Cast in Gold - Evangelion/Exalted

Not sure if SEELE wants to take over the facillity and initiate 3rd Impact when they think the time is right, or cripple/destroy it right then, and end the world as soon as possible.

Whatever the plan, I figure Shinji and the changes he's induced in thise around him, and especially the pilots, are going throw some damn big wrenches in SEELE's current "scenario". Not too mention what Kaworu might do, if he finds there might be something else he can do besides aquiescing to his fate.
They might not mean to move immediately. An 'inspection' like this gives them ample opportunity to leave traps and backdoors for later activation.

And Kaworu has almost always been about fighting his fate. He's the Angel of Free Will, even if most of the time the only free choice he can make is to refuse to play the game SEELE demands of him. His choice is usually to 'throw the game', both because he wants Shinji/humanity to live, and because it is the only way he can say to SEELE 'No. I am not your puppet. I choose.'
 
Well, if it is "just" an inspection/casing of the joint, I feel the inspectors are a bit "overbuilt" for the task. Sending cyborgized agents (all of the inspectors are augmented, if I rmember) may ostensibly be "nothing unusual", but the subtext would at the least seem to be- we don't trust you to allow us access, so we're sending muscle that can bodily remove any obstacle in its way, or, ho ho, you have to let our assault team into your base, because they all have nice name tags stating, "Hi I'm a UN Inspector! Really!"

Or a mixture of those and similar messages. If they are just scouting/inspecting, the UN has just given them a chance to gather intelligence on possible future enemy combatants.

On a different level, now that NERV Tokyo appears to have detected another Exaltation, and the survival of Misato's task force against a Mass Production Eva, Rei's continued development, and Asuka's return to health, it would seem to me that it's about time to flip the table, and allow SEELE and Gendo to realise that their rwspective scenarios are FUBAR, SNAFU, Charlie Foxtrot, etc. This "Inspection" is likely the catalyst to start the fireworks.
 
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Chapter 39 Post 3
I felt like giving you all a big treat on Sunday. Something nice to close out the weekend.

* * *

Watching the girls leave, that left Shinji with the new pilot, one Nagisa Kaworu. Like a lot of people, Shinji found himself looking at angles toward the other boy, most of them downward. Shinji frowned inwardly, feeling the proximity of the cages to The Commander's office like an oppressive force. The old man had not stirred from his command in all the hours Shinji had spent in the Geofront, but on hectic days like this it was impossible to avoid the looming presence he held nearby.

"C'mon," He waved for Nagisa to follow. "Aside from being big and important, the cages aren't very interesting unless we're deploying. I think you're assigned to Unit-04, so I can at least show you that."

Nagisa just gave him a bemused look and nodded. "By all means, lead the way, Ikari-san."

Shinji let out a wry little snort and shook his head. "Shouldn't I be calling you Nagisa-san? You look older than me, at least."

"Perhaps, but I suppose it's not that important." Nagisa ran a hand through his hair and let out a little laugh, like he was remembering a private joke. "I'm not sure what I was expecting, but certainly none of this."

The white-haired boy waved his hand in the direction that Misato and the others had gone, and Shinji tried to stifle the smirk They were something of a dominating presence, even if Rei hardly ever said anything. Her stares tended to speak volumes. Focusing back on Nagisa in the present, Shinji really did believe the other teen was older than him. Nagisa carried himself more like... a professional almost, assured of everything and easily following routine. Oddly enough, the new pilot still seemed surprised and bemused despite that overall confidence.

In any case, Shinji filed it away for later. Leading him through the cages to bay four where the gunmetal grey Evangelion waited took no time at all, and Nagisa gave it a cursory look, smirking. "It will have to do, I imagine. I've never ridden in a real one before, just simulators."

"Better than my first day here," Shinji laughed while heading for the door, more at the fact that he was reminiscing about that day than anything else. He did catch Nagisa perking up however. "The first Angel attack was my first day here, and I was out and sortied within an hour of seeing my Eva for the first time."

"And without a whit of training, you sallied forth and saved the day." Nagisa gave him a surprisingly winsome grin at that, one that made his eyes crinkle.

To that Shinji could only shrug. "Something like that."

Left without much to do before his Specialist demonstration later that afternoon, Shinji decided to extend the tour of the upper cage levels. The Commander had the most secure position in all the Geofront aside from the underground, and he had the best view along with it. The rest of the cages weren't built for creature comforts, but there had been a few interesting places squirreled away.

Pushing out onto a tiny observation deck barely five meters across, Shinji pointed down, and was more than a little amused at Nagisa reaction. Walking out onto a glass floor tended to have that kind of effect on people.

Below them, the earth and forest of the Geofront interior stretched out as far as they could see. The interlocking pyramid structure of Central Dogma was just a bit off center of the fortress city above, and the subterranean lake stretched out flat and placid- there was no wind inside the complex, despite the building sized airflow system that ensured the people could survive a mile below the surface.

Nagisa found a bench to sit on, after he got his bearings. Leaning against another wall, Shinji took a moment to check for what Rei had hinted earlier. The decision to do so had almost been a reflex- even without Rei's prompting Shinji probably would have made an examination and built the pilot's medical file in his head before Ritsuko scheduled time in the infirmary. As far as his techniques went, the fast and easy diagnosis was too efficient to not use... Shinji just made sure not to say anything, if he could help it. He'd been metaphorically hands-off with Sorhyu due to their argument back before she left with the fleet.

Regarding the new pilot, the coloration was the biggest clue and the easiest to read- Nagisa had the same grafted root and branch physiology as Rei. The UN hadn't just sent a new pilot, they'd given them a new hybrid.

