x] Try to get hired for the second job.

We haven't seen Lucilia since the exam, I think? Not sure Lirra is ready for confessions just yet.
I'll take the long road.
 
[X] Reveal the truth to Lucilia and see if the first job would still work.
Its going to come out eventually and I feel like if we leave it too long it will blow up in our face.
 
[X] Reveal the truth to Lucilia and see if the first job would still work.
 
"Mh… pale skin, freckles…. square pupils? Exotic. Same with the horns."
"Anyway, you're lucky, you look exactly the type of one of our clients, so-"
She looked there and saw Lucilia, her face as red as her usual coat. The bard had been walking down the stairs next to a shorter, freckled girl who was currently wearing Lucilia's hat, who was now rushing down to Lirra while trying to close the last few buttons of her shirt.
...Huh.

"One's… kind of a tavern. An actual one. The pay's good, although you'd need to wear a particular uniform. I think it'd look good on you, but that would mean you'd have to take your hood off."
Is this... a maid cafe equivalent?

[X] Try to get hired for the second job.

I'm curious as to what this second job even is.
 
[X] Try to get hired for the second job.
 
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I like Lucilla and I wanna see how she'd react.

[x] Reveal the truth to Lucilia and see if the first job would still work.
 
This is someone we're unlikely to interact with often, we're in a private setting, and can easily run away. Yeah, I'm going for it

[X] Reveal the truth to Lucilia and see if the first job would still work.
 
[X] Reveal the truth to Lucilia and see if the first job would still work.

Might as reveal the truth since we already shown our head to other stores so civilians would known and gossips would spread.

Quite amusing why she was there.
Nice to see this updated.
Adhoc vote count started by Jrin on Jun 6, 2018 at 5:43 AM, finished with 955 posts and 28 votes.
 
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[X] Reveal the truth to Lucilia and see if the first job would still work.
 
[X] Well, there was always the offer from the shady man.

Am I the only one for this choice? Really? He wasn't the nicest guy, but given how he reacted to Lirra's destination I doubt it's anything shady. A little rough maybe, but we are a Sword in training. Rough might be just what we need.
 
Hmm, not really feeling revealing it but this is pretty much a time to do it.

[X] Well, there was always the offer from the shady man.

nyeh, let's see what he had to offer.
 
[X] Reveal the truth to Lucilia and see if the first job would still work.

Let's a go!
 
I'm really not in favour of revealing our secret to Lucilia. We don't know her that well, and now we're revealing our secret to her and asking her if it's fine to reveal our secret to a cafe full of people? This doesn't sound right.

I also feel like our cute little protagonist would rather not do anything shady if she can help it. Therefore...

[X] Try to get hired for the second job.
Adhoc vote count started by Kai Merah on Jun 3, 2018 at 11:15 PM, finished with 21 posts and 20 votes.
 
Yeah, everyone voting to reveal should remember that it's not just revealing our Gravedigger-ness to Lucilia, it's also about working in a cafe filled with coworkers and customers without our hood.
 
Yeah, everyone voting to reveal should remember that it's not just revealing our Gravedigger-ness to Lucilia, it's also about working in a cafe filled with coworkers and customers without our hood.
Absolutely agree. If it was just Lucilia I'd be more open to it, but a whole bar? Full of people that go to our school? No, that makes no sense with how Lirra has acted so far.
 
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Why does the GM take so long to update? It's a visual novel!
Did you like being stuck in a murderforest?

Do you want more opportunities to have Chloe die horribly?

Do you like reading text but like it better when there are pretty pictures behind it?

I'm actually making a Gravedigger Quest visual novel, here's the link.

It's still a veeeeery early build, covering, as you could have guessed from above, the murder forest part.

So... yeah. Give it a try and tell me what you think (and if you found typos and so on).
 
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