Bella Gerant Alii, A Leviathan Quest



A part of me remembers the time before the war. The sky is always deep blue, Papa laughing, Mama smiling. The house is clean, the streets of Evergem fair and bright. The sun shines. Back then, we would see the zoological exhibits in Ghent, when there was time, and watch the animales fabriqué grow in their glass pens as the dompteurs worked to bring them to the heights of life they were engineered to provide. We had one ourselves, a gently modified gelding who we used to move the wagon to and from the home. Our bees weren't modified, but it was only a matter of time according to Papa. We made honey, sold wax, and took care of the land. Sometimes I would help, going from farm to farm for a few days as our walking hives did their work. Sometimes I would just pick flowers.

Then the war came. It was a great and terrible thing, Papa putting on his uniform with finality, taking up arms. I thought it grand, until the Germans came. Our horse was drafted, the house burned, and our beehives smashed as the men laughed and drank wine in the smoking ruins of my home. I was lucky, that we managed to flee: not all my friends were so lucky. The stories are not worth repeating, their like could be found anywhere. A girl of fourteen need not recall such things, else it damage her constitution more than two years on the border of starvation. My mother and I were homeless, trying to eak by on charity. Often, it failed. I never asked her what she needed to do to keep scraps of bread and leather-like meat on the table, she never asked what I needed to do to protect our culvert-bound squat in our hands.

Even when the Germans left, Papa never came home. We assumed he died, either on the lightning-fences or dead of some horrific, mechanical fate on the front lines. Were he alive, he would return. It was a year before we stopped hoping. When we returned to the farm, nothing was left except scorched, barren patches of soil; heaps of fly ash and oil stains everywhere.

Things changed for the better when I was seventeen; for that was when the dompteur I was seeing offered a chance for me to meet the animals. The beasts descending from the Great Cats enjoyed my presence, much to my surprise, and in the end I found myself recruited by a man in a bowler hat and walrus-like moustache. Soon, I found myself a dompteuruse myself, and it wasn't long before I had put my name down in blood with the men in the bowlers. Jeanne du Lys, it read, would agree to serve the Company for eight years, to be paid in good coin, and to be in total possession and control of such fabricated creatures as needed to perform her assigned tasks.

Woe to me, though, for not putting any restrictions in further. The Great Cats, those jaguars so fine, were destined for the second war that had found itself opening up under our feet. The French had, in their postwar damage analysis, had delineated areas of importance; those worst off were designated 'les zones rouge'; the red zones. The damages were not merely limited to deceased war machines of Clanker origin, however; but also to the pestiferous English biological devices. The Red Arrowroot, or what the Austrians called kudzu from their world-striding Emperor, was what initially gave the areas the name- and from it bred an ecosystem to grant ghosts of life to every beast released or let loose in battle. French Hell-hounds and war boar, English flechette bats and devil weasels, even our own proud Lions Exemplar and Tunnel Voles; all lived there and multiplied.

My role, being female, was not to attempt to contain the ecological disaster at the heart. No, I was part of Les chaussures de rats; in other words, rat-catchers. I did not consider it prestigious, nor dangerous.

Five of my years in, I know better now. Of my class of twenty, four of us are still in service, twelve are medically retired, two are dead, and two are missing and presumed to join those fine fellows in Heaven above; should God still grant us entry into such a place for what we have done. If he chose to deny us, I would not assign blame, for the Devil is an old friend for my actions. He had walked with me extensively these last four years in Ypres, and I knew his tricks well. The Germans had fought hard, here. Old weapons were easy to hand, and frequently found and traded like cigarettes; so too were their explosive payloads both fireable and past discharged. The British had done their work as well, leaving dozens of strips of air-dropped Red Arrowroot around to pollute the land. Les zones rouge, indeed.



Checking my Winchester, I frowned slightly. The city council had an accident occur recently; restoration to the city's sewers had accidentally breached an older Undersoldaten complex by setting off unexploded ordinance in the course of work. The tenacity of a Bosniak mechanique or some other hell-bound minority of that seething pot of greed could not be overestimated, so creatures had been designed to root them out. These English war-beasts tended to be the smaller, vermin-based type with barely limited reproductive capacity; thus it was rightly feared that they would infest the town. Therefore, the area needed to be taken to hand.

In my first year, it would have been three chaussures for this task, with four more escorts besides. We would scour the nest, with thermite for their food supplies and pheromones for to disrupt their trails, killing everything we found. In my second, it would have been two chaussures and one porter, using gasoline to disrupt and burn out the nest.

Now, it was just me, and my cats: Sander and Caspar. The two guardsmen who escorted me to the mouth of the hole saluted, and one of them held out a rucksack.

"Here." he said, trying to smile and failing. I could sense his nerves, but that was natural. Anyone would be nervous here. "We scrounged you up some grenades from the arsenal. Two thermites, three lemons, and six stahlgranates. Be careful with those, though: they're mint of fourteen."

I nodded deeply, taking the bag before smiling a little. "Thanks."

"We're not going to come in after you," the other guard warned. "But if you're not back in six hours, we'll have to leave. If you can, come and check in before then, and we'll make sure to send another shift."

"I'll do my best, but if this really is an Undersoldaten complex, there's no guarantee I'll be up soon." I warned, before pulling out my bayonet and locking it to the shotgun definitively. Saluting, I watched them return the gesture. Then I was off.

The one good thing about Undersoldaten, as far as I was concerned, was that they knew their mines. Every two meters like clockwork was a shoring, and bundles of cables ran along the top left corner, still wrapped in insulation. Flicking on my electric torch, I stopped, before putting my signal whistle in my teeth.

'Tweet tweet tweet' I blew, but in reality I meant 'Stop'.

The insulation was unchewed. Any vermin-derivative warbeast had teeth that would grow at near a millimeter per day, and as such they were constantly, constantly gnawing on anything and everything in range. Lost telegraph wires had been one of the most common issues the English had faced in the trenches, as once the anti-chew pheromones wore off, they would be soon severed by their own creatures.

'Tweet tweeeeet, tweet.'; 'Follow, on guard.'

Something was controlling the vermin population down here. Warbeasts would eat warbeasts, and it was all too likely a Hell-hound or whatnot had survived down here. I had lost Balthazar to a surprise War Boar two years ago on what should have been a ratting mission like this; Melchoir had barely lasted out my first before being retired for torn tendons when a Dire Weasel had maimed him.

Knowing now there was a predator afoot, I clipped my torch to my helmet, and brought the Winchester up into my shoulder. I had to keep moving, and try to find the nest. With the radium paint of my gunsights glowing under the tunnel-night, I continued poking. Whatever this place had been, it had been important. Barren sub-chambers littered the area, and in a few places I could even see filament bulbs lying around. There was rat-sign, and a little weasel as well, but that was less important than what I found a half hour in.

On the wall in China pencil was a series of symbols. I could see a crescent moon, stars, arrows, and a clip of bullets. None of it was standard, but reaching into my pocket, I let my gun slide down a little. With my own grease marker, on the opposite wall I left a standard message: J3A 2c rat/mink jaune. My name and class number, my quarry, and the risk level. In a rare moment of levity, I took the time to add a detail; a little stick figure with cat ears and a rucksack. An avatar to show who I was, to the other occupants of this warren.

I was pulled up from my moment of levity by Caspar growling, hackles raised. Grease marker forgotten, my gun was up and a shell in the chamber as fast as I could manage.

