Goblin Queen [Worm/Exalted] [Crosspost]

Tattletale has unlocked her essence, which grants her the benefit of being... an enlightened mortal... she gets some mild boosts and the ability to learn some essence techniques... now if only she ACTUALLY has some dots in martial arts or... you know... occult...

Currently, the scale goes... something like this...

Exalted
Shaped / Dragon
Taylor
Dinah / Alec
Lisa / Brian (if he ever gets enlightened) / Coil (if he ever gets enlightened)
 
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Tattletale has unlocked her essence, which grants her the benefit of being... an enlightened mortal... she gets some mild boosts and the ability to learn some essence techniques... now if only she ACTUALLY has some dots in martial arts or... you know... occult...

Currently, the scale goes... something like this...

Exalted
Shaped / Dragon
Taylor
Dinah / Alec
Lisa / Brian (if he ever gets enlightened) / Coil (if he ever gets enlightened)
Hoh ? Dragon is at the same level as a shaped ? Now that's one huge boost and I would say a revelation, and for some reason not necessarily a good news given Dragon's lack of knowledge on the Wyld.

An enlighned Coil might become something dangerous depending how he manages to combine his essence and his power, Brian on the other hand well unless he gets his second trigger well less so. As for Tattletale she should be able to pick up occult rather quickly if she finds someone knowledgeable in that domain, which Taylor is NOT.
 
Yeah, it's a pity she didn't have an extensive interview with a Faeblood on the nature of the Fae, the Wyld, and Essence. Oh, WAIT.

Hahahahaha...

Hoh ? Dragon is at the same level as a shaped ? Now that's one huge boost and I would say a revelation, and for some reason not necessarily a good news given Dragon's lack of knowledge on the Wyld.

An enlighned Coil might become something dangerous depending how he manages to combine his essence and his power, Brian on the other hand well unless he gets his second trigger well less so. As for Tattletale she should be able to pick up occult rather quickly if she finds someone knowledgeable in that domain, which Taylor is NOT.

Dragon is now a spirit (Yes, she's a machine spirit, praise the Omnissah) due to what she used to be, her trigger/powers... which means she's an essence user on par with the Shaped. Dots of essence is as normal the key thing here...

As for Coil, his power has always been powerful in the right situation... let's not kid about that here.

Brian is relatively low tier. Lisa has an advantage to a certain point.

No kidding, seeing as how she pretty much accidentally an Eye of Terror (tm) with the whole "new sun" thing.

Indeed.
 
Resposting (partially) from spacebattles:

1) Panacea just gave a lot of people a permanent, potentially inheritable (is it?) brute rating by means of perfect healing factor. I forget, but I think this includes at least some brain regeneration too. That's big. No, huge. Global, even. Because now Panacea could just deal with basically (almost) any injury this way - by giving people regeneration. And it also should prolong lifespan (via perfect health). I wonder how soon people will notice that it's permanent. Oh, and PRT employees may get it as a health benefit package. And I'm rambling, but the point stands - it's a huge, global event.

2) A wall around the city, no the coast (past Downtown) 20 meters wide, sixty meters tall? That's a small mountain range. And some waves got past it? That's megatsunami level. If it hit, it would have destroyed the city in one hit. I'm not sure if Leviathan is holding back (much) at the moment.

3) Navigator is having the time of her life, isn't she? And is totally stealing Taylor's show. Well, Taylor stole Labyrinth's (and Ziggurat's, and, really, Bohu's), I guess, so fair's fair. But still, revised estimations of their abilities (provided they survive, which is not a given) are going to be fun.

4) And then there are Uber and Leet. If Leet starts spamming high-tech equipment (or starts using his replicator(s) as transporters)... And then Dragon unleashes essence-tech... This is going to be a glorious clusterf*ck. And the Brockton Bay threat rating (as a whole) is totally getting upped too. Because, honestly? Cape Capital of the World.

5) I forget - is Lung present? Oh... And if Oni Lee got regeneration based upgrade... We might see his real personality. Same with Bitch potentially. The question is - can Panacea get the upgrade herself somehow? Even if not, not-depressed Mark (I think his name was Mark) brings some change.

6) Turnout for the next endbringer battle is going to be huge. Because now there are permanent and very attractive benefits for participating. Sure, they might only show up once, but the next fight will have a lot of capes.

7) I wonder if Panacea does pediatric medicine. Just giving all the newborns this mutation might be a worthwhile undertaking.

