Unprecedented Times [A Pokemon Ranger Quest]

Ox, when you say boating clubs, do you mean places where people get together to go boating or places where people who boat go clubbing
 
Ox, when you say boating clubs, do you mean places where people get together to go boating or places where people who boat go clubbing

Mainly the former, however there is almost certainly a few examples of the latter present in or around the docks. I can't see why there wouldn't be a few pubs or clubs near the area that are mainly visited by off-work sailors and people who frequently use the docks, anyway.
 
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All right, hell yeah let's take the girlies clubbing, ranger girls night
[X] Sprawling docks, full of fishers and boating clubs
 
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Kylie may have passed up Voice of Authority, but B.B. certainly didn't. He ain't got the patience for this Soothing Presence malarky, the newbie needs discipline.

(These two pokemon are adorable and I love them).

[X] Sprawling docks, full of fishers and boating clubs
 
Man I bet the mossdeep technorave scene is fucking great. You don't get really good alt music without the city being the right amount of wet and theyve got those big ice caves for perfect venues.
 
[X] Open-air flea market, with its curios of both Hoenn and Nealfolc identity

Lots of opportunity for gossip/overhearing local rumors/issues at the stalls/tables, not to mention plenty of nifty Things to check out or explain to fancy-pants Kalos friend. There's always lots of culture tucked in corners and turns at a flea market!
 
[X] Open-air flea market, with its curios of both Hoenn and Nealfolc identity

You know, I was thinking about how parrots can get with their owners during this and then it became text. Also, I looked up Egg groups to see if the Mareanie and Whismur lines have any compatibility, because that would be funny, and apparently Mareanie can reproduce with Corsola. What ethically deprived mad pokescietist made that discovery?!
 
[X] Sprawling docks, full of fishers and boating clubs

great chapter! loved the forum bits, especially the bit abt the happy/upset behaviors! good foreshadowing for the rest of the chapter
and Gretchen with the Orb Lore
 
Hey everyone, I have some less than stellar news.

After checking my schedule, it's very unlikely you guys will be getting a chapter next week. I wont rule it out, and I'll make an honest attempt, but the free time I'll have next week is uh. Virtually nonexistent.

If you want to blame anyone, blame the easter bunny, as their existence caused my schedule this week to get reshuffled to account for Friday being a federal holiday.

I'll still be closing the vote at the regular time (two days from now). Sorry again!
 
Unprecedented Times chapter are more than good enough to wait two weeks for, the fact that we usually have them once a week is honestly astounding.
 
[X] Open-air flea market, with its curios of both Hoenn and Nealfolc identity

I want to meet people, see cool shit, and eat good food.

Honestly, Markets are a pretty good starting point, especially since our accompaniment is going to be newly introduced to this kinda stuff.
 
Of Predator and Prey | [SmashQueen]
What ethically deprived mad pokescietist made that discovery?!
An idea itched at me. Wrote this while at work. Might clean it up later. Rushed the end a little.
E: slight corrections.
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"Of Predator and Prey"​

On a stormy evening in late April, young Pokemon Trainer Denton became lost at sea while traveling between Poni Island and Ulaʻula Island. Both islands rest on either side of the Alola archipelago, and in his haste, the Trainer decided to skip over both Melemele Island and Akala Island, neglecting the higher measure of safety that the relative closeness of the other islands offered. This sort of occurrence is not unheard of as Trainers, both new and seasoned alike, decide to skip docking at other islands to reach their destination quicker. Unfortunately, these trips have been known to end in tragedy as the waters of Alola are rife with all manner of aquatic Pokemon, most of which are dangerous to approach even with an experienced team. More often than not, the Trainers who ride across the waves instead of through the air are never heard from again.

How fortunate, then, that the Pokemon Trainer who set off in late April found himself on Melemele almost a week later, dehydrated, starving, sunburnt, and smiling through exhaustion as he headed into the nearest Pokemon Center with his team and newly acquired Corsola egg. When congratulated, Denton pointed to his team. The proud mother Corsola, of course, and the Mareanie father.

The Center Nurse was flabbergasted. Mareanie are the natural predators of Corsola, finding the coral Pokemon utterly irresistible. Even some Alolan Trainers who specialize in raising the Mareanie line agree that preventing them from devouring potential Corsola teammates is near impossible, and the best method was separating them entirely. Yet, this young man claimed that those two Pokemon were indeed the parents.

"I mean, Arnie [the Mareanie] is my bud, man," Denton told the Alolan Wave. "He's saved me from some pretty gnarly Pokemon. Like, Tentacool and stuff out on the waves. But when we were headin' to Ula'ula, a Sharpedo started followin' the [fishing] boat. I thought it was gone after a few days, and tried to surf the rest of the way to Ula'ula instead. Just gotta get there faster, right? Got a rope, my board, and Reel, my Starmie, and we were off. Then the Sharpedo showed up again. I know it was the same one because of the huge scar on one side. Anyways, we were too far out when it finally showed up. I did everything I could think of to get it off our trail -- zig-zags, spike traps, jabs, the works -- but just couldn't shake it."

As Denton explains, the Sharpedo relentlessly pursued him and his Starmie out into the open sea. Arnie the Mareanie, sitting on his head, attempted to dissuade the Pokemon from approaching, but despite ramming into Toxic Spikes multiple times, the Sharpedo simply would not give up. According to Professor Kukui, this odd behavior coupled with the distinctive scar likely indicated that the Pokemon was ousted from its former territory and desperate. While Sharpedo are brutally fast, reaching speeds of over seventy miles per hour, they can only do so in short bursts and usually don't chase after prey so far out. As well, Mareanie and Toxapex poison is incredibly painful, one hit normally being enough to drive off most wild Pokemon. Instead, this particular Sharpedo endured the attacks and kept following Denton.