Granted, Shinji really had no idea what to do about that, because he was sure Rei would tell Misato, and he was absolutely certain the Commanders knew, and probably Ritsuko. It was wrong to say that Nagisa wasn't his problem, just more that things weren't what they seemed. Shinji believed he had put enough on his plate anyway, all by himself.

A flock of birds swung underneath the observatory deck, and Nagisa grinned before looking back up. "I think the thing that surprises me most today is how happy everyone seems. It's such a refreshing change of pace."

"I have my friends to thank for that," Shinji sighed, smiling himself. "Every day I find myself liking NERV a little bit more, aside from a few unfortunate elements. I've had a surprising amount of good times in the Geofront, along with the bad."

"It shows, Ikari-san. I admit what with the inspection, I find myself at loose ends." Nagisa stood up and shrugged before sticking his hands in his pockets, smiling faintly. "I suppose I'll find a way to entertain myself somehow."

Shinji nodded at that and watched the new pilot go. As he left, Kaworu started humming, and it took Shinji a moment to place the tune.

It was the opening bars to Beethoven's Ode to Joy.

* * *

All of Central Dogma was on edge, once the inspection team entered the Geofront. To Hyuuga, Maya and Aoba, it was looking like a full time job keeping everyone calm and in their seats. Maybe one out of every twenty people in the main commander center had government training, let alone military experience, so they dealt with the sudden pressure of oversight as best they could.

Then four people in ill-fitting suits swept into the command level and made for the MAGI access level. Maya shot upright and clamped metaphorical hands around her lieutenants' bars before calling down. "This is a restricted area! Gentlemen, ladies- I'm going to have to ask you to cease and desist!"

From below, two of the newcomers looked up, a man and woman in dark wraparound sunglasses. Even looking down from the higher level, Maya could see how thin their necks and wrists were, unsettlingly so. They headed for the stairs while reaching smoothly into their breast pockets, pulling out leather sleeves for their ID cards, both NERV's issued that day and the United Nation Security Council credentials.

Maya swallowed thickly but stood up straighter, aiming to hold her ground. Aoba and Hyuuga moved from their consoles to flank her while she stared the two inspectors down. "Forgive me, inspectors, but my earlier order stands. MAGI access is restricted and a matter of NERV security and comprehensive operation."

The woman pulled out a sealed folder from her briefcase and thrust into Maya's hands hard enough to make her take a step back. Stumbling, she felt her shoulders thump solidly into the two men behind her. Breaking the tape around the edge with one fingernail, she stared at the authenticated orders, ratified by UN oversight.

"'MAGI system zero-one must undergo full audit pending local review of UN Security Council'?" Maya echoed the orders once out loud and twice in her head before she summoned up the best glare her brown eyes could offer.

Judging by the lack of reaction, it wasn't much. The two inspectors looked at each other, then back at Maya, unreadable as statues. Even as Maya was trying to regain control of the situation- the MAGI and responsibility for them had been given to her- the massive holographic screens shifted, scattering into a prismatic signal-storm of interference before resolving as a percentage counter. A percentage counter that was rapidly ticking down.

"Inspectors," Maya intoned, making doubly sure to include a particularly curdling warning note she learned from Doctor Akagi. "I don't have to remind you of how important the MAGI system is for continued NERV operations and the security of the Geofront, as well as the deployment of the Evangelions! If your investigation disrupted combat operations-"

She left that painfully awful end hanging. One the one hand she admitted to laying it on thick, but at the same time, her voice carried across the command center, and every NERV officer and technician looked up from their station to her. She sucked in a quick, calming breath and stared the woman down. "Regardless, this should have been run through protocol and cleared weeks ago, not on the day of the inspection."

Again the inspectors exchanged a look, well hidden behind the mirrored shades. Finally, the woman spoke. "Unfortunately, that's your problem. We have a job to do here."

And that seemed to be that. Without any traction, Maya bit her tongue and spun on one heel, stalking back to her console. The two inspectors rejoined their fellows, and Maya felt more than a little like a bug that had been deemed too small to be worth squishing.

If they intended that or not, she couldn't say, but she was sure that their orders were subversive. Corporate NERV only controlled its budget, not it's connection to the rest of the world via the United Nations. Maya's fingers flew over her keyboard and quickly patched in a secure text terminal between Hyuuga and Aoba's consoles, it took up maybe a thousandth of a percent of the MAGI's systems.

IBUKI.M: This isn't right.
AOBA.S: I'm not disagreeing, but what can we do?
IBUKI.M: Hyuuga, can you alert Mjr.Katsuragi? Aoba, you and I will slow them down.
HYUUGA.M: Consider it done.
AOBA.S: Roger!

Below, the three massive cases that were the MAGI rose up on hydraulic jacks, allowing access to their long-sealed interiors. Maya shot an uneasy look at her fellow lieutenants. They didn't have much time.

* * *

The inspectors had been on site less than three hours, and things were already moving off schedule. Typical.

Ritsuko suppressed the sigh and reaffirmed her cool, professional face- there wasn't anything for it. The smaller team of inspectors lead by that man Giraud were at least patient, if overly curious. The second she ushered them into the display room for the results of her work in cybernetics and Shinji's various projects, they immediately shed most pretense of being government officials. They quickly browsed through the tables and shelves lined with prototypes and descriptive placards.

Perhaps not unsurprisingly, the four full-body cyborgs were interested in the obviously superior technology NERV was preparing to put out onto the market. She had no idea if their physiotherapy and conditioning could allow for an upgrade though. Hot-swapping limbs was a far off dream for the most part. While the inspectors... inspected, Ritsuko spun slowly, remembering what the particular lab space looked like before.

