Effigy [Case53 Taylor Worm AU]

Was reading and enjoying your story. Then I ran across this post. . .
We've seen this before, no? We've seen the National Socialists in Germany, we've seen group after group in the Middle-East and Africa, among them the Party of God... hell, the National Front is getting more support in France, the Golden Dawn is hanging around Greece like a bad smell, America's government was paralyzed very recently by the Tea Party, and the British National Party and United Kingdom Independence Party are getting more attention than ever over here. It's all the shame shit.
wherein you equate the Tea Party to Nazis. Not only is this comparison incredibly ignorant, it is also incredibly offensive, and you have managed to ruin a perfectly good story with your insipid political proselytizing (and demonization of people who disagree with you).

I will be giving the rest of your story(and any subsequent writing) a miss.
 
Was reading and enjoying your story. Then I ran across this post. . .

wherein you equate the Tea Party to Nazis.
In this post, I equate you to illogical.

The statements he made were about scaremongering ; creating an enemy to unify people against by playing on their fears.
Scaremongering is a pretty standard aggressive political tactic.

If the mere fact that that means there is a dimension on which the Tea Party and Nazis are comparable, offends you... Okay, be offended. But don't confuse comparison with equation.
 
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Was reading and enjoying your story. Then I ran across this post. . .

wherein you equate the Tea Party to Nazis. Not only is this comparison incredibly ignorant, it is also incredibly offensive, and you have managed to ruin a perfectly good story with your insipid political proselytizing (and demonization of people who disagree with you).

I will be giving the rest of your story(and any subsequent writing) a miss.
He stated (correctly) that they both use a particular tactic. He didn't offend you, reality did.
 
It's also a case of the Nazis being the first thing people think of when fascism is brought up, people are incapable of separating the two (even if Nazism is a bit different from actual fascism). That quote isn't comparing WW2 era deathcamp running Nazis to the Tea Party, it's comparing 1930's Nazis to the Tea Party, both of whom spout an extremely similar ideology; our country used to be great, [insert groups here] are the one's responsible for dragging us down, we could be great again if we just got rid of them, we need to fight them to protect a non-existent idealised version of our country.

That's the point being made, nationalistic pride is good to a degree but all of the groups mentioned twist it along with manufacturing fear of the other and people's desire to protect the people around them from threats real or imagined to seize power.
 
It's also a case of the Nazis being the first thing people think of when fascism is brought up, people are incapable of separating the two (even if Nazism is a bit different from actual fascism). That quote isn't comparing WW2 era deathcamp running Nazis to the Tea Party, it's comparing 1930's Nazis to the Tea Party, both of whom spout an extremely similar ideology; our country used to be great, [insert groups here] are the one's responsible for dragging us down, we could be great again if we just got rid of them, we need to fight them to protect a non-existent idealised version of our country.

That's the point being made, nationalistic pride is good to a degree but all of the groups mentioned twist it along with manufacturing fear of the other and people's desire to protect the people around them from threats real or imagined to seize power.

I'd not worry about it. Don't let politics or whatever derail you, some people are very "delicate" in their sensibilities and will pull their own ass firmly and snugly around their heads and get offended at the slightest hint that their holy whateverthefuck is being challenged.

If someone wants to "snub" you because they're too precious to allow even the slightest hint that you may not find their pet cause to be as sacrosanct as they do, it's unlikely that they could give useful feedback anyway.

My firm recommendation is to blow that shit off and ignore it, you've got a solid foundation for an AU here, it's worth exploring.
 
Case 140s probably come mostly from the pool of people that try to buy powers.
 
Eh more likely it was in the contract for those who would renege on the keep your trap shut part of the deal.
Cauldron would know beforehand if someone was going to try and go back on their deal, they would then get moved into the 'future test subject' category. It's why no one knows that much about Cauldron beyond what Cauldron lets them know.
 
Effigy - 2.3
A/N:Fair warning my beta was drunk while checking this so if you find any errors let me know.

Effigy – 2.3

"You can't be serious", Taylor groaned to Rory.


Saturday morning found the two of them standing in the arrivals area of the Rig; Taylor was waiting for Hannah to return after her late night patrol. Rory had shown up just as the boat started to dock because the article he found while skimming the morning news was too funny not to share with Taylor.


"Oh but I am", he replied struggling to contain his amusement as he showed her the article on his phone.


'Parian, The Bay's newest Independent' was the headline; that wasn't what bothered Taylor, the picture beneath it on the other hand . . . well she couldn't exactly put her feelings into words beyond not liking it.


"She's stealing my theme", she said indignantly.


As the two spoke the boat finished docking and began to disgorge its passengers even as the Rig's night shift lined up to head home for the day.


Taylor's outburst was the tipping point for Rory and he gave a little laugh at her reaction.


"This is serious Rory!" She said, louder this time and still indignant.


"What's serious?" Asked Hannah, having finally made her way off the boat and over to where the two of them were standing.


Rory held up his phone so Hannah could see the screen, even as Taylor started explaining. "She's stealing my theme, being a living doll is my thing."


There was a lull in the conversation as Hannah skimmed the article before turning to Taylor, "First things first, why do you find this so upsetting?" She could empathise with the general sentiment; she'd be at least mildly annoyed if another cape in the city started using a similar theme, but the specifics of why Taylor was upset were important.


