what if she ask what those circumstances were?
Then we explain the circumstances, as in the circumstances of us being her power.
Why say the limits o our letters? And since you told the letter limit. Why not that she can recieve a letter each day?
I explained the letter limit in advance because some of Taylor's questions might require a longer answer than what we can provide. Secondly, said word limit prevented me from explaining the letter-per-day situation.
 
Alright, we have two plans now, so I don't think we'll need another extension, so the voting moratorium will officially end three hours from now (I'll make a post with then). If you have any last minute ideas for plans, or alterations for already proposed ones, now's the time :)
 
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I had the idea of cross-posting the quest to SB, to increase the number of planners and voters. The downside would of course be that that'd split discussion. How do y'all feel about that?

In order to keep discussion centralized, you could make a Story-Only thread on SB, and direct people here if they want to participate.
 
In order to keep discussion centralized, you could make a Story-Only thread on SB, and direct people here if they want to participate.
Hmm, I like that idea. I guess I could also do it half-way - plans can only be proposed here (which is the creative phase with the most discussion), but people can still vote on those plans over there, too. Assuming I'm allowed to do that.
 
Hmm, I like that idea. I guess I could also do it half-way - plans can only be proposed here (which is the creative phase with the most discussion), but people can still vote on those plans over there, too. Assuming I'm allowed to do that.

There's no rule against it, but it may make potential players on SB feel like they are being shut out of half the participation. If they can only vote on half the things, while SV gets all the votes, I see that making some people decide to just not play. But maybe I'm barking up the wrong tree.

Or, just came to me, you have the proposals on both sites, then compile all the plans when you got to vote on offers. This way SB can see the plans SV thought up, and vice versa. Not going to say that will be as good as having all the discussion in one place, but it occurred to me and I thought I'd share.
 
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Alright, planning phase is over, now the voting starts! We have two plans to select from, both of them with Post Delivery!

I should note that, with Wardener's permission, I've fixed up spelling and grammar in the first option a bit. Funnily enough, they now have both exactly 87 words.

Voting will last at least 24 hours, I might extend that if I feel there are too few votes.



[ ] First Letter

Post Delivery

Address:
Taylor Hebert
Room A 418
Brockton Bay Hospital


[ ] The Introduction

Post Delivery

Address:
Taylor Hebert
Room A 418
Brockton Bay Hospital



To vote for an option, you only need to vote for the plan name, like this:
[X] First Letter
[X] The Introduction
 
[X] The Introduction

I Already stated that i liked this over my own, It is the nearly the same, just more refined, and it tells her our limittions

Edit: just relized that the plan was a copy from elsewhere, and i did not copy a plan from here, even if the rest was true XD
 
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You know..

Who in their right mind wrote down "Sufficient Velocity" when "SV" would sound better and adds more mystery what it could probably mean (Not to mention freeing up an additional word for the Word Count.)

There's a chance Taylor may see the letter as some kind of joke from Velocity (or if her mind somehow thinks about it, a cruel joke made by one of the trio to add insult to injury with some kind of justification her mind might make up).
 
maybe, but it takes her nothing to write the question and dispose of the letter, we should tell her to burn them or something, and with the question answered, whathever to her liking or not, we can slowly earn her trust.

There was no true method of earning her trust, and if you disliked that, you should have proposed your own letter. There has only been 2 proposals, which in truth the introduction is the same as the first letter, but in a more refined maner.

So again, for the next time, propose something, we spent 2 days talking

Edit: just realised that my vote was for a plan in another quest, i fixed it just wanted to make sure it was made known
 
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[X] The Introduction

Always loved fics with breaking 4 walls. Glad there is something new on this theme.
 
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