[X] Neiko, your faithful maid who fled with you. She was loyal to the end, even when everyone else had turned on you. But you needed a woman with the same build to leave in that burning building to shake the Immaculate hunters.

[X] Death of Purple Irises - Tearing the power from the stolen divine objects, Rena can cast it out as a cloud of fragments of power that take the form of purple irises. They can cut down a charging horde, and flowers grow where they fall.
 
As I see it, it probably boils down to how Rena reacts to hot dudes in her vicinity and Amigee in general. She seems the type to say 'why only have one man?' And thus her 'husband', while cherished, is not the only one that she loves.
A friend though? Someone she grew up with and was close to, before she knew of the fae and power, before she came to have and love a gallery of men? That's potent stuff.
And then there's my choice- the maid. I'll admit Nemo was on my mind (I have issues chasing that north out sometimes!) but I figured this would be something that would hurt the arena of now- that she'd once had an excellent hand-maiden, who could find ways to procure the good make-ups, ease her mistress' ills, and was one more asset, a loyal dependable one, and she threw it away in a moment of fear and terror. Worse yet, is thinking about it and realizing 'wait I could have done Y or X instead and still had my maid! Bwaaaah!'.
 
I chose the maid because I think, to her, EVERYONE are ultimately pawns.
Some are high value pieces that should be only used up if she has to, but if she finds the gains worth it she'd do it in a heartbeat.

So look at this with an eye to Birbman:

[ ] Chiro Koharu, your friend since childhood, who never abandoned you even when the rumours started. You fed her to a prince of chaos in return for many strange secrets and a contract of power.

Intimacy < Power.
We weren't in any danger, we just had a good offer, and found the price worth it.

[ ] Ferem Niko Koizumi, who courted you and you might have married. But he wanted you to stop consorting with fae. You promised you'd stop, but... well, when he discovered you in bed with two of them, he had to go.

Love < Secrets
You'd love them, you'd lie to them, and if your secrets risk being exposed, away he goes.

[ ] Neiko, your faithful maid who fled with you. She was loyal to the end, even when everyone else had turned on you. But you needed a woman with the same build to leave in that burning building to shake the Immaculate hunters.

Loyalty < Safety
It doesn't matter how loyal, how devoted or how loving they are.
If its your skin versus theirs, its just too bad.
 
[X] Ferem Niko Koizumi, who courted you and you might have married. But he wanted you to stop consorting with fae. You promised you'd stop, but... well, when he discovered you in bed with two of them, he had to go.


I don't know why, but betraying your devoted servant that stuck with you when everyone else didn't feels much worse than just a lover. And besides, if she was ready to kill him like that, how much did she actually love him?

[X] Death of Purple Irises - Tearing the power from the stolen divine objects, Rena can cast it out as a cloud of fragments of power that take the form of purple irises. They can cut down a charging horde, and flowers grow where they fall.

Sorcery is known for its AoE attacks, we should have at least one.
 
[X] Chiro Koharu, your friend since childhood, who never abandoned you even when the rumours started. You fed her to a prince of chaos in return for many strange secrets and a contract of power.

Really, I think that more people are choosing the husband because of the events surrounding their deaths, instead of the deaths themselves. Chiro is an old friend you killed to get ahead, when you were still learning. It's not urgent, and it's pretty heartless (no problem with that here). Koizumi was someone you had to give up, either because he would have gotten you in trouble or because he would have left you. There's a threat there, but not one that couldn't have been avoided. You had your choices, and this was the one you took. Neiko was a handmaid who trusted you to the end, and who you could have trusted with your life. More importantly, you didn't have a choice about giving her up. It was you or her, and you didn't want to give her up. You wouldn't have had to give her up, if you'd had half a chance. Instead, on the worst day of your life, all the terrible things that ripped you apart made you carve off a piece yourself. Terry Pratchet's The Truth had a similar piece in it, and if you've read, it, you know why I'd vote for anything but that.

edit: Forgot the spell vote.

