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Frakir's brother said:
He got demoted right after he flayed a cow and chucked it at his sister.
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I'm not sure if that's a thing in Nasuverse, but I've heard flimsier reasoning.
Illusion said:
Hmm, I couldn't really find the sheet I was quite looking for. I remember it was an uncreative Nimrod sheet but I forgot where I put it. It was pretty bad. I have these 2 sheets that I made a while back that could use some criticizing. They both rub me the wrong way but I like some aspects.

Class: Archer
True Name: Hou Yi
Alignment: Neutral Good
Gender: Male

Strength: D
Endurance: C
Agility: A
Mana: E
Luck: E

Class Abilities:
Magic Resistance
Rank: D (2)
Cancel Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.

Independence Action
Rank: C (3)
Capable of remaining in this world for one day without an established contract.

Personal Skills
Protection from Wind
Rank: A (5)
A skill that grants the user a resistance against attacks based on wind. At this rank wind based attacks below this rank are negated and stronger ones are significantly reduced. This skill is gained because of Houyi's fight and victory against Fei Lan, the count of the winds, granted him a protection from all harmful winds.

Clairvoyance
Rank: B (4)
In addition to tracking fast moving objects at great distances, he is also able to pierce Supernatural Illusions of rank C or lower. Demonstrated against the Count of the Winds, a River God hiding beneath an overflowing river, and when he shot the suns out of the sky.

Divinity
Rank: B (4)
Archer was said to be a god who was banished from heaven after making enemies out of several gods. His immortality was stripped away, but his godlike abilities were (more or less) retained.

Prana Burst (fire)
Rank: B (4)
Is the increase in performance caused by infusing one's weapons and body with magical energy and instantly expelling it. Simply put, recreating the effect of a jet burst by expending large amounts of prana. All of Hou Yi's arrow may be coat his arrows in magic fire. Hou Yi gained this skill due to his connection to the sun.

Private Skills
Archery
Rank: A+ (6)
The skill at using a bow and arrow. Houyi was considered a god of archery and was absolutely unmatched in his time.

Noble Phantasms
Jiu Pāishè tàiyáng - The 9 Arrows which strike down the sun
Rank: A(+)
Type: Anti-Unit
The manifestation of Houyi's most famous feat. The shooting of the 9 suns. This Noble phantasm is manifested as 9 special arrows. The arrows themselves look almost like crystalline crimson rods with fins and a conical sharpened tip when held in the bow. When loosed from the bow, it becomes a single, long, crimson beam of light connecting the bow to the target, as if it were a laser. The 'flight' of the arrow is instantaneous, and the 'light' that onlookers see is the crimson trail it left behind.

these arrows ,when fired, will surely hit within one turn, regardless of range. He was able to instantly shoot down the suns from the sky, without giving the crows time to react. It completely bypasses the laws of physics regarding speed and travel time.

Each arrow also has a very high "anti-Solar" aspect. Any "Solar" related defense, such as Gawain's increased endurance in sunlight and karna's armor made of sunlight will be ignored completely. The Noble Phantasm will also receive a rank up against those with solar heritage.

Finally upon contact the arrow will explode upon contact with a blast, dealing large amounts of damage. The arrows aren't something hat can really be "dodged" with agility. A sufficient luck check may cause an opponent to dodge the arrow. Those with agility B or higher may be able to react and parry the arrrows, but the arrow will still explode. Houyi may only use this Noble Phantasm 9 times before all the arrows are depleted. Hou yi may also use these arrows in rapid succession. They cost a hefty sum of prana.

The Tenth Arrow - The Sun that burns for eternity
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-army
When Hou Yi was shooting the suns he had 10 arrows prepared. He was about to shoot the last sun but was stopped so he would not leave the world in eternal darkness. This is the sun which still shines today. This Noble Phantasm manifests as an arrow that only appears after he has shot all 9 arrows of his previous noble phantasm.