"Because it's mine, I like my theme even if I didn't have much of a choice", Taylor said, finally figuring out how to put her thoughts into words. "She could have chosen any other theme, and she could have gone to any other city, seriously how many doll themed capes are there that the Bay ends up with two at the same time!"


Hannah responded with a thoughtful hum as she tried to think of a way to handle the problem; Rory didn't say anything, he still thought it was ironically funny but now he felt like a bit of a dick for laughing about it in front of Taylor. Then a random thought popped into his head, "Why not just go talk to her about it?"


"How would I do that?"


"Well she owns a business that's open to the public, and her store is open-", he paused to check the article, "-in about a half hour." He paused again; Hannah had a thoughtful look on the part of her face he could see and he had enough of a grasp on Taylor's body language to know that she was thinking about it as well. "There's really nothing stopping you from just walking in and asking her about it, even if she's busy you could still set up a meeting or something for later", he said, putting his full idea into words.


"That's not a bad idea", said Taylor. "Could we do that?" She asked Hannah, hoping her guardian would say yes.


"Sure we could, I'm off for the next couple of hours and you don't have anything till four", she said, mentally reviewing both their schedules. It was also an opportunity for her to meet the newest independent in the city; god knew the world needed more non-criminal capes. "If you want we can go right now", she questioned while gesturing to the dwindling number of people boarding the boat back to the city proper.


"I'm ready to go", replied Taylor, finding herself surprised that just the thought of getting off the Rig and seeing something that wasn't grey and blue painted hallways cheered her up a bit.


After Hannah thanked Rory and followed Taylor to re-board the boat she had recently departed from Rory found himself wondering what he was going to do in the time until Taylor's or rather Effigy's reveal to the public.


Maybe he could talk to Carlos, try and improve his opinion of him from 'tolerated' to, probably not 'friends' but some kind of mutual respect.


The first time Taylor had taken the Rig ferry into the city had been an adventure unto itself thanks to the weather, today's trip was almost the complete opposite, the weather was calm and the sun was well on its way into the sky.


Taylor herself was wearing a blue sweater that she had picked out during their last trip not because the cool air bothered her but out of concession to what people expected; it would have to be a hell of a lot colder before the temperature started bothering her.


"How are we going to get there?" She asked Hannah, the question having just occurred to her; Ramirez had driven them around last time but that had been setup beforehand.


"We could take the bus, teleport, call a taxi, or walk; it's actually not that far", the older woman replied having looked at the address in the article.


"You take the bus sometimes?" Questioned a slightly bemused Taylor; the idea of one of the city's heroes doing something as mundane as riding the bus was an odd one.


Hannah smiled underneath her mask as she took Taylor's hand and gently tugged her in the right direction, "Yes I do on occasion take the city bus in costume; people's reactions tend to be interesting. Thankfully most settle for being surprised and asking for an autograph."


From there the walk passed in a mostly companionable silence only interrupted by the occasional comment or question from Taylor who also sped them along with a few teleports of opportunity.


The store itself was modestly sized, tastefully decorated, and was located on the border of Silver Dragon territory and the more respectable downtown areas. There were only a handful of people in and around the store but that could be blamed on a lack of advertising.


"Ready?" Hannah asked, noticing that Taylor seemed to be hesitant to actually enter the building.


At this point Taylor was feeling a bit unsure of herself, what was she going to say, what was Parian like, what did she expect to happen? She pushed those questions aside and stepped through the door; she'd look like an idiot if she turned back now.


A little bell rang as Taylor stepped through the door causing one or two people to look over to her, as she paused to take a look around Parian herself stepped out from the back where she had been working.


"Can I help you?" She asked.


Taylor's temporary confidence fled and she was left standing there struggling to come up with something to say.


Thankfully Hannah came in a few seconds later and held out her hand, "Parian? Nice to meet you, I'm Miss Militia."


"Yes I am Parian", the woman replied, taking the offered hand. "Nice to meet you too."


Fortunately for Taylor the exchange between the two older women was long enough for her to get a little bit of confidence back. "I'm Effigy, but you can call me Taylor", she said remembering what Samuels had said about using her cape name in public.


"Nice to meet you Taylor."


"Why'd you go with the doll theme?" Taylor asked, blurting the question out.


The question earned a sigh from Parian, "I came up with my theme and costume a few months ago and I worked on setting this store up for the same amount of time. When I found out about you a couple of weeks ago I had already paid for everything. I don't exactly have a lot of money and I was getting ready to open this store so changing wasn't really an option."


"Oh, that makes sense", said Taylor, she hadn't really thought about Parian simply not having the money to change things. It still didn't change the fact that she felt her theme was being stolen but it did make her a bit more sympathetic to Parian.


"Still I wonder how many people are going to accuse you or me of ripping the other off", she wondered out loud, sounding slightly exasperated at the prospect.


"I still think you're stealing my theme."


"How am I stealing it when I was going to use it first?" Came Parian's somewhat indignant reply.


Taylor's response was to simply point at her face.


Parian took a breath to respond but was interrupted by an odd sound; both she and Taylor turned to look at Hannah, the source of the sound. Hannah was unsuccessfully attempting to hold in her laughter at what was essentially two serious faced people having what amounted to a 'you, no you' argument.


