Divine Administration - of Gods and Bureaucracy (Worm/Exalted)

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1.1 1.2 1.3 1.4 (below) 1.5 1.6 1.7 1.8 1.9 Interludes: 1A (Amy) 1B (Piggot) 1C (Danny)...
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Index:
1.1 1.2 1.3 1.4 (below) 1.5 1.6 1.7 1.8 1.9 Interludes: 1A (Amy) 1B (Piggot) 1C (Danny) 1D (Shadow Stalker)
2.1 2.2 2.3 (Tattletale) 2.4 2.5 (PRT) 2.6 2.7 2.8 (Tattletale) 2.9 2.10 2A (Aisha) 2B (Danny) 2C (Miss Militia) 2D (Tattletale)
3.1 3.2 (Tattletale) 3.3 3.4 (Tu Yu) 3.5 3.6 3.7 (Tattletale) 3.8 (Danny) 3.9 (Coil) 3.10 (Miss Militia) 3.11 (Lisa)
X.X - ???
4.1 4.2 4.3 4.4 4.5 (Lisa) .

All the credit goes to my awesome beta-reader Snowfire. Seriously, I probably wouldn't have gotten anything done without him, and he's a generally awesome friend to boot.
Please do note that the early chapters....well, let's just say this is the first story longer than a single chapter that I ever wrote. A lot about the dialogue, pacing, formatting and so on gets better later on. It's an ongoing learning process.

Omakes:
Heavenly Court Justice! by Seclorum
Inconspicuous Secretary Approach, part II, by me

A summary of the powers of Taylor and the other gods, as demonstrated in the Story so far (will try to keep it spoiler-free).
An explanation of Taylors Shard, the source of her power (Yes she has one).
A timeline of the stories events.

All feedback is appreciated. Even if you don't like something, say so.

Note that I am not using Invisi-Text, that's just the way I like my formatting.
Also note that this story features no interaction with the Exalted-setting at all, beyond Taylor having the abilities of an Exalted-goddess and creating similar gods. Nothing else will cross over, so no Exaltations, deities from Creation or the like.
Names used for any original characters that overlap with names from Creation are just that, names. They are not indicative of them being their namesakes, or even necessarily like them.
 
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1.1 - 1.4
1.1

A scream echoed down the hallways of Winslow High. School had been out for over two hours, so only the janitor noticed as he was cleaning the hallway.


After knocking on the door for the locker where the curse had come from, he decided to open it. At least one student got stuffed into a locker this year, and he could only imagine the horror of being trapped in one for hours.

His concern turned out to be unnecessary; the locker only containing neatly stacked rows of files and papers.




Inside my sanctum, I was still cursing at the crumpled scroll in my hands.

"How could they make that bitch a hero?!"

I still couldn't believe it. Sophia - no, Shadow Stalker - was a Ward. A hero-in-training, working with the Protectorate. And I couldn't even tell myself that she managed to hide her part in the bullying campaign against me or her otherwise horrible behaviour at school. Maybe she did - but the report in my hand told me of many more crimes. Months of vigilantism, almost killing people several times before being "persuaded" to join the Wards. Outright hunting criminals like animals even after that. Constant reminders to use non-lethal force.

And yet, she was portrayed to the public as a hero. Others who call themselves heroes work with her, cover for her crimes.


Well. If the "Heroes" of Brockton Bay were unable to even police their own ranks there was no chance of them bringing anything resembling order to this city. But with my powers, I might.

Decision made, I filed away the scroll in my hand and sat down at my desk. A quick glance at the polished oak surface and an empty scroll appeared. With practiced strokes of my brush, I began to write out a new policy.






My powers had been frustratingly vague so far. Well, they still were in so many ways.

I had blacked out after being trapped in a filth-filled locker for hours. When I woke up, I found myself in a sparse room - just a barebone desk, a simple chair and an empty shelf. Nobody else around, no explanation how i got there. No idea I had triggered as a Parahuman.


Of course, when I walked out of the only door and found myself standing in front of my school locker it had become obvious that I had gained some form of superpower. I ruled out teleporation after several minutes of experimentation. No, apparently all I could do was walk into my locker and somehow appear in a room that just seemed to be nowhere.