A week ago, it had been her primary lab for research into Shinji and the pattern green phenomenon, the switchover to showroom was mostly a concession to security, as it was the only lab in Central Dogma with a full and up-to-spec suite. Now, it was full of the work of the most brilliant men and women in NERV. Shinji's finally completed advanced MRI sat in one corner, not much bigger than a contemporary model, but Ritsuko knew it was infinitely superior.

Other tables had examples of pure electro-material engineering, muscle-cable bundles, nerve grafts and examples of 'hard' physical augmentation. Other walls had tanks of bubbling suspension where electrodes and organic scaffolding built up raw tissue for later grafting, or whole organs. It wasn't anything like Shinji's personal techniques, but he hadn't the slightest idea of how to condense that into any kind of system or technology.

Giraud had picked up a prototype replacement arm, watching it flop around unpowered. Pulling up his sleeve, Ritsuko saw for the first time that they were all just cloth and bones, plastic and alloy. She tried not to shiver at the thought of missing all that flesh- the feedback and phantom limb they all must have suffered. Her own arm tingled just past the shoulder.

Steeling herself, Ritsuko moved up next to the leader and two of his three underlings, one of which was scribbling on a clipboard. "Inspectors."

They looked up with a smooth sort of surprise, like their bodies couldn't quite jerk the same way muscle and tendon could. Ritsuko tried not to react. "Forgive me if this seems somewhat ad-hoc, it's not the most well thought out display of our efforts I admit. Do you have any questions?"

Giraud shook his head, putting the arm aside. "Not particularly, though I am impressed, and more than a little envious. My prosthetics are all a few years old now."

He waved his bare arm for emphasis- aside from the fake skin covering his hands, it tapered down to a thin, cone-shaped wrist toward the cylindrical central forearm. It was certainly functional.

Ritsuko nodded, and gave him something of a sympathetic smile. "Unfortunately NERV wasn't in the business, nor were we really able to do much better back then." She waved her arm at the various displays. "Most of this is all relatively recent vintage from our special research division, and some of my pet projects. The Evangelions take up most of my time."

"Understandable. Francois!" The largest inspector snapped, staring over Ritsuko's shoulder.

Turning, the scientist wondered what was wrong. The fourth inspector froze like he'd had his fingers in the cookie jar. Standing at the opposite side of the lab with something in his hand, Francois gave Giraud an apologetic shrug. Ritsuko squinted past her glasses, then her eyes shot open wide.

In his hand was a small cylinder, about the size of a soda can with armored shutters that one could twist closed. Inside were four crystal windows, and a single point of softly glowing golden light.

* * *

Six holographic screens filled the air in front of the Commander's desk, flicking through various camera feeds throughout the Geofront. The inspection team had split, deviated from their established itinerary and schedule, and now NERV was if not scrambling, then moving at a brisk pace to catch up. Gendo tapped the conductive glass of his desk and banished the text interface Lieutenant Ibuki had created, all too aware of what the inspectors were up to.

Things were not going to plan, and yet things were also going exactly to plan. It was one of those kind of days.

Keeping time by the sound of his watch, Gendo counted the paces of the four inspectors heading toward his office. The Evangelion cages were huge voids with human-scale hallways and tiny labs wedged in between the massive vaults and hidden systems. The inspectors circumnavigated the altered floor plan as if it had always been that way, and that spoke to their efficiency and the exact plan they had been sent to execute. Regarding the old men and their plans, Fuyutsuki had predicted most of it, leveraging his stronger connection to the Committee.

Glancing back down at the now blank desk, Gendo marked off one of the Committee's objectives as being prosecuted right that moment- the total audit and examination of the primary MAGI system. If NERV's luck held, the inspectors wouldn't wipe the system and force Akagi to start from scratch. If it didn't hold, the inspectors would very much erase everything and reset the MAGI to it's infantile primary state, requiring it to spend another sixteen years learning how to think. In either case, Gendo fully expected the inspectors to leave some kind of malicious code behind...

Regardless, there were other matters to attend to. The security feed showed the inspectors a good six minutes away from his door at their current speed- more than enough time. Reaching into his desk, he checked that his sidearm was ready. As for the roving inspectors, they didn't speak, or even use hand signals to decide which way to turn at an intersection... Considering their connection to the MAGI, it was likely they were shielding their sub-vocal communications. Physical access was essentially total access, even in NERV.

Tapping another invisible key on his desk, Gendo sighed. "Fuyutsuki."

Behind in a secure and armored safe room, the old professor answered back through the intercom. "Ikari-kun"

Five minutes til the inspectors arrived... "Are you prepared, Fuyutsuki?"

"If it proves necessary, I am ready, Ikari-kun." Gendo could hear the loud, empathetic sound of a round being chambered in a combat shotgun.

Trust was not a word Ikari Gendo used lightly, or even maintained in his personal vocabulary, but having that man with that sound at his back was reassuring in a way that no amount of planning and intelligence could match. He trusted that man with his life- not the Scenario, not NERV, but most assuredly his life.

Now the question was how to defuse the situation, and turn it to his advantage. Three minutes to arrival. Gendo banished three of the camera screens and reset two others to dossiers on the incoming inspectors. Their cover was a mix of former special operations and actual UN service, all twelve were the inspectors, or had taken over their identities so seamlessly it was pointless to make a distinction. Bribery would fail, as would threats, as Gendo could not match what SEELE could offer or what these men and women had already experienced.