Hou Yi will shoot this arrow into the sky and it will become the "sun that survived". This sun will sear and burn anybody within range as if the actual sun was there. This burning sun has quite a large range. Anything within 40 meters will be susceptible to these burning effects. Hou Yi and any of his allies are immune to these effects and contrary to his previous NP this one empowers solar based servants. While activated solar based servants have all of their parameters ranked up by 1 and is immune to the burning of the sun in a similar way to Hou Yi.

It requires prana to maintain and once the sun disappears, so will the arrow. Hou Yi will only be able to use his bow after this with no noble phantasms.

Equipment
Celestial Bow
A bow that Hou Yi used in life. It does not have enough feats to become a noble phantasm but it can harm servants. It can be compared to Alexander the Great's sword. While not too strong the normal arrows in Hou Yi's quiver may be powered up by prana burst making Hou Yi dangerous without Noble Phantasms.
Class: Rider
Gender: Male
True Name: Edward Teach AKA Blackbeard
Alignment: Neutral Evil

Parameters
Strength: C
Agility: C
Endurance: A
Magic : E
Luck: C

Background
Edward Teach, or "Blackbeard" as he is best known, was a pirate active from 1716-1718 in the Caribbean, near the very end of the Golden Age of piracy. He was initially a man of the navy working for England, but then commandeered a ship, the Concorda, renaming it Queen Anne's Revenge. He outfitted it with guns and a pirate crew, and sailed around the Caribbean islands harassing English ships, taking safety in the pirate haven island of New Providence. After a year he ran the Queen Anne's Revenge aground, possibly intentionally. The year after that, his new fleet was chased down by Lieutenant Maynard of the Royal Navy, who killed Blackbeard. The pirate's body was tossed off into the sea, and his head was tied to the bowsprit of Lt. Maynard's vessel. He is one of the most famous pirates in history.

Class Skills

Riding
Rank: B (4)
Most vehicles can be handled with above average skill. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasm Races such as Monstrous Beasts.

Private Skills
Extortion
Rank: C (2)
The skill at getting what he wants by intimidation. At this rank it is a bonus to intimidation when in interrogation or when talking to weaker opponents. Useful against most normal humans and weaker magi.

Personal Skills

Disengage
Rank: B (4)
Is the ability to break away from combat. At this rank it grants a boost in agility and speed when fleeing. As a pirate he always fled before any powerful navy enforcers could catch him. Most of the time he chose his battles wisely.

Voyager of the Storm
Rank: A- (5)
Is the talent to sail vessels recognized as ships. Because the ability as a group leader is also necessary, this unique Skill also has the effects of both Charisma and Military Tactics. Black Beard was an effective leader and pirate but he commonly killed his first mate to increase the fear his crew had for him. As such the drawback to this skill is that allies suffer a huge morale penalty.

Battle Continuation
Rank: B (4)
Makes possible to fight even with deadly injuries and can remain alive so long as one does not receive a decisive fatal wound. However the servant may drop dead if enough damage is taken. In his fight with Maynard Blackbeard had been stabbed twenty times and suffered at least five gunshot wounds, before bleeding to death. Maynard also happened to break his sword into Blackbeard's back in the beginning of the fight.

Knowledge of Respect and Harmony
Rank: D (2)
Prevents any decrease in the effectiveness of a technique, regardless of how many times it is used against the same opponent. Blackbeard used the same tactics all through out his pirate career. He never changed them but he stayed just as scary and effective throughout his entire career. His enemies never caught on to his tricks until the very end. At this rank repetitive tactics and prior knowledge of certain attacks do not suffer minus modifiers.

Noble Phantasm(s):

Queen Anne's Revenge – Ghost Ship of Blackbeard
Rank: A
Anti-Army

Blackbeard's most famous ship and perhaps the most famous pirate ship of all time. This is a classic 18th century cargo ship stolen from the British navy and upgraded with many cannons and a larger crew. Blackbeard is capable of maneuvers impossible for normal ships while sailing it. Blackbeard is capable of teleporting to the ship while it is manifested.The ship may be ridden in manifested in the air.