While I was glad that I had rescued myself it was frustrating that my power seemed so very limited. I kept quiet about it when I went home to my worried father and tried to experiment further. Maybe I could create more such rooms? Or at least portals to the same room, that could at least be useful for getting around quickly.

After that failed too, I just went to bed.


The next morning brought more questions as I found myself walking right through my room's door as I tried to open it. That proved to work with walls as well - but I could stand on the floor without falling through it. I tried if that was due to an ability to fly, but I appeared to be as gravity-bound as ever.


Puzzling about my powers, I didn't even notice my Dad walking up to and then through me. That caused some minor panic. If I was stuck like this, would I ever be able to interact with people at all?

Fortunately I was able to materialize again, but that left me incredibly drained.


After spending the Saturday morning with my Dad, I continued my experimentation. No new applications for my powers appeared. I could make myself intangible and invisible to everything as far as I could tell, and return to my normal state with great effort. Which didn't explain the abandoned office room I had found myself in.



Getting back to my school locker was easy - closed doors proved no barriers for me. The office room appeared as it had the day before - except for an ornate scroll lying at the center of the desk.

The scroll was made from some mixture of finest paper and gold threads and unfurled without any wrinkling or creaks. I had never seen the large ink symbols that were written on it before, yet reading them was as simple as if they were in english.


"Most honoured Administrator of the Mandate


We wish to inform Your Eminence that we are currently without assigned duty. It would be a great honour for us to aid You in any task You see fit for us. We have taken it upon us to include some plans to improve Your residence, a task we could begin immediately should Your Eminence so desire.


With most humble greetings,

Functionary Tu Yu"


Just...what?

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1.2

I had no clue what anything in the scroll really meant. Was it even me who was addressed? Why would I be addressed as "Administrator of the Mandate"? Why use a pompous title instead of just calling me "Taylor" or "Miss Hebert" if they wanted to be formal? Nevermind the babbling about a task or why anyone would use gold-embroidered silk paper or any of the other ten-thousand questions I had.


It was only after reading the scroll four or five times that I put it down on the desk and noticed the small gong that had been hidden by the scroll.

It was rather obvious that it had been left there by the person who had left the scroll. I wasn't quite sure if I should ring it. Who knew what that person really wanted, how they had found me, how they had known how to get in here. If they were even sane considering the content of their writing.

Then again, if they could do all that and wanted to harm me, I had no guarantees anyway. And I really needed some answers. I sat behind the desk and struck the gong.



Right after I had rung the gong, a door I had not noticed before slid open on the far left of the room.

A dark-blue hat I had seen in a book about chinese history. Matching robes with ornate golden embroidery. The face of a man in his mid-fifties, framed by a trimmed white beard and long goatee.

All that belonged to the man who had opened the door and was now bowing deeply to me.


A minute passed and the man did not stop bowing to me. I just kept staring, entirely unsure how to handle this. I should tell him to get up, to come in, to take a seat. But I knew nothing about the etiquette he expected. Had I already insulted him by letting him wait? Where was he even going to sit, there was no second chair? What was even going on?


The man cleared his throat, still bowing to me. That pulled my mind off its racetrack and made me stammer out a few words.

"Uh, you can stop bowing and, well you can come in too. If you want that is. I'm sorry if thats wrong I have no idea whats going on here."


The reply came in a calm, grandfatherly voice. Except it was filled with respect that I had barely heard addressed to anyone, much less myself.

"Most gracious your Eminence. And if I may to be so bold as to make a suggestion, it would be my pleasure to elaborate on the purpose of my visit. I have been created most recently, and as your Eminence are my superior I presumed that it was to You that I owed the pleasure of my existence. If I am mistaken, I can only offer my most humble apologies."


My mind boggled once again at that statement. I had created him? What were my powers if I could create an apparently fully sentient being without even noticing? If he was eve human, but that would not exactly make this easier to deal with.

I barely had time to even register my own confusion before he continued.


"For now, I find myself as a god without domain. Even if your Eminence may not be my creator, I would most humbly request being allowed to take upon myself a responsibility, as one such as I must. Even a humble task would be an incomparable blessing, but if I may to be so bold, I am most fortunate to hold great knowledge about the requirement of a proper Divine Administration. I would never dare to intrude upon your duty, yet I had hoped that I could be of service extending your Eminence's Sanctum to hold the necessary facilities. I would of course work to your exact specifications, taking upon my humble self that most tedious work to free your most valuable time."


