Glorious Shotgun Princess (ME/Exalted) Thread #2

Of course, there is the problem that the Reapers haven't been defeated. This was a critical victory, make no mistake, and the galaxy now has time to prepare for the Reapers, but the Reaper War can, and probably will, still happen.
 
GreggHL said:
Burrowing through carapace, through flesh metal and bone, it continues its corse before it buries itself in the ground below Harbinger.
Change the word "Corse" to "course".
GreggHL said:
And all that prayed has gone to me.
Change the word "Prayed" to "prayer".
GreggHL said:
Forming into the symbol of the sun at dawn behind him, and the pinions of a great golden eage.
I know you're using an older word for age with "Eage" there, but next to know one is going to catch that. I myself thought it might have been a misspelling of some sort until I googled it to doublecheck.
 
There's a place you have "eage's pinions" where I imagine you meant "eagle's pinions," too.

Anyway, um.

What's interesting about Omega 4?

(Also, the Catalyst might have dodged a bullet there. I was worried it might accidentally peek in on a SWLiHN-system-in-progress.)
 
... *sigh*.

Darn it, Leaping Sky, have you no Genre Savvy at all? You never seal away your worst enemy in the same place as some sleeping horror, it always goes wrong.

(Never actually played ME; here from Exalted.)
 
Pulsor93 said:
"But they've taken down the main leader of the main bad guys! How could the story possibly continue?!"
That, my friends, is why I believe Gregg to be something other than human (maybe an octopus, in fact); it's because there's probably a third boot that's going to drop.

On that note, congrats on apparently, actually completing a fanfic, Gregg! Even if it is just Book One in a series.
I really wish there were more writers like you in Hollywood; I also hope that Anno will one day notice your other work and decide to adapt it.

Off-topic, any chance you'll go back to your [PROTOTYPE] fic?
That's because the Reapers were small time.

The Yozi's are now aware of ME universe, and they are coming.
 
So far the conflict has been against what is basically a single third circle deva of Autothon, that was split off and became his own being. Autothon is most dangerous do to his ability to invent and create, which isn't the part that the reapers were made from. The entire conflict is adds up Autothon having an argument with himself. A fragment of a primordial against all of the galaxy with the rest of that primordial helping.

Oh! Right and we now have a complete yozi out of her cage and I doubt she isn't looking for a way to bring her master/lover out of it as well. Several of her powers let her take control of AI's just like the Geth, do similar stuff to mortals through manses, which I'm sure she can make. Oh and Chirality Prohibition Index.

The heroes haven't run out of challenges, they've finished the tutorial. Now it's time for the real epic quest to begin.
 
I wouldn't be so certain that Harbinger's going to get sealed. Remember what else is on the other side of Omega-4, and what happens to craft that drift too close to it...
 
Pulsor93 said:
Also, any chance that Gregg might rescue Kai Leng from the scrappy heap in this story?
Beautiful thing is that Miranda had Lazarus all planned and prepped when Jane turned out to be alive and glowing. As it turns out, cybernetics are so advanced in the ME verse. She could rebuild Kai Leng.

Even if she only had, say, his head above the jaw~
 
Pulsor93 said:
DAYUMN!

How about General Oleg Petrovsky? He's a higher-up in Cerberus, Kai Leng's one of the lieutenants?

Ooh! Does this mean we'll get Exalted/ME versions of the Winds of Destruction?!:D
Petrovsky showing up completely out of nowhere with a gigantic robotic mantis, and then sumo stomping to be turned into a superhuman giant via the magical power of nano machines where he would proceed to become a Super Objectivist would possibly be the best way to redeem the character.
 
Iri would be voiced by Tara Strong.
Persistent Righteous Protector would be Peter Cullen.
Steven Merchant would be Autobot- he's pretty much Wheatley, with his incompetence replaced by terrifying, insane competence.
 
deadman2020 said:
Great now I have an image of Twilight Sparkle with eight-teen arms and spider mand-I DID NOT NEED THAT IN MY HEAD.


Lollipop Chainsaw. Iri, in a cheerleader outfit and short skirt. With a chainsaw.
 
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A crackle of blue and white, and another pulse of air. They react quickly this time, Jane digging her heels in, others gathering behind Wuffles or taking a step back. With a blur of motion and sound, Kal'Reegar appears. One arm around the waist of Hannah Shepard, the other hand holding Autochthon.

"Okay, Tali probably has you branded," Hannah says, and shrugs, "But you kind of earned this."

She grabs Kal by the collar, and mashes her lips against his. The quarian's eyes go wide. Behind Jane, hand on her shoulder, Tali narrows her eyes.

