Empyrean [Elden Ring/Destiny]

46. The Battle of the Siofra River
Many thanks to @BinaryApotheosis for betareading and fact-checking.

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The Battle of the Siofra River

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"Oh, Prathik, when I saw the Fallen—I was so worried!"

"Dad! You're alive!"

"I am, and so are—Ah! What is that?"

"I am Parvati-9, a Lightbearer. I defended young Prathik from the Fallen and told him I would wait with him until you returned. It is good to see you still live."

"Thank you, Lady Parvati!"

"You are quite welcome, young one. Now that your father has returned, I should be going."

"…Wait. You said you defended Prathik? From all these Fallen?"

"Yes."

"…Could you continue to defend us? We have little with which to pay you, but all we have would be yours."


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When they don't have a target to hunt, it seems like the silver tears and Fallen Hawks don't really know what to do with themselves. They wander aimlessly through Nokron's streets, with no clear patrol routes or squads.

It's difficult to hold onto invisibility long-term. It takes concentration—the kind of concentration that's very hard to maintain in the middle of a fight, even if no one can see you to shoot directly at you. Even running makes it hard—physical exertion takes attention.

Which is why I move slowly through the streets of Nokron, cloaked in the Void, completely unseen by my enemies. I'm not crouching, or coiled and tense, or anything else you might expect of someone sneaking around, because all of those things take focus, and all of my focus is on the Void. I just walk, my steps entirely casual—instinctive.

Left, Winchester whispers, and almost breaks my concentration. But having him guide me is better than trying to remember the path myself. I turn left.

It's a few more Winchester-guided turns before I find my way back to the church where I ran into Nikolai. The floor is still covered in silver fluid, but I don't see anything alive. There's nothing on the radar superimposed on the corner of my HUD, either, so I finally let go of my invisibility with a sigh of relief. The Void lets me go with a buff of dark mist and a few drops of condensation on my leathers.

It's not that they're not watching the church. They are. They're just watching it from outside, I passed the Fallen Hawks on guard on my way in. Which, if they were facing people who couldn't turn invisible, would actually be smart. This way they can potentially lure the Nox into making a break for it, whereas if they were in the church the Nox probably wouldn't take the risk until there was absolutely no other choice.

I roll my shoulders as I cross the sanctum. It doesn't hurt to push my Light to its limits, nor does it leave me feeling drained in any physical sense. But it's mentally exhausting. We all have our little rituals to get feeling back into the stressed-out gray matter. Grant pops every joint in his fingers. Thermidor pops the magazine in and out of his gun. I roll my shoulders. There are worse habits.

I knock on the wall. "Hey," I say—not shouting, because I don't want to call the army down on myself if I can help it. "Anybody on the other side of this?"

There's a beat of silence. Then, with a surprisingly soft grinding of stone on stone, the wall slides away. "Inside," hisses a Nox monk—not Nikolai—with a nervous glance over my shoulder. "Quickly!"

I follow him in and the wall slides shut behind me. "Barrett-12?" he asks.

"That's me," I say. "How are things down here? Any new developments?"

"A few more have made their way into the catacombs," says the Nox. "None of the Nightmaidens, alas. If there are any survivors save Lady Katerina and Lady Themis, they have not found their way to us."

"We can't wait any longer, I'm afraid," I say. "We need to get you all out of here—today."

He stares at me. "Out… to the surface?"

"Yep. We've got a plan. Take me to the Nightmaidens, they should hear this."

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"And thou art certain the Followers shall honor their word?" Themis asks skeptically.

"Sure as I can be," I say. "Not like I've known them all that long myself. But they took some time to think about it. Those who come with us know they might be on a one-way trip. They volunteered anyway."

"They might be intending to bait us into a trap," Themis says.

"And any Nox here might be a double agent in service to the Will," Katerina says. "We can survive in these catacombs for a time, sister, but not forever. And we cannot hope to escape alone. We have no allies which we know we can trust, so we must trust those we can only hope will not betray us to our enemies."

Themis grimaces, but doesn't argue.

"If it's any comfort," I say, "Those Who Follow are only there for basic military support. All the key parts of the plan are on me and my team. I don't know if that's better, exactly, but you've already trusted me this far, right?"

Katerina nods, but her face is impassive. "If the choice is between placing our fates in thy hands and leaving them to the Hawks and the corrupted tears, then thy hands are far the better choice."

"Great," I say. "How quickly can you have everyone ready to march?"

"Grant us one hour," she says, standing. "Themis, thou shalt organize all those who were not soldiers ere this week. I shall gather the monks and swordstresses. We shall meet thee, Barrett, by the very entrance thou usedst to enter the catacombs."

Themis stands, gives Katerina a stiff but deferential nod, and marches out.

"I'll wait there, then," I say.

"Go," Katerina says. "Brother Daxos, go thou to the barracks and gather thy cadre. We march within the hour."

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A little over an hour later, the wall slides open in the church again. I creep out, gesturing to the Nox to wait in the tunnel. A smoke bomb hides me from view as I step out onto the street. My radar picks out a little over half a dozen sentries watching the entrance to the church—mostly silver tears in sniper perches overlooking the street.

I take a deep breath as I unsling the Dead Man's Tale. "Ready?" I whisper to Winchester.

As a loaded gun, bud.

I take aim, exhale, and fire. The action shatters my cloak, but the tear splashes into so much silver goo. Before the others can react, I've taken out two more. I have to dodge a couple spears with a roll, but I take out the rest as soon as I'm on my feet again.

Then I holster my gun, reach for the Light, and close my fist around my burning Golden Gun. I raise it, aiming for the false stars hovering near the cavern ceiling, and fire three shots. Then I turn the gun down an alley and fire on a squad of Fallen Hawks just as they round the corner. "Move!" I shout over my shoulder to the Nox. "Soldiers on the outside, civilians in the middle! East, to the cliffs!"

My Golden Gun dissipates, but this isn't the Crucible, where there are rules governing how often I'm allowed to Super, and I'm… well, I'm in my element. There are people behind me who can't fight, not like I can. People whose lives are threatened for no reason other than that they're alive and their enemies want them not to be.

I am a Guardian. This is my wall, and the Light and the Darkness are my spears.

I flick my fingers, banishing the last embers of the Golden Gun, then close them again on the hilt of Silence. In my left hand, Squall crystallizes out of the air. I leap into the air to get a better vantage and throw Silence down the street to the west, freezing a gathering group of tears and Hawks in their tracks. Then I toss Squall south at another group. As it detonates, the whirling blizzard it unleashes tears them apart, then keeps going, wandering in search of enemies to destroy. It won't hurt the Nox—it responds intuitively to who I want safe, and who I want killed.

I land, already pulling out Osteo Striga. "Plenty of acceptable targets here," I murmur to the gun. "So keep the poison to them, got it?"

It warms under my fingers in anticipation. I take that as agreement.

There are hundreds of Nox. Way too many for me to just march at either the head or the tail of the group and expect to keep them all safe. So I jump around, using Strand to grapple to the front to clear a path, then jumping onto a balcony to fire over their heads at an enemy behind, before zig-zagging my way back down the line taking shots down alleyways at anyone trying to flank us. Fortunately, Nokron really isn't that big—not compared to the Last City, anyway—so even with a group this big moving as slowly as the slowest Nox survivors, it only takes us a little over half an hour to get to the cliffs. Which is still a really long time, and we do lose a few—to silver tears, mostly, sniping from the flanks wherever I'm not. But there's no time to mourn them, not when I have to get the rest of their people out of here.

The others meet us at the buttresses, a firing line of Those Who Follow already in place keeping away anything trying to get close enough to attack. It won't last—more Hawks and tears are streaming towards us, from all over the city, faster than our archers and spellcasters can take them out—but it might just last long enough.

I hit the ground just on the edge of the cliff. Far below I can see the Siofra River, lit from above by the same false starlight that illuminates the whole cavern, and in places brightened by strange spheres of pale blue light that drift lazily over the water, like will-o'-the-wisps or ball lightning.

