Fiend; or I how I learned to stop worrying and love the Green Sun. (Exalted/Worm)

BlackWarth said:
Well, canonically not only Taylor often fail to realize how creepy her powers are, but also how creepy she act when she is using them.
Being unaware of how horrifying she is to other people without even trying is part of her character.
Sorta off-topic:
The Yozis all have fundamental flaws: IMO, Malfeas cannot Understand Other's Worth, TED cannot Understand Not Serving Self Interest. Taylor has one too.
 
logiccosmic said:
Sorta off-topic:
The Yozis all have fundamental flaws: IMO, Malfeas cannot Understand Other's Worth, TED cannot Understand Not Serving Self Interest. Taylor has one too.
Let me guess - not understanding other's fears? It's less absolute, obviously - she can understand when things are explained to her and she's shown herself from outside, but is still there.

Or maybe not understanding self's image?
 
Yog said:
Let me guess - not understanding other's fears? It's less absolute, obviously - she can understand when things are explained to her and she's shown herself from outside, but is still there.

Or maybe not understanding self's image?
Heh, too much spoiling to say now. But those are in the same ball park.


1.2 has been updated with ES's description, and mine for LSD.
 
3
Second Breath 1.3

My jaw dropped, and I closed it with a neat click. Five days? I had been gone for five whole days?

"Taylor," He paused, "Why are you naked?"

I worked my mouth, and turned back to the sink, placing my left foot in the sink. I need to clean my feet, and to think. I didn't want him to know I was a cape, but I didn't want him to worry. I couldn't begin to think what he had imagined had happened to me. I turned the sprayer on, only for him to reach over and turn it off.

"Taylor, please talk to me."

"I need to clean off my foot," I half-whispered to him, twisting my foot so he could see it.

He switched the sink back on, and picked up the sprayer, angling it so he washed my foot. "Taylor, where have you been?"

"Dad, can you just – well, stop asking for a second?"

He nodded his acquiescence, and we washed my foot in silence, him spraying, and me picking out the few rocks, pieces of asphalt, and glass out. He turned the sink off, and went behind me. I removed my foot, and rested my arms on the sink. Behind me, I heard him open up the linen closet.

What could I say? That I had made a deal with a giant black spider, woken up in a cocoon, and then celebrated New Year's late? That I had a dozen heroes, or more now, in all likelihood, searching over where I changed? And that they didn't seem to be looking for me in a friendly matter?

"Taylor," I turned, and saw that my dad had placed a towel at the feet of my chair at the table.

With a quick, "Thank you," I sat at the table, as my dad busied himself at the stove, fixing a pot of tea.

"I talked to the school on Tuesday. They told me what happened." He turned back towards me as the water heated, moving slowly, and sat down, eyes apprehensive as he looked at me.

"That I ran away?"

"That you were assaulted by some students, and shoved in a locker full of.." He trailed off, not wanting to say what it had contained.

Or maybe he noticed my face twisting into a rictus of hate. A burning, almost soothing ball of the same fire from earlier seemed to ignite in my stomach at his reminder. I took a breath, and forced myself to relax.

"That they locked me in with used, fermented tampons?"

"Yes." He paused, and looked down at his hands on the table. "Taylor, I thought that you were having problems at school, but I didn't think that it was this bad."

"It wasn't," I said, clipped. "They stopped in November."

He frowned, "So this was a different group, or?"

"No. The same ones. Madison, Sophia, and Emma."

His head snapped up. "Emma, as in -"

"Yes, my friend." I nearly snarled the last word, and had to force my hands to stop gripping the table.

"And she was one of the ones -"

"Yes," I cut him off again. He seemed stunned.

The phone rang, breaking the momentary silence. My dad stood up, and crossed to the phone, behind me. At my inquisitorial look, he said, "The police."

"What!?"

He stopped at my yelp, the phone still ringing, and walked back into my view. "Taylor, you disappeared. No one saw you after you left school, and I worried that – that, something bad had happened to you."

He started to the phone again.

"But you don't need to say you found me right away?" My panic stopped him in his tracks, and he returned to his seat. The phone stopped ringing, and I watched him collapse into his seat. On second glance, he was exhausted. He hadn't shaved in days, and had dark bags under his eyes. A stab of guilt pierced my panic, but only intensified it. Scrutiny wouldn't help either of us.