"Arretz! Halt! Ophâlde! Stoppen!" I yelled, praying it wasn't a person. Trench madness was a mythical disease, and I would not be facing one of those monsters perpetually near death that had come forth from the trenches in Verdun. There had been rumors about that, and when Marceau never returned, we believed.

My luck held out, as a starving war ferret jumped out of the shadows and straight into a load of buckshot. Ramming the slide back, I made sure my finger was off the trigger as I brought the gun back into battery and sent the next shot down the tunnel. A scream came forth, and I responded by casually pulling out a homemade firebomb and ramming it in at bayonet point. Ripping back the friction-primer fuze, a hissing, shit-reak ball of flame lit in the ferret-tunnel. Flechette bat guano had a horrific smell, and I quickly made to wipe off my bayonet before reloading the two spent shells. The townsfolk had been right to fear this breech.

Back in the day, I would have stopped to ascertain the sexes of the dead ferrets, but now I knew better. Once you were in le zone rouge, never stop moving. Once you were in danger, never stop shooting. Once you had killed, burn the bodies. Ironic, that we had to learn that trick from the Austrians: if the ecosystem wasn't systematically denied biomass, the damaged portions would regrow in short order. Red arrowroot led to bastion bee colonies, bastion bee colonies lead to stockmice, and from there did every other warbeast feed.

No matter, now. Pushing onwards, I found more of the unique trailsign, and this time I bore it no mind. Twice more I passed it's ilk, before I found something more morbid- a wolf-skull marked on the wall, with a bar sinister of brown cutting through the marking. Scratching it with my finger, I sniffed carefully. Blood, old and dry. The markers had killed something? Presumably a dog. Sander hissed slightly on the sight, before leaping off into a side passage, yowling before the sounds of a fight broke out. Running after him, I saw the jaguar turn the corner into a side room, before a fight broke out. Coming in, I could see him mauling an injured bitch, tired from birthing. It was but the work of a moment to flick my safety on, and as the two wrestled I worked a practiced stab in, ripping her guts out.

It took little time for Caspar to join in, ripping the bitch's throat out. Checking my cats over for injury, I smiled faintly. Nothing a little whiskey and soap back at home wouldn't fix.

"Tweet, tweettweet tweeeet."; "Hunt together"

My cats flew off, looking for the pups. Checking my torch again, I blinked. Someone had barricaded off a place where an ancillary tunnel joined this room. Knocking some of the rickety planking away with my gun's stock, I found myself in an old basement. It had been used as a shelter, and as my feet found a clean floor, not in the long-forgotten shellings. Moving quickly, I slipped a smoked lens over my torch, and spat on the floor: the jaguars could follow me from that. Pulling out a small twist of tobacco, I started chewing it carefully to start building up a supply of spit. Between my scent and the tobacco, it would be nigh-impossible for the cats to lose me.

I had to go deeper. The old basement shelter was connected by an expanded drain to an old storm sewer, which in turn led to another basement shelter that dipped into a French bunker. Two turns and a glare at an arroweed-encrusted support beam, and I was into a Canadian bit of trenchery, which I could tell from the frequent use of shitty chickenwire mesh to keep the mud walls from closing in. God preserve the Canadians; for being stuck dealing with the worst of the French and the British and judging by how the beams sat this tunnel was proof they could not look over themselves!

It was a few minutes later that Caspar came to me, and meowed softly. A few paw-signals later, and I determined he wanted me to follow, so I did. Backtracking through the Entente tunnels and a dip near a still-active sewer line (which I made a mental note to mention), we found Sanders next to a dead hell-hound. It had been killed recently, but more notable was the missing fur and meat. It had been butchered, and quite competently at that. Both backstraps had been taken off, and the plates and shanks had been cut free as well. I prayed no human would eat it, since as a rule warbeasts were poisonous from the chemical ingestion as part of their diet, but it was not fatal. Merely deliberating, and for the younger generations, liable to stunt growth. I could attest to the later, sadly. All the gegenkruz shots in the world couldn't bring me up in stature, and I was forever cursed with stomping on feet to get my way in lines.



Caspar whined, and I continued following him. As we went, the basements got newer, the tunnels continued being German, and eventually I heard a voice in the distance. A human voice.

"Hello?" I called out. Sander, the little traitor, gave a happy meow back, and I heard a bolt cock closed.

"Who's there!" a voice yelled, before repeating itself in German and English.

"The owner of the cat!" I yelled back. "Can I come in?"

There was a muttering, and the kid seemed to make up his mind. "Yeah, the cat's friendly. Hands where we can see 'em!"

Slinging the shotgun on my back, I came out carefully, tilting my torch at the floor. By a flickering lamp, a child- near twelve or thirteen, if my guess was right- sat, a cut-down rifle in his lap and a wicked trench nail at his hip. Whistling when he saw me, he jumped up, slinging his own gun behind him.

"A real person! Wow!"

I tried not to smile, but it was hard. "No, just a chasseur. Do you know where my other cat is?"

"Ah… Sander? He's back in the clubhouse, c'mon!"

Following the lad, I took the time to dismount my bayonet, and smiled as he moved forwards, laughing quietly. "Aya! Elmo, we have a visitor! Make tea, she looks like she needs it!"

"A visitor, eh?" another voice called, distorted in the tunnels. We were back in German territory, now, and soon enough there was a lamp by the door of an old command bunker, still in immaculate shape. Inside were several bunk beds piled high with mattress pads that only smelled of regular mold, an open air vent, and a thin fire. Next to it were a pair of girls, one with a war ferret draped around her neck like a scarf and the other in a dirty machinist's smock. A boy was tending the fire, tapping in thin sticks of old shoring-wood and dried brambles as a brass pot with a flared base bubbled. As I walked in, I noticed a notch, before I blanched. That had been a shell casing, once. The child on guard followed me in, and shortly two more children came in, genders undeterminable under sweat and dirt. Wiping themselves off on a painfully cleaned towel, they both proffered cracked tin mugs, and wordlessly I accepted one as the lot of us gathered in a circle.

"What brings you down here, then?" one of the children- a male, from the voice- said as he put another stick in the fire and started serving the drink. Thick and red-black, he served us all equally, before dropping a homemade cake of concentrate in and pouring in a canteen of water.

"There was a breech in the sewers." I said, shrugging. By my feet, Caspar stretched out, unperturbed by the other warbeast in the room since it had a handler. Trust in humans was the first thing every warbeast learned, followed by trust in that humans could control a pack of different animals.

"That breech? Opened last week?" one of the girls asked carefully.

"Yes." I replied, sipping the tea. It was cloying and bitter, and as I swallowed my stomach heaved mutinously. Setting the cup aside, I tried to hide the pain, but Caspar picked up on it and I barely made it outside the door to the hut before I started heaving.

"What the fuck?" I asked, gasping. Taking a moment with my own canteen to rinse my mouth out, I found the mechanic girl coming over to pull me up around her shoulder.

"Elmo forgot that some people can't take the tea as strong as we can." she apologized, parking me in front of the fire again. "Sorry. I'm Aleta, and that's my sister Marit."

"Jeanne." I replied, pulling out one of my canteens and nursing it. Once I had a little water back in my stomach, I slung off my thin work-sack, and dug through for a tin of sardines and a package of field crackers. Opening the tin, eighteen eyes swiveled towards me, and I sighed. Of course I would need to share my meagre rations, never mind that it was their brew that made me deposit breakfast on their doorstep!

