Fiend; or I how I learned to stop worrying and love the Green Sun. (Exalted/Worm)

5
Second Breath 1.5

Leaving the hospital was near-divine intervention. After being poked, prodded, and put in a giant noisy tube, and subjected to the humiliating experience of something called a "Physical Evidence Recovery Kit," as apparently ordered from above, I was released with instructions to report anything out of the ordinary happening.

Barring some obvious complications, I added to myself.

With a clean bill of health, I was rolled out in a wheelchair by Officer Quinn before noon, with my dad and his partner talking in low voices behind me. A squad car pulled up to curb, and Officer Quinn held the door open for me.

"These two fine officers will see you safely home. Stay out of trouble, and it's good to have you safe, Ms. Hebert."

My dad, in the other back seat, and I waved at them as well pulled out. Out of the lot, the officer in the passenger seat twisted back to face us with a grin and asked, "You folks want to get home fast?"

"Yes, please!" I replied. I could really use the time to figure out my pow-

"Go time."

With a squeal of tires and the wailing of an alarm, we screamed down the road, cars parting before us. My dad and I slid back and forth on the seat in back. In an easy 3 minutes, we screeched to a stop in front of our home.

The officer in passenger seat turned back around, and said, "Here you go. It's nice to see you back with us."

Moderately embarrassed, I said a quick, "Thanks," and got out of the car, my dad saying something I couldn't hear behind me. We waved to them as they pulled out at a more sedate pace than before.

"That was bracing," I commented to my dad.

"Hmm," he murmured in agreement. I turned to look at him, and I felt like kicking myself. He looked like he hadn't gotten any sleep. So, him checking in on me hadn't been a dream. He'd probably checked every few minutes.

Or maybe he saw my glow.

Fear compounded guilt, and I turned back away. How much was I actually hiding from him?

We made it inside silently, and went to the kitchen together by unspoken consensus. Dad started a pot of coffee, and I claimed my chair. Breaking the silence, I asked, "What did the doctors say?"

"Perfect health. They said they could find nothing wrong, and that there were no traces of any sort of drug or known compound that could cause memory loss."
Swallowing the lump in my throat, I asked, "And did they have any ideas what happened, then?"

He shook his head. "They asked Armsmaster for advice while he was there, and he said that he made some calls. He did say that new drugs and poisons show up all the time, and it's a losing battle trying to ID them all. And that the usual resources he would put on this case were occupied."

I knew the answer, but had to ask, "Occupied by what?"

"I didn't ask, but I figured that light last night. Did you see it, then?"

"Part of it," I admitted, technically true.

"What did the news say about it, this morning?"

"Only that nothing official had been said, and that there were a lot of heroes sitting on top of it."

He nodded, and sat across from me. He said gently, "You are going to have to go back to school."

Or I could go to Arcadia High instead. I knew that much, at least. Wards got in there, even with the huge waiting list. But, then I'd have to reveal myself to a bunch of people I didn't know, and possibly my dad. And I didn't seem to be their most popular person at the moment, if their response was anything to judge by.

So, I answered, "I know. And I'll have to see them again, and deal with being gone."

Dad's mouth flattened into a line as he remarked, "They didn't even send your school work to me."

Nice to know I hadn't been expected to make it back. "What else happened to them? Suspension and counseling?"

He nodded, and elaborated, "At least till today was what the principal said, with a month of counseling. And a black mark on their records."

Relief? Maybe that wasn't quite the right word. More, satisfaction. Finally.

"Back tomorrow then?"

His eyebrows rose, "Are you up to it?"

"Only one way to find out."

He smiled, then yawned. "I'm glad to have you back, kiddo. What's your plan for the day, then?"

"TV, I guess, to see what the fuss is about," I paused, "And could we go to the library after lunch? I'd like to do some research before I go back to school."

"All right. We'll go after lunch. Lacey dropped off some food yesterday. Half an hour sound good?"

Nodding, I made my way back to couch. I doubted dad would let me out of sight for any significant amount of time, barring school. I'd have to get used to a bit more involved dad.

I suppose I deserved it. Especially hearing that his friends had to have come by to make sure he ate.

The TV clicked back on to the local news.