The buttresses are broken in several places—they absolutely aren't holding anything up in this state—but I can follow them with my eyes and see where they meet a hill on the river's other side, probably a couple hundred yards away. And that hill, I can see, slopes gently downward, given a clear path down to the riverbed.

"Barrett!" Atrebal calls, fighting their way through the shuffling Nox to my side. "Canst thou provide us a bridge, as thou promised? This distance is larger than I remembered."

My lips twitch. "Size matters not," I quip, kneeling down. Over our private channel, Winchester makes a noise of disgust. I ignore him, pressing my palms against the rock of the cliff. I take a deep breath, reaching down deep into myself, into the very core of my being. I find the parts of my self that I wouldn't be able to change even if I wanted to and the parts that I never want to allow to change. The part of me that was forged by Shin Malphur after Sara died. The part of me that fused together in the depths of the Vault of Glass. The part of me that hardened like a pearl in an oyster as I stood in the abandoned bedroom of a biological human who had once been named Barrett in Eventide.

I gather all these things up, forcing them to the surface, and as I exhale, I bring their immutability into the world. Pale blue crystals spread from my fingertips, creeping along the marble of the two nearest buttresses. Whenever the spreading Stasis comes to a crack or gap, it spears outward in a sharp growth of crystal, closing the opening. It takes time, and it takes intense focus. It's easier than staying invisible for an hour was, but not by much—and I'm about to have to hold this for who knows how long.

But, at long last, the last gaps close. The moment I see that, I gasp out, "Go!" and shut my eyes. Distantly, I hear Atrebal give a command to the Nox. I hear them start storming across the bridges. But the sound fades away as I retreat inward.

It's not physically taxing, any more than holding invisibility was physically taxing. My shoulders don't shake with exertion, my nickel-alloy teeth don't grit. But I have to hold my mind perfectly within that core of myself that houses Stasis. I have to… not wallow in it, because that implies I'm disturbing it. It implies that I'm creating ripples in the lake of my subconscious. I can't afford ripples. I need to calcify it. I need to be nothing but those unchanging parts of myself, to let everything else fade away.

Eris Morn was right, all those years ago, to be afraid that Darkness would be a path to obsession and fanaticism. Not all Darkness—Strand isn't like that. But it was Stasis, or the echoes of Stasis, that led her to that idea, and that's exactly what Stasis is. Stasis is the pure form of Darkness that the Hive Sword-Logic tries to mimic. It's paring yourself down, honing yourself to only your essential components, refusing to change, to grow, to allow anything to exist within yourself beyond the essential ideas that make you yourself.

"Barrett!" Winchester's voice is barely audible, but it's enough to break my concentration. I gasp for breath as the crystals shatter.

"What?" I mumble, looking up.

"The others are all across!" shouts someone just above me. I look up to see Blaidd standing over me, his massive sword in the process of sweeping through three Fallen Hawks charging at him with spears. I see that they've already started climbing down the other buttresses. A lot of them fall as they try to jump the gaps, landing with distant, barely-audible splashes as they hit the distant river below at lethal speeds, but many more manage to reach the bottom. Those Who Follow are doing their best to keep them at bay from the other side of the river, but the enemy is gaining on the column of Nox descending towards the riverbed.

"Let's join them, then!" I shout up to the wolf-man, standing up and spinning around, pulling out the Striga and firing madly into the horde behind me. The burst of poison forces them back, and I take the opportunity. "Now!"

As one, Blaidd and I jump to the nearest buttress, which Blaidd and Those Who Follow have kept mostly clear of the enemy. We sprint down it, while I occasionally turn to fire bursts from the Striga to keep the horde behind us at bay.

It doesn't take us long to reach the other side. "Go!" shouts a shaman, gesturing for her people to move. "The Nox have already reached the ancient palace! The well is not far beyond!"

"Go," Blaidd tells me, in a voice that's as much a growl as words, even as Millicent appears out of the crowd of horned figures to stand at his side. "They'll need you at the fore. We'll bring up the rear."

I raise the Striga to him in salute, then turn and throw out a grapple, sailing over the heads of Those Who Follow in the direction of the Nox column.

Unfortunately, when I reach the head of that column, I discover we've stalled. Humanoid figures, like statues made of half-melted clay, are throwing themselves at the line of Nox monks and swordstresses. Atrebal is right at their head, and between slashes with their sword they throw out spells I've seen Trinovar use once or twice. But Atrebal tosses them out like candy—their throat expands like a frog's before belching out cones of dragonfire; a glowing tail appears behind them, sweeping out as they spin before vanishing again; a horn grows from their shoulder as they thrust it forward, before snapping off and fading away.

I land beside them after one such spell pushes the claymen back. "Guess you weren't able to get them to work with us?" I ask.

"Nay," they say grimly. "And the Hawks and tears draw nearer with every moment we are delayed here."

"Then we'd better stop being delayed." I draw my Arc Blade, sending Light coursing through it, and charge. The claymen shatter before me—a single blow turns one into a ceramic bomb, sending shrapnel flying through all the others around it. Several chunks of sharp clay ping off my shields each time I do this, but the Arc Light supercharges my defenses, keeping me (mostly) safe as I cut a path through them.

Slowly, we start making progress. I push the claymen back, opening a path between the crumbling stone walls of their ancient palace, until at last we break out onto the other side. And in the distance, I see it—the well.

It's a circular stone platform, maybe thirty or forty feet in diameter, right up against the wall of the chasm. It'd be hard to see, this far down—the false starlight is dimmer, here—except that it's lit brilliantly blue by the figure standing in the center of it. Her four pale-blue arms each hold a different spell, and even as I'm carving my way through the claymen towards her, she's keeping a squad of them away from herself with three hands while the fourth periodically shoots bolts of magic at those keeping us away from her.

I've never seen her before. But I have seen the doll Blaidd brought for Melina, and it looked exactly like her. Princess Ranni is here to help with the evacuation.

It takes us almost another quarter of an hour before we finally break through to her. The moment we do, she takes charge. "As many as can fit, onto the platform, now!" she calls to the Nox. "Warriors, allow passage to those who cannot fight! The top of the well is defended by mine other servants—we need only hold the enemy here!"

The Nox monks and swordstresses part to allow the civilians through, turning back around the face the armies bearing down on us—claymen, Fallen Hawks, silver tears, all in seemingly endless numbers.

I find myself standing beside Ranni at the perimeter, firing into the horde. I don't think the placement is a coincidence. "So," she says, almost conversational as a massive blast of bright blue magic flies from her fingertips. "Thou'rt Barrett-12, I gather."

"That's me, Princess," I say, taking aim with the Striga and holding down the trigger. The gun shrieks with cruel joy as the replenishing magazine feeds on death. "It's a pleasure, really. I appreciate your help with this."

"Fie, 'twas naught I was not well pleased to do," she says. "Blaidd is more than a mere servant to me." She shoots me a sidelong look, and I notice that her right eye is closed. More than that, I notice that there's a strange double-image to her, like a pale ghost that clings to her right side, its left eye overlapping perfectly with her closed right one. "And I owe thee, too. More than I can well express."

"Owe me?"

"I have thought dear Melina dead these many years," Ranni says. Her voice isn't quite a whisper, but it's quiet enough that I have to strain to hear her over the shrieking of the Hawks and the rattle of the Striga. "I knew her scarce more than a decade, hardly a droplet of time in comparison to all the ages for which I knew my other siblings and cousins. And yet… for those few years, she was the only remaining purity in the pit that was Leyndell. When she died… 'Twas as if the very last of Gold had left Marika's Order, leaving only the tarnish that had been growing for centuries."

"It's not like I brought her back to life or anything," I point out. "She was around. She found me."

"And yet, if thou hadst not left her to ride Torrent, I do not think I ever would have known of her survival," she says. "She could not travel far from south Limgrave without protection, and few but you would have protected her even while leaving her the mount which, I gather, hath granted her the ability to take visible form at all. When I heard that Torrent had been seen in Limgrave, I went to investigate, expecting to find a Tarnished had looted the resting place of my only innocent cousin. Instead… I found thee. Caring for her. And for that, I thank thee."