[X] Death of Purple Irises - Tearing the power from the stolen divine objects, Rena can cast it out as a cloud of fragments of power that take the form of purple irises. They can cut down a charging horde, and flowers grow where they fall.

Assuming, of course, that tearing the power from them doesn't permanently destroy them. That would be useful, but not really useful enough.
 
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I'm just isolating these comments, because they're fascinating in their own way.
They really, really are.

Also the way some people have taken your statement to mean there's still room to believe she didn't love him, too.

[X] Chiro Koharu, your friend since childhood, who never abandoned you even when the rumours started. You fed her to a prince of chaos in return for many strange secrets and a contract of power.

If I was going for "what makes Rena the least awful person," I'd probably go for number three. As @Aleph points out, it's an awful, awful thing to do from a pragmatic standpoint, but that's not the same question as "which is the worst departure from ethical behavior," now is it.

But we're playing an evil sorceress. Trying to be the "least awful" evil sorceress is just going to result in us, the voters, deluding ourselves.

[X] Watchful Beauteous Statue - It is a miracle of the gods that they can hear prayers and respond to them. Taking the power for herself, Rena can see and speak through stone images of herself.

That said, I think Aleph has a pretty good argument as to which spell we should take.
 
I'm just isolating these comments, because they're fascinating in their own way.

What makes "I murdered the man I loved because he found out I was lying to him about not actually having given up practising evil magic and consorting with soul eating monsters" so much more acceptable than the other two?

An interesting insight into voter psychology, perhaps?
Personal feeling.

From most repulsive to least was the servant, then the friend, then the lover. Probably because the servant had undying loyalty, the friend stuck by her side even through the nasty rumors, but the guy asked Rena to stop consorting with the fae.

Terrible of Rena to agree when she didn't keep that promise, but when compared to I need more power so my bff has to go with no noted impetus, it sounds like if the guy never found out she would have carried on. I just really like undying loyalty so that crossed out the servant for me. Yeah, I know that they're all bad. They're probably all objectively bad since it's being put to a vote so I just ranked them from most to least personally repulsive and picked the least because I want to enjoy my time here. That'd be a little hard if I'm too disgusted with Rena.
 
What makes "I murdered the man I loved because he found out I was lying to him about not actually having given up practising evil magic and consorting with soul eating monsters" so much more acceptable than the other two?
Possibly the fact that your comment here injects more information into the decision than was originally provided. You wrote:

[ ] Chiro Koharu, your friend since childhood, who never abandoned you even when the rumours started. You fed her to a prince of chaos in return for many strange secrets and a contract of power.
[ ] Ferem Niko Koizumi, who courted you and you might have married. But he wanted you to stop consorting with fae. You promised you'd stop, but... well, when he discovered you in bed with two of them, he had to go.
[ ] Neiko, your faithful maid who fled with you. She was loyal to the end, even when everyone else had turned on you. But you needed a woman with the same build to leave in that burning building to shake the Immaculate hunters.

As written, the first implies a reciprocal relationship - "your friend" - and someone who did something beneficial to you "who never abandoned you".

The third does not imply a necessarily reciprocal relationship, but at least someone who was devoted to you: "your faithful maid" and "loyal to the end".

The second, however, implies really neither. "Who courted you" and "you might have married" says nothing more than that you considered each other potentially useful, though it can be read - especially in the context of the question - to imply some deeper relationship. Certainly it doesn't say that love was involved on either part.
 
... and none of these options are intended as a "least bad" thing, except if voters believe that murdering someone you're in love with is innately less bad than murdering a friend or a faithful servant. Which really says more about the voter than Rena.
Well, for me, to unpack my thinking somewhat;

I don't want to sacrifice the lover because that's tied in with the hedonism angle, and I don't... I don't dislike that side of Rena, far from it, but I don't want her to be that one-note. That leaves the childhood friend sacrificed for power, or the lifelong companion sacrificed for escape. Both are acceptable to me, but I agree with Aleph's point that Rena probably didn't start this callous. Ultimately, I favour sacrificing the lifelong companion because it's the most recent choice, the one that speaks most to who Rena is in the present, and is also the most purely callous of the three. Additionally, where Aleph sees it as potentially less evil because Neiko was a subordinate we might not have cared about, I take that very dynamic as a statement of her evil. You can tell a lot about a person from how they treat their subordinates, the people in their power whom they don't need to worry about offending.
Possibly the fact that your comment here injects more information into the decision than was originally provided. You wrote:
No it doesn't. EarthScorpion already covered this in the very post you quoted. Quote the full section;
Choose one person you cherished and betrayed.