"-And it's the top of the hour, and here are your updates. So far, we have received no word on last night's event. Local heroes are still at the scene, in numbers. Just in, happier news, the Brockton Bay Police Department reported that Taylor Hebert, the missing student, has been found. According to the police, she managed to make her way back home with no injuries."

"That's good to hear, Tom."

"A spot of good news today, Kathie."

I clicked it off, horror dawning. I was just on the news.

Library, now. My stomach growled.

Well, food. Then library.



The computer line was very short, and I managed to sit down in only a few minutes. Which was good, because my stack of books was rather heavy. I had a smattering of Greek mythology to start with. I needed to figure out my powers, and just as importantly, where they came from.

I hadn't spent much time on it, aside from idle browsing, but I knew Parahumans Online had a vast amount of information of capes. I searched for Titans, Spiders + Black, Creation, and anything else I could remember.

Nothing. Nothing relevant at least. Titan was an Alexandria knock-off. There was a cape who looked like a giant spider, but he wasn't jet black and he wasn't even on the same continent as I was. Creation only brought up arguments in the message boards over some cape's powers. I tapped my fingers in thought. A total bust.

Defeated but not daunted, I tried searching for the previous night's events.

Definitely not a bust. The forums had practically exploded. Capes everywhere had been spotted on high alert. Rumors, from close (I had triggered) to outlandish (The Earth had triggered, and was growing genitalia). Nothing I could do though, until something official came out. I was almost as in the dark as everyone else.

Closing out and leaving the station, I looked for my dad, and found him quite easily. He was sitting not 10 yards away, not reading, but looking up at me. Guilt slowed my steps towards him. He really still didn't believe I was back?

"Ready?" He asked.

"Ready."



Sitting at the kitchen table, munching on bacon, I thought. I had read two of my checked-out books from cover to cover, and had gotten almost nothing. The only Titan that matched what I could do was Astraeus, because of the dusk associations, and that was tenuous at best. Erebus, darkness personified came relatively close as well, but he didn't have a giant green glowy head either.

I was frustrated, as so far the only knowledge I had was that I didn't know who had given me these powers, and that at least 18 hours was sufficient for me to use another power without glowing. I had cloaked myself while dad was in the shower, in to a combination of my dad and the mayor, which had been very disconcerting. I had to wear the Alexandria shirt again, as it was the only thing that fit me without showing off too many changes.

"Can you do it?" My dad asked.

"Hmm?" I mumbled through bacon.

"Go back to school. Can you go back today?"

I nodded, and swallowed. "I can."

He looked troubled, and chewed his words for a moment. "Will Emma and her friends cause you anymore problems?"

I shook my head. Even if I thought they would, I wouldn't say. I hadn't wanted to tell dad about her in the first place. It had slipped out, and now I had to live with it.

"I don't think so. And I think the school won't let it happen again."

He nodded, still looking pensive. "When did... it... start?"

I shifted, uncomfortably. "Around September."

"This September?" he said, pointedly.

"Last," I admitted.

He let out a breath. "I knew you and Emma weren't as close anymore, but this, I didn't expect this."

"Me either."

We were silent until it was time to go to school.


My dad pulled into a parking space in the school lot. I could guess fairly easily that he want to walk me in. I was carrying a pair of notebooks, as all my books and belongings had been left at school when I had fled. I'd probably have to buy new ones.

"No work today?" I asked as we got out.

He shook his head. "They told me to take care of myself and you. I go back tomorrow."

"Maybe the city will listen to you more, after all the sympathy."

He tried hard not to smile, but I could see the corners of his mouth twitch up.

"I'm not sure this was enough to get through to them."

Turning back to him as we reached to doors, I gave him a hug. He returned it with interest. "I don't think I can get you anymore, so it's up to you now."

Breaking away, and in a dead serious tone, he replied, "Well, I think I can manage. Have a good day at school. I'll pick you up at 3."

Waving over my shoulder to him, I walked inside.

Into a crowd of staring students. I moved quickly, embarrassed by the attention. I skipped my locker, not wanting to see if I had any forgotten presents. I slowed down as I saw who waited for me, blocking the way into Mrs. Knott's classroom.