I shoot her a look while—for the first time in several minutes—reloading Osteo Striga. "When was this, exactly?"

"I saw thee at the Church of Elleh," she says, flinging a magic missile past me at a Hawk that got a little too close while I reloaded. "But at the time, I hid myself. I understood not what I saw and was suspicious. By the time I grew credulous, I had lost sight of thee."

"Fair enough, I guess. You're here now—that's plenty."

She smiles. "I am here now. I presume Melina is somewhere on the surface?"

"Last I heard she was in Fort Haight," I say. "That's my next stop after all this."

"Then it shall be mine as well."

"Lady Ranni! Barrett!" Blaidd calls from behind us. We both turn to see him waving from a mostly empty stone platform. "Come! The Nox have escaped! We are the last!"

"Very good, dear Blaidd," says Ranni. She walks slowly, on legs so thin and dainty I can barely believe they hold her weight. But to make up for her slow speed, she throws massive spells behind her every few steps to keep the enemy at bay. "Then let us be off as well."

As soon as she and I are on the platform, Millicent steps onto a pressure plate in its center, and the stone circle begins to glow and rise. I look down over the edge, watching the Hawks and claymen swarm around, falling in droves into the hole left beneath the well platform. There are corpses, of course, among the enemy forces—and not all of them are theirs. "Any idea how many we lost?" I ask Blaidd.

"Not the foggiest, I fear," Blaidd says. "I'm sure the Nightmaidens will have taken stock by the time we reach the surface." He lets out a breath. "I can scarcely believe we made it out of there, truth be told. My Lady—I did not realize you would descend in person. I would not have asked it of you… but I cannot deny my gratitude. Thank you."

"Ah, Blaidd," Ranni says, and her tone, even through her naturally cold, reedy voice, is warm and affectionate. "Where exactly dost thou think I would be without my shadow? I was well pleased to help… even if I may need to rest for some weeks hereafter."

"Then we shall bear you back to the manor where you may rest in comfort," Blaidd promises.

She smiles, and I notice suddenly that her body is shaking slightly with exertion. "I am… glad," she says. "Ah… I fear I grow weary faster than I hoped. May I take your shoulders?"

"Of course," Blaidd says warmly, kneeling down and lifting her up. As he settles her rail-thin, four-armed body atop his shoulders, I catch the first glimpse of sunlight above us.

Finally, after days of uncertainty and panic, we're back on the surface.
 
I don't like taking so many weeks off in such quick succession, but I actually have a plan of action this time.

As I alluded before this last chapter, I hit major climactic moments in both Empyrean and Of Many Colors at the same time. The difference between the two, however, is that I had the next several chapters of Of Many Colors properly outlined. My plans for the next chunk of Empyrean are currently much vaguer. Couple that with the fact that for months now I've been barely treading water—if that—with respect to getting my chapters written and edited in time for my weekly deadlines, and I was already going to have trouble getting this next chapter out by Friday.

So instead, I decided to try something else. The most expensive part of my process—the thing that has caused me to have trouble keeping up with writing where a year and a half ago I found it easy to write two chapters a week—is the context switching between stories. It's really hard to go from Empyrean to Of Many Colors and back. In theory, I'd like to write several chapters of one story, then switch for a couple weeks to write several chapters of the other. Unfortunately, it's hard to find the time to do that while also maintaining my upload schedule. So that's why, this week, I'm focused on Of Many Colors. I've already drafted multiple chapters ahead for it, and I'm hoping to get at least a couple more by the weekend. Once I feel like I have some actual runway on that side, I'll change gears back to Empyrean and do the same here. I'm hoping to make that switch over the weekend and have a chapter ready by next Friday, but it's possible that I'll need more time for the switch. Still, one way or another, I think this new process will make it much easier for me to maintain weekly updates in the long run, even though it does mean that I need to take one (possibly two, although I doubt it) weeks off of Empyrean to change over. Sorry to disappoint, but I hope the promise of more reliable weekly updates helps.
 
Whatever works best for your creative process, we're good with it. Do what's right for you ❤️
 
Man, I have no idea how people work on multiple stories at once. Even if I had all the writing time I wanted, trying to work on two different projects would just lead to me constantly feeling like I should be working on the other one instead and accomplishing nothing.
 
No update this week either; switching contexts and getting the next few chapters outlined took more than I expected. But I have built the outline now, so I don't think there's any real chance of not having a chapter ready by next week. And fortunately I already have the next four chapters of Of Many Colors drafted, so I can stay on Empyrean for a while now.
 
I really, really hate feeling like I'm making excuses, but I'm going to have to make some excuses.

The next chapter is partly drafted. By the time I would post it tomorrow, it will be fully drafted. But I can't get it edited by that time, partly because I don't like giving betareaders that kind of short deadline. This one has fought me. It's a transitional thing, right? Trying to go from Nokron-mode to surface-mode is giving me trouble. I've gotten through the worst of that now, so I'm confident I can get everything drafted very soon. But I was also a little slower this week because of Passover, travel, an extra-long D&D session to finish up an adventure, and a (very) minor exercise injury. There was just... other stuff going on.

So, one more week without Empyrean. I'm sorry. But I can practically guarantee it'll be ready by next week, and once I get this chapter done the next several should be much easier.
 
It's cool, dude. Sometimes life just hits you all at once.
 
47. The Surface
Many thanks to @BinaryApotheosis for betareading and fact-checking.

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47

The Surface


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"Godwyn. My son."

"I understand this not, father! Why would mother do this? Why send thee away, for something for which thou art blameless? Even if there is no way to have thy Grace returned—and I do not believe that the Erdtree's bounty can be so finite—why canst thou not at least remain in these lands?"

"I know this is difficult for thee—"

"Difficult!? My mother hath just sentenced my father, who should have been beside us both for many centuries yet, to exile until death! I know not what I should think, how I should feel! Whether to be furious with her, or to accept her judgement as the god in the Erdtree!"

"Thy faith is being tested, son. This is a good thing. If the sword is not tempered, it breaketh. Though this strife, thou shalt be forged into something greater."

"I do not wish to be forged into something greater! I wish to have both my parents."

"Aye. And I wish I could remain. But I am a warrior, Godwyn—I may have taken on nobility, and accepted my pact with Serosh, but I remain a creature of battle. My crown is warranted with strength. If it is no longer such strength that thy mother requires, then she needs must seek another sort of partnership."

"She is a god! There are other options—"

"Aye, she is a god. And as a god, her eyes see farther than mine or thine. Trust in her vision, my son. This is not the end of my tale. Aye, I will fight and die in distant lands. But thou heardst her prophesy as well as I—one day, I shall return to these lands. When once again they have need of me. And on that day, my son, I shall see thee as thou wert always meant to be: a lord in thine own right, robed in golden light and crowned as befits the heir of a god."

"…I have so much still to learn from thee."

"Thou hast more to learn, aye—but not from me. Nay, Godwyn. I shall take with me my shadow, long and dark, that thou mayst at last step out from within it, and blind all the Lands Between with thine own glory. But though I depart, I leave with thee my love, which thou hast forever."


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The sunlight filters only weakly through the mistwood's canopy. As Blaidd, Millicent, and I step out of the stone domed structure of the Siofra well, I see the surviving Nox clustered around, gathering into groups of families and friends. A few are just staring up at the tiny scraps of sky they can see between the leaves above their heads. Many are silently weeping. A few, less silently.

"Barrett-12!" I glance over to see Katerina raising a hand. Many of the other Nox turn to her, then follow her gaze to me. "Not four days ago, thou enteredst the Nokron catacombs and delivered us a promise to aid in our escape from the depths. I confess: I had little trust that thou wouldst keep faith with so hastily sworn an oath. I offered you our small aid because it cost me nothing, and I deemed that to make even an unreliable friend was a better choice than to make a dangerous foe. And yet, not a week later, here we stand. Nox, on the surface for the first time in millennia. We owe this entirely to thee." She looks around at the crowd surrounding her. "By this man hath our long exile been ended! By him have all our losses, all our honored dead, had their sacrifices redeemed! From now until the end of days, let all Nox show unto him all honor that is ours to bestow!"