The two of them came to the same realisation pretty quickly after that; Taylor wound up looking at the floor and Parian wound up looking over the other girl's shoulder doing her best to look dignified.


"I think we can both agree that this argument is kind of pointless", Parian said, earning a nod from Taylor. "And that there are enough differences that people aren't going to confuse the two of us", there was another nod from Taylor who stuck her hand out.


"How about we pretend that didn't happen", Taylor asked as Parian took her offered hand.


"Agreed", the shop owner said, giving the other girl's hand a light shake before letting go.


At that point one of the other people in the store came up to the group. "Can you help me with something?" He asked Parian, he sounded impatient.


"Certainly", she said to him. "Sorry, can we talk later?" She asked Taylor, offering her a business card that she had pulled out of a pocket hidden in her dress.


"Yeah", said Taylor taking the business card even as Parian turned to talk to the man.


"That went rather well", Hannah said as they exited the store.


"Yeah it did", said Taylor; feeling an odd mix of cheerful and stupid. Cheerful because Parian definitely seemed friendly and it was interesting to see what 'normal' capes did; stupid because, well, in hindsight her being upset over someone having a similar theme just seemed so petty even if it had been only about an hour ago.


"Feeling like an idiot for getting upset over something that, in hindsight, doesn't seem that important?" Hannah asked; she knew that feeling from when she was younger and given how easily Taylor let go of the subject, could guess what the brunette was feeling.


"Yes", she replied in that drawn out, exasperated way that only children could pull off.


"Well it worked out in the end and as long as you learn something from the experience then it wasn't all bad."


Taylor's only response to Hannah's attempt at imparting wisdom was an amused sigh.


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Taylor nervously adjusted her lace cravat and would have swallowed if she was physically capable of it; one hundred and seven people were out in the conference hall. One hundred and seven people who would soon be looking at her and asking questions that she was going to have to answer.


"Hey", said Vista lightly punching her shoulder. "If I could do this you can", she offered with a smile.


"Is it really that obvious?" Taylor dryly asked her teammates. Carlos, Missy and Taylor were backstage waiting for Taylor's cue to come out; Rory hadn't been able to make it something to do with his civilian identity.


"You might as well be holding a sign", said Carlos, "Trust me all of us were nervous when we did this but it isn't as hard as it seems."


Before she could respond Taylor heard the star of her cue, she had just enough time to scramble over to her chair and straighten her costume before teleporting onto the stage to the left of Samuels.


"-like you to meet Effigy", he spoke into the microphone while making a sweeping gesture to Taylor.


Taylor sat in the classic Victorian portrait pose and held it for a couple seconds before accepting the microphone and standing up. "Hello everyone", she said doing her best to keep the nervousness out of her voice. "I'm sure most of you know who I am and have read or seen a bit of information about me online; as most of you probably know I am a Case 140, my powers include teleportation and enhanced toughness and strength." There was a small pause as she gathered her thoughts, the script she had been given told her to list some of her likes and dislikes, "I like reading, preferably fantasy but it doesn't have to be, I think mechanical work is pretty interesting, and I really don't like flying."


She wasn't sure how much time she was allowed to take up but she figured a few more details couldn't hurt, "Even though I'm incapable of eating I like the smell of food, and I like The Clockwork Empress movie but I haven't seen the series yet."


There that should be enough, now onto the next part. "Is there anything else you want to know?" She asked the assembled crowd.


Most of the questions were mundane, what she did in her spare time, how was she being treated out on the Rig, boring stuff really. The Q&A period went on like this for a few more minutes before a man in a wheelchair had his turn to ask a question, "Can I just say thank you for saving my life?"


"Yes you-", Taylors automatic reply was cut short as she registered the question; 'who was this guy?' Her pause continued as she took a closer look at him, it was the guy he had brought to the hospital after the car crash.


She teleported over to him immediately. "Hi", she said, he looked better, not good by any stretch of the imagination, but better. "I'm glad you're ok", how was he allowed out of the hospital? From her admittedly limited knowledge he was going to be there for a couple of months at least.


"Ok isn't really the term I'd use", he said with a smirk, it was supposed to be a smile but moving the left side of his face pulled on some of the still healing skin there. "I heard about what happened and how you saved my life, the least I can do is say thanks", he sounded tired even as he stuck the arm that wasn't immobilised in a cast under the blankets covering most of his body.


Taylor took his hand and shook it as gently as she could, as soon as she let go the slight man seated behind him stood up, "There you got to say thanks Nick, now can we please get you back to the hospital?"


"Yeah yeah", Nick said in a tiredly as the other man got the chair ready to move, "I may not be in good shape but I'm not about to drop dead the second you look away either."


"Sorry we have to leave so soon, I'm Mike, and Nick here is supposed to be checked on every often", Mike said to Taylor even as he started turning the wheelchair around.


"Thank you, I mean it", Nick said before he was turned around completely, on their way out the nearby doors Mike gave her a wave.


Of course the reporters in the room hadn't been idle and as soon as the two men left began calling out questions to Taylor. So she did what any sane person would do, teleported back to Samuels and asked him what to do.


"Just answer a few, they can't have too many, the story's a couple of weeks old already", he told her holding his microphone where it wouldn't pick up his voice.


As it turned out nearly every hand went down once she answered the questions of how she felt about the crash and why; after most of the hands dropped Samuels took over to answer a few more questions and make a few statements that Taylor didn't really pay attention to.