[ ] Chiro Koharu, your friend since childhood, who never abandoned you even when the rumours started. You fed her to a prince of chaos in return for many strange secrets and a contract of power.
[ ] Ferem Niko Koizumi, who courted you and you might have married. But he wanted you to stop consorting with fae. You promised you'd stop, but... well, when he discovered you in bed with two of them, he had to go.
[ ] Neiko, your faithful maid who fled with you. She was loyal to the end, even when everyone else had turned on you. But you needed a woman with the same build to leave in that burning building to shake the Immaculate hunters.
As EarthScorpion said, "who courted you" and "you might have married" combined with the starting context of "you cherished them" absolutely implies romantic love. You're minimising that as a modifier in the last line of your post, but it is a key piece of framing.
 
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As EarthScorpion said, "who courted you" and "you might have married" combined with the starting context of "you cherished them" absolutely implies romantic love.
No it doesn't.

The use of the word 'cherish' in a context in which it is applied to three relationships, two of which are generally not suggested or implied to be romantic, indicates a use of the term more along the lines of "valued highly" - a perfectly conventional (and probably more conventional) use of the term than one that implies a romantic love.

If EarthScorpion had meant to convey romantic love, that could absolutely have been done. But it was not.

In fact, I would go further and say that it is silly to complain that people didn't read it in when the way the option was written leads one to the conclusion that there no reciprocal romantic love. In a situation in which you would expect it to be mentioned if it was important, the language specifically not only doesn't imply it but almost goes out of its way to avoid it.
 
I don't want to sacrifice the lover because that's tied in with the hedonism angle, and I don't... I don't dislike that side of Rena, far from it, but I don't want her to be that one-note. That leaves the childhood friend sacrificed for power, or the lifelong companion sacrificed for escape. Both are acceptable to me, but I agree with Aleph's point that Rena probably didn't start this callous. Ultimately, I favour sacrificing the lifelong companion because it's the most recent choice, the one that speaks most to who Rena is in the present, and is also the most purely callous of the three. Additionally, where Aleph sees it as potentially less evil because Neiko was a subordinate we might not have cared about, I take that very dynamic as a statement of her evil. You can tell a lot about a person from how they treat their subordinates, the people in their power whom they don't need to worry about offending.

Huh, you've convinced me.

Changing:

[x] Neiko, your faithful maid who fled with you. She was loyal to the end, even when everyone else had turned on you. But you needed a woman with the same build to leave in that burning building to shake the Immaculate hunters.
[x] Commanding the Earth's Bones - Just the gods have power over Creation, through stolen power Rena can order the ground to sculpt itself and rise or fall. She can call up walls or create chasms.
 
No it doesn't.

The use of the word 'cherish' in a context in which it is applied to three relationships, two of which are generally not suggested or implied to be romantic, indicates a use of the term more along the lines of "valued highly" - a perfectly conventional (and probably more conventional) use of the term than one that implies a romantic love.
Oh please, don't split hairs. Cherish clearly means different things in each option, and a courtship + thoughts of marriage + cherishing them? Love might not be the only way to value someone highly, but it's for damn sure the most natural reading. We're an evil pulp sorceress, dude, sacrificing lovers is one of the most well-trodden story beats for the archetype around. It's not some out-there idea that needs to be made crystal clear.