However, if he becomes too distant, the ship and her crew dematerialize and must be re-summoned. The Queen Anne's Revenge is notable in that it is both existent and nonexistent at the same time; a ghost of a ship. Normally it is impossible for inanimate objects to take on this property, but this one specifically is famous enough as a wreck and a solid ship to bypass such restrictions. Automatically repairs itself as if it were a part of Blackbeard's body, and it much tougher than even modern vessels. The ship has 40 canons that are equal to C rank noble phantasm attacks. The ship is operated by wraith like beings who are like familiars to Blackbeard. Blackbeard can make the ship and all those aboard have C rank presence concealment and become intangible at will although doing so takes a sum of prana. Weapons that specifically target ghosts or wraiths ignore the intangibility.


Dread Visage – Fear is the greatest weapon
Rank: C
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
A Noble Phantasm representing not only Blackbeard's beard, which was covered in wicks, but his reputation as the most terrifying pirate ever. Blackbeard automatically activates this effect in battle or when he wants to. Only a higher than "C" rank in Mental defense, high luck, or passes a WILL check can avoid the effects of this Dread Visage. Blackbeard's Dread Visage causes his enemies to suffer with his very presence even to those who fail an END or WILL check may fall unconscious or be scared to death. Also any servant under the effects of Blackbeard's Dread Visage will suffer a rank down in all parameters. Servants with Mad Enhancement ranked C and up are immune to this Noble Phantasm. In life Blackbeard viewed fear as one of the greatest weapons. He put wicks in his beard to inspire fear in his enemies and killed some of his crew mates to make his allies fear him as well.

Equipment
Cutlass and pistol that are capable of harming servants but are weak weapons overall.
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I could have sworn I saw that exact Yi sheet somewhere on Beast's Lair.


Anyway, have my not very good Archer sheet. I was originally going to make him a Saber clone, and submit it for the Fate/Logical Conclusions, but then I backed out when I couldn't make a satisfying NP.
Archer
Rostam
Male
Lawful Good

Parameters:
Strength: D(C)
Agility: C
Endurance: D
Mana: B
Luck: E

Skills:

Public:
Magic Resistance: A
Independent Action: C
Clairvoyance: A
Instinct: C
Disengage: B
Natural Body: E

Private
Archery: A
Prana Burst: A


Noble phantasms:

Bow of Shaghad
Type: Anti Unit
Rank: C

Shaghad, Rostam's half brother, killed Rostam by digging a pit and filling the bottom with poisoned spears. After Rostom fell into the pit, he requested a bow and two arrows from Shaghad as a last request. As soon as he received the bow, he shot the fleeing Shaghad, the arrow traveling through a tree to kill him. On another occasion, when battling Isfandiyar, he found his strength lacking, and had to consult the Simurgh. On her advice, he crafts an from the wood of the gaz tree, and shoots Isfandiyar in the eye, the only unprotected part of his body. Representing this aspect of his legend, arrows shot with this bow will ignore armor and endurance of rank A or lower. Those of A rank or higher will be treated as two ranks lower when struck.

Haft Khan
Type: Anti unit
Rank: A+

Rostom completed a Haft Khan, seven legendary tasks to prove his heroism. He fought against mighty demons, crafty sorcerers, and even slayed a dragon during this journey. It is through these seven tasks that he became the greatest Persian Hero, and they can be considered his greatest accomplishment. His Seven Deeds are crystallized into seven Arrows, each the equivalent of an A rank Noble Phantasm. When these arrows strike, they produce a massive explosion, capable of damaging everything within 50 feet of the strike.