But, anyway, how this turns out is going to affect many things. Because humanity (and associates) just escalated hard.

biigoh said:
A Yog comment~ huzzah!

1) It's not inheritable... but it IS permanent. It does fix brain issues IF said issue doesn't result in a case of dead... because you know... losing your brain or part of it is bad for most living things. It takes time to heal and can't heal if you're dead. And yes, PRT employees and Protectorate capes at this Endbringer fight got it as a default.

And yeah, those Japanese capes just got an extension on their fight against Leviathan.

2) Yeah... it's huge... the waves didn't get past it. Rather it slammed into the wall and moved up the wall to splash over it... splash not erm go over it... also, water spouts on top of said waves... because Leviathan.

3) And yes, Dinah is having fun... she's doing what most Thinkers WISH they could do... go toe to toe with big brutes. :3

And yeah... Taylor doesn't mind having her doing the fighting... the wall itself is kind of... it got people's attention...

Also, yes... Threat level ratings for Dinah and Taylor will go up... with Miss Militia going "I told you guys so!"

biigoh said:
4) The replicator that Leet uses is a bad thing to use as transporters.... very bad. It is good for mass production, however... :3

Brockton Bay as Tinker-town? :>

5) Lung and Oni Lee are present. As is Bakuda.... and Oni Lee's personality issues is that he only lives as long as he doesn't teleport.... ie he creates a new him every time he teleport and the old him.... dies.

And yes... lots of ripples in the setting.

Indeed, there are solid benefits now beyond appearing on a monument of the fallen... survive and you get a regen factor.

As for Oni Lee, I figured that his power messed with his mind, and stuff... the how was the tricky bit... which was why I decided it messed with him by making him fatalistic. See the interlude for Oni Lee. https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9683187/32/Goblin-Queen

As for Amy and Babies....

Amy "You want me to... what? No... just no..."
 
Dragon is now a spirit (Yes, she's a machine spirit, praise the Omnissah) due to what she used to be, her trigger/powers... which means she's an essence user on par with the Shaped. Dots of essence is as normal the key thing here...
Ah, a spirit makes sense in a way but tis' sad as she won't be singing the song. Now what would be fun would be tattltale starting to have fun with Thaumaturgy. Eh it would be one more reason for the PRT to shit bricks about the undersiders, and somewhere Miss Militia would be able to tell everyone:"I told you so"
 
As Schlock Mercenary showed, the only difference between a transporter and a cloning machine is turning off the disintegrator beam.

The problem is that the replicator is erm... there's a reason why Leet is NOT using it to clone. Let's leave it at it's bad when you try to dupe things with souls.

Especially when there are OTHER ways/technology to get teleportation effects.
 
As Schlock Mercenary showed, the only difference between a transporter and a cloning machine is turning off the disintegrator beam.
Actually, Star Trek replicators fabricate the item within a set area inside the machine. So... They are bad for transporting.

Also, it's possible that Leet's replicator can't do biological stuff due to the same issues that discourage him from wet Tinkering.
 


Teaser~

If reality was one of my stories, the battle would have ended already with us victorious. Alas, I had not the narrative weight to simply bend reality thus, I had to work for what I desired.

And really, a fade to black before showing the results was just a cheap story telling technique used by hacks who were too lazy to write things out. What next, a time skip to the story's sequel?

It was because of my many, many horrifying stories that my narrative skills were sharp enough to sense what worked and what didn't. In the end it was practice, no matter what Lisa said.

Right now, what my instincts were telling me was that the best thing I could do was simply have fun and just go with the flow of things.

With pounding heart, a gleeful smile on my face, I darted amongst the blossoms of light and exotic energies, grazing the attacks that were shot en mass behind me as they blended with the shifting rains and water sprouts that reached up from the surface of the sea.

My target? Leviathan where he grappled with Navigator's Mister Fluffles.

The air keened at the passage of my sword...
 
Lisa needs to get her Sword grace forged, then she needs to buy herself a behemoth.

Taylor: "I could maybe forge you a BEE~hemoth."

Lisa: "You should totally make one of those for yourself, but for me, I'm thinking maybe something ... foxier."
 
Lisa needs to get her Sword grace forged, then she needs to buy herself a behemoth.

Taylor: "I could maybe forge you a BEE~hemoth."

Lisa: "You should totally make one of those for yourself, but for me, I'm thinking maybe something ... foxier."
and then the ninetails started to wonder why the blonde human brat yelling at him suddenly looked smarter
 
Lisa needs to get her Sword grace forged, then she needs to buy herself a behemoth.