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To unpack my choice even further, as these things occur to me; the thing about Chiro is I take notice of that line, "who never abandoned you even when the rumours started." Rumours. As in, what Rena was doing wasn't known, and if Chiro knew what we were doing, the option would say that instead of talking about gossip. By implication, the story here is one of innocence lost, of Chiro's final moments being of horrified discovery of Rena's true nature. And that's a line crossed, no doubt, it's treacherous and callous and all sorts of Bad Things, but it's... It also suggests to me a situation where that friendship was kind of doomed anyway, almost? If, for whatever reason, Chiro didn't know what Rena was doing, then that speaks of where Rena's values lay even before the sacrifice. This comes across like the two were already on two different courses.

But Neiko? Neiko was loyal to the end. They had to know what Rena was like. They had to know exactly who they were serving - they fled with Rena even after she was overthrown. And they weren't some nameless drone, they were a cherished companion. Look at this;
"Your curse has no power over me, crone," you tell her, the acid thick in your voice. "If I'd slain you, I might pay some attention to your babbling. A death curse has power. But this is just spite from an old hag."

As the doors open and the bracingly cold water washes over you, you grimace. This isn't bravado. This isn't you putting on a pretty face. Her curse has no power over you.

Why would it? It's already happened.
This stinks of bitterness, of old regrets. Whichever option wins here, this is something that still weighs on Rena. She might have made her peace with it, decided the power and wealth and luxuries are worth it, but she still thinks of it as a heavy price. So if Neiko wins, she was a cherished companion, someone who had been with Rena all her life, who saw the full depths her mistress plumbed, and accepted it. Validated it, maybe.

And Rena killed her. Cast her aside in a moment of need. Not even left her to some last stand - when 'everyone else had turned on you', Rena murdered her closest companion herself, because she needed to lay a false trail. That is evil. That is looking at this good and pure thing you have held all your life and callously throwing it away just to save your own skin. That's exactly the sort of turn the story of an evil sorceress takes to show there's no coming back for this character.
 
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Oh please, don't split hairs.
This strikes me as a particularly ironic comment, in context.

Here I am, offering my opinion on why, very generally, people don't seem to have interpreted a certain piece of text in a certain way, and you are accusing me of "splitting hairs" by objecting to your highly pedantic reading of the text.

You can argue about how it's the most natural reading as much as you like, but: a) you're not even being accurately pedantic and b) your reading seems to be distinctly a minority understanding of the language.
 
[X] Neiko, your faithful maid who fled with you. She was loyal to the end, even when everyone else had turned on you. But you needed a woman with the same build to leave in that burning building to shake the Immaculate hunters.

[X] Death of Purple Irises - Tearing the power from the stolen divine objects, Rena can cast it out as a cloud of fragments of power that take the form of purple irises. They can cut down a charging horde, and flowers grow where they fall.
 
XII. A Map to the Future
XII. A Map to the Future

The defeated former goddess carries you to the surface in a bubble, and then you relax and just take in the praise from your adoring toy boy.

Yeah, right. If only.

Things aren't so simple when Yanbu carries you to the surface. Your presence has been missed. You're actually surprised. But one of the men found your clothes lying by the pool, and started making assumptions.

You're there to explain to the deyha that there was a malicious, man-drowning spirit dwelling in the pool that snatched Amigere and you saved him - and dealt with the spirit. And that's why they certainly are going to give you back your baggage.

It is necessary to get a little terse with them.

Oh, there's fear there, Fear from the pretty boys and fear from the hulking beastwomen. Someone who'll dive into a pond where a man-killing spirit lives is someone you shouldn't mess with. Of course, as a dragon-child sorceress, they shouldn't have been messing with you beforehand, but sometimes fools need reminding.

There are medical supplies in your possessions once you get them back. You find a dry, dusty room where afternoon sunlight streams in through high slitted windows, and set down a blanket. A measure of poppy juice will take the edge off the pain, and then as it kicks in you get to treating your injuries. The burns and cuts, you clean and wrap. You're applying your diminishing supplies of bruise balm to your elbow, when your nose twitches at the scent of burning soap.

"Yes?" you ask the deyha leader Layan. Your nerves are humming. You remember when the two of you met. And there is the worry that she might have realised you hypnotised her leader.