As soon as she was allowed to she went back stage to her fellow wards and breathed an internal sigh of relief, she had survived being out in front of a lot of people. Meeting Nick had been a surprise though; she hadn't given him much thought being too busy dealing with her own issues, she felt a bit of a warm glow in her chest knowing he had not only survived but seemed to be recovering well.


"Hey", Vista said from next to her with a grin, "You survived."


"Yeah, it wasn't too bad", she admitted.


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A/N: Yay, I finished this on time, Merry Christmas to everyone who reads this.
 
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You know it occurs to me that a meeting between canon Taylor and Effigy Taylor would be really interesting, canon Taylor has had almost zero good experiences with authority figures and most of her friends are criminals or of at least somewhat questionable allegiance; Effigy Taylor on the other hand has almost universally positive experiences with authority figures and nearly all of her friends and acquaintances are government employees or law abiding citizens.

I find thinking about the contrast between the two to be interesting.

EDIT: Just thinking out loud here but I would peg canon Taylor's fatal flaw to be pride; she believes that she is the only one who can save the world, Brockton Bay, etc. I'm aiming for effigy Taylor's fatal flaw to be loyalty; loyalty to the PRT/Protectorate, loyalty is something she demonstrated in canon and her treatment by the Protectorate mirrors her treatment by the undersiders in that they are the first people in her life to show concern and decency to her personally and as a result she desperately wants to stay with them.

Things will definitely get interesting when the truth of who pulls the PRT's stings comes out near the climax of the story.
 
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Effigy - 2.4
Effigy – 2.4​



"Look there's the bookstore", said Emma a little bit louder than usual in order to be heard over the sounds of the crowded mall, as she pointed and tugged Taylor along behind her.


Taylor had mentioned to her earlier that she was out of reading material and that the nights were getting increasingly boring as she looked for new things to do. That and Taylor clearly hadn't developed an enthusiasm for window shopping despite all of her other changes so Emma felt like she should make it up to her friend.


Taylor's hand still felt a little bit odd in hers; for starters there wasn't any of the padding or give of flesh and blood. Another thing was how cool it was, she'd been told Taylor didn't generate any body heat but it was another thing to feel it herself.


A buzz from her pocket interrupted her thoughts on her friend's changes; it was a text from her dad asking where she was since he was almost finished at the nearby bank.


'And he gave me the whole "don't go anywhere with strangers" speech; I'm old enough to know that!' Emma thought as she sent her reply. 'Besides, Taylor's with me; I don't think anyone could make her do anything', indeed Taylor weighed enough that trying to drag her along without her consent (or awareness in Emma's case) wouldn't be easy.


They'd been drawing looks pretty much the whole time they had been wandering around and still were as they made their way over to the bookstore. Emma rather vividly remembered the expression of a guy wearing a Humanity First pin when he spotted Taylor; like he'd just watched Taylor kick his dog for shits and giggles or something.


As soon as they got into the store Taylor made a beeline for the fiction section and started taking a look at anything that seemed interesting. She seemed to be taking a scattershot approach, taking a look at every genre rather than her previous favorites of classical and fantasy; Emma was pretty sure she didn't know what her favorite genre was anymore.


The thought depressed her a little bit.


"Know any good books?" Taylor asked as she browsed.


"I don't really read that much besides magazines", Emma admitted, not for lack of trying on Taylor and her mom's part though; those two had always been trying to get her to read more.


After a few minutes of browsing the shelves Emma noticed Taylor pushing her hair out of her eye's every time she crouched and leaned over to take a look at the bottom shelf, she let it happen a few more times before deciding to help out.


"Taylor", she said, getting her friend's attention.


"Yeah?"


"Stand up, I'll braid your hair, then it won't be in your eyes all the time", Emma explained.


"Oh", said Taylor, standing up, "Thanks."


"Not a problem", Emma said with a smile as she moved behind Taylor; they'd braided each other's hair a few times before, doing it again felt nice.


Taylor's hair was still the same curly so-dark-brown-it's-almost-black it had always been but there was something off with the feel of it that she couldn't quite put her finger on. A lot of things were like that now; the same in some ways, off in others. Then there were the big obvious changes like when she'd cracked one of their old jokes.


She'd ended up laughing at it by herself.


In front of her Taylor shifted slightly, "Emma, You done?"


'You always used to call me Ems', came the unbidden thought. "Sorry, lost in thought for a second", she said, pushing her thoughts to the side. "Almost done", she assured Taylor.


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"So what did you do before you joined the Protectorate?" Taylor asked, spinning around to look at Robin (or rather Velocity out in costume).


The two of them had been paired up for the night patrol (soon to be the morning patrol if Taylor's watch was right) and it was late enough that even the majority of the criminals were in bed. The location also went a long way towards explaining why there wasn't any activity in the area; it was only a couple of blocks away from both a police station and PRT headquarters.


The weather wasn't exactly great either, a cold thick fog had rolled in from the bay and couldn't seem to decide whether it wanted to remain a thick fog or become a light drizzle instead.


"I was in the army, actually", Velocity replied, slowing slightly to avoid running into Taylor. "I wanted to see the world; and beyond that I'd rather not talk about it", he continued, pre-empting Taylor's next question.