Aspects:
Honor bound
Trusting
Prideful
Deeply respects family
Distrustful of magic

If my Caster sheet gets accepted in Faux/Rupere, I'll post my Berserker over in the wdango thread, which I'm actually kind of proud of. I don't like it as much as my Caster, but it's still pretty damn good, imo.
 
notmi said:
Rostom completed a Haft Khan, seven legendary tasks to prove his heroism. He fought against mighty demons, crafty sorcerers, and even slayed a dragon during this journey. It is through these seven tasks that he became the greatest Persian Hero, and they can be considered his greatest accomplishment. His Seven Deeds are crystallized into seven Arrows, each the equivalent of an A rank Noble Phantasm. When these arrows strike, they produce a massive explosion, capable of damaging everything within 50 feet of the strike.
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Actually this effect was almost the exact effect of my original Hou Yi first noble phantasm except with 9 arrows instead of 7. That was until I had to look at other sheets to see how I could spice it up more.
 
Illusion said:
I ripped off took inspiration from another Hou Yi sheet I saw on Beast's lair for the first NP. Specifically the instant travel time and getting blocked by mundane objects.
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That must be it.

I think what I dislike about the Rider sheet is that he has the expected "Summon his ship" NP. I can't really say it's wrong, but it's not really original.
Illusion said:
Actually this effect was almost the exact effect of my original Hou Yi first noble phantasm except with 9 arrows instead of 7. That was until I had to look at other sheets to see how I could spice it up more.
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At first, it was entirely different. I originally made it with seven different arrows, each one of about C rank, but with each having a different power relating to one of his tasks. Much less dakka, way more versatility. But then I thought that no GM would ever accept it, and just turned it into seven massive explosions.
 
notmi said:
That must be it.

I think what I dislike about the Rider sheet is that he has the expected "Summon his ship" NP. I can't really say it's wrong, but it's not really original.

At first, it was entirely different. I originally made it with seven different arrows, each one of about C rank, but with each having a different power relating to one of his tasks. Much less dakka, way more versatility. But then I thought that no GM would ever accept it, and just turned it into seven massive explosions.
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Yeah the non unique flavor is probably what I dislike about the Rider and Archer sheet. They are functional but have nothing that catches the eye of someone. Also with your archer sheet the 7 different arrows with a different effect definitely would've been a lot cooler and awesome then what the sheet has now.
 
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Illusion said:
Yeah the non unique flavor is probably what I dislike about the Rider and Archer sheet. They are functional but have nothing that catches the eye of someone. Also with your archer sheet the 7 different arrows with a different effect definitely would've been a lot cooler and awesome then what the sheet has now.
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I was like four of the seven arrows in when I just gave up. It was pretty bullshit, when including his skills. Prana burst to make his arrows just that bit harder to dodge, his bow to make them ignore armor, clairvoyance and instinct+skill to hit, all before I got to the actual arrows. The arrows that happened to include local omniscience, healing, a seeking arrow, and an anti magic arrow. Which could be used once every day, each. And that was before the using any of the really big tasks he completed.
 
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I was like four of the seven arrows in when I just gave up. It was pretty bullshit, when including his skills. Prana burst to make his arrows just that bit harder to dodge, his bow to make them ignore armor, clairvoyance and instinct+skill to hit, all before I got to the actual arrows. The arrows that happened to include local omniscience, healing, a seeking arrow, and an anti magic arrow. Which could be used once every day, each. And that was before the using any of the really big tasks he completed.
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Definitely sounds like something that would be nerfed to high hell.
 
*sigh*
As mentioned, unless we count whatever the hell's going on in Prisma Ilya with Thor, gods can't get into the Throne.
The sole vauge exception is for entirely mortal forms of them, such as Tamamo-No-Mae, and you really aren't going to be able to use the god's feats for that.
TLDR:
NO GODS
LOTS OF KINGS
WASN'T SHE A MAN?​
 
Grue said:
*sigh*
As mentioned, unless we count whatever the hell's going on in Prisma Ilya with Thor, gods can't get into the Throne.
The sole vauge exception is for entirely mortal forms of them, such as Tamamo-No-Mae, and you really aren't going to be able to use the god's feats for that.
TLDR:
NO GODS
LOTS OF KINGS
WASN'T SHE A MAN?​
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Susanoo got sealed into a mortal form after chucking a cow at his sister, thus killing a priestess she liked. After that, he did the whole Orochi thing, and had a couple other adventures.
 
