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The girl moved through the back alley with uncanny skill, her eyes hidden...
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Heaven Canceler

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Flawed Spark

The girl moved through the back alley with uncanny skill, her eyes hidden behind a set of military goggles that glowed in a low neon-green. She wore a school uniform, a brown button up jumper and a checkered blue skirt with tan criss-crossing lines which reached down to halfway of her thighs. One could see a white shirt under the jumper and everything was rounded up by a bow tie. All in all, one could have thought her to be a normal middle school girl that was taking a shortcut to her school through a side street. Of course, that was only if you ignored the above mentioned goggles and the machine gun she was holding in her hands.

Her movements were fluid even as she stepped into the backyard that was supposed to be the stage for this experiment. The white haired boy standing opposite of her looked on bored as she stepped out of the shadows, his crimson eyes following her movements without fail. He was wearing a black shirt with white striped and jeans, contrary to the girl's more themed clothing. He couldn't be older than 16, but the way he looked made him seem older and more dangerous in a way few could understand.

There was no living being in the area aside from a couple dark feathered birds that observed them from a rooftop.

Both remained silent for a few moments before the albino asked something.

"Hey, I don't have all day time, how long until I we can get this shit done?" His voice was filled with anger and a sense of mocking that would have enraged most. The girl though remained calm and answered without showing any emotion.

"It is 14 hours and 21 minutes, 4 minutes until the experiment begins, declares Misaka while scanning the landscape." The now named Misaka said so while clearly observing the area. They were in some kind of industrial area, though it appeared empty and somewhat run down.

"Trying to get the better of me? Bah, you should just go down and save us the time. It is not like you useless little dolls are more than a plaything for me." The boy continued to speak in his spiteful tone, emphasizing it when he called the girl useless.
Misaka couldn't wonder why he continued to talk like this. Was it maybe some kind of psychological warfare technique meant to unsettle her? She brushed aside a couple brown strands of hair from her face.

Still, the white haired boy seemed to be satisfied waiting for now, just silently glaring at the girl. The female readied the machine gun she was carrying around, waiting for when it would begin.

"This is the first time we are doing this outside, which number are you anyway?" The white haired boy asked finally, his eyes looking at her but not really seeing her.

"I am Misaka 8912, explains Misaka with some annoyance." A beeping sound started and both looked at the small wrist watch the girl was wearing.

"The Experiment starts, says Misaka as she readies her gun." Without another warning, she shot the white haired boy a number of times. He blinked in slight surprise, though he didn't make any moves to get away.

Booming sounds filled the air as the bullets hit, only to change directions shortly before touching the boy's skin. The projectiles fired in all directions and the girl jumped back after giving out a sound of pain. Her left shoulder bled slightly, though it was only a grazing shot.

The boy laughed, an insane smile appearing on his face.

"Is that all? They said you would get better given enough time, but maybe I'll need to kill a few hundred more before this becomes more than child's play." With these words, the silver haired male started to slowly walk in her direction.

Misaka run away, vanishing in one of the many dark streets. The boy continued to walk slowly but steadily in the direction he had last seen her.

As he stepped into the area between two buildings, he looked left and right, but didn't see the girl. Well, he hadn't really tried to move very fast.

"Come on, get here or do you want me to blow up the entire place to get at you?"

Silence answered him and the face of the young combatant formed into a scowl as he started to curse the girl loudly.

A sound was heard, loud and clearly. It was a shrill alarm signal. The boy's eyes opened as suddenly a loud explosion was heard and the walls left and right from him crashed down upon him. He gave a slight sound of surprise before being swallowed by the debris and vanishing in a cloud of white and brown dust.

The brunette stepped out from one of the many houses, looking into the cloud with her goggles.

"This place is in a state of decay, hitting the right point makes everything fall apart, comments Misaka on Accelerator's little problem." The girl was still holding onto her shoulder, though the bleeding seemed to have stopped. She stepped back as suddenly the dust cloud lifted, blasted away like a strong wind had appeared. Her mouth opened and she coughed as the material filled her lungs.