I spoke slowly, "Dad, I don't want to talk to the police right now. I don't want to be shoved in a room and question right after I finally got home."

He let out a breath, and gave me a shaky smile as the phone rang again. "Ok. I'm just happy to have you back. I won't say anything yet."

My own smile answered him. He answered the phone, "Danny Hebert."

"Nothing yet?" The faint sounds of a response.

"But where are they going instead?"

"How long?"

"Okay, okay."

"Please, call me with anything you find out."

He hung up, and moved to the stove, pouring the just boiling water in to a pot. He brought over the pot and my favorite mug, the Woodstock one.

I sipped, and burned my mouth in my haste. I hadn't realized how parched I was. Dad rose from his chair, but I waved him down with the mug. Blowing on the mug, I gathered my thoughts.

"After I left school, I wasn't in the best mood – or place. Did the principal tell you about everything?"

"She said that you were in the locker, had been stuck inside until the janitor let you out, and after you gave your statement, you ran out of the school."

I nearly snorted my tea. "She forgot a part. The part where she said that she couldn't do anything, and brought in all three of them to say, 'I'm sorry.'"

"Taylor, she said that she couldn't do anything without investigation. All three of them have been suspended for the past week, and have to go to counseling."

"She said nothing of the sort! She said she wanted to solve it. And I bet they were only suspended because I was -" I cut off my rant, and an uncomfortable silence fell.

"Taylor, what happened."

"Dad, please. I don't want to -"

He cut me off, "Taylor, do you need a hospital? Are you... injured?"

I caught his meaning. "No! No, no, nothing like that. I just don't want to talk about right now, please. I want to shower and sleep. Please."

He looked like he wanted to argue.

"Dad, I promise I will be here in the morning," I joked with a crooked smile.

He returned it, and walked over to me. He gave me a tight hug, and left the kitchen. I sat back down, and picked up my tea.

"Taylor?" He said, poking his head into the kitchen.

"Yes?"

"Good night, and thank you for coming home."

"Good night, Dad."

I could hear him move upstairs, and his bedroom door closing. I finished my tea in silence.




My shower was strange. Not strange as in blood coming from the showerhead, but strange in that my limbs still weren't in their proper place. Or, were too long. Each of my arms and legs seemed to have gained an inch, at least, overall. My hands looked even more spidery, looking oddly thin.

Stepping out, luxuriating in washing off the grim I had accumulated, I looked in the mirror. And was stunned. I looked different. My skin seemed healthier. Little scars and imperfections I knew had been there before were gone. And, I had more on my chest. Turning, I saw the mole on my lower back was gone.

It looked like I had just gotten an airbrushing in a magazine.

I ran my hands over, feeling if it was another disguise like earlier.

No, all flesh.

Wrapping a towel around my middle, I left the bathroom thinking hard. More powers? Was I a shapeshifter in addition to making shadows disguise me and sensing powers? Sitting on my bed, I focused, practically popping a vein, trying to shift myself to turn my hair red.

Nothing.

I focused, like I remembered from the alley way. I pulled at the shadows, and twisted. I felt the cool shadows from around the bed pool at my feet, and covered myself. But this time I felt an almost prickling of my skin as well, instead of an emptying in my stomach. As they fell away, my hair was red.

And a void black disk sat on my forehead, and a green corona surrounded my head, as bright as any light.







A/N: Danny is a pretty nice dude, who is over his head. And, seeing as she isn't seriously injured, he's happy nothing terrible happened. He was fearing the worst. She could have asked for a chocolate unicorn and gotten it.

And a kitchen with a single fluorescent isn't the best viewing gallery to see differences. Especially in your child, who you thought you would never see again.

Finally; certain emotions are a bit more powerful and easier to trigger now. After all, she took a bit of Malfeas and TED into her.


A bit short, but 1.4 will be more Danny, and something else.
 
Okay, I have to say that you really nailed the characters once again.

Danny was spot on. He was really passive in the early stages of Worm, due to fear of alienating Taylor, and he always seemed to be doing everything he could to accommodate her. I doubt he's going to let this go too far without getting some questions answered, but his hesitance to confront her right away now that he knew she is safe was just perfect.