Sighing, I just pulled out another two tins, and got to work dividing. One cracker and one fish for each of the children, two fishes for each of my jaguar-beasts, and two leftover crackers for the war-ferret on Marit's neck. Rituals of food abated, I stared at the fire-tender, Elmo. His Mauser at his side was still in excellent shape even though it was cut down to the barrel band. Still, he'd done a good job recapping it in old brass, and a heavily hooded front sight decorated it proudly.

Leaning forward into my crossed legs, I sighed, patting the ground. As Caspar left his head on my right leg, Sandar took the left before belching a faint mustard cloud.

"You know what happened to connect this to the sewers." I said carefully.

Elmo looked pained, taking a sip of his tea. "Yes."

"Was it on purpose?" I pressed gently, watching the other children frown. "Or was it an accident?"

"This is Thijs' story, but he's not here." Elmo said carefully, "so it falls to me to tell it. Simon was also there, but-"

"-I can't remember a lick of it." the watch-stander said, shrugging. "Rung my bell, and when I came up I had my gas mask on and was passed out in one of the English rabbit holes. I'm lucky the rats didn't get me, but they know better than to lick anything that smells like pineapple and pepper."

"You know how many unexploded shells there are in these tunnels." Elmo said quietly, taking a deep pull of his tea and refilling it, the liquid having an eerie air of blood in the cavern. "We don't fuck with them normally, but crossed shells leak."

I nodded, shivering. The Kreuz was the German symbol for a gas weapon, color denoting payload. "And these are your tunnels, now."

"We don't have many other places to go. The orphanages are full; always have been. If something happens to our folks, it's the poorhouse for us. There's food in here, old war supplies and secret passages to places where eyes are slack."

"That still doesn't explain why you were fucking with an unexploded shell." I said, flat.

It was Thijs who spoke next, glancing at me. "That wall that gave in was what separated our tunnel to an old pump station. We could get clean water from the Ipeelee, and filter it there to bring back pure. Another wall had caved- I remember that much- into an old wurm-trail, and pulled down a mess of grunkreuz shells."

I held up a hand, putting my head in my hands. "And you decided, you brave, foolish boys, to build a small charcoal fire on top of a leaking canister while wearing your masks to neutralize the chlorine."

The silence was deafening. I didn't need to ask what happened next; the answer was obvious. A regular mortar bomb or mine or what have you was mixed in there, the heat from the fire set it off as it cooked the dirt and the gas shell. The dirt ate the shrapnel, but one blast set off a bursting charge, another shell, something; and the walls of the sewer maintenance tunnel had not been so thick when I went through.

At the end of it all were two injured boys scrambling for a home that didn't exist. "What happened to Thijs?" I asked quietly, knowing the answer would be bad.

"He maimed his leg and hand." Elmo said softly. "I don't think he's going to keep his eye, either. He was Karl's brother; but now the two are off to make their way in the orphanage."

"We gave them all the tea and hides we could." Marit said softly, reaching over to hold his hand. "It'll be a lean month for us, but we can make do."

"There's less valuable creatures here every week." Elmos sighed. "We can't stay here forever."

My heart bled, and I sipped my water to hide the pain. If I was not on the job, if I was not in the tunnels, if I had any hope of seeing the sun again without every breath of my wits about, there was a flask of cognac in my bag. Not much was left from when Giles had given it to me in Liege, but I'd made every drop count. This would be worth the nip, to dull the sawing edge on me.

"I'm here to make sure the ferrets don't infest the city." I said quietly. "I should be going home soon. If I can- if I can, then I'll talk and see if we have any more places for apprentices, or dompteurs or handlers, or anything."

"Are you sure you'll be back?" Aleta asked.

"As sure as the sun."

-/-/-/-/

When I finally reached the surface again, a telegram was waiting at my apartment. My team of chaussures were to be moved to a teaching position in the school at Arras in two weeks, and I was to halt any operations to prepare for the move. If I went down into the tunnels again, it would be viewed as contract violation, and I would be penalized accordingly.

Sitting down on the floor, rain pouring down my face as thunder crackled outside, Sandar tried to curl into my side as Caspar licked my hair. It didn't help. The last of a dead man's cognac couldn't numb the pain. As the flask fell from my hands and I gripped at the hidebound lifelines that were all I had left, I wished the world was kind, and fair weather would grace the worlds.

Only the generation of mud heard my prayers.


Wow! I just... Wow. This is the sort of work you always hope to see when you start writing a quest in a setting as evocative as this one. It perfectly complements the world and provides a lot of interesting tidbits which I think fit very well into the existing stuff I have prepared. The characters and plot are also excellent.

Great work, man. Have a well-deserved threadmark.
 
The Final Hour
The Final Hour

Macedonia, December 1916
The war will end today.

Everywhere you have looked these past few days, you have seen incomprehension written on the apprehensive faces of the men who hold the trench above you as they wrestle with the magnitude of this fact. It seems that the past month has been one upheaval after another: the mad scramble of butchery at the Somme, where a surprise Darwinist offensive had given over hundreds of thousands to the clinging, all-consuming mud; the death of the Kaiser and the ascension of his nephew, apparently legitimized through the political machinations of a Pope who had been dead for two years; the maddening rumors of negotiations with the Darwinists, and then the sudden news of a ceasefire, and a new treaty for a new status quo which, for many of the soldiers of the Austro-Hungarian army, looks far too much like the old one.

You are Untersoldat Simeon Astafei, and you have yet to feel the full weight of any of these things. Sometimes, when you see the tired, hollow gazes of your men in the flickering electric light of the underground and recognize that same look in the pocket mirror you use to shave, you wonder if you ever will. The men on the surface have faced shells, snipers, poisonous gas and fabricated fungus, have charged barbed wire and machine guns, faced twisted creatures lurking in the shell-craters: so had you, in your first few months of the war, leading your platoon as they charged and shot and stabbed and clubbed and dug in and died and died and died.

There had been some comfort, you think to yourself as you look back on it, in the scale of it all. The fantastical creatures, part nightmare, part myth, the towering walkers, a display of industrial might which preceding ages could never have imagined, above all the sheer number of casualties, the week-long bombardments, the miles upon miles of trenches and barbed wire, made it quite impossible for anyone caught in the midst of it to connect this titanic charnel-house with the machinations of the mortals who seemed so feeble and insignificant in comparison. The war was not the stuff of men: it was a chimera of pitiless steel and sculpted flesh with a life of its own. It was not possible to understand how it was fueled by the soldiery, aside from its consuming them in staggering quantities.

The tunnels have offered no such comfort. The battlefields you have fought on were measured in feet and inches; there was no ceaseless pounding artillery to drown out the cries of agony, no detached patter of machine-gun fire as the backing-track to watching line after line of distant silhouettes fold in on themselves, stagger, stumble and fall. The war in the tunnels was one of a dozen men fighting from room to room, where the sound of a single gunshot was enough to deafen you, where you came to know your enemies by their voices, saw the terror in their eyes at the realization that they were dying once you drove the knife home, felt their panicked, wild breaths on your skin, heard the muffled, sickening groan when you twisted the blade or the wet squelch as you kicked your shovel free from their skull. The creatures came not as a seething, roiling wave, but rather in slow stalking in labyrinths too dark for the human eye or artificial lamplight to penetrate far.