Grue said:
*sigh*
As mentioned, unless we count whatever the hell's going on in Prisma Ilya with Thor, gods can't get into the Throne.
The sole vauge exception is for entirely mortal forms of them, such as Tamamo-No-Mae, and you really aren't going to be able to use the god's feats for that.
TLDR:
NO GODS
LOTS OF KINGS
WASN'T SHE A MAN?​
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ooooooooooh

that's a good one
 
One of my rejected Servant applications for an RP, and one I don't...intend to recycle for awhile yet

Edit: Blame the skill bloat on the system that was used.

I will take a small amount of blame for the cheesing, however.


Name: Eärendil
Also Known As: The Mariner, Half-Elven
Class: Rider
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Parameters:

Strength: B (+2)
Endurance: B (+2)
Agility: B
Mana: C
Luck: E

Skills:

Rank A:

Divinity: Gifted with Immortality by the Valar, Rider became sentenced to forever travel the skies as a star, carrying the Silmarril's light in place of the traditional sentence, which is death. Since then, he has become worshiped and venerated by the elves of Middle Earth for Millennia. This has afforded him Divinity of the highest rank.

Riding: At this rank any vehicle is within Rider's ability to steer, with the exception of Dragonkind and other Phantasmal Beasts. His skill with it is something which can not be replicated by modern humans.

Rank B:

Swordsmanship: Aranrúth. While not directly cited as Rider's blade, it was passed on to his son Elros, Frst King of Numenor. His skill with it is indeed great, as shown when he was able to join the Eagles of Manwe, the Host of Thorondor, in slaying Ancalagon the Black

Bravery

Favor of the Valar: As a result of the blessings given unto Earendil by Manwe and the other Valar, receives a Rank Up to all stats (Reworked from Affections of the Goddess)

Rank C:

Innovation - End of the First Age: Earendil's beseeching of the Valar resulted in the Host of Manwe and the casting down of Angband, thus bringing an end to the First Age of Middle Earth, setting the stage for the Second Age, which would be defined by the actions of his descendants: The Kings of Numenor. Or, if you prefer, the Half-Elven in the actions of Elros and his Descendants, and Elrond and his own actions as they struggled against Sauron and his ambitions. As a result of bringing an end to the embodiment of corruption in Middle Earth, and sowing the seeds of the struggle against his remaining inheritors, all of Rider's abilities gain a Rank Up when fighting against enemies who carry the alignment of "Evil".

Knowledge of Respect and Harmony: The ability for strikes to remain effective regardless of the size or nature of the opponent. Given the massive size disparity between Rider and Ancalagon, this ability was necessary in order for his strikes to do any critical damage over the skies of Angband.

Natural Body: As a man from the First Age, one of the first of the Half-Even and a near-direct descendant of the line of First Men, Rider's body is at a level far beyond that of modern humanity. This results in him having his strength under a constant Rank Up.

Pioneer of the Stars (A): As a result of Rider's Divinity, this suffers a Rank Down due to the previous "impossibility" of landing upon the coasts of the Undying Lands becoming an "Improbability", and another Rank Down due to Rider's Innovation - End of the First Age turning that "Improbability" into an "Inevitability"

Rank D:

Voyager of the Stars (C): Lowered in Rank due to Rider's legend being about him alone being the one to Sail Vingilot to the Undying Lands

Wisdom From the Valar: Is knowledgeable on a great number of subjects and aware of numerous workings that go unseen behind Middle Earth

Soul of the Martyr: The resolve necessary to sail to the Undying Lands, and later sail the night sky for all eternity, never allowed to set foot on land again.

Protection of the Valar: The ability to raise one's Luck in dangerous situations. Rider's low ranking requires him to be in truly perilous situations to benefit.

Protection from Flame: An ability conveyed upon Rider as a result of him fighting against Morgoth's Dragonic Host and enduring the battle.

