What the fuck?
No, I'm not obliged to address *every* single sentence you make.
But fine, what points would you like me to address? That the story *should* have *genderflipped* characters, just to achieve a better gender balance?
AFAIK, genderflipping characters is generally frowned upon, unless genderflipping them is the whole point of the story. And if EY had genderflipped them, then any deviation of characterization between them and the original would have been even more "evidence" of sexism.
Fine, one last good faith go. Rewriting the canon laws of Special Powers is also generally frowned upon, unless the base premise. He did it anyways.
He was completely comfortable ignoring canon when it suited him. But making a not sexist story? Not a priority. Nevermind he actually made a far more sexist work.
As to addressing things...
Ah, yes. Hermione challenges and opposes Harry... By buying fully into his bizarre and unusual worldview. Harry becomes the 'General' of a ridiculous and absurd game of full contact paintball, and therefore Hermione also buys fully into the paradigm of full contact paintball being important. Harry acts as if he is the Hero Chosen By Destiny in an absurd and cliche video game plot; Hermione challenges this by creating a League of Ineffectual Witches who immediately get in over their heads and are ultimately saved by Harry Potter's Magnificent Plan.
At no point does Hermione's 'intelligence' allow her to actually meaningfully question or oppose Harry or his worldview; on the contrary, every act that she takes, even the ones that 'oppose' him, serve the narrative purpose of promoting him.
Now, as far as Hermione's getting killed offscreen goes, It's been a while since I read this bit, so I misremembered slightly- Hermione doesn't die offscreen, she is eaten alive offscreen and survives with barely enough energy to pitifully mewl that her death wasn't Harry's fault.
Which makes sense, as her death isn't about her- Much like every other portion of her character, it's designed to move Harry's story forward. Here is the section where it happens (End of Chapter 88, start of chapter 89):
Ironically, I'd still say that this counts as being killed offscreen, given the damage has been done before we have a chance to see it; We aren't given a chance to see Hermione's desperate last stand, which would be an actual opportunity for the story to show her fighting for her own sake and her own life.
In fact, the story goes for double the pain; Hermione gets killed offscreen, and then dies in Harry's arms.
(Please note: During the process of Hermione's death, Harry kills the Troll with astonishing ease, transfiguring it's brain into acid in the space of a single sentence. Just in case you thought the creature that savagely murdered his 'rival' was actually a meaningful threat to him, or something.)
Now, I know you're not going to actually accept any of this criticism- Less Wrong fanatics never do, not when they can just go 'no u r a sneer artist' instead- but I felt like it was worth the time to establish what actually happened in the show, since your baseless assertion that I didn't actually read the fic might have muddied the waters otherwise.
Grimnir makes this lengthy detailed post. You quote
less than a sentence to say this:
So basically damned if she does, damned if she doesn't. There's no plausible course of action whatsoever that Hermione could have taken that would have left you satisfied. If she is better at him in classes, this is bad, because it compares her to him. If she opposes him ethically as she does and attacks his decision and judgment, as she does, this is bad because it's "buying fully into his bizarre worldview". If she forces him to take his transfiguration experiments to McGonaggal and Dumbledore for prudence's sake, and Harry acknowledges and apologizes to her for being right all along, that's bad because of... whatever.
Rather than acknowledge or disprove anything he said, you elect to rewrite reality to being he would be dissatisfied with all possible realities.
@Grimnir, would you say the original Harry Potter books were sexist?
After all, if the answer is 'no', that proves that there are versions of reality with Hermione that are not sexist in Grimnir's mind, after all.
Likewise, you jumping back to go 'oh but you didn't concede a point, therefore I don't have to argue at all!' is more attacking weakness crap, not actually addressing any but the weakest statements, not even to admit they happened.
As it happens, sure, I misremembered. I believe it was probably the fact that Harry had no
fantasy books that I misremembered as having no
fiction books, which is indeed a difference. I did not consider that worth a post on it's own, in large part because, once again,
that was an attack on the weakest point.
Why is Harry making all these references? Why does no one recognize them in universe? These questions
are not answered by him
potentially having read the source materials,
maybe. But instead, you just try to bust me for misremembering
and put no effort into addressing why he might be reference man.
Likewise, before I concluded you were dealing clearly without good faith, you pulled less than a sentence to insinuate that I am baselessly accusing it of sexism, while claiming it 'inherited' canon's gender balance. Hmmm, what's this:
No, I specified from the start, that I could count at least 8 girls with characterization in HPMOR in Harry's year, as opposed to only Hermione in the original.
I didn't forget Ginny's and Luna's existence in the original series, I assure you.
What is Lavender & Parvati like in the original Harry Potter? Where were they, that it was Ron & Harry that had to rescue Hermione from the troll in the bathroom?
Lavender & Parvati didn't exist at all, in the original HP.
And I would argue that Ginny never started existing at all, even in later books, except as Harry's love interest.
Oh right. You proudly claiming it altered the gender balance, by fleshing out less used characters. So, tell me? Why should I not hold it's sexism against it, when it is willing to elevate no namers,
but not actually have any independently important female characters?
You have a quantum defense here: MoR is better than canon, look how it did better, oh but it's only because it was
constrained by canon's gender balance it has these
fictional, perceived issues.
At best, it did better than canon. I disagree, but saying it was constrained by canon (that it ignores large parts of) is a lie, and a bad dodge for the fact it is sexist.
Unless you'd like to explain how it isn't, rather than 'it's not sexist' *get disproven* 'it's not it's fault!'. Rather than concede the point, you turn it into not it's responsibility. But only after you fail to excuse away the flagrantly sexist elements.
Likewise...
But fine, what points would you like me to address? That the story *should* have *genderflipped* characters, just to achieve a better gender balance?
AFAIK, genderflipping characters is generally frowned upon, unless genderflipping them is the whole point of the story. And if EY had genderflipped them, then any deviation of characterization between them and the original would have been even more "evidence" of sexism.
This is bullshit that starts from the position that you are not only right argumentatively, but that you are correct about a negative preconception of me- that in all possible versions of MoR, no matter what he did, I would be screaming 'sexism', because I'm not reacting to anything, I'm looking for things to hate. I have no evidence of sexism, I only have "evidence", which is to say I am self evidently wrong.
Because you said so. Not that you'll, you know, offer proof, or explain how something I have called out as sexist is, in fact, not. Oh no. Just imply I'm looking for excuses and have no arguments, rather than addressing the ones I put forward. While you meanwhile retreat behind yet another new 'defense', having abandoned the prior rather than, you know, defending your argument.
This is uncivil, even if we assume it's true. Rather than attacking the argument, you attack me to try to claim I have no point and would always make up bullshit to hate the story for, for, uh, reasons. And therefore all my arguments can be ignored and/or dismissed out of hand. Because.
Because I'm obviously just making shit up and not trying to argue in good faith.
If you genuinely think that, report me. Don't just drop constant implied character attacks while bluntly refusing to address any argument you neither can call out on some technicality nor try to spin into me being a Bad Person Who Is Wrong Because I Just Hate The Work Because I Want To, rather than, you know, for the actual content.
I can be wrong about points. I acknowledge that. But trying to turn me into That Guy That Is Making Up Whatever Justifies His Hateboner is both wrong and uncivil.