You have heard men being eaten alive in a distant tunnel, have seen them burn and bleed and choke to death on poison gas. But the worst of it was that in the confines of the tunnels there was no place to hide from the truth that it was human beings who inflicted these terrors upon each other, with the careful deliberation of a veteran soldier who knows that his enemy is making similar considerations on how to effect his own destruction.

You continue to go down into the tunnels, even today, the last day of the war: you have spent this past week bringing out equipment, munitions, casualties, anything you cannot bear to leave behind when the moment comes to blow the tunnels and seal the hellish menagerie that has come to dwell in them off from the surface. You work in silence, listening to the distant rumble above as you and the Darwinists both continue their bombardments, as if to save themselves the trouble of carting home too many spare shells. Your men fan out, sweeping the tunnels: here you see the concrete barracks where you had slept in the most intensive days of the fighting, keeping Darwinist sappers from laying a mine beneath the trenches, there the stretch of soot-stained tunnels where you had been forced to use a flamethrower to keep back a horde of fabricated vermin, their charred flesh still clinging to the walls and floors. It crunches under your feet as you walk past.

It reminds you of the White War, the way the glacier ice had crunched beneath your heavy tread as your company hurled themselves into the frozen tunnels, so different from the soft, muddy warrens of Flanders which had teemed with godless fabricated life. You draw your trench knife as you pass the last of the charred remains of the rats and feel your boots sink into stony soil: now you are in your old forward positions, where your tunnels and the Darwinist warrens begin to blur together, as they often do. Private Zizek had gone missing here just two nights ago, dragged into the dark by some sort of creature: you have come here to look for him, and you know that if you succeed you may well come across the beast as well.

There is a trail where something large has obviously been dragged, leading off into a tunnel you have to stoop to enter. You take out the electric lamp clamped to your belt and begin sweeping the darkness with a red-coated beam. A few times, you pause and turn the light out, hearing footsteps nearby, wondering if the Darwinists would still care enough to try to kill you mere minutes away from the ceasefire. But then the air fills with the smell of dung as you enter a larger chamber, and you know that you will not find any soldiers here.

It is obviously a feral creature's warren: it lacks the carefully-sculpted features of one of the caves built by the Darwinists, so thoughtfully designed to be easy for the handlers to navigate: the floor here is rough and uneven, the walls caked with filth that their scavengers have not come to collect. You raise the knife as you sweep the den with your light, only to relax when you see the creature, a large, scarred old tunnel-vole, lying dead from several open wounds. The upper half of Private Zizek lies nearby, his knife stuck point-first in the dirt, as if he had tried to claw his way back to his post with it before he finally realized he was dead. His lower half is nowhere to be seen: perhaps devoured, perhaps lost in some side-chamber. But you have no time to search for it, and this should be enough to identify him. You sheath your knife and lift the torso gently into your arms, shifting it so that his head is nestled in the crook of your elbow, and set off back down the tunnel.

Zizek had been a Croatian who had almost nothing in common with you, not even a language: but he had been a brave man and a fine soldier. The tunnels had that way of bringing one's innermost qualities to the surface: in such close quarters and such dire circumstances, there was no way of concealing any part of yourself. It was another burden of this sort of war: you knew the man beside you would never leave you to face the enemy alone, that he would give you a bit of even his most meager bread ration if you were relieving him on watch, that he had a wife and daughter who he dreamed about at nights, just as you knew that he had crushed an Italian boy's windpipe under his heel to stop his screaming, that he had heard an entire platoon of Frenchmen burn to death and made some jest at the madness of it, because what else were you supposed to do when it had been your hands that held the flamethrower? You understand these things, better than anyone. That understanding is another thing that binds you, alongside your mission, your pride in volunteering, your dedication to winning the war.

You wonder if that understanding will survive the end of all this. How can you speak about such things in the cold light of day?

But that is something you will deal with later. A glance at the watch on your wrist tells you it is 11:50, and you must be prepared to blow the tunnels before noon.

Gradually, your men begin to coalesce together, as they finish their own private tasks, make their final checks for anything of value or souvenirs, and watch the handful of men you have trusted to set the charges. 11:55. You nod to your men, a few of them muttering as they see Zizek cradled in your arms, and with one accord you turn your back on the tunnels and head to the surface.

You emerge, blinking, into the sunlight, at the head of your company. The regulars stare at you as you line up in the trenches, make space for you as you try and find some place to sit along the parapet. You realize that they are staring at Zizek, so light in your arms you have almost forgotten you are carrying him, and set him down next to you. One of the stretcher-bearers will take him from here.

11:59. There are a series of rumbles, and you watch a few patches of earth in no man's land sink as your charges bury the tunnels you have dug and fought in this past month. A few moments later, the short hand of your watch turns to noon, and incredibly, unbelievingly, the shelling gives way to silence.

You stand there for a moment, as both armies catch their breath, and then the air around you explodes with cheers, helmets and feldkaps hurled into the air, soldiers laughing or weeping with relief. You have not moved. Neither have the rest of your men. It all feels too much to grasp, too much to process. The war made you who you were: who will you be without it?

Then one man claps another on the shoulder, and soon your men, too, are embracing quietly. They come to form a rough circle, and you find yourself being pulled into the heart of it. As all of Europe seems to go wild with joy around you, you bow your head in silence. Some of your men are smiling, some on the verge of tears, others trembling or seemingly unmoved at all, but for a moment you stand together against the whole world, against the uncertainty that awaits you, against the memories that will haunt you.

Then, at last, you feel it, the lifting of something you only notice now that it is absent: the great shadow of what mankind has wrought, that has loomed over you these two long years, has begun to lift, if only slightly. A sigh seems to pass through the crowd, and slowly but surely, men drift away to join the wider revelry.

As the last of the circle scatters, you look around for a moment at the sight of joyful faces, the shellfire replaced with a frenzied chorus of cheers. You stumble over to the parapet, picking your way through the mob, until you once more find a seat next to Zizek. Some exuberant sergeant nearly sends him toppling from his seat, and you place an arm around him, to steady him and hold him in his place.

You sit there, silent and alone and numbed by the magnitude of what you have endured, and wait for the stretcher-bearers to come.

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AN: Have a peaceful Remembrance Day, everyone. Sadly, this Omake is non-canon as I reworked Montenegro's experience of the Great War somewhat: namely, the Austro Hungarian invasion of 1916 did not happen. Perhaps I'll write another short story on the end of the war someday: or better yet, perhaps one of you will write one instead?
 
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I am now joining in the name of our grand Kaiser! Kaiser Tongzhi of the nation of Tanna Tuva! No infiltration here, and there is definitely no Austria-Hungarian deposed prince scheme here, no siree.

But seriously, I'm lovin' what you are writing, and it brings me back to better times. A time where I could enjoy a book in my hands until work got too much for me. I read the first two books and was never able to get to the third. I hope that I will soon get an opportunity to have time to read a book again.
 
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I am now joining in the name of our grand Kaiser! Kaiser Tongzhi of the nation of Tanna Tuva! No infiltration here, and there is definitely no Austria-Hungarian deposed prince scheme here, no siree.

But seriously, I'm lovin' what you are writing, and it brings me back to better times. A time where I could enjoy a book in my hands until work got too much for me. I read the first two books and was never able to get to the third. I hope that I will soon get an opportunity to have time to read a book again.