Emma and Sophia.

I ignored them and tried to make my way through, but they didn't move. Resigned, I stopped, and stared at Emma.

"Taylor, we are so glad that you were are okay! We were all super worried about you." I remembered her saying comforting words in the same voice when my mother I had died. But she hadn't said them then with the smile she wore every time she tormented me.

I clenched my fists. So, it wasn't over.

"It's nice to have you back. I even got taken off the track team, so if you need anything I have plenty of free time to help you." Sophia's voice could be described as a combination of saccharine and poisoned.

They turned and walked inside, chatting low voices. A knuckle popped as I clenched my fists tighter, and tears burned behind my eyes. Tears, and a wellspring of hate. My power activated on reflex, and I knew that Emma was but a bug, with no special worth. Sophia nearly made me cough.

Stunned, I fell against the doorway.

Sophia was Shadow Stalker.




A/N: What can I say, cops are always happy to get a kidnap victim back.

And Taylor is still pretty much running on momentum. I wonder what will happen when she trips ~

And lucky she hasn't dipped too far into TED's charms, or else she might start obsessing over Emma. Redheads, don't ya know.

And Engineer! The bridge is out ahead! We are going off the rails!
 
And lunch time! It would have been out 10 minutes sooner, but the bloody server.
Yog said:
The logical thing to do, then, would be to disappear Shadow Stalker somehow? Or make her a hero, so the fame would outshine the blame. Ideally, she should have saved Taylor, but that didn't happen. I guess this would explain her being there with Armsmaster - saving Taylor, or participating (and being "vital to") in the investigation of what happened to her would probably mitigate the fallout (and would both make Sophia miserable and potentially get her killed, both upsides from Piggot's perspective), if it ever came out (P.R. could play the "repentant hero going above and beyond the call of duty to make right her own wrongs" card).
Fairly accurate; the interlude will have a bit more. 2 more sections in Chapter 1.
Yog said:
About this. Why Tinker? There are heroes that empower others (Teacher, some members of Yangban I think, potentially Panacea). The way I see it, this boils down to what PRt would find in the town and in Taylor. If they analyze cocoon's composition and it's an advanced metallorganic polymer, and there are nanites in Taylor's blood (or at least new organs showing on MRT), then the culprit is likely to be Tinker - someone who operates within the laws of physics of the universe, creating advanced technology and bypassing the developmental stages in their research. If the cocoon is simple bronze (and yet still decomposes at an advanced rate) and Taylor seems like a baseline human to all instruments, then they are dealing with a changer / master / breaker / trump cape, whose power is to change others, breaking the laws of physics with their power. The second is arguably more scary (because the first one is more reproducible, but the second one is more unknowable)
So far, Taylor has been checked out to see what happened to her; not how she was changed.

The MRI was ordered by a third party.
Yog said:
It'll be a scary, scary moment when they realize that she started exhibiting powers.
When they realize who Taylor is, it will be a moment of supreme Oh Shit.
Yog said:
Hospital records? Hell, even dentist's x-rays would be enough to conclude that she was changed (unless she had perfect teeth beforehand).
I don't know here to put it, but basically the hospital requested records from her dentist, school, and general practitioner. But they didn't get there in a few hours, and more important was getting her checked out.

And, something else happened in the Bay this morning.
Yog said:
Great to see so many new chapters coming so fast! Don't burn yourself out - you have a great story going.
Well, I at least want to get the first chapter completed ASAP.
 
Uh oh.

Well, at least there's witnesses around, other wise Sophia might not do too well.

That being said, shit is going to get real. You know she'll tell her dad about this, odds are...
 
Hmm... The response seems disproportionate, actually, unless PRT is being pushed by the freaking out Cauldron (who freak out because Contessa is getting error messages from her powers), or has some other prescients pointing at Brockton Bay and crying "danger!". This would indeed cause confusion in the media. Unless the light show also caused some damage to something sensitive / killed someone.

I think Danny is starting to clue in that "perfect health" means perfect health and is tentatively probing Taylor about her willingness to talk about the subject.

Taylor knowing Sophia is Shadow Stalker so early... Any charms she may develop instinctively to take some revenge?