With that, she kneels. The rest of the Nox emulate her. I catch myself shoving my hands into my pockets and hunching my shoulders, as if trying to hide. "Shucks," I mutter, completely inaudible under the noise. "You'd think I was a Titan."

Eventually, the applause and cheers die down. The Nox seem to all be looking at me expectantly. Not sure exactly what they want me to say, but I know what needs saying. "This wasn't something I did," I say. "I'm just one man, Guardian or not. I couldn't have gotten you all out by myself no matter how much I wanted to. This took all of us." I nod at Blaidd and Ranni on his shoulders. "Me, my friends, Princess Ranni, Those Who Follow, and all of you, too. This is your victory, as much as anyone else's. You had help, sure, but you freed yourselves today. Don't forget that."

That kicks off another wave of applause. From another part of the crowd, I see Themis stand up, gesturing for quiet. It takes the Nox a minute to obey, despite their clear reverence for their Nightmaidens. "We have escaped from the Eternal City," she says. "But we are not yet safe. The Nox have no safe haven on the surface, and we are yet hunted by all the servants of the Greater Will. For the first time in an age, we have hope. Now it is ours to hold to it, if only we can." She glances at Katerina, then meets my eyes. "I would call a council—We Nightmaidens, the shamans of Those Who Follow, and Barrett-12 and our other saviors. We must decide on our next move, and quickly. If the Will sends its servants to destroy us here, we have little with which to defend ourselves."

"Agreed," says Ranni. Her voice is a little weak, but still clear. "There is an old waypoint fort, not far to the south. 'Twill serve as a temporary fortification against any dangers in the Mistwood—demi-humans, runebears and the like."

"Are you sure, My Lady?" Blaidd asks quietly. "When last I passed that way, a runebear had made itself a den in that ruin."

"What's a runebear?" I ask.

"A bear empowered by many runes gathered over centuries," Blaidd explains. "They grow unnaturally large over time. The one in the fort was as large as a house."

"Can we take it?" I ask.

Blaidd considers, glancing up at Ranni on his shoulders. She rolls her one open eye tiredly. "Aye," she tells me. "If only my dear Shadow will consent to put me down long enough to draw his sword. I saw how thou foughtst, Barrett—thou couldst defeat a runebear alone, if thou wishedst. With thine allies, it shall be quickly done."

"Then we'll go on ahead," I say, "clear out the fort, and then the Nox can come in once it's secure."

"I'll not leave you unguarded, My Lady," Blaidd protests.

"Then by all means leave me guarded, dear Blaidd," she says. "If thou trust'st not the Nox, then leave one of thine companions to watch over me. The Crucible Knight, perhaps, or the sorcerer, or the reedlander."

"Or I could simply guard you myself, Mistress," Blaidd points out.

"Not without young Millicent," Ranni says. "I'll not have thee parted from her—not when she is all that standeth between thou and the Greater Will."

"That's fine," I say quickly. "Millicent and Blaidd can stay with you. If you're right and I can take one of these runebears on my own, then doing it with Alexander, Rogier, Yura, and Atrebal shouldn't be a problem."

She grimaces. "I know not how well these others fight. I would rather send Blaidd with thee. But…" she trails off, blinking slowly. It's hard to tell, with her porcelain face and the odd illusory figure that doubles her expressions, but she looks exhausted. "I lack the strength to argue the point. We must move quickly."

I nod at her, then turn back to Themis. "My friends and I will go on ahead to clear out the fort!" I call, loud enough for all the Nox and Followers to hear me. "You follow behind us once it's secure, and then we can discuss our next move."

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"Blaidd was right," I murmur to Rogier, crouched beside me in the undergrowth. "It really is the size of a house."

"Aye," Rogier murmurs. "It's older than most—a bear can be said to be a true runebear when it is only half that size. But I have also seen bigger, albeit only once."

"Where?" Atrebal asks from a nearby bush.

"Near Leyndell," Rogier says. "There was one in the woods near the city that must have been half again this size."

"Enough," Yura growls. "This size is enough for now. Barrett—you know your arsenal better than we could. How shall we face this?"

"That thing can probably take a few good hits," I say. "I was sort of hoping I could just throw a rocket at its face and call it a day. Don't think that's going to work." I consider the beast, which is honing its claws against what looks like most of a tree that it's uprooted and dragged into the fort's dilapidated courtyard. "And I don't want to use rockets if any of you are going to be up close. Some of my weapons can be choosy with their targets, but not those. Winchester, give me my Taipan. Here's the plan."

Two minutes later, Yura and Atrebal charge. Rogier steps out of the bush behind them and starts slinging spells. The bear roars and swipes at the melee fighters. Yura rolls out of the way; Atrebal just takes the hit on their shield.

Meanwhile, I take aim, still in the cover of the bush. I wait until the bear has turned its glare on Rogier after a particularly powerful spell. Then the Void energy blast drives directly into its eye.

It actually survives, rearing back and bellowing in pain. The next shot goes into the roof of its open mouth. Even that doesn't kill it immediately—I see golden light playing about the wounds, knitting them together. But while it's distracted, Atrebal leaps up and swings their heavy sword directly through its neck. Apparently, it can't use its healing to reattach its head.

"Well done, fireteam," I say, standing from cover and approaching the group. "Thing was bulkier than I expected, and I was expecting a fair bit of bulk."

"'Twas rather bulkier, as thou put'st it, than I expected," Atrebal says, breathing heavily as they wipe down their sword. "It hath been many years since last I did battle with a runebear, and I've not fought one of this size at all. Do all such beasts have the ability to heal from grievous injury?"

"No," Rogier says grimly. "No, they do not. That is new."

"The Greater Will?" Yura rasps. "It was foolish to hope we left behind its machinations in the depths."

"Could be," I say, staring at the massive corpse. "Shit, I was only down there for a handful of days. Surely the Greater Will can't have done too much damage up here in that amount of time?"

"It is too early to say," Rogier says. "For now, let us get the Nox settled here. Then—you said you left Lady Melina at Fort Haight? We should go there next. With luck, she and Trinovar have gone unharried in the interim."

"Yeah," I say. "With luck."

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Once the Nox are moved into the fort, several of us gather in a small room at the base of a mostly-intact tower for a strategy meeting. And small is an understatement there—it's only me, Ranni, Nightmaiden Katerina, and Shaman Zua of Those Who Follow—and even so it's cramped.

"This fort will not protect us long, should the Will send any serious force to destroy us," Katerina says.

"Agreed," Ranni murmurs from where she sits, eyes—both the physical one and the ghostly one beside her head—closed in apparent exhaustion. There aren't any real chairs in the fort, but Blaidd found what looks like a fairly sturdy chest and pushed it up against the wall for a makeshift bench. Ranni's perched there, leaning back against the stone as if she might fall asleep at any moment. "Ye cannot remain here long. 'Tis better than the open forest, aye, but far from true safety. Not that true safety is easily found in these days."

"There must be a fortification somewhere in better repair than this," Zua says. "The walls here seem like to crumble at the first strong wind."

"I would almost welcome it," murmurs Katerina. "It hath been so long since last I felt a true wind."

"We can get you a wind that won't knock over your walls," I promise her. "I think we do have a couple options; I know of a few fortified places here in Limgrave. Not far south of here—a few hours' march, maybe?—is Fort Haight, which is where I'm headed next. The place is occupied by a guy named Kenneth Haight—apparently a Leyndell noble, but he seems to get along well with the local demi-humans, which I gather's not usual for their type."

"Not usual at all," Ranni confirms. "If I recall correctly, the Crucible Knight thou wert traveling with awaits your return there?"

I shoot her a look. She meets my eye. I'm not sure why she wants to keep Melina secret, but I'm not going to second-guess it. "Right," I say. "I don't know how full the fort is, or how much they have by way of supplies, or even if we can trust Haight. He might be too loyal to the Golden Order."

