I just noticed that LostDeviljho's and Rex's avatars are a part of the same picture (and they have the same title, no less).



Jho-Prime: Let the judgement commence.
Cancer-Jho: What judgement? These guys're shit. Bin em.
Anti-Jho: We've got like twenty of these things and just about nineteen are rip-offs. You- You're asking us to choose the best shits in the sewage tank.
Waifu-Jho: Iunno, I kinda like the fact that some of these people're putting effort into their charsheets. Pictures, biographies-
Gangsta-Jho: A shit's a shit yo. You can gold-plate a turd but it's still a turd.
Cancer-Jho: Let's just shut this down right now, okay, all in favor-
Anti-Jho: I mean, fuck's sake how're we supposed to pick eight of these things? Fuck that, imma do something else.
Waifu-Jho: We have to finish this soon, the players are waiting!
Gangsta-Jho: Eyo, no they ain't. We ain't got no players-
Jho-Prime: Christ why am I working with these people.
Cancer-Jho: RL called, later.
Waifu-Jho: Yeah AFK, sorry guys.
Jho-Prime: Aw come on.
You're full of shit GG
:V
 
Chihiro isn't a r-

/Toga, Pop Step, Rumia, and Flandere show up in the background/

SHUT UP I DIDN'T DO IT ON PURPOSE DAMN IT! It doesn't count if you only realize after the fact!
 
Obviously my Waldo - locator skill is the most important of the superhero-ing skills, putting me squarely in the 'maybe' column.

<kicks back and relaxes>

:V
 
I literally labeled my entry "Norwegian teenage draconic fire-breathing jet-powered viking-styled All Might". My Rip-off isn't a rip-off... but it is. So confusing.
 
My character isn't a rip-off, or at least not a deliberate one.

...actually, now I'm curious; did Ayame come across as a rip-off to any of the council?
 
And now instead of pestering Jho about whether our subs were good, we are going to pester Jho about if he thinks they are rip offs.

:D

(Sunati, thankfully, isn't a rip off but an unholy mash up. Much better)
 
Mine is absolutely a rip-off, 100%, and I for one am thankful to dare and be unique amongst all you non-rip-offs
 
I knew posting my completely new and fresh Sonic OC was a bad idea
 
Mine has her appearance recycled and reworked from another application that got rejected. Everything else came from a Kingdom Hearts fanfic that I developed a lot of character background and powers for, but never worked up the enthusiasm to actually write.
 
Mine has her appearance recycled and reworked from another application that got rejected. Everything else came from a Kingdom Hearts fanfic that I developed a lot of character background and powers for, but never worked up the enthusiasm to actually write.
I recycled the potential hero name from a OC I daydreamed up after reading about the make a hero submission thing that happened. Bubble girl and Centipede man a great!
 
Name: Shirai Ran (Japanese order)
Power Base: Mechanical Limb Generation
Appearance:
Costume: On her front upper body, Ran wears dark blue light armour that protects her from damage, while the suit on her back is made out of a gel-like material. The limbs her quirk creates can pass through the material easily.

Quirk:
Metal Tentacle
Metal Tentacle is a quirk that can let Ran manifest a maximum of four limbs made of metal from her back. She can make her limbs one of three types: Tentacles, in which case they have a round end, arms, which have metal hands, and pointed ends. They're quick and nimble, and can extend up to 20 metres at a high speed, which she can use to pierce through walls and pierce into rock with her pointed limbs. They can curl up on themselves, too, and are harder than most naturally occurring and artificial metals.

Skills: Acrobatic!

Bio: Ran, ever since she was a kindergartener, wanted to be a superhero. She looked up at the top heroes of Japan, including the greatest of them all, All Might! But her quirk hadn't awakened yet, even well into her years of Junior High... The doctors said that it would come eventually, and that she just had a rare condition that made her quirk appear late, but she never believed them. She was laughed at and pushed away from society, and called 'quirkless' by her peers. She was still an excitable girl at heart, but she retreated into her shell over time, losing all hope of becoming a superhero, and all drive.

Then, one day, she woke up and discovered that she had her quirk! Ecstatic, she went to school that day overflowing with excitement, hoping that now that she had her quirk, no-one would bully her any more, and she could fit in - her being a superhero didn't even fit into it. But it didn't matter to her schoolmates, who still treated her as pathetically as they did before, and her hopes were shattered. But that day, as her most common assailants - a pair of girls with strong powers - laughed at her, another person stood up for her - a boy with no quirk at all, a quirkless.

The bullies were surprised, but quickly went back to laughing at Ran - and the quirkless now, too - but after the boy had defended her, their words didn't affect Ran very much at all. They left soon after, chuckling among themselves. Ran looked at the quirkless, awe on her face, and asked why he defended her, when he had no quirk. What he said was that she was proof that even though he was quirkless, she gave him hope that he could one day get a quirk of all his own and become a hero.

What the boy said reawakened her dream to become a superhero. With her new quirk, she took a class in acrobatics, to help her with agility and ways to utilize her limbs, and she started to study harder. She aimed for the top - for UA High. And there was nothing that could stop her now.

Even so, the bullying had left its mark. She is shy and awkward, and it takes a lot for her to trust people fully, although her inner energy comes out on occasion when she is truly happy or excited.

sorry for the double post but here you go

she's not the most original character, but i did put thought into her

also i was thinking if the person with the same last name as her gets in there ccould be some dumb gags
 
Name: Shirai Ran (Japanese order)
Power Base: Mechanical Limb Generation
Appearance:
Costume: On her front upper body, Ran wears dark blue light armour that protects her from damage, while the suit on her back is made out of a gel-like material. The limbs her quirk creates can pass through the material easily.