Hmm, Taylor could look up groups with Titan imagery / theme (Greek cape teams maybe?) next, or look up the concept of "Titan".

Spider-shaped cape on a different continent? Anansi?
 
Night_stalker said:
Uh oh.

Well, at least there's witnesses around, other wise Sophia might not do too well.

That being said, shit is going to get real. You know she'll tell her dad about this, odds are...
1.6's working title is Shit Gets Real.

1.7's is Shit Get Really Really Real.
Yog said:
Hmm... The response seems disproportionate, actually, unless PRT is being pushed by the freaking out Cauldron (who freak out because Contessa is getting error messages from her powers), or has some other prescients pointing at Brockton Bay and crying "danger!". This would indeed cause confusion in the media. Unless the light show also caused some damage to something sensitive / killed someone.
Somewhat correct.
Yog said:
I think Danny is starting to clue in that "perfect health" means perfect health and is tentatively probing Taylor about her willingness to talk about the subject.
There is a difference between ignorance and willful ignorance.
Yog said:
Taylor knowing Sophia is Shadow Stalker so early... Any charms she may develop instinctively to take some revenge?
Heh, no comment.
Yog said:
Hmm, Taylor could look up groups with Titan imagery / theme (Greek cape teams maybe?) next, or look up the concept of "Titan".
Part of her haste in searching, was her being uncomfortable out in public after being on the news. She wanted to get and go. She will do more research, later.
 
Yog said:
Taylor knowing Sophia is Shadow Stalker so early... Any charms she may develop instinctively to take some revenge?
The names don't occur to me right now but I know Infernals have more than a few Charms to deal with intangible threats. I'm pretty sure there's a fanmade one somewhere that let's you bitchslap people out of it too.
logiccosmic said:
And lunch time! It would have been out 10 minutes sooner, but the bloody server.
It's always lunchtime when the most shocking things happen don't it?
 
Yog said:
I think Danny is starting to clue in that "perfect health" means perfect health and is tentatively probing Taylor about her willingness to talk about the subject.

Taylor knowing Sophia is Shadow Stalker so early... Any charms she may develop instinctively to take some revenge?
The hierarchy telekinesis set has some that turn it's attacks into mindcrushing assaults. And in the same tree, defending (or attacking) with arbitrary phenomena, though the default is crystal orbs.
 
Yog said:
Taylor knowing Sophia is Shadow Stalker so early... Any charms she may develop instinctively to take some revenge?
Once she picks up Witness to Darkness (which is cool but oh-so-limiting), she can pick up Golden Years Tarnished Black, which is an Ebon Dragon charm based on ruining memories.

To be precise, the charm lets the Exalt ruin memories so that the victim remember nothing but the bad about people in those memories. So much so that even love turns to hate. Charms building on Golden Years Tarnished Black can make it harder for victims to resist, instill horrible/humiliating desires, and encourage victims to act on their newfound feelings.

Nastier still, the usage of Golden Years Tarnished Black isn't obvious, making it difficult for people to pick up on it unless the Exalt has spent too much essence.
 
Chronic said:
Another thing that could really ruin someones day is Shadow Spite Curse.

I also just noticed that most parahumans probably count as essence one creatures, so the Golden Years Tarnished Black + Weak Minds Believe Everything combination could become incredibly potent.
The humans, sure. But they are empowered by what is essentially a 1-2nd circle demon, and their skill ratings (for tinkers, thinkers in particular ) make the combo at least essence 6-8 fairly often. Essence is just a word -- if you've got that kind of power, you aren't Essence 1. Of course, I wouldn't go that far if intuition hadn't already pegged some as stronger than Taylor.
 
Indivisible said:
I don't think she has Witness to Darkness. She didn't have any narration about how bright everything looked when she walked home at night or about how uncomfortable she was in the sunlight. However, after the locker incident I would be surprised if she didn't have Cracked Cell Circumvention.
Well she has Loom Snarling Deception, but probably not witness to darkness so she's most likely started in the Cracked Cell Circumvention tree.
 
6
Second Breath 1.6

Dazed, I fell into a seat in the back row.

Sophia was Shadow Stalker.

