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But we're slipping into territory where we're starting to go against the admonition at the bottom of the page, just above the post box on my machine ... let's not rehash canon, please.
 
Cleaning up a mess, sure. Unexploding a planet though might be a bit beyond even the Force. After all, once you crack open an egg and make an omelet, you can't then fix the egg to return the egg back to it's original condition.
True. However, just because a planet cannot return to how it was, doesn't mean that the components cannot be recycled and used to forge something new and even better.
 
Or at least tidied up into one pile instead of a messy cloud of rubble that gets in the way of space traffic.
Actually that's a fair point; how much trouble does exploding planets cause for hyperspace travel? Like, to, from, and through a system? Because if I remember correctly one of the things that brought Alderaan its wealth and prestige was being on a major hyperlane.
 
Actually that's a fair point; how much trouble does exploding planets cause for hyperspace travel? Like, to, from, and through a system? Because if I remember correctly one of the things that brought Alderaan its wealth and prestige was being on a major hyperlane.
I'd call it complicated.

The mass of the planet being dispersed would have consequences for the rest of the system.
I'd say that travel to or from the system in hyperspace would be largely unaffected, save for necessary adjustments to the point of arrival/ departure due to system disruptions.
Hyperspace travel going through the system proper would introduce errors for a while, until the disruptions in the system were properly mapped out and accounted for in the latest navigational data update. Hyperspace trips skirting the system would probably have relatively minor errors with the planet's mass and accompanying hyperspace mass shadow being dispersed, but still present in the system.


At least as far as the Legends hyperdrives and hyperspace navigation goes.
Disney canon hyperdrives probably wouldn't notice, given the bullshit they pulled exiting hyperspace into atmosphere, rather than the exclusion zone around planets from their gravity/mass shadow preventing the entry or exit to/from hyperspace in a radius ... and asteroids regularly being large enough to have a mass shadow sufficient to trip safety features and automatically pull ships out of hyperspace, and that being a trick used by various pirate groups.

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That said, it is probably yet another reason why Tarkin was a fucking idiot for using the Death Star on Alderaan the way he did.
 
it's a mess it needs cleaning, sure the planet will literally never be the same as it was before, that doesn't mean they can't do some sort of gravity warp to pull everything back into a roughly planet shaped mass, plus, the force is known to make use of technology so it's not like they have to do everything unaided excepting for massive force use.

so they smash it back together using something that could be considered a weapon under other circumstances, they use the force to identify all the little bits and pieces that need to be part of the planet.

then they rehabilitate the biomes, use some additional machines and the force to get the planet's core back to a normal molten state with a normal magnetic field and all the associated normal planetary things.

in the process of all this they'll have built most of the necessary tools for building a planet from scratch, so theoretically they can go off and do that if they need to...
 
it's a mess it needs cleaning, sure the planet will literally never be the same as it was before, that doesn't mean they can't do some sort of gravity warp to pull everything back into a roughly planet shaped mass, plus, the force is known to make use of technology so it's not like they have to do everything unaided excepting for massive force use.

so they smash it back together using something that could be considered a weapon under other circumstances, they use the force to identify all the little bits and pieces that need to be part of the planet.

then they rehabilitate the biomes, use some additional machines and the force to get the planet's core back to a normal molten state with a normal magnetic field and all the associated normal planetary things.

in the process of all this they'll have built most of the necessary tools for building a planet from scratch, so theoretically they can go off and do that if they need to...
Biosphere is toast. It'd basically be terraforming a dead rock from scratch.
Star Wars probably has the conventional (non-Force) tech to eventually pull it off, but it definitely wouldn't be a quick process, and would be a major investment in time and resources. Like, I'm pretty sure building both Death Stars would be orders of magnitude less expensive.
Force tech is utter bullshit and the various precursor empires probably had the capability with Forcetech.
Pure Force power use might be able to speed things along a little, but while size matters not (to an extent) ... it'd still be a massive undertaking.

At least, with respect to Legends.


Just imagine that, blow up Alderaan and suddenly not able to enter hyperspace for who knows how long.
Not quite that bad. After all, the Millennium Falcon didn't have any issues arriving or escaping to Yavin Four, and the Death Star wasn't that far behind them.
 
Not quite that bad. After all, the Millennium Falcon didn't have any issues arriving or escaping to Yavin Four, and the Death Star wasn't that far behind them.
I figure that's because the mass signal of the planet was still more-or-less where it was expected as the fragments wouldn't have had much time to spread out (even if some were moving at hypersonic speeds space is big) before then. It's a year or ten later that the effects would really kick in. Like why is that moon over there and where did this asteroid field come from?
 