"A safer option might be the waypoint northwest of here," Ranni says. "'Tis atop the cliffs overlooking the Mistwood. The fortress there is in better condition than this, and larger besides."

"And Thermidor's not far from there," I say. "One of my old teammates. I told you about him, Katerina—he's the one who told me about the Vex blockade."

"I remember," she says. "We cannot scale those cliffs, however. How far is the path around?"

"For a large group traveling on foot, I'd guess three or four days," I say. "But the only other option I can think of is even farther."

"Stormveil," Ranni guesses. "With Godrick dead, the castle lieth largely unoccupied. A few of his soldiers remain cloistered there, but most have dispersed. The roads of Limgrave and Liurnia are perhaps a little more dangerous now, due to the newly-lordless marauders who wander them, but I doubt a roving group of bandits would dare harry an armed caravan of Nox, even if there are civilians among their number."

"And if they do," Zua says, "we shall teach them their error."

"I don't think Lake Agheel is exactly on the way, but you could swing by there and see if Thermidor can help you," I say. "He probably won't want to leave the Daybreak alone, but he also probably won't leave you hanging."

"The Daybreak is his vessel?" Ranni asks. "Wherefore should he not leave it? Thou didst so, I gather, with thine own."

"Yeah, and someone swiped it while I was away," I say. "No idea who, but when I find them they're gonna wish they hadn't. But Thermidor knows that happened, and he knows we can't afford to have both of our ships stolen."

Ranni nods slowly. "I see. 'Tis most unfortunate. Thinkest thou that the Greater Will was involved in the theft of thy vessel?"

"All I know is that there was a Site of Grace where the ship used to be when I went back for it," I say. "But it's possible that Site was always there, and the ship was just on top of it before."

"Can the Will do such a thing?" Katerina asks. "Place Grace so easily, wherever it hath need of it?"

"If the Greater Will hath limits, we do not yet understand them," Ranni says grimly. "'Tis known that Sites of Grace are used by the Tarnished for travel. 'Tis entirely possible that they could be used for transportation of material, as well. Perhaps including a vessel from beyond the stars."

I sigh. "Yeah, that's what I'm guessing happened. Shit."

"Then we cannot in good conscience take thy companion from his own vessel," Katerina says. "Especially if that vessel is now thine only path home from these lands."

"I wouldn't go that far," I say. Thermidor's presumably still in touch with Crow, who know knows where we are, since Thermidor and Parvati… actually kept him updated on where they were. Unlike my dumb ass. "But… yeah, the Daybreak is important to Thermidor. He might have some ideas, though?"

"Parhaps," Ranni says. "But that would still be a significant detour from the path to Stormveil. Nay—I think it best if the Nox and Those Who Follow make for Stormveil directly. The soldiers remaining in the castle will not last in a siege, if they even attempt to do so. And there are no fortresses more defensible than Stormveil anywhere south of Raya Lucaria. Even Redmane Castle is not so impregnable." She meets my eyes." Besides which—I can assist thee in transporting thy companion's vessel, which the Nox cannot. We will visit Lake Agheel once we have retrieved thy companions."

I nod slowly. "Okay. You sure you can move it? The Daybreak is about a dozen tons of metal."

"I will need to rest afterward," Ranni says. "But aye—I can do it."

"Then so it shall be," Katerina says. "We, alongside our new allies, Those Who Follow, shall march north and take Castle Stormveil. If I recall these lands, ye shall pass by the castle as ye travel northward in any case."

"Just so," Ranni says. "We shall meet thee then. With luck, we shall not be more than a day behind thee."

"With luck," I say.

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"Are you certain, My Lady?" Blaidd asks, kneeling beside Ranni's seat against the wall. All around, the Nox and Followers are packing up to leave. After one night in the fort, we're splitting up—they're heading north, we're going south. "You've strained yourself a great deal. Millicent and I could bring you back to the manor to rest…"

"I promised Barrett that I would help his comrade transport his vessel," Ranni says, voice reedy and weak. "I'll not be made a liar, dear Blaidd. Not even by thee."

"Thermidor would get it," I say, watching the two of them from a few paces away. "Hell, he might already have the Daybreak fixed, and even if he doesn't, we can set up a rendezvous for when he does."

Ranni shakes her head. "'Tis true, this would serve as a plan," she says. "But it hath been more than a century since I last saw my favorite cousin. I'll not be parted from her a day more than necessary."

Blaidd lets out a soft growl. "She would not want you hurt, My Lady."

"And I did not want her burned. Alas for us both." She looks up at me. "We should depart soon. Fort Haight is not more than three hours march from here on foot."

I sigh. "If you're sure."

"I am."

A few hours later, the last trees of the southern Mistwood finally clear away. We gather together on a small hill overlooking southeastern Limgrave.

My heart sinks.

"Hah." Yura huffs a raspy laugh, then says what we were all thinking. "It was all going far too smoothly."

There's an army camped outside Fort Haight. An army whose banners show a tree, a beast, and a golden tracing of the Elden Ring.
 
48. Reunion
Many thanks to @BinaryApotheosis for betareading and fact-checking.

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Reunion


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"Am I doing the right thing, Ghost?"

"Generally, I think so. Not that I'm an expert. But what brought this on?"

"...They have started calling me 'Lady'. I am becoming a ruler to these people. It is… so easy to imagine someone in my place becoming something like a god-queen. I am immortal, empowered by the Light, but no better in nature than the people living in those houses. By what right other than mere power do I rule?"

"They call you 'Lady' because they respect you, Parvati. Because they appreciate what you do for them. You've carved an island of calm in the storm of the Collapse, and they love you for it."

"Will their children? And their grandchildren?"

"Don't give into the slippery slope fallacy. There's nothing forcing you to keep doing what you're doing if it stops working, or stops being necessary. The fact that it might eventually be the wrong thing to do does not mean that you shouldn't do it now, when it's still right."


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I've spent more time invisible in the past couple of weeks than in the previous couple of years. Even at the height of the war, I wasn't spending this much time cloaked in Void. There were usually better people for the occasional stealth ops we needed.

Not so much, here. It's just me. Lex isn't here to sneak past the army, so I've gotta do it.

The soldiers of the besieging army—and it is a besieging army, I can see the men on the outer edge of the perimeter working on constructing ladders and battering rams—aren't all human. Some are strange, flat-faced creatures with wide mouths and furry legs. Some have feathery wings, although most of those don't look big enough to fly with. There are a handful of demi-humans, too, though not many. All told, only a little more than half of the army looks to be human, though all of them are wearing red and green surcoats.

Even the humans look… more alive than most of the grey-faced men I saw in northern Limgrave. They vary some—a few are pallid-faced and dark-eyed—but most have eyes as bright gold as anyone I've seen, and skin in a variety of healthy shades.

I catch a glimpse of the command tent when I'm about halfway across the field. It's an ornate thing in red and green. I don't see the commander at this distance, but I'm sure if it comes to an assassination I'll be able to get a bead on him at some point.

The trouble is, if even some random bear in the woods was bulked up enough by the Greater Will to survive a couple hits from Taipan, how much more is it bolstering the commander of a golden-eyed army marching under the banner of the Elden Ring? How effective will a few shots from my heavy weapons be, and what other cards is it still holding in reserve if I try?

Invisible as I am, it's easy enough to sneak past the army and reach the walls of Fort Haight, although it does take long enough that I have to focus to maintain the cloak. Once I reach the walls, I throw out a Strand grapple—letting my invisibility drop—and launch myself over them before the soldiers behind me can do more than shout in alarm.

I land lightly on the battlements and am immediately surrounded by soldiers pointing spears, swords, and arrows in my directions. "Easy, guys," I say, holding up my hands. "I'm Barrett. Sir Haight should be expecting me."

"Aye, he is," calls a voice from a little ways down the wall. "Put up your weapons, men—he is an ally."

The soldiers lower their weapons. I notice that most of them are every bit as grey-faced as Godrick's soldiers were, though there are a few exceptions. One of those exceptions is the officer who called them off, who is now approaching me. "Barrett-12," he says. "You've been expected."