If they came in open-handed, perhaps aware of and interested in the new regenerative 'techniques' available to NERV, he might have a lever, but it was risky. Not for the boy's sake, but to make the offer too soon or on a poor assumption. Gendo considered an ideological approach, but discarded it almost as quickly he thought of it. There was no silver truth to shake them from their loyalty, Not in the span of a single visit at least. It was unlikely that they were aware of the plan for Human Instrumentality, or would be willing to believe their primary handlers and heads of state were involved.

Closing the two dossier windows, Gendo watched the team approach the final hallway to his office, bypassing the never-stationed secretaries desk outside his door. He laced his fingers together and planted his elbows on the table just as the door began to glide open.

The man in front was familiar, and the suit was just as ill-fitting as Gendo remembered. Anton Moreau, a tall man from southern France with a long stint in military service- even before the full body prosthetics. He'd met the inspector before, nearly a decade go when the Geofront was first opened to outside observers.

To someone raised in the deferential culture of Japan and China, one was expected to stand as far away from the lord as possible. The feudal rulers had the luxury and security of a hugely expanded bubble of personal space, closely connected with the idea of preventing those who sought audience with the court from rushing down their masters. Gendo had not designed or arranged his office to evoke that, but for the past fifteen years, he had exploited it ruthlessly.

Moreau and his three fellow inspectors marched the twenty meters across the polished glass floor, moving from door to desk and stopping at the edge. They forced Gendo to break his poise, ensuring he had to lean back and look up. He was sure to let them see how utterly unimpressed he was.

"Commander Ikari." He began in accented English. Holding his hand out, Moreau waited for a folder to be placed there as if by magic. "I'm sure you can guess as to the contents of this message."

Gendo did not so much as grunt. Instead he matched the patsy in the same language. "Reminders of the leverage the Committee holds over myself and NERV, despite the success of my corporate strategy. They would go on to say that the leverage I have on them would be neutralized utterly, leaving me completely at their mercy."

Moreau nodded, holding a finger to his ear while he tossed the folder on the desk. His face had gone placidly neutral, unnaturally so. "I expected nothing less. Above my pay grade so to speak. Nothing personal of course."

"Of course." Gendo pulled the folder open but didn't take his eyes away from Moreau and his cohorts. Two men and a woman rounded out the little group. "How is the Minister of Finance?"

The four bristled despite themselves, though Moreau's face didn't move at all, even when he spoke. "You are well informed... Though I suppose we had that coming. I admit I was expecting more- no security, tricks or deflections? We walked in the front door of your little empire and here you are, waiting for us to hand you the leash."

Gendo nodded, but not in confirmation, more that he now had their number. Leaning back in his seat, he let his hands rest across his stomach, deciding to share how unconcerned he truly was. "In the future, it would be advisable not to confuse restraint with respect."

* * *

For all the vexation Kihl Lorenz endured in his life, there were a few things yet that brought a brief mote of contentment to his worn, ragged soul. One of those was summer. It did wonders for his circulation. His wheelchair and mobile life support was thickly integrated into his spine and back. In a very real sense, he carried an entire hospital room with him.

Even as a gaijin, a cybernetic one or not, the people who filled the surface streets of the city were simply too busy to spare him the barest glance. He eschewed the normal protective detail for similar reasons.Today, obscurity was his best defense. None of them probably even recognized him as a foreign minister and political cabinet member of another country. Not that it was surprising- he had helped Ikari design the city's news and information policy.

Puttering along surprisingly like the old man he was, he was invisible to most of the pedestrian foot traffic of Tokyo-3.

It was not difficult to navigate the sidewalks and make his way to one of the uncountable entrances to the Geofront, and the attache case clipped to his chair held all the necessary documents. The armed guards at the gate were not a surprise nor an issue.

Coughing, Kihl raised an arthritic hand and spoke flawless Japanese. "Good afternoon. I am eager to begin."

One of the guards blinked before glancing at his partner. "Begin what?"

Now it was Kihl's turn to blink. "I am the inspector dispatched on behalf of the United Nations, evaluating NERV's new internal and external policies?"

Slowly, the guards nodded. One in the nearby guardhouse began to call down for something, and the dialogue was too fast and one-sided for Kihl to pick up more than a word or two. It was becoming increasingly obvious though that something was wrong. More NERV personnel began to filter outside, wary but not hostile. They leafed through his documents and verified his story, backed by the very real authority he'd borrowed from the UN Security Council. There were less than ten people in the city who could recognize him by sight.

Finally, a black-suited Section 2 agent materialized out of some hidden alcove, holding a hand to their earpiece. "Apologies, inspector, but we were only expecting one group today. We'll be happy to escort you inside, however."

As Kihl was being wheeled inside, he realized with absolute certainty that things had gone very, very wrong.

* * *
 
Huh, untrustworthy conspiracy of shadowy players is untrustworthy. Who knew?


So, presuming no additional divisions among Team Obvious, I'm counting at least six separate motivations and factions who have them actively in play, maybe as many as twelve. Otherwise it could be 24 or more depending on who is acting out someone else's agenda under the mistaken impression they are working towards their own
 
I think you meant 'emphatic' here, unless that's a very odd shotgun...
Considering its been in the same zip code as the epicenter of all the Glorious Solar Bullshit anythings possible.

EDIT: I have to admit to this as well; if the shotgun is somehow empathetic, How has no one in Tokyo 3 not become a Dragon Blooded or something else. And then the obvious conclucion is Sidereal Rei. :TinfoilHat:
 
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Okay, that's interesting... Kihl seems to have bet too much on his obscurity, I guess? So, the game being played is the "Inspectors" are telling Gendo they can screw up the MAGI, tell the UN that NERV is a rogue organization, and not incidentally, threaten Gendo physically directly, and Gendo is telling the bunch in front of him that a certain frail old man might have an accident/medical emergency, going off on his own like that.