I figure that's because the mass signal of the planet was still more-or-less where it was expected as the fragments wouldn't have had much time to spread out (even if some were moving at hypersonic speeds space is big) before then. It's a year or ten later that the effects would really kick in. Like why is that moon over there and where did this asteroid field come from?
There's also the whole "coming out of hyperspace where you thought you'd be in a nice safe spot to move into orbit" turning out to be "ah crap! Emergency dodge where did these asteroids in my face come from!?!?" - bigger ships and less skilled pilots would not be able to handle that as well as the Falcon did at any of the multiple places it had to deal with that.
 
Star Wars - The Sects
"This war you wish the Jedi to fight," Yoda said, looking over the Senate. "On Jedi terms we will fight. The clones we will not lead."

He turned and left the chambers, ignoring the protestations. The clone army had supposedly been commissioned by a dead man, and updates from said dead man had continued well after the man's confirmed death. It could not be trusted, but the Jedi had no need for the army.

Instead, he made his way back to the Temple. The High Council had many secrets, and one of them was that there was no such thing as a single Jedi sect. Anyone paying attention should realize that, given that Corellia's Temple did not answer to Coruscant's Temple. But Coruscant's Temple existed not only to pacify the Senate, but also to warn the other sects of situations such as this. Even he did not know how many sects existed, since by the will of the Force they did not keep records on each other, but the last rough estimate put the number of Jedi across the galaxy in the double-digit millions.

Pity that the Senate thought that all Jedi advertised themselves as such, but they were about to learn otherwise.

It took half an hour to make it into the vaults, revealing the Force Communicator kept there. Activating it off-schedule at all would be cause for alarm, as normally it was used for twice-yearly updates. The timer on it warned him that it was not time for a standard update, and he bypassed it. Only a few other sects generally reported back, and they would not have anyone available to speak with immediately, but a message would be left for all that wished to listen.

Sith had returned to start another war, and the Jedi would not sit by idle.



The first sign of war for most of the galaxy was not a clash between the Republic's new clone army and the Separatist's droid army, but instead the sudden movement of large ships from across the galaxy. An army that dwarfed the combined Republic and Separatist armies had come together, seemingly out of nowhere, all bearing the freshly-painted symbols of the old Jedi Lords. Those who were even slightly Force sensitive felt the combined meditation of a million or more Jedi warriors tearing apart all attempts by the Dark Side to hide the Sith, and then the army moved.

To the shock of the Republic, half the army descended on Coruscant and took Supreme Chancellor Palpatine into custody, locked down the Senate, and left a team to start going through laws while the army went after blatant corruption in the Republic. The other half of the army crushed the droid armies and corrupt corporate interests, taking Dooku and others into custody.

Less than two hundred total deaths happened in the combat needed to take over as the citizens of the galaxy trembled in fear. Then the trials began, Palpatine revealed as a Sith with multiple apprentices, some of whom had their own apprentices. All of them refused to repent for one reason or another and ended up executed, though it was widely believed that Dooku had done so out of a desire to be punished for falling as he had. Centuries of corruption traced back to the Sith working to undermine the galaxy to take over, laws torn out and rewritten to be fair to the people and not simply those in power. Slavery, including that of the clone army, was outlawed under broader definitions and slavers across the Outer Rim were given the ultimatum to release their slaves or be crushed.

After the first three teams of Mandalorian Jedi dropped on Hutts that refused, the rest of the Outer Rim decided that perhaps slavery was an outdated concept after all.

The Jedi Lords remained in power for a single galactic year, restructuring the galaxy to strip out the Dark Side taint. New elections were held on all planets in the expanded Republic, the new Senators vetted by the Jedi Lords as at least intending to work towards the betterment of the people, and then they handed control back to the Senate and dispersed again. Some paying attention would note that all of the ships the Jedi Lords had used still existed, the new paint stripped off to reveal the older symbols of various 'mercenary' and 'relief' groups across the galaxy. Most would miss that entirely, but the Jedi Lords would become the boogeymen of the underworld. Out there, somewhere, unseen until needed...
 
Hahhahha oh my gods this is hilarious as hell and makes way too much sense instead of the Ruusian reformation crap.
The Ruusan Reformations that hobbled the Jedi only came to exist because most of the Jedi leadership who would and could have publically and politically opposed it had died fighting or to the Thought Bomb that wiped out just about everybody on Ruusan.
Which left the ivory tower isolationists as the most numerous and most senior Jedi in charge.

Even that could have been ... mitigated if they hadn't also implemented the Atrisian Heresies as standard practice.
 
Yeah I agree. I did read the Darth Bane books which did cover the final days of the New sith wars. People were exhausted at the end of it with so much lost knowledge and technology. It does make sense at the time with people and Jedi who were afraid of Jedi lords remnants breaking the Republic by not agreeing with this.
 
love it. its like the combined version of "dont make me come over there" and the proverble someones touched Dads thermostat and made him leave his chair.
 
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