Wilkommen an board!
 
Meeting Von Erlanger
ARC 1: BOSNIA, PART 2

You spend the remainder of your day getting settled in Sarajevo: after a brief consultation with Faludy and Rothschild you set up in the Hotel Central. It's close to the Vijecnica and living among your fellow Untersoldaten provides some comforting familiarity. You briefly remember Ruskovski from training, and know that he also commanded a platoon at Pasubio, the same as you: he remains a diminutive, sandy-haired Ruthenian with a grave countenance, and the years since the war seem to have made him more dour and left him with a few more scars than he had when you last saw him.

"It's shit, sir." Is his blunt response when you ask him about the current situation. His men are crammed in four to a room, as he leads you through the hotel's upper floor, the pair of you occasionally sidestepping the nervous staff scuttling through the halls. "We'd much rather have proper barracks, but the airship-jockeys beat us to the punch. As it is, my men spend their days "patrolling" the bazaar and hanging around in their rooms. These fucking civilians stay quiet for now, but they're getting bolder as they get used to us."

"I'll bring up proper quarters with Von Erlanger tonight." You tell him. The hotel staff have at least been kind enough to give you a proper suite with a decent stock of liquor. "Once we actually start looking for the bandits behind this train robbery business we can get your boys out of their rooms and into the field. Maybe they'll even see some action." The Hauptmann seems mollified at that, assenting when you mutely offer him a bit of palinka.

"To tell you the truth, sir, I wouldn't mind a taste of battle to take my mind off of all this paperwork." He says. "I'd never have taken this promotion if I knew it would make me into more of a clerk than a soldier. My wife never understands me when I tell her how much I miss being shot at." You smile and nod at that as you raise your glass. It had been a stock joke, repeated by any Untersoldat who had just come home from a difficult leave. It has taken on a new significance, you think to yourself, since Antonia declared her intent to get you married. "To being shot at." You say, and clink glasses.

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For the second time in two weeks you have cause to don your dress uniform, though mercifully your new adjutant, Friedrich, has managed to fix your fraying collar. Ruskovski accompanies you to the Vijecnica, and you find it somewhat reassuring that now you are not the only senior officer to bring a trench knife to these sorts of meetings. Faludy and Rothschild meet you there, and for the first time you lay eyes on Captain Modric, a haughty-looking fellow with a wicked scar on his cheek. You ask him what Darwinist beast left that mark on him, and he laughs.

"Not a beast, sir, a sabre." He smiles. "An ill-advised duel from my first days as an officer." He might have taken offence before the war, but you are all old soldiers who lived through the Weltkrieg: scars and old wounds are a universal experience. Some parts of the war are perhaps still more infamous than others, however. As you shake his hand, you catch him taking a second look at the Untersoldat badge on your collar.

The Vijecnica is certainly an impressive sight, its facade a riot of colorful paint and elaborate stonework that bears more resemblance to the mosques you have passed on your journey through the city than any of the palaces of Vienna or Budapest. When you enter the building, you find yourself in an open space, looked down on by the similarly intricate colonnades and balconies of the floor above. A stained glass ceiling gives the soft glow of the evening a rainbow-colored hue, accented with electric lighting artfully concealed in decorated sconces.

Your collective footfalls raise an echoing clamor in the empty space, and it's not long before a well-dressed official descends down the main staircase to greet you. "Welcome to Sarajevo, Major Astafei." He says, his face impassive. "The governor is expecting you." You and your lieutenants are ushered through hushed corridors, glimpsing only the occasional functionary scampering through the halls. There's a tension in the air, despite the absence of any obvious signs of activity. Faludy seems to sense it too: you trade glances with him as the aide leads you deeper into the building, until you come to a door with a nameplate embossed on it. Christoph Von Erlanger, Landescheft of Bosnia-Herzegovina. You hear the muffled patter of conversation: it stills when the official knocks, and then opens the door for you.

Inside are two men, one wearing the feldblau uniform and bright red fez of a Bosniak soldier. The second is Von Erlanger, his hair thinning, his skin pale and his black suit badly wrinkled. He smiles as you enter, the Bosniak turning to give you a respectful nod as the governor gets to his feet. You take note of the pinched smile he gives you, and the haggard look easily visible in his watery blue eyes.

"Ah, welcome gentlemen!" He says, ushering you into the room, where five chairs have been arranged around a table laid out with coffee and vanillekipferl. "Thank you for coming at such a late hour. Might I introduce Hauptmann Besim Beganovic of the Fourth Bosniak Regiment?"

"Major Simeon Astafei." You say, by way of introduction, as he too shakes your hand. He has a firm grip, and as you look closer you note that a good part of the left half of his face is unnaturally frozen, the slimmest seam of gnarled skin outlining its edges. A facial prosthetic, then, albeit a well-fitted one. You start to wonder what ruin it might conceal, before you catch yourself and step back with a polite smile. Perhaps the Bosniak's are worse than most, but you have your scars too, of course: who doesn't, after two years of that madness?

"A pleasure, Major." He says, his voice hollow and reedy as he turns to greet your captains, and then there comes a moment of somewhat awkward silence before Von Erlanger hurriedly motions you to take your seats. "Go on, sit, please." He says. "Help yourselves to some coffee as well. And try the vanillekipferl, they're excellent."

You pour yourself a cup, grab one of the cookies and take a bite, chewing thoughtfully. Well, you can report to the Kaiser that Von Erlanger was not lying about that, at least. Von Erlanger takes a seat himself and grabs a cookie of his own. For a moment more you ponder how best to begin. This is not the sort of thing you have experience with: Von Erlanger is certainly not your friend, but he is nominally your superior. But the Kaiser's backing should still give you authority over him, shouldn't it? But then, how much authority, and how far can you push him?

Like any good Untersoldat, you decide the best option is to just get stuck in. "His Imperial and Royal Highness has found the recent reports of banditry highly disturbing." You say. "He has also been unable to get a clear impression of recent events and the current state of affairs through your messages alone. Could you please explain, in detail, what has happened with these recent attacks and how the security situation currently stands?"

Von Erlanger, to his credit, only seems fazed for a moment before he launches into a reply. "Yes, of course." He says, "although I must say that the situation is difficult to simplify." Your only response is a noncommittal hum, and after a hopeful pause the governor decides to go on. "The trouble really starts with the damned Turks and their land laws." he says. "The Bosniaks were the local administrators for the Ottomans, and they've still hung on to their larger estates while the Christian, mainly Serbian peasantry are stuck with smaller allotments. That's not to say all Bosniaks are rich, of course, plenty of them are poor farmers as well, and they've made a terrible fuss of losing their power over local affairs ever since the annexation. The Serbs and Croats were with us at first, but once they realized that we weren't going to change the land laws- the parliaments in Budapest and Vienna have made that quite impossible- they too started to turn their backs on the Empire."

You can't help but feel unimpressed, and more than a little impatient. "That's been the case for more than forty years by now." You say. "The Bosniaks still fought well for us during the war, and things have been quiet for years now. What's changed?"

Von Erlanger looks a bit more abashed now as he takes a sip of coffee and nervously clears his throat. Faludy grabs another cookie and annihilates it with the mechanical precision of a hungry soldier. Rothschild is trying to conceal his amusement and failing, badly.