Taylor did a good job at misdirecting him, but that's only going to delay any revelations. I can't wait to see what you write next.
 
Cytokinesis said:
Okay, I have to say that you really nailed the characters once again.

Danny was spot on. He was really passive in the early stages of Worm, due to fear of alienating Taylor, and he always seemed to be doing everything he could to accommodate her. I doubt he's going to let this go too far without getting some questions answered, but his hesitance to confront her right away now that he knew she is safe was just perfect.
Heh, he's sorta in shock at the moment.

Thank you, I tried to convey doormat.
Harish said:
....and now I find myself unable to patiently wait for 1.4. Great....
Cytokinesis said:
Taylor did a good job at misdirecting him, but that's only going to delay any revelations. I can't wait to see what you write next.
By midnight, PST. Working on it right now.

Also, some people were asking about the Appearance increase in the other thread: The Exalatation gave her what she wanted: power to change things, strength to protect herself, and appearance because fuck those haters.
 
The really fun part should be the one where Taylor and everyone else around her spend a good long while completely misunderstanding what she actually is.

Also, assuming certain things about where Wormverse powers come from have remained the same, certain entities may take an interest when they see something that doesn't at all fit the paradigm. The next Endbringer fight would likely be the first occasion on which she'd encounter the most important of these, of course.
 
Undead-Spaceman said:
Her Coadjutor doesn't seem all that talkative, is that normal for most Infernals?
She's got Coadjutor 0 at the moment. As it said in 1.1, it was severely damaged from carrying the exaltation. Going by EarthScoropion's rewrite, that is.
 
TheSandman said:
The really fun part should be the one where Taylor and everyone else around her spend a good long while completely misunderstanding what she actually is.
Technically, she's a trump along the lines of Eidolon and Dauntless rolled together. Gains (almost any) new abilities with the passage of time, the upgrades are permanent, but she can't produce any power on demand and the powers scale, instead of being arbitrary (the longer she's alive, the more powerful abilities she gets access to).
 
Yog said:
Technically, she's a trump along the lines of Eidolon and Dauntless rolled together. Gains (almost any) new abilities with the passage of time, the upgrades are permanent, but she can't produce any power on demand and the powers scale, instead of being arbitrary (the longer she's alive, the more powerful abilities she gets access to).
I think he was trying to state that she's not a Parahuman, so is technically an "out of context" issue for the setting.
 
arthurh3535 said:
I think he was trying to state that she's not a Parahuman, so is technically an "out of context" issue for the setting.
Oh, sure, I understand that, the mechanics behind her powers are completely OCP (for one, they bring up the question of souls; and if you really want to explode your brain, ask yourself this - did Gray Boy's power resurrect his original self from the dead after he was cloned?). And that's very fun.

But from the outside perspective, she fits well into the trump category (which, to be fair, is fairly all-encompassing).
 
4
Second Breath 1.4

The glow pulsed, and lent the room an eerie vibe. Behind me -

I turned around, heart racing. I thought I had seen a long, bronze spider leg reaching over my shoulder. But all that was behind me was the glow.

So, I could only use my power tw times before I started glowing like when I awoke? Not ideal, at all. I released my disguise, and was disappointed to see no change; my mark was still there, and no decrease in brightness. And no idea on how long it took to reset. Or if it ever would die down.

So two uses of disguise? I could use that, at least to sneak places. Once to get in, and one to get out. And I could scout before hand with my sensing powers. All it had taken was worrying my dad half to death, five days of my life in which I was in a cocoon, and a deal with a giant spider.

That soured my mood, immediately. Who were the Titans? I could only recall the Greeks had Titans, but I knew nothing about them. And had it been a cape or a cape's minion, just weird? And what service did they require? It had made that part very clear. Restore the rightful order?

With a sigh, I figured I couldn't do anything without information, and I had none at the moment and no way to get it. I'd work on it in the morning. Opening my dresser, I got out a set of pajamas. Nice to not be naked, I thought.

Except my bottoms barely reached above my ankle, and my shirt was a bit tight. Right, changes.

I crawled into bed, with my personal night light still going, and fell asleep.




I awoke, groggy, to the sound of someone opening my door.

"Dad?"

The door closed, and I went back to sleep.