"Hahahahaha! Not bad, maybe you are actually getting better at this." Mad laughter preceded Accelerator as he moved forward with inhuman speed, almost crashing into Misaka, who jumped aside barely. His feet touched the ground, lines forming in the asphalt due to the sheer strength behind his movement, but he remained perfectly fine. His hair was moving wildly like a strong wind was going on and the grin on his face spoke of murder and pain.

Lightning sparked between the boy and the girl and the brunette fired electric bolts through the air and at the albino. But the energy seemingly flowed around him without effect. He laughed only louder and moved to strike her with his hand.

The girl tried to jump aside, but he moved with impossible speed and his hand struck her ribcage, a loud snapping sound echoing through the back alley.

She screamed loudly for but a moment and fell down clutching her chest with one hand. She was still holding the gun with her other hand though and then she pointed it shakily at the white haired killer and shot before he could react. Unfortunately, she was only rewarded by more pain as a hole opened in her right leg.

The exchange couldn't have taken more than a minute, five minutes if you counted from since the beginning of combat.

"Don't try to move too much, I broke most of your ribs, so this should hurt as hell. Now how to complete this? Oh I know, I 'll just step on and through your chest until you have a big hole." He grinned in a way that only the most horrible monsters could and raised his right foot above her chest.

There Misaka lay in front of her death. She wasn't scared of the end. Her experiences and her knowledge would be engraved among her siblings, the memories wouldn't be lost. Yet she couldn't help but want to take another breath even as that foot moved forward, even as her end came closer.

"I wish I could see the sky again."

An innocent thought of one that was only following her orders to the end. It was solely because the world was beautiful, because she wanted to see more of it.

The girl closed her eyes for some reason, waiting for the end while silently wishing for a chance to experience more of the things that exist.

Warmth enveloped her and a tiny light was ignited in a place that is far and yet so close.

And the girl breathed and opened her eyes,

The view was beautiful and terrifying. She floated through space, no air filling her lungs although she had tried to breathe in and yet she didn't feel like she needed it right now. Glowing swirls of an unknown substance were flying through a seemingly empty space, acting like a mix of fluid and plasma to her eyes. There was nothing she could see, aside from the endless swirls of energy that were tearing and clawing against anything they could find. In fact, Misaka could feel the power of this place trying to rip her to pieces in some fundamental way. She knew that it couldn't kill her right now, but it was slowly wearing down whatever protection she had.

The brunette had no idea how she knew all of this and it was actually more of a vague feeling, but she squirmed and tried to move.

And thus she did, flying through the Blind Eternities in a mad jumble and ripping a hole into another reality.
 
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I'm actually surprised you didn't build it around Shirai Kuroko, who is an actual y'know, teleporter. But Misaka Imouto is much more interesting if put into many other situations. Watching this thread.
 
I'm actually surprised you didn't build it around Shirai Kuroko, who is an actual y'know, teleporter. But Misaka Imouto is much more interesting if put into many other situations. Watching this thread.
Or , Awaki who's not only a teleporter but one with psychological issues that screw her up when she tries to teleport herself.

Still, as you say, Misaka Imouto should have some interesting reactions. If she doesn't go catatonic or completely freak out from losing Radio Noise contact, anyway.
 
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A New Beginning

Her eyes opened with a flutter as she felt the pain blasting through her chest. She saw around herself, trying to think through the horrible torture she was experiencing. A voice was heard speaking with haughtiness, though she couldn't understand what it was saying. It sounded male and harsh, giving off a feeling of unfriendliness that even she could get.

"..............................."
"Just a random whore, just look at what she is wearing. Should just take whatever she has of worth.
Another voice answered this one also male, though calmer and holding a certain detachment. It sounded warning for some reason.

"................................"
"She looks pretty badly hurt and seems a bit young for a whore. Maybe she got in the way of one of the thieves? Just don't kill her. I don't want to have one of them after me."
She blinked in confusion, only seeing lights that seemed to take strange forms. Misaka tasted blood after a moment and for a moment she wondered whether she had a concussion. The ground below felt soft and wet, and she turned painfully while trying to get a better view on whoever was talking.

She barely managed to move her head in the right direction, while feeling like someone was using her skull as a dummy for gun training. Then she heard another voice clashing into the conversation, this one much louder. The new voice definitely originated from a female and was unfortunately loud enough to give her another bout of headache.