Was she a new cape? I hadn't really heard of her before today; but I hadn't paid more than cursory attention to capes. Did Emma and Madison know? Was that why the principal had given her a pardon until I disappeared?

"Taylor?"

What's more, did she know who I was? She had been first on the scene last night, and had been very close to there where I had changed. Had she been tracking me?

"Taylor!"

Startled, I looked up to see Mrs. Knott giving my a concerned smile.

"Are you alright Taylor?"

I nodded, not trusting myself to speak.

"Well, we're all glad to have you back, safe and sound."

I kept myself from rolling my eyes, and merely nodded. She turned back to the board, talking. I tuned her out, and stared at the back of Sophia's head. She was chatting across the aisle with Emma, ignoring Mrs. Knott as well.

What could I do? They were going to still bully me, whether Sofia was a cape or not. I couldn't blackmail her; she would just ignore it, or worse, get more violent. Already, she was the most physical of my tormentors. I didn't want to give her further cause to escalate.

"Taylor, do you have your books with you?" Mrs. Knott interrupted me, again.

"No, I haven't been able to replace them, yet."

She nodded, and directed me to share a book. I'd have to put the important things off, for now.



The last class before lunch was Computing, back with Mrs. Knott. I had a full week of assignments to catch up on; and this was only the first half of the day. At least Emma, Madison and Sophia weren't in here, though several of their hangers-on were. I had been getting mocking glances the whole morning from the trio and their flunkies, whenever the teacher wasn't looking.

Mrs. Knott had given me a test, a preliminary exam, to see where I was with computers, and told me I had the whole period to complete it, followed by free time. She then went back to the rest of the class, who had split off in assignments. My mother had made sure I was computer literate, and I finished it in half the time.

I used the remaining half to look up Shadow Stalker. Parahumans Online had basic information: She was rated as Breaker (who could break physics) 3, Shaker (could affect her environment) 2, and Mover (superhumanly fast) 1. She turned into a shadow-her, and could move and jump faster. And became intangible. So, she was essentially invincible while in that state. Worse yet, the message boards had stories and rumors of stunning brutality prior to her joining the Wards. She had been a solo hero, and rumor was that she had been arrested or charged, and dumped into the Wards as rehab.

In other words, I couldn't hurt her. Physically.

Class ended, and I picked up my notebooks. So far, none of the teachers had told me how much I'd have to pay for new books, but I knew it wouldn't be cheap.

I saw Emma and Madison, but not Sophia in the lunchline. Had she left? On a hunch, I went right out the closest door from the cafeteria, and saw her ponytail bobbing in the distance. I glanced behind me, deciding. No one was in the corridor, so I held the door open, creating a small patch of shadow between it and the door. I stuck my hand within, and pulled. Tendrils wrapped around me, and revealed a mix of Emma and Madison, strawberry blond and average height.

I walked back outside, and stalked after her. Until I nearly slapped myself for foolishness. Was I glowing? It didn't look like it, so was the time between usages without even longer? Relieved, I quickened my pace, trying to keep her in view. I could work on that later.



I followed her for nearly a mile, heading towards the Docks, until she walked into a yard full of storage units, at the edge. I waited across the street, leaning on a wall. What was I doing? Even if I saw Sophia leave as Shadow Stalker, it wasn't proof. I couldn't take it to the PRT, and say, 'Stop her from bullying me or I will release her info.'

And that wasn't even counting that the PRT had colluded to keep her out of trouble. I would bet my powers that the man with Sophia in the nurse's office hadn't been her guardian, but a member of the Protectorate. And, why she was sent to visit me in the hospital; she had to eat crow. And for all I knew, they might even counter blackmail me, or even charge me with conspiracy or something. I didn't know, and that was the problem.

Shadow Stalker left the yard, not from the front gate, but jump/floating from the middle of the yard up to the roof top of a building behind me. Confirmed on the identity.

I followed her, but she was moving fast enough that I could only see the apex of her jumps after only 7 of them. I broke into a run to where I had seen her last, and I realized I had lost her. I couldn't see her on any of the rooftops around me, and I hadn't seen her make any more jumps. She had probably gone on foot for some reason. I turned back around, hoping that I could make it back in time for my dad to pick me up; I was already on shaky ground with him, and I didn't want him to worry more.

