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Shimmer, Glimmer, & Gleam - A Quest of Loss & Gain

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[X] Marie's good health
[X] Your willingness to keep the guards alive
[X] Marie kills the Warden

More good prose, more terrifying Wasp stuff. Yikes. I'm also willing to have Marie do the job just to see more of the latter thing.
 
[x] Easy access to an escape route
[x] What's left of your feathers

AND

Choose 1
[x] Marie kills the Warden

The Law has taken over, it's time to ride the wave. The feathers grow back, and that will be a useful metric for measuring healing later.

Make sure Marie is safe while she does it, but there is freedom in taking the life of that which maimed you, and Marie will be the better for it.
 
[X] Marie's good health
[X] Your willingness to keep the guards alive
[X] You kill the Warden

Aaaaaallll of the trauma.
 
[X] Your willingness to keep the guards alive
[X] Easy access to an escape route

[X] You kill the Warden

we're not stable right now. kill. kill!
finally
 
[X] Easy access to an escape route
[X] Your willingness to keep the guards alive
[X] Marie kills the Warden

violence...!!!

I feel like if Marie sacrifices her health, Marie should get the kill, for better or for worse. Feels wrong for her to sacrifice but not make the final blow, y'know? Though her not getting hurt and not getting the kill is fine too, but this seems slightly more likely with how the vote is going so far idk
 
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Alright party people let's have a quick chat. This next Threshold coming up will be a bit different; I'm intending on doing some perspective jumping, rather than strictly sticking with Orchid. There will be a fairly important choice somewhat early.

After that, the next Arc has the option to follow a different character for awhile. If you choose to, we'll still cut to Orchid fairly often. However, all options for arc 4 will be happening at the same time; you will be choosing the one you control.

I am taking suggestions on perspectives for the Threshold at this time.
 
Spooder good. Have we had a perspective from doctor heller yet? The one possessing animals etc? I'm too asleep to go back and look x:
 
Jill ig, tho I like a lot of the characters.
 
Y'all can suggest multiple xD I'm looking for ideas and interests. Hell it can be new ("An oneiromancer" f'rex)
 
Oh, yeah, in that case, Dr. Heller, Jack, The Captain, one of the other kids looking at Marie and wonder why she seems so much more mature now, the rookie oneiromancers, maybe a priest, one of the Asset Protection types....
 
[X] Marie's good health
[X] Easy access to an escape route
[X] You kill the Warden

Let's not go too far off the rocker.
 
[X] Easy access to an escape route
[X] Marie's good health

[X] Marie kills the Warden

You ever look back and think about how all your choices locks you onto one route? It's like waking up and seeing the consequences of your actions that you have to endure and accept.
 
- Spider
- The Kitten Whisperer
- The Pigeon King
- Shortcut
- The Farmers
- The Zookeeper
- The Captain
- Dr. Heller
- Jill
- Jack
- Andrea
- A group of survivors that holed up somewhere and doesn't know there are other communities forming
- Marie
 
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