".....................!!!"
"Hey, what are you doing with that girl? Help, someone help!!!"
She couldn't help a small whimper escaping her mouth before she felt consciousness slowly slipping away again.

She barely saw a mop of hair bowing over her while there were steps in the distance.

*Scene Break*

Misaka 8912 woke slowly, feeling sleep leaving her body without any elation. Instead there was still the heaviness of a body that didn't want to move. Her eyes opened again and it took her a while to fully take in the surrounding.

The girl found herself in a bed, ragged and made of sturdy wood. It looked well made, but far from anything she knew from Academy City. The room where she was had a similar architecture, with the only materials used being wood and rock. She wasn't quite sure what to make of the place considering that it looked nothing like the rooms she had seen before. Her head was much more comfortable on top of the pillow on the bed than on the ground from earlier though and she felt positively great compared to earlier. Misaka checked herself for any wounds that would impede her movements and found bandages over her chest, shoulder and some other parts. There was also a paste of some kind smeared over hear forehead.

She was not really sure how to react once she had regained her thought processes fully. Survival had always been an unlikely idea for her and the other clones of Misaka Mikoto once they had started to understand Accelerators ability. Nothing but a mistake of the #1 would have allowed such an outcome. So how was she alive? She remembered a strange... vision of light and flowing material of some kind, but she couldn't even begin to understand what had happened.

It was then that she noticed something. The Network was gone. There were no voices asking for her situation and she couldn't feel the thought network anywhere. Either that or she was so far away that she couldn't connect to the network at all. But that should be impossible if she was anywhere on earth unless she were in a special AIM safe military bunker or something similar.

The small window that made sunlight flow into the room showed that she was not in a special military bunker.

Misaka felt her breath quicken and for the first time since she could remember, dread was forming inside of her.

Her sisters were gone and she was all alone in this place. She moved one hand up to her face, to touch herself as if to check whether she was truly there.

The brunette was absolutely shocked at this situation because all of her life she had been surrounded by the others, shared thoughts, experiences and information.

She couldn't even say what she was supposed to do now that she was alone.

It was likely fortunate that nobody saw Misaka in the time directly after her awakening. She didn't think she could have talked tried to talk with someone and remained calm.

The girl couldn't say how long she just laid there, horrible thoughts fluttering through her head and uncertainty filling her self. After what felt like an eternity to her, she seemed to grasp onto something.

"I need to return, to find them again."

It was the single thought that filled her and gave this girl the strength to continue even with what amounted as a life-changing event having taken place a short time ago.

She was still unsure whether she could work without input from the other Misakas, but she would try her best. It was then that she decided to work her best to understand whatever had happened and also where she had ended up. Her attention moved to the place once again. Whoever took her in had gone out of his way to help her and she decided to wait for them to return. She could always form her opinion of these people afterwards.

After lying in the bed awake for a while now calmer than before, the inhabitants of the house finally discovered that she had left the land of sleep. An adult man and a woman of around the same age stepped into the room. She guessed that they wanted to check up on her or give her medicine of some type. After a moment, she concluded that they were married because they were a man and a woman of similar age living together. They acted carefully around her and tried to talk with her, though unfortunately she didn't understand anything they were saying. This language barrier proved quite frustrating in a short time.

It was certainly annoying. She couldn't even ask where she was. Though she was fairly sure that wherever she was, it was far away from Academy City. A look out the window told her as much, as she saw people not using cars and instead moving either by horse or cart. She saw scenes that looked closer to something one Misaka had seen in a picture book about the middle ages at one point in her past.

She slowly sipped on the cup with a drink the couple's daughter had given her with a nod. She had pushed it in her hand and pointed at it, calling it "Raka". At least she thought she was their daughter.

It looked a good deal like coffee, though it was not at all bitter. From what one Misaka had described, coffee tastes horrible and she probably wouldn't have wanted to drink more than necessary. If she had to describe this beverage, she would say it was stimulating and spicy. Her hands were warming up thanks to the drink, the chill of the cold morning leaving her slowly.

