Mr.Ownage
Achieve the mission without regrets.
- Location
- Hungary
@Celestial Speck By server, you mean one specifically made for AAD, or an already existing one?
@Celestial Speck By server, you mean one specifically made for AAD, or an already existing one?
For a first go (and in such a short period of time!), it's definitely a great sheet, mainly backstory-wise. Apart from that, your choice of Rachel is definitely going to be fascinating for both of us. However, I believe the passives and skills section was somewhat rushed :
-Stat exchanging passives (Innocence and The People Heard Him in this sheet) are only possible to choose if the passive increases a stat by an amount, and decreases another by the same amount minus two. In your setup, there's a five level gap instead. Also, it would be preferred to mold them into one, that way, it still only costs two points while keeping the effect mostly the same.
-Humans recieve the +5 bonus to Charisma, not Intelligence.
-Aptitude cannot be 5 since Aptitude starts at 3 for Humans, Rachel provides +4 to it, and no initial points can be invested in Aptitude.
-Not sure if these are omitted by choice, but you're missing your Distortion Drives (up to two max) and Distortion Drive Duo. They're free, so you don't lose on anything by bringing them.
-Don't account passives' bonuses into the stat setup here : it makes it easier for me to keep track of spent points. In the same vein, you've noted the -5 penalty to Intelligence from Innocence, but haven't included the +10 bonus from The People Heard Him, which I assume is a Charisma bonus (Charisma governs Diplomacy here)
-As dull as it may be, did you give the systems section a read? (it, among others, contain two phrases which basically signify "I've read and understood this stuff"). What the stats and various moves do are covered there.
-Keep in mind that there are 50 points to spend on specials and passives, or stats, and these 50 are in a shared pool : if you spend most of them on specials, you won't be able to spend them on stats and vice-versa. Aptitude cannot be raised manually. Specials cost 2 points normally, but due to its ability to cause Stun and to multi-task makes yours cost 5 instead. Also, keep the passive "raise by x and lower by x-2" guideline as well in regards to stat-raising/lowering passives.
Almost there, don't worry!
The only two things that need fixing now are the passive, and something about the stats.
You've got the passive buff-debuff a bit mixed up. It's not the debuff that needs to be two levels higher than the buff, but vice-versa. So in that case, it'd be the Charisma stat getting a 7 bonus, and the Intelligence recieving an 5 penalty. That way, the debuff is two levels lower than the buff.
Also, if the stats show how many levels you've invested into them, I've calculated your setup requiring 54 points (4 points for the passives as each passive is 2 points, 5 points for the multi-tasking and stunning special move, and 45 points for the stats, not including Aptitude), which is 4 higher than the allowed 50.
Yep, it's all good now : the moveset is complete along with the Drive Duo, the stats and skills are within 50 points, and the specials/passives are also nicely done.
I thank you for your patience as well. I can relate that it's not easy fixing multiple things in sheets and similar documents.
It seems like we have a complete roster now. Oh, boy... I can't thank everyone enough who has joined and took their time with the sheets for their efforts and cooperation. Without you all, this concept wouldn't have come into fruition, and it makes me really happy that it did
Before the IC thread goes up, please make sure to finalize the sheets and do any changes to them before that, while making sure to notify me about any changes being made.
I'm not exactly sure when the IC thread will launch since I'll be starting university this September, along with a week of camp before that, so it's going to be hectic for a while. But rest assured, we will be making progress one way or another.
If it's okay with everyone and if time allows, I may put up the opening of the IC thread tomorrow and we'll proceed from there as things settle down. Of course, I'm open to hearing your thoughts about it as well.
In all honesty, my knowledge of Fate kind of ends at Saber, Archer, Rin and Unlimited Blade Works, basically. But I'll see what I can do!
That reminds me... if anyone has a specific way of making their appearence in the opening in mind (such as wandering around in the starting area, or, in Birthday's case, how exactly does Lost come face-to-face with Hazama, such as Hazama checks it out personally, or NOL military bring Lost to Hazama etc...), you may include it here.
I can't guarantee I will live up to the expecations a hundred percent, but I'll try my best at it.
@Bass11 @Birthday @Floom @CyanDies
We've been discussing the backstory of the Prince, but the Seven Stars were not brought up yet. I'd greatly appreciate if you filled me in on that!
@Celestial Speck Ah, I see. That was mentioned, albeit the summoning process hasn't been yet. Unless I missed something....
I see.... with that in mind, I think I've gotten an idea on how could that be fit into the opening : Rachel finds the Bow somewhere in Ishana after having noticed a strange object via observing the world, and having decided to investigate it. However, out in the open, and without Valkenhayn by her, she decides it's not worth the risk to mess with it, and thus, she takes it back home first, then she and Valkenhayn inspect it. Rachel decides to try using a bit of magic in it, which, to her surprise, initiates the revival, and the rest unfolds from there, at the Alucard Castle.
How would that sound?