"Yes, well," he says, "the war is what changed, to be blunt. The Serbs despised fighting "brother Serbs", and they were roughed up a fair bit by our own boys over the course of the war." The living half of Beganovic's face sinks into a frown, though he says nothing. "Life actually got much better for them after the war: the Darwinists were desperate for all the grain and meat they could get, so prices rose, and the army ingratiated itself with them by putting down rogue fabrications left over from the fighting. But now that Britain's finally ended rationing and France is starting to reclaim more of its farmland, prices have gone down again- and taken the peasants' mood with it."

Again, true, although hardly particularly insightful. Troubles with the price of food exports have been all over the newspapers of late. "The farmers are looking to Belgrade for help- and, I suspect, for arms." Von Erlanger continues. "One of our outposts near the Serbian border was mortared recently- we recovered a dud shell of French make, perhaps from Serbian stockpiles."

"If so, they aren't giving away their best stock." Beganovic interjects. "The round was badly corroded. I'm surprised any of them blew up, to be honest." Von Erlanger's mask of obliging earnestness slips, and his voice and features become sharp with annoyance.

"Be that as it may," he states with forced calm, "I would still regard the possibility of Serbian involvement as a serious threat- and I'm sure the Kaiser would as well, given the grief the Serbs last inflicted on his family in Sarajevo." He turns his gaze to you at that, but you yourself are unfazed by his mention of Alek. As far as you're concerned, you are the only man in this room with direct summons from the Kaiser still sitting in your uniform pocket: you are not persuaded by Von Erlanger conjuring his shadow.

"I am sure that His Imperial and Royal Highness will respond to this information in the manner he sees fit. Perhaps if there had not been a breakdown in communication, I might have arrived already knowing his opinion on the subject." You let Von Erlanger swing for a moment, turn your gaze to Rothschild when you see his face threatening to break into a smirk, and then turn back to the governor. "Now, since you have explained the reason for the unrest among the Serbs, what of the Bosniaks?"

"That situation is a good deal less urgent." Von Erlanger replies. "And perhaps a bit simpler. The Bosniaks are deeply frustrated by the fall of the Sultan and the rise of the new Ottoman Republic. Once they had little organization, but serving together in the Great War…" At that he trails off, perhaps realizing how awkward it is to discuss this with Beganovic in the room.

The officer straightens up in his chair, reaching up to adjust his fez. "The Bosniak regiments were, are, and shall remain loyal to the Emperor." He says stiffly.

"Of course, of course." Von Erlanger says, his manner instantly conciliatory. "The majority of our Bosniak infantry remain fine soldiers and loyal servants of the Empire. But it cannot be denied that the crucible of combat seems to have helped these secessionists to operate as a political unit."

"And a military one as well, governor?" You interject. "You've discussed the recent actions of the Serbs, but what of banditry on the part of the Bosniaks? This train robbery, for instance-"

Von Erlanger grimaces at that. "Yes, that dreadful bit of business. I would note that there's not yet sufficient evidence to link that one conclusively to the Bosniaks."

"But the train was carrying wages for the civil servants, which I'm given to understand are generally despised by the Bosniaks." You say. You turn to Rothschild. "Could Serb peasants pilot cavalry walkers?"

"Perhaps, sir." He says thoughtfully. "There's piloting, and there's piloting. I've seen peasant boys who could hardly tell right from left turn into good Walker pilots, but moving at that sort of speed and keeping steady enough for passengers to board a train is another matter altogether. If the Serbs did rob the train, they'd have to have received special training."

The thought is an unpleasant one, not least because there are only a handful of answers as to who could be providing the training, and none of them are good. "If that's the case, then the Kaiser should be informed of the possibility immediately." You say. "If Belgrade is taking the Bosnian Serbs in hand to this degree, or God forbid, the Russians are involved…"

Then it may be war. Perhaps even a new European war. Von Erlanger seems to realize this, judging by the way his face turns white with fear as he nervously gulps down the rest of his coffee. "That would be a definite possibility." He says carefully, "Although without further investigation of the Serb areas and the border it will be impossible to make any sort of conclusion on the matter. I'm sure that with Hauptman Beganovic and his soldiers to support you, you could make short work of a sweep of the villages."

"What about the train robbery, sir?" Faludy interjects. "Surely if we want to prove the involvement of either party it would be best to start there."

"Or investigate Sarajevo further." Russkovski interjects, speaking up for the first time. "If we've got rats in our midst, it would be best to root them out immediately, before they start breeding further discontent."

Beganovic speaks up here. "It's been days since the attack, sir." He notes. "There may well be nothing left for you to find."

"And staying within Sarajevo would be highly inefficient." Von Erlanger notes. "The city itself has been relatively secure so far-" Rothschild cannot resist a snort of derision at this, earning a glare from the governor "-and committing an entire battalion to hunting through alleyways for bandits and malcontents when the Gendarmerie and current garrison have matters well in hand would be unlikely to turn up anything of use. If you wish to cut out this problem at the root, Major, my advice would be to start with the Serbs first."

Faludy looks as if he might speak up further, but you bring the argument to a halt with a wave of your hand. "Governor Von Erlanger, Hauptmann Beganovic," you begin, "Thank you both for providing your insights. I will be sure to take them into account in deciding how my battalion shall be deployed, and when I report on the situation to His Imperial And Royal Highness. I will inform you of my decision as soon as possible: for now, I need time to consider all this."

Von Erlanger greets the news with a smile. "Of course, Major Astafei." he says. "Is there anything else you require of me?"

You glance over at Ruskovski. "New barracks for my company of Untersoldaten." You say. "The Hotel Central is most congenial, but my men are intermixed with civilians, and I fear tempers are beginning to fray. If a more discreet spot might be found for them, I would be most appreciative."

"Of course." Von Erlanger replies. "Much of the First Bosniak Regiment is conducting anti-bandit patrols in the countryside. I'm sure Hauptmann Ruskovski and his men could be quite easily accommodated in their barracks."

"Wonderful." You reply, doing your best to force a smile in return as you stand and shake his clammy hand. "That will be all then, thank you. Have a good evening Governor, Hauptmann Beganovic." They reply in kind, and with that you and your four Captains swiftly exit the Vijecnica.

It's a fairly pleasant evening, with the smog having mercifully abated somewhat. You confer with your subordinates in the courtyard outside, a quartet of passenger walkers idling as they wait for you to travel back to your barracks. "So, what do we think?" You say.

"I'm not sure I'm entirely convinced, sir." Says Modric. "I was watching him all through the meeting and the train robbery definitely has him worried. I don't think his explanation of it makes sense. The Serbs are resourceful, and it would be characteristic of them to meddle, but this sort of interference might lead to another general war, and we all know that nobody can afford that, least of all Serbia."

"Having said that," Rothschild notes, "I'm not sure how much we could hope to get out of taking another look at the robbery. Investigation is for the gendarmes: shouldn't we be focusing on going where the enemy is? If the Serbs really are playing these sorts of games it would be best to stop them early, and forcefully."

"Knowing 'where the enemy is' is next to impossible in this region." Faludy says. "There's more to it than simply picking a region and sending our troops there. Even with a company of Bosniaks to help, one battalion doesn't have the manpower for a proper sweep if we can't narrow down where to look."

"Which is why we should focus our efforts here." Ruskovski growls. "We know that there are provocateurs in the city- my men have already been insulted and spat on in the markets. Someone is whipping these crowds into a frenzy. We had better find them and deal with them."