Raka, she would have to remember the name of the drink and maybe she could get another cup later. She wondered if her sisters would also like the drink and decided that once she got home, she would get them all to try it. But first she would have to start learning the local language as fast as possible. She had to understand what had happened if she wanted to return to the rest of the network.
 
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As someone who's never really gotten involved with mtg, does Raka mean anything to anyone? Some clue as to where she is?
 
As someone who's never really gotten involved with mtg, does Raka mean anything to anyone? Some clue as to where she is?
Nope, nothing comes to mind at the instant... though I'm hardly an expert, so that my opinion with a bag of salt. Yes, a bag. (Well, something called Raka comes to mind but it wasn't a drink, at all.)

Fun fact, it also happens that Raka is an actual drink in our Materium too. (No, I'm not talking about 'raki'.)
 
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Dang....

Ah well, just gonna have to wit a bit.

Though, what would be the best/worst place for her to show up?
 
Heh, there is a ridiculous number of death-worlds everywhere that could fit the description we've had of her location so far. Even some out-of-the-way forgotten corner of the Wh40k Materium could fit the bill. I don't know the author enough to make a guess as to what places he/she/it/they could have chosen. (Hey, don't discriminate against gestalt entities.)
 
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Kinda sucks to be her than?XD

Well, I suppose there is a chance she ended somewhere nice......maybe that one planet, P-something. You know before it went to crap......XD

Nawwwwww.
 
Kinda sucks to be her than?XD

Well, I suppose there is a chance she ended somewhere nice......maybe that one planet, P-something. You know before it went to crap......XD

Nawwwwww.
Prospero? Yeah, it was a pretty awesome place for a while. Then it went to hell... not exactly literally, but close enough.

But I strongly doubt it's that one, mostly because it's tech was quite advanced, even though it's magitech/warp-tech proficiency was just ridiculously ahead of it's tech... and it had the whole Egypt-y thing going on.

And now I'm only getting more curious as to where she actually ended up. Entertainment, huzzah!

Edit: Fun fact about Prospero, it was inspired by the eponymous character Prospero from Shakespeares' The Tempest. And 'prospero' happens to be the word for 'prosperous/prosper' in a number of languages.
 
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Can't remember how to spell it to save my life. Ph-something...X? Meh.

Got warped and twisted by some oil...? I think.
 
Phyrexia? It did indeed have to do with phyrexian oil, but it's actually a bit of that left somewhere else that messed up the somewhere else.

Or so do I get out of quickly skimming through the wiki-magics.
 
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This place is delightfully vague. I'm sure I've seen the word 'Raka' referred to as a drink in several novels.

Edit: Is it one of the Trudi Canavan books (Black Magician Trilogy)? IIRC coffee is called Raka there.
Its probly wrong but that's all that comes to mind.
 
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*Ding Ding* The Player gets 100 Points. This is correct.
Congratulations on your victory, Quest.

*Bows*
Do I win anything?:D

More seriously, this will be very interesting. I don't think I've read any fanfic from this series before.
If I remember correctly the mages here don't have spells as such but more like techniques which they can use (and they are pretty overpowered if you think about it. They have a single adaptive shield spell, a single multi-purpose healing spell, can do stuff like separate salt from water and whatnot. ). I wonder how this will interact with planeswalker magic. Oooh, I wonder how black magic will interact with mana bonds.

Most of the bottlenecks for local mages are the amount if mana they possess and their control. The first planeswalker circumvent rather quickly and they are also supposed to be naturally talented mages so control should come quickly too. In any case,she should be able to pick up a lot of useful skills here.
 
I'm a little lot surprised she didn't freak out over not being connected to the network anymore. She's spent her entire life hearing her sister's thoughts alongside her own. Not being able to hear them should freak her out far worse than the single mention at the end.
 
I'm a little lot surprised she didn't freak out over not being connected to the network anymore. She's spent her entire life hearing her sister's thoughts alongside her own. Not being able to hear them should freak her out far worse than the single mention at the end.
Yeah, I was expecting actual panic there. This seems oddly low key. On the other hand, maybe the pounding headache is currently occupying too much of her attention for it to really sink in yet?
 
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