I stretched to the sound of the radio in the shower; my dad was in there every week day before 6:30, radio on, without fail. It was a relaxing sound; at least some things were still normal. And I didn't have a mark nor glow.

I pulled a pair of jeans out and switched out bottoms. And, I had forgotten, again, the height difference. Crouching and rummaging through my closet revealed an older pair of jeans, that was I certain had been my mom's. On top of them was an Alexandria t-shirt. Sad and nostalgic, I rocked by on my heels and sat down. When I was a 9, she had bought an Alexandria t-shirt just like mine to show solidarity with me. She had been infinitely patient, buying me a lunch box and find pictures of Alexandria online.

What would she say, knowing I was a cape?

That I had made a deal with a something to become one?

Sobered, I put on her old clothes and maneuvered to the kitchen. My dad walked in at the same time, still in his bathrobe. He looked uncommonly pleased to see me. Guilty, I hung my head. I hadn't meant to worry him.

His arms wrapped around me. I whispered, "I'm sorry."

He hugged me tighter, and went to the stove. As he rummaged in the refrigerator, I sat back down, examining my new hands in the daylight. The smell of sausage cooking reminded me that it had been nearly a week since I last ate.

His back still turned to me, he asked, "Hungry?"

"Very."

The kitchen was silent but for the sizzling of the pan, and the scrape of the pan. French toast was added, and he paused in his spatula-ing.

"Taylor, we are going to have to go to the police. They are still looking for you."

And me showing up naked right after my announcement would effectively unmask me. I walked to the fridge, and poured us each a glass of OJ.

"Taylor?"

"We do. But, Dad, could we not say I showed up last night?"

"Because I told them you hadn't shown up."

"Yes," And for other reasons.

He nodded, and brought over a plate. I stopped talking, and inhaled my food. I looked up to see him looking bemused at the speed.

"Sorry. Been awhile."

A quick grimace flashed across his face. Guilty at reminding him, I changed topics.

"So right after this, police?"

Finishing his mouthful, he nodded, than elaborated, "I'll get dressed, and then call them."

I drained my OJ, and took my plate to the sink, and made to return to my room.

"Taylor, wait."

I stopped in the doorway, looking back at him, "Dad?"

"How are your feet?"

I pulled my left leg up so both of us could see.

It was pristine.

Quickly, I said, "So about 15 minutes?"

He nodded, looking a bit stunned.



Socks and shoes on, I plopped onto the couch. I would have to get new shoes, they were now uncomfortably tight. I squirmed slightly with guilt. New clothes weren't cheap, and I hadn't been the slowest of growers; at 15, I was already 5'8", making pants more of a quick fix than a long term solution. Now, I was probably closer to 5'10", nearly as tall as my dad.

I grabbed the remote to distract myself. The TV flicked on, and it was already set to the local news.

"- And still no word from the PRT, Megan?"

"That's right, John. Here at the scene, we have received no information either from last night's event. As you can see behind me, the area is still cordoned off, and the PRT and Protectorate are out in force."

The view had switched from the news desk, to a blond woman standing in front of Police tape, with several PRT officers loitering close by. Behind her, large white coverings were on all the visible buildings, and a line of vans could be seen. The faint whop-whop-whop of a helicopter could be heard.

Shit.

"Megan, who all has been at the scene?"

"Well John, early this morning, we saw Armsmaster, Shadowstalker, and Aegis leaving the scene," at this point low-res footage playing of the said capes driving, jumping, and flying played, only to be replaced by almost a dozen capes, over multiple clips, "And they were replaced by Clockblocker, Kid Win, and Vista from the Wards, Brandish, Manpower, and Glory Girl from New Wave, and Dauntless, Velocity, and Miss Milita from the Protectorate."

"That's some serious Manpower, if you pardon the pun, Megan."

"Quite right. They are really pulling out all the stops."

"Thank you Megan, and now, on the street, we have Stephen. Stephen?"

"Taylor?" For a single horrible moment, I thought they had I.D.ed me. But it was only my dad. I turned the TV off, and grabbed my jacket.

"Just the news. Calling them now?"

He nodded, and went back to the kitchen, dragging a chair to the phone, punching in numbers with the ease of familiarity.

I sat down in my chair, resting my head in my hands.