"Thanks for the lift." Hannah smirks, patting Kal on the chest, and stumbles out of his grasp. Jane darts forward, question on her lips, pulling her mother into an embrace. But Hannah holds her back with one arm.

Holding a hand up, a finger up, she turns away from Jane, bends over, and vomits. Once more, the assembled go silent. For good reason.

"Hrp." Wiping her mouth with her sleeve, Hannah pulls herself up. "Iri's fucking building my next ship."

Kal blinks. Still holding Autochthon, he opens his mouth to speak, works his jaw, and looks out at the field. Tali steps forward, arms folded and eyebrow cocked. And then she looks down and sees the sphere in Kal's hand.

"What happened?" she asks, gently taking the broken Maker from him. She turns it to her, turns the open and dilated eye.

The silver plates shift, as he turns his gaze towards Tali. A final, faint wheeze. And the light gutters and dies. The metal goes cool to the touch, the last wisps of smoke and light escaping it. Autochthon, final subsoul of the Great Maker, dies.

"Not. On. My. Watch." They look up at the sound of the booming, high pitched voice. Jane grabs her mother by the crook of the elbow and runs. Liara's eyes go wide and she raises a finger, a biotic bubble forming around herself, Kaidan, and Mordin as he tilts his head. Javik looks up and cocks a double eyebrow.

Glowing from re-entry, fur blackened, hull partially melted, Iri's colossus form slams into the ground. Rising up, a blast of force dispersing the dust and soot, the mandibles open and discharge all the spiders.

Dozens, hundreds. Perhaps almost a thousand, they issue forth from the open mouth of the giant spider. Small ones, skittering on dozens of legs. Ones that are a head suspended between fifteen long legs. Shorter versions of the eighteen legged avatar. They skitter out, over the field, past the others. Past Jane, who watches the procession with a cocked eyebrow.

Past Javik, who does not react at all. Past Tali, who watches from her perch atop Wuffles' shoulders, holding onto his head.

As the last of the spiders disgorge, Iri's more familiar avatar climbs atop the head of the colossus, and pumps an arm into the sky.

"Build the Gate!"

The spiders get to work. Massive clouds of dust are thrown up as they form a perfectly round hole tossing soil and rock into the sky within seconds, or brought up in the handfuls to build the foundation. The parts, chunks of Harbinger are collected, the horde of construction spiders moving around them with inhuman speed, inhuman grace.

Dozens rush forward. They watch as they advance, charging towards the new source as it steps out of the wreckage of Seeker with heavy foosteps. "Oh god!" James Vega shrieks, the warstrider flailing as the spiders overtake him. "Oh god they're everywhere!"

It is brought down, plate by plate consumed, disassembled, taken for parts. They cycle like a conveyor belt, like a river, taking each piece of the robot and into the rising structure. Within seconds, the strider is gone, leaving James on the ground. Each hand holding only the handle and bits of leather strap, he continues shrieking.

One minute passes. A half circle built into the ground, high enough for a man, wide enough for two. It pulses with lines of gold and arcs of electricity. The haphazard circuitry and wiring wrapped around the frame spark, and space within it folds. Pulling back, stretching.

And then tearing, forming into a funnel, a vortex of light, sound, and wind. It churns, hums, pulses. The spiders gather, climbing back into the mouth of the colossus, save the main avatar of Iri. She climbs down, standing in front of the gate and turning to the others.

"We can save the Maker," she explains, "But I need one of one of" Her head twitches. The eight eyes shift, a red glow flowing over them. Steam vents from the side of her neck. "Clarity release and I need you."

A thin arm points. Towards Kal.

He blinks. Turns to the others. Turns to Tali, still on Wuffles, and opens his hands to catch Autochthon. "Me?" he asks, "Why me?"

He wonders why he asks the question. On some level, on some deep place past just flesh and thought, he can feel it. Pulling at him. Saying his name. A gloved hand gently squeezes his shoulder, and he turns to the hooded face of Kasumi Goto.

"Go," she says, "They're calling for you. It's time to meet them."

Kal turns to the portal. Back to Kasumi.

"Who?"

She smiles, ever knowingly. "The Maidens."

Kal looks down, at the still eye of the god in his hands. Deep breath, staring straight at the portal, Kal'Reegar takes a step forward and passes through.
 
Time and space become ideas. He is pulled, and pushed, becoming a single string billions of miles long before knitted back together as he should be and always has. Kal'Reegar takes a deep breath, and what was the grasslands of Eden Prime becomes a golden plain that stretches out into the horizon.

He cannot see an end to it. Only the curve in the distance. Walking, Autochthon's still corpse in his hands, he can see the curve is not a curve. It is a pillar, stretching up into the sky. Walking along the golden plane- that the nerve stim sensors in his suit assure him is actual gold- he sees it stretch like a spear, into the sky.