I spontaneously developed an entirely new train of thought that flung off into an entirely different direction. Divine Administration? Just...what?

While about two-hundred percent of my brain were occupied shaking at the thought that I had potentially created sentient life and another two-hundred-fifty percent were panicking at the suggestion of divinity, a tiny conscious part of myself remained to acknowledge that I had dreamed about what would happened if I had parahuman powers. From getting flight and near-invulnerability as so many other capes, over the great inventive work of Tinkers to the innumerable possibility of Thinker and Shaker powers, I had contemplated many potential superpowers. Never terribly much, but I imagine everyone imagines that occasionally. Would anyone even think of anything remotely resembling this situation?


The robed man cleared softly cleared his throat again.

"Your eminence is clearly in deep contemplation. If I may be allowed to retreat, I could come back later whenever…"

"No!" I interrupted him, "uh, that is, please, stay. And if you actually know anything about this, um, Divine Administration, I could use your help. I mean it's fine if you want to decorate this room or anything, but, well."

I took a deep breath. And then another few. "I could use an Advisor".
 
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I had asked my visitor to make himself comfortable before we continued our conversation. Apparently standing for hours would count as comfortable for him, so I had to ask him to sit down. It would just get uncomfortable for me making anyone stand for that long. It didn't even register as weird when he sat down on a chair that appeared out of thin air.


Well, time to talk.

"We didn't even introduce each other. I'm Taylor Hebert, and you are?"

He was actually slightly taken aback at my question.

"Your Eminence may call me Tu Yu or whatever title you may deem appropriate. But…"

He took a pause. Had I offended him somehow?

"Forgive me, I must be blunt. I will of course address your Eminence in whatever terms you desire, but Taylor Hebert was your mortal name, was it not? It is considered extremely impolite to cling to such inconsequent remnants, a sign that you do not take your responsibilities to the Divine Bureaucracy seriously. Most will want to address you as Administrator of the Mandate, your proper heavenly name and title. Please forgive my bluntness your Eminence, I only wish to aid you."


Okay, there we go again. Too much information for my brain to handle. Mortal, Divine Bureaucracy. What others was he talking about? Well, if he could be blunt maybe I could do the same and actually learn anything. At least he was the person who wrote the scroll.


"No, that's quite alright Tu Yu. It would actually be for the best if we just talk openly for now. And for that, well. I have a lot of questions. Very basic questions. Would you be willing to answer them for me?"


He actually stood up to bow to me. At least he didn't remain standing.

"Your Eminence, that would be my duty as your advisor. Never be afraid of putting questions to those more learned than you, that is the mark of the wise ruler. Ask me anything you want."


"Okay then. I really have no idea whats going on. I mean, I must have triggered as a parahuman and their powers are probably much weirder than most of the public knows and…" I caught myself. Right, questions. "Could you explain what my powers are, what I am right now?"


A small smile showed up on Tu Yu's face.

"Well of course your Eminence. You are now one of the gods. We are tasked with maintaining Creation in its proper order, as mandated by fate, the Incarna and their chosen governors. Your rank puts you amongst the latter, an immense honour indeed. You are able to marshal the vast resources of Heaven and assign them to your subordinates as you seem fit. Most of them will try to manage their chosen domain in accordance to your will. If any do not, it is fully within your right and power to revoke their ranks and privilege and call sanction upon them."


Gods. Me. As a God. Except - well that didn't sound like any gods I was familiar with. Maybe some of those asian religions with their many gods?

"I've never heard of any gods. Well, when my mother was alive we went to church every now and then and lots of people believe in a god. And some parahumans claim they are gods, but they're all pretty insane." I paused, struck by the sudden - terrifying - possibility. "I'm not, am I?"


"Your Eminence, you are most most definitely not insane. Your world does not seem to have any gods keeping it properly maintained however, so it is understandable that this is a confusing revelation." It's hard to tell if being told that by Yu Tu is a good thing. I mean, wouldn't a hallucination tell you that you were sane? No, no, nonono not going there. Perfectly sane. He said so. Quick, ask another question!