I'm guessing the guy holding the "Mote" or whatever the golden spark thing in the container is going to do something inadvertently (or advertently) that is going to kick this whole circus off?

'Cause, yeah, I'm getting mexican stand-off vibes here, and I'm waiting for someone to sneeze or blink.

Of course, it may not yet be time for things to go FUBAR, it would be funny to see Kaworu having to deal with the Grrrl Squad some more.
 
Of course, it may not yet be time for Glorious Solar Bullshit Interrupt, it would be funny to see Kaworu having to deal with the Grrrl Squad some more.
You guys gotta get things right :facepalm: There is no such thing as FUBAR only the glorios rays of the sun shining and bleaching everything of color. You have to remember that no matter what happens, its going to be good. And funny when Kihl possibly trips and breaks his hip and is sent home without Glorious Solar Healing being done.
 
Considering its been in the same zip code as the epicenter of all the Glorious Solar Bullshit anythings possible.

EDIT: I have to admit to this as well; if the shotgun is somehow empathetic, How has no one in Tokyo 3 not become a Dragon Blooded or something else. And then the obvious conclucion is Sidereal Rei. :TinfoilHat:

Noooo~! The obvious conclusion is 'Nobody has blood of the Dragons flowing in their veins'.
 
So, Kihl decided to pose as an inspector, but the UN sent a normal inspection team in his stead. So who are the inspectors working for? Someone else in SEELE? And what was Kihl planning to do that he couldn't have a minion do for him? I really don't remember how the conspiracy worked in canon.

Is it possible that the inspection team is just a normal group of inspectors doing their jobs and Kihl's plan was foiled by bureaucracy?
 
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After the fact, she realized she remembered every little detail preceding the event, and those following it once her senses cleared. The way the one inspector held the container in his hands, watching the contents bob and dance inside its crystal harness. She remembered how Giraud dashed across the lab space far too quickly for a regular person, not-quite shouting for the other man to put that thing down you don't know what it is!

Ritsuko didn't know what it was either. No one did, not even Shinji.

She also did not have the tools or instruments needed to measure exactly how much energy was contained in that glowing point of light. Much later, after examining the aftermath, she would learn.

The inspector broke the seal and unleashed a burst of raw potential. It rapidly transformed into an undirected shockwave of light, warmth and concussive force, equivalent to roughly one tenth of the atomic bomb dropped on Hiroshima, more than half a century ago.

Every window, monitor, door and vent in the laboratory block exploded.

* * *

The office floor polarized in an instant, fighting against the all-encompassing flash of light. The sudden flare completely eclipsed Central Dogma, Something from far below made the glass floor of his office hum, like someone was playing a wet-rimmed wineglass. Gendo even felt his glasses vibrate, resonating faintly with whatever had happened below.

Moreau held a two fingers to his temple, as did his three cohorts. He let out an exasperated sigh that did nothing to change his frozen expression, letting his arms fall along with his shoulders. "It looks like there's been a complication. Nothing personal, you understand?"

The inspector reached into his jacket, and that was when Gendo hit the panic button on his desk. Fuyutsuki followed the call, charging through the safe room door with a combat shotgun braced against his shoulder, finger on the trigger.

* * *

After the ringing in her ears, the only thing Ritsuko could focus on was that movies were lying liars that lied. She knew better, in her head, but some small Misato-esque part of her railed at the indignity that a giant explosion was ugly, uncomfortable, and painful. It didn't even have the decency to kill her and be done with it.

Instead, her glasses were ruined and she felt her skin being caked with dust from the ceiling tiles, the wall panels had all burst from their mountings, and nearly every table and console in the converted showroom had been tossed away from the blast. She survived, if one were charitable, by apparently being behind one of those aforementioned consoles. She coughed harder and clamped a hand to her mouth, tasting the grit and wishing she hadn't.

Blearily, she tried to stand, dimly aware that her stockings had been shredded by the blast. Shredded and bleached white. So had the rest of her- and every other bit of the lab- not one surface no matter how hidden escaped the scouring light, it bounced and burned and scoured everything to it's utmost. Ritsuko stared at her bare hand, utterly befuddled by the dark Okinawa tan. Frowning, Ritsuko dredged from her mind the countless experiments she and Shinji conducted over the past year.

Every surface detail was lost in the sea of pale tones. As her eyes adjusted, Ritsuko started picking out shadows through the billowing clouds of dust and worse. The inspectors couldn't cough- their lungs were aesthetic at best. Obviously whatever had been in her container inherited the same traits as Shinji's coronal display- otherwise she would have been flash-dried to the bone under that much concentrated sunlight. She was surprised the fire systems hadn't gone off.

Then by some cosmic mandate, the finally did, valves winding open and showers drenching everything.

That was when the dust cleared, and Ritsuko found something near enough to lean on. Movement out the corner of her eye made her wipe wet hair aside to get a good look. One of the inspectors was sprawled out against a pile of mangled tables, his suit a tattered, desert-bleached mess.

And the spiked, over-engineered limbs cuddled against his chest were not quality-of-life prosthetics. His head jerked and those lethal arms unfurled like leaves.

The glue and stitching in her low heels had given up seconds ago, and Ritsuko found herself stepping out of ruined footwear onto wet paved floor. Her head whipped around, hearing the whirr of a pump sucking in a simulated lungful of air, or the hiss and whine of servos and pneumatic muscles. Two more of the inspectors stood up, their faces ruined by sun exposure and flaking away like burnt makeup. Her eyes flicked down to the red-edged blades clipped to their thin mechanical torso, confirming her earlier prognosis.