Noble Phantasms:

Noble Phantasm Name: Vingilot, Onward to Amon...
Rank: A++
Range: Anti-Unit

The very same Ship which carried Elwing and Earendil through many journey's, originally crafted by Earendil and Cirdan the Shipwright. Sanctified upon reaching Valinor, it possesses the abilities of flight even into the reaches of space, and defenses superior to several fortress walls. When Rider has it's summoned and calls out "Wingilótë!" Rider's Luck and Agility each undergo a Rank Up. Only those granted permission by Rider can set foot upon this ship, barring a Divinity check against Rider's own.

Noble Phantasm Name: Thorondor, The Host of Eagles
Rank: A
Range: Anti-Army

Rider can summon any number of the Great Eagles, Manwe's chosen, to assist him in battle. These majestic creatures are Divine Beasts from the first Age, with Thorondor in particular having a wingspan of 30 fathoms. Thorondor's own ability to scar the face of Morgoth, one of the mightiest of the Valar, bestows upon him a level of Divinity in his own right. The War of Wrath saw his final battle in Middle Earth, where the Great Eagles and Rider stood against the Host of Dragons Morgoth sent forth, and slew them utterly.

Noble Phantasm Name: The Silmaril, Jewel of Fëanor
Rank: EX
Range: Anti-Evil

One of the Three masterpieces crafted by Fëanor, Greatest of the Noldir. Gems which were crafted with the light of the trees Telperion the Silver and Laurelin the Gold during the Years of the Trees when Middle Earth was young. Stolen by Melkor, later named Morgoth, with great treachery and murder which lead to Fëanor and the greater part of the Noldor departing to Middle Earth to begin the First Age. Later stolen from Morgoth by Beren One-Hand and Luthien at great cost, this gem eventually came to Rider by way of his wife, Elwing, descendant of those two.

These gems possess a powerful light, one which was impossible to replicate after the world was first made, and upon the death of the Telperion and Laurelin these gems were sought to be used to rekindle their life for that very reason. However.

Due to being hallowed by Varda, the Silmaril will burn the flesh of the mortal, hands unclean, or anything evil which may touch them without exception.

When this Noble Phantasm is activated by Rider, it's light fills the area, chasing away all shadows with it's unearthly beauty, requiring a Willpower check to not be distracted in that moment. Rider, as well as his ship Vingilot are able to channel the energies of the Silmaril in order to grant Rider a Rank Up to all Parameters, with the exception of Luck which is raised to a A, reflecting that Rider's fortune is now tied to this gem. In addition, both Rider and Vingilot are both able to channel the Silmaril's blessing, and their touch burns all Mortal Flesh, hands unclean, and all things which are evil.
 
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TehChron said:
One of my rejected Servant applications for an RP, and one I don't...intend to recycle for awhile yet

Edit: Blame the skill bloat on the system that was used.

I will take a small amount of blame for the cheesing, however.


Name: Eärendil
Also Known As: The Mariner, Half-Elven
Class: Rider
Gender: Male
Appearance:

Parameters:

Strength: B (+2)
Endurance: B (+2)
Agility: B
Mana: C
Luck: E

Skills:

Rank A:

Divinity: Gifted with Immortality by the Valar, Rider became sentenced to forever travel the skies as a star, carrying the Silmarril's light in place of the traditional sentence, which is death. Since then, he has become worshiped and venerated by the elves of Middle Earth for Millennia. This has afforded him Divinity of the highest rank.

Riding: At this rank any vehicle is within Rider's ability to steer, with the exception of Dragonkind and other Phantasmal Beasts. His skill with it is something which can not be replicated by modern humans.