"Spittle and curses are not bullets and mortar bombs." Faludy retorts. "And besides, where would we start looking in this city? Should we just start turning the coffee houses upside down in the hopes of finding some secessionist conspiracy?" He shrugs. "In any case, I've already said my piece. The decision is ultimately yours, sir."

"Very well." You say. "Thank you once again for your opinions. Now, to bed. Meet me at the Central in the morning and I'll explain our next move over breakfast." Faludy, Rothschild and Modric wish you good evening, while Ruskovski rides back to the hotel with you. He bids you goodnight as well, and you retire to your room.
You spend a long time awake with another glass of palinka, mulling over what you will tell the Kaiser and more importantly, what you will tell your men come the morning. The choices you make now may determine the future of Bosnia- and with it, perhaps even the future of the empire. For the first time, the crushing weight of your responsibility truly dawns on you.

But you have fought battles with thousands of tons of mud and rock and stone above you. You have seen men crushed between that weight before- but you have also survived it. You can bear this weight too, in time.

You peer out into the Sarajevo night, and in the smoky darkness and the distant streets you are transported back to distant tunnels, lit by lamplight and glowing moss. There was an enemy waiting for you there, scuttling about in the darkness. There are enemies here too: perhaps even men you have fought with before, back in the days when the war united you.

Tomorrow you will start to find and kill them. You finish the rest of your glass, and then settle once and for all on how you will go about it.

Where will the Kaiserbattailon start its work?

[] Investigating the train robbery

[] Sweeping the rural villages near the border

[] Conducting patrols in Sarajevo proper


First Report to Alek:
[] Write In, 250 Words Or Less:

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AN: Finally, we're back! My apologies for the long delay, it was spent researching and attending to schoolwork. Now that my undergrad is done and I've finished reading Istvan Deak I look forward to swifter updates with a great deal more interesting details to pack into them! Will do my best to swiftly reply to any questions you guys might have. Take note that the report you make to Alek at this stage will strongly shape his initial impression of the state of affairs in Sarajevo!
 
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As a "special detachment" I feel like investigating the train robbery is probably the most immediately useful and accurate to our remit. Finding out whether the vehicle was stopped, forced to halt to avoid derailing, or boarded would cross off a number of immediate Problems and narrow down on who and what we are looking for in the destabilization of the region.
 
I think the most favourable action would be to sweep the villages. If there is any, we are likely to see signs of walkers, the money and foreign agents. They will be at least somewhat visible if they are building and arming an insurgency.

The city seems a waste of time, since our men are soldiers and not investigators. We will likely just stir up resentment.
 
I think the most favourable action would be to sweep the villages. If there is any, we are likely to see signs of walkers, the money and foreign agents. They will be at least somewhat visible if they are building and arming an insurgency.

The city seems a waste of time, since our men are soldiers and not investigators. We will likely just stir up resentment.
Idk, I agree about the resentment, but I feel like scouring the villages will also cause resentment. Or at least an incident.
 
Idk, I agree about the resentment, but I feel like scouring the villages will also cause resentment. Or at least an incident.
Sure, something might happen, but this is, as I see it, taking a risk for possible gain and taking a risk for no gain. If there is an armed rebel group among the Serbs (which may or may not be foreign backed), finding it should be our first priority. If we search the villages, we are very likely to see the signs of this, and as long as we keep a tight grip on the men, there shouldn't be anything too wild.
 
Sure, something might happen, but this is, as I see it, taking a risk for possible gain and taking a risk for no gain. If there is an armed rebel group among the Serbs (which may or may not be foreign backed), finding it should be our first priority. If we search the villages, we are very likely to see the signs of this, and as long as we keep a tight grip on the men, there shouldn't be anything too wild.
Hmm, we would at least be bait, but that leaves us far from anything familiar.

Do you guys think there's a chance this is an embezzlement scheme?
Von Erlanger seems to realize this, judging by the way his face turns white with fear as he nervously gulps down the rest of his coffee. "That would be a definite possibility." He says carefully, "Although without further investigation of the Serb areas and the border it will be impossible to make any sort of conclusion on the matter. I'm sure that with Hauptman Beganovic and his soldiers to support you, you could make short work of a sweep of the villages."
This reads like our contact did something with the money; the robbery was just a cover. Only now, he realizes this looks like something worse, so he directs us to the countryside. He either already knows the local troublemakers are there, and he hopes for a collision or he needs time to clean up the train scene. Then again it's been 3 days, the evidence might be gone already.
 
Hmm, we would at least be bait, but that leaves us far from anything familiar.

Do you guys think there's a chance this is an embezzlement scheme?

This reads like our contact did something with the money; the robbery was just a cover. Only now, he realizes this looks like something worse, so he directs us to the countryside. He either already knows the local troublemakers are there, and he hopes for a collision or he needs time to clean up the train scene. Then again it's been 3 days, the evidence might be gone already.
That was part of why I felt the need to clarify finding out "what" caused the train to stop. If it was an inside job then that limits where we need to focus our investigation.
 
Do you guys think there's a chance this is an embezzlement scheme?
I think this would be very over the top for an embezzlement scheme (it even drew royal attention). Local government likely have much quieter ways to siphon money. I believe he is just (justifiably) very afraid of another war after the last one (which is why he goes white).

That was part of why I felt the need to clarify finding out "what" caused the train to stop. If it was an inside job then that limits where we need to focus our investigation.
Didn't they have walkers? That would seem a bit over the top if they had a man inside. If they did have someone, they could have gotten aboard in a much less attention grabbing way.


Anyway, a sort of first draft for my idea for the first report;

-The local authorities are cooperating acceptably.
-There is unrest amongst local groups.
-Serbs are upset by changing economic circumstances, continued favouring of Bosniaks by local land laws and circumstances during the war.
-Bosniaks are upset by changing political circumstances in Turkey. However, their military units are seen as loyal by the local government.
-There are signs of armed resistance amongst the Serbs or interference by Serbia. An outpost was attacked with very low quality military equipment, but these did not necessarily come from Serbia. The governor believes the train robbery was the work of Serbs and sees them as the primary threat. However, if true, their ability with walkers would indicate foreign training.
-There is likely either a Serbia (or another foreign power) backed insurgency, an insurgency amongst both Serbs and Bosniaks (an Bosniaks attack on the train would negate the necessity of foreign pilot training) or an attempt to present appearance of Serbian interference.

Any thoughts? The big thing, seems to me, is that to learn if these are just local unrest or foreign interference.
 
Didn't they have walkers? That would seem a bit over the top if they had a man inside. If they did have someone, they could have gotten aboard in a much less attention grabbing way.
Having a big stick to wave to give a plausible reason for your plant to act as they do is a good tactic to use. Especially if you were using this as a training mission for your pilots.
 
A very apt summary.

Serbs are upset by changing economic circumstances, continued favouring of Bosniaks by local land laws and circumstances during the war.
Do you think we can recommend some kind of economic diversification to the Emperor? Would that be dumb and/or an overreach? People clearly had to know grain prices would drop eventually.
 
A very apt summary.