"Alright", she said before spinning back around, "What's the weirdest thing you've seen?"


Velocity had to think about that one for a few moments; you saw a lot of bizarre things in law enforcement. However one particular incident quickly came to mind. "There was this one time a guy called in and swore he saw one of Squealer's trucks and a bunch of Merchants break into his house. Armsmaster and I were nearby so we went to go scout the place out the situation and see if we needed to wait for backup or not; as it turned out 'Squealer's truck'", he said, even making the finger motions, "was just a rusted out piece of crap with several bad repair jobs."


"So-", Taylor began before Velocity continued.


"That wasn't the weird part. No; the weird part was what was going on inside. Apparently twenty three high as kites Merchants, and a low level lieutenant broke in", he paused for dramatic effect. "Because they really wanted bacon and eggs, at six in the evening", he finished in the flattest tone he could manage.


Taylor gave him an incredulous star for a second before she started giggling, remembering to put her hand over her mouth immediately after.


"It was ridiculous", Velocity complained, "It felt like I walked into a sitcom! All they really did when we put zip ties on them was whine about how much they wanted food." He shook his head and sighed as Taylor's giggling finally stopped.


"Oh", Velocity said, pulling his phone out, "here's another one." He held the phone up for the girl beside him.


"Is that guy riding a giant spider?" She asked, not quite able to process the picture in front of her.


"Yep, one of Blasto's custom pets; the guy admitted that he paid just over a million solely so that he could ride it around and freak people out."


"The cops or the PRT couldn't do anything about it?"


"Unfortunately no", Velocity replied in an annoyed tone. "There weren't any laws against it and the closest they could find on the books were for horses, and he wasn't breaking any of those either."


"Wasn't?" Taylor asked picking up on the past tense.


"Yeah, an arachnophobe ended up shooting and killing it a few days later."


"Oh." Taylor wasn't really a fan of spiders but that seemed a little extreme to her.


"Which is a shame, cause by all accounts it was actually pretty docile and friendly, I mean the guy actually started crying when it was killed."


'Well that's depressing', Taylor thought as she tried to come up with a new topic; it wasn't like there was much else to do.


A faint noise brought the two of them to a stop before Taylor could ask her patrol partner what he liked to read, "You hear that?" She asked.


"Yeah, sounded like metal on metal; are you picking up on anyone?" He asked, turning in the general direction of the sound.


"There's sixty two people in that direction", Taylor paused going over the distribution of the various groups. "I think most of them are inside the buildings but there's two groups that I'm pretty sure are outside", she was getting better at judging distance using her power but she wasn't especially good at it yet.


"Where's the first group?" Velocity asked, getting ready to move.


"A block and a half in that direction", Taylor said pointing.


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"For fucks sake could you be any louder?" Laurence hissed at Andy, one of his partners in crime.


"You try opening a door with a crowbar quietly", the young man replied with an irritated whisper.


"Shut up!" Admonished Aaron; the third member and leader of the small group, "Just because we didn't see any alarms on the door when we checked this place out doesn't mean there aren't any, let's go."


"Right", whispered Andy as he propped the door open with the crowbar and followed Aaron in.


The small electronics store didn't have much in the way of extra inventory but to the small group of thieves that didn't really matter. Making it big wasn't the goal for them; getting enough money to pay for food and rent for was. Paying for three peoples worth of food was only getting more expensive, especially when there wasn't any work and they couldn't afford to move.


Laurence was left outside to stand watch; he wasn't really sure what he was supposed to do if anyone came by. 'Yell maybe?' He cut off that train of thought before it went any further. They had a plan to get in, they had a plan to get away, and they knew where they were going to sell their ill-gotten gains; which meant they were doing better than the majority of thieves.


None of this stopped him from nervously scanning the foggy alley in both directions with his flashlight as his co-conspirators started packing the smaller, easier to carry items into bags as quickly as they could.


The swish of fabric made him spin around; he was halfway through his yell of surprise when the girl's hand hit him in the chest and the two of them vanished leaving his cheap flashlight to shatter on the cracked asphalt of the alley.


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Taylor and the man she grabbed popped back into existence on the rooftop in front of Velocity. Laurence promptly stumbled and fell onto his back thanks to all the momentum of his leap away from Taylor ceasing to exist halfway through the motion.


Taylor took a step forward with a half formed, somewhat instinctive intention of helping him back up when he scrambled back the few feet it took for him to back into an air conditioner.


'He's scared of me', she realised. She was conflicted about that, on the one hand the fact that she wasn't seen as a joke was gratifying, on the other, well she was kind of uncomfortable with people being outright scared of her. The quiet panicked sounds of the other two down in the alley that drifted up to the three on the roof reinforced that conflict.


"You're under arrest", said Velocity as stepped up to Laurence. Without a word the man on the ground held his hands out for the zip-cuffs. The hero recognised the young man's expression; he'd seen it before, that was the face of someone who knew they were screwed.


"Stay here", Velocity told him, standing up after a quick pat down for weapons revealed nothing of interest.


A quick peek over the roof edge revealed that the other two thieves had finished filling their bags, put them in the back of the truck and were searching the alley for their friend calling his name as loudly as they dared to. The most important thing Velocity picked up on was the hand gun the shorter of the two was holding.


