Guys, you don't take the sum of all dices. You only take the highest roll and then add the bonus to it.**- Among all the dices possibly made, only the highest roll is picked as a resolution against a difficulty check.
You have to add their bonii if you have any; you haven't added it to vision (you have a 6, so you'd add 10). Also, you don't have any PR, so you just don't roll for that and mark N/A.Douglas Bates Turn 1 -- 12 for vision in constructing tax plan, 18 in public relations when carrying it out.
Rolling@Demonic Spoon, please give me rolls for your actions. Research for the first four and then a Vision roll to implement your curriculum changes.
Reminder to the following players; @Aedan777 @DanBaque @Duzzit @Another Amoeba
The deadline for getting orders in is Thursday, March the 21st at 20:00 UTC+1/CET
And I make/made no secret of the fact.@Aedan777 @Romulus @DanBaque @Duzzit @Another Amoeba @Demonic Spoon
I had originally wanted to PM everyone individually but it looked like it'll be too much of a pain in the ass.
Anyway, you all know ICly that the Minister of Foreign Affairs has requested the presence of Valeriya Renette, the General Secretary of the Cabinet, into his office.
That's all.
In its current state? I have to say, no. Here are a few points as to why. Feel free to address them.
A year before his service would technically end as it starts from age 19 while he enlisted at 18, creating a required military service between the age of 19 and 21 from my understanding, that aside I'll make some changes like changing propaganda to military propaganda (there are actual real-world propaganda agencies that actually call themselves such for example Vietnam: Central Propaganda Department of the Communist Party of Vietnam - Nazi Germany: Reich Ministry of Public Enlightenment and Propaganda - Wikipedia this example for ireland changed its name from department of propaganda to department of publicity: Minister for Publicity - Wikipedia North Korea: Propaganda and Agitation Department - Wikipedia)In its current state? I have to say, no. Here are a few points as to why. Feel free to address them.
-The writing is a bit off. When you say, 'House of Eden' or 'birthright', it implies a noble house or screams nepotism. The Confederation is anything but feudalistic.
-The characterization of the Department of Foreign Affairs and Public Relations also feels off, you're also naming it 'of Propaganda', no real propaganda would call itself propaganda. Also, the very highest of echelons might be a bit like that, but no way it'd be something a newbie was involved in, especially not just in five years.
-You also seem to be fitting a lot of experience unrealistically while trying to keep your character young. It might be just a coincidence but he was also discharged from the military because of his injury the same year his mandatory service is supposed to end.
Sorry for the late answer, by the way. I was a bit busy lately.
Rolling@Demonic Spoon please give me a research and an authority roll.