She looks down at you, her orange eyes catching the light, her ugly flat face twisted in a sneer. "Well, look at you, sorceress," she says. Honestly, 'leers' is a better word. "Looks like you went and got yourself beat up."

"No thanks to you and your people," you lie. "The goddess got angry at how you were taking water from her pool. You should really be thanking me. She'd have taken away all your pretty boys if I hadn't been here."

Ah, there's a twitch. She doesn't like the idea. She might look like she fell out the ugly tree, hit an ugly rock, and then rolled down the ugly hill before landing in an ugly swamp - and smell like it too - but she doesn't like the idea of someone taking them.

"You keep your hands off them, muriha," she growls. She also doesn't like the idea of you calling them pretty.

"Darling," you tell her, "I have the birdman I got in payment from your captain. I don't need so many men." It's a lie, but she doesn't need to know that. "Now, because I have that agreement with the captain and technically it lasts until you get me to Cahzor, but if that wasn't the case…" you snap your fingers, with a pop of green light, "well, I'd be expecting to be paid for saving you all."

Layan recoils away at the flash - a parlour trick, nothing more - and paces back and forth in front of you. "Why are you loyal to Mahmuna?" she demanded.

How you love this. This mound of muscle doesn't know how to address you. You; soft, beautiful, and mid-way through treating your wounds from the last fight. She wants your power.

"She paid me for this job." You pause, considering this beastwoman. "When this job ends, I won't be," you say, loading your voice with implications.

She leans back, and chuckles. "Oh. So that's how it is."

"Darling, if you can afford me, I'll take offers into consideration," you say. You have no reason to get involved in the struggles of beastwoman savages, but you do have reason to make her think you could be an ally.

She looks you up and down - and her eyes linger. Her voice softens. "If you need more time in bed to get better, you just have to ask me," she says.

"We don't need to linger," you say cooly. "I'm not some weakling. These wounds are battle scars. They'll heal."

You actually very much want to linger. But you can't - won't! - look weak in front of these savages. You don't like the way the deyha eye you up like you're meat. Better to have them scared of you than thinking about how much you might be worth to the right specialist buyer. There are way to chain even a dragon-child's will.

You watch her go - that muscular build, that towering height, and consider whether her soul might be useful to don. No, you decide. Not when you're hurt like this. You can't risk the struggle.

But you want away from the deyha and their brutal politics. And their stink.




As the sun sets you set out again, but things don't go as well as might have been hoped. As it turns out, there's been a landslide up ahead as the soft peak crumbles, and it's hard going for the steeds. The men have to help clear the way so their horses can cross, and progress slows to a crawl.

The day's heating up by the time you reach a dusty, tired town that huddles around sandstone caves. You were meant to have passed it in the night. It's not a one-horse town, because you don't think they could afford a horse. There's just scrawny goats and balding chicken, rooting around in the parched soil. They've built countless waist-high walls here, to try to break up the passage of the hot wind and stop their dirt blowing away.

Layan, for her part, is looking at the mounts with concern. "We take a longer rest here," she orders. Her giant hyena is panting, and one of the mules is limping. She glances at you. "Lucky for you, sorceress. Shame your magic couldn't move those rocks out of the way."

"Do not mock sorcerous power lightly, deyha," you tell her, wiping your brow. "A goddess made that mistake." You look at her through your veil. "Let us hope you are wiser."

In truth, you're exhausted. You need to sleep, to let your body mend. You're missing the boring sandship because it bounced around far less than a pony. Your wounds hurt.

There is, thankfully, a bar where you make certain purchases - and you can easily persuade one of the locals to go live with her daughter for a night in return for coins. The cave squat is quite inadequate for your usual tastes, but in your situation it will do. Barely. Another coin is enough to get the old, greying woman running your errands and preparing food for you.

You sit in the gloom on the rug on the sandy floor, and carefully clean yourself off with rags. In your hand mirror, you can see that your eye is as bad as you feared, though the swelling has gone down somewhat. It'll heal. The gash across your stomach is healing nicely, but your elbow is still swollen and sore. Not broken, but you'll need to keep it mobile or it might lock up on you.