"Ok. That's...good." Yu Tu looked at me strangely "That I'm not insane I mean! So...um...Gods. What exactly do they do?" Immediately after asking, I realised it was probably a stupid question, but then again I wasn't really in a place to try asking smart ones. That would mean I knew what the hell was going on. Which I still didn't. It took a moment to realise that Yu Tu was still silent, but on looking up it was clear that he was actually struggling a bit with the question. Finally though, he nodded


"As I said, your Eminence, we are charged with maintaining reality in all its various aspects. A short description that I shall elaborate upon." He looks amused, but continues to explain in a calm voice.

"I think it is best is I use examples. A god is in charge of their domain, which can be anything from a physical thing to an abstract concept. A domain's importance can range from a small hamlet to an entire mountain range, or from the First Word of children to Military Secrets. These things exist even if there is no god in charge of them, but without our guidance there can be no harmony. A river may flood too often or trade may become more prone to disruption."


By now, the feeling of flat surprise didn't even last that long. Things were running just fine, what he said couldn't possibly be true.

"Your Excellency may want to keep in mind that defic governance may seem unimportant in a region without external disruption. Even without guidance, most things can still find their balance. A Predator that hunts too much prey will find itself starving and the prey has time to regain its strength. Even without a god to watch over them, this will hold true. But what if hunters were to intrude into that forest? Both predator and prey may vanish. An attentive god would reign in the predator and maintain a proper population of prey. He could also befuddle the hunters, or make their weapons go astray if he so chooses."


That certainly made more sense. Brockton Bay had a delicate balance between the two major supervillain gangs and the Protectorate heroes. A disruption from outside could easily be catastrophic.

"Which brings me to how a god can go about their duty. We all carry intrinsic abilities that are tied to our domain. Like most means to manipulate the essence of the world, they are called "Charms". A forest god would have charms to inform him about the state of her domain, to influence the animals therein and shape the growth of its plants. A god of scholars could bless the most studious of his subjects with greater intellect and resistance to fatigue, or curse those who would disrupt their studies."


That sounded really useful. I was itching to ask what I could personally do, but Tu Yu was not finished with his explanation.

"Of course, there is the greatest power we all share. Cooperation towards a greater goal. No god has complete control over their domain, for it will always overlap with the responsibilities of others. A forest god could not stop a raging storm, for that would be the domain of another god. That god would work together with other weather gods. Who need to pay attention to the seasons, the gods of the sea, that they do not disrupt the work of farmers and traders. This is why each god should obey the directives of their superiors and properly inform them about the status of their domain."


Great, if I got into this I could probably share horror stories about paperwork with my dad.

"Sadly, I must warn your Eminence that many gods behave no better than mortals. They do not follow directives and disrupt the harmony. They seek illicit worship or just greater comfort, but the worst of them just neglect their duties and let their domains go unsupervised. Naturally, it is only just that their superiors punish and demote them."


I gave him a stern nod in response.

"Thank you for the warning Tu Yu. So, lets see if I got this right. Gods get powers over their domain which can be basically anything that could be useful for their job of maintaining it. And those powers can be granted and revoked by other gods? Which are somehow above them because it is basically run as a big organization, right? And if I got that right, can you tell me anything about what my powers are?"


"Your Eminence has it exactly. As for your personal abilities, I can only presume to guess at them based on the general knowledge I have. Your domain is Rightful Bureaucratic Administration, a concern of the utmost importance."


Great, paperwork as I had predicted. I probably had the power to bury people under piles of paper. Joy. Tu Yu continued.

"As such, your Eminence should have powers over everyone involved in such things. From the lowly citizen filling out his tax form to the heads of governments issuing their decrees, all that would fall under your domain. Your task will be to ensure that all such activities run smoothly and to punish those who obstruct them. And you are most fortuitous indeed, since of course Divine Bureaucracy will fall under that domain as well."


Aaand it was time to be stunned into silence again. As he described it, my power would basically involve everyone…

"Of course, it is a misconception that a god can be everywhere at once. While we can follow any prayer to its source and appear next to its issuer, we are still limited to being at one place at any one time. And using charms consumes essence, which only recharges with time and the prayer of mortals. I would advise you to pick other deities and even mortals to do your bidding and oversee their actions. You should be able to send mortals dreams to communicate with them, or to bestow your blessing upon them to shield them against corruption. A god of your station will also be able to levy punishments upon those harming your domain."