When it became clear that the Sharpedo would not fall back, Denton changed course for Melemele.

"We were on the home stretch," said Denton. "I could see Melemele Island comin' up in the distance. And then that Sharpedo Crunched Reel and broke his gem. She was in bad shape. Real bad shape. I had to recall her, and Arnie... Arnie totally lost it. He started pounding that Sharpedo with everything he had."

What exactly happened next, only Arnie and the Sharpedo know. Both dove beneath the waves, leaving Denton to hang onto his surfboard as his starter defended him. The only signs of battle were the dark lights of Elite aura-imbued attacks as the sea boiled beneath Denton. With more room to maneuver, however, Arnie surely had more freedom to act.

During all of that, Denton himself had a choice to make: to stay and wait for Arnie, or to paddle closer towards shore. While remaining in place would be easy, and indeed was recommended for anyone stranded at sea, it was still too close to the battle. Trusting in his starter but unwilling to stray too far, Denton began moving away from the battle.

"That was my bad," Denton admitted later. "I should've realized that the Sharpedo might mistake me for a flailing Spheal, but I thought it'd be too tied up with Arnie. Just wanted a little distance so I wouldn't get Crunched, too, ya know? Staying where I was would've meant Arnie had to defend himself and me at the same time, too."

The Sharpedo bit into Denton's surfboard and broke it in half. A screaming Arnie clung to the Pokemon's back, stabbing it with its spikes. Denton, adrift and just out of reach of Melemele, had lost his last shred of safety and his friend was ferociously lashing out to stop the Bully of the Sea. Most others lost at sea, Trainer or not, have lost their lives to less. Exposure, starvation, scurvy, and simply drowning have claimed more lives than Sharpedo do in a year.

Fortunately for both Denton and Arnie, Melemele Island is surrounded by a coral reef, rich with life and home to a healthy variety of Pokemon. Which included one very agitated Corsola.

Before Denton knew what was happening, a wild Corsola crashed into the Sharpedo, and effectively took it back underwater. Together with Arnie, they managed to drive off the Bully before breaching the waves, victorious.

Denton described Arnie's reaction to being within reaching distance of his natural prey as, "Wowza!"

"They had to drag me to shore, yeah, but man! Arnie was so excited! He was wigglin', vocalizin', the works! I'd never seen him so head over heels for anyone!"

The day long trek back towards civilization apparently gave Arnie and "Solar" time enough not only to bond, but mate as well. Denton made sure to take at least one egg to be checked over at the Pokemon Center.

Breeders and researchers are still investigating how Mareanie and Toxapex may be able to ignore their predatory instincts and befriend Corsola rather than eat them.
 
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Choice:
[ ] Twin temples of the Cyffineal's patron deities
[ ] Sprawling docks, full of fishers and boating clubs
[ ] Open-air flea market, with its curios of both Hoenn and Nealfolc identity
Alright, time to analyze the choices. Be advised, I am coming at this from the angle of where I personally would likely go if I had this opportunity.
The Temples
From the info from 1.10, the two patron deities are Lugia and Xerneas. It would certainly be interesting to compare/contrast the view of Xerneas between Kylie the Nealfolc and Gretchen the Kalosian, and worldbuilding about Legendary Pokemon and how they are perceived by the humans is practically guaranteed to be interesting. However, I got the vibe from 1.10 that Kylie wasn't that religious herself (her parents certainly weren't described as such) so I find myself somewhat ambivalent towards visiting.

Docks
Definitely the place where Kylie would have the most knowledge on how it operates, how to navigate, and how to ingratiate herself with the locals. It would likely give us a more direct look at what she grew up with in her family of fishers and the community around them. And, like the flea market, would also likely give us a view of how these Hoenn Nealfolc are different from the Orre ones.

Flea Market
This choice offers opportunities for both learning about the Nealfolc, what they would emphasize selling and buying, and also about how this Hoenn branch of Kylie's community has changed in the many years of separation and the much different socioeconomical environment of Hoenn versus Orre. Since I believe all three girls are fairly new to Hoenn (Suzume was present for a training course of some kind, and Gretchen was likely brought in with the emergency response just like Kylie) it will also allow all of them to get a view of what Hoenn culture is like as well, which is knowledge that may be useful in the future. Also, this choice offers the greatest possibility, due to the potential variety of merchants, of each of the girls being able to find and purchase something unique and desired for either themselves or their Pokemon, and both Urchin and especially B.B. deserve some treats after the amazing job they did in this chapter.

[X] Open-air flea market, with its curios of both Hoenn and Nealfolc identity
I was swayed by the shopping, always been a huge fan of flea markets so this is what I would most want to experience. Hopefully we can find some treat or toy so that we can absolutely pamper B.B. from the tips of his grumpy ears to the bottom of his antisocial feet.
 
[X] Open-air flea market, with its curios of both Hoenn and Nealfolc identity

I feel like this or the religion will get us the best worldbuilding, but Kylie has expressed something of a lack of interest in religions in general, so I feel like this will be a more interesting place to travel to with friends.

I've been told among many who ranch certain bird Pokemon, this is a deeply enviable trait to have.

Also, this. I died laughing at this.

Thanks for the chapter!
 
[X] Sprawling docks, full of fishers and boating clubs
I feel like this would be a beter representation of our culture than shopping. Less comercialized if you will.
 
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