"That makes one of us," I say. "I wasn't expecting the army outside. What's happening?"

The officer looks grim. "It's best that Lord Haight explain that to you. Come."

He leads me down from the battlements—via a set of stone stairs that look like they've seen better decades—and into the fort's small keep. The great hall looks like it's been converted into a full on mess for the garrison, with tables and chairs spread haphazardly across the floor. At the far wall is a larger table on a raised platform, and at that table are three familiar figures. Kenneth Haight and Trinovar are both leaning over the table, examining something I can't see from this angle. But my eyes immediately find Melina's as she sits on a chair beside them, her hand tangled in Torrent's mane where the big guy stands sentinel beside her.

She starts to her feet the moment she sees me, her one golden eye shining. I see what looks like days of constant worry melt away in an instant. "Barrett!" she exclaims. "You've returned!"

Trinovar and Kenneth Haight both look up. "Ah, Barrett!" Trinovar calls, beckoning. His helmet is resting on the table beside him, but other than that he's still in full armor. His eyes, I notice, are no longer golden—but he otherwise looks the same. "Welcome back to the surface! I hope you had better success under the earth than we have had over it."

"It was touch and go for a while there," I say, passing the officer leading me with a pat on the shoulder. "Seems like sieges are in season right now." I leap onto the platform across the table from them and finally see that what he and Haight are examining is a map of southern Limgrave, complete with small figurines in red and green representing the two armies. The green troops are all clustered in Fort Haight, and there aren't many of them. The red ones cover most of the open grassland south of the Mistwood.

"Indeed?" Haight asks. "What sort of siege did you encounter in the depths of Nokron, of all places?"

"The Nox were under attack by… well, a lot of stuff," I say. "Long story. But we got them out—they're headed north to occupy Stormveil. I'm more interested in what you're dealing with. Who's that outside?"

Haight looks grim. "Fort Haight stands besieged by the forces of the self-styled Lord Edgar of Morne," he says. "Not a moon ago I'd heard that he was facing rebellion from his Misbegotten servants, but it appears he was able to put his house in order. Now he comes to put my ancestral fort to the torch and those who have held with my family for millennia to the sword."

"Lord Edgar claims to enforce the law of Godrick, the true lord of Limgrave," Melina says quietly. Her gaze is intense as she looks me up and down, as if she's trying to memorize what I look like. "He has accused Lord Haight—"

"Sir Haight," Kenneth mutters.

Melina ignores him. "—of violating both the laws of Lord Godrick and of the Golden Order itself. He also claims to have been visited by visions and granted authority to act by the Two Fingers themselves."

"Even if the blood of the Golden Lineage was right enough to claim lordship over Limgrave in perpetuity—and perhaps it was—Godrick had scarcely any of that blood left after all his accursed grafting!" Haight grumbles. "And I have never violated any dictates of the Golden Order—not unless Queen Marika has emerged from the Erdtree to make new ones while I have been indisposed."

I shoot Trinovar a look. How much does he know? I want to ask. Does Haight know about the possibility of the Greater Will's involvement with the Vex, old enemies of mine?

Haight catches the look. "Yes, yes," he says, waving a hand. "Sir Trinovar and Lady Melina explained to me that it was possible that you had made an enemy of the Greater Will. But the Greater Will is not my god. Perhaps it is Queen Marika's god, but she is my god. I follow her, not every upstart who claims to speak for an outer god that, as a rule, does not speak to mortal men. If Queen Marika bade me surrender my keep to the so-called 'Lord' Edgar, I would do so. But she remains interred in the Erdtree, so far as I am aware, and it is by her grace that I rule Fort Haight, not by that of Godrick or the Greater Will."

"That seems…" I hesitate. "It doesn't bother you?"

He hesitates. "I would be lying if I claimed to be entirely indifferent," he admits. "It is… worrying, yes. I've never thought myself a heretic, never been tempted by heresy. And now perhaps I court it. Perhaps I have fallen into it entirely. I do not know. No Fingers have spoken to me, nor has the Eternal Queen. But I know this—Castle Morne, of which Edgar is Castellan, was not a place kind to demi-humans or misbegotten. They were tolerated, so long as they served at the pleasure of Edgar and his family and human soldiers. But that has never been the way of House Haight. We have always deemed the demi-humans to be the equals of other races of men. They are just as intelligent, just as capable—it is only an accident of birth that they look so different. And until I am given incontrovertible proof that it is the will of Queen Marika herself, I will not yield up those who look to me for protection to enslavement by a madman claiming visions from an Outer God."

For a moment, I just look at him, staring him in his golden eyes. "I misjudged you, Kenneth Haight," I finally admit. "You're a good man. Seems like those are in short supply around here."

He flushes slightly. "It is my duty and my privilege to protect those whom I rule," he says. "So that is what I shall do. But come, Sir Barrett—I have heard stories from my guests about your prodigious abilities and skill in battle. Is it possible that you can help me to defend my keep?"

"Just Barrett, please. And I'll do whatever I can," I promise. The team outside—Ranni, Blaidd, and the others—aren't necessarily expecting me back tonight. We'd planned a couple of signal in case they were necessary, but I'm here to provide support to the people inside the fort if they need it. "I've got a few friends still camped out in the Mistwood, but I don't see a way to get them in here—I can't keep that many people invisible across that distance. Still, they might be able to do something to help from there. What have we got on this side of the walls?"

We talk for hours, planning the next steps of the siege. Once we've got a fairly solid plan, the sun has set and the great hall is full of soldiers eating simple meals that don't look all that filling. "I thank you, Barrett," Haight says finally, pushing aside the figurines and rolling up the map. "I shall meet with my officers and apprise them of their roles. We shall begin at dawn."

"Sounds good," I say.

As he walks off, my eyes slide over to Melina, who has been offering bits of input and advice all evening. She smiles at me. "Welcome back to the surface, Barrett," she says softly.

"I shall leave the two of you to speak," Trinovar says, standing. "I look forward to seeing Sir Atrebal soon—it hath been far, far too long."

"With luck, you'll see them tomorrow," I say. "See you, Trinovar."

He waves with one hand while the other puts his helmet on, then walks away.

I look back at Melina. "How have you been holding up?" I ask quietly.

Her smile trembles a little. "There is no Site of Grace inside the fort's walls," she says softly. "Before the army came, I made camp at a site nearby—but once they arrived and I was forced to withdraw, I became unable to appear even as I am except in Torrent's presence. It has been… trying."

"I'm so sorry, sweetheart," I murmur.

Her eye blinks shut for a moment. "I have missed hearing you call me that," she whispers.

That sends a shock down my spine. Before I went underground, Melina and I were dancing around this. But I guess a little time apart has made her reevaluate some. Honestly, it's made me reevaluate too. It must have, because it's the easiest thing in the world to say, "I've missed calling you it, sweetheart."

She meets my gaze. "I… I do not know what to do, Barrett," she says. "I do not know even what to say. All I know is that I have missed you more in this past week than I have missed anyone in my family in the century and more it has been since I saw them. Even Miquella or Ranni. I know it is selfish, to ask you to stay in those places where I can follow, limited as they are. There is so much you have to offer all of the Lands Between, and I would keep you to only a small part of them. But I cannot help but wish it."

"I can't promise it," I say. "But I don't want to leave you behind again if I can help it. I've missed you too, Melina. I really, really have."

Torrent lets out a soft whinny beside her head. She glances over. "Torrent has been sleeping in the stables," she says. "And it is perhaps time for his rest, if he is to wake at dawn."

"I'll walk you there," I say. "And come tomorrow, hopefully we'll be able to camp out at that Site of Grace outside again."
 
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Oh, something I doubt anyone noticed or cares about but might be worth calling out: a few chapters ago, I had Parvati in a flashback refer to her Ghost as Arch. That's wrong. Arch is Silver's Ghost, Parvati's is named Vishnu, and he hasn't even been named yet in the flashbacks. I've corrected the error but on the off chance anyone is keeping track of that sort of thing I thought I'd call it out.
 
Hiatus
It's time for me to face facts.