Rank B:

Swordsmanship: Aranrúth. While not directly cited as Rider's blade, it was passed on to his son Elros, Frst King of Numenor. His skill with it is indeed great, as shown when he was able to join the Eagles of Manwe, the Host of Thorondor, in slaying Ancalagon the Black

Bravery

Favor of the Valar: As a result of the blessings given unto Earendil by Manwe and the other Valar, receives a Rank Up to all stats (Reworked from Affections of the Goddess)

Rank C:

Innovation - End of the First Age: Earendil's beseeching of the Valar resulted in the Host of Manwe and the casting down of Angband, thus bringing an end to the First Age of Middle Earth, setting the stage for the Second Age, which would be defined by the actions of his descendants: The Kings of Numenor. Or, if you prefer, the Half-Elven in the actions of Elros and his Descendants, and Elrond and his own actions as they struggled against Sauron and his ambitions. As a result of bringing an end to the embodiment of corruption in Middle Earth, and sowing the seeds of the struggle against his remaining inheritors, all of Rider's abilities gain a Rank Up when fighting against enemies who carry the alignment of "Evil".

Knowledge of Respect and Harmony: The ability for strikes to remain effective regardless of the size or nature of the opponent. Given the massive size disparity between Rider and Ancalagon, this ability was necessary in order for his strikes to do any critical damage over the skies of Angband.

Natural Body: As a man from the First Age, one of the first of the Half-Even and a near-direct descendant of the line of First Men, Rider's body is at a level far beyond that of modern humanity. This results in him having his strength under a constant Rank Up.

Pioneer of the Stars (A): As a result of Rider's Divinity, this suffers a Rank Down due to the previous "impossibility" of landing upon the coasts of the Undying Lands becoming an "Improbability", and another Rank Down due to Rider's Innovation - End of the First Age turning that "Improbability" into an "Inevitability"

Rank D:

Voyager of the Stars (C): Lowered in Rank due to Rider's legend being about him alone being the one to Sail Vingilot to the Undying Lands

Wisdom From the Valar: Is knowledgeable on a great number of subjects and aware of numerous workings that go unseen behind Middle Earth

Soul of the Martyr: The resolve necessary to sail to the Undying Lands, and later sail the night sky for all eternity, never allowed to set foot on land again.

Protection of the Valar: The ability to raise one's Luck in dangerous situations. Rider's low ranking requires him to be in truly perilous situations to benefit.

Protection from Flame: An ability conveyed upon Rider as a result of him fighting against Morgoth's Dragonic Host and enduring the battle.

Noble Phantasms:

Noble Phantasm Name: Vingilot, Onward to Amon...
Rank: A++
Range: Anti-Unit

The very same Ship which carried Elwing and Earendil through many journey's, originally crafted by Earendil and Cirdan the Shipwright. Sanctified upon reaching Valinor, it possesses the abilities of flight even into the reaches of space, and defenses superior to several fortress walls. When Rider has it's summoned and calls out "Wingilótë!" Rider's Luck and Agility each undergo a Rank Up. Only those granted permission by Rider can set foot upon this ship, barring a Divinity check against Rider's own.

Noble Phantasm Name: Thorondor, The Host of Eagles
Rank: A
Range: Anti-Army

Rider can summon any number of the Great Eagles, Manwe's chosen, to assist him in battle. These majestic creatures are Divine Beasts from the first Age, with Thorondor in particular having a wingspan of 30 fathoms. Thorondor's own ability to scar the face of Morgoth, one of the mightiest of the Valar, bestows upon him a level of Divinity in his own right. The War of Wrath saw his final battle in Middle Earth, where the Great Eagles and Rider stood against the Host of Dragons Morgoth sent forth, and slew them utterly.

Noble Phantasm Name: The Silmaril, Jewel of Fëanor
Rank: EX
Range: Anti-Evil

One of the Three masterpieces crafted by Fëanor, Greatest of the Noldir. Gems which were crafted with the light of the trees Telperion the Silver and Laurelin the Gold during the Years of the Trees when Middle Earth was young. Stolen by Melkor, later named Morgoth, with great treachery and murder which lead to Fëanor and the greater part of the Noldor departing to Middle Earth to begin the First Age. Later stolen from Morgoth by Beren One-Hand and Luthien at great cost, this gem eventually came to Rider by way of his wife, Elwing, descendant of those two.