Ritsuko ran, beating a line of splashes into the floor as the inspectors shared a faceless look and charged after her. The slipped and spun, tripping over debris or their own eroding crew shoes. She barreled out of the lab and slammed into the opposite wall before pushing off, feeling her heart pumping so hard it might burst. A massive shape slammed into the where she'd just been, someone so big it could have only been Giraud.

Adrenaline mixed with an icy clarity as Ritsuko's legs pumped for her one chance at victory. If she never ran that fast again in her life, she'd be content- if she survived she'd let Sorhyu put her through daily drills, if only to make her burning lungs hurt less. Charging through the narrow hall with a cyborg hot on her heels, Ritsuko swore she'd give up smoking, if she could just make it another twenty feet intact.

Rounding the last corner, Ritsuko juked left then right on some long forgotten playground instinct, sending her pursuer stumbling and moving just that one second slower. She slipped, skidding forward across the floor on wet clothes before tumbling inside the small room lined with monitors and a wired cage. Outside and down the hall, Giraud stood smoothly. Now she could see him properly.

As a man he was six feet tall. As a machine clad in the scraps of a suit and tie, he was closer to eight, unfurled carbon-fiber bows of muscle-springs. He was the first and best display of combat cybernetics in the world, and he was stalking right towards her. A purposeful hand reached up to loosen the remnants of his tie, an all-too-human gesture like some overworked company man, before snapping it cleanly from around his mechanical neck. It had not even touched the floor before he brought up his knees and started to run, stomping the floor so hard she felt each impact shoot into her thighs from where she sat.

Ritsuko reached up and slammed the emergency alert button, slamming the armored door closed and locking herself in the security room. The inspector slammed into the barrier and bent the frame- it wouldn't open again without being cut apart.

Pushing her hair out of her face, Ritsuko stood up on shaky feet and stumbled over to the security station. Her fingers etched an easy command into the keyboard, running more on autopilot than anything. She licked her lips and leaned down to the nearby microphone. "Attention Geofront- this is Akagi Ritsuko- We are under attack."

She repeated the message and slumped back into the seat, then Ritsuko brought her knees up to her chin and hugged her shins. That was about when she decided it was time for a good cry.

* * *

Moreau moved, and Fuyutsuki squeezed the trigger.

A booming cough of fire and the smell of cordite flooded the office. From the shotgun barrel came a spread of buckshot that pelted the incoming inspector, riddling his suit with holes and punching out the back to speckle his companions. Muted taps and metalic tones followed as the shots bounced off hardened organ cases and armor. Gendo whirled, slamming a gloved hand on his desk and demanding the drawer spring open. His pistol was there waiting for him, and he dragged it out and readied it in an instant.

Squeezing off two shots, he missed Moreau but clipped one of the other attackers in the neck, crumpling a strut and forcing the man's head to cant at an awkward angle. For all of that though, it was too little and too late. Moreau vaulted Gendo's desk and lashed out with one disguised hand, striking Gendo's right wrist so hard it folded around the blow. Fuyutsuki turned and aimed down the sights, roaring even as Gendo reeled away from Moreau and cradled his broken arm.

That was when the far wall and door exploded, and Ikari Shinji tackled two of the hostile inspectors from behind.

Gendo and Fuyutsuki stumbled back as the Third Child stepped away from the point of impact, leaving them crumpled against the Commander's desk. The boy turned to glance at Moreau and the other inspector, waiting. The hot pain in Gendo's arm was a distant concern, compared to the glowing gold brand that hovered over the boy's brow.

Moreau and the other inspector-soldier leapt to either side, flanking the pilot. They circled him, arms raised and intent, and while Moreau's face was utterly impassive, his cohort's face spoke volumes. Gendo grit his teeth and forced his heartbeat to slow with a sheer act of will- there was no room for mistakes anymore.

Shinji for his part became the anchor and center of the wary invaders, and his eyes flicked from side to side. By some unspoken signal, Moreau and his second surged forward, hugging the floor. The unnamed one went high while Moreau planted his hands and whipped himself around from the back and shoulders, throwing all his weight into his leading legs, aiming to transect with the boy's shin.

The cyborg's lunging sweep would have broken a man's thigh and crippled him for life. It slammed into Shinji's waiting limb with a bone-jarring crack. A spiderweb of fractures raced out from beneath the boy's feet across the floor, but the pilot himself had not moved. In that same instant, Gendo watched Shinji not quite pluck the other attacker out of the air and toss him over his shoulder and past the lead inspector. Moreau's frozen face betrayed nothing, but he slid back toward his ally with an oily, inhuman motion.

Shoving against the desk, the male and female cyborgs righted themselves despite the labored whine of their joints. They wrenched their kinked spines back into place, and one of them spilt a hail of wasted buckshot from the folds of their jacket. Blurring into motion they charged for Shinji while Moreau and his fellow recovered. There was an interplay that Gendo could see, where both sides evaluated each other even as they lashed out.

The boy raised his hand, knife-edged and meeting an incoming strike with the heel of his palm. A knee or elbow shifted, slamming into incoming attacks hard enough to fold joints on their weakest points, draining them of needed momentum. Every move Shinji made proclaimed genius at this art. Objectively, Gendo had known this, but now less than ten feet away, he truly saw it first hand. Blows that would have pulped tissue and shattered bone were turned aside. He rapidly matched them to lines in reports and hours of archive footage.