As far as Robin could tell the handgun wielder didn't have much training, he was following basic safety but he wasn't holding it in a way that indicated anything more than that. Not that that made him less dangerous; bullets from a scared eighteen year old could cause just as much damage as ones from a forty year old trained veteran.


"Alright", he whispered to Taylor, "I'll take care of the one with the gun, you get the other one."


"But-"


Velocity's upraised hand cut her off, "I know you're bulletproof but as team leader it's my job to look after you, I'm confident in my ability to deal with this guy; I also don't want to be remembered as 'that guy who told a thirteen year old to go fight a gunman'." He waited for Taylor's reluctant nod before adding, "That and Hannah would try to take my head off if she found out."


Taylor gave a snort of amusement at that.


"Can I have my baton?"


"Here you go", said Taylor, fishing the collapsible titanium rod out of one of her coat pockets and handing it to her superior. Velocity usually asked his partner to carry his baton for him to avoid the weight of the thing from slowing him down.


"Ready?" He asked. "Let's go", he said after receiving a nod of confirmation.


Stepping off the roof he activated his power; thanks to how his power handled impacts it afforded him a near perfect protection from hitting the ground. Straightening from a crouch he surged towards the gunman as quickly as he could, "Drop the gun!" He demanded as he approached the other man from behind.


Aaron froze after turning his head enough to see who was behind him, 'Fuck.' He hadn't brought his gun to bear yet and he was almost certain Velocity would get to him before he could and even if he did what then?


Did he really want to kill someone?


No, he decided, he didn't.


With a barely noticeable tremble he slowly placed his gun on the ground before putting his hands up.


"Alright turn around", Velocity commanded. As he tightened up the zip-cuffs he couldn't help the mental sigh of disappointment; the man in front of him looked like he was barely out of college.


"Police should be here in about five minutes", he told Taylor as she teleported the third and final member of the group over to be cuffed.


"So what do we do now?"


"For starters", he replied walking over to the idling truck and turning the engine off, "We turn off the engine. Second is getting the first guy off the roof", he had to pause again as Taylor did just that. "And now we wait."


Waiting the whole four minutes it took for the BBPD car to show up was a fairly tense affair; Velocity kept watch on the arrestees, Taylor tried and failed to talk to any of them, and the three were apparently content to sit on ground in silence.


After the police showed up things moved quite quickly, they took statements, put the three into the back seat of the police car, strung police tape around the scene and had a short talk with Velocity.


"Anything else?" Asked the officer who identified himself as Bradford.


"No, that's everything, we should get back to our patrol", Velocity replied, apparently just as tired of waiting as Taylor was.


"Take care, we'll get a hold of you if there's anything else", Bradford said with a sort of empty politeness. As he walked back to his car the two Protectorate members heard him mutter, probably louder than intended, about 'another damn taxi run.'


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A/N: So I had writers block while writing this chapter, to try and get rid of it I started writing a Lung interlude, which I then ran into writers block on, fortunately my writers block apparently only focuses on one thing at a time.
 
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I don't get why the cop would complain. If it was Brockton Bay and I was a cop, I'd be happy for boring pick-ups. Less chance of being shot or exploded or who knows what by psychos.
 
Huh, a random gangster in Brockton Bay deciding not to start shooting when cornered and instead, surrendered like a sensible person when confronted by a superhero.

Clearly, he must be from outside the city.
 
I don't get why the cop would complain. If it was Brockton Bay and I was a cop, I'd be happy for boring pick-ups. Less chance of being shot or exploded or who knows what by psychos.
It's more of an inter-service rivalry thing, the Police and the Protectorate/PRT are competing for federal funding; the more arrests/crime prevention one of them does the easier it is for them to get more funding, funding that isn't going to the other guys. Add to that that these 3 weren't capes or even hardened criminals so the whole thing could have probably been handled by one or two cops.

There's also the fact that the PRT/Protectorate cant be bothered to pick their arrestees up themselves and get the cops to essentially do all the boring legwork for them and you can see why Bradford is a bit annoyed by the whole thing.

Is it logical? Hell no. Is it understandable?

Hopefully.

EDIT: There's some personal pride involved as well.
 
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Interlude - Lung
Interlude – Lung​


The Nine Rings was one of the best restaurants in Brockton Bay; every meal was prepared by expert chefs using only the finest ingredients, the walls were covered in dark wood panelling and tasteful decorations were scattered around the main eating area, and the staff were always professional and offered prompt service.


The subtle opulence only served to make some of the restaurant's current occupants look even more out of place; some of the Silver Dragon's upper hierarchy didn't clean up that well. All of them had put in varying amounts of effort into their appearance for the meeting; hair had been shaved or trimmed and suits were acquired.


Lung, the owner of The Nine Rings and head of the Silver Dragons sat near one corner of the room evaluating the occupants and making a mental note of everyone who had put less effort into their appearance than him. A pair of pinstriped dress pants and a collared shirt with the suit's jacket thrown on overtop wasn't that hard to do, he mused while he observed two under-lieutenants.


Making a note of the two he went back to his meal, taking another bite of the excellent seafood pasta and letting the dull murmur of conversation wash over him. Oni Lee, his friend and trusted lieutenant sat beside him finishing his own dish off while also keeping an eye on the other people in the room.