Do you think we can recommend some kind of economic diversification to the Emperor? Would that be dumb and/or an overreach? People clearly had to know grain prices would drop eventually.
I think the food price changes is a worldwide phenomena, somewhat outside our mission statement. The people are upset (as far as I can see it) because they are losing the extra income from the inflated prices (things are likely similar in most if not all mainly agricultural regions). However, there is no mention of widespread poverty and such (at least here), so I think they will get used to the new status quo in time. We are reporting the situation as-is, so if he sees the need, he will likely act on the information.

The alternative would be to suggest he invest in the region to raise income levels, but he likely has other priorities, and the main draw for the idea would be to lower unrest, and we don't know if things are that dire yet.

Having a big stick to wave to give a plausible reason for your plant to act as they do is a good tactic to use. Especially if you were using this as a training mission for your pilots.
It seems plausible to have something to use as an excuse for stopping the train, but my main argument against the collusion theory is that making an attack with walkers seems like way too much trouble for that (for the national levels of attention it brings). Our presence here should be proof of that. It seems to me that the walker assault is something you would do if you have no other option. Besides the attention, you would also run the risk of someone recognizing the walkers (if they are government walkers).
 
[X] Sweeping the rural villages near the border
-[X] Hit as many villages as possible, as rapidly as possible in safely large groups. Group local forces with your own (not allowing purely local groups) to reinforce and guide your men. Have the men keep as much discipline as possible to not start anything serious in villages unless necessary.

[X] The First Report
-The local authorities are cooperating acceptably.
-There is unrest amongst local groups.
-Serbs are upset by changing economic circumstances, continued favouring of Bosniaks by local land laws and circumstances during the war.
-Bosniaks are upset by changing political circumstances in Turkey. However, their military units are seen as loyal by the local government.
-There are signs of armed resistance amongst the Serbs or interference by Serbia. An outpost was attacked with very low quality military equipment, but these did not necessarily come from Serbia. The governor believes the train robbery was the work of Serbs and sees them as the primary threat. However, if true, their ability with walkers would indicate foreign training.
-There is likely either a Serbia (or another foreign power) backed insurgency, an insurgency amongst both Serbs and Bosniaks (an Bosniaks attack on the train would negate the necessity of foreign pilot training) or an attempt to present appearance of Serbian interference.
 
Honestly, the train job sounds like a feint to get us pointed at the Serbs. Considering the state of the narrative, I can't really trust Von Erlenger to be giving us more than half of what he knows, which is at best a quarter of the story. Boarder Serbs starting shit might be concerning, if they weren't using outdated munitions, but if they're firing mortars old enough to where dud chance is over 50%? That implies they're using old-ass, ghetto equipment that France was throwing out left, right, and center. Stuff like the old trench mortars, like this guy.



It's a shitheal mortar, and more importantly, it's the 20s IIRC. That means these are post-war sales, and more importantly, these are going to be the wartime munitions that aren't liable to be holding up as well. One of the likely problems of Darwinist weapons is they don't have as sophisticated powder stabilizers, so these are likely going to have been bombs from the ramp-up period that never got delivered: and wartime munitions frequently weren't made with long-term storage in mind. This, to my mind, means they were a sale of opportunity, since Serbia isn't going to be baiting ethnic tensions unless they want to start a giant flaming shitshow.

So in sum, the train job's a frame-up, the Serbs are unsupported, and we're not in a good position to go rooting through the city since the main point of contact- the Untersoldaten- are at this point probably looking for excuses to string up the first troublemakers they can find.

As such, we should go after the problem we know we can fix. With local Bosniak axillaries, we can probably ferret out the Serbs easily enough, and without that convenient smokescreen then whatever organized the train heist is going to have to play far more carefully.

@CthuluWasRight at some point, can we get the rough ethnic breakdown of our relative units? We probably will need to do a little temporary shuffling around so whoever ends up on point- probably the Wanderpanzers- actually has translators.
 
Honestly, the train job sounds like a feint to get us pointed at the Serbs. Considering the state of the narrative, I can't really trust Von Erlenger to be giving us more than half of what he knows, which is at best a quarter of the story. Boarder Serbs starting shit might be concerning, if they weren't using outdated munitions, but if they're firing mortars old enough to where dud chance is over 50%? That implies they're using old-ass, ghetto equipment that France was throwing out left, right, and center. Stuff like the old trench mortars, like this guy.



It's a shitheal mortar, and more importantly, it's the 20s IIRC. That means these are post-war sales, and more importantly, these are going to be the wartime munitions that aren't liable to be holding up as well. One of the likely problems of Darwinist weapons is they don't have as sophisticated powder stabilizers, so these are likely going to have been bombs from the ramp-up period that never got delivered: and wartime munitions frequently weren't made with long-term storage in mind. This, to my mind, means they were a sale of opportunity, since Serbia isn't going to be baiting ethnic tensions unless they want to start a giant flaming shitshow.

So in sum, the train job's a frame-up, the Serbs are unsupported, and we're not in a good position to go rooting through the city since the main point of contact- the Untersoldaten- are at this point probably looking for excuses to string up the first troublemakers they can find.

As such, we should go after the problem we know we can fix. With local Bosniak axillaries, we can probably ferret out the Serbs easily enough, and without that convenient smokescreen then whatever organized the train heist is going to have to play far more carefully.

@CthuluWasRight at some point, can we get the rough ethnic breakdown of our relative units? We probably will need to do a little temporary shuffling around so whoever ends up on point- probably the Wanderpanzers- actually has translators.
While I agree that Serbia interference is more likely than not, not real, I wouldn't discount it out of hand. They could easily be aiding in an ad-hoc and/or incompetent manner. The instigators could even be a small group in Serbian army or government. There is also the possibility (though a lesser one) the train is an unconnected act from a group of Bosniaks, who have pilot training, military contracts and an apparent dislike of civil servants (whose wages the train carried).

We also (as far as I can see) know nothing about the mortars themselves, only that that the rounds were badly maintained (because ONE of them didn't go off).
 
[X] Investigating the train robbery

I'll leave someone else to write the report, but I don't trust either of them, and they don't want us to do this, so!
 
@CthuluWasRight at some point, can we get the rough ethnic breakdown of our relative units? We probably will need to do a little temporary shuffling around so whoever ends up on point- probably the Wanderpanzers- actually has translators.

Yes, I'll have a basic Order of Battle drawn up for you as soon as I can including a breakdown of spoken languages (ethnicity is a lot more complicated, so I'll probably do that later).
 
[x] Investigating the train robbery

Technically reactionary, but it accomplishes our objectives well enough. Letting everyone know soldiers are in the region, investigates the cagey nature of the civil leader, begins tracking down where the actual hostiles are, etc.
 
[x] Investigating the train robbery


[X] The First Report
-The local authorities are cooperating acceptably.
-There is unrest amongst local groups.
-Serbs are upset by changing economic circumstances, continued favouring of Bosniaks by local land laws and circumstances during the war.
-Bosniaks are upset by changing political circumstances in Turkey. However, their military units are seen as loyal by the local government.
-There are signs of armed resistance amongst the Serbs or interference by Serbia. An outpost was attacked with very low quality military equipment, but these did not necessarily come from Serbia. The governor believes the train robbery was the work of Serbs and sees them as the primary threat. However, if true, their ability with walkers would indicate foreign training.
-There is likely either a Serbia (or another foreign power) backed insurgency, an insurgency amongst both Serbs and Bosniaks (an Bosniaks attack on the train would negate the necessity of foreign pilot training) or an attempt to present appearance of Serbian interference.
 
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