It was then that Gendo was given the proof that the boy was not just a master of unarmed combat, but a monster. The earlier exchanges had evidently given the boy the measure of his opponents. Shinji moved with a pankrator's efficiency, his arms raised and snaking around the nearest inspector and digging into strut and synthetic muscle. Gendo could tell the inspectors had come prepared to deal with bullets and little else. He did not disbelieve, but not even the pain of his broken wrist could make him misunderstand what he had just seen.

In the face of twenty years of material science and the Committee's bottomless coffers, Shinji's fingers left gaping rents in cloth, plastic and alloy.

Dropping his opponent at his feet, mangled into helplessness, the boy turned to stare the remaining invaders down. There was certainty in those eyes, and a commitment to something that transcended filial piety or crippled loyalty to some greater whole. The boy was there, present entirely in the moment with that arcane brand glowing on his brow, better and more true than any hologram Gendo had ever seen. There was a dire overestimation.

The boy was long gone, transformed into something else- something more than human. Gendo felt his heart pound in his chest, making the broken bones throb with each beat. There was no reason for boy to be there, surrounded on three sides by SEELE cyborg commandos. No reason save for whatever value he invested in the act.

Shinji defended NERV, and Gendo saw him cast off the last of the controls in that same action.

Fuyutsuki pressed his back against the desk, reaching out to tug Gendo down with him. "He's always taken after his mother, hasn't he."

Right at that moment, Gendo began to truly reevaluate his plans.

Then three attackers shared an unreadable look. Moreau's was inscrutable twice over. As one, they moved to abort, jumping for the gaping hole in the wall Shinji had made coming in. The boy though was faster. Gendo saw it unfold in utter clarity, despite the fact that it took a mere handful of seconds. Shinji raced forward, catching one of the inspectors by the ankle and pulling. The boy curled, spinning once and drawing the cyborg up and into an improvised bludgeon that caught Moreau and the machine-woman around the middle. They were flung bodily into the wall, throwing up plumes of dust and debris on impact.

Now Shinji stalked toward the pair of crumpled forms, dragging his living weapon along the glass floor. The cyborg in Shinji's hand struggled, kicking at the boy's wrist with spiked heels and bladed toes. As far as Gendo could see, it did little more than annoy. Riddled with growing pinpricks, Shinji roared and swung the man up over his head then down, slamming into the floor so hard the desk shook, some twenty feet away. The dust from the wrecked wall sprang up in new curling clouds. Then Shinji reared back and swung the man down again.

Fuyutsuki grabbed Gendo by the collar and pulled him back. That was when the Commander heard it. The sharp, percussive click and grind of glass shards.

On the third and final impact, the glass shattered, sending all four inspectors and Shinji free-falling more than a kilometer straight down.

* * *

The pyramid of Central Dogma was about a kilometer away, and some random bit of trivial fluttered through Shinji's mind. He'd stop accelerating around sixty meters per second, assuming he went spread eagle. Sorhyu had drilled him in Eva-scale aerial drop, which was somewhat similar to free-falling without a parachute. At the moment he was quickly picking up speed, and if he was right, he had about nineteen seconds before he slammed into the ground.

Shinji made a note right then to get violently sick after he landed, assuming he survived. He had bigger problems at the moment.

The air whipped at his shirt and pants, tugging his hair back hard enough to not-quite sting. Shards of glass surrounded him on all sides, some no bigger than his fingernail, others large enough to count as tables. Past them and getting further away by the second were all the retracted armory buildings and their maintenance cage- so far away as to be across the ocean. For all his skill and magic, Shinji couldn't fly.

A flash of black out the corner of his eye reminded him of the original problem. Three of the invading inspector-cyborgs had fallen along with him, and he watched them windmill, flailing their arms while their ill-fit suits caught the air like ragged leaves. One managed to orient himself and aim his hips towards one of the armory buildings. A muted puff of white gas and something sharp ripped through the coat from around the man's middle, trailing a rapidly uncoiling cable. The grapnel fell short, and it was reeled in almost too fast to see.

On some unspoken signal, the three inspectors changed their tactics. They ripped up parts of their jackets, revealing silk inserts and memory-alloy ribs, unfurling into serviceable wingsuits. Considering they didn't have things like skin, muscle or organs, Shinji figured they stuffed themselves full of other interesting things. They didn't have guns at least, or things would have happened a lot differently. There was a surprising calmness to the impending clash, something Shinji could feel coming seconds away even before the invaders banked hard, diving toward Shinji himself.

He had no traction on air, no way to apply his proper ground-fighting advantages. Kicking against the unresisting sky, Shinji had to wait, timing his actions at that critical moment. It felt so easy on some level, even moreso than dealing with Yakuza. There wasn't any rage, and his only fear was of the rapidly approaching ground. Instead, Shinji opened his hands and kept them ready, with the only thing he felt was a cool sense of rightness, of defending what he valued.

The first attacker swept in, holding their arms close and picking up speed. It was a diving tackle, depending entirely on the cybernetic frame and sheer velocity to land a strike. The bald man dove forward headfirst, plowing through a cloud of glass shards without pause. It was a target that got bigger and bigger in Shinji's eye, so big that he couldn't miss it. Except he did. Sheer bad luck sent him overbalanced and tumbling, letting the divebomb attack clip his legs hard enough to make his knee pop.

Tumbling and wasting a precious two seconds, Shinji clawed at the air, for something to hang on to, but there was nothing. The leader cut in next, spearing Shinji from behind with one alloy shoulder. Sent into a twisting spiral, Shinji flexed and kicked one last time. It was enough. He caught the third attacker by midsection with one limb and folded her up, doing more damage by the sudden deceleration than the strike. Her wingsuit frame exploded from the shearing stress, splitting apart and falling away in ruin. Scrambling around her half-broken body, Shinji willed himself upright, feeling the power flow out into the familiar centering stance.