The word "punishment" made me think of the trio of girls that had tormented me for over a year. I shied away from using my powers to punish them just because of that. I wanted to be better than them, and if I did that I wouldn't be. But if I used my powers to make the administration of Winslow High punish them for their acts, that would be different. I had planned to do so with the evidence I had been gathering, this would only be a more efficient way. And making the school run better would help more people than just myself.


"Thank you very much Tu Yu. I can't possibly express my gratitude for this. Thanks to you I already have an idea where we could start to improve the world, and if you help me plan I am sure it will work. Now here is what I have in mind…"
 
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After several hours of planning, I went home and left Tu Yu in the office room. Which was apparently called a Sanctum and not at all appropriate to a goddess of my status. According to him, most of it was yet unused potential and he almost begged me to implement the plans he had for it.

I had no reason not to agree to that, and so I had written a note decreeing that his new title was "Most Excellent Designer and Curator of Celestial Abodes; Tu Yu, the Heavenly Majordomo." Apparently I had gotten lucky with the pomposity of my title.

As soon as I had finished writing the note - with an ink brush on a paper scroll - Tu Yu burst into flames. It only took a few seconds until the bright-golden flames had consumed him and left nothing at all behind.

Telling myself that he had to know this would have happened was actually enough to keep myself from panicking at having killed the only person who had any idea what was going on with me. Well, almost. At least it stalled the panic until he walked back into my office with a mischievous smile and clad in new golden robes.

"Well, that was most bracing. I trust your Excellency had no reason to worry?"

I...he...how could….he knew I had not been prepared for that!

I just couldn't help it, after a minute the seething anger was dissolved by my laughter.




My father had prepared dinner by the time I came home. That was when I noticed that I wasn't even the least bit hungry, or thirsty for that matter. I ate anyway, enjoyed the taste and talking with my father.

Going to sleep presented itself with a similar problem. I had slept last night, but apparently only out of habit. I wasn't tired now, and thinking back I had not been tired then either. Was that a part of my powers Tu Yu had not mentioned?

Fortunately, we had agreed to only meet again on Monday, when I would be going back to school, And since I still had homework to do and couldn't think of anything else to do in the middle of the night, I fetched my school bag.



Damn, that was fast. I had finished all my homework assignments in less than half the time I had estimated. And I had only taken so long because my handwriting had improved so much that it took conscious effort to make it look like my old writing.

Math problems just felt as easy as simple addition. I could write out essays in my mind faster than I could write them down, paying attention to stylistic details and greater composition I was certain we had never touched upon in school. The only issue had been that sometimes a sentence formed into a language that wasn't english, but just as familiar to me.

Everything else was just as easy. I never had to double check anything. Looking things up was unnecessary too, I just remembered.



Okay, that had to be another aspect of my powers. Had I just gotten smarter, or did homework somehow count as Bureaucracy? It was close enough to filling out paperwork, maybe.

After a bit of thinking, I figured out how to test that. We had a rubik's cube somewhere, I'd just have to be careful not wake up dad.

That actually turned out not be an issue - he was sitting in the kitchen, bowed over a stack of papers. I knew his work at the Dockworkers Association had taken up more and more time, but this was the first time I had seen him working in the middle of the night.


I could help him with that now! I was ashamed that it had taken me so long to realize this.

Tu Yu had explained that becoming material - apparently my natural state was now immaterial - took a lot of energy - what he had called "Essence". So I fetched the rubik's cube first, easily sneaking past my dad. Easier than it would have been for me before all of this happened - another thing to test. And so was solving the rubik's cube. Improved Intelligence: Confirmed!



Turning immaterial felt just like relaxing a muscle. I went down into the kitchen, hugging my dad without him noticing my untouchable, invisible form.

Tu Yu had told me about two powers - he called them Charms - that I was almost guaranteed to have.