These gems possess a powerful light, one which was impossible to replicate after the world was first made, and upon the death of the Telperion and Laurelin these gems were sought to be used to rekindle their life for that very reason. However.

Due to being hallowed by Varda, the Silmaril will burn the flesh of the mortal, hands unclean, or anything evil which may touch them without exception.

When this Noble Phantasm is activated by Rider, it's light fills the area, chasing away all shadows with it's unearthly beauty, requiring a Willpower check to not be distracted in that moment. Rider, as well as his ship Vingilot are able to channel the energies of the Silmaril in order to grant Rider a Rank Up to all Parameters, with the exception of Luck which is raised to a A, reflecting that Rider's fortune is now tied to this gem. In addition, both Rider and Vingilot are both able to channel the Silmaril's blessing, and their touch burns all Mortal Flesh, hands unclean, and all things which are evil.
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Shit that's a lot of skills.

Now I'm tempted to complete my Anomander Rake sheet just to have a near equally bullshit one.

Instead, have the Spanish Inquisition.

Assassin
Tomás de Torquemada
Male
Lawful Evil

Parameters:
Strength: D
Agility: B
Endurance: D
Mana: B
Luck: C

Skills:

Public:
Presence Concealment: A
Presence Detection: B
Protection of the Faith: C
Subversive Activities: B:

Private:
Baptism Rite: A
Torture Techniques: A
Magic Resistance X (A)
Blade skills: C

Noble phantasms:

Name: Armaments of the Church
Type: Anti Unti
Rank: B

This NP allows Assassin full access to the bevy of instruments the church used to carry out their will during the Inquisition. This includes a number of items, from Black Keys to grisly instruments of torture. However, the most notable of the items bestowed upon assassin by this NP is his Holy Vestments, which provide A rank Magic Resistance, in spite of him possessing no inherent Magic Resistance of his own.


Name: Purifying flame of Heaven
Type: Anti Unit
Rank: A

"But as for the cowardly, the faithless, the detestable, as for murderers, the sexually immoral, sorcerers, idolaters, and all liars, their portion will be in the lake that burns with fire and sulfur, which is the second death."
Assassin triggers his greatest NP by speaking this verse. This flame could be said to be an anti-magic weapon of the highest caliber. Representative of the countless accused burned at the stake during the course of the Inquisition, this attack summons a tower of flame around a single opponent, dealing damage equal to one rank greater than the target's Mana. This attack raises one extra rank against any non-Christian foe, but lowers one rank when used against one of the Faithful.
 
TehChron said:
If you go that route then I'll have to bust out a Raest sheet

You don't want me to bust out a Raest sheet
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Then I go Max Wank Icarium Berserker, with his only skill being EX ranked Mad Enhancement. There's not really a shortage of bigger sticks in Malazan.

You mean the Raest nerfed by his imprisonment, right? Not full power?
 
TehChron said:
In all fairness

Raest is completely deserving of the ranking. He's pretty bullshit.

And also not a god.
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Actually, that may disqualify Rake and Icarium. Pretty sure Rake is a God that just denies he's a god, and Icarium probably has some worshipers somewhere, and he's just too brain damaged to remember them.
 
notmi said:
Actually, that may disqualify Rake and Icarium. Pretty sure Rake is a God that just denies he's a god, and Icarium probably has some worshipers somewhere, and he's just too brain damaged to remember them.
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Yeah, Raest's reaction to people worshiping him was literally to point and laugh at how stupid they were for doing so.
 
So what is this thread? Rp? Fanfic? General discussion? I think you guys need to get back on topic to be honest.
 
If the OP's doing a story, then they should typically want "Not horribly broken except in specific circumstances. This happens to be one of them" Servants as opposed to "Lol, I curbstomp Gil" Servants, as that allows them to plan the story on having those circumstances happen at the right times.
If it's something else, that changes things.
 
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