Until it stabs the white sun overhead.

He knows this place. In memories older than bone. Older than stone. Walking, he does so in a straight line. Even as the landscape shifts around him. Not with features, but with people. They appear with every step. Beckoned by his presence. Some like him. Humanoid, bipedal. He spots some that resemble quarian, human, asari, turian.

But different. Their skin reflects the light like polished metal and varnished clay. He can tell the differences; the humans are not human. He can see the differences in the eyes, in the hands. How the ones he thought were turians are larger, more elongated. Some even have wings, or walk along four legs.

Some are not even vaguely humanoid. He sees striding giants of brass and silver, walking bent over along their hands and feet. He sees a silver streaked, prismatic fish swimming through the sky, along a creature which resembles a Reaper. Except its shell is rigid, its form smaller, and three eyes watching on either side of its head.

The procession grows. Hundreds become thousands, become millions. Each of them unique, each of them glittering under the white sunlight of the constant sun. Each of them singular and solemn, in perfect cadence behind Kal'Reegar.

A final rumble, and three toed feet make the gold ripple. It stands on four legs; broad chested, broad shoulders, olive and gold. Massive, immense and majestic, it strides on four legs. Three fingered hands clenched into fists. A golden visor betraying no emotion as it lowers itself to level its masked face with Kal.

A burst of steam blows back Kal's hair and the giant speaks.

"I am Persistent Righteous Protector," it booms, its voice deep, imposing...and paternal. "Welcome to Deus Machina, Chosen of the Maiden of Journeys."
 
The Maidens are really weird.

They don't even have an origin story they just showed up one day while the Primordials where making creation. One of the theories is they were made in the distant future and were sent to the past.
 
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With a groan and a twitch of his mandibles, he lowers himself onto the ground between Tali and Jane. Adjusting his visor, sipping his coffee, he looks up at the sky and ponders. And then looks down at the cup and cocks a scaly brow. Levo-coffee.

He shrugs. Magic, he credits it to, and continues drinking. "So, not to be an optimist for once," Garrus says, "But did we just win?"

Jane Shepard laces her hands behind her head and flops down next to Garrus. The sky of Eden Prime is gold with the sunset, darker reds and oranges joining it from the fires still being put out. It will take some time to fix this- an entire colony, trained to the point where they could get N6 designation. Or N7.

Two invasions by the Reapers on the same world. A dreadnought destroyed. Several cruisers and destroyers. She hasn't even tried to count. And yet. And yet.

"You know Garrus," she says, "I think we did. I really think we did."

Tali flops down next to Garrus, her helmet recovered from the battlesuit, but in her hands now as she relishes breathing unfiltered air. "Let's count. The Relays? The center of their trap? It's now completely cut off from them."

Liara walks over, lying down on the grass next to Jane. "Not to mention that Harbinger, their leader, has been destroyed."

"I'll believe that when I see the body, actually." Jane glances over. Kaidan, sitting next to Liara, shrugs and continues. "Last seen with a mass relay jumping him out. It out. With luck, he got jumped into the center of the galaxy." He sips his coffee. "With our luck, he got jumped to the center of the galaxy and to help."

Jane cocks an eyebrow. Tali works her jaw. Liara shifts over and smacks him on the arm. "Don't be a fatalist."

"I'm not being a fatalist." Kaidan brings his hands up, shaking his head. "Look, I'm just saying the Reapers have resources we haven't figured out yet. I'm just being smart."

"We just got through a small war, which I will remind you involved you throwing me out of a shuttle-"

"I said I was sorry-"

Jane works her jaw, watching them go back and forth, propping herself onto her elbows as Liara stands. The yelling goes back and forth, of incidents, things on Illium, something about agreements, being professional, and confidentiality- which Liara says with longer words than Kaidan does. It continues for a good minute, and ends with Liara poking him in the chest.

And Kaidan grabbing her hand, pulling her close, and kissing her. Jane cocks an eyebrow. Tali's jaw drops open. Mordin turns from a conversation with Wuffles and begins recording the two on his omnitool. "Nephew doing thesis on interspecies mating," he explains, "Helping with research."

Garrus sniffs the air. "They had sex."

Jane sighs. Tali turns to Garrus fast enough that Jane can hear her neck popping. And Liara's pleased moan turns into an enraged squeak, breaking the kiss and turning to Garrus.

"How the hell do you know that?!" She marches towards the turian, as Kaidan shrugs and looks skyward. Garrus only smiles, clicking his mandibles, and the spinning silver disc of the full moon floats over his forehead.

"Magic."
 
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