Taylor: "I could maybe forge you a BEE~hemoth."

Lisa: "You should totally make one of those for yourself, but for me, I'm thinking maybe something ... foxier."
Taylor: "You can have a nine-tailed fox-rabbit-hybrid with emotion sensing powers."
and then the ninetails started to wonder why the blonde human brat yelling at him suddenly looked smarter
 
Currently, the scale goes... something like this...

Exalted
Shaped / Dragon
Taylor
Dinah / Alec
Lisa /

Curious that.

I admit, that I didn't read through comments in all those Goblin Queen threads, and it probably is explained somewhere in them - but what exactly are relationships between Taylor and her 'guest'? It is still rather unclear to me.

Well, unless it is intentionally unclear.

Anyway, as far as I understand, exalted part of the settings is close to canon in this story. It means, that relative power of different beings is kept. Taylor's 'guest' is unshaped Raksha, most powerful type, at least equivalent of third circle demon.

As for their relationship, I assume it works in simillar way that is works for typical shaped Rapsha. Taylor is a shell that shields vulnerable,amorphous interior. Given that Taylor already existed and was being of Reality, she doesn't restrict her 'guest' as much as process of being shaped would. Plus partial merge allows to bleedover of abilities and influence.

Still, given that I don't really understand classification above. I would think, that even fraction of Unshaped essence would put Taylor above all but oldest Exalted... Unless we are speaking about quality of the essence instead of quantity. But then, I still don't understand it.


Anyway, I have also plenty of other question marks floating around. For example I'm wondering if a 'guest' is recuperating from it's wounds. It began story dying and crippled. What it is now?

Or what exactly limits Rose Knight has? So far there was little that really had put her in a spot, made her really exert herself, to strive. Little that made her afraid. Little that would make her search for something more.

I wonder for would her narrative power interact with Simiurg. I wonder if time is as fluid and malleable to Taylor as it is to Yosi and unshaped Raksha?

I wonder what would happen it Taylor were suddenly to receive solar exaltation?

As I said, plenty, plenty of floating question marks.



Back to more serious comments - one thing, that I'm little afraid of in this story, it something I would name 'reality break'.

Please bear in mind, that those are only my personal observations. I don't want to 'flame', I'm only speaking about something that I'm afraid may happen there.

Anyway, 'reality break' is something that I've seen happen in stories before. Too many major events, major changes, each with too many consequences. Each one changing status quo further and further from canon. Those changes are introduced relatively quickly, and without (visible to reader) exploration of consequences. All of that was leading to the point, where story seemed to have little common with common sence or continuity with canon.

Here, in 'Goblin Queen' good example of that are Star Trek replicators - the possible tinker paradise. I don't belive it will get (nor that it really deserve) detailed exploration. Still, it is something that is word-breaking on national scale. It will change lives of common people in town. It will change relationship between gangs. Cauldron will get interested, just as will Protectorate. There will be new faces in town, changing situation even further. There will be demonstrations of strength form various sides. Probably where will be tinker tech on the streets. There will be media circus. There will be national outcry. There will be new policies, power play. Pingot will need to react...

I could continue the list. The fact is, that infinite replication of tinkertech requires all of above to keep continuity with canon. But it probably won't get it. And yes, it is ignorable. But problem begins when common peoples suddenly get free access to tinkertech neural disruptors - it seems to come 'out of nothing'. It feels wrong. When it is coupled with other major consequences, from other world-changing events, you get 'it seems wrong' feeling more and more often. After certain point amount of 'wrong' elements prevents you from enjoying the story.

I'm affraid that Goblin Queen may go in that direction.
 
Tattletale has unlocked her essence, which grants her the benefit of being... an enlightened mortal... she gets some mild boosts and the ability to learn some essence techniques... now if only she ACTUALLY has some dots in martial arts or... you know... occult...
Occult dots probably wouldn't actually do Lisa much good until she hits Essence 2 (I'm assuming she's only Essence 1), since most Terrestrial Circle spells seem to require more than 10 motes to activate, and an Essence 1 human only has 10 motes. Of course, a number of useful perks for being an Essence user only seem to kick in once you hit Essence 2, so Lisa really should concentrate on exploring her Essence for the foreseeable future.
 
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Sorcery also requires Essence 3 and Occult 5 for mortals. So I don't think she will learn.

Martial Arts is the best source of power for Enlightened mortals (not counting Exaltation).
 
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