"Lt. Knight, please."

My dad started absentmindedly curling the cord in his hands.

"Lieutenant – No sir, I don't need the update. She showed up!" Real joy lit up my dad's voice. He paused, the faint sound of another voice on the other end.

"No, she showed up this morning."

"Well, she showed up with blood on her feet, and she was naked -"

"We will wait right here."

"Thank you sir, for all you did. Goodbye."

With a heavy sigh, he turned to me. "They are sending a squad car and an ambulance, and are going to take you to the hospital."

I nodded my acknowledgment, oddly spent yet brimming with energy. We waited in silence for but a few minutes, before the faint wail of sirens pierced, and grew louder. At the sharp pounding on the front door moments later, my dad went to the door. A pair of paramedics, rolling a stretcher, and two police officers entered the kitchen.

The older paramedic spoke, "Ma'am? Are you able to get onto the stretcher?"

"Yes." I kept my reply short, and moved to the stretcher. They removed the bag on top, and let me lay down before strapping me in. With quick movements, we left the house, and I was loaded in the back of the ambulance. My dad, locking the door behind him, got into the squad car as the doors closed.

"Ma'am?" the older paramedic asked, holding a clipboard, as the younger began attaching machines to me.

"Yes?"

"First, can you tell me your full name?"

"Taylor Hebert." A mark on the clipboard.

"Where are we?"

"Brockton Bay." Another mark.

"What time and date is it?"

"About 7 AM, on the 10th?" Another.

"Thank you. Now, are you feeling any pain or do you have any injuries?"

"No."

The younger one stated, "Rate of 55, Pressure at 115 over 75, Temp at 98."

The older made quick marks, before asking me, "Are you feeling a bit hot, Taylor?"

"A bit," I agreed.

"Have you been around anyone sick recently, eaten any bad food, or anything else significant you can think of?"

"Nothing."

"Well, okay then. You just relax, and we will take care of you, okay?"

I nodded, and leaned back, shutting my eyes. Resting as well as I could over the ambulance's wailing.





In what could only be less than five minutes, the ambulance pulled to a stop. The paramedics removed my stretcher from and briskly moved me through the entrance of St. Anderson's Hospital, into an elevator, held waiting by a uniformed police officer. The ride up was quiet, and as the door opened, another uniformed officer joined his comrade, and walked in front of the stretcher as we moved down the hall, followed by our earlier policeman.

We moved to a room, with two more uniformed policemen on either side of the door. As we wheeled inside, a man and a woman, both in suits, stood from their chairs by the door.

As the paramedics lifted me from the stretcher into the bed, and hooked me into new machines, the man stepped forward. "Ms. Hebert, I'm Detective Lee, and this is my partner, Detective Manheim. Are you feeling up to answering some questions?"

I nodded, as the paramedic attached a final doodad to my left index finger, and left.

"Do you wish for your father to be here?"

"No."

"Taylor, here is what we know. There was an altercation at your school, and approximately 1200 you left, and have not been seen until today. Can you please explain what happened?"

I spoke slowly, choosing my words carefully, "After the, uh, altercation, I went to the Boardwalk. I remember getting there, but after that, nothing."

"And this morning?"

"I woke up, behind a dumpster, and walked home."

"And nothing in between?"

"Nothing."

"Where did you wake up?"

"I'm not sure, it's a bit fuzzy. I think, west of my house. Way away from the Boardwalk."

His partner, writing down everything, looked up quickly at that, and then returned to her notebook.

"About what time, would you say?"

"I'm not sure, maybe, 3 am?"

"And what makes you say that?"

"Because right after I got home, I washed up, my dad fed me and called you."

"Your father said something about bloody feet?"

"When I walked, they got cut up, and they bled a bit."

"And, you are absolutely certain you can remember nothing at all?"

"No sir."

His partner flipped her notebook closed as he turned towards her. "Okay. Taylor, would you be up to answering a few more question? We are worried that a villian might be involved."

I nodded, and said, "Of course."

"Thank you Taylor. Officers O'Conner and Quinn will be right outside if you need anything. Thank you for you cooperation."

I nodded again, and they left. Moments later, a nurse and my father entered, speaking to each other.

"And she's in perfect health at the moment, so far as we can tell."

"So far as you can tell?"