Pouring yourself a cup of the sour, resinous wine, you shudder as it goes down. It's really awful, but several more cups get you feeling nicely numb.

Amigere stands at the door. "Are you feeling any better?" he asks softly.

"I'm just tired, darling," you say. You light up a cheroot, swirling smoke around inside your mouth. "Go off, have fun. I need to sleep."

He doesn't leave, though. "Meira," he says, using that false name. He's being awfully presumptuous by using your false personal name, but you're too tired to care. He edges closer, his hands going to your back as he starts to massage your shoulders. "Are you sure you don't need me?"

With a chuckle, you gesture at him with your cheroot. "Of course I need you," you say - and the face of poor darling Ferem Niko Koizumi flashes before your face. He would have been your second husband. You had really loved him; needed him. But he had wanted you to give up your chaos-granted power, and you couldn't do that. In the end, you'd wanted the ever-changing tang of the wyld and the many hands of your chaos-dwelling lovers more than him. And then he'd found out you'd been lying to him and… well, he had to go.

Amigere will face the same fate if he pokes his nose too deep into your affairs. In both senses of the word. If you could give up consorting with the forces of chaos, you wouldn't be in your current situation - and Koizumi would have died for nothing.

And clearly his death mattered.

"I need you," you repeat, "but while the mind is willing, the flesh is weak. Let me heal, darling." You lean back against his thighs. "You still owe me."

"Well, you saved my life," he says. "Of course I do." His hands reach around to cup your breasts. "You know," he whispers in your ear, "there are certain leads I haven't followed yet for ancient mysteries you might be interested in. If you just fund me, I could seek them out for you."

That… wasn't the kind of owe-ing you were talking about. You suck in a pained breath as he accidentally puts pressure on one of your burns. "Let's not talk about these things now," you say, batting his hands way. "Go on; have some food, drink, relax from your traumatising ordeal. Once we get to Cahzor, I'll want you in tip-top condition."

He leaves, and you're left alone in this house. The old lady is running errands for you; you listen as Amigere's footsteps fade down the corridor outside. Time to see what...

"I don't trust him," Sei says from inside one of the niches in the stone wall.

"You don't trust him?"

"He's trying to lure you to him."

"Sei, Sei, Sei," you say. "Of course he is. I'm an exceptionally beautiful woman who just saved his life. What do you expect him to do?"

The cat harrumphs.

"Jealous, are we?" you enquire.

"I don't get jealous of your lovers," your familiar says, tail lashing behind him. "It's a high risk occupation. They tend to wind up dead when they find out more than they should. Or fed to me. Or you get bored with them and then there's the drama of a breakup."

"I just think you're jealous," you say mildly.

He doesn't respond, clearly defeated by your wisdom. And that means you can finally see what the treasure you found was. You recover it from its hiding place, biting your lip, and turn it over in your hands.

"Well, well, well," Sei says, dropping down to pad over and curl up on your lap. "How did you get your hands on that without the goddess… sorry, former goddess noticing you had that?"

You only raise one eyebrow at him. "I'll tell you when you tell me how you got out of the sunken temple without getting wet."

"Mmm. Well, wash your hands, my lady. You don't know where it's been."

Firmly, you pick him up and drop him off your lap. He makes a squawking sound in being handled this way, which is nearly worth the spike of pain as the motion jars your elbow.

Once again, you return to staring at the thing you found. A white jadescroll - a wonder of the ancients, marked with the seal of the Shogunate. It may hold secrets from that fallen power, which ended over seven hundred years ago in plague and invasion by the princes of chaos. Or it might have been overwritten more recently by someone from this modern age, in which case it could hold anything. Sorcerous lore, blackmail material - there are so many uses for a jadescroll, which can hold thousands of pages.

"Well, are you going to open it, or are you just going to put it back where you found it?" Sei inquires.

"Shut up," you mutter. "I'm trying to work out how to activate it."

It takes some examination, but you figure it out, There's a chime from the jadescroll, and in a concertina movement it extends, until it's nearly the length of your forearm. Ah! You've seen one of these before in the great history-rooms of the Cherak Council. You stand it on end, wedging it into a crack in the floor.