I gave myself several weeks to get ahead on this story. I needed to outline the next section of it and write just a few chapters--two or three would have been fine. I have failed to do that. I have only a vague outline of the next several chapters, and no chapters fully written. I am in almost the exact same position with Of Many Colors. And the fact is, I can't outline properly if I'm trying to get chapters posted according to my weekly deadlines.

So I'm going on hiatus—for both stories. I realize those words are filled with dread for anyone who has been reading fanfiction for more than a few weeks. We've all seen stories 'go on hiatus' and then end up abandoned without even the courtesy of a clear announcement. This is not one of those cases. I hope the fact that I've been updating on a moderately regular schedule for years now is enough to earn me at least some trust on that score. I do not think this will be a long break. I expect to be back before the end of June, actually, but I don't want to commit to that just yet.

I have three things I want to have done before I come back:
  1. A complete outline of the rest of Empyrean. I believe I'm more than halfway through the story, probably 60-65%, and it's high time I had a full outline.
  2. An outline of Part 3 of Of Many Colors. I just finished the interludes following Part 2, and I still don't know what's happening in Part 3 beyond the first few chapters.
  3. At least three chapters of each story drafted and in the pipeline.
If I was at my best, I could theoretically have all of that done in less than two weeks. More realistically, it'll take me a few. But I have clear goals, and a clear roadmap, and these will set me up for success with (hopefully) minimal interruptions after I return.

Sorry to have to do this. It sucks for me as much as for all of you. Hopefully it won't be long.
 
The thread might be sleeping, but FromSoft does not:

View: https://youtu.be/6uT8wGtB3yQ?si=es3OW09cG_7CSpY1

DLC story trailer is out, confirning some speculation and raising new questions (spoilered for those who want to watch on their own):
- A knightly order sworn to Miquella is present in the Land of Shadows. It seems some characters from first trailer are part of it and they might as a whole be a Roundtable Hold-esque faction.
- "The unsung war" mentioned was indeed waged between the civilisation that made "dancing lion" and Messmer's forces and seems to have been purge of the former.
- Messmer is, or at least was, an overlord of the Land of Shadows.
- The wicker man construct was not a singular and they were used by Messmer's forces.

The very first sequence most likely depicts Marika doing something with what looks like strings of light, forming some sort of veil. Combined with narration (the Gold was born, and so was Shadow), it would suggest we are seeing the moment she veiled the Land of Shadow, with implication that this veiling was also origin of Golden Order as we know it in the Lands Between proper - which if true would be an echo of the First Flame dividing the primordial world of Dark Souls into Light, which was domain of Gods, and Dark.
Of note: assuming all shots of the figure holding the strings of light are her, she wears a snake armband, meaning that whoever she was before becoming goddess of Lands Between, she held snakes in some regard. Furthermore, narration - sourced from Miquella, according to the voice - says that the beginning of Gold was a seduction, a betrayal and an affair, so Marika seems to have been a scheming bitch from the very beginning - if it is indeed about her, and piles of corpses definitely imply whatever happened wasn't pretty.
 
Yes, yes, double post, I know, but...

To those who only read the story here: OP confirmed that while they intend to incorporate elements of the DLC story when available, any direct contradictions to established worldbuilding will be ignored.
I'm curious how will this turn out for Radahn...
 
We all know that really only one scene needs to be adapted, and it would be even better if it does not involve MC, but his dragon friend.

I highlighted the new section in cursive.

CURSE YOU BAYLE! 🐲 I hereby vow! 💯 You will rue this day! ☀️ Behold, a true drake warrior! 🤺 A true dragon, from beyond the sea of stars! 🌠 And I, Igon! 👨‍🦱 Your fear made flesh! 🥶 Solid of scale you might be, foul dragon... 💩 But I will riddle with holes your rotten hide! 🎯 With a hail of harpoons! 🏹 With every last dr
 
I only noticed like two days ago that chapters 41 and 48 had the same title, so I've now edited the title of 41. While I'm here, status update: I've finished outlining Of Many Colors part 3 and am making progress on outlining Empyrean. I hope to get to drafting in the next two weeks at most and to posting in the next month. Sorry this has taken longer than I expected.
 
Random thought: Barrett can pretty much derail the entire DLC by just having Melina talk to Messmer. Plus, he's no tarnished, so he wouldn't even provoke the same reaction from him in the first place.
 
49. The First Curse
Many thanks to @BinaryApotheosis for betareading and fact-checking.

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49

The First Curse


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"Welcome home, my son."

"Mother."

"Thou hast seen thy father off, I gather."

"Yes."

"Is that bitterness I sense, O Godwyn? Dost thou think me cruel? Unjust?"

"Am I not to think so? Dost thou forbid it, Mother mine?"

"Think as thou wilt. 'Tis not thine to know all the plans of a god. But know this—if I have been cruel, that is incidental. I banished Godfrey not out of any desire to hurt him—or thee."

"But you do not care that we are hurt by thine actions."

"No. Should I? I am a god."


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The sun rises, glinting off the armor and weapons of the army outside Fort Haight. There are a lot of sentries out there, watching the fort for any sign of activity. My jumping over the walls seems to have made them nervous.

Fair enough. They should be nervous.

I'm standing on the battlements, looking out at the army. Beside me are humans, demi-humans, and even a couple of the stubby-winged, wide-faced people the others call misbegotten. The numbers don't look good—the army outside has got to outnumber the fort's defenders ten to one.

But that's okay. The defenders have two big advantages. The first is that they're defending a castle. Speaking as someone who defended a walled city for more than a century, that's a big equalizer. Sieges are rough on everyone because they drain resources, but the reason they drain resources is that even with a massive numerical advantage, the aggressor can't break the walls without an incredibly risky and difficult assault.

The second advantage, of course, is me.

"You ready for this, bud?" Winchester asks, hovering over my shoulder.

"Sure," I say. A few of the soldiers on the wall glance our way, but none of them ask any questions about the small robot floating above a bigger robot. They've got other things on their minds. "At least this time, we have a castle, right? Nokron was worse."

"The things you were fighting in Nokron weren't human," Winchester says quietly. "Maybe the Hawks were, once, but by the time you got down there they were basically puppets of the Greater Will. This is an army of humans and humanoids. It's different."

"You worried I'm going to lose sight of that?"

"No," he says. "I'm worried you'll think you have when you lay down tonight."

My lips twitch bitterly. "We don't always get to choose our enemies. Or our friends, for that matter."

"You feel good about this choice?"

I stop to think about that for a moment. "Yeah," I say eventually. "Haight's good people, mostly. And, you know, the enemy of my enemy…"

"Is the enemy of my enemy," Winchester says. "Nothing more. You know this."

"Yeah," I agree. "But I'd rather the enemy of my enemy not get his castle steamrolled by my enemy."

"Fair enough. Just don't lose sight of the forest while you're cutting down one tree."

I grin at him. "I won't. Thanks, Chester."

He twitches awkwardly, then vanishes into my hammerspace without saying anything. I let him go. He's never been completely comfortable looking out for me this way, but he's also never going to let that stop him from doing it. Never again. We both learned a lot of lessons in our time with Shin, only a few of them about Gunslinging.

But speaking of Gunslinging…

I turn and look down at the courtyard, where Haight and Trinovar are standing at the head of a very small column of cavalry facing the main gate. "We ready?" I call down.

"Aye!" Haight calls up. "On your signal, Barrett!"

I nod, turn back to face the army outside, and summon my Golden Gun, pointing it skyward. I take a deep breath, exhale, and fire. The bolt of Solar Light lances upward into the sky with a crack and a sound of rushing air. Then I vault over the battlements and fall feet-first towards the army below.

One enterprising soldier gets his wits together in time to shoot an arrow my way before I hit the ground, although he misses. The second shot of my Golden Gun goes his way for the trouble. Then, just before I lose my grip on the Light revolver, I send a third and final shot into a heavily armored knight brandishing a spear in the direction of Fort Haight's main gate.