Lung frowned as his phone vibrated, after taking a glance at the text he sped up his eating pace, business was going to come knocking soon and he'd rather not let his meal go to waste.


Less than a minute after Lung finished his meal two of his more trusted enforcers came through the door with another man in tow; Orito Gusso, the lieutenant responsible for the northernmost area of Silver Dragon territory in the city. He'd begged out of the meeting citing prior engagements and had sent his second, Rahim Maalik in his place.


The two enforcers made their way through the assembled people to Lung's table before shoving the man between them to his knees.


"Sir", the man on the left began, "Caught him beating some of the merchandise, again."


Lung let out a sigh as he used a napkin to clean the food from the corners of his mouth and set his fork down on his plate; deliberately taking his time in order to make sure his subordinates took notice. Dropping his napkin he stood up and walked around the table to his kneeling lieutenant, "Orito." He began slowly, "I already warned you once about damaging the merchandise; they lose quite a bit of their value after you're done with them. But that's not what pisses me off", he said, his voice becoming slightly strained.


Orito did not look good; he had the general appearance of someone who had spent too long doing too many drugs, he was almost painfully thin and his eyes had that manic look that could only really be achieved by long time cocaine users.


Of course he didn't have his usual confidence and swagger to back him up now; now there was only fear, desperation and maybe a sliver of hope that he could still get out of this on his face.


Lung crouched down in front of the kneeling man before beginning, "I could live with you spending half your time high as a fucking kite, I could live with you getting Rahim over there to do most of the legwork, there's are a lot of things I could live with; except one thing."


As Lung said this he saw that last sliver of hope drain from the eyes of the man in front of him and knew he would probably try something stupid.


He wasn't disappointed when Orito pulled a hidden knife out and took a swipe at Lung aiming for his throat.


It didn't work; the reflexive swipe of Lung's arm combined with leaning back to avoid the attack meant the slash only left a shallow cut across the bridge of his nose.


Lung gave a frown and a sigh as his hand shot forward enveloping Orito's throat and dragging the other man closer as he stood up.


"What really pisses me off", Lung continued, "Is that you thought you could ignore me telling you to stop, twice."


Lung's hand closed with the unwavering strength of a hydraulic press, "Did you really think you could defy me!"


Orito's face had turned an alarming shade of purple before a surprisingly quiet wet crunch came from the man's neck.


Lung dropped the man he had been holding off the ground leaving him to give small, desperate, wet gurgles on the ground as Orito tried to breathe though his crushed throat and destroyed spine.


"The position is yours if you get rid of what's left", Lung said to Rahim with a negligent gesture to Orito; who, surprisingly enough still wasn't completely dead. "You two", he said to the men who had dragged the now former lieutenant, "once you're done helping with the cleanup you can have a free meal." He saw small smiles appear on the pair's faces before he sat down and grabbed a napkin to dab at the cut on his nose; thankfully his powers would clear it up by tomorrow.


'Remind everyone of the price of defiance and reward competent loyalty and things run just fine', Lung idly mused as he watched the cleanup unfold. A single meal at The Nine Rings was a surprisingly generous reward given the prices and the food, the two enforcers had a good reason to be thankful.


"You want me to go with them?" Lee asked quietly, leaning in from the side.


Lung held up a hand as he finished chewing another bite of his food, "I want you with me for tonight's transaction. If they can't get something as simple as disposing of a body done they don't deserve their position."


Lee gave a nod as he went back to his food.


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The drive out to the docks didn't take very long; the late hour combined with gas just passing five dollars per gallon meant people weren't driving if they didn't have to. The dull glow of light pollution reflecting off the clouds gave even the unlit portions of the city a faint light source.


As Lung pulled into one of the Silver Dragon's warehouses (legally purchased by Lung under an assumed name) he saw that the shipment had already arrived. Off to the left was an assortment of vehicles manned by gang members that would distribute the weapons to the safe houses scattered around the Dragon's territory.


Off to the right were the loading docks, only one was occupied with the driver and his guard waiting for Lung to arrive to take a look at the merchandise and pay them. A pair of bored gang members sat in forklifts just waiting for the go ahead.


"Alright let's take a look at the goods", Lung said as he strode towards the back of the truck, Lee following close behind.


"Right away", the wry redheaded arms dealer replied in a surprisingly upbeat tone as he unlocked the doors and swung them wide open. "I got everything you ordered", he continued as he cracked open the nearest pallet to pull out one of the assault rifles within. "You know I can understand the assault rifles, handguns, and explosives but the anti-material rifles might be a bit much", he rambled as Lung looked over the rifle that was now in his hands.


The arms dealer continued before Lung could reply presumably having seen the look on his client's face, "Right, right, not my business; so what do you think?"


"It'll do", Lung said noncommittally as he motioned for the forklift drivers to get to work.


The third occupant of the car Lung had arrived in took that as his cue; with a slightly nervous gait walked over to his boss clutching a briefcase. The money inside might not be a fantastically huge amount compared to what the Dragons usually pulled in but he had no doubt his boss would be displeased if something happened to it.


Lung accepted the case from his underling without a word before turning around and handing it the arms dealer who cracked it open and quickly flipped through a sheaf of bills.


He closed it again with a wide smile on his face, "Pleasure doing business with you."


Lung offered a nod in reply before the five were forced to move out of the way as the forklifts got to work.