I could bless others. Each gods blessing was different. Some just enhanced natural abilities, others gave supernatural abilities. A few would change the recipients appearance, a forest gods blessing might bestow bark-like skin. Fortunately that seemed unlikely to be the case for my blessing, but how much would Dad notice if I blessed him?

If he just got smarter and more adept with forms and numbers, he might shrug it off as sudden insight or overcoming the fatigue he had to feel at this point. But if it was a clearly supernatural power, he would notice. Could I explain to him what happened, that I was responsible? That his daughter had superpowers? Powers I didn't even understand myself.



It was a blessing. It would not harm him, and he could use it. More, he deserved it - Dad expressed all the virtues I would promote in my domain. Honest, hard-working, abiding by the rules - but not putting the rules about the people affected by them.

A rich melodious choir welled up from deep within me. An infinite number of voices praised all the aspects of proper administration. One voice took the lead, sounding just like my father.

Who had perked up from his stooped posture, clearly hearing something as well.

Then he went back to work, looking just as tired as before but now working much faster. Not like someone had pushed fast-forward on a video. Instead his movements now had greater certainty. No time was wasted searching for the right form or checking how often something had to be signed. While he had probably filled out half of this paperwork a hundred times before, it now looked like he had done it for an entire lifetime.



I stood there watching my dad work until he finished and went to bed. I was actually quite proud of his work, I realized. I knew some of his co-workers, and they all looked up to him. Despite the hard times the dockworkers were in, he had never given up on making their lives better.

Yes, I often felt like he had neglected me after mom's death. But it was clear that he cared, even if he couldn't show it. Somebody who put in so much work to improve the lives of others clearly cared.


I was tearing up a little at that realization when I decided to use my second power. As my dad headed to bed, I sent a dream towards him. About a hard days work he could be proud off, and then coming home to a family that was just as proud of him. I would try to make that more than a dream.


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Ah, this gets its own thread good as I really like it God!Taylor as shown here is really interesting and a good change as Exalted cross overs come.
 
I cannot easily express how happy I am to see this keeping on going and how great it is to help you with it - you say I do so much, I'm still not quite sure. I look forward to many more hours lost on Skype to it though.

Oh, and is there something about you and making me create accounts? First GW2, now this :p
 
Index is at the top, it just doesn't contain any links yet since the first four parts are right below. If its still useful i can link to those though.


Also, i could use some help.
Specifically, when planning i completely forgot that Taylor would have two free days to go through. I covered Saturday, now its Sunday. And i have no concrete idea what she could do with that time.

The ideas i currently have revolve around her trying out her charms and discovering that she is now superhuman in many other ways too (seriously, a god of her rank has attributes ranging from 5 to 8, peak-human is 5.)
The issue with the former is that most bureaucratic institutions are of course closed on a Sunday. So where could she go to just experiment with her charms? Only options i can come up with so far are police, PRT and a hospital.

As for discovering her now superhuman strength/endurance (though not as much as most brutes), that'll probably happen by her getting into a fight. A more unique idea other than "oh look she runs into a gang" would be appreciated.


If we can't come up with anything i could just skip ahead to school on monday, where i already have plans.
 
She could experiment with her own divine beuracracy. What happens when she creates an office, but does not specify who fills it? Can she simply create a god out of nothingness?
 
@Serafina, well, for knowing she has superhuman strength/endurance, if it shouldn't be limited to fight, than you can also make her involved in an incident. like, a crashing bus or something.

Otherwise, you can make her witnessing a crime, and decided to help. Although it will be more difficult justifying her willingness to be involved when she hadn't known her limit yet. An accidental fight is cliche, but it is also easily explained.
 
Index is at the top, it just doesn't contain any links yet since the first four parts are right below. If its still useful i can link to those though.


Also, i could use some help.
Specifically, when planning i completely forgot that Taylor would have two free days to go through. I covered Saturday, now its Sunday. And i have no concrete idea what she could do with that time.

The ideas i currently have revolve around her trying out her charms and discovering that she is now superhuman in many other ways too (seriously, a god of her rank has attributes ranging from 5 to 8, peak-human is 5.)
The issue with the former is that most bureaucratic institutions are of course closed on a Sunday. So where could she go to just experiment with her charms? Only options i can come up with so far are police, PRT and a hospital.