Standing right-side up atop the falling inspector, Shinji jumped straight up, back into the cloud of falling floor glass.

Looking down, he watched the two mobile inspectors share an expressionless look before they turned and dove straight down, only to snap their wingsuits open again at the bottom of their arc. They rode the wind up, angling toward Shinji once more. Coiling up and pushing one foot down toward the nearest falling shard of glass, Shinji folded his hands and soul into a newer metaphysical arrangement.

When the two inspectors circled him, Shinji couldn't help but wonder what they thought of him standing upright in midair on something smaller than his toes.

Suddenly, the falling cloud of debris was a stairway to any number of interesting directions. Dashing up the shards, Shinji reached out to the nearest table-sized piece and punched, shattering it into vertical plume of glittering shards. Hiking along air with glass pebbles as hand and toeholds, Shinji ran toward the leader, Inspector Moreau. Halfway there, the bald cyborg with the grapnel darted in, crashing through Shinji's path of platforms and throwing his arms wide. The wingsuit canopy caught the air and pulled him alongside, forcing Shinji to backpedal and redirect. Moreau banked off toward the hanging railway, leaving Shinji to contend with the one left behind.

Standing and gliding respectively, Shinji squared off with the large man. Wind rushed past him, popping the buttons of his shirt off and pushing his hair vertical as he fell. The pilot-Exalt had about eight seconds before he hit the ground.

Folding one arm in, the cyborg cut and banked before diving forward, using his feet as control surfaces. This time, Shinji was ready. Standing astride two bits of glass no bigger than his palms, the Solar met the attack and caught the man in both arms. For a split second, the cyborg was stunned at the sudden shift in momentum and apparent gravity. It was enough. Shinji heaved the man up into the air and away before following, leaping into open air and slamming into the pinwheeling cyborg with both knees.

Metal and plastic groaned under the impact, and the pair tumbled for what felt like an eternity. Shinji saw the Geofront interior spin and blur into a mix of colors. Below, he saw a white and blue swatch appear next to a familiar pyramid, dripping with emergency alert lights. He could see men and women through the myriad windows, dashing through halls with weapons and asking for instructions. Then a pair of steel-boned hands clamped around Shinji's neck and squeezed.

Shinji's record for holding his breath was somewhere around three minutes, but he wasn't sure about arrested bloodflow. Flexing his inner reserve, he flared his corona to full, wreathed in wire-tracery arms and immaculate mandala. For a split second, the whole of the Geofront dome was tinted gold, and what remained of the cloud of glass in the air sparkled on its way down. Shinji's extra ghostly limbs reached up alongside his flesh and blood fingers, clamping around synthetic wrist bones to pull them from his throat, crushing them utterly. Simulacra-skin boiled and flaked away in the face of the burning sunfire, and the man's suit bleached to white.

At the end of their tumble, there was a moment of silence, and Shinji stared into the sensor strip that served as the man's actual eyes. A plume of icy gas bloomed between them, and Shinji felt something hard and hot drive its way into and through his ribs. He stared down at the harpoon that speared through his side. Then the hooks deployed. A ribbon of blood spouted out behind him, splattering into Shinji's white shirt. In that same moment, the cyborg went completely rigid, locking articulation beyond human strength. Shot through the side with a grapnel and connected to another two hundred pounds of dead weight, Shinji's mind raced for a solution. Two seconds before he hit the reflecting pool outside Central Dogma, he found one.

His hand slashed down and cut the cable, ignoring the harpoon for the moment. Hiking up, Shinji braced his legs against the machine-man and pushed, shoving himself skyward and buying precious seconds. The cyborg shot downward, splashing and tumbling along the water before sinking, sliding along the angled pool walls. Shinji twisted in mid-air with perfect balance, despite the steel spike shoved through his side. Drops of blood lingered behind him, but he didn't have time to care.

With no debris to walk on and nothing to grab, Shinji braced for the inevitable.

Impact threw a plume of water ten meters high into the sky, shining solid gold. a radial tidal wave followed, rushing out to beat against the sides of Central Dogma's decorative pool. In the center, Shinji stood on rippling water. A beat later, he let himself sink, if for no other reason than to take the weight off of his throbbing legs.

In hindsight, beating a cyborg against a glass floor might not have been the best of ideas.
 
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Now that is a fucking Exalted-scale action scene!
 
I have to admit for the second portion of the fight when they were faling I was partially thinking of the fight Afro Samurai and the Afrobot. Which is a good thing.
 
Frowning, Ritsuko dredged from her mind the countless experience she and Shinji conducted over the past year.
'Experiments', I think?

Er... Shinji? Awesome moves, but you should have thought about the floor, yeah. Though beating one cyborg with another is always the right move, to be fair...

And umm.... nice landing, but what about Gendo and Kouzo? Gendo's no General Monger, he doesn't have an emergency parachute!
 
Heh, interesting. I'll have to youtube that.
Lemme do dat for ya.



It isn't quite Exalted-scale or style, but it's the same general concept...minus the plausible mechanism for midair maneuvers.

EDIT: Apparently Fuyutsuki got Gendo out of the way of the floor going down.
 
third and final impact
There is something about the repetition of these specific words that I swear you are consciously exercising for some nefarious purpose down the line...

And - bravo. That was absurdly excellent. There's so many exciting things going on in this chapter-section, even discounting the fight scene itself. What's Gendo's reevaluation?
 
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