Quirk:
Metal Tentacle
Metal Tentacle is a quirk that can let Ran manifest a maximum of four limbs made of metal from her back. She can make her limbs one of three types: Tentacles, in which case they have a round end, arms, which have metal hands, and pointed ends. They're quick and nimble, and can extend up to 20 metres at a high speed, which she can use to pierce through walls and pierce into rock with her pointed limbs. They can curl up on themselves, too, and are harder than most naturally occurring and artificial metals.

Skills: Acrobatic!

Bio: Ran, ever since she was a kindergartener, wanted to be a superhero. She looked up at the top heroes of Japan, including the greatest of them all, All Might! But her quirk hadn't awakened yet, even well into her years of Junior High... The doctors said that it would come eventually, and that she just had a rare condition that made her quirk appear late, but she never believed them. She was laughed at and pushed away from society, and called 'quirkless' by her peers. She was still an excitable girl at heart, but she retreated into her shell over time, losing all hope of becoming a superhero, and all drive.

Then, one day, she woke up and discovered that she had her quirk! Ecstatic, she went to school that day overflowing with excitement, hoping that now that she had her quirk, no-one would bully her any more, and she could fit in - her being a superhero didn't even fit into it. But it didn't matter to her schoolmates, who still treated her as pathetically as they did before, and her hopes were shattered. But that day, as her most common assailants - a pair of girls with strong powers - laughed at her, another person stood up for her - a boy with no quirk at all, a quirkless.

The bullies were surprised, but quickly went back to laughing at Ran - and the quirkless now, too - but after the boy had defended her, their words didn't affect Ran very much at all. They left soon after, chuckling among themselves. Ran looked at the quirkless, awe on her face, and asked why he defended her, when he had no quirk. What he said was that she was proof that even though he was quirkless, she gave him hope that he could one day get a quirk of all his own and become a hero.

What the boy said reawakened her dream to become a superhero. With her new quirk, she took a class in acrobatics, to help her with agility and ways to utilize her limbs, and she started to study harder. She aimed for the top - for UA High. And there was nothing that could stop her now.

Even so, the bullying had left its mark. She is shy and awkward, and it takes a lot for her to trust people fully, although her inner energy comes out on occasion when she is truly happy or excited.

sorry for the double post but here you go

she's not the most original character, but i did put thought into her

also i was thinking if the person with the same last name as her gets in there ccould be some dumb gags

Oh wow you'd get rekt by Shoku so hard it's utterly hilarious
I can absolutely work with this should we both get in
 
Metal Tentacle
Metal Tentacle is a quirk that can let Ran manifest a maximum of four limbs made of metal from her back. She can make her limbs one of three types: Tentacles, in which case they have a round end, arms, which have metal hands, and pointed ends. They're quick and nimble, and can extend up to 20 metres at a high speed, which she can use to pierce through walls and pierce into rock with her pointed limbs. They can curl up on themselves, too, and are harder than most naturally occurring and artificial metals.
But I'm the tentacle girl! .... Um.. Not like that...
 
I think about the only thing I ripped off was Izzy's appearance in Digimon Tri.

Jhoooooooo

How is sheet reviewal going?
 
Name: Shirai Ran (Japanese order)
Power Base: Mechanical Limb Generation
Appearance:
Costume: On her front upper body, Ran wears dark blue light armour that protects her from damage, while the suit on her back is made out of a gel-like material. The limbs her quirk creates can pass through the material easily.

Quirk:
Metal Tentacle
Metal Tentacle is a quirk that can let Ran manifest a maximum of four limbs made of metal from her back. She can make her limbs one of three types: Tentacles, in which case they have a round end, arms, which have metal hands, and pointed ends. They're quick and nimble, and can extend up to 20 metres at a high speed, which she can use to pierce through walls and pierce into rock with her pointed limbs. They can curl up on themselves, too, and are harder than most naturally occurring and artificial metals.

Skills: Acrobatic!

Bio: Ran, ever since she was a kindergartener, wanted to be a superhero. She looked up at the top heroes of Japan, including the greatest of them all, All Might! But her quirk hadn't awakened yet, even well into her years of Junior High... The doctors said that it would come eventually, and that she just had a rare condition that made her quirk appear late, but she never believed them. She was laughed at and pushed away from society, and called 'quirkless' by her peers. She was still an excitable girl at heart, but she retreated into her shell over time, losing all hope of becoming a superhero, and all drive.

Then, one day, she woke up and discovered that she had her quirk! Ecstatic, she went to school that day overflowing with excitement, hoping that now that she had her quirk, no-one would bully her any more, and she could fit in - her being a superhero didn't even fit into it. But it didn't matter to her schoolmates, who still treated her as pathetically as they did before, and her hopes were shattered. But that day, as her most common assailants - a pair of girls with strong powers - laughed at her, another person stood up for her - a boy with no quirk at all, a quirkless.

The bullies were surprised, but quickly went back to laughing at Ran - and the quirkless now, too - but after the boy had defended her, their words didn't affect Ran very much at all. They left soon after, chuckling among themselves. Ran looked at the quirkless, awe on her face, and asked why he defended her, when he had no quirk. What he said was that she was proof that even though he was quirkless, she gave him hope that he could one day get a quirk of all his own and become a hero.

What the boy said reawakened her dream to become a superhero. With her new quirk, she took a class in acrobatics, to help her with agility and ways to utilize her limbs, and she started to study harder. She aimed for the top - for UA High. And there was nothing that could stop her now.

Even so, the bullying had left its mark. She is shy and awkward, and it takes a lot for her to trust people fully, although her inner energy comes out on occasion when she is truly happy or excited.

sorry for the double post but here you go

she's not the most original character, but i did put thought into her

also i was thinking if the person with the same last name as her gets in there ccould be some dumb gags

"I'm Daradara Yu, what brings you around here~"
 
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