"Well, we haven't run any tests, and a purely physical examination is somewhat limited. But you said that she hasn't complained of anything?"

"Nothing, miss. She had no bruises or anything that I could see, aside from blood and some cuts on her feet. But they were gone this morning."

"Well, we are going to draw blood, and we will look at her feet."

With that, the nurse split off, and my dad walked to my bed, nodding to the officers on the way in.

"Are you all right, Taylor?"

"Fine, dad. Just ready to go."

He gave me a quick smile, and squeezed my shoulder.

"Ms. Hebert?"

One of the officers had stuck his head in the doorway.

"Officer O'Conner?" I ventured.

"Quinn, ma'am," he replied, flashing a grin, "Are you up to answering more questions?"

"Ready," I confirmed.

"Here they come, then," he said as he waved to someone out of my sight.

Armsmaster, the leader of the Protectorate here in the Bay, walked in. Tall, covered in dark blue armor, and with his signature Halberd, he was undoubtedly a superhero. Following at his heels, a slightly shorter woman in the camouflaged cape I had seen last night followed, dressed in black with a hood. Shadow Stalker, I thought the news had called her.

"Ms. Hebert?" Even his voice was heroic.

"Yes," I paused, then ventured a guess, "Mr. Armsmaster?"

He gave a gentle chuckle, and shook his head. "Just Armsmaster is fine. I wanted to make sure you were alright. You gave quite a few people quite a scare. Including your father there."

I looked down, clenching the edge of the bed. Shame and anger warred within me. Shame, that I had hurt my dad, and probably pulled people off more important things. Anger, that none of this wouldn't have happened if I had been stuffed in a damn locker.

Sounding chastised, I replied, "I know."

"As long as you are safe, we are all happy. Now, Detective Lee said you were having problems remembering what happened to you?"

I nodded, and elaborated, "All I remember is getting to the Boardwalk, and then waking up behind a dumpster."

"Nothing in between those two times?"

I shook my head.

"Well, I hope you feel better. We might be back to talk to you later. Is that okay?" He half-asked me, and half-asked my dad.

As I nodded, my dad replied, "Yes."

As they turned to leave, I experimented. I might not have an opportunity like this again, so I made my eyes burn. I resisted the urge the tear up as my ducts protested, and I learned.

Looking at Armsmaster first, a million tiny pinpricks erupted on my tongue, stinking of an electrical fire, dust and old books. A snarl of hate built in my throat that anyone could dare to be stronger than me. Suppressing it, surprised and breathing heavily, I turned to Shadow Stalker and let them burn again. Last time without glowing.

Shadow Stalker gave the same feeling as last night, a sharp dart of smoky wind. This time, I coughed, and my dad patted me on the back.

Behind my hand, I grinned.



A/N: Whew, long one.

No worries, there will be some action in the first chapter. I wanted all this done so the next sections can be a bit more interesting.
 
Oh my. Very nice. Some of the implications here are fun. Was that spider leg at the start her anima, or her coadjutor?
 
I like it and I like it a lot.

That PRT is investigating in force is very understandable. Assuming that their precogs aren't frothing in the mouth about the event yet, it's still a freaky big lightshow, and the cocoon is made out of strange materials (is it mundane bronze? And if yes, that's still matter creation / transmutation, which is an instant high-level classification).

So, Taylor discovers the first "limitation" of her power. Knowing her, she'll likely experiemnt. Start locking the door to her bedroom at night and use charms till she starts glowing in order to try increasing the limit. Also, googling for titans and spider deities, probably researching myths. There are some (lots of parallels) that greek titans have with exalted ones, from what I understand, so it's quite possible that Taylor would understand the "restore the rightful order" as "bring [the entity that granted me my powers] out of imprisonment / restore it to power". If she thinks that the being who granted her powers is a cape (a reasonable assumption, given that people don't jump to OCP versions at the first notice), she's likely to research Birdcage records for capes that could grant powers and had mythological theme. One relatively plausible version is that Glaistig Uaine had a secondary trigger in birdcage and can now grant powers of any dead cape to people, with Taylor getting something related to Nyx's powers.

Danny probably realizes that Taylor got powers now, even if he's giving her space. It's strange that no one commented on the lack of cuts on her feet. If she used her powers to make an illusion of cuts, maybe? I'm not sure.