As for discovering her now superhuman strength/endurance (though not as much as most brutes), that'll probably happen by her getting into a fight. A more unique idea other than "oh look she runs into a gang" would be appreciated.


If we can't come up with anything i could just skip ahead to school on monday, where i already have plans.
Well, as Vinditus said, she might experiment with her powers regarding her own, divine, bureaucracy.

As for discovering her increased resiliency, one possibility that comes to mind for me would be that Sophia pulls one of her usual "push Taylor down the stairs" ploys, and Taylor notes that she doesn't have any bruises afterwards, or even really hurts, for example.
 
Taylor could start experimenting with creating empty positions, and seeing if they are 'filled' by new gods.
She could start simple, so things don't go too wrong if an accident happens.
She could start with a god of schools, and a god of police for a start.
 
Taylor could start experimenting with creating empty positions, and seeing if they are 'filled' by new gods.
She could start simple, so things don't go too wrong if an accident happens.
She could start with a god of schools, and a god of police for a start.
That'd be starting a bit high on the ladder, since those positions would cover *ALL* schools and police, on the entire planet. More likely she'd create a position for the "God of Winslow High" or "God of Brockton Bay Police Department".
 
Idea: Taylor starts using modern management techniques for yu-shan later in the story after she checks out some books on management.
'Department of parahuman issues'
'Yu-shan development office for earth aleph'
'Endbringer issue taskforce'
'subcommittee for effective schooling'
 
Well, as Vinditus said, she might experiment with her powers regarding her own, divine, bureaucracy.

As for discovering her increased resiliency, one possibility that comes to mind for me would be that Sophia pulls one of her usual "push Taylor down the stairs" ploys, and Taylor notes that she doesn't have any bruises afterwards, or even really hurts, for example.

Or she simply doesn't fall down the stairs. And then has to work out how she stopped herself from doing so.

The witnessing a crime and intervene is a cliche but it's one for a good reason, as Kerfirou said.
 
I could see Taylor going to create a God of Justice or something, Godly revenge is best revenge, even if it is by proxy.
 
The issue with the former is that most bureaucratic institutions are of course closed on a Sunday. So where could she go to just experiment with her charms? Only options i can come up with so far are police, PRT and a HOSPITAL.

The hospital sounds the best to me. You could have her discover how Amy is being abused by the hospitals and do something about it? I just like her powers!

Also is she the boss of administrative things around the world because if so I don't think everything will be closed!

Also, this is amazing....Moar!!!
 
Hmmm, well the Hospital and the Police are certainly places that are actively administrating over the weekend and I can totally see Taylor stubbing the PRT for their involvement with Sophia. One thing to remember is that Taylor is very new to her position though. Not just in the powers associated with it and helping the people involved either. Taylor could very well spend a majority of the day familiarizing herself with the various organizations in the bay and then realizing just how far reaching many of those organizations are. The E88 are associated with a large number of similar factions across the US and Europe alongside Medhall, the ABB was capable of picking up Bakuda shortly after she made her appearance so there might be something there, Coil has his connections to Fortress Construction and other various factions out of town and so on and so forth. And there are also all of those people like Danny in the last snip that take their work home with them over the weekend because they want to do well by the people below them. She has plenty of stuff to do even then.
 
She could find a way to visit Yu-Shan on the weekends. As a god, she's entitled to a residence, some ambrosia and quintessence, etc. Just so long as she stays out of the Jade Pleasure Dome; as a god, she'd be allowed in with permission from a higher-ranked god, but the Games are far too addicting for anygods' good.
 
There's management involved in shops, and lots of stores are open on sundays, dunno if that's different in the US though.
So that could maybe be something to test her powers on.
Some libraries seem to be open on sundays according to my google results.
Fast food places have managers.

The hospital is pretty much a safe bet though, everyone knows they're always open.
Or the heavenly bureacracy, though she might be scared to mess around with that so early.

As for general superhuman stuff. Have her get run over by a bike and land so she knows she should have been injured? Trip and fall down the stairs? Time her running (Taylor runs right? Or did she only start when she triggered?)? Accidentally cut herself cooking and have it heal in a day or two instead of a week or two? Something falls under the couch and she has an unnaturally easy time lifting it away to get it?
She already noticed she was smarter.
 
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