Nothing happens until you take it out again and put it in the other way. And that's when the top expands like a blossoming flower, revealing a crystal under the jade. It lights up, flickering, and a wavering High Realm glyph appears. It's heavily corrupted and sometimes cuts out entirely. Tilting your head, you realise it's on it's side.

"Open," you read.

The glyph expands, breaking apart into more lights. It takes form as a sphere of blue-white light that floats over the tip of the jadescroll. You don't realise what it is until you pull yourself upright.

"It's a map," you breathe.

"Well observed, my lady," Sei says, voice thick with sarcasm.

Much of the text is corrupted, but the map is mostly intact. There's a floating, wavering city in pale blue, sprawling over what you think is a mountain valley by its size. Icons in various colours float, marking out various places. The architecture looks old, but there's no date you can see.

Stretching out, you stick your fingers into the hard air and rotate the map, peering down the valley. What are all these sites? What do they mean? Oh, that useless goddess, failing to take proper care of this treasure!

You stroke the dam at the top of the valley, a sizable mountain lake behind it. You're not sure where in Creation this is, but there are only so many dams built by the ancients. Perhaps this might even be Cazhor - after all, you're only a couple of days away from that city and your destination is Cazhor-upon-Dam.

Reaching out, you tap one of the icons - one in the valley wall. A floating red box appears, but the text in it is so corrupted you can't read it. There's the hovering glyph for 'Documents', but when you touch it, the map cuts out and only reappears when you withdraw your hand.

"Okay," you whisper to yourself. "Yes. I can work with this. It doesn't matter how corrupted it is. It's a map. I don't know what exactly, but all these locations must be important." You bite your lip. "It doesn't matter if most of them have been plundered in the years since. One of them might have been missed. Even if they haven't, this is a jadescroll. I can use this. Yes. Yes."

Taking the jadescroll up in shaking hands, you return it to its compact form. Who knows how long it will remain operational? You need to make copies of the information in it. Can't let it fail before you make sure you're not losing anything.

You're being sensible, and trying very hard not to dance out of sheer joy. This might be exactly what you're looking for to rebuild your fortune and power. For once, fortune smiles on you.

"Is something funny?" Sei asks, with a yawn. "You're grinning like a fool."

You stoop down to stroke your familiar. "I have come into some luck, darling," you tell him. "Quite some luck. And who knows! You might be getting some snacks soon!"

Your laughter echoes out of the room.

END OF ARC 1



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[X] Stabbed in the back
-[X] 400 to Viper Style
-[X] 300 to Unnoticed Breeze Style

Because really, why wouldn't incredible violence be our first priority? We can fight armies well enough, sure, but we had a rough time beating up that pathetic goddess. Heaven and it's ninjas forbid we run into another dragonblood without at least one option for killing them. Also, we can barely perv on anyone right now! Or break into someone's palace to steal their shit, but, you know, priorities.

Edit: I! am a fool. Also, currently bad at formatting. Hopefully, I got it this time.
 
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[X] Plan Assasin
-[X] 200 to Peacock Style
-[X] 500 to Unnoticed Breeze Style

Assasin skills matter more than pure violence- like, we don't really want to fight at all if we can. Other people should do that for us. If we need to kill people with our own hands, killing with the first strike is the best option.

Also a sneaking skill has plenty of non combat uses.
 
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I'm just isolating these comments, because they're fascinating in their own way.

What makes "I murdered the man I loved because he found out I was lying to him about not actually having given up practising evil magic and consorting with soul eating monsters" so much more acceptable than the other two?

An interesting insight into voter psychology, perhaps?



Weeeeeeeell, some people might say it might not be the option that means she has an established tendency to murder lovers who find out too much about her secrets. Even if she loved them. And she did love him - that's why its such a notable betrayal.

As Imrix says...