I land on a man's armored shoulder, feeling the steel crumple beneath my feet as I jump up again, reaching for Death Adder slung at my back. It comes out, and Solar death rains down in a barrage on the army. As I use my double-jump to change directions midair—dodging a massive arrow fired from a greatbow in the process—I see the gates of Fort Haight creaking open. Rufus snarls in joyous rage as he leaps into the fray beneath Trinovar, at the head of a column of cavalry. And suddenly, I'm not the only thing the enemy army has to worry about.

That's the idea.

I resist the temptation to look over the army's heads, towards the treeline. Chances are, none of the soldiers would follow my gaze. They're busy. But I don't want to take the risk that someone will look over and see Blaidd's team sneaking out from the cover of the Mistwood and making their way to the command tent while Edgar's army is distracted.

The thing is, we just don't know how much of this army's loyalty is real. We saw in Nokron that the Greater Will can manipulate some sorts of creatures in the Lands Between—our going theory is that it's any sort of artificial being or automaton, although that doesn't explain why the Fallen Hawks counted. But I also know how Vex work, at least the basics of fighting them.

Take out the Axis Mind, and you cripple the local network.

I don't think the Greater Will is a Vex—that wouldn't make sense. It's too obviously paracausal, has been too involved with local history in some ways, and too remote in others. No Vex I've ever encountered has behaved anything like the Greater Will seems to be. But I'm also sure that it's connected to the Vex here in some way. And its minions, down underground, did behave like Vex in a lot of ways.

If Blaidd's team succeeds, at a minimum we've taken out an enemy commander, crippling their army. But if I'm right, and this army is less willingly loyal than they might appear? Killing Edgar might break whatever hold the Greater Will has on at least some of them.

It's a long shot, of course. But I'll take a long shot if it means I don't have to slaughter all these people.

Right now, I still have more work to do. I drop down into a gap between a few soldiers, calling Arc Light into my fists, and throw out a series of rapid punches. I feel one man's ribs break under my fist; another man's steel helmet caves in. Lightning blooms from the point of contact as the Light flows, as Arc Light always wants to do. With each kill, the Light surges in me—a technique pioneered by Arcstriders in the early City Age. Let the Light flow into the enemy, and when it brings them down it flows back into you. It's a skill I personally picked up back in the day when my fascination with the Hive was still a little more than healthy.

I duck under a thrust from a long spear, then reach up and snap the point off the haft. I launch the sharp bit of metal like a throwing knife directly into the narrow slit in the visor of the knight who made the attack. Then I throw myself to the side, shoulder-checking another man while I bring my gun to bear, firing into the crowd with a Solar barrage. I dodge away, letting the man trying to cut me down hit his friend behind me instead.

Of course, I can't stand in the middle of an army forever without taking a few lucky hits. The first several glance off my shields, but eventually I feel those snap under a blow from behind. Less than a minute after that, a spear lodges itself in my arm.

Time to change tack. I jump, leaping over the enemy's heads, then double- and triple-jump to make it close to the top of the wall. A Strand grapple gets me the rest of the way, and I take cover on the battlements, waiting for my shields to recharge and the Light to knit my wounds together. While I recover, I look over the ledge to see how the battle's going.

Trinovar and Kenneth Haight have managed to push the enemy away from the gates, but their offensive has stalled part of the way down the hill. People are dying in droves, on both sides—human, demi-human, and misbegotten blood all mingling and soaking into the ground, turning it to mud.

I know death doesn't mean quite the same thing here as I'm used to. I remember discussing it with Melina, on my very first night in the Lands Between. I remember seeing it, in the burned wretches strung up on Godrick's crucifixes. But the differences don't matter here. These people arrived on this field alive, and regardless of whether death here means returning to the Erdtree and being recycled or reincarnated into new life or whatever, they're still going to leave this place dead.

"I hate fights like this," I murmur.

I know, Winchester says quietly.

I glance past the armies, seeing the mostly-empty enemy camp. I don't see Blaidd, Millicent, Yura, or Alexander, but I don't expect to. It's too far for me to see them without magnification. For a moment I consider pulling out a sniper rifle—if I'm lucky, maybe I'll get a bead on Edgar. But I tried that for half the night and most of the morning and didn't get lucky. I get the feeling the man knows to avoid sightlines. Whether that's because he just doesn't want to get hit with a greatbow, or if he has some insight into the kind of weapons I can use, I don't know.

I can see that wherever Edgar is, it's not in the middle of the crush of bodies pressing against the walls. Unfortunate. That would make this easier.

…My shields are back up. Break time is over.

I go over the wall again and dive back into the fray. People die. I keep hoping that I'll see their numbers thin, that they'll rout, that I won't have to continue doing this. But no such mercy comes. Human beings, demi-humans, and misbegotten keep throwing themselves at me, and because I was stupid enough to tie myself to one side of this conflict, they die by the dozen.

They have started reacting to me somewhat—the heavily armed and armored knights, with their greatshields and oversized swords, rotate to face me and leave the footmen to battle Trinovar and the cavalry. The only real result is that the people fighting our cavalry just die faster—but I hope that at least some of Haight's garrison might survive who otherwise wouldn't.

The combat fades into a fugue. Draw my Arc Blade, stab, slash. Dodge a spear, fire my weapon. Punch a man so hard the Arc Light cooks him in his armor. Parry a swing of a sword, punishing the one who attempted it. Change weapons, blast someone's head off with a shotgun. Change weapons again while I have a momentary space, start mowing them down with a machine gun. This is always the worst part—the part where it gets easy. The part where it starts to become difficult to remember that every single one of these people—from the body lying face-down with a single exit wound in his backplate, to the misbegotten I just sawed in half with a machine-gun barrage—is a person, which a life of their own, an identity, thoughts, feelings. All of them cut short, because they came here, and I was standing in their way. The combat becomes almost meditative. It becomes all too easy to drift, to let my mind… not wander, exactly—I'm still focused on the fight—but disconnect. Separate the killing from the death.

Then a sound brings me back to reality like a bucket of ice water. Just as I'm changing weapons, in the moment when there's no gun in my hands—I hear the unmistakable sharp retort of a hand cannon.

My eyes snap over to look—but I can't see whatever made the sound, somewhere behind the enemy army, in the direction of their encampment. The crush of bodies is too thick, the distance too long. But suddenly fighting these people is not my top priority. Because I recognize that gun.

Not every Hunter has a hand cannon that's uniquely theirs. But the ones every Hunter knows—the ones who carve their names into the annals of Sol's history—do. Cayde had Ace, and Lex inherited it. Crow has Hawkmoon. I have Lumina.

And, most famously, Shin Malphur has the Last Word. And I know what that gun sounds like. I'd have to, after all those nights spent learning from the man in the wilderness. What the hell is Shin doing here?

I jump, double-jump, triple-jump, then throw out a grapple, sailing over the army, squinting past the glinting of sunlight over armor to try and make out what's going on between the tents. I see nothing. I hit the ground hard, ignoring the archers scrambling to get out of melee range, and jump past them again.

I'm in midair when I see Blaidd dragging someone—Millicent—into cover behind a tent. I have just enough time to follow the sightline to see a man in brilliant golden armor, his eyes glowing like twin suns as he takes aim. Then he pulls the trigger. The crack of the gun doesn't even reach me before the instant of blinding pain fades into nothing.
 
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I nod, turn back to face the army outside, and summon my Golden Gun, pointing it skyward. I take a deep breath, exhale, and fire. The bolt of Solar Light lances upward into the sky with a crack and a sound of rushing air. Then I vault over the battlements and fall feet-first towards the army below.

One enterprising soldier gets his wits together in time to shoot an arrow my way before I hit the ground, although he misses. The second shot of my Golden Gun goes his way for the trouble. Then, just before I lose my grip on the Light revolver, I send a third and final shot into a heavily armored knight brandishing a spear in the direction of Fort Haight's main gate.

Oop, looks like Barrett forgot to change his Super before the horde encounter, he still has Marksman equipped. :V

Good to see this back, great work on both the physicality and reluctance. Also, did Barrett just get one-tapped by The Last Word?!
 
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