- Location
- Chile
I hope it's something silly yet awesome.
Like Kamen Rider Fourze or Wonderful 101.
General OWL. (RWBY SI)
- Thread starter Jaune Pendragon
- Start date
Like Kamen Rider Fourze or Wonderful 101.
- Pronouns
- They/Them
Mass Effect please let it be Mass Effect
Oh I know stellaris would be cool!
Prismatic Glaive
Friend to the Owl of Civilization
Honkai Impact 3rd has some nifty tech, especially Anti-entropy mecha tech. It would be more awesome if it was Previous Civilization.
darkkrusty
The Forsaken
- Location
- England
halo tech! nothing says fuck you grim than a MAC cannon aiming downwards towards the planet. Also they use Hydrogen as a fuel source, great element to work with!
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Ryven Razgriz
I need a Gun and I'll let you know 'What's up?'.
- Location
- South East Asia
Ooh! Nice this is getting updated again.
So quick question I was getting the vibe that he didn't like or even hated Ozpin was I just misreading it?
Jaune Pendragon
King Of Servants
- Location
- Avalon
He simply doesn't want to get into the useless war against Salem. However that doesn't mean he doesn't like him. He infarct admires Ozpin for defending mankind for so long.
Ok thx for clearing it up for me
ITS ALIIVE ALIIVE
Good to see this fic not being dead even if it's been awhile
Good to see this fic not being dead even if it's been awhile
Jaune Pendragon
King Of Servants
- Location
- Avalon
Include endless fuel mode?
- Location
- California
Of course, the defense gird gets activated. Some children are lost outside.
- Location
- England
Some corrections. Summary: Capitalization, using one 'l' where there should be 'll'.
balloon / off the ground
off the ground
answered / sipping
here, Ozma,
a god
Beacon
child
village
Wouldn't that be 'conspicuous'?
Satellite
Background
monopropellant
balloon
balloon's camera / camera feed. Also, redundant sentence is redundant.
Earth / alternate Earth
rocket
Remnant's / Earth's
monoprops
Remnant
balloon
geosynchronous
geosynchronous
This sentence seems to be missing some words.
monoprop's
spy satellite / Command and Conquer / Angel Beat's
Ren
kids
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Flutters Is Shy
Light the fire, it's time to write!
- Location
- Land of Ze Governator; In Perpetuity
*hugz the author*
Jaune Pendragon
King Of Servants
- Location
- Avalon
*hugs back tighter*
Corrected Thank you!
You forgot to add this..
You're quite welcome.
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Jaune Pendragon
King Of Servants
- Location
- Avalon
want a spoiler for what will happen in a few chapters?
Sure
- Location
- a nice place
YES! IT LIVESSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! god i cant wait for the next chapter.
Love the story but disliked this chapter. SI purposely misrepresented his ROB as a god knowing Ozpin would assume he meant the god of light or darkness. Despite saying that he is a fan, he is acting more manipulative and sort of dumb/unrealistic. If you trust/respect Ozpin, all you had to do was say that a third outside party/god was getting involved and give some examples/ideas. This chapter tainted the amazing space launch with the SI's manipulations or ignorance. Hope we get an explanation for this discrepancy. Still, love the story and glad it's back.