... and none of these options are intended as a "least bad" thing, except if voters believe that murdering someone you're in love with is innately less bad than murdering a friend or a faithful servant. Which really says more about the voter than Rena.
There's nothing in the vote that says that Rena was in love. It merely says that he courted her and they might have married. Considering that she's of a noble house (as I understand it), the thought that it was anything but arranged marriage didn't even cross my mind.
Hey, I saw it as the most evil. Chiro was longest ago, and Neiko was a subordinate and thus we might not have cared about her as much since she was never an equal, but Ferem... we might have married Ferem. If. If he hadn't tried to get in the way of our lust for power.

That's really what I picked him for, at core. Chiro says "we will kill to gain magic and knowledge", and Neiko says "we will kill to survive", but Ferem says "we will kill anyone and anything, no matter how beloved, that tries to tear us down or make us stop consolidating power".
Uhhh

What kind of quest do you think this is

Rena is in the bussiness of devouring souls to turn them into magical slaves or feed antinatural abominations. She did this to a totally harmless servant just a couple updates ago. She had done it to random peasants in the past

There is nothing reedemable here.

[X] Neiko, your faithful maid who fled with you. She was loyal to the end, even when everyone else had turned on you. But you needed a woman with the same build to leave in that burning building to shake the Immaculate hunters.
[X] Watchful Beauteous Statue - It is a miracle of the gods that they can hear prayers and respond to them. Taking the power for herself, Rena can see and speak through stone images of herself.

Death of Irises is more inmediately useful, sure, but WBS is inmensely better for Rena after she gets a new base of power. Longdistance communication is just incredible for organizational purposes.

(Now, it only allows to communicate with places with statues of Rena, ie, friendly bases, but is still really really good).


Personally, I think the voter bit (and I know I'm late to the party, but I just caught up) is simple: Any of these choices are acceptable (people are tools) to the voters, due to who we are playing, but whether the marriage was arranged or not, the servant and friend were both noted for being loyal. The maybe-marriage was noted for asking us to give up power.

This is SV. We are here to Hit Things At Sufficient Velocity.

As for the vote,


[X] Plan Assasin

We are Exalted, and should be able to beat down any irritants we choose to face. But we should be killing things in private - that way, we can Take Their Souls without political backlash (read: The Wyld Hunt).

Of course, building up an army of golems- when they shows the face of the soul animating them- is a sadly suboptimal option.

On the other hand, killing people in private and then taking their form is nice and streamlined.
 
[X] Plan Sneaky Survivor:
-[X] 200 to Peacock Style
-[X] 300 to Graceful Willow Style
-[X] 200 to Unnoticed Breeze Style
 
Hm, where to go, what did Rena do this arc?

On her escape south Rena hypnotized a dehyena leader to leave unharmed, gain a little seed money (pearls) and to save Amigere. In a nice oasis she practiced some katas to start her path towards recovery from unfair, closeminded heroes.

After a little heart-to-heart with Amigere that was rudely interrupted by Yanbu, the goddess of this dump, Rena jumps into the pond to rescue her bird-boy so that they can finish their buisness. In the temple ruin Sei "recovers" an old artifact of Rena that she uses to devour the soul of a housekeeping spirit and create a golem. Finally after a quite cool kung-fu fight through Yanbu's personal quarters, Rena defeats the fallen goddess saves Amigere, gains some nice cuffs and steals a map.

I would say that first of all we invest in our physical attributes, ergo martial arts. Rena did wuxia fight a forgotten goddess in her temple to regain Amigere. She mostly used viper-style offensively (mostly due to being naked) and gracefull-willow style defensively. There was not much sneaking she could do after initial attack. Accordingly, I would say we raise Viper-style and Peacock-style to represent Rena's success in fighting Yanbu using the first one and her retraining the second one due to her injuries. Last but not least I would say we invest the leftover XP in Unnoticed Breeze Style. Maybe to represent her releraning the basics of the style now that she has a treasure-hunting map with all the climbing and scaling that implies.


[X] Plan Mai/Ty Lee
-[X] 400 to Viper Style
-[X] 200 to Peacock Style
-[X] 100 to Unnoticed Breeze Style
 
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