A sharp pain exploded in my stomach, and a spray of blood erupted out, misting onto the wall in front of me. An arrowhead poked out, bloody.

Sophia's voice came from above and behind me,"You are going to tell me who you are and why you are following me, and then I might call for an ambulance."



A/N: Ouch.
 
Well isn't that typical of her? Shoot first and ask questions while they're bleeding out.

Either Taylor's about to express her new found bullshitting powers or things are about to get physical.
 
Yeah, I doubt Stalker's going to call a EMT.

Then she has a LOT more questions to explain. Like why she's using live ammo against her probation, why she didn't call for backup, and why she just went and nearly killed her bullying victim.

5 bucks says Pancea's getting a call, or Stalker leaves Taylor to bleed out and die.
 
This would be a great time for Taylor to figure out Godscorch Invective. Or at least, the fact that she can will herself to stop bleeding.
 
I think both of them are going to be surprised when that arrow wound becomes far less debilitating than one would normally think. My meager Exalt-fu leads me to believe that a single arrow to the gut isn't really that impressive. I'm really hoping this ends with an anima banner getting flown and ass kicking ensuing.
 
If only she hadn't shot her with a real arrow she could probably try to pass this off as concern over someone keeping up with her while on the move and thinking she was being tracked by a villain. Concern that this was Tattletale's civilian ID perhaps. Unfortunately she is Shadow Stalker so she shot her with an actual arrow instead like a crazy person.
 
mc2rpg said:
If only she hadn't shot her with a real arrow she could probably try to pass this off as concern over someone keeping up with her while on the move and thinking she was being tracked by a villain. Concern that this was Tattletale's civilian ID perhaps. Unfortunately she is Shadow Stalker so she shot her with an actual arrow instead like a crazy person.
Hence why I'm saying Stalker won't be calling the EMTs...
 
To be honest, I personally expect corpses to start hitting the ground before this chapter's over.

Malfean rage and nuclear hate combined with the Dragon's sheer spite and cold, contemptful malice is one hell of a combination, especially if you add repressed issues and kill-or-be-killed situation to the mix. I'd say that there were moments in the original Worm where Taylor was dangerously close to snapping - now she's got the drive, the incentive, the opportunity.

It's either going for the throat or running the hell away, and since she knows that Sophia's a mover, which makes it hard to flee, and theoretically can't be harmed by anything she'd do thanks to her breaker powers, Taylor's propably going to fake her out, hit her with everything she's got and then try to lose her while she's still reeling from the surprise.

And then it turns out that Ligier's flame can, in fact, set shadows on fire.
 
The only attack that harms intangible enemies that she could have access to at essence 2 is a questionable reading of Life Blighting Emptiness Attack. If you interpret throwing a rock through an intangible enemy as landing an attack that doesn't do damage then you could use LBEA to deal damage with the charm.

If we assume she is essence 3 then she could have access to Godscorch Invective, to upgrade Green Sun Nimbus Fare augmented attacks to hurt the intangible. For those not familiar with Exalted GSNF causes wounds you inflict with a melee attack to burst with green fire. (Which can be upgraded to be radioactive)
 
Shadow Stalker isn't fully intangible. She was harmed by Bitch's dogs rushing through her, it made it harder for her to pull herself back together.
 
Auks said:
Meant to comment on this earlier; this is a neat story.

Anyways, it's worth noting that Shadow Stalker is vulnerable to electrical attacks; a bog standard tazer is enough to hurt her. I'm not familiar enough with Exalted charmsets to know if something like that's available at E2, but it is a possible avenue of attack. Granted, Taylor has absolutely no way of knowing that unless she has some sort of charm that tells her weak points, but it is sort of possible.

Should be very interesting to see how this goes.
Green Sun Nimbus Flare is an attack that can be accessed by recently exalted infernals, and it's only pre-req is Insignificant Embers Intuition which she has been using a lot. It augments attacks so that the site of the attack bursts with green fire. If normal fire is enough to effect her then Taylor won't need the upgrade to allow it to hurt spirits.
 
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