The next couple of hours rushed by in a blur as the arms dealer left and Lung directed his people on where the pallet-loads of guns, ammunition, and explosives were going.


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The sun was only a few hours away from rising by the time Lung got back to his apartment; it was modest sized building in one of the middle class areas of the city situated within the Silver Dragon's territory. Most importantly, from Lung's perspective, was that he owned the building meaning the penthouse suite was his for free.


As soon as he locked the door and kicked off his shoes he made a beeline for his Lay-Z-Boy, snagging some files off his desk as he went by, and dropped into the leather recliner with a tired sigh.


Grabbing the remote he flicked the TV on to give himself some background noise as he looked at the folders with a mental groan.


'Who the hell would have thought being a crime boss would have been so much work?' He thought as he flipped open the folders; he needed a plan on how to expand the gang's territory.


Brockton Bay was too small for the number of criminals it hosted, not enough money was coming into the city for all of them and it was only getting worse; the Bay's population had only been going down for the last few years as jobs dried up and businesses left for greener pastures.


On the plus side drug sales had never been higher, but that was a small comfort as everything else was making less and less; the more frequent clashes with the Patriots and the Merchants didn't help either, they just drew attention and resources for almost no gain.


He needed a plan, he certainly wasn't about to run away with his tail between his legs.


The merchants would probably go first, a temporary truce with the Patriots would probably have to be worked out, Lung didn't really have any doubts that Marshall was pragmatic enough to see the benefit.


The real problem was keeping things quiet enough that the cops, Protectorate, and PRT didn't feel the need to intervene. He cracked open another folder at that thought inside were some of the most complete dossiers on the local Protectorate capes outside their own archives, he'd paid good money and devoted a lot of time to get these. Inside were names, addresses, phone numbers, powers, limits, latest patrol schedule, they even knew Triumph's favorite brand of cereal.


Unfortunately none of this really helped, killing all of them wouldn't be too hard, except maybe the new ward and Armsmaster given that they didn't leave the Rig that often, but that would only buy him a day or two before reinforcements came down on him like an entire bag of sledgehammers; and it wouldn't take the PRT out of the equation.


He paused as a new idea came to him, 'Why not get them to do most of the work?'


The problem the PRT had with the Merchants was their surprising slipperiness; all a merchant had to do was sit down and suddenly they blended in with the city's substantial homeless population, and the cops just didn't have the manpower to search every single homeless person they saw. On top of that Skidmark, Squealer, and Mush were surprisingly competent for people who had the reputation of strung out junkies.


Their fleet of invisible vehicles alone was a massive strategic asset that nobody else could match or counter, they also didn't have a schedule or permanent base.


Lung's train of thought trailed off as he realised he'd read over the same two lines of Merchant assets without really comprehending them.


'Fuckit, I'm going to bed', he thought as he got up and tossed the folders back onto his desk; thinking could wait till later.


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A/N: How many times has Lung's Lay-Z-Boy been mentioned compared to actually showing up? Anyway this chapter is pretty much setup and an expansion on the state of the city.


And a quick question to all the other authors who read this; do any of you get really nervous waiting for the response to a new chapter? I always feel like I'm one screw-up away from killing the story.
 
And a quick question to all the other authors who read this; do any of you get really nervous waiting for the response to a new chapter? I always feel like I'm one screw-up away from killing the story.

Well, it hasn't happened yet. Which I'm sure is immensely reassuring for you :p

More seriously: past a certain length of story, you basically have to say "screw the audience". For example, when you're writing in this kind of serialised format, a fair number of people will ragequit if you end a chapter or arc on a low note. That's not a fault of the writing; it's people being too damn impatient to wait for the other shoe to drop when they know that said shoe hasn't been written yet.

If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster...

...And now I have the best title ever for a fic about Rory Christner.
 
Mini Interlude - Contessa
Mini Interlude – Contessa​


How to hide the existence of Cauldron?


It was Impossible, or at least would have taken enough effort that it might as well be impossible.


Cauldron had too many activities that would be noticed by the public for them to remain completely invisible.


How then could they keep the public from finding out about them or at least keep them from suspecting and digging deeper?


The answer was simple; release the truth, along with a million other valid explanations, muddy the waters and hide the facts behind false speculation and puppets, bury the needle in a pile of needles.


Make sure the truth was hidden on the fifth page of a google search and most people would never see it.


Cauldron's ultimate security measure was not to convince the world that they didn't exist but to convince them that the idea of their existence was ridiculous. Cauldron was spoken of in hushed tones by conspiracy theorists in internet chat rooms while those same theorists were ridiculed to the same degree as moon landing conspiracy theorists.


Most of the information required to prove the existence of Cauldron was available to the public, Contessa thought as she leaned back in her computer chair with a small smile. Dragon would distribute the information to the correct sites prompting more discussion and ridicule of 'The Cauldron Conspiracy'.


The best way to hide the truth? In plain sight.


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A/N: So I've been playing a lot of The Secret World recently and I felt that the Illuminati's approach to not being noticed fit Cauldron quite well.
 
So I've been playing a lot of The Secret World recently and I felt that the Illuminati's approach to not being noticed fit Cauldron quite well.

I don't think it really works in this situation, when there are big data thinkers, like the one that caught Accord out, you can't hide a conspiracy as well as you might otherwise.
 
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