So, Taylor right now knows the following about her powers: She's better physically developed. Whether this includes strength / agility / endurance enhancement is currently unknown, but she can probably be categorized as Brute 1-2 on the basis of beauty enhancement and healing factor alone. She has some active powers, that have side-effects, and can be used limited amount of times per day / period of time / before sleeping without Taylor starting glowing. There's an entity she made a pact with that gave her those powers.

Will she experiment with the glowing? I mean, something like tell her father that she's going camping (or make her father go on vacation without her or something), than hide somewhere and experiment with her powers past the point where she glows?
 
Sydonai said:
You know, IEI makes your eyes flash green when you use it. Someone paying attention( or watching a recording of this) might notice it.
So far, no one has been looking at her when she fires it up.

And she doesn't know that.
Yog said:
I like it and I like it a lot.
*words*
Thank you!

The Interlude will be from someone in the PRT/Protectorate. A view of their response.

Oh she will. After all, right now she is assuming all her powers have the same mote cost. She actually can't pop off two Loom Snarling Deceptions with just her personal pool.

Well, as much research as she can. There are going to be a few things that mess up her nice orderly plans.

Danny is running on a quarter of the sleep necessary, even before the previous night. He actually didn't sleep at all, but kept checking in on Taylor frequently. After all, he's had to watch the news on her kidnapping, and the talking heads say that most victims are dead within 24 hours if they aren't found.

He's pretty stunned and catatonic with joy over seeing her again. However, that doesn't mean he can't figure it out. Just at this juncture, he hasn't made the connection.
 
oh, i like this.

Taylor is going to be hampered by her preconceptions about her powers for a while, i hope.

edit
Although if Danny gets her to join the Wards, that would be the fastest route to discovering she is a Trump.
 
Koden said:
oh, i like this.

Taylor is going to be hampered by her preconceptions about her powers for a while, i hope.
Heh. That's part of the reason for me nerf batting her spider.

Otherwise it could say, (More poetically), hey, those are your personal and peripheral pools. Don't fire off the later unless shit is going down. Etc, etc, etc.
 
Rask said:
Taylor probably won't need to experiment too much to figure out what makes her glow. Exalted have two essence pools, an internal one and a peripheral one. Glowing happens only when you use the peripheral one, and you can consciously choose to use it even when your personal essence is still full. Distinguishing between the two is certainly something she should be able to do in character.
She did notice in 1.2;
She popped 3 motes on 1st ED excellency to get Aegis to GTFO, and felt her personal pool empty. Then, she felt herself use the peripheral pool to power the 2nd Loom Snarling Deception. The problem is, she was somewhat delirious from the cold (It's January) and didn't connect getting Aegis to go with her powers. Thus, her count was off in addition to being wrong.

She'll have a firmer grasp by the end of the chapter, if only through direct experience.
 
logiccosmic said:
So far, no one has been looking at her when she fires it up.

And she doesn't know that.
Hopefully she'll have the presence of mind to study herself in the mirror / with a recording device as she uses her powers.

Can IEIbe used on oneself by targeting one's mirror reflection?
logiccosmic said:
No problem.
logiccosmic said:
The Interlude will be from someone in the PRT/Protectorate. A view of their response.
It would be interesting to see, but, and this is an advice from someone who can't write worth a damn, at least where it comes to actual stories, don't get boggled down trying to imitate the form Wildbow writes in (i.e. arcs with interludes). Write as it seems to work for you. Again, just an unqualified advise.
logiccosmic said:
He's pretty stunned and catatonic with joy over seeing her again. However, that doesn't mean he can't figure it out. Just at this juncture, he hasn't made the connection.
That seems pretty logical, but he's likely to notice that she needs new clothes (and lacks moles / beauty spots he knows she had) at some point. But yes, sleep deprivation is a good reason for being unobservant.
logiccosmic said:
Danny is running on a quarter of the sleep necessary, even before the previous night. He actually didn't sleep at all, but kept checking in on Taylor frequently. After all, he's had to watch the news on her kidnapping, and the talking heads say that most victims are dead within 24 hours if they aren't found.
Wouldn't he have seen the glow then? Or did it die off before he checked up on her first?
 
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